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the muzu is a bit hard but I think it would be fine because the oni is also a harder one

Bubbled!

: p/3349369/
posted
Going to check it in a few days if isn't already ranked then.
Pleeeeas I wanna do it
posted

Desperate-kun wrote:

Going to check it in a few days if isn't already ranked then.
Pleeeeas I wanna do it
Okay, Ill leave it in your hand then xD

Thanks a lot!
posted
Sorry, but I have to pop your bubble for the following issues. These are must-fixes.

Easy

03:36:860 (1) - The recovery time after this spinner is too low. Referring to this general consense:

Garven wrote:

General rule of thumb: Easy - Full measure (4 beats). Each difficulty increment up, halve it. So Normal would be about 2 beats, Hard 1 beat, Insane and up whatever. Depending on BPM of course. Kind of a baseline for that is around 160 bpm. New players need A LOT of time to recover from spinners because they're going to spin wildly and lose their cursor position.
you must have around a full measure of recovery time here. It doesn't have to be exactly a full measure but 3/2 is definitely too low.
03:45:318 (1) - Same applies here.

Normal

00:47:492 (1) - Read what I wrote in the Easy. You need atleast 2 beats of recovery time after a spinner in Normal.
01:26:398 (1) - Same.
01:38:240 (1) - Same.
02:06:996 (1) - Same.
03:58:639 (1) - Same.

Here comes the rest of my recheck:


  • General


  1. Add tag: turunen, if you already include Tarja to the tags you can also add the surename.

  • Easy


  1. This Easy is really, really tough. Due to the big amount of 3/2-gaps and 1/2-stacks in the last section, a lower OD, like OD 1.5, is absolutely necessary.
  2. 00:08:374 (1) - I don't know if I already mentioned it last time, but this would sound much better as an 1/2-slider. You also use 1/2-sliders at the end so I don't see the reason why you would avoid it here.
  3. 04:13:863 (1,2) - The movement is a bit too sharp for the easiest diff. Change it like this: http://puu.sh/bBsCv/af8745890f.jpg It would be easier to understand for the newbies.

  • Sieg's Normal


  1. I get that you don't want to make your combos shorter, but then atleast turn the drain down. HP 3.5 would still be average for a Normal. Also, OD 3.5 would be nice, because you are using very many 1/2-objects and the spread would improve from this change.
  2. 00:49:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Anitjumps like this are not appropriate for a Normal, especially since you have been using stacked 1/2 as well. Please, change it to regular stacks.
  3. 01:07:791 (1,2) - Don't use 1/1-antijumps when you used them for 1/2 before, and even if you fixed it, this one still needs to be changed imo. It's not acceptable for a Normal difficulty. Either stack them completely, or preferably, space them out.
  4. 02:30:678 (5,6) - The overlap looks really messy and doesn't fit into a Normal difficulty. Something more simple like: http://puu.sh/bBtdO/04a014a5e0.jpg would fit much better.
  5. Overall, most aspects improved since I modded it before, but a few didn't, and I'm very serious about these this time. I consider everything I wrote as a criteria for me to rebubble this, because even though this is a harder Normal, the stacking issues as well as the overlap are not okay for me. Of course I can't force you, but I just can't reconcile this with my conscience. There are a few other overlaps in this map that bother me a bit, but they should be okay..

  • Shiro's Insane


  1. 00:32:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I remember this had some fancy hitsounding when I modded it - Now it sounds very empty o.o Please, change it back.
  2. 01:52:194 (2,3,4) - The regular spacing after the jump really breaks the flow for me. It goes in the same direction as the jump, so it just feels unnatural to stop moving like this. Maybe you could change it like this: http://puu.sh/bBy7P/1ce80b96ad.jpg
  3. 01:53:040 (5,6,1) - Same. A nice solution would be to change the order of notes from the following square, so the pattern looks like this: http://puu.sh/bByb0/8ff4d3f35b.jpg
  4. 02:45:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sure you don't want to make this a perfect square?

Call me back when the important issues are fixed. Please, give good reasoning for all that you deny. Thank you :)
posted
It's called manual stacking not antijumps, you may learn the difference from perfect stacking by testing this moment on actual play. :3

manual stack


perfect stack


other things all changed\fixed

osu file format v13

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256,207,249423,2,0,B|254:158|254:158|257:124|257:124|256:83,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
295,27,250057,2,0,P|328:36|372:21,1,60,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,41,250480,2,0,P|432:101|477:135,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,128,251115,2,0,L|410:205,1,60,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
417,331,251749,1,10,0:0:0:0:
285,272,252172,6,0,P|269:230|269:176,2,90,10|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,301,253018,2,0,P|170:269|93:285,1,120,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
34,152,253863,1,12,0:0:0:0:
303,93,255132,5,8,0:0:0:0:
303,93,255343,1,12,0:0:0:0:


many thanks Desperate-kun (:
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Desperate-kun wrote:

Sorry, but I have to pop your bubble for the following issues. These are must-fixes.

