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before bubbling please change the title to "[TV Size]" instead of "(TV Size)"

like it says here: http://vgmdb.net/album/44406
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Maboyu

Sekai-nyan wrote:

before bubbling please change the title to "[TV Size]" instead of "(TV Size)"

like it says here: http://vgmdb.net/album/44406
fixed Thank you >.<
ts8zs

MMzz wrote:

Ts8zs' Oni:
OD 5 is kinda low. Try 5.5 or 6.6
00:14:960 (56) - Remove this note. This doesn't fit well in this difficulty because you don't use this swing type of pattern anywhere else. It isn't very consistent so its going to be confusing for players to find the core rhythm of the map. It would work better if you used it more often like JuDa did in their diff. It makes more sense because it happens consistently, and is expected to be part of the map. Not just a random 3/4 pattern. del 00:22:065 - & 00:23:870 - & 00:29:283 - &00:31:088 -
00:16:764 (65) - ^
00:18:682 (5) - This pattern doesn't flow very well with the other surrounding patterns. Mainly because you are switching the rhythm by starting with a don, not a kat. That makes the structure of the rhythm opposite of what the player is used to for no reason. (Aka the music doesn't signal a change in rhythm, so it is really weird to play) Something like this would work much better: 00:18:682 (5,6,7) - kkd
This also makes a stronger flow into 00:20:373 (13,1) - , making the 3/4 rhythm more justified.
00:29:058 (41) - Finisher? changed
00:32:441 (56,57,58) - Make this kkd? The kdk triplet feels really overused in this map. kkd didn't fit as my opn
00:37:967 (79) - This pattern is really odd. The doubles don't tie in together because they are not conjoined by 1/2. This creates a weird "waiting" motion with your hands, because you have to accurate hit the 1/4 then wait, then hit the 14 again in an uncommon 3/4 rhythm. Starting at 00:37:629 (78) - I would transform the pattern into this: http://puu.sh/9WLL9/c838fb4d58.jpg no,but changed to kd kd kk k k
osu file format v13

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TitleUnicode:lull~そして僕らは~ [TV Size]
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Version:Ts8zs' Oni
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Not bad! I really like the rhythm you used in the kiai. Just pointed out these things because they felt very odd to play.

Ts8Zs' Muzukashii:
Try OD 4.5 or 5. 4 is usually used for Futsuu/Kantan. does od 5 ok?
00:05:261 (15) - Remove this note. This finisher is a little unnecessary. Plus throwing in 1/4 right after calm 1/1 beats isn't very nice for Muzukashii players. add a k at 00:04:471 (12) - to balance this
osu file format v13

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That is my only suggestion for the Muzukashii. I really liked the rhythm you chose and all the 1/4 triplets were placed very nicely. (Except for that one in my suggestion.)

Overall those are the only things I can find worth suggesting changes for. The osu! diffs are really good and polished, as well as JuDa's Oni. When Ts8zs is done looking over the mod and applying changes this map will be ready to bubble!
Thanks for mod:3
Topic Starter
Maboyu

ts8zs wrote:

MMzz wrote:

Ts8zs' Oni:
OD 5 is kinda low. Try 5.5 or 6.6
00:14:960 (56) - Remove this note. This doesn't fit well in this difficulty because you don't use this swing type of pattern anywhere else. It isn't very consistent so its going to be confusing for players to find the core rhythm of the map. It would work better if you used it more often like JuDa did in their diff. It makes more sense because it happens consistently, and is expected to be part of the map. Not just a random 3/4 pattern. del 00:22:065 - & 00:23:870 - & 00:29:283 - &00:31:088 -
00:16:764 (65) - ^
00:18:682 (5) - This pattern doesn't flow very well with the other surrounding patterns. Mainly because you are switching the rhythm by starting with a don, not a kat. That makes the structure of the rhythm opposite of what the player is used to for no reason. (Aka the music doesn't signal a change in rhythm, so it is really weird to play) Something like this would work much better: 00:18:682 (5,6,7) - kkd
This also makes a stronger flow into 00:20:373 (13,1) - , making the 3/4 rhythm more justified.
00:29:058 (41) - Finisher? changed
00:32:441 (56,57,58) - Make this kkd? The kdk triplet feels really overused in this map. kkd didn't fit as my opn
00:37:967 (79) - This pattern is really odd. The doubles don't tie in together because they are not conjoined by 1/2. This creates a weird "waiting" motion with your hands, because you have to accurate hit the 1/4 then wait, then hit the 14 again in an uncommon 3/4 rhythm. Starting at 00:37:629 (78) - I would transform the pattern into this: http://puu.sh/9WLL9/c838fb4d58.jpg no,but changed to kd kd kk k k
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Not bad! I really like the rhythm you used in the kiai. Just pointed out these things because they felt very odd to play.

Ts8Zs' Muzukashii:
Try OD 4.5 or 5. 4 is usually used for Futsuu/Kantan. does od 5 ok?
00:05:261 (15) - Remove this note. This finisher is a little unnecessary. Plus throwing in 1/4 right after calm 1/1 beats isn't very nice for Muzukashii players. add a k at 00:04:471 (12) - to balance this
osu file format v13

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TitleUnicode:lull~そして僕らは~ [TV Size]
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Creator:AliomLoung
Version:Ts8zs' Muzu
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That is my only suggestion for the Muzukashii. I really liked the rhythm you chose and all the 1/4 triplets were placed very nicely. (Except for that one in my suggestion.)

Overall those are the only things I can find worth suggesting changes for. The osu! diffs are really good and polished, as well as JuDa's Oni. When Ts8zs is done looking over the mod and applying changes this map will be ready to bubble!
Thanks for mod:3
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JUDYDANNY

MMzz wrote:

JuDa's Oni:
OD 5 is kinda low. Try 5.5 or 6. OK. I tried to change 5.5 .
Thanks~ :)
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Congrats~
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SoG Tava wrote:

Congrats~
thank:D

Lapis Aoki wrote:

Gratz ~
thank:D

Papcio wrote:

Congratulations o3o Good maps :3
thank:D

Flandre_Vampir wrote:

Congrats~
thank:D

yf_bmp wrote:

Great !!!111
yf>.< 謝謝:D

Oyatsu wrote:

Congratz! Nagi <3 :)
thank Oyatsu:D

Trust wrote:

Never enough!
Grats :D
thank:D

[_Crystal] wrote:

gratz moe fish >w<!!
星星>.<謝謝:D

ts8zs wrote:

于是又rank一张太鼓GD……QAQ
恭喜,grats
包子:D 謝謝XD

JUDYDANNY wrote:

finally, gratz~ :D
JUDY >.< thank:D
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