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AruOtta

CrazyrabbitKGE wrote:

01:09:524 (1,2) - not using red points actually look better imo. It's not the goal of this slider to be like this, so not fixed x.x
01:18:366 (1) - remove the second point at least. Okay, I see, it looks better :3
01:24:840 (2) - what about placing 2 closer to 1? (making a nice diamond shape for the sake of aesthetics) I want to keep the jump, sorry =/
01:39:366 (4) - move 4 a bit down (spacing) Okay
01:53:103 (3) - x:340 y:156 Same as above... I don't very like "diamond shapes" =/
01:53:261 (4) - x:260 y:204
01:53:419 (5) - x:336 y:64
01:53:577 (6) - x:256 y:112
01:53:735 (1) - x:252 y:24
01:55:629 (5,6,7) - place them somewhere else (don't look nice)
02:07:945 (3) - x:460 y:248 I want to follow the curve of (2), so not fixed
02:09:366 (2,3,4,5,6) - bad positioning (consider changing them)
02:15:524 (3) - move it one or two grids down Fixed
02:16:471 (1) - 2 grids left? Fixed
02:32:261 (4) - 2 grids up Fixed
02:47:261 (3) - isn't it too high? Yep, Fixed
03:01:471 (6) - x:188 y:160 Fixed
03:01:629 (7) - x:132 y:348? Nope =/
03:01:787 (1) - 2 grids up only 1
03:05:419 (7) - too high? (stands out weirdly) I wanted the distance between 03:04:629 (3,5,7) to be equal
03:06:682 (7) - x:48 y:24. maybe you will need to rotate the slider as well, though. Nope, sorry
03:32:103 (6) - random spacing considering 03:31:629 (3,4,5) ? Nope, I made a pattern with 2 lines (03:31:629 (3,4) and 03:31:945 (5,6))

sorry it's... a bit to long for me *dies*
Thanks for suggestions \:D/
Shohei Ohtani
im fucking baked as shit hahahhahahahhaa

Marathon:
00:32:735 (7) - It'd make more sense to have this spaced out as 2-5 is below, so it looks like a pretty pattern rather than just random.
01:20:892 (1) - Pretty easy to avoid this overlap, and it'd be cool if you did
02:39:524 (3) - I know it's gonna fuck up all of the patterns and shit but this would look nicer with (1) and (2) as a triangle.
03:09:524 (1) - eeee use a red point for this slider
03:33:840 (3) - Add clap on beginning of slider
04:01:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - aaAAAAAAAa my clusterphobia is attacking. It's a nice pattern and I love how you don't overdo it, but the biggest issue is that it's so centered on just a small portion of the playfield. Even a simple CTRL+H on one of the patterns would help a LOT.
05:09:524 (1,2,3,4) - so like what is this supposed to be
06:07:156 (4) - I know this goes with the music and that's cool and all but in terms of flow this just stops it completely.
07:14:940 (2) - slight overlap issue oh no
07:25:440 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - CLOSING IN AAaAaAA
07:42:797 (4) - WOAH SLOW DOWN THERE PARTNER I've been ok with a lot of big jumps in the map but this one caught me super off guard
08:55:119 (6) - so close aaa
10:41:690 (1) - rip in peace pattern you almost existed with (4)
10:55:690 (4) - ^
12:09:690 - Why is this section so empty? The beat doesn't really drop or anything and im still wanting to have the momentum that is built up in the rest of the map.
16:17:153 (2) - pattern bby
17:04:853 (3) - This curve is so slight that it looks like a mistake rather than an actual red pointed slider
17:27:653 (1) - Maybe just don't have a spinner here? It seems kind of weird to have seeing as it ends on a random part that doesn't have a strong beat (Granted, the people who made the medley also make a shit transition, but eh)
18:30:453 - LIKE I KNOW LIKE woohoo yay it's super fun and loud and stuff but the hitnormals are sort of droning on because they're too loud. Either turn down the volume on them, or try finding an alternative to a hitnormal for that section.
20:27:453 (1) - Add a whistle ayy
20:51:764 - For some reason I feel like the offset is a little ahead here. Don't change it, but it might be worth getting someone to double check (even in a playtest or something)
22:47:097 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2) - Clusterphooooo
24:51:861 - where's the notes aaa its ok you can come out its ok
25:12:861 (4) - patterns how i miss you

LMAO NIGGAS MAKE A 26 MIN LONG MEDLEY AND THEN END IT BY FADING OUT LMAOOO

this is actually a really good map
Topic Starter
AruOtta

CDFA wrote:

im fucking baked as shit hahahhahahahhaa

Marathon:
00:32:735 (7) - It'd make more sense to have this spaced out as 2-5 is below, so it looks like a pretty pattern rather than just random.
01:20:892 (1) - Pretty easy to avoid this overlap, and it'd be cool if you did
02:39:524 (3) - I know it's gonna fuck up all of the patterns and shit but this would look nicer with (1) and (2) as a triangle.
03:09:524 (1) - eeee use a red point for this slider
03:33:840 (3) - Add clap on beginning of slider
04:01:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - aaAAAAAAAa my clusterphobia is attacking. It's a nice pattern and I love how you don't overdo it, but the biggest issue is that it's so centered on just a small portion of the playfield. Even a simple CTRL+H on one of the patterns would help a LOT.
05:09:524 (1,2,3,4) - so like what is this supposed to be Like a random jump... I tried something better ^^
06:07:156 (4) - I know this goes with the music and that's cool and all but in terms of flow this just stops it completely.
07:14:940 (2) - slight overlap issue oh no
07:25:440 (8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - CLOSING IN AAaAaAA But it looks nice when played
07:42:797 (4) - WOAH SLOW DOWN THERE PARTNER I've been ok with a lot of big jumps in the map but this one caught me super off guard
08:55:119 (6) - so close aaa
10:41:690 (1) - rip in peace pattern you almost existed with (4)
10:55:690 (4) - ^
12:09:690 - Why is this section so empty? The beat doesn't really drop or anything and im still wanting to have the momentum that is built up in the rest of the map.
16:17:153 (2) - pattern bby
17:04:853 (3) - This curve is so slight that it looks like a mistake rather than an actual red pointed slider
17:27:653 (1) - Maybe just don't have a spinner here? It seems kind of weird to have seeing as it ends on a random part that doesn't have a strong beat (Granted, the people who made the medley also make a shit transition, but eh) But it ends when the music start to be repeated (about the pattern)... I'm sorry but I'll keep it
18:30:453 - LIKE I KNOW LIKE woohoo yay it's super fun and loud and stuff but the hitnormals are sort of droning on because they're too loud. Either turn down the volume on them, or try finding an alternative to a hitnormal for that section. I want to keep the histounds because this part is epic =/
20:27:453 (1) - Add a whistle ayy
20:51:764 - For some reason I feel like the offset is a little ahead here. Don't change it, but it might be worth getting someone to double check (even in a playtest or something)
22:47:097 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1,2) - Clusterphooooo
24:51:861 - where's the notes aaa its ok you can come out its ok
25:12:861 (4) - patterns how i miss you

LMAO NIGGAS MAKE A 26 MIN LONG MEDLEY AND THEN END IT BY FADING OUT LMAOOO

this is actually a really good map
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR MOD (and for star :3)
Secretpipe
AAAH

Mon café est prêt , mes anti dépress aussi.
Qu'est ce qui manque ? Ah oui , des vitamines !

heeeeeeere we goooooo~

[26 MINUTES MARATHON LMAO]

  1. Weedscreen support please ! <3 and go fix SB images if you do
  1. 00:33:622 (3,1) - Ce blanket peut être encore meilleur.
  2. 00:52:096 (2,3) - J'irai curv un de ces deux sliders pour améliorer le flow !
  3. 01:47:359 (1,2) - Symétrie please. T'as un slider droit et un slider un peu rotated !
  4. 01:53:517 (6,1) - Blanket my dear !
  5. 01:58:727 (1,2) - Go me blanket ça !
  6. 02:14:359 (3,4) - Pareil !
  7. 02:17:517 (1,2) - Pareil x)
  8. 02:30:622 (3,6) - Fix le bad overlap ici ?
  9. 02:34:096 (1,2) - Le flow est bizarre ici. La transition est un peu floue selon moi.
  10. 04:20:201 (1) - La forme de ce slider peutt être améliorée !
  11. 05:00:938 (2) - Ca fait un peu Miss You ce slider xD
  12. 05:20:832 (7) - Un petit NC ici serait cool . Le player va pouvoir souffler un peu xD
  13. 05:51:148 (1) - Fais juste un slider droit ?
  14. 06:07:727 (1) - Go me blanket ça :D Si tu le fais pas, move le de quelques grids car le flow est bizarre.
  15. 06:30:148 (1) - Un ptit Ctrl+G pour pimenter la difficulté ? :D
  16. 06:35:990 (4) - Réduis la courbe
  17. 06:41:398 (6,7,1) - A bit ugly imo ;w;
  18. 07:04:059 (1) - Change la shape du slider ! :)
  19. 08:01:059 (6) - Garde le même spacing avec les notes du petit stream !
  20. 09:00:094 (4) - Rallonge le et delete le cercle après !
  21. 09:01:809 (5) - Curv le comme le (4) ?
  22. 10:22:430 (1,2,3,4) - Espace les un peu ! Ca fait gangbang de slider
  23. 10:59:630 (2,4) - Stack moi ça
  24. J'continue après ! NEED A BREAK
Topic Starter
AruOtta

