Hinata Ichigo - Nyanhou no Outa · forum

kamisamaaa

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-02-15T16:50:48+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年3月29日 at 23:51:13

Artist: Hinata Ichigo
Title: Nyanhou no Outa
Source: Cure Girl
Tags: visual novel eroge Yamada galgame curegirl Noesis sammy711 yf_bmp
BPM: 143
Filesize: 3243kb
Play Time: 01:06
Difficulties Available:

Cucumber (5 stars, 221 notes)
Normal (4.11 stars, 89 notes)
sammy's Easy (1.98 stars, 61 notes)
yf's Hard (4.82 stars, 159 notes)

Download: Hinata Ichigo - Nyanhou no Outa
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
---------------
an intesting BGM in cure girl(galgame)~hope you like this
special thanks for alacat help me to the title:D

update

change tittle at 2014-02-26
change the artist at 2014-03-01
please redownload the map

insane done by me
yf's hard done by yf_bmp
normal done by me
easy done by sammy711
thanks all people who help me

Last edited by kamisamaaa 2014-03-29T15:52:02+00:00, edited 34 times in total.

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-02-15T16:52:11+00:00

Mark

arviejhay

1,413 posts

Joined August 2009

arviejhay 2014-02-16T11:42:45+00:00

hi from my modding queue
sorry if am a noob modder but i hope the mod helps

yf's Hard

00:02:159(2) - don't overlap it. i think stack the two circles
00:02:998(4) - move this circle to x:100 y:264
00:06:565(4) - move this circle to x:352 y:180
00:15:586(1) - move this circle to x:416 y:212

sorry if i didn't mod insane diff because this diff don't have any errors right now and its perfect
i was laughing so hard when i first listen to this song xD

sorry if i gave you a short mod
i will shoot a star because i love this song

Good luck mapping

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-02-16T13:36:18+00:00

arviejhay wrote:
hi from my modding queue
sorry if am a noob modder but i hope the mod helps dont worry~nobody knows how to mod at the begining~

sorry if i didn't mod insane diff because this diff don't have any errors right now and its perfect this insane is not good imo =L=
i was laughing so hard when i first listen to this song xD same here~ thats the reason why I mapped this~

sorry if i gave you a short mod
i will shoot a star because i love this song
Good luck mapping

thanks for mod~

10crystalmask01

10crystalmask01 2014-02-16T22:58:38+00:00

Ello, mod as requested o̿ ̭ o̿

[Easy]
00:02:159 (2) - Can blanket 00:01:740 (1) - better.
00:08:453 (1,2,3) - ^ Same suggestion as above.
00:25:236 (1,4) - Not a big issue, but you could still stack these objects you know?
00:29:851 (3) - move more right (if you can) so it isn't touching 00:28:593 (1) -
00:31:949 (1,2) - Needs better blanket.
01:05:516 (1) - Move to 168:304, so it isn't crowded with 01:05:096 (4) -

Work on the blankets in this diff.

[Normal]
*You really should increase the DS in this diff, you objects are way too crowded together o.o eg. 00:04:047 (5,6,7,1) -
1.4 or 1.5 would do

[yf's Hard]
HP Drain Rate -1?
00:02:998 (4,5) - Not an appropriate spot for a jump, it's really random.

[Insane]
00:03:733 - You could add a note here

00:17:998 - ^

Not my style of music

Ah well. Good luck!

Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Neta 2014-02-17T01:25:19+00:00

Hi From my Modding Queue

All of my mod is suggestion

[Before Modding]

You'd better make slider put the 'end of dot' on the middle of 'end of slider' (Example : http://puu.sh/6Z31c.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/6Z32d.jpg
This will help you making your map's quality higher

[sammy's Easy]

Your slider is not cleaned now make the tick http://puu.sh/6Z32d.jpg like this please
00:35:306 (1,2,3,4) - pattern is little weird better change this
00:45:376 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This notes are little overlapped, overlapped patterns are not good for Easy
00:58:802 (1,2,3) - ^

[Normal]

00:58:802 (1,2,3,1) - it feels like forced pattern to put spinner better change this

