Hinata Ichigo - Nyanhou no Outa · forum

kamisamaaa

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-02-18T17:56:27+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[Normal]
00:02:998 (3,4,5,6,7) - 當心這裡可能有點難讀是有点我想想看怎么把它改了

[Insane]
HP-1 AR-1 ar-1了 HP没必要
00:48:733 (1,2) - 這slider有問題?看似是紅點做出來的slider但內裡卻不是後面還有一個嗯不知道为啥我重新拉了一下
00:54:607 (5) - 疊在7下 okay

Edit: 在tag加回GDer的username 额我又把这事忘了全部加了

thanks for mod
updata~

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-02-19T07:32:46+00:00

Hi ~
lol i want to laugh with the song xD

Guide

Bold = Unrankable/must be fixed
Red = consider to fix it
Black = Suggestion
Blue = recommended but lower than red one, up to you to fix it or not

General

disable Widescreen Support (since no SB here), letterbox and countdown here
default combo colour doesn't fit with BG, try use custom combo colour? example : http://puu.sh/71O7k.png
if you want to use this, here is the code
```
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,149
Combo2 : 181,181,181
Combo3 : 255,128,128
Combo4 : 70,70,70
```

Easy

change Tick rate become 1. tick rate 2 too much of ticks and noisy here
00:04:677 - keep N:C1 here since hitnormal of N:C2 doesn't fit with the clap sound (background music here)
00:05:096 (1) - broken flow here. i strongly suggest to flip it as https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1347975 to make a blanket too here.
00:06:774 (3) - inconsistency spacing (0,91x) here. should be around 1,0x
00:06:774 (3,4) - blanket pls. drag 2nd node of (3) slider to 323,237
00:11:809 (1) - flip this slider for natural flow, currently seems broken because do it opposite from natural flow. imo try to use https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1347986 instead
00:26:495 (3) - blanket could be better here, drag the first node to 176,136 for better blanket
00:27:753 (4) - blanket too for neater pattern? flow seems better for me too http://puu.sh/71P81.jpg
00:28:593 (1) - a little bit overlap with 00:26:495 (3) - :< , move this circle a little bit to right for avoid it
00:31:110 (4) - maybe just for me but i feel flow more natural if you do ctrl+G for this slider
00:34:467 (4) - move this slider to 252,296. flow broken here. unnatural flow. feel it with mouse and you will understand it
00:47:054 (2,3,1) - bad overlap here, since you lowering the SV here. imo you able to increase the spacing to keep a neat pattern here but need remap so yeah just sayin
00:55:446 (1,2) - unnatural flow again. because flow touched on (1)'s body here. imo no need to explain it so try change this pattern become https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1347999 instead
01:03:837 (3) - flip it wth ctrl+H. obviously reason for natural flow
01:03:837 (3) - clap on tail? the sound is clap o.o
01:05:096 (4) - same as above

Normal

00:02:998 (3,4,5) - overlapping and a little bad flow here. might be confused for newbie. i would to arrange like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348005 altho need some of replacement for consistency spacing
00:07:614 (5) - i would to flip this slider with ctrl+J here. so the flow from (5)'s tail to (1)'s head become natural http://puu.sh/71PXq.jpg
00:18:523 - imo since the music is important here. map this time or give a delay break http://puu.sh/71RuL.jpg here
00:27:754 (5) - yap same as 00:07:614 (5) - , try http://puu.sh/71RAd.jpg
00:45:376 (1) - i would to tweak this slider become for smoother flow and natural flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348055
01:00:062 (4) - i would to move this circle to 180,144 to avoid sharp of curving flow between 01:00:062 (4,5) -
01:04:257 (2) - clap should be on head instead whistle if hitsounded based from music
01:04:677 (1) - same reason as above, change clap to whistle
01:05:097 (2) - and clap for head and tail if you hitsounded it based music (at least clap on head for consistency)

Hard

00:01:740 (1,2,4) - anti jump in here makes confuse for player. i'm sure with it. normal ds instead
00:05:096 (1) - empty here if you didn't give any hitsound on head. at least use whistle
00:06:565 (4) - hmm try a better overlap here? i'm not fans of overlap but i would suggest about http://puu.sh/71ScL.jpg
00:10:970 (6,7) - how about make a little jump here instead stacking its for more fun to play 00:10:970 (6) - on 100,96 , 00:11:180 (7) - 156,200
00:12:649 (4) - move to 88,96 for better overlap. seems neater for my eyes
00:19:781 (1,1) - no need NC here since no SV change or hard pattern to read
00:23:138 (1,1) - same as above
00:25:236 (1) - try move the tail to 204,336. it reduced unnatural flow here. altho i still feel a little bit opposite of natural flow here
00:28:593 (1) - same reason as above. i thought you can fix it with yourself w/o my suggestion
00:31:110 (5,6) - unnatural flow between them. try to tweak 00:31:110 (5) - become like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348080
00:38:663 (1,1,1,1) - i'm not fans of these spinner, imo they don't emphasize the music with clearly. i would to make rhythm as Easy and Normal did
01:05:726 (2,3,4) - separate them become a little jump. it would be emphasize music better than stacking like this

Insane

00:02:579 (4,5,6) - imo this pattern too boring for Insane diff. i would to make a huge jump of pattern so it will be more fun to play for expert player https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348090
00:06:565 (1) - if i were you i would to stack this circle (with slider maybe) to stacked with 00:05:096 (1) - since the vocal is a little bit strong so it would be nice for a little jump
00:07:614 (4) - a little bit forced to catch this one imo, try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348142 instead
00:15:166 (1) - the sound is only drum sound here. remove finish or use sampleset drum finish only instead
00:19:572 (2) - altho this is not overmapped because have a low drum sound here. i strongly suggest to remove this since the sound is very low and need 25% to hear it
00:22:928 (2) - same as above
00:21:670 - the sound is quite loud here. try to add note?
00:25:236 (1) - if i were you i would to make a various rhythm than you used in previous to make it interesting http://puu.sh/71VD7.jpg (p.s: start from 00:25:026 - )
00:31:425 (5,6) - bad flow from previous go to this pattern imo, unnatural. i would to arrange it become http://puu.sh/71VOQ.jpg
01:03:418 (5) - ctrl+G it for more fun to play with more jump. also flow a little bit increase
01:05:726 (2,3,4) - same reason as Hard but need huge jump for this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348167