Secretpipe wrote:

AAAH

Mon café est prêt , mes anti dépress aussi.
Qu'est ce qui manque ? Ah oui , des vitamines !

heeeeeeere we goooooo~

[26 MINUTES MARATHON LMAO]

  1. Weedscreen support please ! <3 and go fix SB images if you do
Nope sorry, ça fait des trucs trop moche après :c

  1. 00:33:622 (3,1) - Ce blanket peut être encore meilleur. Yep
  2. 00:52:096 (2,3) - J'irai curv un de ces deux sliders pour améliorer le flow ! Okey
  3. 01:47:359 (1,2) - Symétrie please. T'as un slider droit et un slider un peu rotated ! Fixed
  4. 01:53:517 (6,1) - Blanket my dear ! Merci pour la photo mais je sais ce que c'est un blanket xDDDD
  5. 01:58:727 (1,2) - Go me blanket ça ! k
  6. 02:14:359 (3,4) - Pareil ! k
  7. 02:17:517 (1,2) - Pareil x) Nan là je veux pas blanket... Bon j'ai changé le pattern xD
  8. 02:30:622 (3,6) - Fix le bad overlap ici ? ça ce voit pas en play xD Bon ok Fixed
  9. 02:34:096 (1,2) - Le flow est bizarre ici. La transition est un peu floue selon moi. Moi j'aime bien D:
  10. 04:20:201 (1) - La forme de ce slider peutt être améliorée ! Oui bon je l'ai fait à l'arrache le truc xD Fixed
  11. 05:00:938 (2) - Ca fait un peu Miss You ce slider xD Ah ?
  12. 05:20:832 (7) - Un petit NC ici serait cool . Le player va pouvoir souffler un peu xD FUUUCK CA VA CHANGER TOUT MES BEAU NC ._. Ah nan en fait c'est bon xD
  13. 05:51:148 (1) - Fais juste un slider droit ? Why not :D
  14. 06:07:727 (1) - Go me blanket ça :D Si tu le fais pas, move le de quelques grids car le flow est bizarre. Okay
  15. 06:30:148 (1) - Un ptit Ctrl+G pour pimenter la difficulté ? :D Yep
  16. 06:35:990 (4) - Réduis la courbe Fixed
  17. 06:41:398 (6,7,1) - A bit ugly imo ;w; imo it seems fine =/
  18. 07:04:059 (1) - Change la shape du slider ! :) Okay
  19. 08:01:059 (6) - Garde le même spacing avec les notes du petit stream ! Fixé
  20. 09:00:094 (4) - Rallonge le et delete le cercle après ! Nan ici le rythme correspond =/
  21. 09:01:809 (5) - Curv le comme le (4) ? Done
  22. 10:22:430 (1,2,3,4) - Espace les un peu ! Ca fait gangbang de slider J'ai essayé de follow la musique, on a 4 fois le même pattern, donc j'ai voulu que le joueur bouge pas trop le curseur et mettre 4 fois les même sliders proches
  23. 10:59:630 (2,4) - Stack moi ça Nan j'aime pas ça <3
  24. J'continue après ! NEED A BREAK
Bah sinon tu continue dans le post suivant mais t'auras pas de 2eme kudosu ;3
Sinon c'est la sorte de mod qu'il manquait sur cette map. Merci <3
Secretpipe
Bon, je continue xD

  1. 14:00:336 (2) - Ctrl+g moi ça
  2. 14:05:336 (7) - Tu peux le blanket ?
  3. 14:47:781 (5,6) - Swap them ! En gros met le 5 a la place du 6 et vice versa. Ca rend beaucoup mieux franchement
  4. 14:55:336 (3) - Améliore le shape ou espace les points parce que c'est trop sérré xD
  5. 15:13:493 (2,3) - Blanket !
  6. 16:33:293 (5,1) - Un peu bizarre comme pattern mais je suppose que c'est rankable
  7. 17:08:393 (1) - Ctrl+g imo
  8. 18:37:393 (1,2,3) - Le flow est bizarre ici. Réarrange tes notes ?
  9. 20:06:393 (1,2,3) - Je sais pas si c'est une bonne idée de stack 3 sliders comme ça xD
  10. 20:06:393 (1,2,3) - wtf meloetta , c'est pas que pour rubis et saphir ? XD
  11. 21:40:704 (5) - Ctrl+J t Ctrl+H ?
  12. 22:21:371 (2,3,4,5) - Garde le même spacing. N'éloigne pas le (5)
  13. 24:02:468 (1) - Remove NC
  14. 24:26:967 (4,5,6,7) - Espace les un peu ces notes !
  1. Rien d'autre a dire ! Très bon mapset ! Un très grand bravo !
Call me if you need stars !
Topic Starter
AruOtta

Secretpipe wrote:

Bon, je continue xD

  1. 14:00:336 (2) - Ctrl+g moi ça Mouais je pensais faire une répétition du mouvement 3 fois.. En plus ça colle avec le spacing, donc je vois pas de raison de changer x3
  2. 14:05:336 (7) - Tu peux le blanket ? Mais le slider il a pas du tout une gueule à blanket xD Bon j'ai changé le slider de place parce que c'est vrai, il respecte pas le "flow" :3
  3. 14:47:781 (5,6) - Swap them ! En gros met le 5 a la place du 6 et vice versa. Ca rend beaucoup mieux franchement Ah oué pour la transition épique c'est parfait. Je sais pas où t'as ces idées, mais elles sont franchements bonnes xD
  4. 14:55:336 (3) - Améliore le shape ou espace les points parce que c'est trop sérré xD Okay si tu veux, apparament t'aime pas trop ce slider xD
  5. 15:13:493 (2,3) - Blanket ! YEAH
  6. 16:33:293 (5,1) - Un peu bizarre comme pattern mais je suppose que c'est rankable J'ai stack le (2) avec la tête de (5) (oui c'est moche en français) donc je pense que c'est moins le bordel. Après si c'est pas trop rankable, un BAT le dira, si y'en a un :'(
  7. 17:08:393 (1) - Ctrl+g imo Ici, j'ai voulu créer une sorte de flow construit sur la transition entre 17:08:393 (1,2), donc je peux pas changer D=
  8. 18:37:393 (1,2,3) - Le flow est bizarre ici. Réarrange tes notes ? Fixé
  9. 20:06:393 (1,2,3) - Je sais pas si c'est une bonne idée de stack 3 sliders comme ça xD Nan ici fallait dire "20:06:143 (4,5) - CTRL + G imo" xDD Nan pareil qu'au dessus, je verrai si c'est rankable :3
  10. 20:06:393 (1,2,3) - wtf meloetta , c'est pas que pour rubis et saphir ? XD Trompé de coordonnées temporelles xD Nan mais on va dire qu'on est dans Rubis Oméga et Saphir Alpha xD (en plus c'est pas Rubis/Saphir, c'est Rouge/Bleu/Jaune Or/Argent/Cristal)
  11. 21:40:704 (5) - Ctrl+J t Ctrl+H ? Nan je change le slider, il est pas beau =P
  12. 22:21:371 (2,3,4,5) - Garde le même spacing. N'éloigne pas le (5) Mais après le (5) il est à moitié dans (4), et donc j'aime pas trop moi Dx
  13. 24:02:468 (1) - Remove NC Nan ici ça correponds, j'en met un à chaque son de "cloche" :3
  14. 24:26:967 (4,5,6,7) - Espace les un peu ces notes ! J'ai espacé les 2 sliders mais pas les notes, elles sont bien stackées comme ça \:D/
  1. Rien d'autre a dire ! Très bon mapset ! Un très grand bravo !
Call me if you need stars !
Yay thank you so much (」・ω・)」
Kethsar
I'm not sure what happens, but 16:26:093 (4) - causes Autoplay to get a 100 and lose its 100% accuracy. You may need to fix that before this map can be ranked.
Topic Starter
AruOtta

Kethsar wrote:

I'm not sure what happens, but 16:26:093 (4) - causes Autoplay to get a 100 and lose its 100% accuracy. You may need to fix that before this map can be ranked.
Okay fixed... I don't know why it happens xD
Thank you :3
Takuneru
This map is just awesome. I've had so much fun playing it on CTB :3
Let me shoot a kudosu for you, Kenterz!
This needs to be approved already :D
Topic Starter
AruOtta

Takuneru wrote:

This map is just awesome. I've had so much fun playing it on CTB :3
Let me shoot a kudosu for you, Kenterz!
This needs to be approved already :D
Thank you so much for star \:D/

The problem is BATs are busy, and they probably won't like do mod a 24min song ;w;
Anyway, I'll try my best to rank it <3
Secretpipe
Have 8 stars !