[yf's Hard]

00:11:390 (1) - I don't think this needs new combo
00:38:663 (1,1,1,1) - 4spinners with out note, better put some notes here

[Insane]

00:16:635 (1,2) - change new combo to 2nd one http://puu.sh/6Z4Yz.jpg
00:22:719 (1,2,3,4) - Too straight, you'd better bend it. it'll be nicer

NICE MAP Good Luck~

sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2014-02-17T03:02:33+00:00

[Neta]
Your slider is not cleaned now make the tick http://puu.sh/6Z32d.jpg like this please Fixed All
00:35:306 (1,2,3,4) - pattern is little weird better change this Changed
00:45:376 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This notes are little overlapped, overlapped patterns are not good for EasyTruely so much overlappings it may be hard to read for beginners so I reduce two circle to make overlapping much less than before as well as to give beginners more concentration on reading those overlappings
00:58:802 (1,2,3) - ^ Overlapping only two is OK i think >.>

[10crystalmask01]
00:02:159 (2) - Can blanket 00:01:740 (1) - better. fixed
00:08:453 (1,2,3) - ^ Same suggestion as above. ^
00:25:236 (1,4) - Not a big issue, but you could still stack these objects you know? stacked
00:29:851 (3) - move more right (if you can) so it isn't touching 00:28:593 (1) - move a little but not much
00:31:949 (1,2) - Needs better blanket. fixed
01:05:516 (1) - Move to 168:304, so it isn't crowded with 01:05:096 (4) - OK

code

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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8

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TitleUnicode:娘包のおうた
Artist:Hinata itigo
ArtistUnicode:日向苺
Creator:kamisamaaa
Version:sammy's Easy
Source:Cure Girl
Tags:galgame curegirl
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kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-02-17T05:04:13+00:00

10crystalmask01 wrote:
Ello, mod as requested o̿ ̭ o̿
[Normal]
*You really should increase the DS in this diff, you objects are way too crowded together o.o eg. 00:04:047 (5,6,7,1) -
1.4 or 1.5 would do actually a little overlap is okay in the normal diff~I dound many other map have overlap in normal diff

okay fix
[Insane]
00:03:733 - You could add a note here no~not suit for song
00:17:998 - ^ I'll consider about this

Not my style of music Ah well. Good luck!

Neta wrote:
Hi From my Modding Queue

All of my mod is suggestion

[Before Modding]
You'd better make slider put the 'end of dot' on the middle of 'end of slider' (Example : http://puu.sh/6Z31c.jpg ---> http://puu.sh/6Z32d.jpg
This will help you making your map's quality higher
haha~yes you are right

[Normal]
00:58:802 (1,2,3,1) - it feels like forced pattern to put spinner better change this
good catch~I change them and add a spinner same as easy diff

[Insane]
00:16:635 (1,2) - change new combo to 2nd one http://puu.sh/6Z4Yz.jpg sorry~I add NC because the Chinese lyrics~
00:22:719 (1,2,3,4) - Too straight, you'd better bend it. it'll be nicer okay~I will consider about this~

NICE MAP Good Luck~

thanks for mod~

Atrue

osu! Alumni

1,017 posts

Joined July 2012

Atrue 2014-02-18T00:54:08+00:00

娘包的歌

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-02-18T03:33:37+00:00

Atrue wrote:
娘包的歌

嗯哼~

hoshisorakiseki

300 posts

Joined January 2012

hoshisorakiseki 2014-02-18T05:38:36+00:00

来看了
全局：
还真短，连kiai都没有

难度：Esay
没有发现

难度：Normal
虚汗椒崩溃亦载经济基础民
没有发现

难度：Hard
00:20:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6) + 00:23:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 建议换一个方向来转，因为前面的已经是逆时针转了

难度：Insane
00:21:040 (1,2) + 00:24:397 (1,2) - 这里用单点？好像有空拍出现，换一个拉条比较好
00:26:914 + 00:28:383 + 00:30:271 + 00:33:628 + 00:35:096 + 00:35:016 + 00:40:551 + 00:43:907 + 00:47:264 + 00:50:621 - 以上貌似都空拍了