Gl

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-02-19T09:48:43+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Hi ~
lol i want to laugh with the song xD haha

Guide
Bold = Unrankable/must be fixed
Red = consider to fix it
Black = Suggestion
Blue = recommended but lower than red one, up to you to fix it or not
General
disable Widescreen Support (since no SB here), letterbox and countdown here okay~fix
default combo colour doesn't fit with BG, try use custom combo colour? example : http://puu.sh/71O7k.png
if you want to use this, here is the code
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,149
Combo2 : 181,181,181
Combo3 : 255,128,128
Combo4 : 70,70,70
okay~I use this code~
Normal
00:02:998 (3,4,5) - overlapping and a little bad flow here. might be confused for newbie. i would to arrange like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348005 altho need some of replacement for consistency spacing fix
00:07:614 (5) - i would to flip this slider with ctrl+J here. so the flow from (5)'s tail to (1)'s head become natural http://puu.sh/71PXq.jpgfix
00:18:523 - imo since the music is important here. map this time or give a delay break http://puu.sh/71RuL.jpg here keep this
00:27:754 (5) - yap same as 00:07:614 (5) - , try http://puu.sh/71RAd.jpg fix
00:45:376 (1) - i would to tweak this slider become for smoother flow and natural flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348055 fix
01:00:062 (4) - i would to move this circle to 180,144 to avoid sharp of curving flow between 01:00:062 (4,5) - fix
01:04:257 (2) - clap should be on head instead whistle if hitsounded based from music
01:04:677 (1) - same reason as above, change clap to whistle
01:05:097 (2) - and clap for head and tail if you hitsounded it based music (at least clap on head for consistency) yes you are right. I make some mistake when I copy hitsound from insane diff. fix all these hitsound

Insane
00:02:579 (4,5,6) - imo this pattern too boring for Insane diff. i would to make a huge jump of pattern so it will be more fun to play for expert player https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348090 I think here use a huge jump is not so good. but change to your placement and ctrl+G 6
00:06:565 (1) - if i were you i would to stack this circle (with slider maybe) to stacked with 00:05:096 (1) - since the vocal is a little bit strong so it would be nice for a little jump change all placement here
00:07:614 (4) - a little bit forced to catch this one imo, try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348142 instead same
00:15:166 (1) - the sound is only drum sound here. remove finish or use sampleset drum finish only instead remove the finish here
00:19:572 (2) - altho this is not overmapped because have a low drum sound here. i strongly suggest to remove this since the sound is very low and need 25% to hear it
00:22:928 (2) - same as above
00:21:670 - the sound is quite loud here. try to add note? I think current rythm is better here
00:25:236 (1) - if i were you i would to make a various rhythm than you used in previous to make it interesting http://puu.sh/71VD7.jpg (p.s: start from 00:25:026 - ) okay~and change the placement
00:31:425 (5,6) - bad flow from previous go to this pattern imo, unnatural. i would to arrange it become http://puu.sh/71VOQ.jpg I think flow is okay here
01:03:418 (5) - ctrl+G it for more fun to play with more jump. also flow a little bit increase I made this just because the feel of music
01:05:726 (2,3,4) - same reason as Hard but need huge jump for this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348167 sorry I want to keep this0.0

Gl

thanks for mod xinely~感谢~

sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2014-02-19T13:55:42+00:00

[Xinely]
change Tick rate become 1. tick rate 2 too much of ticks and noisy here
My fault,fixed

00:04:677 - keep N:C1 here since hitnormal of N:C2 doesn't fit with the clap sound (background music here)
OK, removed C2

00:05:096 (1) - broken flow here. i strongly suggest to flip it as https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1347975 to make a blanket too here.
Good idea, I love that blanket

00:06:774 (3) - inconsistency spacing (0,91x) here. should be around 1,0x
fixed

00:06:774 (3,4) - blanket pls. drag 2nd node of (3) slider to 323,237
changed but in another way

00:11:809 (1) - flip this slider for natural flow, currently seems broken because do it opposite from natural flow. imo try to use https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1347986 instead
sorry but i prefer this kind of flow at this point...Normal flow at all time can be boring

00:26:495 (3) - blanket could be better here, drag the first node to 176,136 for better blanket
yes you are right

00:27:753 (4) - blanket too for neater pattern? flow seems better for me too http://puu.sh/71P81.jpg
exactly

00:28:593 (1) - a little bit overlap with 00:26:495 (3) - :< , move this circle a little bit to right for avoid it
I tried hard and managed to avoid it

00:31:110 (4) - maybe just for me but i feel flow more natural if you do ctrl+G for this slider
00:31:110 (4,1) - flow here will be ruined so...sorry

00:34:467 (4) - move this slider to 252,296. flow broken here. unnatural flow. feel it with mouse and you will understand it
broken flow fits here imo for a strong drum appears here

00:47:054 (2,3,1) - bad overlap here, since you lowering the SV here. imo you able to increase the spacing to keep a neat pattern here but need remap so yeah just sayin
Many people had said this problem so I will consider it

00:55:446 (1,2) - unnatural flow again. because flow touched on (1)'s body here. imo no need to explain it so try change this pattern become https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1347999 instead
I thought for a while and moved 00:54:607 (3)

01:03:837 (3) - flip it wth ctrl+H. obviously reason for natural flow
If I flip it, the flow to the next note will be not so good

01:03:837 (3) - clap on tail? the sound is clap o.o
01:05:096 (4) - same as above
fixed

thanks for mod!

code

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 13..mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 5013
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8

[Metadata]
Title:Niang Bao no Outa
TitleUnicode:娘包のおうた
Artist:Hinata itigo
ArtistUnicode:日向苺
Creator:kamisamaaa
Version:sammy's Easy
Source:Cure Girl
Tags:galgame curegirl sammy711 yf_bmp
BeatmapID:372079
BeatmapSetID:150565

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
ApproachRate:3
SliderMultiplier:1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"01.png",0,0
//Break Periods
2,18523,20439
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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Combo3 : 255,128,128
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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-02-19T17:30:21+00:00

嗨，小黃瓜，QQ group mod req.