I hope lfj-sempai will notice you now 8-)
Topic Starter
AruOtta

Secretpipe wrote:

Have 8 stars !

I hope lfj-sempai will notice you now 8-)
No ._.
Aurele
Oh damn, baby gurl. this is insane.
Des ajustements devront être fait sur le storyboard. 06:48:883 - Je ne suis par sur que tu veux voir ça: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1891859


Super Marathooooon
  1. 00:20:201 (1) - Déplaces-le à x:282 y:244 pour le mettre plus aligné avec les deux sliders précédents. (N'actionne pas le Grid Snap, ça va t'aider)
  2. 00:23:359 (3) - Je ne suis vraiment pas sûr avec la courbe à la fin. Ça serait pas mieux de le mettre en ligne droit? Juste comme ça:
  3. 00:24:227 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Ce pattern devrait être retravailler afin de le mettre plus circulaire. Par exemple, à la fin j'y ai mis un slider en forme ovale. Ce que tu pourrais faire pour l'améliorer, c'est de retravailler le pattern en ayant le slider en background pour te guider.
  4. 00:34:096 (1) - Je suis sûr quand n'activant pas le Grid Snap, tu peux facilement améliorer ce blanket, tout comme celui à 00:34:569 (2) -
  5. 00:52:096 (2) - Ce slider détruit complêtement le flow, tu vois. Pour avoir un meilleur flow avec les précédents et les suivants, le mieux serait de faire ça:
  6. 00:56:201 (3,4,5,6) - Enfait, ces objets ne suivent pas la musique, il faut quelque chose d'autre pour améliorer. Par exemple, je te recommande ceci:
  7. 00:57:622 (5) - Fait en sorte que le spacing soit consistent avec le précédent et le suivant, il est décalé d'environ 0.10x
  8. 01:47:359 (1) - Ce slider est proche d'overlapper le slider précédent. Faudrais le mettre un petit peu plus vers le haut.
  9. 01:51:306 - Eum, je crois fortement que ce reverse n'as pas besoin de clap. Supprime-le.
  10. 03:20:517 (10) - Pourquoi pas un nouveau combo ici?
  11. 05:05:675 (1) - Ajuste le blanket ici c:
  12. 07:50:237 - Premièrement, ajoute un nouveau combo ici, il en manque un. Deuxièmement, je ne te suggère pas de commencer un stream en mettant le premier objet en dessous de la fin d'un slider.
  13. 10:29:630 - Ce clap là, je ne le "feel" vraiment pas, surtout pas à cette place.. tu devrais penser à le supprimer.
  14. 10:38:230 (6,1,2) - J'aime pas vraiment l'effet que ça fait. Ça ne suit pas vraiment la chanson, ce qui est étrange à entendre.. Je te suggère de faire quelque chose du genre:
  15. 12:49:630 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Pour cette partie là, je ne suis pas vraiment sûr si les sliders qui sont sur les tiks bleus devraient être positionnés ainsi.. Tu pourrais pas faire quelque chose qui pourrait suivre mieux la musique?

Ça fait quand même une semaine que t'attends après mon mod, biensur, je n'ai pas finis, mais je te donne ce que j'ai pour l'instant. Je ne vais pas tarder à revenir pour continuer, on peut même se faire une soirée modding, si jamais!

Sinon, ta map est super simple, tu devrais facilement être capable de chopper quelques personnes pour le ranking D:

Bonne chance :3
Topic Starter
AruOtta

Gabe wrote:

Oh damn, baby gurl. this is insane.
Des ajustements devront être fait sur le storyboard. 06:48:883 - Je ne suis par sur que tu veux voir ça: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1891859 Fixé

Comme d'hab, tout ce à quoi je ne marque rien est fixé

Super Marathooooon
  1. 00:20:201 (1) - Déplaces-le à x:282 y:244 pour le mettre plus aligné avec les deux sliders précédents. (N'actionne pas le Grid Snap, ça va t'aider)
  2. 00:23:359 (3) - Je ne suis vraiment pas sûr avec la courbe à la fin. Ça serait pas mieux de le mettre en ligne droit? Juste comme ça:
  3. 00:24:227 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Ce pattern devrait être retravailler afin de le mettre plus circulaire. Par exemple, à la fin j'y ai mis un slider en forme ovale. Ce que tu pourrais faire pour l'améliorer, c'est de retravailler le pattern en ayant le slider en background pour te guider.
  4. 00:34:096 (1) - Je suis sûr quand n'activant pas le Grid Snap, tu peux facilement améliorer ce blanket, tout comme celui à 00:34:569 (2) -
  5. 00:52:096 (2) - Ce slider détruit complêtement le flow, tu vois. Pour avoir un meilleur flow avec les précédents et les suivants, le mieux serait de faire ça:
  6. 00:56:201 (3,4,5,6) - Enfait, ces objets ne suivent pas la musique, il faut quelque chose d'autre pour améliorer. Par exemple, je te recommande ceci:
  7. 00:57:622 (5) - Fait en sorte que le spacing soit consistent avec le précédent et le suivant, il est décalé d'environ 0.10x
  8. 01:47:359 (1) - Ce slider est proche d'overlapper le slider précédent. Faudrais le mettre un petit peu plus vers le haut.
  9. 01:51:306 - Eum, je crois fortement que ce reverse n'as pas besoin de clap. Supprime-le.
  10. 03:20:517 (10) - Pourquoi pas un nouveau combo ici? Je trouve pas ça cohérent, et ça casse la logique des couleurs dans la map (vu que le tout dernier circle fini avec la couleur du combo 1
  11. 05:05:675 (1) - Ajuste le blanket ici c:
  12. 07:50:237 - Premièrement, ajoute un nouveau combo ici, il en manque un. Deuxièmement, je ne te suggère pas de commencer un stream en mettant le premier objet en dessous de la fin d'un slider.
  13. 10:29:630 - Ce clap là, je ne le "feel" vraiment pas, surtout pas à cette place.. tu devrais penser à le supprimer.
  14. 10:38:230 (6,1,2) - J'aime pas vraiment l'effet que ça fait. Ça ne suit pas vraiment la chanson, ce qui est étrange à entendre.. Je te suggère de faire quelque chose du genre:
  15. 12:49:630 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Pour cette partie là, je ne suis pas vraiment sûr si les sliders qui sont sur les tiks bleus devraient être positionnés ainsi.. Tu pourrais pas faire quelque chose qui pourrait suivre mieux la musique? Nan ici ça suit très bien la musique, y'a 2 mélodie : une qui se trouve sur les tick blancs et une autre, celle que je suis. Je trouve que le positionnement des slider est sympa, je verrai si j'ai d'autres plaintes :3

Ça fait quand même une semaine que t'attends après mon mod, biensur, je n'ai pas finis, mais je te donne ce que j'ai pour l'instant. Je ne vais pas tarder à revenir pour continuer, on peut même se faire une soirée modding, si jamais! D'accord

Sinon, ta map est super simple, tu devrais facilement être capable de chopper quelques personnes pour le ranking D: Mais ils veulent pas... J'ai juste réussi à convaincre Atrue (j'ai un ticket pour quand il reviendra)

Bonne chance :3
UPLOAD TIME D:

Merci beaucoup pour le mod <3
Pho
Mod from modding queue~

You want to kill me, right? :D

00:33:622 (3,1,2) - check blanket
02:49:569 (3,5) - not perfectly stacked yet
03:45:148 (5) - I'd delete the HS here
04:16:885 (3,4,5) - this looks pretty clumpy, use a bigger distance here (jsut a small one is fine)
04:26:201 (6,7,8,9,1) - also clumpy, make it flatter http://puu.sh/aSa9j/177a70bdf6.jpg
06:20:675 (4,5) - i think these should be circles to put a better emphasis to the kicks
07:52:594 (3,4) - reposition 3 at x:512 y:252 for better flow
08:10:916 (1) - improve blanket
08:34:487 (4) - position at x:380 y:216 for blanket
08:26:344 (1,2,3) - this is somewhat flow breaking, try to find a solution similar to 08:31:059 (5,6,1) -
09:13:487 (3,1) - check blankets again
10:22:430 (1,2,3,4) - why not increasing distances successively between these backsliders a bit? it would build up a bit more pressure here
10:26:830 (6,1) - check blankets
10:40:030 (1,2) - position slider 1 more appropriately to slider 2's approach circle http://puu.sh/aSbmo/506db58f4d.jpg
12:41:230 (3,1) - i'd prefer to blanket here
13:06:830 (6,7) - why is this not a backslider?
14:47:336 (3,4,5,6,1) - i feel like oval flow would fit in much better here
15:40:343 (4,1,2,3,4) - the star isn't properly shaped yet, reposition 15:40:943 (2) - at x:328, y:332, 15:41:093 (3) - at x:436, y:312
15:44:393 (1,2) - this should be a semicircle i suppose. fix the blanket of slider 1
16:33:593 (1,2) - the flow between these should be more aligned
16:56:693 (2,3) - shape's still improvable http://puu.sh/aScgc/f21934921b.jpg
17:22:193 (4,5) - check blanket
19:17:143 (4,1) - blanket here would be good
21:15:704 (1,2,3) - check blankets again
22:04:371 (3,4) - for consistency, i think it's better to make this a slider
23:16:743 (4) - better make this a round slider too like 23:15:387 (2) -

