Nightwish - Dead to the World [Osu|Taiko] · forum

Luvdic

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Luvdic 2014-02-10T03:36:45+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 25 de octubre de 2014 at 08:59:02 a.m.

Artist: Nightwish
Title: Dead to the World
Tags: tarja turunen power metal Sieg Shiro Odaril Nwolf Century Child
BPM: 141,88
Filesize: 12383kb
Play Time: 04:15
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1,69 stars, 242 notes)
Hard (3,46 stars, 625 notes)
Insane (4,7 stars, 940 notes)
Nwolf's Muzukashii (2,96 stars, 890 notes)
Nwolf's Oni (4,41 stars, 1223 notes)
Shiro's Insane (4,19 stars, 752 notes)
Sieg's Normal (2,2 stars, 361 notes)

Download: Nightwish - Dead to the World
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Is it sad that in order for me to find this map in my song's list I have to search ''dead xanandra''?
All diffs officially done by 27/may

Also thanks to Sieg for providing me with BG!

Last edited by Luvdic 2014-10-26T05:38:22+00:00, edited 68 times in total.

Kaguya Hourain

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Kaguya Hourain 2014-03-26T13:44:55+00:00

Are you sure this is 141.88bpm? Maybe you'd want to round the number?

Luvdic

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Luvdic 2014-03-29T08:18:05+00:00

Well, Im pretty sure its not 142, if thats what youre suggesting.

Willt ry to find more timng help though

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2014-04-09T05:03:18+00:00

Hi~
Modding as requested.

[General]

Disable Letterboxing in Hard and Sieg's Normal, or Enable it in Insane, to make it consistent in all diffs.

Disable Widescreen Support
No kiai?
Are you planning to include an easier diff, Sieg's Normal is a bit challenging for newbies as it has a considerable ammount of 1/2 notes and notes immediately after spinners. I would be happy to make a challenging Easy, refer to https://osu.ppy.sh/s/117269
I'll mod your diffs in Spanish because aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.

[Insane]

Checa AIMod por algunas notas no ajustadas
01:01:021 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Los combos aquí no van acorde a las partes en la música, si bien son grupos de cuatro, estros grupos empiezan en un tick blanco y no en el rojo, sería mejor si haces tus combos de esta manera

01:06:096 (3,4,5,6) - ¿Qué tal si haces la distancia aquí un poco más parecida a 00:52:564 (3,4,5,6)? un poco de consistencia no vendría mal

01:14:554 (1,2,3) - Te recomendaría hacer el spacing un poco más grande aquí, para diferenciarlo mejor de 01:15:823 (1,2,3).
01:18:783 (1,2,3) - Si haces lo de arriba tal vez acá también lo puedas hacer.
01:39:927 (1,2,3,4) - ¿Por qué este va en sentido contrario a los demas patrones? Hazlo que tenga el mismo sentido

02:04:032 (3,4) - Aquí vendría mejor un jump como en el patrón anterior, por consistencia.
02:04:032 (3,4) - Hazle Ctrl+G para seguir la tendencia de ir hacia afuera de la pantalla como en el resto de esta parte.
02:09:107 (3,4) - Un jump por acá?
02:13:759 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Todo esto podría quedar en un solo combo, esta parte esta algo fuera de lugar porque es la única donde usas combos cortos. Si lo haces, recuerda poner un NC en 02:15:450 (2).
02:36:912 (7) - Te recomendaría sustituir el slider por 2 círculos, se siente algo raro dejar de presionar en un beat fuerte como este.
02:37:441 (1,2,3,4) - Te sugiero altamente que hagas estos sliders de 1/2 y pongas círculos en los ticks azules, se jugará mucho mejor en mi opinión ya que continuarás sobre las percusiones como en la parte anterior, que no es muy diferente.
02:40:824 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:44:207 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:52:136 (4,5,6) - Algo similar a lo que mencionaba en 02:36:912 (7), 02:52:665 es un buen lugar para presionar junto con la guitarra pero aqui estamos dejando de hacerlo, lo cual se siente algo raro, podrías intentar algo así para enfatizar mejor esta parte.

