1. Easy (2.14 stars, 80 notes)
2. Hard (4.92 stars, 236 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 329 notes)
4. Normal (4.09 stars, 124 notes)

1. Sourceの"Mahou Sensou"は日本語にしても良いかもしれないです(その場合Tagsにmahou sensouを追加) -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/141505
2. Preview Pointの設定 ※全難易度で同じ位置に設定してください
3. AudioLeadInを1000あたりに設定(.osu!ファイルから弄れます)

1. ノーツ間の間隔は全て一定である必要があります(Unrankable) distance snapを使って間隔を一定にしてください
2. Easyはスライダーの速度変化をつけてはいけません(Unrankable) 全部x1.00に設定してください(必要のなくなった緑線は削除推奨)
3. 00:03:810 (4,1) - ノーツが重なって見えるのはEasyだと辛いかも
4. 00:30:685 (4,1,2) - 重なってる上にEasyにしては難しい配置です
5. 01:20:060 (3,4) - 重なって見づらいと思います(僕はこういう配置好きですが…
6. NormalもDistance使用/速度変化禁止 がルールによって定められています

1. 00:14:278 - ここにノーツが一つ欲しい
2. 00:19:747 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - この配置、僕は大好きですがHardにしてはかなーり難しいです…　BPMが192なので3連打はHardで使うには辛いかもしれません
3. 00:23:497 (5,6,7) - ^
4. 00:29:903 (3,4,5) - おそらくリバースアローが見えません
5. 01:21:310 (2,3,4,5,6) - これはアカン…リバースアロー見えません
6. 他は大丈夫だと思います。良譜面です

1. 00:07:872 (2,1,2,1,2) - スライダーに軒並み重なってるのが気になりました 配置変更推奨？
2. 00:38:497 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 最初の星を小さくしたりとか、一つ目二つ目の星配置で何か工夫が欲しいかも
3. 00:40:060 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ストリーム->スライダー->ストリーム のノーツ間の間隔を狭める
4. 00:52:560 (1,2) - 前後の流れを汲んでボーカルに音取りを合わせたほうがいいと思う
5. 00:58:653 (1,1) - remove NC
6. 01:00:060 (5,1) - add NC-> remove NC
7. 01:00:216 (1,1) - Remove NC
8. 01:04:435 (5) - add NC
9. 01:04:747 (1,1) - Remove NC 例を挙げるとこれくらい、サビのNCがめちゃくちゃになってるので直しておくと吉
10. 01:21:935 (8,1) - この間に遅いスライダーとか入れてもいいかも おまかせします
11. hitsoundが際立って良かったと思います

sionKotori wrote:

こんばんは


[General]

1. Sourceの"Mahou Sensou"は日本語にしても良いかもしれないです(その場合Tagsにmahou sensouを追加) -> https://osu.ppy.sh/s/141505　OK
2. Preview Pointの設定 ※全難易度で同じ位置に設定してください　OK 忘れてました…　
3. AudioLeadInを1000あたりに設定(.osu!ファイルから弄れます)　OK

[Easy]

1. ノーツ間の間隔は全て一定である必要があります(Unrankable) distance snapを使って間隔を一定にしてください　　OK
2. Easyはスライダーの速度変化をつけてはいけません(Unrankable) 全部x1.00に設定してください(必要のなくなった緑線は削除推奨)　　OK
3. 00:03:810 (4,1) - ノーツが重なって見えるのはEasyだと辛いかも 　OK
4. 00:30:685 (4,1,2) - 重なってる上にEasyにしては難しい配置です　　OK
5. 01:20:060 (3,4) - 重なって見づらいと思います(僕はこういう配置好きですが…　　OK
6. NormalもDistance使用/速度変化禁止 がルールによって定められています　　OK

　

[Hard]

1. 00:14:278 - ここにノーツが一つ欲しい　　OK　追加しました
2. 00:19:747 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - この配置、僕は大好きですがHardにしてはかなーり難しいです…　BPMが192なので3連打はHardで使うには辛いかもしれません　　OK　配置変更
3. 00:23:497 (5,6,7) - ^　　OK　配置変更
4. 00:29:903 (3,4,5) - おそらくリバースアローが見えません　　OK　配置変更
5. 01:21:310 (2,3,4,5,6) - これはアカン…リバースアロー見えません　　OK　配置変更
6. 他は大丈夫だと思います。良譜面です

　　

[Insane]

