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44teru-k - Yami ~ Shoujo no Yume , Kyomu no Sekai ~

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Topic Starter
[Twinkle]

Oracle wrote:

这个音效让我想起很多神触的皮肤默认音效 23333
图蛮好玩的,就是有几个地方想建议一下
Another
00:29:920 (5,6) - 2分拍稍微拿开点,因为整体间距比较大所以容易读成二连 fixed
01:11:267 (1,2,3,4) - 太近了,实在难读 fixed
01:13:766 (1,2,3,4,5) - 另外我觉得这种间距其实不太有必要,因为这图大部分连打都是不太大的间距。这有点突然
01:14:920 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:21:459 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ 你对比一下一模一样的音乐01:22:997 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里的间距多少,真心没必要=-= 这些我是根据图里一些重音来放的,至于第一个,是让玩家做一个热手准备吧,毕竟这是another难度
01:48:574 - 这个空太疼了,就应该全部塞满,而且后面突如其来的妹抖火感觉也不适合。。。01:48:766 (1,2,3,4) -
01:51:362 - ^ 01:51:459 (1,2,3,4) - 最后的这一段都是满满的4分拍,个人认为都放满玩起来不是很有意思,所以就留了两个空哈

good luck then.
十分感谢mod! :)
sheela
Hello. M4M request

[Easy]
00:22:228 (1,2,3,4) - I think it's a pattern that isn't for an easy difficulty. Try to move 00:22:997 (2,3,4) like this, but it'll affect the distance snap:
00:35:305 (1) - Move it to x:212 y:320.
00:36:074 (2) - Move it to x:110 y:255.
00:36:843 (3) - Move it to x:170 y:146.
00:41:459 (4) - Add a new combo, because there's a new beat here.
00:45:305 (2,2,2) - Those slider are a bit plain. Try to make something creative. Like for instance, 00:45:305 (2) can be like a bird:
00:47:612 (2) can be a wave slider:
00:49:920 (2) can be something like that:
00:49:920 (2) - At the tail of the slider, add a finish, since in the music, it has a cymbal sound.
00:52:228 (2) - ^
00:53:766 (4) - ^
00:54:535 (5) - At the head of the slider, add a finish.
00:56:843 (1) - ^
01:02:997 (1,2,3) - Try to find yourself where to add a finish :3
01:22:997 (2) - Move it to x:492 y:304, and move 01:24:535 (3) x:256 y:356 for a better flow to 01:26:074 (4) .
01:29:151 (1) - Move it to x:120 y:340.
01:30:689 (2) - Move it to x:256 y:144.
01:32:228 (3) - Move it to x:396 y:340.
01:30:689 (2) - Move it to x:256 y:144.
01:52:228 (1,2,3,4) - Like in the first suggestion (00:22:228 (1,2,3,4) ).

[Normal]
00:26:074 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make another pattern.
00:50:689 (6) - Add a new combo, to introduce the new beat.

[Hard]
00:21:843 (1) - Move it to x:468 y:176.

That's all I can find.
Good Luck on ranking this map.
Neta
HI~ M4M here

all my mod is suggestion

[Easy]
  1. 00:22:228 (1,2,3,4) - overlapped patterns are not good for easy diff
  2. 00:36:843 (3) - move to 96, 152
  3. 01:29:151 (1,2,3,4) - better change these notes to slider maybe 2,4 or 1,3 notes
  4. 01:52:228 (1,2,3,4) - overlapped



[Normal]
  1. 00:20:689 (2) - move to 96, 280
  2. 00:26:074 (1,2,3,4) - reverse these sliders will be good
  3. 00:32:997 (2) - move to 172, 108
  4. 00:49:151 (4) - move to 144, 180



[Hard]
  1. 00:10:497 (1) - remove
  2. 00:11:843 (5) - ^
  3. 00:17:901 (7) - this pattern is weird better change
  4. 00:25:112 (2) - make sure this slider is horizontal with 1st slider
  5. 00:46:459 (3) - make this sliders reverse point watching first note http://puu.sh/769Im.jpg
  6. 00:49:535 (1) - this pattern is not good for hard diff
  7. 01:01:074 (2) - move to 312, 188



[Insane]
  1. 00:09:728 (2) - move to 144, 244
  2. 00:27:035 (2) - change is this plz http://puu.sh/769Sz.jpg
  3. 00:27:804 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/769Uj.jpg
  4. 00:28:574 (2) - ^
  5. 01:00:689 (3) - http://puu.sh/769Z6.jpg this one will be better
  6. 01:01:458 (3) - ^
  7. 01:02:227 (3) - ^



Good luck
Topic Starter
[Twinkle]

sheela901 wrote:

Hello. M4M request

[Easy]
00:22:228 (1,2,3,4) - I think it's a pattern that isn't for an easy difficulty. Try to move 00:22:997 (2,3,4) like this, but it'll affect the distance snap: yeah, fixed it in another way
remapped this part :)
00:35:305 (1) - Move it to x:212 y:320.
00:36:074 (2) - Move it to x:110 y:255.
00:36:843 (3) - Move it to x:170 y:146.
00:41:459 (4) - Add a new combo, because there's a new beat here. fixed
00:45:305 (2,2,2) - Those slider are a bit plain. Try to make something creative. all fixed
Like for instance, 00:45:305 (2) can be like a bird:
00:47:612 (2) can be a wave slider:
00:49:920 (2) can be something like that:
00:49:920 (2) - At the tail of the slider, add a finish, since in the music, it has a cymbal sound.
00:52:228 (2) - ^
00:53:766 (4) - ^
00:54:535 (5) - At the head of the slider, add a finish.
00:56:843 (1) - ^
01:02:997 (1,2,3) - Try to find yourself where to add a finish :3 finish all added
01:22:997 (2) - Move it to x:492 y:304, and move 01:24:535 (3) x:256 y:356 for a better flow to 01:26:074 (4) .
01:29:151 (1) - Move it to x:120 y:340.
01:30:689 (2) - Move it to x:256 y:144.
01:32:228 (3) - Move it to x:396 y:340.
01:30:689 (2) - Move it to x:256 y:144. remapped this part
01:52:228 (1,2,3,4) - Like in the first suggestion (00:22:228 (1,2,3,4) ).fixed

[Normal]
00:26:074 (1,2,3,4) - Try to make another pattern. fixed
00:50:689 (6) - Add a new combo, to introduce the new beat. fixed

[Hard]
00:21:843 (1) - Move it to x:468 y:176. good idea

That's all I can find.
Good Luck on ranking this map.
thx a lot :)
Topic Starter
[Twinkle]

Neta wrote:

HI~ M4M here

all my mod is suggestion

[Easy]
  1. 00:22:228 (1,2,3,4) - overlapped patterns are not good for easy diff yeah fixed increase DS
  2. 00:36:843 (3) - move to 96, 152 remapped these
  3. 01:29:151 (1,2,3,4) - better change these notes to slider maybe 2,4 or 1,3 notes fixed
  4. 01:52:228 (1,2,3,4) - overlapped
remapped


[Normal]
  1. 00:20:689 (2) - move to 96, 280 fixed
  2. 00:26:074 (1,2,3,4) - reverse these sliders will be good yeah fixed
  3. 00:32:997 (2) - move to 172, 108 fixed
  4. 00:49:151 (4) - move to 144, 180
fixed


[Hard]
  1. 00:10:497 (1) - remove
  2. 00:11:843 (5) - ^
  3. 00:17:901 (7) - this pattern is weird better change fixed
  4. 00:25:112 (2) - make sure this slider is horizontal with 1st slider change their shapes
  5. 00:46:459 (3) - make this sliders reverse point watching first note http://puu.sh/769Im.jpg
  6. 00:49:535 (1) - this pattern is not good for hard diff fixed
  7. 01:01:074 (2) - move to 312, 188
fixed


[Insane]
  1. 00:09:728 (2) - move to 144, 244 fixed
  2. 00:27:035 (2) - change is this plz http://puu.sh/769Sz.jpg
  3. 00:27:804 (2) - ^ http://puu.sh/769Uj.jpg
  4. 00:28:574 (2) - ^ im not quite sure your meaning ;w;
  5. 01:00:689 (3) - http://puu.sh/769Z6.jpg this one will be better
  6. 01:01:458 (3) - ^
  7. 01:02:227 (3) - ^ some kind of overlap is necessary in insane :D