02:58:903 (1,2,3) - ^
03:38:126 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Un problema similar al de mi primera sugerencia, los combos aquí están agrupando incorrectamente los grupos de dos en la música (que empiezan en el tick blank), prueba borrar 03:39:395 (1) y recorrer 03:38:126 (1,2,1,2,1,2) 1/2 beat hacía adelante y poner NC en 03:39:606 (3), y mover 03:38:126 (1,2,1,2,1,2) de tal manera que haya un jump en 03:39:394 (2,1) por consistencia.

03:52:081 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Todo esto mejor en un solo combo.
03:55:887 (5) - Ctrl+G podría mejorar el flujo, si lo haces, mueve 03:56:522 (6) a una distancia similar a 03:54:196 (3,4) - para conservar el flujo.

Otra cosa que quisiera mencionar son algunos 3/4 que pudiesen ser algo confusos, como 02:39:132 (1,2,1), tal vez usar un slider o hacer el spacing más grande para diferenciarlo mejor de los 1/2. De igual manera con 02:45:899 (1,2,1) y 03:01:123 (1,2,1).

[Hard]

Checa AIMod por algunas notas no ajustadas
AR7 pls

00:18:521 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - El ritmo aqui es algo complicado de seguir, a pesar de tener spacing consistente, y aun más con el AR tan bajo, podrías probar algo asi, sería más intuitivo en mi opinión. O bien podrías hacer el spacing mas intuitivo como en 00:25:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10).

00:21:904 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Algo similar.
00:24:653 (10,11) - Podrías remover (10) y recorrer (11) 1/4 beat hacia atrás, seguiría mejor la guitarra.
01:05:673 (6) - Tal vez remover el slider y poner 2 círculos en su lugar, así crearías un triple similar a 01:04:193 (1,2,3).
01:09:268 (4) - Ctrl+G? Fluiría mejor, si lo haces, mueve (5) a donde corresponda.
01:42:888 (6) - Similar a 01:05:673 (6).
01:44:579 (5) - NC?
02:06:993 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Te recomendaría altamente que hagas stacks aquí, siento que estando estos dobles así crea demasiada dificultad.
03:25:651 (1,2,3,4,5) - Tal vez espaciarlos? El stack no se juega muy bien siendo que hay variaciones de tono en esta parte.
03:37:914 (1,2) - Podrías remover estos dos y extender el spinner hasta aquí, siento que se jugaría mejor dado que se empezaría a golpear notas en un downbeat.
03:42:355 (9,1) - Sería mejor si usas un slider de 1/1 aqui y pones un círculo en 03:42:989, seguiría mejor las vocales :3
03:45:632 (3,4,5,6) - Como mencioné anteriormente, stacks aquí.

[Sieg's Normal]
00:05:199 - 00:18:732 - Small suggestion, how about making a similar rhythm as in Hard? Some overall consistency would be nice, up to you ofc, this part is nice but a bit tricky due mapping on offbeats.
00:39:031 (10) - I think a single circle would emphasize better this beat.
00:49:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nice detail.
02:02:552 (2) - This one is following incorrectly the song, I suggest to remove the repeat and end it in 02:03:187, then put a circle in 02:03:609.
03:54:195 (2) - ^
04:14:495 - Maybe add a note here?

That'd be all from my part, cool mapset overall, good luck \o/

Sieg

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Sieg 2014-04-11T14:24:18+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
[Sieg's Normal]
00:05:199 - 00:18:732 - Small suggestion, how about making a similar rhythm as in Hard? Some overall consistency would be nice, up to you ofc, this part is nice but a bit tricky due mapping on offbeats.
yeah, but I think current way is fine too

00:39:031 (10) - I think a single circle would emphasize better this beat.
want to stress guitar here and that's way slider

00:49:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Nice detail.
(:

02:02:552 (2) - This one is following incorrectly the song, I suggest to remove the repeat and end it in 02:03:187, then put a circle in 02:03:609.
03:54:195 (2) - ^
yes, kind of, but I want to keep that for a while and look for more feedback

04:14:495 - Maybe add a note here?
want to stress only drums there

That'd be all from my part, cool mapset overall, good luck \o/

thank you DakeDekaane (:

Luvdic

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Topic Starter

Luvdic 2014-04-13T14:31:33+00:00

Boxed because the reply is so long

DakeDekaane wrote:
Hi~
Modding as requested.