1. 00:07:872 (2,1,2,1,2) - スライダーに軒並み重なってるのが気になりました 配置変更推奨？　 OK
2. 00:38:497 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - 最初の星を小さくしたりとか、一つ目二つ目の星配置で何か工夫が欲しいかも　 もう一度指摘があれば再検討します
3. 00:40:060 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ストリーム->スライダー->ストリーム のノーツ間の間隔を狭める　 OK
4. 00:52:560 (1,2) - 前後の流れを汲んでボーカルに音取りを合わせたほうがいいと思う　 OK
5. 00:58:653 (1,1) - remove NC　 OK
6. 01:00:060 (5,1) - add NC-> remove NC　 OK
7. 01:00:216 (1,1) - Remove NC　 OK　最初の1だけ残して。他のNCは消しました。
8. 01:04:435 (5) - add NC　 OK
9. 01:04:747 (1,1) - Remove NC 例を挙げるとこれくらい、サビのNCがめちゃくちゃになってるので直しておくと吉　 OK　後で見返すとごちゃごちゃしてました。
10. 01:21:935 (8,1) - この間に遅いスライダーとか入れてもいいかも おまかせします　 ここは空けておくかな。
11. hitsoundが際立って良かったと思います

がんばってね～！！

1. Add Magical Warfare to your tags, as it will make it easier for those who speak English to locate your beat map

1. Try to stay within the grid usually an easy map will be Unrankeable (about 80% of the time) if the sliders/notes are outside of the grid
2. 00:23:827 (1) - This slider end isn't snapped
3. 00:25:077 (2) - This end isn't snapped either
4. 00:30:060 (3) - Because this is an easy difficulty, try to avoid more than one return arrow on such small slider (I'd like to say that really on any slider in this difficulty)
5. 01:00:841 (3) - Here is an example of what I believe are too many arrows, so try to avoid these.

1. 01:21:231 (2,3,4,5) - I think that this stack might be nicer if it were to move a little closer to the slider
2. The rest of the map is really nice in my opinion.

1. 00:57:380 (2) - The end of this slider isn't snapped
2. 00:40:294 (4,5) - The distance between this stack of beats and the slider bothers me a bit since you have been stacking everything else really nicely
   Here is a picture that might help
   SPOILER

   ]
3. 01:21:310 (1,2,3) - A similar situation occurs here although I can see that this one would me more sense (I guess it's just personal preference xD)

Roxtrae wrote:

Greetings from Roxtrae! :3

First of all, I love this song! I hope you get it prepped for ranked as soon as possible.


[General]

1. Add Magical Warfare to your tags, as it will make it easier for those who speak English to locate your beat map OK

[Easy]

1. Try to stay within the grid usually an easy map will be Unrankeable (about 80% of the time) if the sliders/notes are outside of the grid　OK
2. 00:23:827 (1) - This slider end isn't snapped　OK
3. 00:25:077 (2) - This end isn't snapped either　OK
4. 00:30:060 (3) - Because this is an easy difficulty, try to avoid more than one return arrow on such small slider (I'd like to say that really on any slider in this difficulty)　OK
5. 01:00:841 (3) - Here is an example of what I believe are too many arrows, so try to avoid these.　OK

[Hard]

1. 01:21:231 (2,3,4,5) - I think that this stack might be nicer if it were to move a little closer to the slider　OK
2. The rest of the map is really nice in my opinion.

[Insane]

1. 00:57:380 (2) - The end of this slider isn't snapped　OK
2. 00:40:294 (4,5) - The distance between this stack of beats and the slider bothers me a bit since you have been stacking everything else really nicely
   Here is a picture that might help　OK
   SPOILER

   ]
3. 01:21:310 (1,2,3) - A similar situation occurs here although I can see that this one would me more sense (I guess it's just personal preference xD)　OK

I hope to see your beat map among the ranked ones soon!
Roxtrae

xjoint wrote:

Hi! I'm new to modding, but I hope I can be helpful!

General


Easy
00:13:185 (2) - I agree with Roxtrae. I think it would be better to not have this short slider repeat twice. OK.
00:26:778 (4,1) - I think these 2 sliders don't have the best flow because the 1 is too far left with the angle of the 4. OK.
01:07:560 (1) - This 1 slider feels awkwardly short. It's the only time there are 1/2 beats in this map and I think it doesn't really sound the best either. It fits well with the music but not as well with the map since you didn't do it for the other similar parts. OK.