Hope you reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

確定要Enable countdown? 還是取消吧。

[sammy's Easy]

00:18:523 (1) - 應該能再加一個note在這裡做結尾，加了難度也不會影響到最低難度。(或00:17:684 (1) - 換成長條拉到00:18:523。)
00:38:663 (1) - 為何不包 (2)? ~~(又強迫症~~

[Normal]

00:16:425 (3) - 試著照弧度擺?
00:18:103 (6) - 我覺得換成長條拉到00:18:523也蠻適合做結束然後break。(其實這邊也可以不用break，這邊後面也可擺個簡單的滑條或note，別跟easy一樣空的?)
00:32:789 (3) - 弧度
00:51:250 (3) - 用00:48:733 (1,2,3) 的這幾個的頭呈三角形?
01:05:726 (2) - 取消一折返移後面一格，前面加一note然後與01:05:516 (1) 重疊，蠻有感覺。

[yf's Hard]

00:02:998 (4) - 感覺部分疊在00:03:208 (5) 上比較帶感，這邊疊在尾端沒什麼感覺。
00:09:292 (3) - 用Ctrl+J不就對稱Pattern了嗎? 建議改了(改了記得Ctrl+g)。
00:15:586 (1) - 故意部分疊?
00:16:635 (4) - (69|43)，用裡面的角包住(3)結尾。
00:28:173 (6) - 挑個沒疊好
00:32:369 (2) - 或許前端可以疊起來。
00:38:663 (1) - 連續四個spin感覺好敷衍，把第2跟4的spin換掉擺節奏吧?(或13)
00:57:964 (1) - 或許可來個Ctrl+g。
01:05:516 (1,2,3,4) - 或許可以來個大跳，後面三個疊著似乎沒什麼效果。

[Insane]

00:16:635 (1,2) - 疊00:18:103 (5) 比較美觀。
00:19:781 (3) - 2都有疊好這怎不疊好。
00:21:040 (1,2) - 或許可以複製(1)的來使用CTRL+H做個對稱。
00:23:138 (3) - 疊 00:21:879 (1) 比較有效果。
00:23:348 (4) - 疊 00:22:089 (2) 比較有效果。
00:24:816 (2) - 或許可以疊 00:25:656 (3) 頭。
00:29:852 (6) - (360|293)試試?
00:32:788 (4) - 尾端沒疊好。
00:34:257 (3) - 三角形?
00:35:306 (1) - 是不是忘了finish啊?
00:37:614 (3) - (497|88)?
00:39:502 (4,1) - 這邊仔細聽有一個跳點可以跳，這邊同距放沒感覺。
00:41:180 (3) - ^
00:42:858 (1) - ^
00:44:537 (3) - ^
00:45:376 (1) - 或許能+finish
00:46:005 (4) - 怎麼這個節奏會在結尾了? 還是換成note或slider做個跳吧。(像你這個 00:47:893 (3) 的節奏就在頭我覺得比較好。)
00:51:879 (6) - 同距擺看看?
00:53:767 (1) - 我覺得疊 00:52:928 (5) 比較flow?
00:55:446 (1) - 不跟前面疊嗎?
01:01:949 (8) - 我會想擺(236|61)左右的位置，現在放這裡有點擠。
01:03:418 (5) - 這也能拉開點距離。
01:04:677 (1,2,3,4) - 全選移到(144|75)上試試(如果改了，上面那個(5)可以用開頭疊(1))
01:05:516 (1,2,3,4) - 234拉開點距離，與1來個跳? 這節奏明顯的是大跳。

後面clap部分那個我覺得也可以跳，看你要不要拉開點距離了。

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-02-19T18:44:34+00:00

smallboat wrote:
嗨，小黃瓜，QQ group mod req.

Hope you reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

確定要Enable countdown? 還是取消吧。　　嗯　取消了～之前没注意过这东西０.０

[Normal]

00:16:425 (3) - 試著照弧度擺?ｆｉｘ
00:18:103 (6) - 我覺得換成長條拉到00:18:523也蠻適合做結束然後break。(其實這邊也可以不用break，這邊後面也可擺個簡單的滑條或note，別跟easy一樣空的?)改成滑条了　这里ｍａｐ或者空着再想想额
00:32:789 (3) - 弧度ｆｉｘ
00:51:250 (3) - 用00:48:733 (1,2,3) 的這幾個的頭呈三角形?　这个不改　是为了能有一个流畅的ｆｌｏｗ额
01:05:726 (2) - 取消一折返移後面一格，前面加一note然後與01:05:516 (1) 重疊，蠻有感覺。ｆｉｘ

[Insane]