写的真短...加油

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-02-18T09:06:20+00:00

hoshisorakiseki wrote:
来看了
全局：
还真短，连kiai都没有是吧，，我也觉得断的一塌糊涂0.0

难度：Esay
没有发现

难度：Normal
虚汗椒崩溃亦载经济基础民
没有发现

难度：Hard
00:20:201 (1,2,3,4,5,6) + 00:23:558 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 建议换一个方向来转，因为前面的已经是逆时针转了

难度：Insane
00:21:040 (1,2) + 00:24:397 (1,2) - 这里用单点？好像有空拍出现，换一个拉条比较好
00:26:914 + 00:28:383 + 00:30:271 + 00:33:628 + 00:35:096 + 00:35:016 + 00:40:551 + 00:43:907 + 00:47:264 + 00:50:621 - 以上貌似都空拍了
追的音轨不一样的问题吧。。。。。。
写的真短...加油

感谢~

Rizia

3,114 posts

Joined January 2012

Rizia 2014-02-18T16:04:13+00:00

[Easy]
sammy竟然做GD
這finish有點吵
00:43:698 (1) - remove nc
00:47:893 (3,1) - 有點overlap大丈夫?

[Normal]
00:02:998 (3,4,5,6,7) - 當心這裡可能有點難讀

[Hard]
00:38:663 (1,1,1,1) - 這段有點懶啊

[Insane]
HP-1 AR-1
00:48:733 (1,2) - 這slider有問題?看似是紅點做出來的slider但內裡卻不是後面還有一個
00:54:607 (5) - 疊在7下

Edit: 在tag加回GDer的username

sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2014-02-18T16:14:23+00:00

[萌柚子]
00:43:698 (1) - remove nc removed
00:47:893 (3,1) - 有點overlap大丈夫? 又微调了下大概没问题吧

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TitleUnicode:娘包のおうた
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kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-02-18T17:56:27+00:00

Kawaiwkyik wrote:
[Normal]
00:02:998 (3,4,5,6,7) - 當心這裡可能有點難讀是有点我想想看怎么把它改了

[Insane]
HP-1 AR-1 ar-1了 HP没必要
00:48:733 (1,2) - 這slider有問題?看似是紅點做出來的slider但內裡卻不是後面還有一個嗯不知道为啥我重新拉了一下
00:54:607 (5) - 疊在7下 okay

Edit: 在tag加回GDer的username 额我又把这事忘了全部加了

thanks for mod
updata~

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2014-02-19T07:32:46+00:00

Hi ~
lol i want to laugh with the song xD

Guide

Bold = Unrankable/must be fixed
Red = consider to fix it
Black = Suggestion
Blue = recommended but lower than red one, up to you to fix it or not

General

disable Widescreen Support (since no SB here), letterbox and countdown here
default combo colour doesn't fit with BG, try use custom combo colour? example : http://puu.sh/71O7k.png
if you want to use this, here is the code
```
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,149
Combo2 : 181,181,181
Combo3 : 255,128,128
Combo4 : 70,70,70
```

Easy

change Tick rate become 1. tick rate 2 too much of ticks and noisy here
00:04:677 - keep N:C1 here since hitnormal of N:C2 doesn't fit with the clap sound (background music here)
00:05:096 (1) - broken flow here. i strongly suggest to flip it as https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1347975 to make a blanket too here.
00:06:774 (3) - inconsistency spacing (0,91x) here. should be around 1,0x
00:06:774 (3,4) - blanket pls. drag 2nd node of (3) slider to 323,237
00:11:809 (1) - flip this slider for natural flow, currently seems broken because do it opposite from natural flow. imo try to use https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1347986 instead
00:26:495 (3) - blanket could be better here, drag the first node to 176,136 for better blanket
00:27:753 (4) - blanket too for neater pattern? flow seems better for me too http://puu.sh/71P81.jpg
00:28:593 (1) - a little bit overlap with 00:26:495 (3) - :< , move this circle a little bit to right for avoid it
00:31:110 (4) - maybe just for me but i feel flow more natural if you do ctrl+G for this slider
00:34:467 (4) - move this slider to 252,296. flow broken here. unnatural flow. feel it with mouse and you will understand it
00:47:054 (2,3,1) - bad overlap here, since you lowering the SV here. imo you able to increase the spacing to keep a neat pattern here but need remap so yeah just sayin
00:55:446 (1,2) - unnatural flow again. because flow touched on (1)'s body here. imo no need to explain it so try change this pattern become https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1347999 instead
01:03:837 (3) - flip it wth ctrl+H. obviously reason for natural flow
01:03:837 (3) - clap on tail? the sound is clap o.o
01:05:096 (4) - same as above