Hard
I thought this was a little bit on the difficult side for a Hard. I think it plays like a light insane.

00:20:045 - I found this section to be difficult to read for a Hard difficulty, but if you're going for more of a light insane it's fine. OK.
00:39:435 - This square is also pretty difficult for a Hard since it's 192bpm 1/2 beats. OK.

Lover
00:37:560 (2) - This slider feels kind of out of place to me. I can see what you're going for and it's kind of cool how you play it taking advantage of the slider leniency, but it just doesn't seem to fit in with the way that the other sliders are flowing. OK.
00:57:560 (3,4) - I think that this jump doesn't fit well with the music. The combo is a symmetric pattern, but when I played the map it felt like this jump was sort of random and the music didn't really suggest there should be a jump here. OK. Placement change

It was a really fun map set and I enjoyed it

TetMax wrote:

こんにちは！＾＾ノ

↓ココにまとめてﾏｽ。

My Mod

[Easy]

・New Combo
00:09:435 (1) - remove　OK
00:10:685 (2) - add　OK
00:11:935 (1) - remove　OK
00:20:685 (4) - add　OK
00:23:185 (1) - remove　OK
00:25:685 (3) - add　OK
00:27:560 (1) - remove　OK
00:30:685 (4) - add　OK
00:31:310 (1) - remove　OK
00:33:185 (3) - add　OK
00:33:810 (1) - remove　OK
00:35:685 (2) - add　OK
01:07:560 (1) - remove　OK
01:08:185 (2) - add　OK
01:11:778 (1) - remove?　OK
01:13:185 (3) - add　OK
01:17:247 (1) - remove　OK
01:18:185 (2) - add　OK

・等間隔になっていないところがあります＞＜
00:05:685 (1)　OK
00:36:310 (3)　OK

・次のノーツまでの間に他のノーツを跨ぐのはマズいかも？
00:36:310 (3) - 00:35:685 (2) ごと上にずらす　OK
00:42:872 (3) - 00:44:122 (4) ごと下にずらす　OK

・パターンの変化に混乱するかも。
00:54:278 (4,5,1,2)
　　- 00:54:278 (4) を 00:55:060 まで延長して 00:55:060 (5) を削除、00:55:997 (1) を00:55:685にずらしてリバース追加を推奨します
　　　　・・・できれば00:54:278 (4)は00:54:435から始める方がリズムには乗りやすい気がする(ボーカルから外れるけど)　OK　具体的なご指摘ありがとうございます


[Hard]

・New Combo　区切りたいところで区切れない配置なので悩ましかったです。。
00:09:435 (5) - add　OK
00:22:403 (1) - remove　OK
00:23:497 (5) - add　OK
00:24:278 (1) - remove　OK　
00:26:778 (1) - remove　OK　コンボ数が長くなったので、　00:26:153 (1) - add　しました。
00:28:185 (6) - add　OK
00:43:185 (4) - add　OK
00:44:122 (1) - remove　OK
00:46:622 (1) - remove　OK
01:06:778 (4) - add?　OK
01:07:716 (1) - remove?　OK
01:08:341 (3) - add　OK
01:09:122 (1) - remove　OK
01:09:278 (2) - add　OK
01:13:185 (5) - add　OK
01:13:810 (1) - remove　OK
01:14:435 (4) - add　OK
01:15:216 (1) - remove　OK
01:15:841 (3) - add　OK
01:16:935 (7) - add　OK
01:17:247 (1) - remove　OK
01:18:653 (4) - add　OK

・ノーツの軌道
00:04:435 (5) - スタックした方がいい気がする。　OK
00:19:747 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - 00:19:747 (4) を中心に、左に45度回転？　したらまだやりやすいかもしれない。　OK


00:38:653 (1,2,3,4) - 星形の方が見やすいかな・・・？　でも難易度は上がるかも＾＾；　変更なしでいきます


01:27:560 (2,3,4,5) - Insaneと同じようにギザギザ軌道の方がいいかも？(角度はあまりつけない感じで)　OK

[Insane]