00:16:635 (1,2) - 疊00:18:103 (5) 比較美觀。　　ｆｉｘ
00:19:781 (3) - 2都有疊好這怎不疊好。ｆｉｘ
00:21:040 (1,2) - 或許可以複製(1)的來使用CTRL+H做個對稱。　　这啥意思？这两个是ｎｏｔｅ？
00:23:138 (3) - 疊 00:21:879 (1) 比較有效果。ｆｉｘ
00:23:348 (4) - 疊 00:22:089 (2) 比較有效果。ｆｉｘ
00:24:816 (2) - 或許可以疊 00:25:656 (3) 頭。ｆｉｘ
00:29:852 (6) - (360|293)試試?ｆｉｘ
00:32:788 (4) - 尾端沒疊好。ｆｉｘ
00:34:257 (3) - 三角形?　这个保留
00:35:306 (1) - 是不是忘了finish啊?　没忘　本来加了　但是后来觉得有点吵　不太适合ｆｉｎｉｓｈ又去掉了
00:37:614 (3) - (497|88)?　　类似的改了
00:39:502 (4,1) - 這邊仔細聽有一個跳點可以跳，這邊同距放沒感覺。　
00:41:180 (3) - ^
00:42:858 (1) - ^
00:44:537 (3) - ^　　这些有些改了有些没变额
00:45:376 (1) - 或許能+finish　　感觉不合适０.０这歌都不太适合ｆｉｎｉｓｈ　太吵了
00:46:005 (4) - 怎麼這個節奏會在結尾了? 還是換成note或slider做個跳吧。(像你這個 00:47:893 (3) 的節奏就在頭我覺得比較好。)　嗯　这个改了　一直觉得不太舒服
00:51:879 (6) - 同距擺看看?ｆｉｘ
00:53:767 (1) - 我覺得疊 00:52:928 (5) 比較flow?ｆｉｘ
00:55:446 (1) - 不跟前面疊嗎?ｆｉｘ
01:01:949 (8) - 我會想擺(236|61)左右的位置，現在放這裡有點擠。　改了别的
01:03:418 (5) - 這也能拉開點距離。ｆｉｘ
01:04:677 (1,2,3,4) - 全選移到(144|75)上試試(如果改了，上面那個(5)可以用開頭疊(1))　　这里感觉没啥必要额
01:05:516 (1,2,3,4) - 234拉開點距離，與1來個跳? 這節奏明顯的是大跳。　ｏｋａｙ　我纠结了好久没放跳　既然都觉得适合跳那就跳～

後面clap部分那個我覺得也可以跳，看你要不要拉開點距離了。　这首歌感觉不是很想做太跳０.０　所以一般都是小的距离变化什么的０.０

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

感谢小船的ｍｏｄ＝Ｌ＝

我图比较蠢０.０

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-02-21T09:08:57+00:00

M4M

Black——My personal suggestions.
Bold——Highly recommended.
Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you must fix it.

[General]

这combo color选的不太好，对比太强烈，而且那俩灰的暗BG后根本看不清

[萨米球]

00:06:774 (3,4) - blanket
00:08:453 (1,2) - ^
00:25:656 (2,3) - ^
00:26:495 (3,4) - 间距
00:31:110 (4) - 有点出去了
00:31:110 (4,1) - 建议easy不要这么放

[小黄瓜]

没啥问题

[爱抚姥爷]

00:05:096 (1) - 头上加个whi？
神hard

[娘包黄瓜]

整幅图的单点摆放还有很大的提升空间，可以摆的再有创意一点
00:32:159 (2) - 稍微往右下移动一点
01:06:145 (4) - 叠在2尾巴好了

挺好的
最后祝您身体健康

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-02-21T14:24:26+00:00

too many mods so that i won't reply for everyone
thank you for your modding. changed much

update:

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 5013
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 5013,18440,25153,38580
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Niang Bao no Outa
TitleUnicode:娘包のおうた
Artist:Hinata itigo
ArtistUnicode:日向苺
Creator:kamisamaaa
Version:yf's Hard
Source:Cure Girl
Tags:galgame curegirl sammy711 yf_bmp
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BeatmapSetID:150565

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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
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SliderMultiplier:1.6
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kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-02-23T02:52:33+00:00

change the offset and all update

toybot

1,050 posts

Joined June 2013

toybot 2014-02-23T21:37:41+00:00

no dap queue ~

O.o song is so weird !!!

probably won't have many suggestions, sorry ;;

[sammy's Easy]
00:08:447 (1) - finish does not sound good here, remove?
00:29:845 (3,4,1) - these seem a bit too close to each other, maybe space it out a bit? i mean space it horizontally

[Normal]
00:08:447 (1) - remove finish from this too
00:18:097 (6) - nc, it seems like its own separate piece
00:48:727 (1,2,3) - this combo makes the corner a bit.. cluttered? maybe rearrange something like this:

SPOILER

so that players might not get kind of confused of how close (1) and (3) are
01:04:671 (1) - does this really need nc..?

[yf's Hard]
00:06:559 (4) - maybe just move this down 4 grids? tiny grid
00:11:384 (1) - remove nc
00:35:510 (6) - nc
01:01:314 (1,2) - you could do the same with these sliders as you've done before, lower the sv of them, but just a suggestion of consistency :p

[Insane]
00:11:279 (5,6) - maybe move (5) like this?:

SPOILER

00:12:013 (2) - you should curve this like (4) after it
00:46:209 (5) - nc
01:05:929 (3) - you should move this down until it doesn't touch outside of grid, but just me kind of nazi

gl!