[General]
Disable Letterboxing in Hard and Sieg's Normal, or Enable it in Insane, to make it consistent in all diffs.
Disable Widescreen Support
No kiai?
Are you planning to include an easier diff, Sieg's Normal is a bit challenging for newbies as it has a considerable ammount of 1/2 notes and notes immediately after spinners. I would be happy to make a challenging Easy, refer to https://osu.ppy.sh/s/117269
I'll mod your diffs in Spanish because aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa.

Todo okay, cambiado. Y con respecto al easy, ya estoy haciendo una, la verdad prefiero hacerlo yo mismo ya que tendre otro gd y no quiero tantos gds... Y sobre los kiais, los pondre luego!

[Insane]
Checa AIMod por algunas notas no ajustadas
Oops, lo siento

01:01:021 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Los combos aquí no van acorde a las partes en la música, si bien son grupos de cuatro, estros grupos empiezan en un tick blanco y no en el rojo, sería mejor si haces tus combos de esta manera

Aunque los combos no sigan al compas de la cancion a la perfeccion, estan de esta forma para que sea mas facil de ver las notas.

01:06:096 (3,4,5,6) - ¿Qué tal si haces la distancia aquí un poco más parecida a 00:52:564 (3,4,5,6)? un poco de consistencia no vendría mal
Estan bien asi, imo.

01:14:554 (1,2,3) - Te recomendaría hacer el spacing un poco más grande aquí, para diferenciarlo mejor de 01:15:823 (1,2,3).
01:18:783 (1,2,3) - Si haces lo de arriba tal vez acá también lo puedas hacer.
He pedido test plays, y se juegan perfectamente bien. Aunque eso si, los testplays eran con DT, o con AR9, supongo que pedire mas play tests con AR8 sin DT a ver que tal.

01:39:927 (1,2,3,4) - ¿Por qué este va en sentido contrario a los demas patrones? Hazlo que tenga el mismo sentido
Para hacer que la mente de los jugadores hagan: FUUUUU POR QUE CAMBIO DE SENTIDO???

02:04:032 (3,4) - Aquí vendría mejor un jump como en el patrón anterior, por consistencia.
02:04:032 (3,4) - Hazle Ctrl+G para seguir la tendencia de ir hacia afuera de la pantalla como en el resto de esta parte.
02:09:107 (3,4) - Un jump por acá?
Pues, asi como dices que algunas partes hay jumps, hay otras que no tienen jump, perfectamente incoherentes, lo que los hacen coherentes

02:13:759 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - Todo esto podría quedar en un solo combo, esta parte esta algo fuera de lugar porque es la única donde usas combos cortos. Si lo haces, recuerda poner un NC en 02:15:450 (2).
Ok

02:36:912 (7) - Te recomendaría sustituir el slider por 2 círculos, se siente algo raro dejar de presionar en un beat fuerte como este.
02:37:441 (1,2,3,4) - Te sugiero altamente que hagas estos sliders de 1/2 y pongas círculos en los ticks azules, se jugará mucho mejor en mi opinión ya que continuarás sobre las percusiones como en la parte anterior, que no es muy diferente.
02:40:824 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:44:207 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Me parece que esta bien asi, ya que quiero hacerlo que se juegue con efecto "sticky" no se si me entiendan..

02:52:136 (4,5,6) - Algo similar a lo que mencionaba en 02:36:912 (7), 02:52:665 es un buen lugar para presionar junto con la guitarra pero aqui estamos dejando de hacerlo, lo cual se siente algo raro, podrías intentar algo así para enfatizar mejor esta parte.

02:58:903 (1,2,3) - ^
Estos lo entiendo, pero me parece que es mas simple jugarlo asi como esta ahora.