Pure nostalgia. It still needs some fine-tuning, but then it's good to go.
This may be one of the best marathon 2014. Good luck to get this ranked! :)

Greetings,
paseli
Topic Starter
AruOtta

paseli wrote:

Mod from modding queue~

You want to kill me, right? :D YEAH xD

I don't write things I fix

00:33:622 (3,1,2) - check blanket
02:49:569 (3,5) - not perfectly stacked yet
03:45:148 (5) - I'd delete the HS here
04:16:885 (3,4,5) - this looks pretty clumpy, use a bigger distance here (jsut a small one is fine)
04:26:201 (6,7,8,9,1) - also clumpy, make it flatter http://puu.sh/aSa9j/177a70bdf6.jpg
06:20:675 (4,5) - i think these should be circles to put a better emphasis to the kicks I think they are good here
07:52:594 (3,4) - reposition 3 at x:512 y:252 for better flow
08:10:916 (1) - improve blanket
08:34:487 (4) - position at x:380 y:216 for blanket
08:26:344 (1,2,3) - this is somewhat flow breaking, try to find a solution similar to 08:31:059 (5,6,1) -
09:13:487 (3,1) - check blankets again
10:22:430 (1,2,3,4) - why not increasing distances successively between these backsliders a bit? it would build up a bit more pressure here
10:26:830 (6,1) - check blankets
10:40:030 (1,2) - position slider 1 more appropriately to slider 2's approach circle http://puu.sh/aSbmo/506db58f4d.jpg
12:41:230 (3,1) - i'd prefer to blanket here
13:06:830 (6,7) - why is this not a backslider? Because it's on a white tick, and start the slider at a blue tick is weird if I put the circle in 13:06:430 (5)
14:47:336 (3,4,5,6,1) - i feel like oval flow would fit in much better here Someone suggested to make a jump here, it fits good to me =/
15:40:343 (4,1,2,3,4) - the star isn't properly shaped yet, reposition 15:40:943 (2) - at x:328, y:332, 15:41:093 (3) - at x:436, y:312
15:44:393 (1,2) - this should be a semicircle i suppose. fix the blanket of slider 1
16:33:593 (1,2) - the flow between these should be more aligned
16:56:693 (2,3) - shape's still improvable http://puu.sh/aScgc/f21934921b.jpg
17:22:193 (4,5) - check blanket
19:17:143 (4,1) - blanket here would be good
21:15:704 (1,2,3) - check blankets again
22:04:371 (3,4) - for consistency, i think it's better to make this a slider
23:16:743 (4) - better make this a round slider too like 23:15:387 (2) -

Pure nostalgia. It still needs some fine-tuning, but then it's good to go.
This may be one of the best marathon 2014. Good luck to get this ranked! :) Thank you so much <3

Greetings,
paseli
Thanks for the mod \:D/
Secretpipe
We did a long IRC mod.
We basically fixed :
  1. Some overlaps.
  2. Overmapped notes.
  3. Some stacks.
  4. We added some notes. (1 or 2 circles missing before)
  5. Fixed minor blankets
  6. And minor things again !
We also did a Skype call so here's the log but sometimes , I didn't well explain suggestions because I was mainly talking.

IRC LOG
10:10 Secretpipe: yo pd
10:10 Kenterz: Hey poisson rouge :3
10:10 *Kenterz runs
10:10 Secretpipe: o/
10:11 Kenterz: Je fini mon mod et on fais l'IRC ?
10:12 Secretpipe: me presse pas o.o
10:12 Kenterz: Mais je te pose juste la question xD
10:12 Secretpipe: hue
10:12 Secretpipe: xD
10:20 Secretpipe: bon pd
10:20 Secretpipe: it's time
10:20 Secretpipe: mais un moment
10:21 Secretpipe: j'vais téléphone
10:21 Kenterz: Okey xD
10:21 Secretpipe: j'arrive Skype
10:36 Secretpipe: bon
10:36 Secretpipe: j'suis la
10:38 Kenterz: Attend j'ai clear Atama no Taisou O.o
10:39 Kenterz: Voilà, my body is Red-y
10:42 Secretpipe: :o
10:42 *Secretpipe is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/370440 hapi - THE MEDLEY OF POKEMON RGBY+GSC]
10:43 Secretpipe: 00:20:201 (1) -
10:43 Secretpipe: un peu plus a gauche
10:43 Secretpipe: pour etre aligné
10:44 Secretpipe: 00:24:306 (3,4) -
10:44 Secretpipe: La transition ici est bizarre
10:44 Secretpipe: surtout le (')
10:44 Secretpipe: (4)*
10:46 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfcI7.jpg
10:48 Secretpipe: 00:30:306 (1) -
10:48 Secretpipe: je l'aurai fait plus droit
10:48 Secretpipe: pour la transition avec 00:30:622 (2) -
10:48 Secretpipe: genre tu peux faire un slider droit
10:48 Secretpipe: et un mini overlap
10:49 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfcNE.jpg
10:49 Secretpipe: bien
10:49 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfcOu.jpg
10:49 Secretpipe: 00:31:096 (3) -
10:49 Secretpipe: blanket plz
10:51 Secretpipe: 00:45:306 (5) - Reverse
10:52 Secretpipe: C'est meilleur pour le flow
10:54 Secretpipe: 00:57:938 -
10:54 Secretpipe: Tu as oublié une note important la
10:54 Secretpipe: importante
10:55 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfd2l.jpg
10:56 Secretpipe: http://puu.sh/bfd5i.jpg
10:56 Secretpipe: un peu comme ça
10:57 Secretpipe: 01:02:359 (4) - J'aurai genre rotate parce que le curseur par de l'écran après
10:57 Secretpipe: rotate le de sorte que ca blanket 01:01:885 (2) -
10:57 Secretpipe: et que ca se dirige vers 01:02:675 (5) -
10:58 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfdaz.jpg
10:59 Kenterz: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1986582
11:00 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfdfs.jpg
11:00 Secretpipe: okay o/
11:00 Secretpipe: 01:11:596 (4) - ca passe mal pour le flow la
11:01 Secretpipe: met un double a la place !
11:01 Secretpipe: le stack pas si tu agree
11:01 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfdjH.jpg
11:02 Secretpipe: non
11:02 Secretpipe: faut que les notes
11:02 Secretpipe: aillent vers 01:11:832 (5) -
11:02 Secretpipe: mais si ca se joue mieux
11:02 Secretpipe: comme tu veux
11:03 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfdnj.jpg
11:03 Secretpipe: 01:24:622 (1,2,3,4,5) - meh where's star ? :(
11:05 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfdrQ.jpg
11:05 Secretpipe: bien
11:05 Secretpipe: :3
11:07 Secretpipe: 01:31:569 (3) - tu peux curve
11:07 Secretpipe: 01:32:043 (4) -
11:07 Secretpipe: avec ca
11:07 Secretpipe: réflechis
11:07 Secretpipe: huehue :3
11:08 Secretpipe: 02:22:727 (2) - Courbe le vers (3)
11:09 Secretpipe: 02:47:675 (5,4) - Mineur mais tu peux stack
11:10 Secretpipe: 03:11:043 (4) -
11:10 Secretpipe: Tu aurais pu la mettre dans la continuité du slider
11:11 Secretpipe: 03:11:043 (4) -
11:11 Secretpipe: Tu aurais pu la mettre dans la continuité du slider
11:12 Secretpipe: 03:50:990 (1) - tu pourrais delete et rajouter deux notes au dessus de 03:51:148 (2) -
11:12 Secretpipe: ca fait triplet
11:13 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfdLn.jpg
11:13 Secretpipe: 03:53:675 (3) - Courbe le , le flow est moisi la è_é
11:14 Secretpipe: bien
11:23 Secretpipe: 04:54:306 (1) -
11:23 Secretpipe: Ca fait overmapped
11:24 Secretpipe: 04:57:701 (5) - Ca aussi
11:24 Secretpipe: tu vois ?
11:24 Secretpipe: okay
11:24 Secretpipe: fix :D
11:25 Kenterz: Nan c'est moi qui ai fix xD
11:25 Secretpipe: 05:35:517 (5,3) - Stack plz
11:25 Secretpipe: 05:51:464 (2) - Continuité du slider la aussi
11:26 Secretpipe: 06:07:096 (4) - je percois pas le rythme la
11:26 Secretpipe: stop le a 06:07:411 -
11:26 Secretpipe: et add une note a 06:07:569 -
11:27 Secretpipe: 06:07:096 (4) - met un clap sur la queue
11:31 Secretpipe: 08:51:201 (3,4) - Overlap hurts <.<
11:32 Kenterz: Ok
11:32 Secretpipe: 08:51:630 (5,6) -
11:32 Secretpipe: 08:58:916 (1) - T'aurais pu le curv come le (6) , genre copie (6) et rotate de 180 degrés
11:35 Secretpipe: 11:34:030 (5) - Réduis la courbe pour que le blanket soit meileur
11:36 Kenterz: Fixé
11:36 Secretpipe: k
11:37 Kenterz: 11:36:030 -
11:37 Kenterz: Une note en plus ?
11:37 Secretpipe: no
11:37 Kenterz: Quoique non xD
11:37 Kenterz: 12:21:230 (2,3,4) -
11:38 Secretpipe: 12:35:630 (2,3) - les deux sliders sont différents la
11:38 Secretpipe: why
11:38 Secretpipe: lol
11:39 Secretpipe: 14:00:336 (2) - reverse
11:39 Secretpipe: ?
11:40 Secretpipe: flow O/
11:40 Kenterz: nope
11:40 Secretpipe: 14:56:003 (1,2) - flow moisi la
11:41 Secretpipe: straight sliders who broke the flow ftw O/////
11:42 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfeSA.jpg
11:42 Secretpipe: 15:54:593 (6) - NC
11:42 Secretpipe: pour le distinguer
11:42 Secretpipe: mouais
11:43 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfeVC.jpg
11:43 Secretpipe: no
11:43 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bfeX1.jpg
11:43 Secretpipe: bien
11:44 Secretpipe: 16:38:093 (3,1) - Réduis la courbe , ugly ;_;
11:45 Kenterz: Je pense que ça ira mieux comme ça http://puu.sh/bff0H.jpg
11:49 Secretpipe: 17:39:768 (6) -
11:49 Secretpipe: double here
11:49 Secretpipe: 17:57:393 (2) - pas unrankable mais bizarre
11:49 Secretpipe: fix plz
11:50 Secretpipe: 17:58:393 (4) - NC here pour le distinguer et pour faire comme tu fais avant
11:51 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bffhs.jpg
11:51 Kenterz: NC fixed
11:51 Secretpipe: better
11:51 Secretpipe: 19:11:643 (2) - Un peu haut plac
11:51 Secretpipe: cé*
11:53 Kenterz: Fixed
11:54 Secretpipe: 21:35:704 (6) - NC
11:54 Secretpipe: 21:37:038 (11) - ^
12:00 Secretpipe: 25:50:467 (1,2) - La c'est bizarre
12:01 Secretpipe: C'est vraiment moche désolé
12:01 Secretpipe: xD
12:01 Secretpipe: bah
12:01 Secretpipe: haut placé
12:01 Secretpipe: +overlap
12:01 Secretpipe: +no curve
12:01 Kenterz: ta mère :c
12:01 *Kenterz runs
12:01 Secretpipe: shitpattern
12:01 Secretpipe: :(
12:01 Secretpipe: xD
12:01 Kenterz: http://puu.sh/bffJe.jpg
12:01 Secretpipe: mais baisse le (1)
12:02 Kenterz: Oui il est à 16 en y
12:02 Secretpipe: quand même
12:02 Secretpipe: hue
12:02 Secretpipe: update now
12:02 Secretpipe: LOL
12:21 Kenterz: Upload fini :3
12:35 Kenterz: Je mange
12:40 Secretpipe: re
12:42 Secretpipe: c'bon
12:42 Secretpipe: j'vais bub