Good luck
thx!
ts8zs
[Yuki]
00:07:035 (2) - Ctrl+G
>00:07:228 (3) - ^ better flow to 00:07:612 (1) -
01:03:766 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1359668 better flow to 01:04:535 (1) -
01:28:766 (8,9,10,11) - same as 01:27:228 (8,9,10,11) -
01:58:766 - try 0.5x?
>01:57:997 (5) - thy other shape
Rating:★★★★★ perfect map
[Another]
hitnormal sounds not fit
00:19:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why do this,And this partten didn't appear other parts
00:51:844 (7) - Ctrl+G will have a better flow
01:47:997 (1,2,3) - This stopped no sense
01:50:689 (1,2,3) - ^
Rating:★★★☆☆ Still have improve space
[Insane]
hitnormal sounds not fit
00:21:459 (1) - blanket 2
00:30:305 (4) - compare to 00:29:535 -
00:31:266 (1) - Ctrl+G for easy to miss
00:37:420 (10) - blanket
00:38:382 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is use in another,not fit for such an insane
00:51:459 (5,6,7,8) - ^
00:52:997 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:02:612 (5,6) - change a partten
01:20:689 (1) - NC
01:46:074 - Stream have been used,you should take a care of diff spread.
Rating:★★☆☆☆ Needs more work
[Hard]
00:09:151 (3) - blanket
00:14:247 (4,5,6,7) - too hard
00:19:920 (1) - copy from 2
00:23:574 (2) - later 1/2
00:46:939 (5) - del
Rating:★★☆☆☆ Needs more work in blanket and follow the music
[Normal]
00:13:766 (1,2) - blanket
00:19:920 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - This is hard to play for hid
00:40:689 (6,1,2) - this seems not feeling good
00:50:689 (1,2) - try to reduce 4 reverse
Rating:★★☆☆☆ too many straight
[Easy]
00:10:689 (3) - not feeling good
00:14:535 (2) - don't make a head to a end
00:39:920 (3,4) - too narrow,it could be like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1359736
00:47:612 (2) - ^
01:46:074 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is hard to play for hid
01:55:305 (5) - NC
Rating:★★☆☆☆ try to make slider more pretty:3
Topic Starter
[Twinkle]
[Another]
hitnormal sounds not fit
00:19:920 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Why do this,And this partten didn't appear other parts
00:51:844 (7) - Ctrl+G will have a better flow no
01:47:997 (1,2,3) - This stopped no sense no
01:50:689 (1,2,3) - ^
Rating:★★★☆☆ Still have improve space
[Insane]
hitnormal sounds not fit
00:21:459 (1) - blanket 2
00:30:305 (4) - compare to 00:29:535 -
00:31:266 (1) - Ctrl+G for easy to miss no
00:37:420 (10) - blanket
00:38:382 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - This is use in another,not fit for such an insane the space is pretty close though
00:51:459 (5,6,7,8) - ^
00:52:997 (5,6,7,8) - ^
01:02:612 (5,6) - change a partten fixed
01:20:689 (1) - NC no
01:46:074 - Stream have been used,you should take a care of diff spread. yeah
Rating:★★☆☆☆ Needs more work
[Hard]
00:09:151 (3) - blanket
00:14:247 (4,5,6,7) - too hard
00:19:920 (1) - copy from 2 fixed
00:23:574 (2) - later 1/2 fixed
00:46:939 (5) - del
Rating:★★☆☆☆ Needs more work in blanket and follow the music
[Normal]
00:13:766 (1,2) - blanket
00:19:920 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3) - This is hard to play for hid
00:40:689 (6,1,2) - this seems not feeling good fixed
00:50:689 (1,2) - try to reduce 4 reverse
Rating:★★☆☆☆ too many straight
[Easy]
00:10:689 (3) - not feeling good
00:14:535 (2) - don't make a head to a end
00:39:920 (3,4) - too narrow,it could be like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1359736
00:47:612 (2) - ^
01:46:074 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is hard to play for hid
01:55:305 (5) - NC fixed
Rating:★★☆☆☆ try to make slider more pretty:3[/quote]

thank you for modding!
Ikaros_F
Hi,Twinkle
昨晚说好了今天给你的mod

[Yuki's Extra]
00:11:843 (3,4,5,6) - 其中00:11:939 (4,5) - 交换一下位置会比较适合吧
00:28:382 (4,5,6) - 不把它往左移动一点,让00:28:574 (6) - 的位置和00:27:420 (9) - 的位置一样嘛
00:10:305 (3) - 00:10:497 (4) - 把这2个滑条的头尾都交换下位置可能flow会顺一点吧
00:25:689 (2) - 滑条头是不是多了一个finish呢
抱歉找不出什么了._.
这难度简直能玩

[Another]
00:17:228 (2) - ctrl+G会顺一些吧
00:44:536 (1,2) - 这里感觉读图不方便,因为ds的原因,建议→http://puu.sh/77j8L
00:50:113 (2,3,4) - 同上,感觉这个距离的跳跃在这里不太合适欸
01:13:382 (1) - 这里滑条弄减速感觉不太好,建议还是原来的bpm但是弄成中间一堆红点的滑条,像这样→http://puu.sh/77jl5(我画的不好看啦
01:25:689 (1) - 这里也和上面那条一样
玩的时候感觉有点地方空的时间有点长会感觉不连贯
比如00:36:651 (6,7,8,9,10) - ,所以我建议这么改一下→http://puu.sh/77jTJ

[Insane]
感觉AR9会好一点._.
00:37:420 (10) - 取消滑条回转的箭头,在00:37:805处加上一个circle在该滑条头处会不会有意思一些呢
00:40:305 (4) - 感觉这个放在下面太乱了,所以我建议还是移到3的上面吧→http://puu.sh/77kf4
01:22:612 (1) - 其实感觉这里不用NC啦