03:38:126 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Un problema similar al de mi primera sugerencia, los combos aquí están agrupando incorrectamente los grupos de dos en la música (que empiezan en el tick blank), prueba borrar 03:39:395 (1) y recorrer 03:38:126 (1,2,1,2,1,2) 1/2 beat hacía adelante y poner NC en 03:39:606 (3), y mover 03:38:126 (1,2,1,2,1,2) de tal manera que haya un jump en 03:39:394 (2,1) por consistencia.

Estoy consciente de este error tecnico tambien, pero no es un grave error tecnico, y yo no estoy creando musica, sino un juego.

03:52:081 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Todo esto mejor en un solo combo.
Okay

03:55:887 (5) - Ctrl+G podría mejorar el flujo, si lo haces, mueve 03:56:522 (6) a una distancia similar a 03:54:196 (3,4) - para conservar el flujo.
El flujo esta perfecto imo, pero hay que recordar que al parecer veo las cosas muy diferentes a muchas personas.

Otra cosa que quisiera mencionar son algunos 3/4 que pudiesen ser algo confusos, como 02:39:132 (1,2,1), tal vez usar un slider o hacer el spacing más grande para diferenciarlo mejor de los 1/2. De igual manera con 02:45:899 (1,2,1) y 03:01:123 (1,2,1).
Lo mismo que dije sobre el detallito de ar8, ar9 dt tests, lo que si me propongo a hacer es buscar mas testplays a ar8 sin dt y comprobar

[Hard]
Checa AIMod por algunas notas no ajustadas
Oops, lo siento

AR7 pls
Okay.

00:18:521 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - El ritmo aqui es algo complicado de seguir, a pesar de tener spacing consistente, y aun más con el AR tan bajo, podrías probar algo asi, sería más intuitivo en mi opinión. O bien podrías hacer el spacing mas intuitivo como en 00:25:498 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10).

Es que esta diff solia tener AR7, pero hubo gente quejandose, y lo baje a 6, de todos modos me parece que esta bien, y esta bastante simple esta parte, buscare playtests a ver que tal.

00:21:904 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Algo similar.
00:24:653 (10,11) - Podrías remover (10) y recorrer (11) 1/4 beat hacia atrás, seguiría mejor la guitarra.
Espero que hayas notado mi insistencia en usar esa nota a lo largo del map. Y en cualquier caso, no estoy siguiendo exactamente a la guitarra...,

01:05:673 (6) - Tal vez remover el slider y poner 2 círculos en su lugar, así crearías un triple similar a 01:04:193 (1,2,3).
Me parece que esta bien tal y como esta

01:09:268 (4) - Ctrl+G? Fluiría mejor, si lo haces, mueve (5) a donde corresponda.
Haciendole ctrl+g le corta totalmente el flujo imo.

01:42:888 (6) - Similar a 01:05:673 (6).

01:44:579 (5) - NC?
Puse new combo en 01:44:791 -

02:06:993 (5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Te recomendaría altamente que hagas stacks aquí, siento que estando estos dobles así crea demasiada dificultad.
Me parece que estan bien... de todos modos existe en un big jump entre el hard y la insane.

03:25:651 (1,2,3,4,5) - Tal vez espaciarlos? El stack no se juega muy bien siendo que hay variaciones de tono en esta parte.
Me parece que esta erfectamente bien usar un stack, y encaja bien con esta parte de la cancion.

03:37:914 (1,2) - Podrías remover estos dos y extender el spinner hasta aquí, siento que se jugaría mejor dado que se empezaría a golpear notas en un downbeat.
Err note de una inconsistencia entre este diff y la insane, hice un cambio, no exacatamente a la que sugeriste, pero igual gracias a esto lo note!

03:42:355 (9,1) - Sería mejor si usas un slider de 1/1 aqui y pones un círculo en 03:42:989, seguiría mejor las vocales :3
De nuevo, diferentes formas de ver a la cancion, diferentes puntos de vista, etc, me parece bien tal y como esta, y esta siguiendo las vocales de la forma en que yo lo visione.

03:45:632 (3,4,5,6) - Como mencioné anteriormente, stacks aquí.