Normal

00:02:998 (3,4,5) - overlapping and a little bad flow here. might be confused for newbie. i would to arrange like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348005 altho need some of replacement for consistency spacing
00:07:614 (5) - i would to flip this slider with ctrl+J here. so the flow from (5)'s tail to (1)'s head become natural http://puu.sh/71PXq.jpg
00:18:523 - imo since the music is important here. map this time or give a delay break http://puu.sh/71RuL.jpg here
00:27:754 (5) - yap same as 00:07:614 (5) - , try http://puu.sh/71RAd.jpg
00:45:376 (1) - i would to tweak this slider become for smoother flow and natural flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348055
01:00:062 (4) - i would to move this circle to 180,144 to avoid sharp of curving flow between 01:00:062 (4,5) -
01:04:257 (2) - clap should be on head instead whistle if hitsounded based from music
01:04:677 (1) - same reason as above, change clap to whistle
01:05:097 (2) - and clap for head and tail if you hitsounded it based music (at least clap on head for consistency)

Hard

00:01:740 (1,2,4) - anti jump in here makes confuse for player. i'm sure with it. normal ds instead
00:05:096 (1) - empty here if you didn't give any hitsound on head. at least use whistle
00:06:565 (4) - hmm try a better overlap here? i'm not fans of overlap but i would suggest about http://puu.sh/71ScL.jpg
00:10:970 (6,7) - how about make a little jump here instead stacking its for more fun to play 00:10:970 (6) - on 100,96 , 00:11:180 (7) - 156,200
00:12:649 (4) - move to 88,96 for better overlap. seems neater for my eyes
00:19:781 (1,1) - no need NC here since no SV change or hard pattern to read
00:23:138 (1,1) - same as above
00:25:236 (1) - try move the tail to 204,336. it reduced unnatural flow here. altho i still feel a little bit opposite of natural flow here
00:28:593 (1) - same reason as above. i thought you can fix it with yourself w/o my suggestion
00:31:110 (5,6) - unnatural flow between them. try to tweak 00:31:110 (5) - become like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348080
00:38:663 (1,1,1,1) - i'm not fans of these spinner, imo they don't emphasize the music with clearly. i would to make rhythm as Easy and Normal did
01:05:726 (2,3,4) - separate them become a little jump. it would be emphasize music better than stacking like this

Insane

00:02:579 (4,5,6) - imo this pattern too boring for Insane diff. i would to make a huge jump of pattern so it will be more fun to play for expert player https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348090
00:06:565 (1) - if i were you i would to stack this circle (with slider maybe) to stacked with 00:05:096 (1) - since the vocal is a little bit strong so it would be nice for a little jump
00:07:614 (4) - a little bit forced to catch this one imo, try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348142 instead
00:15:166 (1) - the sound is only drum sound here. remove finish or use sampleset drum finish only instead
00:19:572 (2) - altho this is not overmapped because have a low drum sound here. i strongly suggest to remove this since the sound is very low and need 25% to hear it
00:22:928 (2) - same as above
00:21:670 - the sound is quite loud here. try to add note?
00:25:236 (1) - if i were you i would to make a various rhythm than you used in previous to make it interesting http://puu.sh/71VD7.jpg (p.s: start from 00:25:026 - )
00:31:425 (5,6) - bad flow from previous go to this pattern imo, unnatural. i would to arrange it become http://puu.sh/71VOQ.jpg
01:03:418 (5) - ctrl+G it for more fun to play with more jump. also flow a little bit increase
01:05:726 (2,3,4) - same reason as Hard but need huge jump for this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348167

