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Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga - Glitter (Starving T

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P o M u T a
Hi. m4m

[General]
  1. try add tag 'ed' and 'senya'


[Hinsvar's Normal]
  1. this map 3.24 lol.. good luck keep star late xD..
  2. 00:08:757 (4,5) - not fit sound imo. try this. more good sound and good slider tick.
  3. 00:40:257 (2) - add whistle slider head. bit calm and weird imo.
  4. 01:01:900 (2) - add whistle slider end. instead, 01:03:185 (3) - remove whistle.
  5. 01:10:471 (1) - move (x:158 y:259) or middle point (x:256 y:192) is beautiful seems imo
  6. 01:35:114 (2,3,1) - why use spacing change? (1.50) i don't under stand.
  7. 01:38:971 (3,4) - ^
  8. 01:58:042 (4) - maybe forget clap slider head.
  9. 02:07:257 (1) - add finish.
  10. 03:11:757 (3) - add clap.
  11. 03:20:328 (2) - ^


[Hard]
  1. soft-sliderslide2.wav add better your diff. so, sounds more good.
  2. 00:08:757 (1) - this slider seems weird. i think not need red point. also, try more beautiful blanket (2).
  3. 00:28:900 (4,5) - remove (5) and, try this rhythm, more fit song.
  4. 00:41:328 (1) - this is hard diff. bit far spacing imo. try reduce DS.
  5. 00:56:757 (1) - add finish slider head. I can hear catch symbals.
  6. 01:05:971 (2) - add whistle slider head. your pettern.
  7. 01:11:328 (1) - why add newcombo?
  8. 01:37:257 (3) - add clap slider end.
  9. 01:40:900 (4,5) - same as above 00:28:900 (4,5) - .
  10. 02:00:185 (1) - add clap slider end.
  11. 02:03:185 (3) - ^
  12. 02:16:900 (5) - ^ slider head.
  13. 02:51:614 (1) - add finish.
  14. 02:56:757 (1) - add clap slider head.
  15. 03:10:900 (3) - add clap.
  16. 03:21:614 (2,3,4,5) - hard play imo... try reduce ds.
  17. 03:30:614 (4) - add clap.
  18. 03:31:042 (1,3) - add clap slider end.


[Insane]
  1. 00:04:257 (5) - add whistle slider end.
  2. 00:24:828 (2) - this overlaps i don't like..


good luck
my map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/70945
Topic Starter
wmtokok

P o M u T a wrote:

Hi. m4m

[General]
  1. try add tag 'ed' and 'senya' 'ed' not need ,'senya' i would ask other modder to add


[Hard]
  1. soft-sliderslide2.wav add better your diff. so, sounds more good. add it
  2. 00:08:757 (1) - this slider seems weird. i think not need red point. also, try more beautiful blanket (2). only fix blanket (2)
  3. 00:28:900 (4,5) - remove (5) and, try this rhythm, more fit song.
    sorry...i like this rhythm
  4. 00:41:328 (1) - this is hard diff. bit far spacing imo. try reduce DS. fix
  5. 00:56:757 (1) - add finish slider head. I can hear catch symbals. fix
  6. 01:05:971 (2) - add whistle slider head. your pettern. yes
  7. 01:11:328 (1) - why add newcombo? because the song a waiting long time
  8. 01:37:257 (3) - add clap slider end. fix
  9. 01:40:900 (4,5) - same as above 00:28:900 (4,5) - . ^
  10. 02:00:185 (1) - add clap slider end. fix
  11. 02:03:185 (3) - ^ fix
  12. 02:16:900 (5) - ^ slider head. fix
  13. 02:51:614 (1) - add finish. :)i like this
  14. 02:56:757 (1) - add clap slider head. fix
  15. 03:10:900 (3) - add clap. fix
  16. 03:21:614 (2,3,4,5) - hard play imo... try reduce ds. fix
  17. 03:30:614 (4) - add clap. fix
  18. 03:31:042 (1,3) - add clap slider end. fix


[Insane]
  1. 00:04:257 (5) - add whistle slider end. done
  2. 00:24:828 (2) - this overlaps i don't like.. fix


good luck
my map: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/70945
thank P o M u T a
Hinsvar

[Minakami Yuki] wrote:

[Hinsvar's Normal]

  1. Although the star rating system is changing now, but you can also make it easier? This should be sufficiently easy, IMO. Also, I'm not quite sure about how will the star rating rule changes after the calculation change, so uh...
  2. 00:15:614 - add valume to about 55% here? Sure.
  3. 00:27:828 (1) - begin at 00:27:614 - ? ^
    ——
  4. Fine.
I fixed everything from P o m u T a's mod except for 01:01:900 (2) since there is a stronger piano at 01:03:185, and the suggestion after it because I think the current position is quite fine already.

Thanks for the mod!