[Hard]
01:22:612 (4) - 感觉这个弹来弹去时间太长了,建议→http://puu.sh/77kEM
01:27:035 (2) - 可以吧这个note去掉
00:50:689 (1,2,3) - 把这3个的ds还是弄一致吧,把中间的2往左边移动一些

抱歉normal和easy找不出什么东西

就这样了,祝你好运 :):):)
顺便射一发
Topic Starter
[Twinkle]

Ikaros_F wrote:

Hi,Twinkle
昨晚说好了今天给你的mod

[Another]
00:17:228 (2) - ctrl+G会顺一些吧 fixed
00:44:536 (1,2) - 这里感觉读图不方便,因为ds的原因,建议→http://puu.sh/77j8L 嗯,DS加大了
00:50:113 (2,3,4) - 同上,感觉这个距离的跳跃在这里不太合适欸 这里有前面那么多的来回的缓冲读图肯定是没问题啦
01:13:382 (1) - 这里滑条弄减速感觉不太好,建议还是原来的bpm但是弄成中间一堆红点的滑条,像这样→http://puu.sh/77jl5(我画的不好看啦 减速的确是不妥,改了。
01:25:689 (1) - 这里也和上面那条一样 fixed
玩的时候感觉有点地方空的时间有点长会感觉不连贯
比如00:36:651 (6,7,8,9,10) - ,所以我建议这么改一下→http://puu.sh/77jTJ 这里我那种摆放已经十分跳了,再加note就太难了。

[Insane]
感觉AR9会好一点._. 好!就AR9了
00:37:420 (10) - 取消滑条回转的箭头,在00:37:805处加上一个circle在该滑条头处会不会有意思一些呢 前面已经有很多note了,再加不太好
00:40:305 (4) - 感觉这个放在下面太乱了,所以我建议还是移到3的上面吧→http://puu.sh/77kf4
01:22:612 (1) - 其实感觉这里不用NC啦 的确,那里我加错了orz

[Hard]
01:22:612 (4) - 感觉这个弹来弹去时间太长了,建议→http://puu.sh/77kEM 好的
01:27:035 (2) - 可以吧这个note去掉 这后面还是有鼓声的虽然不是太响,去了不是太好
00:50:689 (1,2,3) - 把这3个的ds还是弄一致吧,把中间的2往左边移动一些 ;w;这个我自己都没发现fixed

抱歉normal和easy找不出什么东西

就这样了,祝你好运 :):):)
顺便射一发
Koiyuki

ts8zs wrote:

[Yuki]
00:07:035 (2) - Ctrl+G nope
>00:07:228 (3) - ^ better flow to 00:07:612 (1) -
01:03:766 (1,2,3,4) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1359668 better flow to 01:04:535 (1) -
01:28:766 (8,9,10,11) - same as 01:27:228 (8,9,10,11) - 故意的
01:58:766 - try 0.5x? 动了点
>01:57:997 (5) - thy other shape 没想法,结尾就“善良”点了

Ikaros_F wrote:

[Yuki's Extra]
00:11:843 (3,4,5,6) - 其中00:11:939 (4,5) - 交换一下位置会比较适合吧 这岂不是更鬼畜
00:28:382 (4,5,6) - 不把它往左移动一点,让00:28:574 (6) - 的位置和00:27:420 (9) - 的位置一样嘛 这里整段梗改了下
00:10:305 (3) - 00:10:497 (4) - 把这2个滑条的头尾都交换下位置可能flow会顺一点吧 没问题 我打过
00:25:689 (2) - 滑条头是不是多了一个finish呢 是多了,已去
抱歉找不出什么了._.
这难度简直能玩 :roll: 能玩
BG又换了?
劳烦你改了……
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166,287,108189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
202,312,108285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,343,108382,5,0,0:0:0:0:
309,354,108478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
366,343,108574,1,0,0:0:0:0:
410,305,108670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
421,271,108766,5,8,0:0:0:0:
413,235,108862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,205,108959,21,0,0:0:0:0:
424,170,109055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
439,123,109151,5,0,0:0:0:0:
392,138,109247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
343,130,109343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
297,114,109439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
274,89,109535,5,8,0:0:0:0:
255,60,109631,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,75,109728,5,0,0:0:0:0:
195,56,109824,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,77,109920,22,0,L|142:125,1,49.5000015106202,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,72,110112,2,0,L|78:23,1,49.5000015106202
112,149,110305,6,0,L|103:197,1,49.5000015106202,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
31,144,110497,2,0,L|39:95,1,49.5000015106202
73,221,110689,5,0,0:0:0:0:
112,231,110785,1,0,0:0:0:0:
151,241,110881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
190,251,110977,1,0,0:0:0:0:
225,298,111074,5,8,0:0:0:0:
264,287,111170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
303,276,111266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,265,111362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
393,282,111459,22,0,L|456:298,1,53.9999983520508
366,193,111651,2,0,L|418:206,1,53.9999983520508
339,104,111843,2,0,L|402:120,1,53.9999983520508,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,15,112035,2,0,L|364:28,1,53.9999983520508
251,84,112228,5,0,0:0:0:0:
199,97,112324,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,81,112420,1,0,0:0:0:0:
113,41,112516,1,0,0:0:0:0:
85,63,112612,5,8,0:0:0:0:
59,87,112708,1,0,0:0:0:0:
77,119,112805,5,0,0:0:0:0:
74,154,112901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
57,185,112997,21,0,0:0:0:0:
107,214,113093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
163,200,113189,5,0,0:0:0:0:
213,229,113285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
270,217,113382,5,8,0:0:0:0:
309,206,113478,1,0,0:0:0:0:
342,228,113574,5,0,0:0:0:0:
381,217,113670,1,0,0:0:0:0:
398,177,113766,21,0,0:0:0:0:
401,123,113862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
376,74,113958,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,42,114054,1,0,0:0:0:0:
278,34,114151,5,8,0:0:0:0:
225,45,114247,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,55,114343,1,0,0:0:0:0:
119,66,114439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
62,79,114535,6,0,L|-12:56,1,58.4999973220826
120,150,114728,2,0,L|175:167,1,58.4999973220826
55,208,114920,2,0,L|-19:185,1,58.4999973220826,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,279,115113,2,0,L|168:296,1,58.4999973220826
266,324,115305,5,12,0:0:0:0:
266,324,115401,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,324,115497,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,324,115593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
266,324,115689,2,0,L|367:306,1,90,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
442,151,116074,21,12,0:0:0:0:
442,151,116170,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,151,116266,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,151,116362,1,0,0:0:0:0:
442,151,116459,2,0,L|306:172,1,107.999996704102,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
113,279,116843,5,12,0:0:0:0:
113,279,116939,1,0,0:0:0:0:
113,279,117035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
113,279,117131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
113,279,117228,2,0,L|251:256,1,125.999996154785,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,106,117612,5,12,0:0:0:0:
290,106,117709,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,106,117805,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,106,117901,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,106,117997,2,0,P|168:156|113:276,1,270,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,263,118766,22,0,P|83:127|278:28,1,360,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
CPU_old
[General]
除了那个GD外 音效可以找到更适合的

[Easy]
感觉太分散 规划一个能组成有趣形状的紧凑路线会更好

[Normal]
横平竖直的地方可以加倾斜角 直滑条中间也可以加一个很细微的弧度

[Hard]
00:13:382 (7) - 改为一个圈留出了1/2拍的停顿
00:16:939 (4) - 去除 00:17:035 (5) - 改为3个圈
00:51:843 (4) - 改为一个1/2拍的滑条
00:53:382 (4) - 改为一个3/4拍的滑条或者多重复一个1/4拍
01:24:343 (3) - 重复太多了
01:25:689 (6,7) - 略感突兀

[Insane]
00:39:727 (6,1) - insane建议减小间距
00:40:689 (6) 与 00:40:882 (7) 与 00:41:074 (8) - 可以Ctrl+G

[Another]
00:36:843 (7,10) - Ctrl+G
00:37:035 (8,9) - ^ 会更有趣
00:56:266 (8) 与 00:56:459 (9,10,11) - 建议减小间距
01:47:228 (1) - 在Grid size: tiny下向右平移6个单位长度
01:47:420 (3) - ^
01:55:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - selection centre 逆时针旋转5度 Grid size: tiny下向上平移2个单位长度
01:56:074 (1,2,3,4,5) - selection centre 逆时针旋转5度
01:48:766 (1,2,3,4,1) - 建议减小间距
01:51:459 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

曲子非常棒!祝早日rank
Flappy Bird
[General]
  1. Maybe name your diffs like this:
    Easy - Beginner
    Normal - Standard
    Hard - Advanced
    Insane - Hyper
    Another - Another
    Extra - Extra


[Easy]
  1. 00:10:689 (3) - This slider looks ugly, try making something like this? http://puu.sh/77J0K.JPG
  2. 00:22:228 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is a bit ugly and it looks like you just threw that slider randomly in map, try making something like this? http://puu.sh/77JtT.JPG
  3. 00:36:843 (3) - This slider is ugly, try making it a bit neater
  4. 00:53:766 (4) - x:216 y:128 - Put it here because it can follow the flow
  5. 01:02:228 - Note here?
  6. 01:25:305 (1,2) - You made good blanket here, so why don't you make blankets on 01:22:228 (2,3) and 01:23:766 (4,5) ?
  7. 01:28:382 (1) - NC
  8. 01:29:151 (1) - Remove NC