Gl

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-02-19T09:48:43+00:00

Xinely wrote:
Hi ~
lol i want to laugh with the song xD haha

Guide
Bold = Unrankable/must be fixed
Red = consider to fix it
Black = Suggestion
Blue = recommended but lower than red one, up to you to fix it or not
General
disable Widescreen Support (since no SB here), letterbox and countdown here okay~fix
default combo colour doesn't fit with BG, try use custom combo colour? example : http://puu.sh/71O7k.png
if you want to use this, here is the code
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,149
Combo2 : 181,181,181
Combo3 : 255,128,128
Combo4 : 70,70,70
okay~I use this code~
Normal
00:02:998 (3,4,5) - overlapping and a little bad flow here. might be confused for newbie. i would to arrange like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348005 altho need some of replacement for consistency spacing fix
00:07:614 (5) - i would to flip this slider with ctrl+J here. so the flow from (5)'s tail to (1)'s head become natural http://puu.sh/71PXq.jpgfix
00:18:523 - imo since the music is important here. map this time or give a delay break http://puu.sh/71RuL.jpg here keep this
00:27:754 (5) - yap same as 00:07:614 (5) - , try http://puu.sh/71RAd.jpg fix
00:45:376 (1) - i would to tweak this slider become for smoother flow and natural flow https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348055 fix
01:00:062 (4) - i would to move this circle to 180,144 to avoid sharp of curving flow between 01:00:062 (4,5) - fix
01:04:257 (2) - clap should be on head instead whistle if hitsounded based from music
01:04:677 (1) - same reason as above, change clap to whistle
01:05:097 (2) - and clap for head and tail if you hitsounded it based music (at least clap on head for consistency) yes you are right. I make some mistake when I copy hitsound from insane diff. fix all these hitsound

Insane
00:02:579 (4,5,6) - imo this pattern too boring for Insane diff. i would to make a huge jump of pattern so it will be more fun to play for expert player https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348090 I think here use a huge jump is not so good. but change to your placement and ctrl+G 6
00:06:565 (1) - if i were you i would to stack this circle (with slider maybe) to stacked with 00:05:096 (1) - since the vocal is a little bit strong so it would be nice for a little jump change all placement here
00:07:614 (4) - a little bit forced to catch this one imo, try https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348142 instead same
00:15:166 (1) - the sound is only drum sound here. remove finish or use sampleset drum finish only instead remove the finish here
00:19:572 (2) - altho this is not overmapped because have a low drum sound here. i strongly suggest to remove this since the sound is very low and need 25% to hear it
00:22:928 (2) - same as above
00:21:670 - the sound is quite loud here. try to add note? I think current rythm is better here
00:25:236 (1) - if i were you i would to make a various rhythm than you used in previous to make it interesting http://puu.sh/71VD7.jpg (p.s: start from 00:25:026 - ) okay~and change the placement
00:31:425 (5,6) - bad flow from previous go to this pattern imo, unnatural. i would to arrange it become http://puu.sh/71VOQ.jpg I think flow is okay here
01:03:418 (5) - ctrl+G it for more fun to play with more jump. also flow a little bit increase I made this just because the feel of music
01:05:726 (2,3,4) - same reason as Hard but need huge jump for this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1348167 sorry I want to keep this0.0

Gl

thanks for mod xinely~感谢~

sammy711

207 posts

Joined November 2012

sammy711 2014-02-19T13:55:42+00:00

[Xinely]
change Tick rate become 1. tick rate 2 too much of ticks and noisy here
My fault,fixed

00:04:677 - keep N:C1 here since hitnormal of N:C2 doesn't fit with the clap sound (background music here)
OK, removed C2

00:05:096 (1) - broken flow here. i strongly suggest to flip it as https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1347975 to make a blanket too here.
Good idea, I love that blanket

00:06:774 (3) - inconsistency spacing (0,91x) here. should be around 1,0x
fixed

00:06:774 (3,4) - blanket pls. drag 2nd node of (3) slider to 323,237
changed but in another way

