mod comes as request~
Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it
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[ Muzukashii]
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[ ts8zs's Oni]
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[ JuDa's Oni]
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okay that's all from me
i am really proud with judy's oni so much <3 you have improved well and this map is much much better than your previous diffs/maps that i modded before. great job judy~
okay, goodluck guys~!
Red ~> unrakable issue, must be changed
Blue ~> highly suggested, consider to use it
Black ~> suggestion, just free to choose it
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[ Muzukashii]
General
☞ okay~
Notes Structure
☞ an inconsistent pattern from 00:29:058 - (from the new part of the song). you can see the Notes box to see the suggestion
☞ an inconsistent pattern from 00:43:494 - about the patterns that you are going to follow. vocals or instrument sounds. i saw that you followed the vocals basically for this diff and it's nice~ and you mixed it with the instrument sounds when the vocals don't come or disappear. okay that's good~ but, i found one problem about it at 00:47:103 - until 00:48:907 - . those notes follow the instrument sounds basically but the vocals still come at there (they don't disappear). i know that you wanted to followed the instruments at there, maybe to make it more interesting patterns (?). it's nice idea~ but consider again about the consistency of the patterns again.
☞ an inconsistent pattern from 00:43:494 - about the patterns that you are going to follow. vocals or instrument sounds. i saw that you followed the vocals basically for this diff and it's nice~ and you mixed it with the instrument sounds when the vocals don't come or disappear. okay that's good~ but, i found one problem about it at 00:47:103 - until 00:48:907 - . those notes follow the instrument sounds basically but the vocals still come at there (they don't disappear). i know that you wanted to followed the instruments at there, maybe to make it more interesting patterns (?). it's nice idea~ but consider again about the consistency of the patterns again.
Notes
• add a note (don) at 00:14:396 - . well basically this note is just an additional note at there, but this note can follow the background sound and it can emphasize the next note at 00:14:622 - which is big don
• delete 00:37:967 - . this note doesn't follow any sounds actually. you can hear the background sounds and instrument sounds that don't appear at there. and it makes a weird pattern because you used doubles suddenly at there (you didn't use it to another parts too imo)
• 00:38:982 - should be don because of your o o o o pattern at 1/1 beat snap divisor. okay i give you the example of the pattern that you used. you can see from 00:29:058 - (that's from a new part of the song). you can see this :
and those notes used a constant o o o o pattern and you still used it for the next notes. so you can see again at 00:38:982 - for what note you should put
• these additional notes 00:57:817 - and 00:57:930 - aren't useful since they don't follow any sounds basically. well maybe you wanted to add some additional notes to make some triplets. wokay it's nice idea~ but, please see it again. does it follow the song well? you can hear that the instrument sounds have stopped at 00:57:704 - and the background sound doesn't give any sound when the instrument sounds stop at 00:57:704 - . and finally it comes again at 00:58:155 -
• you can add a note (don) at 01:03:118 - to follow the vocal sounds which still appear at there (and that note support the vocals from 01:02:441 - until 01:03:343 - btw)
• move 1/2 backward 01:04:246 - to support the vocals. but this depends on you at here because i saw that you didn't really follow the vocals during kiai with xx-xxxx patterns
• add a note (kat) at 01:06:727 - to follow the vocals too which still comes at here. the reason is same like the two mod above ^^ btw
• change 01:09:659 - and 01:10:110 - to be o o because of the basic patterns again that is o o o o at 1/1 beat snap divisor that you still used until kiai part
• add a note (don) at 01:22:516 - ? same like 01:07:855 - until 01:08:306 - that you used o o o at there. btw they have a same part imo
• delete 00:37:967 - . this note doesn't follow any sounds actually. you can hear the background sounds and instrument sounds that don't appear at there. and it makes a weird pattern because you used doubles suddenly at there (you didn't use it to another parts too imo)
• 00:38:982 - should be don because of your o o o o pattern at 1/1 beat snap divisor. okay i give you the example of the pattern that you used. you can see from 00:29:058 - (that's from a new part of the song). you can see this :
and those notes used a constant o o o o pattern and you still used it for the next notes. so you can see again at 00:38:982 - for what note you should put
• these additional notes 00:57:817 - and 00:57:930 - aren't useful since they don't follow any sounds basically. well maybe you wanted to add some additional notes to make some triplets. wokay it's nice idea~ but, please see it again. does it follow the song well? you can hear that the instrument sounds have stopped at 00:57:704 - and the background sound doesn't give any sound when the instrument sounds stop at 00:57:704 - . and finally it comes again at 00:58:155 -
• you can add a note (don) at 01:03:118 - to follow the vocal sounds which still appear at there (and that note support the vocals from 01:02:441 - until 01:03:343 - btw)
• move 1/2 backward 01:04:246 - to support the vocals. but this depends on you at here because i saw that you didn't really follow the vocals during kiai with xx-xxxx patterns
• add a note (kat) at 01:06:727 - to follow the vocals too which still comes at here. the reason is same like the two mod above ^^ btw
• change 01:09:659 - and 01:10:110 - to be o o because of the basic patterns again that is o o o o at 1/1 beat snap divisor that you still used until kiai part
• add a note (don) at 01:22:516 - ? same like 01:07:855 - until 01:08:306 - that you used o o o at there. btw they have a same part imo
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[ ts8zs's Oni]
General
☞ okay~
Notes Structure
☞ basically no problems here~
Notes
• change 00:25:223 - until 00:25:674 - to be ooo o to follow the vocals at there suddenly. don't worry this doesn't make an inconsistent pattern imo. but this still depends on you again because i saw that you used o o o o for a whole patterns (not a whole i think, but mostly you used it from 00:14:622 -)
• move 1/2 forward 00:38:419 - . the function of doubles at there isn't same like 00:37:967 (77,78) - that you used
• change 00:43:719 - until 00:44:170 - to be o o o to follow the background sounds and the drum beats there.