[Normal]
  1. 00:20:305 - So you followed the rythm in the beginning and now here is an emptiness, try putting a note here, this is just my opinion, feel free to ignore it!
  2. 00:37:420 (5) - This overlap is kinda tricky, try putting this note somewhere else
  3. 00:41:459 (1) - Overlapping sliders isn't recommended for anyone, anywhere, anyhow. This can trick HD users, it's not so much of a problem if you can't get it somewhere better. If you like it, just leave it as it is
  4. 01:04:535 (2) - x:68 y:160 - Put this slider here to make a perfect blanket
  5. 01:58:766 (1) - Add finish here
  6. This diff is better than easy, but some patterns are crazy and don't make sense, also SV is a bit too high for normal but okay.


[Hard]
  1. 00:10:689 (2,3,4) - Do not overlap sliders like this!
  2. 00:12:035 (1) - Remove this?
  3. 00:47:612 (7) - NC
  4. 00:48:766 (1) - Remove NC, also don't overlap
  5. 01:32:228 (3) - NC here because it's new rythm
  6. 01:32:997 (8) - ^
  7. Some patterns are crazy, again. Fix some of them, try looking into similar beatmap's patterns ( LOOK for ranked diffs )


I couldn't find any mistakes in next diffs, they were better than previous ones, I think you are better at making insanes, lunatic diffs than easy ones!
GOOD LUCK
Topic Starter
[Twinkle]

CPU wrote:

[General]
除了那个GD外 音效可以找到更适合的 我会去试着找找看合适的N-N

[Easy]
感觉太分散 规划一个能组成有趣形状的紧凑路线会更好

[Normal]
横平竖直的地方可以加倾斜角 直滑条中间也可以加一个很细微的弧度

[Hard]
00:13:382 (7) - 改为一个圈留出了1/2拍的停顿 不是很好把,前面已经有3个note了
00:16:939 (4) - 去除 00:17:035 (5) - 改为3个圈 不是很好
00:51:843 (4) - 改为一个1/2拍的滑条 no
00:53:382 (4) - 改为一个3/4拍的滑条或者多重复一个1/4拍 ^
01:24:343 (3) - 重复太多了 减少2个重复增加2个note
01:25:689 (6,7) - 略感突兀 去除了连打中的一个note

[Insane]
00:39:727 (6,1) - insane建议减小间距
00:40:689 (6) 与 00:40:882 (7) 与 00:41:074 (8) - 可以Ctrl+G 这个part已经比较难了,不打算再增加难度

[Another]
00:36:843 (7,10) - Ctrl+G 这样一改就太难读了啦
00:37:035 (8,9) - ^ 会更有趣 这比较跳了就不用再反向就太难了
00:56:266 (8) 与 00:56:459 (9,10,11) - 建议减小间距 这里应该没有问题,找的test play都能碾压这里
01:47:228 (1) - 在Grid size: tiny下向右平移6个单位长度 好!
01:47:420 (3) - ^
01:55:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - selection centre 逆时针旋转5度 Grid size: tiny下向上平移2个单位长度
01:56:074 (1,2,3,4,5) - selection centre 逆时针旋转5度
01:48:766 (1,2,3,4,1) - 建议减小间距 在想是不是要换个pattern
01:51:459 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

曲子非常棒!祝早日rank
Topic Starter
[Twinkle]

Flappy Bird wrote:

[General]
  1. Maybe name your diffs like this: OK
    Easy - Beginner
    Normal - Standard
    Hard - Advanced
    Insane - Hyper
    Another - Another
    Extra - Extra


[Easy]
  1. 00:10:689 (3) - This slider looks ugly, try making something like this? http://puu.sh/77J0K.JPG I think this one is pretty like the one on your picture
  2. 00:22:228 (1,2,3,4) - This pattern is a bit ugly and it looks like you just threw that slider randomly in map, try making something like this? http://puu.sh/77JtT.JPG yeah i know what u are saying but i dont want to change it.
  3. 00:36:843 (3) - This slider is ugly, try making it a bit neater fixed
  4. 00:53:766 (4) - x:216 y:128 - Put it here because it can follow the flow
  5. 01:02:228 - Note here?
  6. 01:25:305 (1,2) - You made good blanket here, so why don't you make blankets on 01:22:228 (2,3) and 01:23:766 (4,5) ? i think these sliders are just not long enough for me to make it
  7. 01:28:382 (1) - NC OK
  8. 01:29:151 (1) - Remove NC OK