That'd be all from my part, cool mapset overall, good luck \o/

riffy

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riffy 2014-05-21T09:51:05+00:00

Sorry about the delay, these days are stressful!

[General]

Add Sieg to tags since he did a diff for you! He deserves a credit for that!
You're not adding ErufenRito to the tags on purpose, are you? Adding this would help your fans to find this map faster, please, consider that!
I would fade the yellow and red colours a bit. They seem to be unfitting and look to bright comapring to the BG/other colours. Fading them would also make players' eyes feel more comfortable.

[Easy]

Due to long gaps and choppy rhythm (in some parts it gets to 3/2 and 2/1 and even 1/2) you should reduce OD and HP by one tick. It will make the diff a bit friendlier and more playable for the beginners!
00:27:190 (3) - the circle is overlapped even with a default HP-Bar. Try to avoid this overlap to make the diff more understandable and neat, move the circle down a bit!
Note: 01:31:470 (2) - pretty much the same here. There're a few move overlaps, it shouldn't be a big problem to move such objcts down a bit!
01:28:086 (2,2) - these two would sound better as 1/1 sliders. Please, replace them with 1/1 sliders and see how good it will sound with the vocals! I understand your rhythm, but pointing out the vocals here feels really awesome, imo!
04:00:751 (1) - the object appears too soon after the spinners. Beginners are slow, they need some more time to read the pattern properly, try to leave some mre space between the spinner and these objects!

I am not really sure about some of your transitionls like 01:36:544 (5,1) - since it may be confusing for the beginners, but it's a part of your style and I kinda like it. So, get more opinions and try to avoid overlaps with the HP Bar. The diff isn't bad, good job!

[Sieg]

Try to emphasize the loud music in the beginning. It means that you should add NC to 00:10:274 (4) / swap Ncs at 00:11:966 (1,2) / add NC to 00:15:137 (6) - and so on. I think you got the idea. It would help players to understand your rhythm better and it looks awesome, imo!
00:30:361 (4,5) - minor - the transition here gets a bit confusing and hurts your smooth flow. Example!
00:39:031 (10) - a new combo here would fit with the music and your comboing. Also, this combo looks way too long and may make some players nervous!
00:51:506 - 00:53:198 - 01:06:730 - even in the easy diff these beats were pointed out. Try to point these beats out by using 1/1 + 3/2 slider or 3/2 slider with a repeat. either way would fit here pretty good.
Note: personally, I'd prefer to use 3/2 sliders with repeats since they're more playable and sound really, really cool! Same happens a few more times, i think you'll be able to figure out where since you are a pretty skilled mapper.
02:22:217 - your rhythm feels way too intense for a Normal diff, same happend with the part on 00:18:732 - and it makes th whole diff too hard. Well, I understand what you want to do, but can't you make it easier? Ask for some more opinions before changing/rejecting, please!

Please, get more opinions on the 1/2 parts and see if they should be remapped or not. Contact me in-game for a more detailed check afterwards, anyway.

We've had an in-game discussion about [Hard] and [Insane]. There's no need to stick the log since we didn't change much, it was more like a discussion about our understanding of the rhythm.

Feels like you're keeping quite a lot of your old patterns and ideas which are pretty good. At the same time, some of your patterns ~~seem to be unfitting, imo.~~ Well, they were just pretty hard to understand.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

See you in-game, I guess!

Luvdic

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Topic Starter

Luvdic 2014-05-22T07:08:12+00:00

-Bakari- wrote:
Sorry about the delay, these days are stressful!