・New Combo
00:23:185 (8) - add　OK
00:23:653 (1) - remove　OK
00:24:278 (5) - add　OK
00:28:185 (5) - add　OK
00:30:685 (1) ～00:37:872 (3) - NewComboパターンが分かれているので統一、
　　　　00:33:185 (1,1,2,3,1,2,1,2) のパターンを推奨　　OK
00:41:935 (4) - add　OK
00:42:403 (1) - remove　OK
00:45:060 (1) - remove?　OK
00:45:685 (3) - add　OK
00:46:310 (1) - remove　OK
00:46:935 (3) - add　OK
00:47:091 (1) - remove　OK
00:48:810 (1) - remove?　OK
00:49:435 (3) - add　OK
00:53:185 (4) - add　OK
00:58:966 (1) - remove、やるなら00:58:810 (3)　OK
00:59:278 (1) - remove、やるなら00:59:122 (2)　OK
00:59:435 (2) - add　OK
01:07:872 (1) - remove　OK
01:08:185 (2) - add　OK
01:10:685 (4) - add　OK
01:10:841 (1) - remove　OK
01:13:185 (4) - add?　OK
01:13:653 (1) - remove?　OK
01:14:278 (4) - add　OK
01:15:685 (3) - add　OK
01:16:153 (1) - remove　OK
01:16:935 (5) - add　OK
01:17:716 (1) - remove?　OK
01:18:185 (3) - add　OK
01:18:497 (1) - remove　OK

・ノーツの軌道
01:00:841 (1,2,3,4,5) - ここは四角に合わせるよりは星の方が直感的かも？　　OK
できれば01:01:466 (5) は01:01:935 (1) の始点に重ねたいところ。

・Finish　抜けているところが多いような気がしたので。
00:43:185 (1) - 始点　OK
00:45:685 (3) - 始点　OK　
00:48:185 (1) - 始点　OK
00:53:185 (4) - 始点　OK
00:55:685 (1) - 始点　OK
01:08:185 (2) - 　OK
01:13:185 (4) - 始点　OK
01:18:185 (3) - 始点　OK

ふぁいとﾝ！

smallboat wrote:

Random #modreq

[General]

Check Love diff ,the" widescreen support " unseclect it,add it?

Lover diff name should be change Insane,check the rank rules.　OK

[Easy]

00:45:060 (5) - DS ? Feel have a bit hard to read here.　OK
01:15:685 (4) - ^　OK
01:15:685 (4) - NC,because the vocal is start from here.　OK
01:20:997 (3) - I think no need too close the 01:20:060 (2) ,move a bit?　OK

[Normal]

00:59:435 (1) - I think this spinner end should be turn down volume,it is a suddenly part ,turn down 30~40%?　OK
01:20:685 (4) - NC,because the vocal is start from here.　OK
01:27:560 (4) - I think no need add finish in the end,because the music have all express the end effect,if add it,I think have a bit noisy,imo.　OK

[Hard]

00:03:497 (1,2) - Perhaps you can use antjump at this here,this part keep the same DS have a bit hard to read.　OK
00:05:060 (1) - You can make a jump give this note, I suggest move to (378|43) have fit the music.　OK
00:06:622 (3) - I suggest move to (138|231) have fit the music.Keep in the same DS.　OK
00:09:435 (1) - Don"t overlap here,try move to (85|219)?　　OK
00:11:153 (2) - Keep in the same DS. Suggest (494|130).　OK
00:26:153 (1,2) - Perhaps you can stack 00:25:216 (5) .　OK
00:33:185 (1) - Head stack 00:32:560 (6) head?　OK
00:43:653 (2) - As the same 00:11:153　OK
01:01:935 (1,2) - Use antijump will have a good effect.　OK
01:28:028 (9) - I think no need add finish in the end,because the music have all express the end effect,if add it,I think have a bit noisy,imo.　OK

[Lover]

00:18:810 (2) - (175|227),make a antijump?　I change placement of it (x:292y:196)
00:24:278 (1) - Stack 00:22:716 (6) ?　OK
00:53:185 (1) - (153|327)?　OK

Good Luck~! Hope useful to you!

Alternative wrote:

Hello. from #modreqs

IRCですみませんですヨ

IRC

00:54 Alternative: hi
00:54 Alternative: from #modreqs
00:55 Snow Lover: Hi
00:56 Alternative: I felt uneasy about hitsound
00:56 *Alternative is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/370240 nano - Born To Be (TV size) [Insane]]
00:59 Alternative: eigo dame?
00:59 Snow Lover: chotto...dame
01:00 Alternative: OK nihongo de kakimasu
01:00 Alternative: 日本語で書きマス
01:00 Snow Lover: ありがとうございます
01:00 Alternative: Forumにあげるほどの指摘じゃないのでIRCでも大丈夫でしょうか
01:02 Snow Lover: お願いします
01:02 Alternative: とりあえずEasyとNormalに関してなんですが
01:02 Alternative: 00:02:560 (1) -
01:02 Alternative: 00:03:185 - スピンはここからStartし
01:02 Alternative: 00:02:560 - ここにNoteを加えると自然になります
01:03 Snow Lover: OK
01:04 Alternative: 00:02:560 (1) - このFnishはいらないと思います
01:05 Alternative: 00:05:372 - シンバルの位置はここなので
01:05 Snow Lover: OK
01:06 Alternative: あとはHitsoundの問題として
01:06 Alternative: Finishを使いすぎです
01:06 Alternative: ちゃんと背後のシンバルの音を聞いてください
01:07 Alternative: Finishをハイハット目的で使うならカスタムを対応したそれにしましょう（推奨はしませんが）
01:08 Snow Lover: 了解です。修正します。
01:08 *Alternative is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/354540 nano - Born to be (TV Size) [Alter's Easy]]
01:08 Alternative: すみません。過去に自分が作ったものですが
01:09 Alternative: Hitsoundは参考になるとは思います
01:09 Snow Lover: 参考にさせていただきます
01:10 Alternative: あとはNormalのほうでちょいと気になったことが
01:10 Alternative: 00:06:622 (2) -
01:10 Alternative: 不自然な音取りを感じました
01:11 Alternative: Noteに変えたほうがいいかと思います
01:11 Snow Lover: OK
01:11 Alternative: 00:11:622 (2) - ここも
01:11 Alternative: 単発とスライダーに
01:11 Alternative: 変えると自然です
01:12 Alternative: 00:11:622 - 単発00:11:935 - スライダー
01:13 Snow Lover: OK
01:14 Alternative: 00:26:778 (2) -
01:14 Alternative: 00:26:622 - ここにAdd noteすると自然だと思います
01:14 Snow Lover: OK
01:14 Alternative: 00:32:247 (4) -
01:15 Alternative: ここも単発とスライダーに変えてみましょう
01:15 Alternative: 00:34:747 (3) - 同じく
01:15 Alternative: 00:37:247 (3) - ここも
01:15 Alternative: 音取りはちょいと工夫してネ
01:16 Snow Lover: OK
01:16 Alternative: 00:40:372 - ここの音は重要なのでちゃんと入れてね
01:17 Alternative: 00:51:935 - add note
01:17 Alternative: 00:54:435 - add note
01:18 Alternative: 01:11:622 - add note?
01:19 Snow Lover: OK
01:19 Alternative: とりあえずNormalはそんくらいです
01:19 Alternative: Hardは
01:19 Alternative: 00:40:060 (4,5) -
01:20 Alternative: ここが気になったくらいです
01:20 Alternative: この折り返しはちょいと分かりにくいのでなるべく控えるように
01:20 Alternative: やるなら00:40:060 (4) - を3回折り返し
01:20 Alternative: 00:40:450 (5) - を4回折り返しもしくは3回折り返しで
01:20 Alternative: 00:40:685 - に単発を入れるのが望ましいです
01:21 Alternative: 00:41:466 - と00:42:091 - にAdd noteしてもいいかな
01:22 Alternative: とりあえずそれくらいです。
01:22 Snow Lover: OK
01:22 Alternative: Insaneは軽く見た限りでは
01:23 Alternative: 01:00:528 (4,1) - のスペーシングと
01:23 Alternative: 00:40:060 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ちょっと分かりにくい連打
01:23 Alternative: くらいで後は大丈夫でした
01:23 Snow Lover: OK
01:24 Alternative: 01:21:935 - あと個人的にはKIAIタイムはここで終わらせておくといいかなあと思います
01:24 Alternative: あとはFinishの位置をよく吟味して！
01:24 Alternative: Good Luck!
01:24 Snow Lover: OK
01:25 Snow Lover: ありがとうございました！
01:25 Alternative: あ、コンボカラーも入れたほうがいいですよぉ
01:26 Alternative: ついでにSong setupからLetterboxのチェックも外してネ
01:26 Alternative: 以上！2度目のぐっどらっく！

GL

AJeyB wrote:

Hi.

Insane

00:34:435 (1) - NC no needed　OK
00:35:060 (1) - ^　OK
00:36:935 (1) - ^　OK
00:37:560 (1) - ^　OK
01:10:685 (1) - ^　OK
01:13:185 (1) - ^ 　OK
01:15:060 (1) - ^　OK