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-02-24T03:33:07+00:00

toybot wrote:
no dap queue ~

O.o song is so weird !!! sad to hear this

probably won't have many suggestions, sorry ;;

[Normal]
00:08:447 (1) - remove finish from this too sorry I think finish is suit here
00:18:097 (6) - nc, it seems like its own separate piece keep this. the begin of slider is a group with prev
00:48:727 (1,2,3) - this combo makes the corner a bit.. cluttered? maybe rearrange something like this:
SPOILER
so that players might not get kind of confused of how close (1) and (3) are actually current flow is better
01:04:671 (1) - does this really need nc..? just make a little beautiful

[Insane]
00:11:279 (5,6) - maybe move (5) like this?:
SPOILER
stack feel better to me
00:12:013 (2) - you should curve this like (4) after it I think current is okay
00:46:209 (5) - nc okay~fix
01:05:929 (3) - you should move this down until it doesn't touch outside of grid, but just me kind of nazi it doesn't touch the health line

gl!

thank you for modding

sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2014-02-26T19:38:30+00:00

[smallboat]

00:18:523 (1) - 應該能再加一個note在這裡做結尾，加了難度也不會影響到最低難度。(或00:17:684 (1) - 換成長條拉到00:18:523。)
我喜欢这种拖延感w

00:38:663 (1) - 為何不包 (2)? (又強迫症包了

[M酱]
00:06:774 (3,4) - blanket fix
00:08:453 (1,2) - ^fix
00:25:656 (2,3) - ^fix
00:26:495 (3,4) - 间距 fix
00:31:110 (4) - 有点出去了 fix
00:31:110 (4,1) - 建议easy不要这么放低难度也不能太无聊...啊

[toybot]
00:08:447 (1) - finish does not sound good here, remove? 00:05:090 (1) - keep consistent with this one
00:29:845 (3,4,1) - these seem a bit too close to each other, maybe space it out a bit? i mean space it horizontally Using patterns like these makes the map not be so boring

code

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 5013
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4

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Title:Nyan Hou no Outa
TitleUnicode:娘包のおうた
Artist:Hinata itigo
ArtistUnicode:日向苺
Creator:kamisamaaa
Version:sammy's Easy
Source:Cure Girl
Tags:galgame curegirl sammy711 yf_bmp
BeatmapID:372079
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CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
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[Luxord]

503 posts

Joined August 2011

[Luxord] 2014-02-26T23:12:42+00:00

M4M

[Easy]
00:25:650 (2,3) - Make a blanket?
00:25:650 (2,3) - You could do that here too.
00:31:104 (4,1) - Also fix the blanket here.
00:55:440 (1,2) - Maybe reverse the slider so the flow helps the new players to go to the next circle easier, I find it difficult as it is now.

[Normal]
00:38:657 (1) - Make this slider more symmetric, looks like it looses from the end of the slider. It's a bit upper.
Just that

[Hard]
00:42:013 (1) - As much as I love this beautiful slider, that much I hate to tell you that it MIGHT me unrankable cause it's blocking the path of the slider which must be clear from the beginning to the end.
This one's is fun to play, nothing else to see, great job :3.

[Insane]
00:25:020 (3,4,1,2,3) - That spacing is kinda too much.
00:31:104 (4,5,6) - ^
00:58:796 (1,2,3) - ^
01:02:153 (1,2,3) - ^
But it's not that fatal, they are playable at least.

Great map :3 the issues are very poor so have a star :3 good luck!

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-02-27T03:52:44+00:00

KiyoshiX101 wrote:
M4M

[Normal]
00:38:657 (1) - Make this slider more symmetric, looks like it looses from the end of the slider. It's a bit upper.
Just that

[Insane]
00:25:020 (3,4,1,2,3) - That spacing is kinda too much. just 2.12x is really normal in insane diff imo
00:31:104 (4,5,6) - ^
00:58:796 (1,2,3) - ^
01:02:153 (1,2,3) - ^ same here
But it's not that fatal, they are playable at least.

Great map :3 the issues are very poor so have a star :3 good luck!

thanks for mod and star

happy623

1,436 posts

Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-03-01T02:49:32+00:00

總算來了

General

考慮也把製作公司的名字也加進去 " Noesis "
注意其實偏黑的note在玩的時候玩家把光暗調到最低會什麼都看不了233

sammy's Easy

恩沒什麼特別問題

Normal

00:14:321 (7) - 我的話會把他不折返直接到 00:14:740 - 完結, 因為你跟的是vocal 這樣比較不違和
00:34:461 (7) - 同上
00:26:069 (2) - 放上一點blanket?
SPOILER

yf's Hard

00:33:202 (1) - 刪NC, 然後 00:34:461 (5) - 加NC, 因為你本來的NC pattern在 00:13:272 (1) - NC了
00:35:720 (7) - 同樣跟一下你的pattern, 這裡也應該NC, 後面的NC刪走
00:59:636 (1) - 同樣刪NC, 你NC在 00:52:922 (5) 也沒啊, 刪了之後在 01:00:475 (7) - 加NC

Insane

orz都找不到什麼

orz 沒什麼好找的 , 快找BAT吧

Flask

Beatmap Nominator

3,460 posts

Joined July 2011

Flask 2014-03-01T08:25:06+00:00

你好!
基本上沒看出什麼大問題, 請容許我小nazi一下 (.

[General]

Artist是Hinata Itigo才對吧? 沒意外的話如果不是特殊狀況都是大寫 (還是說其實有特殊狀況?!)

[Insane]

00:12:013 (2) - 這個改成彎的部分偏左邊跟00:12:643 (4) - 一樣可能會比較好看, 而且(1)是在(2)的右邊, 大概會flow一點
00:20:824 (4) - 我覺得這個跟00:19:146 (4) - overlap比較好一點, 這樣(1)~(4)的flow會變成直線. 相同的00:24:181 (4) - 也是放在x:168, y:304這附近比較好點
00:44:531 (3) - 這好像有點太靠近(4)了, 這樣(3,4)之間會有點擠擠的. (3)往左邊一點吧
00:47:468 (2,3,4) - 這樣好看些 (座標: (3) - > x:125, y:223, (4) - > x:101, y:135, 調完之後記得後面的(1)也調整一下)
SPOILER
01:02:992 (4,5) - 我覺得這中間可以再加個note 就跟01:02:468 (2) - 一樣. 因為(1,2)是同個距離, (4,5)也是同個距離, 而(4,5)之間的節奏比較疏一點自然就弱了一些

[愛撫's Hard]

00:31:104 (5) - 有點nazi, 不過能在往右邊偏個15度左右
01:05:510 (1,2,3,4) - 不等距嗎Q_Q 都弄成跳也不錯 (?