Anyway , you did a good job so here's your first bubble !
#1

(=゚ω゚)ノ
Topic Starter
AruOtta
IT'S HAPPENING O.O

Thank you so much Secret <3

EDIT : Self-popped :
I Resized every SB picture (800x600 maximum), I resized the BG (1024x768) and fixed some tags (godlen -> golden, and -pikachu
-legend)
(=゚ω゚)ノ
Secretpipe
(=゚ω゚)ノ
Aurele
bon hen, je vais check le reste quoi c:
SillyFangirl
Holy Sh** Awesome! Pls Rank this Now!!
Shohei Ohtani
tbh I've been wanting to bubble this but I didn't since I didn't wanna be "that guy" that bubbled a 26 minute map the first steps into BATship

I'll look at this soon. Hopefully.
Foreverends
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhnfg sfgnsfynfynfyfynsryhfynsfgngfgbdfvff
DakeDekaane
ovnz
aaaahahahaefhzeufj <-- me waiting for this map to be ranked.
Irreversible
woow you did it :D
Xiaolin

Irreversible wrote:

woow you did it :D
NAO RANK IT PLS SIR ILY I'LL MOD ALL OF YOUR MAPS IF YOU RANK IT SIR PLS
Shiro
Timing is wrong.

1263,315.797784152215,4,2,1,80,1,0
399168,327.868852459016,4,2,1,80,1,0
401790,342.857142857143,4,2,1,80,1,0
403161,346.820809248555,4,2,1,80,1,0
405935,363.636363636364,4,2,1,80,1,0
407389,368.098159509202,4,2,1,80,1,0
408861,400,4,2,1,80,1,0
412061,428.571428571429,4,2,1,80,1,0
609457,317.460317460317,4,2,1,80,1,0
610726,312.5,4,2,1,80,1,0
611351,301.507537688442,4,2,1,80,1,0
611954,240,4,2,1,80,1,0
612458,260.869565217391,4,2,1,80,1,0
613044,260.869565217391,4,2,1,80,1,0
614087,250,4,2,1,80,1,0
614557,230.769230769231,4,2,1,80,1,0
615941,222.222222222222,4,2,1,80,1,0
616803,206.896551724138,4,2,1,80,1,0
617630,400,4,2,1,80,1,0
828830,387.096774193548,4,2,1,80,1,0
830378,375,4,2,1,80,1,0
831878,359.281437125748,4,2,1,80,1,0
833315,333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,1,0
898648,333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,1,0
899314,324.324324324324,4,2,1,80,1,0
899962,307.692307692308,4,2,1,80,1,0
900577,300,4,2,1,80,1,0
1058377,500,4,2,1,80,1,0
1233058,666.666666666667,4,2,1,80,1,0
1350391,333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,1,0
1394391,338.983050847458,4,2,3,60,1,0
1398458,348.837209302326,4,2,3,60,1,0
1404039,361.44578313253,4,2,3,60,1,0
1412713,375,4,2,3,60,1,0
1417213,400,4,2,3,60,1,0
1418813,428.571428571429,4,2,3,60,1,0
1420527,461.538461538462,4,2,3,60,1,0
1422373,480,4,2,3,60,1,0
1424293,521.739130434783,4,2,3,60,1,0
1434488,666.666666666667,4,2,1,80,1,0
1459821,333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,1,0

The map isn't ready to be ranked, either. I'll drop a mod on this some time this week-end; I've already spent 2 hours on this timing, and I might spend around 8 or more modding the whole difficulty. This is heavily unpolished and has big gameplay issues that need to be addressed. Please take the time to adjust the map to this new timing before I mod it.

Sorry I'm making you wait the mod like this with a comment that looks rather offensive, but I will need a whole day free to mod this. No BAT touch this until I have modded it, please.
Xiaolin
Please make it quick ma'am
AND THEN I'LL MOD ALL OF YOUR MAPS
Topic Starter
AruOtta

Shiro wrote:

Timing is wrong.

SPOILER
1263,315.797784152215,4,2,1,80,1,0
399168,327.868852459016,4,2,1,80,1,0
401790,342.857142857143,4,2,1,80,1,0
403161,346.820809248555,4,2,1,80,1,0
405935,363.636363636364,4,2,1,80,1,0
407389,368.098159509202,4,2,1,80,1,0
408861,400,4,2,1,80,1,0
412061,428.571428571429,4,2,1,80,1,0
609457,317.460317460317,4,2,1,80,1,0
610726,312.5,4,2,1,80,1,0
611351,301.507537688442,4,2,1,80,1,0
611954,240,4,2,1,80,1,0
612458,260.869565217391,4,2,1,80,1,0
613044,260.869565217391,4,2,1,80,1,0
614087,250,4,2,1,80,1,0
614557,230.769230769231,4,2,1,80,1,0
615941,222.222222222222,4,2,1,80,1,0
616803,206.896551724138,4,2,1,80,1,0
617630,400,4,2,1,80,1,0
828830,387.096774193548,4,2,1,80,1,0
830378,375,4,2,1,80,1,0
831878,359.281437125748,4,2,1,80,1,0
833315,333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,1,0
898648,333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,1,0
899314,324.324324324324,4,2,1,80,1,0
899962,307.692307692308,4,2,1,80,1,0
900577,300,4,2,1,80,1,0
1058377,500,4,2,1,80,1,0
1233058,666.666666666667,4,2,1,80,1,0
1350391,333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,1,0
1394391,338.983050847458,4,2,3,60,1,0
1398458,348.837209302326,4,2,3,60,1,0
1404039,361.44578313253,4,2,3,60,1,0
1412713,375,4,2,3,60,1,0
1417213,400,4,2,3,60,1,0
1418813,428.571428571429,4,2,3,60,1,0
1420527,461.538461538462,4,2,3,60,1,0
1422373,480,4,2,3,60,1,0
1424293,521.739130434783,4,2,3,60,1,0
1434488,666.666666666667,4,2,1,80,1,0
1459821,333.333333333333,4,2,1,80,1,0

The map isn't ready to be ranked, either. I'll drop a mod on this some time this week-end; I've already spent 2 hours on this timing, and I might spend around 8 or more modding the whole difficulty. This is heavily unpolished and has big gameplay issues that need to be addressed. Please take the time to adjust the map to this new timing before I mod it.

