Xinely wrote:

Hi ~
Random bubble check because this map already bubbled a month ago o.o



Red : must be fixed
Blue : highly suggested

• 
  Normal

1. 00:14:518 (1,1) - imo the gap from spinner to next object a little bit short for Normal which doesn't have Easy diff since newbie will play the easiest diff first and you know how newbie play ;-; . i would to move the spinner to 00:17:959 - and remove 00:17:959 (1) - this slider (so have 3/1 gap after spin i mean)
2. 00:37:159 (1) - hmm i kinda dislike the different shape for this slider, how about 00:35:787 (2) - copy paste and flip from this slider?
3. 00:48:130 (1) - nazi but the blanket a little bit off. move the 2nd curve to 108,40 for better blanket
4. 01:42:987 (3,1) - NC combo would be consistent if you swap the NC here (i mean 01:42:987 (3) - NC and 01:44:359 (1) - remove NC)
5. 02:29:530 - unnecessary greenline since no object would get the effect from this greenline lol
6. 02:51:901 (1) - nazi, the blanket could improve again. move to 204,136 :3
7. 03:46:759 (2) - hmm the music on slider repeat is piano so i dont get why finish here. you should change the finish with the whistle for consistency with 02:24:816 - too
8. 03:54:301 (1) - same explanation as 00:14:518 (1,1) - , i would to remove 03:54:301 (1) - :C

• 
  Hard

1. HP+1 for balance spread with other diffs?
2. 00:02:213 (2) - i would say to remove this slider and add circle 00:02:401 - to follow the guitar instead
3. 00:14:518 (1) - move the spinner to 00:16:804 - since at least need 1/1 gap after a spinner in Hard diff
4. 01:03:216 (1,2,3,4,5) - for me these circles are a little bit to catch for player who after play Normal diffs and want to try Hard diff. i would say to 01:03:559 (3,4) -change into a slider :3
5. 01:19:330 (5) - i dont get why need a huge jump for this circle. i would move the circle to 76,156 instead. just need a jump for next slider
6. 01:44:530 - add note here because the piano sound? if i were you i would make 1/2 slider repeat from 01:44:359 -
7. 02:23:102 (1,3) - nazi, try to avoid the overlap as possible ><
8. 02:30:130 (2) - the music on redticks are quite faint imo. try remove and use circle at 02:30:301 - ? hmm... i felt sense of incongruity on the subsequent pattern. keep it.
9. 02:29:616 - until 02:40:244 - actually the music become so calm so lower SV like 0,75x. but that's too late now so i just saying here for your future maps :3 i couldn't care too much.
10. 02:50:530 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - yup this is quite hard pattern. make 02:50:530 (2,3,4,5) - as 2 of 1/2 sliders or 02:51:216 (6,7,8) - make it as slider repeat
11. 03:00:643 - imo the piano is quite loud and need to mapped, i would say http://puu.sh/bYa8Z/494be2c3ab.jpg like this instead. you still can give the finish on (1)'s tail I change it in reference to your opinion
12. 03:43:759 (4) - the circle has inconsistency spacing (0,94x and 0,84x) so please make it consistent. if i were you i would use spacing around 0,6x for the triplet here
13. 03:51:559 (1,2,3) - try use slider repeat as 03:50:358 (3) - , the music is become calm so imo the triplet a little bit forced
14. 04:00:816 (1) - maybe just for me but i feel the placement of the circle is too far from the centre of spinner. how about move to 176,168 instead?

• 
  Insane

1. 00:26:187 (1) - the rhythm can improved here. try remove the repeat and add circle 00:26:530 - so you can emphasize the cymbal by click the rhythm ><
2. 00:47:959 (1) - yup the rhythm can improved too, 00:48:130 - such quite loud guitar so imo need to mapped here. just try a circle and then a slider for 00:48:130 - here
3. 01:34:416 (1,2,3,4) - just my taste but since it already has break time here, imo the player's hands are not really ready for the stream so i prefer to change the circles into 1/4 slider repeat instead i felt like not match 1/4 slider in here.
4. 02:29:616 - until 02:40:244 - same as Hard, just saying too ;3 same hard
5. 02:51:130 (4) - inconsistency spacing (1,20x)
6. 02:51:302 (6,7,8) - same here (it has 1,18x and 1,0x) i would say to make the stream consistent each other
7. 03:00:472 (3) - same as 03:00:643 - in Hard, how about make a circle and then 1/2 slider in 03:00:643 - ?
8. 03:29:873 (3,4) - the music is calm part, imo the 1/4 with high spacing like this are uncomfortable, i would say use 0,8x instead

Nice map, poke me back

Xinely wrote:

fixed things in IRC, mostly fixed unsnapped greenlines huft huftQ_Q

Everything is fine for me now. Enjoy your first qualified map
Qualified(ノ>∨<)ノ

Mao wrote:

Gratz! :3