[Normal]

00:08:447 (1,2) - 可能我有點排斥這類flow出現在normal裡吧..總之這樣有點不是很乾淨就是了, 新手可能會把頭尾顛到過來按 (不過你覺得沒事的話就沒事..

[sammy's Easy]

00:02:153 (2) - 感覺這個能延長到白線(00:02:573 - )? 紅線上面那個音也沒有什麼必要去跟就是了
00:17:678 (1) - 換成slider然後結尾在00:18:097 - 去跟那個clap音?

這到底是日文歌還是中文歌啊...(ˊ=w=ˋ)
祝rank!

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-03-01T09:50:46+00:00

happy623 wrote:
總算來了

General
考慮也把製作公司的名字也加進去 " Noesis " 加了
注意其實偏黑的note在玩的時候玩家把光暗調到最低會什麼都看不了233 你书的对。。已经换了

Normal
00:14:321 (7) - 我的話會把他不折返直接到 00:14:740 - 完結, 因為你跟的是vocal 這樣比較不違和改了~
00:34:461 (7) - 同上改了~
00:26:069 (2) - 放上一點blanket? 之前没包好0.0
SPOILER

Insane
orz都找不到什麼

orz 沒什麼好找的 , 快找BAT吧好吧0.0 我去找狗

感谢mod~ ：D

Flask wrote:
你好!
基本上沒看出什麼大問題, 請容許我小nazi一下 (. 没问题~nazi也很好

[General]
Artist是Hinata Itigo才對吧? 沒意外的話如果不是特殊狀況都是大寫 (還是說其實有特殊狀況?!) 没啥特殊情况。。已经改成大写了
[Insane]
00:12:013 (2) - 這個改成彎的部分偏左邊跟00:12:643 (4) - 一樣可能會比較好看, 而且(1)是在(2)的右邊, 大概會flow一點好当时是想着这个和4方向相对所以做的改了确实更舒服一些
00:20:824 (4) - 我覺得這個跟00:19:146 (4) - overlap比較好一點, 這樣(1)~(4)的flow會變成直線. 相同的00:24:181 (4) - 也是放在x:168, y:304這附近比較好點这个没改因为不太会做遮挡感觉我遮挡做完之后好难看
00:44:531 (3) - 這好像有點太靠近(4)了, 這樣(3,4)之間會有點擠擠的. (3)往左邊一點吧好的
00:47:468 (2,3,4) - 這樣好看些 (座標: (3) - > x:125, y:223, (4) - > x:101, y:135, 調完之後記得後面的(1)也調整一下) good~
SPOILER
01:02:992 (4,5) - 我覺得這中間可以再加個note 就跟01:02:468 (2) - 一樣. 因為(1,2)是同個距離, (4,5)也是同個距離, 而(4,5)之間的節奏比較疏一點自然就弱了一些这个没加因为音乐这里就是两处不一样前面多个鼓点急促一些间距用一样的是为了造这种先急促然后舒缓的感觉额
[Normal]
00:08:447 (1,2) - 可能我有點排斥這類flow出現在normal裡吧..總之這樣有點不是很乾淨就是了, 新手可能會把頭尾顛到過來按 (不過你覺得沒事的話就沒事.. 我觉得其实还好吧0.0 懒得改了
這到底是日文歌還是中文歌啊...(ˊ=w=ˋ) 日本人唱的中文歌=L=
祝rank! 感谢

真心感谢mod啊0.0 简直好人！

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-03-01T10:17:44+00:00

KiyoshiX101 wrote:
[Hard]
00:42:013 (1) - As much as I love this beautiful slider, that much I hate to tell you that it MIGHT me unrankable cause it's blocking the path of the slider which must be clear from the beginning to the end. i think it's clear enough since the slider end is not overlapped entirely
This one's is fun to play, nothing else to see, great job :3.

happy623 wrote:
yf's Hard
00:33:202 (1) - 刪NC, 然後 00:34:461 (5) - 加NC, 因為你本來的NC pattern在 00:13:272 (1) - NC了
00:35:720 (7) - 同樣跟一下你的pattern, 這裡也應該NC, 後面的NC刪走
00:59:636 (1) - 同樣刪NC, 你NC在 00:52:922 (5) 也沒啊, 刪了之後在 01:00:475 (7) - 加NC

NC有些小改动:3

Flask wrote:
你好!
基本上沒看出什麼大問題, 請容許我小nazi一下 (.

[General]

[愛撫's Hard]
00:31:104 (5) - 有點nazi, 不過能在往右邊偏個15度左右 hao
01:05:510 (1,2,3,4) - 不等距嗎Q_Q 都弄成跳也不錯 (? 算啦

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sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2014-03-01T11:52:13+00:00

[KiyoshiX101]
00:25:650 (2,3) - Make a blanket? done
00:25:650 (2,3) - You could do that here too.done
00:31:104 (4,1) - Also fix the blanket here.done
00:55:440 (1,2) - Maybe reverse the slider so the flow helps the new players to go to the next circle easier, I find it difficult as it is now.
nope...Making everything easy to read will be boring
[happy623]
恩沒什麼特別問題
>A<
[Flask]
00:02:153 (2) - 感覺這個能延長到白線(00:02:573 - )? 紅線上面那個音也沒有什麼必要去跟就是了 done
00:17:678 (1) - 換成slider然後結尾在00:18:097 - 去跟那個clap音?
我更喜欢这种粘滞感0 0

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kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-03-01T11:56:01+00:00

okay~all diffs are updated

IamKwaN

osu! Alumni

3,905 posts

Joined August 2012

IamKwaN 2014-03-01T13:45:23+00:00

Hi, from QQ.