Sorry I'm making you wait the mod like this with a comment that looks rather offensive, but I will need a whole day free to mod this. No BAT touch this until I have modded it, please.
Now Timing is Correct \:D/ (f*cking inherited points)

I don't very understand when you talk about gameplay issues, I played it and I think it's fine, so I'm waiting for your mod :3
Thank you so muuuuuuuuuch <3

Also thanks everyone for the support <3
69653863
I think I can take a look on this map before it goes to ranked, I don't know I just wanted to do it.
Shiro
Here's the mod. Do not kd this post as it's a continuation of the previous one.

Marathon
  1. 00:02:210 (4,4) - These two sliders break the comboing. For consistency and respect to the song, the new combos should be on the big white tick (just like 00:01:263 (1) - ) but because you have a sliderend there, you can't add them at these points, which forces you to add them on the note after which is wrong and inconsistent.
  2. 00:05:052 (1) - You could have made an effort and blanket this with 00:04:105 (2) - .
  3. 00:08:526 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Inconsistent 1/4 spacing. This matters more than you may think (see below), but make the spacing on the 1/4 consistent (I'd suggest 0.5x rather than 1x for the beginning). This goes for the entire section until the break.
  4. 00:14:526 (3,4,5,6) - First of all, (4) is not needed and doesn't follow anything in the song. Second of all, this pattern is hella confusing, difficult to play and unintuitive because of the massive 1/4 jump that you force and that doesn't fit at all. You should focus on the 1/2 drum kicks then go back to 1/4 if you wish, but this jump is not fitting and should be remove. Also, remove (6) to focus on the kicks as I said. Also 00:14:526 (3,5) - should continue the circle motion, which was fairly decent, instead of breaking it for the sake of unfitting 1/4.
  5. 00:14:526 (3,5) - Same as above. This 1/4 does not fit. Also, this kind of pattern 00:16:737 (2,3,4) - looks and plays atrociously bad. What's the point of only stacking two of the beats ? It's confusing because of the spacing (which looks like 1/2) and uneven movement for something that is supposedly not uneven. If it's meant to be uneven, use a 1/4 slider then a circle, but not three circles.
  6. 00:17:684 (9,1) - Because of the very inconsistent spacing before, there is no way to tell whether this is a normal 1/2 or another randomly spaced 1/4. That is why making the 1/4 spacing consistent is crucial to this first part.
  7. 00:17:684 (9,1,2,3,4) - This is wrong in every possible way. First of all, the new combo should be on (9). Second of all, you are using offbeat sliders (sliders that start on a red tick) on a part of the song with heavily accentuated white ticks, which you have ignored because they are sliderends. This plays completely off because of that. You're clicking on nothing in the song and ignore the actual strong beats. Also, of course, 00:18:789 (4) - ruins the comboing (the new combo should be on its end).
  8. 00:19:263 (1) - See ^. This new combo is misplaced. And make 00:19:263 (1,2,3) - a perfect triangle or something.
  9. 00:20:210 (1) - to 00:22:263 (5) - first of all, the rhythm is wrong. It should be circle-circle-1/2slider repeat. The rhythm is made of 4 beats: 00:20:210 (1,2,3) - three strong ones, then one weak one. You have the first strong beat and the weak beat emphasized with circles, the second strong beat emphasized with a slider head, but the third strong beat is skipped because of the slider end, which plays awfully wrong. You should change the rhythm into that, then add a jump after the sliderend to separate the rhythm better.
  10. 00:24:632 (4) - Common sense requires this to be 3/4 long, and not 1/1, just like 00:24:316 (3) - .
    For the whole section above: it's the introduction and you're already using heavy 1/4, sliderjumps, confusing streams, and everything that i counterintuitive and difficult to play. For an introduction, especially to a marathon, you should have done something a bit easier to let the player warm up.
  11. 00:30:632 (2,3) - Wrong blanket.
  12. 00:31:421 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This could use sliders. There are very clear strong beats in the song but you're not trying to emphasize them because everything is circles. I'll help you and point out the weaker beats that you can use sliderends on: 00:31:737 (6) - 00:32:211 (4) - 00:32:684 (7) -
  13. 00:32:132 (3) - This 1/4 is nowhere to be found in the song.
  14. 00:32:842 (1,2) - On the other hand, this goes over two very strong beats and ignores one because of a sliderend. You should have done the same as 00:30:316 (1,2) - . Also for the whole 00:32:842 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - you decided to completely ignore the song and use random slider composition instead ?
  15. 00:33:632 (3,1,2) - Wrong blankets, again.
  16. 00:36:000 (3,4,5) - I already pointed this pattern out and I will point it out again. You're not even consistent with yourself: one time you decide to add a confusing counterintuitive jumpstack1/4thing and then it's regular 1/4: 00:36:632 (1,2,3) - . Also if you wanted to be consistent with yourself this one should be a 3/4 slider then a 1/2 slider, not 1/2-1/4-1/2.
  17. 00:37:737 (5,1) - Oh hey, this slider is pretty cool for once. It goes well with the emphasized beats in the song and the slight jump after it fits the variations of volume on the notes.
  18. 00:39:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - And THAT is why the pattern I pointed out 00:39:158 (1,2,3) - is confusing and unintuitive. This looks like 00:39:790 (4) - is 1/4 after 00:39:474 (3) - in every possible way you could ever look at it: same pattern as 00:39:158 (1,2,3) - (the 1/4 use on (2) is overmapped, btw), slightly higher jump than (1,2), and a clear build up in the song. Except it's 1/2.
  19. 00:39:790 (4,5,6) - This rhythm is wrong either way. The strong beats are 00:39:790 - 00:40:027 - 00:40:264 - and these are what should have been clicked. This would have been a perfect place to use 1/2 sliders that are 1/4 apart, not your weird rhythm. Also, space them properly or add a jump after them, because 00:40:106 (6,1) - looks like they are 1/4 apart because of the unnecessary jump on 00:39:869 (5,6) - and the confusing spacing on 00:39:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - right before.
  20. 00:41:053 (4,1) - I wouldn't consider this rankable in this context. There is no back-and-forth of any kind in the song at this moment that could justify and overlapping pattern like this.
    00:42:316 (3,4,5) - THIS is what you should have done at 00:39:790 (4,5,6) - (minus the weird 1/4 slider, but that's my personal taste). THIS is cool.
  21. 00:44:211 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above. There is no back-and-forth of any kind at this point. Also, don't shorten the second one if you're going to use a pattern that is not directly sightreadable. This is counterintuitive and wrong. I don't mind the 1/4 sliderjumps at this point, they are correct, but don't hide one of them under another slider for the sake of having a confusing pattern that doesn't even fit.
  22. 00:46:422 (5,1,2,3,4) - Abusive 1/4, wrong pattern, again.
  23. 00:49:895 (4,6) - These are dangerously overlapping. Try to move (6) around to remove the confusing overlap.
  24. 00:56:843 (1,2,3) - *sigh*
  25. 00:57:790 (6,7,1) - Unnecessary and confusing anti-jumps. What are they even for ? They don't make sense.
  26. 00:58:422 (2,3,4) - *siigh*
  27. 01:00:948 (2,3) - This plays horribly because of the amazing lack of flow and counterintuitiveness of this movement. Also the slider is mostly hidden under 01:00:475 (5) - .
  28. 01:01:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - Seems that you chose to completely ignore the song for some random slider composition here again. Don't you think there's something wrong if you end up using a finish hitsound on a passive sliderend ? 01:03:948 (4,1,2,3,4) - Same goes for this.
    note: at this point I gave up on trying to understand your comboing and give pointers to fix it. Rhythms are wrong most of the time and make proper comboing impossible.
  29. 01:09:475 (1,2) - These sliders are hideous. Why do they go back on themselves like that ?
  30. 01:16:107 (2,3,4) - THIS is a case when this pattern fits because there is no important beat on the end of 01:16:107 (2) - and the slight jump emphasizes 01:16:343 (3) - *siiigh*
  31. 01:16:738 (5,1,2) - This is a correct use of this pattern, for once, and not just because you don't want an overlap. The end of 01:16:738 (5) - is clearly not emphasized in the song, while the slight jump emphasizes 01:16:975 (1) - which is good. 01:19:265 (5,1,2) - Same here.
  32. 01:24:002 (3) - If you want to be consistent with what you did just before, you should extend this slider.
  33. 01:26:212 (2,3,4) - *siiiigh*
  34. 01:28:896 (2,3) - That doesn't fit. Why not use a triple here like you did at 01:18:791 (2,3,4) - ? That would be the best way to go. Why do you keep changing the rhythms you use if the song's rhythms don't change at all ?
  35. 01:34:107 (3,4,5) - *siiiiigh* also this should have an extended (3/4) slider to stay consistent with 01:33:475 (1,2) -
  36. 01:36:633 (5,6,1) - Why does the spacing change like this ? This is really confusing.
  37. 01:49:107 (2,1) - Please stack properly.
  38. 01:52:423 (1) - This slider shouldn't be extended. There is a clear beat at 01:52:581 - while there is absolutely none on the 1/4 beat, so a triple wouldn't work either. And it's not consistent with 01:47:371 (1,2) - .
  39. 01:59:924 (2) - Inconsistent and overmapped 1/4. Check 01:50:529 (3,4) - and do the same rhythm, since it's the exact same rhythm in the song.
  40. 02:02:371 (7) - This should be a circle. Follow the song. Also it would be more consistent with 01:50:529 (3,4) - kinda.
  41. 02:07:266 (5,1,2) - *siiiiiigh*
  42. 02:11:055 (4) - Inconsistent, again. This part is full 1/2, there is no need for any 1/4.
  43. 02:11:687 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiigh*
  44. 02:13:187 (4) - Overmapped 1/4, again.
  45. 02:14:529 - why are you skipping this obvious note in the song that you never skipped before ?
  46. 02:14:371 (3,4,5) - *siiiiiiiigh*
  47. 02:21:793 (3,4,5) - This rhythm doesn't exist in the song and is confusing. You've only used 1/4 slider for jump triples in this part of the song like 02:20:056 (1,2) - . It should be a 5-note stream, which would be fitting, consistent with 02:19:266 (3,4,5,6) - and less confusing.
  48. 02:38:214 (3,4,5) - *siiiiiiiiigh*
  49. 02:39:477 (3,4,5) - *siiiiiiiiiigh*
  50. 02:40:425 (1,2,3) - *siiiiiiiiiiigh* also this 1/4 is overmapped
  51. 02:41:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped 1/4
  52. 02:42:319 (7,8,9) - *siiiiiiiiiiiigh* also this 1/4 is overmapped
  53. 02:43:267 (2,3) - All three notes of this triple (starting with the sliderend) should be emphasized. They stand out in the song as the first 1/4 notes in a while at this point (not in the map, alas), and should be emphasized in the map as well.
  54. 02:44:530 (2,3,4) - Same here !
  55. 02:45:477 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why is there a stream here ? I can't hear anything streamy in the song.
  56. 02:47:688 (5,1,2) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  57. 02:49:425 (2) - Overmapped.
  58. 02:54:004 (7,1,2) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
    note: at this point I also gave up on pointing out overmapped 1/4. The map is full of them.
  59. 02:55:267 (8,1,2) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  60. 03:01:741 (1,2,3) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh* AND the comboing is wrong, which probably lead to you having to use a sliderend as first object of this and lead to the use of this terrible pattern
  61. 03:02:688 (6) - I'm not sure if this is in the song or not, but either way, it's confusing and quite unnecessary.
  62. 03:09:794 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  63. 03:12:320 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh* seriously. This looks like 1/2 and SHOULD be 1/2. Why do you add unnecessary 1/4 everywhere ? This is horribly confusing.
  64. 03:23:689 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  65. 03:30:005 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - This is mapped over a silence in the song and it's a stream with a slider to make it extra confusing.
  66. 03:33:479 (1,2,3) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  67. 03:54:005 (4,5,6) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  68. 03:57:795 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  69. 03:59:058 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  70. 04:00:637 (4,5,6) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  71. 04:06:953 (3,4,5) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  72. 04:08:216 (4,5,6) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
    note: I completely gave up at this point.
Rhythms in this are incorrect most of the time and a majority of the map is overmapped. Rather than post a million times the same thing and sighing more than my lungs can handle, I'll just explain things to you directly. Please hit me up when I'm online, I'll make a stream and explain things there.
Topic Starter
AruOtta
plz wat O.o