btw you used it too at 00:47:103 - until 00:47:779 - which has a same drum beats like above ^ , but has a different pitch sounds for vocals
• change 01:03:795 - and 01:07:404 - to be kats to follow the basic patterns that follow kats at every x:1 (you can see at the metronome)
btw you used kats too at 01:18:231 - and 01:21:840 - which still have a same part of the song like above ^ . just a different vocals only
• move 1/2 forward 00:38:419 - . the function of doubles at there isn't same like 00:37:967 (77,78) - that you used
• change 00:43:719 - until 00:44:170 - to be o o o to follow the background sounds and the drum beats there.
btw you used it too at 00:47:103 - until 00:47:779 - which has a same drum beats like above ^ , but has a different pitch sounds for vocals
• change 01:03:795 - and 01:07:404 - to be kats to follow the basic patterns that follow kats at every x:1 (you can see at the metronome)
btw you used kats too at 01:18:231 - and 01:21:840 - which still have a same part of the song like above ^ . just a different vocals only
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[ JuDa's Oni]
General
☞ okay~!
Notes Structure
☞ omg omg!! good work judy~! all the patterns are used well and all of them are consistent. you have changed alot~! great job >w<
Notes
• you can add finisher at 00:00:186 - to follow the background sound that gives a strong sound there
• add a note (don) at 00:14:283 - to follow the instrument sounds that make a stream at there. don't worry it doesn't make a hard patterns after finisher comes at 00:13:945 -
• change 00:18:005 - until 00:18:231 - to be ooo. it follows the vocal sounds basically that 00:18:005 - is still high and it becomes low at 00:18:231 - . btw ooo-triplet will support oo-doubles at 00:17:667 - and 00:17:779 -
• change 00:19:584 - to be don because of the low vocal. and you can see that a don at 00:19:584 - will make a good pattern from 00:18:682 - . it'll be o o o o in 1/2 beat snap divisor
• delete this additional note at 00:59:283 - . well i think that you wanted to add something at that break to make it more interesting. okay it's nice~ but, this additional note doesn't follow any sounds basically and sounds weird to come suddenly at the break
• change 01:04:922 - until 01:05:148 - to be ooo-triplet. basically it should have a same pattern like 01:01:539 - until 01:01:764 - because you used a same pattern
• change 01:08:531 - to be kat, so it'll be ooo-triplet. i changed this to avoid a monotonous note that you used ooo-triplet before
and if we look again from your pattern, 01:08:531 - should be kat too, not don
• change 01:19:809 - to be don. beside of the basic pattern at there (so it should be don), this don will make a good increasing bell sound at 01:19:809 - and 01:20:035 - . 01:19:810 - is the lower one and 01:20:035 - is the higher one, so they'll be o o
• add a note (don) at 00:14:283 - to follow the instrument sounds that make a stream at there. don't worry it doesn't make a hard patterns after finisher comes at 00:13:945 -
• change 00:18:005 - until 00:18:231 - to be ooo. it follows the vocal sounds basically that 00:18:005 - is still high and it becomes low at 00:18:231 - . btw ooo-triplet will support oo-doubles at 00:17:667 - and 00:17:779 -
• change 00:19:584 - to be don because of the low vocal. and you can see that a don at 00:19:584 - will make a good pattern from 00:18:682 - . it'll be o o o o in 1/2 beat snap divisor
• delete this additional note at 00:59:283 - . well i think that you wanted to add something at that break to make it more interesting. okay it's nice~ but, this additional note doesn't follow any sounds basically and sounds weird to come suddenly at the break
• change 01:04:922 - until 01:05:148 - to be ooo-triplet. basically it should have a same pattern like 01:01:539 - until 01:01:764 - because you used a same pattern
• change 01:08:531 - to be kat, so it'll be ooo-triplet. i changed this to avoid a monotonous note that you used ooo-triplet before
and if we look again from your pattern, 01:08:531 - should be kat too, not don
• change 01:19:809 - to be don. beside of the basic pattern at there (so it should be don), this don will make a good increasing bell sound at 01:19:809 - and 01:20:035 - . 01:19:810 - is the lower one and 01:20:035 - is the higher one, so they'll be o o
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okay that's all from me
i am really proud with judy's oni so much <3 you have improved well and this map is much much better than your previous diffs/maps that i modded before. great job judy~
okay, goodluck guys~!