Insane

00:25:125 (4) - 這個我好像聽不到背景音樂有音;反而我在00:24:601 跟00:24:706 都聽到了
00:25:020 (3,4) - 這個1/4 Prev: 7.64x -o-
00:39:496 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡的梗可以跟00:42:852 (1,2,3,4) 一樣
01:04:671 (1,2,3,4) - 這個可以玩更遠的梗,因為01:04:671 (1) 比01:03:831 (1) 更大聲

yf's Hard

00:11:279 - 漏了個音
00:31:838 (8) - 這個放在00:31:419 才對音欸 ._.

Normal

01:05:510 (1,2,3) - 這裡太難,又stack又1/2,用紅點做個滑條就好 :3

薩米's Easy

00:17:678 (1) - 這個NC去掉,這個NC在我看來是沒意義的,他跟00:17:258 (3) 這個是同一段的音樂,所以不用NC
00:31:104 (4,1) - 請包好
00:47:048 (2,3) - 這樣放flow得更好啊
SPOILER
01:05:510 (1) - 這個用紅點來凸出中間那兩個音吧

Oracle

571 posts

Joined April 2012

Oracle 2014-03-08T10:42:44+00:00

Insane
00:31:943 (1) - 我注意到你用了很多这种非常偏的右下角位置。这个位置由于是板子死角，玩起来是比较卡手的。不推荐用。
00:33:832 (2) - ^
其他的等你re了我再全部都看一遍，到时候edit这个post就好

Chloe

1,160 posts

Joined April 2011

Chloe 2014-03-15T08:00:21+00:00

[General]

Fine.

[Easy]

00:06:768 (3) - 00:27:747 (4) - blanket
00:08:447 (1,3) - 00:25:650 (2) - 其实在我看来这些blanket都没有做到最好不过EZ无所谓你看着修吧上面那些就建

议改改
00:31:104 (4) - 歪了注意间距拉一下屁股的锚点

[Normal]

00:09:286 (2,3,4) - 考虑一下3根同样的滑条各转120度摆法 http://puu.sh/7vX5l.jpg或http://puu.sh/7vX7j.jpg 我偏

向前者
00:18:097 (6) - 弯一点或者索性变直的
00:31:104 (4) - 复制00:32:153 (2) - 然后CTRL+H+J

[Hard]

AR+1

00:12:223 (2) - 这里小跳而不是00:12:433 (3) -
01:06:034 (4) - add

[Insane]

HP-1

00:06:559 (1) - 间距有点远 try 260,281
00:11:279 (5) - delete 这个太突兀了也不好听
00:31:419 (5) - ^
00:44:111 (2) - 这里而不是前面
00:45:999 (4) - 00:46:629 (3) - 和这个开头stack
01:06:139 (4) - 太远了移到450,222 花花和lks都用过这类梗看起来高大上考虑一下

7天怎么还是1kd

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-03-15T10:07:06+00:00

IamKwaN wrote:
Hi, from QQ.

Insane
00:25:125 (4) - 這個我好像聽不到背景音樂有音;反而我在00:24:601 跟00:24:706 都聽到了你书的对
00:25:020 (3,4) - 這個1/4 Prev: 7.64x -o- 错觉系列
00:39:496 (1,2,3,4) - 這裡的梗可以跟00:42:852 (1,2,3,4) 一樣没必要吧感觉
01:04:671 (1,2,3,4) - 這個可以玩更遠的梗,因為01:04:671 (1) 比01:03:831 (1) 更大聲
嗯调整了

Normal
01:05:510 (1,2,3) - 這裡太難,又stack又1/2,用紅點做個滑條就好 :3
感觉这样节奏听着比较好听先保留

Chloe wrote:
[General]

Fine.
[Normal]
00:09:286 (2,3,4) - 考虑一下3根同样的滑条各转120度摆法 http://puu.sh/7vX5l.jpg或http://puu.sh/7vX7j.jpg 我偏

向前者感觉完全没必要。。
00:18:097 (6) - 弯一点或者索性变直的变弯了
00:31:104 (4) - 复制00:32:153 (2) - 然后CTRL+H+J
同觉得没必要

[Insane]

HP-1 你书的对
00:06:559 (1) - 间距有点远 try 260,281 2.0X一点不远啊。。这个音比较重的
00:11:279 (5) - delete 这个太突兀了也不好听
00:31:419 (5) - ^ 这里感觉听着不错的不过前面有个地方有点突兀删了
00:44:111 (2) - 这里而不是前面啥意思
00:45:999 (4) - 00:46:629 (3) - 和这个开头stack 这里是1.2距离的梗
01:06:139 (4) - 太远了移到450,222 花花和lks都用过这类梗看起来高大上考虑一下嗯哼~

7天怎么还是1kd 我也不清楚啊之前ora球摸也是 7天了1KD 不知道啥情况

感谢mod啊：D

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-03-16T06:56:14+00:00

just changed Chloe's first point

SPOILER

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sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2014-03-16T10:07:18+00:00

[IamKwan]
00:17:678 (1) - 這個NC去掉,這個NC在我看來是沒意義的,他跟00:17:258 (3) 這個是同一段的音樂,所以不用NC
OK
00:31:104 (4,1) - 請包好
OK
00:47:048 (2,3) - 這樣放flow得更好啊
其实通过flow的反向强调4是本意...
01:05:510 (1) - 這個用紅點來凸出中間那兩個音吧
好
[Chloe]
00:06:768 (3) - 00:27:747 (4) - blanket好
00:08:447 (1,3) - 00:25:650 (2) - 其实在我看来这些blanket都没有做到最好不过EZ无所谓你看着修吧上面那些就建议改改好
00:31:104 (4) - 歪了注意间距拉一下屁股的锚点好

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kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-03-16T15:09:31+00:00

all diff update!