Easy

03:36:860 (1) - The recovery time after this spinner is too low. Referring to this general consense:

Garven wrote:

General rule of thumb: Easy - Full measure (4 beats). Each difficulty increment up, halve it. So Normal would be about 2 beats, Hard 1 beat, Insane and up whatever. Depending on BPM of course. Kind of a baseline for that is around 160 bpm. New players need A LOT of time to recover from spinners because they're going to spin wildly and lose their cursor position.
you must have around a full measure of recovery time here. It doesn't have to be exactly a full measure but 3/2 is definitely too low.
03:45:318 (1) - Same applies here.
Since thats for a 160 BPM, for a 130 bpm it should be around 3/4, hopefully its good enough now (also it kinda screwed up the whole map's rhytm of 3/2 lol)

  • General


  1. Add tag: turunen, if you already include Tarja to the tags you can also add the surename.
    Ok

  • Easy


  1. This Easy is really, really tough. Due to the big amount of 3/2-gaps and 1/2-stacks in the last section, a lower OD, like OD 1.5, is absolutely necessary.
    Hehehe was hoping that starting the red ticks with sliders would make it ok (and apparently it is, basing on the few play tests i did) Anyways, I used to have it at 1 on your recommendation, then changed back to 2 on other modder's recommendation, and now its staying at 1.5 I guess.
  2. 00:08:374 (1) - I don't know if I already mentioned it last time, but this would sound much better as an 1/2-slider. You also use 1/2-sliders at the end so I don't see the reason why you would avoid it here.
    For reasons stated in the other mod. Also didnt do it here becauselast part was supposed to be a 'harder' part. But now changed to this way anyways, not a big deal.
  3. 04:13:863 (1,2) - The movement is a bit too sharp for the easiest diff. Change it like this: http://puu.sh/bBsCv/af8745890f.jpg It would be easier to understand for the newbies.
    Did a ctrl+g instead
Thanks! WIll update after shiro's response
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@Sieg Yeah, sorry for the bad wording. It will probably be kinda unexpected for the newbies anyways since the angle is different but since the spacing is the same as for stacks I'm fine with it now! :)
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Desperate-kun wrote:


  • Shiro's Insane


  1. 00:32:268 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I remember this had some fancy hitsounding when I modded it - Now it sounds very empty o.o Please, change it back. I can't actually remember doing anything fancy for these o.O so I did something fancy for you :3
  2. 01:52:194 (2,3,4) - The regular spacing after the jump really breaks the flow for me. It goes in the same direction as the jump, so it just feels unnatural to stop moving like this. Maybe you could change it like this: http://puu.sh/bBy7P/1ce80b96ad.jpg didn't exactly do like the picture, but changed
  3. 01:53:040 (5,6,1) - Same. A nice solution would be to change the order of notes from the following square, so the pattern looks like this: http://puu.sh/bByb0/8ff4d3f35b.jpg applied my own fix, not quite like you did
  4. 02:45:902 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sure you don't want to make this a perfect square? That wasn't actually meant to be a square, mostly because of the placement of other circles like 02:44:633 (3,5,6,8) - so that everything is visually consistent and looks good
Thanks for the mod !

http://puu.sh/bE7rY/eee79a8488.osu
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Updated!
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Re-Check~

[General]

You got two spaces after "turunen" in the tags of the Hard difficulty.

[Easy]

Try to reduce your NCing a bit (preferably make it consistent by placing NC every 2 measures). Variable NCing is not really recommended for Easy / Normal since it likely messes up the HP-drain. In sections like 03:53:564 it's okay because it helps understanding the rhythm, but even there for example 03:51:873 (1) this NC is not needed.
00:39:245 (1) - I just realised this spinner might be a bit too short for a Normal. Consider to extend it until 00:40:725 ? Because the sound you are following fades out completely at this point.

[Hard]

00:12:603 (1) - Sorry that I forgot to tell it last time, but in the rule about recovery time was also included that it should be 1/1 after a spinner in Hard...
03:36:755 (1) - Sigh
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Desperate-kun wrote:

Re-Check~

[General]

You got two spaces after "turunen" in the tags of the Hard difficulty. OOps ! ;)!

[Easy]

Try to reduce your NCing a bit (preferably make it consistent by placing NC every 2 measures). Variable NCing is not really recommended for Easy / Normal since it likely messes up the HP-drain. In sections like 03:53:564 it's okay because it helps understanding the rhythm, but even there for example 03:51:873 (1) this NC is not needed.
NCs reduced

00:39:245 (1) - I just realised this spinner might be a bit too short for a Normal. Consider to extend it until 00:40:725 ? Because the sound you are following fades out completely at this point.
Actually, it finishes right here, but okay, extended anyways.

[Hard]

00:12:603 (1) - Sorry that I forgot to tell it last time, but in the rule about recovery time was also included that it should be 1/1 after a spinner in Hard...
Deleted the notes after the spinner to keep consistency with easy
03:36:755 (1) - Sigh
Deleted note at 03:38:129 -

Since when these became a rule? Anyways, it seemed fine for me, and everyone else that modded this, I mean, I agree with the ones in easy diff, but the hard diff I think it was okay since I purposely gave an easy pattern after the spinners (stack) and only if I use a relatively long spinner, makes me feel like all these criteria I used to map these parts go to waste.
Hopefully everything should be in order now!
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Xanandra wrote:

Since when these became a rule? Anyways, it seemed fine for me, and everyone else that modded this, I mean, I agree with the ones in easy diff, but the hard diff I think it was okay since I purposely gave an easy pattern after the spinners (stack) and only if I use a relatively long spinner, makes me feel like all these criteria I used to map these parts go to waste.
It's only a guideline, not a rule. It can be broken when there is really no other possibility, but here it could be fixed.
The main reason for the guideline is that it can be confusing when too many objects appear on the screen while you are spinning, even for Hard players.
I also somewhat disagree with aspects of that rule, but there have been several unqualifies stating it as a reason, so I obviously don't want this to happen here.

I'll re-re-check the mapset later this day!

EDIT: Rebubbled (ノ 'ω')ノ
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obv solution


get Mao
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Kenezz wrote:

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gogogogogogogogo!
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Ermm... Sorry, been busy these days (since like 1 month and half since I started tyo work)

I already asked several BATs but all of their repl;ies have been something along the lines of: Ill try! or No! But Ill still keep trying whenever I have time!
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Looking at this one soon.

Stay tuned :)
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aaaah

seems Dake will look at this one,

Good luck man!
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