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 4 Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 15400
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix)
TitleUnicode:Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix)
Artist:Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga
ArtistUnicode:森永真由美
Creator:wmtokok
Version:Hinsvar's Normal
Source:Fairy Tail
Tags:Ending 11 Hinsvar
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144,292,138185,2,0,P|204:304|260:268,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,132,139042,6,0,L|472:128,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,200,139685,2,0,B|516:276|444:300|444:300|468:312|496:344,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,368,140757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,244,141185,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,132,141614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,256,142042,1,2,0:0:0:0:
320,368,142471,6,0,P|232:336|136:356,1,180,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,200,143542,2,0,P|116:172|148:96,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,28,144185,2,0,L|328:32,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,100,145042,2,0,P|376:156|356:224,1,120,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,288,145900,6,0,P|144:296|84:272,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,208,146542,2,0,P|64:120|144:60,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,156,147614,2,0,P|332:216|428:196,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,120,148471,2,0,P|420:188|456:296,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,348,149328,6,0,L|268:360,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,212,150185,2,0,L|316:200,1,120,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,84,151042,1,2,0:0:0:0:
412,252,151471,2,0,P|448:300|516:332,2,120,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,184,152757,6,0,P|196:180|136:148,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,80,153400,2,0,P|112:164|72:264,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,352,154471,2,0,L|348:344,1,120,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,252,155328,1,2,0:0:0:0:
328,168,155757,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,96,156185,5,6,0:0:0:0:
256,192,156400,12,2,157900,0:0:0:0:
104,68,158757,6,0,P|64:180|112:292,1,240,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,171614,12,2,173328,0:0:0:0:
304,284,174185,5,8,0:0:0:0:
376,328,174400,1,0,0:0:0:0:
440,272,174614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,104,175042,6,0,P|408:48|352:36,1,120,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,68,175685,2,0,P|192:104|116:52,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,212,176757,2,0,P|88:316|204:308,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,152,178042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,288,178471,6,0,B|420:296|420:296|484:256,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,188,179114,2,0,L|504:52,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,20,179757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,88,180185,2,0,P|220:100|168:68,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,72,180828,1,0,0:0:0:0:
92,156,181042,2,0,P|96:220|68:280,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
220,360,181900,6,0,P|276:348|337:363,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,324,182543,2,0,P|388:240|424:144,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,36,183614,2,0,P|208:76|120:52,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,204,184685,2,0,L|36:264,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,120,185328,5,2,0:0:0:0:
136,252,185757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,96,186185,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,232,186614,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,136,187042,6,0,P|476:244|412:352,1,240,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,304,188328,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,140,188757,6,0,P|280:72|372:84,2,180,6|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,292,190471,2,0,L|28:300,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,364,191757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,288,192185,6,0,P|492:204|452:120,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,88,193042,2,0,B|336:72|260:108|260:108|200:76,1,180,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,104,193900,2,0,P|100:152|108:232,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,320,194757,1,2,0:0:0:0:
332,188,195185,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,72,195614,6,0,P|124:104|80:184,1,180,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,324,196685,2,0,P|228:304|288:324,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,328,197328,2,0,P|432:304|492:200,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
228,228,199042,6,0,L|104:212,2,120,2|8|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,96,200328,1,10,0:0:0:0:
484,168,200757,2,0,P|512:276|420:360,1,240,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,324,202042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
124,228,202471,6,0,P|116:168|140:104,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,56,203114,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,52,203542,2,0,L|436:40,2,60,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,128,204185,2,0,P|308:192|324:260,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,256,205042,2,0,P|148:192|116:124,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,48,205900,6,0,P|356:60|424:144,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,148,207614,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,308,208042,2,0,B|232:344|280:284|280:284|336:332|392:272,1,240,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,112,209328,6,0,P|368:80|296:80,1,120,6|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,120,209971,2,0,B|184:144|112:100|112:100|60:120,1,180,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,284,211042,1,2,0:0:0:0:
208,336,211471,1,8,0:0:0:0:
172,172,211900,1,2,0:0:0:0:
48,284,212328,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,336,212757,6,0,B|276:356|276:356|356:284|356:284|424:304,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
488,152,214042,1,8,0:0:0:0:
356,48,214471,1,4,0:0:0:0:
224,156,214900,2,0,L|236:216,2,60,8|0|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,88,215757,1,8,0:0:0:0:
20,248,216185,6,0,P|80:304|184:292,2,180,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,80,217900,2,0,B|96:68|96:68|152:96,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,144,218542,2,0,P|248:152|288:144,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,44,219185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,212,219614,6,0,P|332:288|208:256,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,144,220900,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,64,221328,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,221542,12,2,223042,0:0:0:0:
Mizukashii
here's a New BG if you want (suggestion)

i can find more if you want :)