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-03-24T17:59:15+00:00

Just a few things to fix!
[Easy]

01:03:412 (2) - Inconsistent spacing between 1 and 3. Please fix. Also consider re-angling this slider at 3.

[Normal]

00:21:873 (1) - Please consider giving newer players some time to recover. Reduce spinner so it ends at 00:24:391.
01:03:831 (1) - The end of this slider end is off-grid. The y-coordinates should not be over 384 units. Currently 385.

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-03-25T01:37:22+00:00

Oh Ike ♡

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-03-25T03:29:18+00:00

BeatofIke wrote:
Just a few things to fix!
[Normal]
00:21:873 (1) - Please consider giving newer players some time to recover. Reduce spinner so it ends at 00:24:391. Ammm..I want to keep this. because this song just 143BPM . 1/1 is enough in the normal diff imo=L+ sorry for this
01:03:831 (1) - The end of this slider end is off-grid. The y-coordinates should not be over 384 units. Currently 385. okay fix

haha thank you Beatoflke

waiting for my GDer~

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2014-03-25T04:09:49+00:00

!!! I'll check soon after getting a bubble

go go~

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-03-25T05:23:15+00:00

alacat wrote:
!!! I'll check soon after getting a bubble go go~

wa~thank you alacat

so moe~

BeatofIke

4,166 posts

Joined September 2011

BeatofIke 2014-03-25T11:03:46+00:00

alacat moe~ Bubbled!

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-03-25T11:38:36+00:00

COME ON

alacat

osu! Alumni

3,872 posts

Joined May 2011

alacat 2014-03-25T16:16:54+00:00

nyan

[General]

Artist: Nyanhou no Outa
I think "娘包" is compound word. so you don't need to use space between. for example .. Touhou
Tag Suggestion: visual novel eroge Yamada
The name of this character is Yamada.
Preview time is unsnapped, Please check it and use at here. 00:04:985 -

[Easy]

ocean o_o

00:04:671 - clap
00:31:104 (4) - This slider tail is out of screen, pls fix it then, i feel this part looks crowded 00:29:845 (3,4) - i hope you put more spacing between.
img
00:38:657 - hmm ... I don't agree to change slider speed in this difficulty. i guess This part would make beginners confused. So you should consider useing x1.0 speed to this part.
01:02:153 (1,2,3) - Please check this part about distance.

[Normal]

00:18:727 - Is this necessary ?
00:21:873 (1,1) - Agree with BeatofIke, Please try to think about it for beginners again.
01:06:139 - clap

[Hard]

00:04:461 (3) - hmm .. I'd remove this note for better rhythm or turn down the volume. I feel it's a bit loud.
00:38:657 (1) - i don't agree this slider. as you can look this image, i guess this slider would confuse many players. So i hope you consider remaking a slider for player. If you do that, it prevents the player from misreading.
img
then, please check this rule from Ranking Criteria.
img

[Insane]

00:10:964 (4,5) - why don't you put in straight line between (4) and (5) for flow ? it would be more natural. Please try to make it like this image
img
00:17:887 - missing a whistle
01:04:671 (5,6) - I recommend you to use more spacing than previous part 01:03:831 (1,2) -. it's better to follow the volume gradually. then, it would fit well with this kind of music.

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-03-26T04:49:42+00:00

alacat wrote:
nyan

[General]
Artist: Nyanhou no Outa
I think "娘包" is compound word. so you don't need to use space between. for example .. Touhou oh i got it
Tag Suggestion: visual novel eroge Yamada okay~fixed
The name of this character is Yamada.
Preview time is unsnapped, Please check it and use at here. 00:04:985 - fixed
[Easy]

ocean o_o haha I think so
00:38:657 - hmm ... I don't agree to change slider speed in this difficulty. i guess This part would make beginners confused. So you should consider useing x1.0 speed to this part. it's suit for music imo. and two speed is similar. maybe let him keep this?
[Normal]
00:18:727 - Is this necessary ? not necessary. but I feel nice with a break here
00:21:873 (1,1) - Agree with BeatofIke, Please try to think about it for beginners again. okay fixed
01:06:139 - clap added
[Insane]
00:10:964 (4,5) - why don't you put in straight line between (4) and (5) for flow ? it would be more natural. Please try to make it like this image
img
change the placement to make a less didtance between 4 5
00:17:887 - missing a whistle added
01:04:671 (5,6) - I recommend you to use more spacing than previous part 01:03:831 (1,2) -. it's better to follow the volume gradually. then, it would fit well with this kind of music. fixed.

thanks alacat nyan

still waiting for my GDers

they have to stay at shool until the weekend

萨米和爱抚姥爷你们记得先重新下载再改mod啊我改标题tag什么的了~

sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2014-03-29T03:04:31+00:00

[alaにゃ]
ocean o_o　はじめてのランク向けなので　リズムのところに気を配ったんです＞＜
00:04:671 - clap 付けました
00:31:104 (4) - This slider tail is out of screen, pls fix it then, i feel this part looks crowded 00:29:845 (3,4) - i hope you put more spacing between.
パタン変えました
00:38:657 - hmm ... I don't agree to change slider speed in this difficulty. i guess This part would make beginners confused. So you should consider useing x1.0 speed to this part.
1.0にしました　ついでにパタンの移り変えも多少伴っていました
01:02:153 (1,2,3) - Please check this part about distance.
はい！

[Beat]
01:03:412 (2) - Inconsistent spacing between 1 and 3. Please fix. Also consider re-angling this slider at 3.
Re-angeled

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yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-03-29T05:29:26+00:00

fixed the confusing slider~ thank you moe alacat!

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kamisamaaa

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kamisamaaa 2014-03-29T08:01:57+00:00

all diff updated!
and change insane diff name to Cucmber

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alacat 2014-03-29T15:46:05+00:00

Recheck ~

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Artist: Nyanhou no Outa

^ Please check this

seems fine other diffs to me !

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