Shiro wrote:

Here's the mod. Do not kd this post as it's a continuation of the previous one.

Marathon
  1. 00:02:210 (4,4) - These two sliders break the comboing. For consistency and respect to the song, the new combos should be on the big white tick (just like 00:01:263 (1) - ) but because you have a sliderend there, you can't add them at these points, which forces you to add them on the note after which is wrong and inconsistent.
  2. 00:05:052 (1) - You could have made an effort and blanket this with 00:04:105 (2) - .
  3. 00:08:526 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Inconsistent 1/4 spacing. This matters more than you may think (see below), but make the spacing on the 1/4 consistent (I'd suggest 0.5x rather than 1x for the beginning). This goes for the entire section until the break.
  4. 00:14:526 (3,4,5,6) - First of all, (4) is not needed and doesn't follow anything in the song. Second of all, this pattern is hella confusing, difficult to play and unintuitive because of the massive 1/4 jump that you force and that doesn't fit at all. You should focus on the 1/2 drum kicks then go back to 1/4 if you wish, but this jump is not fitting and should be remove. Also, remove (6) to focus on the kicks as I said. Also 00:14:526 (3,5) - should continue the circle motion, which was fairly decent, instead of breaking it for the sake of unfitting 1/4.
  5. 00:14:526 (3,5) - Same as above. This 1/4 does not fit. Also, this kind of pattern 00:16:737 (2,3,4) - looks and plays atrociously bad. What's the point of only stacking two of the beats ? It's confusing because of the spacing (which looks like 1/2) and uneven movement for something that is supposedly not uneven. If it's meant to be uneven, use a 1/4 slider then a circle, but not three circles.
  6. 00:17:684 (9,1) - Because of the very inconsistent spacing before, there is no way to tell whether this is a normal 1/2 or another randomly spaced 1/4. That is why making the 1/4 spacing consistent is crucial to this first part.
  7. 00:17:684 (9,1,2,3,4) - This is wrong in every possible way. First of all, the new combo should be on (9). Second of all, you are using offbeat sliders (sliders that start on a red tick) on a part of the song with heavily accentuated white ticks, which you have ignored because they are sliderends. This plays completely off because of that. You're clicking on nothing in the song and ignore the actual strong beats. Also, of course, 00:18:789 (4) - ruins the comboing (the new combo should be on its end).
  8. 00:19:263 (1) - See ^. This new combo is misplaced. And make 00:19:263 (1,2,3) - a perfect triangle or something.
  9. 00:20:210 (1) - to 00:22:263 (5) - first of all, the rhythm is wrong. It should be circle-circle-1/2slider repeat. The rhythm is made of 4 beats: 00:20:210 (1,2,3) - three strong ones, then one weak one. You have the first strong beat and the weak beat emphasized with circles, the second strong beat emphasized with a slider head, but the third strong beat is skipped because of the slider end, which plays awfully wrong. You should change the rhythm into that, then add a jump after the sliderend to separate the rhythm better.
  10. 00:24:632 (4) - Common sense requires this to be 3/4 long, and not 1/1, just like 00:24:316 (3) - .
    For the whole section above: it's the introduction and you're already using heavy 1/4, sliderjumps, confusing streams, and everything that i counterintuitive and difficult to play. For an introduction, especially to a marathon, you should have done something a bit easier to let the player warm up.
  11. 00:30:632 (2,3) - Wrong blanket.
  12. 00:31:421 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This could use sliders. There are very clear strong beats in the song but you're not trying to emphasize them because everything is circles. I'll help you and point out the weaker beats that you can use sliderends on: 00:31:737 (6) - 00:32:211 (4) - 00:32:684 (7) -
  13. 00:32:132 (3) - This 1/4 is nowhere to be found in the song.
  14. 00:32:842 (1,2) - On the other hand, this goes over two very strong beats and ignores one because of a sliderend. You should have done the same as 00:30:316 (1,2) - . Also for the whole 00:32:842 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - you decided to completely ignore the song and use random slider composition instead ?
  15. 00:33:632 (3,1,2) - Wrong blankets, again.
  16. 00:36:000 (3,4,5) - I already pointed this pattern out and I will point it out again. You're not even consistent with yourself: one time you decide to add a confusing counterintuitive jumpstack1/4thing and then it's regular 1/4: 00:36:632 (1,2,3) - . Also if you wanted to be consistent with yourself this one should be a 3/4 slider then a 1/2 slider, not 1/2-1/4-1/2.
  17. 00:37:737 (5,1) - Oh hey, this slider is pretty cool for once. It goes well with the emphasized beats in the song and the slight jump after it fits the variations of volume on the notes.
  18. 00:39:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - And THAT is why the pattern I pointed out 00:39:158 (1,2,3) - is confusing and unintuitive. This looks like 00:39:790 (4) - is 1/4 after 00:39:474 (3) - in every possible way you could ever look at it: same pattern as 00:39:158 (1,2,3) - (the 1/4 use on (2) is overmapped, btw), slightly higher jump than (1,2), and a clear build up in the song. Except it's 1/2.
  19. 00:39:790 (4,5,6) - This rhythm is wrong either way. The strong beats are 00:39:790 - 00:40:027 - 00:40:264 - and these are what should have been clicked. This would have been a perfect place to use 1/2 sliders that are 1/4 apart, not your weird rhythm. Also, space them properly or add a jump after them, because 00:40:106 (6,1) - looks like they are 1/4 apart because of the unnecessary jump on 00:39:869 (5,6) - and the confusing spacing on 00:39:158 (1,2,3,4,5) - right before.
  20. 00:41:053 (4,1) - I wouldn't consider this rankable in this context. There is no back-and-forth of any kind in the song at this moment that could justify and overlapping pattern like this.
    00:42:316 (3,4,5) - THIS is what you should have done at 00:39:790 (4,5,6) - (minus the weird 1/4 slider, but that's my personal taste). THIS is cool.
  21. 00:44:211 (1,2,3,4) - Same as above. There is no back-and-forth of any kind at this point. Also, don't shorten the second one if you're going to use a pattern that is not directly sightreadable. This is counterintuitive and wrong. I don't mind the 1/4 sliderjumps at this point, they are correct, but don't hide one of them under another slider for the sake of having a confusing pattern that doesn't even fit.
  22. 00:46:422 (5,1,2,3,4) - Abusive 1/4, wrong pattern, again.
  23. 00:49:895 (4,6) - These are dangerously overlapping. Try to move (6) around to remove the confusing overlap.
  24. 00:56:843 (1,2,3) - *sigh*
  25. 00:57:790 (6,7,1) - Unnecessary and confusing anti-jumps. What are they even for ? They don't make sense.
  26. 00:58:422 (2,3,4) - *siigh*
  27. 01:00:948 (2,3) - This plays horribly because of the amazing lack of flow and counterintuitiveness of this movement. Also the slider is mostly hidden under 01:00:475 (5) - .
  28. 01:01:422 (1,2,3,4,5) - Seems that you chose to completely ignore the song for some random slider composition here again. Don't you think there's something wrong if you end up using a finish hitsound on a passive sliderend ? 01:03:948 (4,1,2,3,4) - Same goes for this.