Topic Starter
wmtokok

Mizukashii wrote:

here's a New BG if you want (suggestion)

i can find more if you want :)

thank...
but i don't need a new BG
when i need BG that i would find you :)
Mizukashii

wmtokok wrote:

Mizukashii wrote:

here's a New BG if you want (suggestion)

i can find more if you want :)

thank...
but i don't need a new BG
when i need BG that i would find you :)
ok
-Teina-
14:38 wmtokok: 我想你幫我TEST下..
14:38 tellertheworld: 都好~
14:38 wmtokok: 你NP先我晏D有時間MOD下
14:39 *tellertheworld is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/393158 fripSide - Black Bullet (TV Size)]
14:39 tellertheworld: ..
14:39 *wmtokok is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/369246 Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga - Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix)]
14:39 tellertheworld: 唔係
14:39 *tellertheworld is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/372713 fripSide - fortuna on the Sixteenth night]
14:39 tellertheworld: 佢先岩
14:39 wmtokok: K
14:39 tellertheworld: test既意思 係打一次?
14:40 wmtokok: 試打下就得
14:40 *tellertheworld is playing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/369246 Another Infinity feat. Mayumi Morinaga - Glitter (Starving Trancer Remix) [Insane]] +DoubleTime
14:40 wmtokok: 想睇下順唔順
14:40 wmtokok: .
14:42 tellertheworld: oh no......
14:43 tellertheworld: 2分鐘好似咁長咁既..
14:43 wmtokok: NO DT._.
14:48 wmtokok: LAG機= =?
14:49 tellertheworld: 545
14:51 tellertheworld: e個難度唔係咁關widescreen support
14:51 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/81LYE.jpg
14:52 wmtokok: setting錯左?
14:53 tellertheworld: 嗯
14:53 tellertheworld: 一樣冇關
14:55 wmtokok: 一陣整..
14:56 wmtokok: insane洗唔洗...
14:56 tellertheworld: 唔洗
14:57 tellertheworld: insane 關左
14:57 tellertheworld: 02:54:185 (1,2,3) -
14:57 tellertheworld: insane e 3個音快左
14:57 tellertheworld: 快左d 係指節奏 試下用反彈slider
14:59 tellertheworld: 00:13:042 (3) - 移高小小
15:00 tellertheworld: 00:42:185 (6) - 同00:42:614 (8) - 試下remove 個finish
15:00 tellertheworld: 00:42:185 (6) - e個可以保留
15:01 wmtokok: 唔想._. 本來就有音係到
15:01 tellertheworld: 講緊邊到- -?
15:02 wmtokok: (8)
15:02 tellertheworld: 咁你試下係00:42:721 - 同00:42:935 - cut 音
15:03 tellertheworld: 01:02:542 (3,4,5) - 冇喇喇有快速既3連打 好奇怪
15:03 tellertheworld: 01:16:471 (5) - 再細聲小小
15:04 tellertheworld: 01:21:614 - 加note
15:04 tellertheworld: 應該係連接... 冇斷過
15:05 tellertheworld: 01:35:328 (5) - 距離 個01:35:542 (6) - 拉遠小小
15:06 wmtokok: 嗯
15:06 tellertheworld: http://puu.sh/81MwX.jpg
15:07 tellertheworld: 01:54:935 - 加note
15:07 tellertheworld: 01:54:078 (8) - nc
15:08 wmtokok: 01:54:935 唔加.
15:08 tellertheworld: 覺得加左好d
15:08 tellertheworld: 當然 唔加都冇問題
15:09 wmtokok: 因為...本來有大串連打再加3連有D怪
15:09 tellertheworld: 拉break未到位?
15:09 tellertheworld: 02:39:614 -
15:09 wmtokok: 故意..
15:10 tellertheworld: 我就覺得01:54:828 (7) - e粒音單獨好怪- -"
15:10 tellertheworld: 個人感覺姐..
15:11 tellertheworld: 03:29:114 (8) - 覺得唔應該overlap
15:11 tellertheworld: 03:41:328 (1) -
15:11 wmtokok: 呢個我都有諗過...
15:12 tellertheworld: 係03:41:221 - 開始
15:12 wmtokok: 但係感覺分開好難打..
15:12 tellertheworld: 咁你將03:28:900 (7) - 拉到同03:28:042 (3) - 距離差唔多
15:13 tellertheworld: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1495715
15:14 wmtokok: 還OK..
15:16 wmtokok: mod到這裡吧
Topic Starter
wmtokok
Big update on 2014/4/15

1.offset(1900) ----------->(1920)
2.BG timing

:)
T_Terry_T
I came here from this modding queue, but damn: there's nothing to mod for me!
I suggest to remove the KT between 00:56:777 and 01:08:777 since the chorus is 10s or something after it, but aside from that diffs are good and cool.
Shooting a star for the great work.
Good luck with the ranking! ;)
Topic Starter
wmtokok

T_Terry_T wrote:

I came here from this modding queue, but damn: there's nothing to mod for me!
I suggest to remove the KT between 00:56:777 and 01:08:777 since the chorus is 10s or something after it, but aside from that diffs are good and cool.
Shooting a star for the great work.
Good luck with the ranking! ;)
Thank you so much,but
i can't give you a KD for you
because i don't fix anything
T_Terry_T

wmtokok wrote:

T_Terry_T wrote:

I came here from this modding queue, but damn: there's nothing to mod for me!
I suggest to remove the KT between 00:56:777 and 01:08:777 since the chorus is 10s or something after it, but aside from that diffs are good and cool.
Shooting a star for the great work.
Good luck with the ranking! ;)
Thank you so much,but
i can't give you a KD for you
because i don't fix anything
It's okay. I didn't post to receive KD! :D
Maruyu
Hey~ From my modding queue.

I'm sorry if I misunderstood but your post was a bit confusing, what I thought I read was that you needed me for Normal difficulty. So here it goes~

1- 00:01:920 (1) - you can angle it a bit better at 00:02:562 (2), just to make it a better curve
2- 00:07:062 (2,3) - It's not bad, but if you could somehow curve this into having 00:07:920 (3)'s curve flow right into 00:08:777 (4) it would look neat.
Something like http://puu.sh/8hy00.png. It felt good to me because it feels like you're doing 00:04:062 (4), then reversing the flow with 00:05:348 (1) and redoing the curve again.
3- 00:10:277 (6) - Angle this into 00:10:920 (7), and then make it a curve into 00:12:205 (1).
4- 00:18:205 (5) - You can curve that into 00:19:062 (1), and do the same with 00:20:777 (2), making it go into 00:21:420 (3).
5- 00:22:491 (1) - You don't have to, but having it curve to the other side looks better to me.
6- I'd prefer if you curved 00:25:062 (5), then repositioned 00:25:920 (1,2) to have 00:25:920 (1) blanket 00:26:562 (2).
7- 00:55:062 (2) - Curve this into 00:55:920 (3). You might also want to place it just a bit more to the left to help
8- I would prefer if you rotate 01:07:705 (2) clockwise, just to make some sort of movement to flow into 01:08:777 (1)
9- 01:10:491 (1) - Try to make this start on top of 01:08:777 (1)'s finish (just to look more pretty)
10- 01:19:062 (3,4) - You can try to adjust that like what I suggested in 2-, to have it flow into 01:20:777 (1)
11- 01:27:634 (1) - Move this a bit further down and adjust the curve to make it less tight into 01:28:491 (2)
12- 01:58:491 (1) - This looks better if you invert it vertically.
13- 02:14:777 (4) - You could try to slightly curve it a bit better.
14- 02:17:348 (3) - Maybe something symmetrical with 02:18:205 (4) would look better
15- I'd personally prefer if you didn't have this shape here 02:19:705 (2). But I guess it could stay.
16- 02:23:562 (2) - Try to perfect this curve into 02:24:205 (3)
17- 02:30:205 (2,3,4,1) - Tried to take this part and slightly move things a bit around. Turned out like this: http://puu.sh/8hzFp.png (note that the highlighted slider on the back is 02:32:777 (1), which is now starting where 02:30:205 (2) ends. You'll then want to curve 02:32:777 (1) a bit better into 02:33:420 (2).
18- 02:56:777 (3) - You could try to curve this better into 02:58:062 (4).
19- 03:10:491 (2) - Rotate clockwise to go into 03:11:777 (3).
20- 03:24:205 (4,5) - Might look better if both curves are turned to each other, because then you'll still have the pattern and 03:25:062 (5) will go into 03:25:920 (1).

Also, you should turn on epilepsy warning AND your kiai time is a bit too big. You should try to take another look at it and see where you can improve.
Yales
Hi,
Sorry, at the end of my mod, I restarted to mod the beginning of the map :x.
Also, thank you to say what you changed or not (and if possible, why you didn't).