[Normal]
  1. 00:20:305 - So you followed the rythm in the beginning and now here is an emptiness, try putting a note here, this is just my opinion, feel free to ignore it!
  2. 00:37:420 (5) - This overlap is kinda tricky, try putting this note somewhere else yeah i put it before the slider
  3. 00:41:459 (1) - Overlapping sliders isn't recommended for anyone, anywhere, anyhow. This can trick HD users, it's not so much of a problem if you can't get it somewhere better. If you like it, just leave it as it is Ok fixed
  4. 01:04:535 (2) - x:68 y:160 - Put this slider here to make a perfect blanket OK
  5. 01:58:766 (1) - Add finish here fixed
  6. This diff is better than easy, but some patterns are crazy and don't make sense, also SV is a bit too high for normal but okay.


[Hard]
  1. 00:10:689 (2,3,4) - Do not overlap sliders like this! fixed
  2. 00:12:035 (1) - Remove this? it is fine
  3. 00:47:612 (7) - NC
  4. 00:48:766 (1) - Remove NC, also don't overlap OK
  5. 01:32:228 (3) - NC here because it's new rythm OK
  6. 01:32:997 (8) - ^ OK
  7. Some patterns are crazy, again. Fix some of them, try looking into similar beatmap's patterns ( LOOK for ranked diffs )


I couldn't find any mistakes in next diffs, they were better than previous ones, I think you are better at making insanes, lunatic diffs than easy ones!
GOOD LUCK
wonders
额,我不会mod串图诶QAQ

说一下another的几个我认为的问题吧
首先打起来感觉不错
第一是串的间距跳跃太大了点,一会很大一会很小,应该控制在一个一定的范围内,参见extra(串的间距很影响难度),我不知道你如何理解串的间距的,像00:12:997这种对我来说是适度,像00:30:689这种虽然间距差不多,但是这个形状偏难,所以推荐小一点,像00:44:920后面这几段转来转去的又感觉没啥意思。
第二是感觉slider拉的不太好看
第三是图的整体感不是很强,虽然每一段都贴近原曲,但是前后感觉没啥联系,没有一个贯穿始终的设计或者逻辑在里面(虽然这个很绕,但是个人感觉很重要,这个让你的图看起来更像一张完整的图,那些有经验的mapper都是以此来判断你的图的第一印象的)。
胡诌了一段,就不要KD了。
Topic Starter
[Twinkle]

wonders wrote:

额,我不会mod串图诶QAQ

说一下another的几个我认为的问题吧
首先打起来感觉不错
第一是串的间距跳跃太大了点,一会很大一会很小,应该控制在一个一定的范围内,参见extra(串的间距很影响难度),我不知道你如何理解串的间距的,像00:12:997这种对我来说是适度,像00:30:689这种虽然间距差不多,但是这个形状偏难,所以推荐小一点,像00:44:920后面这几段转来转去的又感觉没啥意思。 这张图是156BPM,不是很高,所以我放了一些间距比较打的连打,像开始这个间距只是让玩家稍微适应一下的。后面又根据一些突然加重的节拍和放了一些大间距的连打,当然最后一段是我的创新,据我所知现在已经有比较多的玩家可以单指160bpm的连打。
第二是感觉slider拉的不太好看前面那段对称的地方的确是要改
第三是图的整体感不是很强,虽然每一段都贴近原曲,但是前后感觉没啥联系,没有一个贯穿始终的设计或者逻辑在里面(虽然这个很绕,但是个人感觉很重要,这个让你的图看起来更像一张完整的图,那些有经验的mapper都是以此来判断你的图的第一印象的)。这个其实我不是很明白,大概就是有个贯穿全曲的通用梗?orz
胡诌了一段,就不要KD了。有帮助就给啦
本来就想叫得IRC一下的,结果写了这么多。我回去要好好考虑一下图整体性的问题了。
十分感谢mod :)
10crystalmask01
Ello, mod from queue! 8-)
[General]
*Combo colours are not all the same if your mapset.
[Another]
00:34:535 (6) - NC?
01:02:997 (1) - Add finish.
[Hyper]
00:43:766 (6) - NC
01:21:459 (17) - ^?
[Advanced]
00:29:920 (4) - Could have another reverse on it. That gap at 00:30:497 feels a bit awkward.
00:56:074 (3,1,2,3) - Isn't stacked properly, was this intentional?
01:25:689 (8) - NC?
[Standard]
00:29:151 (5) - NC
01:06:074 (3) - ^
01:24:535 (1,2) - Should also be stacked, so it follows the similar flow with the previous flow style of objects 01:21:459 (1,2) - .
01:33:766 (5) - NC
01:56:074 (2) - Try to shift this so that it's tail is perfectly stacked under 01:53:766 (3) - 's head. *You may need to move 01:55:305 (1) - a bit too.