00:11:809 (1) - flip this slider for natural flow, currently seems broken because do it opposite from natural flow. imo try to use https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1347986 instead
sorry but i prefer this kind of flow at this point...Normal flow at all time can be boring

00:26:495 (3) - blanket could be better here, drag the first node to 176,136 for better blanket
yes you are right

00:27:753 (4) - blanket too for neater pattern? flow seems better for me too http://puu.sh/71P81.jpg
exactly

00:28:593 (1) - a little bit overlap with 00:26:495 (3) - :< , move this circle a little bit to right for avoid it
I tried hard and managed to avoid it

00:31:110 (4) - maybe just for me but i feel flow more natural if you do ctrl+G for this slider
00:31:110 (4,1) - flow here will be ruined so...sorry

00:34:467 (4) - move this slider to 252,296. flow broken here. unnatural flow. feel it with mouse and you will understand it
broken flow fits here imo for a strong drum appears here

00:47:054 (2,3,1) - bad overlap here, since you lowering the SV here. imo you able to increase the spacing to keep a neat pattern here but need remap so yeah just sayin
Many people had said this problem so I will consider it

00:55:446 (1,2) - unnatural flow again. because flow touched on (1)'s body here. imo no need to explain it so try change this pattern become https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1347999 instead
I thought for a while and moved 00:54:607 (3)

01:03:837 (3) - flip it wth ctrl+H. obviously reason for natural flow
If I flip it, the flow to the next note will be not so good

01:03:837 (3) - clap on tail? the sound is clap o.o
01:05:096 (4) - same as above
fixed

thanks for mod!

code

osu file format v12

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 5013
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 8

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Title:Niang Bao no Outa
TitleUnicode:娘包のおうた
Artist:Hinata itigo
ArtistUnicode:日向苺
Creator:kamisamaaa
Version:sammy's Easy
Source:Cure Girl
Tags:galgame curegirl sammy711 yf_bmp
BeatmapID:372079
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[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:2
OverallDifficulty:2
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smallboat

1,687 posts

Joined January 2010

smallboat 2014-02-19T17:30:21+00:00

嗨，小黃瓜，QQ group mod req.

Hope you reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

確定要Enable countdown? 還是取消吧。

[sammy's Easy]

00:18:523 (1) - 應該能再加一個note在這裡做結尾，加了難度也不會影響到最低難度。(或00:17:684 (1) - 換成長條拉到00:18:523。)
00:38:663 (1) - 為何不包 (2)? ~~(又強迫症~~

[Normal]

00:16:425 (3) - 試著照弧度擺?
00:18:103 (6) - 我覺得換成長條拉到00:18:523也蠻適合做結束然後break。(其實這邊也可以不用break，這邊後面也可擺個簡單的滑條或note，別跟easy一樣空的?)
00:32:789 (3) - 弧度
00:51:250 (3) - 用00:48:733 (1,2,3) 的這幾個的頭呈三角形?
01:05:726 (2) - 取消一折返移後面一格，前面加一note然後與01:05:516 (1) 重疊，蠻有感覺。

[yf's Hard]

00:02:998 (4) - 感覺部分疊在00:03:208 (5) 上比較帶感，這邊疊在尾端沒什麼感覺。
00:09:292 (3) - 用Ctrl+J不就對稱Pattern了嗎? 建議改了(改了記得Ctrl+g)。
00:15:586 (1) - 故意部分疊?
00:16:635 (4) - (69|43)，用裡面的角包住(3)結尾。
00:28:173 (6) - 挑個沒疊好
00:32:369 (2) - 或許前端可以疊起來。
00:38:663 (1) - 連續四個spin感覺好敷衍，把第2跟4的spin換掉擺節奏吧?(或13)
00:57:964 (1) - 或許可來個Ctrl+g。
01:05:516 (1,2,3,4) - 或許可以來個大跳，後面三個疊著似乎沒什麼效果。

[Insane]