[General]
You should, indeed, reduce the kiai time, chose the key parts.
[Insane]
  1. 00:07:491 (1,2) - The spacing is quite intense for a slow part no? I suggest you to lower it
  2. 00:08:134 (1,2) - ^
  3. 00:16:920 (5,6,7) - This triple sounds quite odd to me, I'd rather put the triple on the next slider.-> 00:17:027 (6) -> 00:17:241 - like this:
  4. 00:51:205 (3,4,5,1) - ^
  5. 00:22:491 (1) - The shape doesnt look good you should arrange the blanket.
  6. 00:23:777 (5) - same here, even if it's just a bit.
  7. 00:24:205 (1) - ^
  8. 00:39:634 (1) - 00:40:920 (13) - This is up to you, but my point of view, is: this kind of shape stream plays bad.
  9. 01:53:348 (1) - ^
  10. 00:41:562 - You shouldn't ignore the note here, or at least, arrange the spacing of this note 00:41:777 (3) -
  11. 00:55:920 (1) - 1/1 slider maybe
  12. 01:21:848 (4) - move to x:128 y:320
  13. 01:37:277 (3,4,5) - The flow is pretty bad, try something like this maybe http://puu.sh/8jKay.jpg
  14. 01:56:777 (1) - Bad flow, try this http://puu.sh/8jKgC.jpg and you should add a NC on this slider as well.
  15. 02:27:420 (6) - add a triple
  16. 03:02:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - this star doesn't look like a star. You should redraw
  17. 03:03:634 (1) - I find the slider quite ugly :( A simple shape might be better
    02:58:491 (1) - ^ and bad flow because of it
  18. 03:19:705 (2) - I don't like the flow here neither, try this maybe http://puu.sh/8jKEi.jpg
  19. 03:40:277 (2,3,4,5,6) - I understand what you wanted to do, but this plays bad though, also I suggest you to put the same spacing quite high if you want to keep the same effect.
  20. 03:07:384 (4) - remove?
  21. 01:36:205 (1) - arrange shape? http://puu.sh/8jL56.jpg
  22. 02:00:848 (7,4,5,6) - CTRL+H ; Ctrl+J
  23. 02:04:277 (2,3,4) - ^
  24. 02:09:420 (2) - Move to x216 y:216
  25. 02:09:848 (4) - ^

Ok, that's pretty much it. I love the song and the map has some good points, but sometimes your flow is destroyed by the shape of your sliders/esthetic. Indeed, you should maybe pay more intention to it, especially because it;s a slow song you can clearly see it .
I didnt't point out everything about this cause I don't want to change your "style" neither. Indeed, I kinda like this "old" style. However, this is an example of the shapes I would make.
From 02:14:348 (2) - - to 02:16:920 (3) - (the last one is the selected note in blue) I lowered the AR for the screen. http://puu.sh/8jLM5.jpg

All my sliders here are made this way and I tried to make perfect blanket as you can see here: http://puu.sh/8jM44.jpg or here http://puu.sh/8jLTC.jpg

You can ofc use this pattern if you want to. It was just an example.

So yes, that's it, pretty much.
Good luck ~
Hinsvar

Yuzu- wrote:

Hey~ From my modding queue.

I'm sorry if I misunderstood but your post was a bit confusing, what I thought I read was that you needed me for Normal difficulty. So here it goes~

1- 00:01:920 (1) - you can angle it a bit better at 00:02:562 (2), just to make it a better curve Okay.
2- 00:07:062 (2,3) - It's not bad, but if you could somehow curve this into having 00:07:920 (3)'s curve flow right into 00:08:777 (4) it would look neat.
Something like http://puu.sh/8hy00.png. It felt good to me because it feels like you're doing 00:04:062 (4), then reversing the flow with 00:05:348 (1) and redoing the curve again. Nope; the curve is too strong, and it'll break the flow.
3- 00:10:277 (6) - Angle this into 00:10:920 (7), and then make it a curve into 00:12:205 (1). Okay for this.
4- 00:18:205 (5) - You can curve that into 00:19:062 (1), and do the same with 00:20:777 (2), making it go into 00:21:420 (3). I'm sure the curve is already good enough here...
5- 00:22:491 (1) - You don't have to, but having it curve to the other side looks better to me. It'd break the flow to 00:23:134 (2).
6- I'd prefer if you curved 00:25:062 (5), then repositioned 00:25:920 (1,2) to have 00:25:920 (1) blanket 00:26:562 (2). Did stuff around here.
7- 00:55:062 (2) - Curve this into 00:55:920 (3). You might also want to place it just a bit more to the left to help Sure.
8- I would prefer if you rotate 01:07:705 (2) clockwise, just to make some sort of movement to flow into 01:08:777 (1) Played around with the nodes instead.
9- 01:10:491 (1) - Try to make this start on top of 01:08:777 (1)'s finish (just to look more pretty) Okay.
10- 01:19:062 (3,4) - You can try to adjust that like what I suggested in 2-, to have it flow into 01:20:777 (1) ^
11- 01:27:634 (1) - Move this a bit further down and adjust the curve to make it less tight into 01:28:491 (2) ^
12- 01:58:491 (1) - This looks better if you invert it vertically. ^
13- 02:14:777 (4) - You could try to slightly curve it a bit better. ^
14- 02:17:348 (3) - Maybe something symmetrical with 02:18:205 (4) would look better Nope; I intend to have a diversity in slider shape so the diff won't be boring.
15- I'd personally prefer if you didn't have this shape here 02:19:705 (2). But I guess it could stay. ^
16- 02:23:562 (2) - Try to perfect this curve into 02:24:205 (3) Okay.
17- 02:30:205 (2,3,4,1) - Tried to take this part and slightly move things a bit around. Turned out like this: http://puu.sh/8hzFp.png (note that the highlighted slider on the back is 02:32:777 (1), which is now starting where 02:30:205 (2) ends. You'll then want to curve 02:32:777 (1) a bit better into 02:33:420 (2). Did another thing.
18- 02:56:777 (3) - You could try to curve this better into 02:58:062 (4). Done.
19- 03:10:491 (2) - Rotate clockwise to go into 03:11:777 (3). ^
20- 03:24:205 (4,5) - Might look better if both curves are turned to each other, because then you'll still have the pattern and 03:25:062 (5) will go into 03:25:920 (1). The flow here will break, so...