[Beginner]
00:07:612 (1) - Add finish on the head?
00:19:920 (1) - ^
00:26:074 (1) - You could make this slider blanket 00:28:382 (2) - , something like this:

This is really optional though.
00:32:228 (1) - Add finish
00:40:689 (4,1) - Slightly too close to each other.
00:44:535 (1) - Add finish
00:47:612 (2,2) - You can still try to make these two sliders blanket each other better, if you want. It'll get rid of this funny spot:

00:53:766 (4) - NC, because it's on the long white tickmark (which indicates a new rhythm cycle)
01:21:459 (1) - Add finish
01:30:689 (4) - NC
01:33:766 (1) - Add finish

Very nice mapset. Take a star!
Good luck.
Topic Starter
[Twinkle]

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod from queue! 8-)
[General]
*Combo colours are not all the same if your mapset.
[Another]
00:34:535 (6) - NC? 00:34:920 (1) - added here
01:02:997 (1) - Add finish.
[Hyper]
00:43:766 (6) - NC OK
01:21:459 (17) - ^? OK
[Advanced]
00:29:920 (4) - Could have another reverse on it. That gap at 00:30:497 feels a bit awkward. fixed by adding a note
00:56:074 (3,1,2,3) - Isn't stacked properly, was this intentional? thx for reminding, not intentional, fixed
01:25:689 (8) - NC?
[Standard]
00:29:151 (5) - NC OK
01:06:074 (3) - ^ OK
01:24:535 (1,2) - Should also be stacked, so it follows the similar flow with the previous flow style of objects 01:21:459 (1,2) - . fixed
01:33:766 (5) - NC OK
01:56:074 (2) - Try to shift this so that it's tail is perfectly stacked under 01:53:766 (3) - 's head. *You may need to move 01:55:305 (1) - a bit too. hum, i dont think it is necessary to do so.

[Beginner]
00:07:612 (1) - Add finish on the head? fixed
00:19:920 (1) - ^ hum, i dont think it is necessary to do so.
00:26:074 (1) - You could make this slider blanket 00:28:382 (2) - , something like this: hum, i dont think it is necessary to do so.

This is really optional though. why not,its a good idea
00:32:228 (1) - Add finish fixed
00:40:689 (4,1) - Slightly too close to each other. fixed
00:44:535 (1) - Add finish fixed
00:47:612 (2,2) - You can still try to make these two sliders blanket each other better, if you want. It'll get rid of this funny spot: fixed

00:53:766 (4) - NC, because it's on the long white tickmark (which indicates a new rhythm cycle) fixed
01:21:459 (1) - Add finish fixed
01:30:689 (4) - NC fixed
01:33:766 (1) - Add finish
fixed

Very nice mapset. Take a star!
Good luck.
thank you very much for modding! great help for me.
Pretty Rhythm
Hi.
From My 'Unlimit Modding Queue for Instrumental song'

[Beginer]
00:19:920 (1) - DS?
00:24:535 (4) - ^
00:25:689 (5) - Add Note
00:41:459 (1) - DS?
00:59:151 (4) - ^
00:59:151 (4) - ^
01:07:612 (1) - ^
01:56:843 (3) - ^

[standard]
00:13:382 (4) - Add clap
00:53:766 (1) - stack
01:14:920 (1,2,3,4,1) - .... too far
01:21:459 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
01:48:766 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:51:459 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Extra]
00:33:093 (4,6) - Remove whitsle
00:34:632 (7,9) - ^
00:56:459 (1,2,3,4) - hard to read
01:01:843 (2,3,4,5,1) - .... too far

GL
RandF
From my queue~
thank you for M4M!

[General]
  1. Title: 閻~少女ノ夢、虚無ノ世界~

[Beginner]
  1. 00:12:997 (1,2) - I prefer symmetric patttern
  2. 01:23:766 (4,5) - you should remap for smoother cursor moving

[Standard]
  1. too high SV, imo
  2. 00:37:997- add a note

[Advaced]
  1. 00:26:074 (1) - how about stack on 00:24:343 (3) - ?
  2. 01:54:920- add a note?

[Hyper]
  1. 00:17:612 (1) - Ctrl+G?
  2. 00:30:497- add a note
  3. 00:53:574 (8,1) - I prefer to avoid this overlap
  4. 01:09:151 (1,2) - circle x 5 is better

[Another]
  1. HD +1
  2. 00:53:766 (1,2,3,4) - increase DS more
  3. 01:10:689 (7) - NC
  4. 01:12:228 (3) - ^

[Yuki's Extra]
  1. 00:56:074 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - cool!
  2. nothing to say~ ;)


~Good Luck~
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