00:16:635 (1,2) - 疊00:18:103 (5) 比較美觀。
00:19:781 (3) - 2都有疊好這怎不疊好。
00:21:040 (1,2) - 或許可以複製(1)的來使用CTRL+H做個對稱。
00:23:138 (3) - 疊 00:21:879 (1) 比較有效果。
00:23:348 (4) - 疊 00:22:089 (2) 比較有效果。
00:24:816 (2) - 或許可以疊 00:25:656 (3) 頭。
00:29:852 (6) - (360|293)試試?
00:32:788 (4) - 尾端沒疊好。
00:34:257 (3) - 三角形?
00:35:306 (1) - 是不是忘了finish啊?
00:37:614 (3) - (497|88)?
00:39:502 (4,1) - 這邊仔細聽有一個跳點可以跳，這邊同距放沒感覺。
00:41:180 (3) - ^
00:42:858 (1) - ^
00:44:537 (3) - ^
00:45:376 (1) - 或許能+finish
00:46:005 (4) - 怎麼這個節奏會在結尾了? 還是換成note或slider做個跳吧。(像你這個 00:47:893 (3) 的節奏就在頭我覺得比較好。)
00:51:879 (6) - 同距擺看看?
00:53:767 (1) - 我覺得疊 00:52:928 (5) 比較flow?
00:55:446 (1) - 不跟前面疊嗎?
01:01:949 (8) - 我會想擺(236|61)左右的位置，現在放這裡有點擠。
01:03:418 (5) - 這也能拉開點距離。
01:04:677 (1,2,3,4) - 全選移到(144|75)上試試(如果改了，上面那個(5)可以用開頭疊(1))
01:05:516 (1,2,3,4) - 234拉開點距離，與1來個跳? 這節奏明顯的是大跳。

後面clap部分那個我覺得也可以跳，看你要不要拉開點距離了。

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

kamisamaaa

605 posts

Joined July 2011

Topic Starter

kamisamaaa 2014-02-19T18:44:34+00:00

smallboat wrote:
嗨，小黃瓜，QQ group mod req.

Hope you reply to this mod saying what you didn't fix (and what you did) and why.

Red words: Should be fix it.
Blue words : I recommended suggestion.
Black words : In my personal opinion.

[General]

確定要Enable countdown? 還是取消吧。　　嗯　取消了～之前没注意过这东西０.０

[Normal]

00:16:425 (3) - 試著照弧度擺?ｆｉｘ
00:18:103 (6) - 我覺得換成長條拉到00:18:523也蠻適合做結束然後break。(其實這邊也可以不用break，這邊後面也可擺個簡單的滑條或note，別跟easy一樣空的?)改成滑条了　这里ｍａｐ或者空着再想想额
00:32:789 (3) - 弧度ｆｉｘ
00:51:250 (3) - 用00:48:733 (1,2,3) 的這幾個的頭呈三角形?　这个不改　是为了能有一个流畅的ｆｌｏｗ额
01:05:726 (2) - 取消一折返移後面一格，前面加一note然後與01:05:516 (1) 重疊，蠻有感覺。ｆｉｘ

[Insane]