Also, you should turn on epilepsy warning AND your kiai time is a bit too big. You should try to take another look at it and see where you can improve.
Thanks for modding!

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AIR
hi,来自m4m


[Insane]

  1. 00:01:920 (1,2) - 虽然影响不大,但还是建议头尾包好
  2. 00:04:277 (2,3,1) - 不是太美观
  3. 00:12:205 (1,2,3,4) - 有点省事的感觉。。
  4. 00:13:920 (1,3) - 3叠到1上
  5. 00:16:491 (4) - 这一部分的重音只有这里留在尾部
  6. 00:20:777 (1,2,3,4,1) - 不是规则的四边形
  7. 00:29:134 - SB闪现转换有点早,建议配合乐音往后挪到00:29:348 -
  8. 00:39:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 摆放和节奏需要重考虑
  9. 00:41:348 (2,3) - 2换成滑条压蓝线,比较好听
  10. 01:16:277 (4,5,6,7,8) - 形状不是太好看
  11. 01:32:777 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1调整到后四个中间
  12. 01:54:205 (9,10,11,12,13,1) - 减几个note比较好听
  13. 02:39:420 - 同样闪现位置往后推半拍
  14. 03:02:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - 调整下正五边形比较好看
  15. 03:29:348 (1) - ctrl+g
  16. 03:32:777 (1,2,3,4) - ↑
  17. 03:40:277 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里不适合渐离。。。


[Hinsvar's Normal]

  1. 00:04:062 (4) - 不建议忽略这个1/2音
  2. 00:24:205 (3,4,5) - 配合下00:22:491 (1,2) -
  3. 00:27:634 (1) - 转盘起始往前半拍
  4. 00:39:420 - 同闪现调整
  5. 01:12:205 (1) - 这个难度转盘有点短,建议起始在这里
  6. 03:24:848 - 加note
  7. 03:38:562 (3,4) - 配合下人声
Topic Starter
wmtokok

Yales wrote:

Hi,
Sorry, at the end of my mod, I restarted to mod the beginning of the map :x.
Also, thank you to say what you changed or not (and if possible, why you didn't).

[General]
You should, indeed, reduce the kiai time, chose the key parts. i think it is a key parts of kiai now
[Insane]
  1. 00:07:491 (1,2) - The spacing is quite intense for a slow part no? I suggest you to lower it special here ..no fix
  2. 00:08:134 (1,2) - ^ ^
  3. 00:16:920 (5,6,7) - This triple sounds quite odd to me, I'd rather put the triple on the next slider.-> 00:17:027 (6) -> 00:17:241 - like this: fix
  4. 00:51:205 (3,4,5,1) - ^ fix
  5. 00:22:491 (1) - The shape doesnt look good you should arrange the blanket. OK
  6. 00:23:777 (5) - same here, even if it's just a bit. more blanket with (4) fix
  7. 00:24:205 (1) - ^ OK
  8. 00:39:634 (1) - 00:40:920 (13) - This is up to you, but my point of view, is: this kind of shape stream plays bad. i think it is fit the song of rhythm.no fix
  9. 01:53:348 (1) - ^ ^
  10. 00:41:562 - You shouldn't ignore the note here, or at least, arrange the spacing of this note 00:41:777 (3) - not need.i use some jump prominent the rhythm. If i add this note will feel too bored no fix
  11. 00:55:920 (1) - 1/1 slider maybe You can't listen that have a piano song here? no fix
  12. 01:21:848 (4) - move to x:128 y:320 i move to X:116 Y:324 fix
  13. 01:37:277 (3,4,5) - The flow is pretty bad, try something like this maybe http://puu.sh/8jKay.jpg look good fix
  14. 01:56:777 (1) - Bad flow, try this http://puu.sh/8jKgC.jpg and you should add a NC on this slider as well. nice flow.but it skip the NC here ..fix
  15. 02:27:420 (6) - add a triple add
  16. 03:02:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - this star doesn't look like a star. You should redraw fix
  17. 03:03:634 (1) - I find the slider quite ugly :( A simple shape might be better fix
    02:58:491 (1) - ^ and bad flow because of it fix
  18. 03:19:705 (2) - I don't like the flow here neither, try this maybe http://puu.sh/8jKEi.jpg i like this no fix
  19. 03:40:277 (2,3,4,5,6) - I understand what you wanted to do, but this plays bad though, also I suggest you to put the same spacing quite high if you want to keep the same effect. fix
  20. 03:07:384 (4) - remove? fix
  21. 01:36:205 (1) - arrange shape? http://puu.sh/8jL56.jpg FIX
  22. 02:00:848 (7,4,5,6) - CTRL+H ; Ctrl+J OK
  23. 02:04:277 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
  24. 02:09:420 (2) - Move to x216 y:216 fix
  25. 02:09:848 (4) - ^ ^