    note: at this point I gave up on trying to understand your comboing and give pointers to fix it. Rhythms are wrong most of the time and make proper comboing impossible.
  29. 01:09:475 (1,2) - These sliders are hideous. Why do they go back on themselves like that ? Because it follow the little voice. I don't think they are ugly
  30. 01:16:107 (2,3,4) - THIS is a case when this pattern fits because there is no important beat on the end of 01:16:107 (2) - and the slight jump emphasizes 01:16:343 (3) - *siiigh*
  31. 01:16:738 (5,1,2) - This is a correct use of this pattern, for once, and not just because you don't want an overlap. The end of 01:16:738 (5) - is clearly not emphasized in the song, while the slight jump emphasizes 01:16:975 (1) - which is good. 01:19:265 (5,1,2) - Same here.
  32. 01:24:002 (3) - If you want to be consistent with what you did just before, you should extend this slider.
  33. 01:26:212 (2,3,4) - *siiiigh*
  34. 01:28:896 (2,3) - That doesn't fit. Why not use a triple here like you did at 01:18:791 (2,3,4) - ? That would be the best way to go. Why do you keep changing the rhythms you use if the song's rhythms don't change at all ?
  35. 01:34:107 (3,4,5) - *siiiiigh* also this should have an extended (3/4) slider to stay consistent with 01:33:475 (1,2) -
  36. 01:36:633 (5,6,1) - Why does the spacing change like this ? This is really confusing.
  37. 01:49:107 (2,1) - Please stack properly.
  38. 01:52:423 (1) - This slider shouldn't be extended. There is a clear beat at 01:52:581 - while there is absolutely none on the 1/4 beat, so a triple wouldn't work either. And it's not consistent with 01:47:371 (1,2) - .
  39. 01:59:924 (2) - Inconsistent and overmapped 1/4. Check 01:50:529 (3,4) - and do the same rhythm, since it's the exact same rhythm in the song.
  40. 02:02:371 (7) - This should be a circle. Follow the song. Also it would be more consistent with 01:50:529 (3,4) - kinda.
  41. 02:07:266 (5,1,2) - *siiiiiigh*
  42. 02:11:055 (4) - Inconsistent, again. This part is full 1/2, there is no need for any 1/4.
  43. 02:11:687 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiigh*
  44. 02:13:187 (4) - Overmapped 1/4, again.
  45. 02:14:529 - why are you skipping this obvious note in the song that you never skipped before ?
  46. 02:14:371 (3,4,5) - *siiiiiiiigh*
  47. 02:21:793 (3,4,5) - This rhythm doesn't exist in the song and is confusing. You've only used 1/4 slider for jump triples in this part of the song like 02:20:056 (1,2) - . It should be a 5-note stream, which would be fitting, consistent with 02:19:266 (3,4,5,6) - and less confusing.
  48. 02:38:214 (3,4,5) - *siiiiiiiiigh*
  49. 02:39:477 (3,4,5) - *siiiiiiiiiigh*
  50. 02:40:425 (1,2,3) - *siiiiiiiiiiigh* also this 1/4 is overmapped
  51. 02:41:688 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped 1/4
  52. 02:42:319 (7,8,9) - *siiiiiiiiiiiigh* also this 1/4 is overmapped
  53. 02:43:267 (2,3) - All three notes of this triple (starting with the sliderend) should be emphasized. They stand out in the song as the first 1/4 notes in a while at this point (not in the map, alas), and should be emphasized in the map as well.
  54. 02:44:530 (2,3,4) - Same here !
  55. 02:45:477 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why is there a stream here ? I can't hear anything streamy in the song.
  56. 02:47:688 (5,1,2) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  57. 02:49:425 (2) - Overmapped.
  58. 02:54:004 (7,1,2) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
    note: at this point I also gave up on pointing out overmapped 1/4. The map is full of them.
  59. 02:55:267 (8,1,2) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  60. 03:01:741 (1,2,3) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh* AND the comboing is wrong, which probably lead to you having to use a sliderend as first object of this and lead to the use of this terrible pattern
  61. 03:02:688 (6) - I'm not sure if this is in the song or not, but either way, it's confusing and quite unnecessary.
  62. 03:09:794 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  63. 03:12:320 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh* seriously. This looks like 1/2 and SHOULD be 1/2. Why do you add unnecessary 1/4 everywhere ? This is horribly confusing.
  64. 03:23:689 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  65. 03:30:005 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - This is mapped over a silence in the song and it's a stream with a slider to make it extra confusing.
  66. 03:33:479 (1,2,3) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  67. 03:54:005 (4,5,6) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  68. 03:57:795 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  69. 03:59:058 (2,3,4) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  70. 04:00:637 (4,5,6) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  71. 04:06:953 (3,4,5) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
  72. 04:08:216 (4,5,6) - *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh*
    note: I completely gave up at this point.
Rhythms in this are incorrect most of the time and a majority of the map is overmapped. Rather than post a million times the same thing and sighing more than my lungs can handle, I'll just explain things to you directly. Please hit me up when I'm online, I'll make a stream and explain things there.
(quite) Everything fixed. I fixed every *siiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiigh* of the map, and some other things you said.
I hope everything is okay :3

(mother of mod #3 ?)
Jenny
Guess I'd volunteer helping out with IRC things aswell if you so need (or want) that - note though that like Shiro, I'm probably not going to hit you up with a full-26-minute-30000-word wallmod because that would just take centuries to go through, write, apply and reply to, so I'll leave you with this thread for now as it covers a lot of issues your map is having.

It's fixable but it'll take a lot of effort due to the length.. 's worth it though, believe :V
Topic Starter
AruOtta
Update : All NC are on white tick, so the emphasized finish are respected.
Shiro

Kenterz wrote:

(mother of mod #3 ?)
Could have been, but I would rather explain things to you directly in a livestream, as it's much easier for both of us. Contact me next week when you are available so that we can do that.
Take the time to read Jenny's thread, too. As she said, fixing this will take a lot of time, but it would definitely be worth it.
Saoji
Why is it not ranked yet ?
Because you're not Chinese ?????????

Good luck... good luck.
Topic Starter
AruOtta

Yales wrote:

Why is it not ranked yet ?
Because you're not Chinese ?????????
Probably, but it's mainly because there's a lot of gameplay issues, I'll try to fix them with Shiro this week end :3
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Kenterz wrote:

Yales wrote:

Why is it not ranked yet ?
Because you're not Chinese ?????????
Probably, but it's mainly because there's a lot of gameplay issues, I'll try to fix them with Shiro this week end :3
Nice, waiting for that rank ! :3
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