00:16:635 (1,2) - 疊00:18:103 (5) 比較美觀。　　ｆｉｘ
00:19:781 (3) - 2都有疊好這怎不疊好。ｆｉｘ
00:21:040 (1,2) - 或許可以複製(1)的來使用CTRL+H做個對稱。　　这啥意思？这两个是ｎｏｔｅ？
00:23:138 (3) - 疊 00:21:879 (1) 比較有效果。ｆｉｘ
00:23:348 (4) - 疊 00:22:089 (2) 比較有效果。ｆｉｘ
00:24:816 (2) - 或許可以疊 00:25:656 (3) 頭。ｆｉｘ
00:29:852 (6) - (360|293)試試?ｆｉｘ
00:32:788 (4) - 尾端沒疊好。ｆｉｘ
00:34:257 (3) - 三角形?　这个保留
00:35:306 (1) - 是不是忘了finish啊?　没忘　本来加了　但是后来觉得有点吵　不太适合ｆｉｎｉｓｈ又去掉了
00:37:614 (3) - (497|88)?　　类似的改了
00:39:502 (4,1) - 這邊仔細聽有一個跳點可以跳，這邊同距放沒感覺。　
00:41:180 (3) - ^
00:42:858 (1) - ^
00:44:537 (3) - ^　　这些有些改了有些没变额
00:45:376 (1) - 或許能+finish　　感觉不合适０.０这歌都不太适合ｆｉｎｉｓｈ　太吵了
00:46:005 (4) - 怎麼這個節奏會在結尾了? 還是換成note或slider做個跳吧。(像你這個 00:47:893 (3) 的節奏就在頭我覺得比較好。)　嗯　这个改了　一直觉得不太舒服
00:51:879 (6) - 同距擺看看?ｆｉｘ
00:53:767 (1) - 我覺得疊 00:52:928 (5) 比較flow?ｆｉｘ
00:55:446 (1) - 不跟前面疊嗎?ｆｉｘ
01:01:949 (8) - 我會想擺(236|61)左右的位置，現在放這裡有點擠。　改了别的
01:03:418 (5) - 這也能拉開點距離。ｆｉｘ
01:04:677 (1,2,3,4) - 全選移到(144|75)上試試(如果改了，上面那個(5)可以用開頭疊(1))　　这里感觉没啥必要额
01:05:516 (1,2,3,4) - 234拉開點距離，與1來個跳? 這節奏明顯的是大跳。　ｏｋａｙ　我纠结了好久没放跳　既然都觉得适合跳那就跳～

後面clap部分那個我覺得也可以跳，看你要不要拉開點距離了。　这首歌感觉不是很想做太跳０.０　所以一般都是小的距离变化什么的０.０

[Other]
1.If you have any mod above problems, you can PM or in-game to me.
2.Hope to you ranked.
3.Hope my mod is useful to you.

感谢小船的ｍｏｄ＝Ｌ＝

我图比较蠢０.０

Koiyuki

2,531 posts

Joined March 2013

Koiyuki 2014-02-21T09:08:57+00:00

M4M

Black——My personal suggestions.
Bold——Highly recommended.
Red——(Maybe) Unrankable, you must fix it.

[General]

这combo color选的不太好，对比太强烈，而且那俩灰的暗BG后根本看不清

[萨米球]

00:06:774 (3,4) - blanket
00:08:453 (1,2) - ^
00:25:656 (2,3) - ^
00:26:495 (3,4) - 间距
00:31:110 (4) - 有点出去了
00:31:110 (4,1) - 建议easy不要这么放

[小黄瓜]

没啥问题

[爱抚姥爷]

00:05:096 (1) - 头上加个whi？
神hard

[娘包黄瓜]

整幅图的单点摆放还有很大的提升空间，可以摆的再有创意一点
00:32:159 (2) - 稍微往右下移动一点
01:06:145 (4) - 叠在2尾巴好了

挺好的
最后祝您身体健康

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,630 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-02-21T14:24:26+00:00

too many mods so that i won't reply for everyone
thank you for your modding. changed much

update:

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 13..mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 5013
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 5013,18440,25153,38580
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Niang Bao no Outa
TitleUnicode:娘包のおうた
Artist:Hinata itigo
ArtistUnicode:日向苺
Creator:kamisamaaa
Version:yf's Hard
Source:Cure Girl
Tags:galgame curegirl sammy711 yf_bmp
BeatmapID:371491
BeatmapSetID:150565

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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340,340,52299,1,2,0:2:0:0:
328,332,52404,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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100,316,53977,1,2,0:2:0:0:
88,308,54082,1,2,0:2:0:0:
76,300,54187,2,0,L|84:216,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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196,44,55656,1,2,0:2:0:0:
208,52,55761,1,2,0:2:0:0:
220,60,55866,2,0,L|212:139,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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276,296,56705,2,0,L|268:216,1,80,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,112,57124,5,2,0:2:0:0:
436,68,57334,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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284,288,59222,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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104,284,59642,6,0,L|120:168,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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136,108,60900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,204,61110,1,2,0:2:0:0:
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320,332,62369,1,2,0:2:0:0:
312,340,62474,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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