Ok, that's pretty much it. I love the song and the map has some good points, but sometimes your flow is destroyed by the shape of your sliders/esthetic. Indeed, you should maybe pay more intention to it, especially because it;s a slow song you can clearly see it .
I didnt't point out everything about this cause I don't want to change your "style" neither. Indeed, I kinda like this "old" style. However, this is an example of the shapes I would make.
From 02:14:348 (2) - - to 02:16:920 (3) - (the last one is the selected note in blue) I lowered the AR for the screen.
I think your "style" maybe good.Also i should keep my "style" too.SO i use some idea in your style. thank
http://puu.sh/8jLM5.jpg

All my sliders here are made this way and I tried to make perfect blanket as you can see here: http://puu.sh/8jM44.jpg or here http://puu.sh/8jLTC.jpg

You can ofc use this pattern if you want to. It was just an example.

So yes, that's it, pretty much.
Good luck ~
thank your mod :)

ids wrote:

hi,来自m4m
HI 我在未來數天來MOD你的圖

[Insane]

  1. 00:01:920 (1,2) - 虽然影响不大,但还是建议头尾包好 OK https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538806
  2. 00:04:277 (2,3,1) - 不是太美观 美觀FIX...但(3)這個滑條不打算拉直.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538808
  3. 00:12:205 (1,2,3,4) - 有点省事的感觉。。 這里我重新做過 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538815
  4. 00:13:920 (1,3) - 3叠到1上 OK
  5. 00:16:491 (4) - 这一部分的重音只有这里留在尾部 不是在尾部... 在頭的位置
  6. 00:20:777 (1,2,3,4,1) - 不是规则的四边形 FIX
  7. 00:29:134 - SB闪现转换有点早,建议配合乐音往后挪到00:29:348 - 後退了
  8. 00:39:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - 摆放和节奏需要重考虑 的確很有啟發..可是我想到一個比你這個應該更好 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538825
  9. 00:41:348 (2,3) - 2换成滑条压蓝线,比较好听 個人覺得不太合適 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538828
  10. 01:16:277 (4,5,6,7,8) - 形状不是太好看 FIX
  11. 01:32:777 (1,2,3,4,5) - 1调整到后四个中间 不了,這里是故意做星型
  12. 01:54:205 (9,10,11,12,13,1) - 减几个note比较好听 改了跟上邊差不多的 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538837
  13. 02:39:420 - 同样闪现位置往后推半拍 這個問題不大
  14. 03:02:562 (2,3,4,5,6) - 调整下正五边形比较好看 這個樓上的MOD都有提到... 所以我已經FIX了
  15. 03:29:348 (1) - ctrl+g OK
  16. 03:32:777 (1,2,3,4) - ↑ 這個有點怪異 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538815
  17. 03:40:277 (2,3,4,5,6) - 这里不适合渐离。。。 這個樓上的MOD都有提到... 所以我已經FIX了 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1538852


THANK YOU :)

感謝你們
THANKS~

Hinsvar just see this of ids's mod

[Hinsvar's Normal]
  1. 00:04:062 (4) - 不建议忽略这个1/2音 --------------> i don't suggest that skip a 1/2
  2. 00:24:205 (3,4,5) - 配合下00:22:491 (1,2) - ---------->reference 00:22:491 (1,2) -
  3. 00:27:634 (1) - 转盘起始往前半拍 ------------>spinner should be start on 00:27:420 -
  4. 00:39:420 - 同闪现调整 ------------>SB change (i fix it)
  5. 01:12:205 (1) - 这个难度转盘有点短,建议起始在这里 -----------------> the spinner is too short in this diff
  6. 03:24:848 - 加note ----------> add note
  7. 03:38:562 (3,4) - 配合下人声 -------------> Please fit the vocal of people


thank Hinsvar :)

Update on tomorrow
Topic Starter
wmtokok
Update on 2014/4/25
all diff :)
Hinsvar

wmtokok wrote:

Hinsvar just see this of ids's mod

[Hinsvar's Normal]
  1. 00:04:062 (4) - 不建议忽略这个1/2音 --------------> i don't suggest that skip a 1/2 I don't want to make the rhythm more complex to follow the star difficulty rule...
  2. 00:24:205 (3,4,5) - 配合下00:22:491 (1,2) - ---------->reference 00:22:491 (1,2) - Sure.
  3. 00:27:634 (1) - 转盘起始往前半拍 ------------>spinner should be start on 00:27:420 - I want to follow the cymbal at 00:27:634.
  4. 00:39:420 - 同闪现调整 ------------>SB change (i fix it) Okay!
  5. 01:12:205 (1) - 这个难度转盘有点短,建议起始在这里 -----------------> the spinner is too short in this diff Eh idk, I feel that this is quite fitting enough in terms of length.
  6. 03:24:848 - 加note ----------> add note Started 03:25:062 (5) here instead.
  7. 03:38:562 (3,4) - 配合下人声 -------------> Please fit the vocal of people
    Since there's a loud instrument sound at 03:38:777, no, as it'll be awkward to leave that empty.


thank Hinsvar :)
Thanks, guys!

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20,248,216205,6,0,P|80:304|184:292,2,180,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,80,217920,2,0,B|96:68|96:68|152:96,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,144,218562,2,0,P|248:152|288:144,1,60,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,44,219205,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,212,219634,6,0,P|332:288|208:256,1,240,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,144,220920,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,64,221348,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,221562,12,2,223062,0:0:0:0:
Mint
Hey, from #modreq

[General]
Still a lot of KIAI - maybe remove the KIAI at 00:56:777 ?

[Hinsvar's Normal]
02:19:705 (2) - maybe something like this for the flow? http://puu.sh/8mXtp.jpg

[Hard]
00:05:991 (2) - move up 1 grid for a better blanket
01:01:920 (1) - move to x200,y156
01:11:455 - maybe start spinner here for vocals (you can also leave it as it is)
01:34:491 (1) - move to x68,y224
02:28:705 (3) - move to x348,y168 for spacing
02:28:920 (4) - move to x368,y280 for blanket
02:29:134 (5) - move to x460,y212 if you did the 2 above
03:01:920 (1,2,3,4) - maybe try this? http://puu.sh/8mWUD.jpg
03:25:277 (3,4,5,1) - ^ similar to above?

[Insane]
00:02:562 (3) - better blanket? move slider to x328,y328 ( http://puu.sh/8mUBv.jpg )
00:04:277 (2,3) - move to x320,y100 and x360,y200 for a better spacing and blanket
01:06:420 (5,6,7) - try this http://puu.sh/8mV0V.jpg
01:11:455 - same as hard
01:21:848 (4) - move to x120,y320
01:33:848 - add a note? gap feels a bit awkward
01:35:348 (5) - ctrl+g?
03:15:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i thought you'd make a star pattern here, maybe let the slider face the other way, and make a star http://puu.sh/8mW06.png
03:20:348 (3) - move to x412,y244 for a blanket

Nice map! - sorry for my terrible mod, hope it helped! :)
Topic Starter
wmtokok

appleeaterx wrote:

Hey, from #modreq

[General]
Still a lot of KIAI - maybe remove the KIAI at 00:56:777 ? OK remove it,i also think KIAI is more

[Hard]
00:05:991 (2) - move up 1 grid for a better blanket fix
01:01:920 (1) - move to x200,y156 fix
01:11:455 - maybe start spinner here for vocals (you can also leave it as it is) not a best here
01:34:491 (1) - move to x68,y224 fix
02:28:705 (3) - move to x348,y168 for spacing no fix
02:28:920 (4) - move to x368,y280 for blanket fix
02:29:134 (5) - move to x460,y212 if you did the 2 above not need
03:01:920 (1,2,3,4) - maybe try this? http://puu.sh/8mWUD.jpg i make other else
03:25:277 (3,4,5,1) - ^ similar to above? i move down some grid

[Insane]
00:02:562 (3) - better blanket? move slider to x328,y328 ( http://puu.sh/8mUBv.jpg ) NO FIX..i would like to keep my DS(1.2x)
00:04:277 (2,3) - move to x320,y100 and x360,y200 for a better spacing and blanket i just change other place of (3),because (2) should be blanket with (00:05:348 (1) - )
01:06:420 (5,6,7) - try this http://puu.sh/8mV0V.jpg not like it sorry ><
01:11:455 - same as hard not a best here
01:21:848 (4) - move to x120,y320 no fix,keep my DS(1.2x)
01:33:848 - add a note? gap feels a bit awkward it is my special rhythm,no fix
01:35:348 (5) - ctrl+g? NO
03:15:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - i thought you'd make a star pattern here, maybe let the slider face the other way, and make a star http://puu.sh/8mW06.png that it ok ...but i make other thing from your idea,,thank :)
03:20:348 (3) - move to x412,y244 for a blanket fix

Nice map! - sorry for my terrible mod, hope it helped! :)
Thank your mod :)
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