[General]
Add Sieg to tags since he did a diff for you! He deserves a credit for that! Ohh oops, sorry, totally forgot
You're not adding ErufenRito to the tags on purpose, are you? Adding this would help your fans to find this map faster, please, consider that! Dont really want to... would like to avoid it if possible
I would fade the yellow and red colours a bit. They seem to be unfitting and look to bright comapring to the BG/other colours. Fading them would also make players' eyes feel more comfortable. Okay, will do it, but later, I dont mind changing combo colours anyways
[Easy]
Due to long gaps and choppy rhythm (in some parts it gets to 3/2 and 2/1 and even 1/2) you should reduce OD and HP by one tick. It will make the diff a bit friendlier and more playable for the beginners! Okay
00:27:190 (3) - the circle is overlapped even with a default HP-Bar. Try to avoid this overlap to make the diff more understandable and neat, move the circle down a bit!
Note: 01:31:470 (2) - pretty much the same here. There're a few move overlaps, it shouldn't be a big problem to move such objcts down a bit!
Hmm, none should be touching them now, at least in widescreen.
01:28:086 (2,2) - these two would sound better as 1/1 sliders. Please, replace them with 1/1 sliders and see how good it will sound with the vocals! I understand your rhythm, but pointing out the vocals here feels really awesome, imo!
Okay
04:00:751 (1) - the object appears too soon after the spinners. Beginners are slow, they need some more time to read the pattern properly, try to leave some mre space between the spinner and these objects!
Okay

I am not really sure about some of your transitionls like 01:36:544 (5,1) - since it may be confusing for the beginners, but it's a part of your style and I kinda like it. So, get more opinions and try to avoid overlaps with the HP Bar. The diff isn't bad, good job!
Hahahha, sorry about that... And im glad that you understand
We've had an in-game discussion about [Hard] and [Insane]. There's no need to stick the log since we didn't change much, it was more like a discussion about our understanding of the rhythm.

Feels like you're keeping quite a lot of your old patterns and ideas which are pretty good. At the same time, some of your patterns ~~seem to be unfitting, imo.~~ Well, they were just pretty hard to understand.

Well, theres still some stuff that Im more likely to change now that I have gotten more input (and your reasonings convince me more than what others have given to me), and thanks a lot for trying to understand my... rhythm?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

See you in-game, I guess!

Sieg

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Sieg 2014-05-22T08:05:57+00:00

you can search this as dead sieg now not dead xanandra, seriously
can't get to the mod atm, sorry

Shiro

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Shiro 2014-05-27T08:40:29+00:00

offset is 5210

EDIT: done http://puu.sh/903Yf/782ac89fb1.osu

EDIT2: My diff appears on a separate set. Uncapitalize "to the" in the diff name and .osu files and resubmit !

Also my hitsounding is completely fucked because of the customs, here's a fixed version that includes the set bug: http://puu.sh/93aaC/1fd8abacd3.osu
don't forget to update your tags
also delete the old .osu from the folder (not in-game) or you will have my diff twice

Luvdic

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Luvdic 2014-05-27T11:13:13+00:00

Ahhh sorry, when I uploaded it, I just came back from a 4 days excursion and was very very tired, didnt even notice those bugs, but not that Im better, everything should be fixed

And kds for for timing (did it in the wrong post, asdjhasdasf whatever.)

Sieg

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Sieg 2014-05-31T03:24:01+00:00

http://puu.sh/98uCC/265fab9e42.osu

Gonzvlo

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Gonzvlo 2014-06-02T07:10:23+00:00

Ay que horrible...

TicClick

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TicClick 2014-06-13T12:10:58+00:00

hi

General

Add album name, Century Child, to tags?
I personally would never use grey combo colours in my maps, so I advise you to change these to something blu-ish or cyan, according to the background: http://puu.sh/9ryPH/1ddc4c5639.png
```
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,0
Combo2 : 149,194,219
Combo3 : 245,0,0
Combo4 : 120,197,189
```
Also think of tweaking red and yellow colours, they;'re too bright and unfitting as of now.
00:40:732 - drag break time's beginning to the big white tick for more emphasis! It's worth it
04:15:350 - to correctly emphasize the hit object you have here, move kiai fountain from 04:15:139 to 04:15:350, because the beat at 04:15:350 is much, much more stronger than the one at 04:15:139

[Insane]

00:25:508 (1) - listen to this, and you will hear that sliders like this one should have finish on their beginning, because it appears in the music
00:54:899 (5,7) - your custom soft-hitnormal is unfitting as hell, please replace it. Also there's no note in the music at 00:55:004 (6)
01:02:511 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why the jumps? Nothing in the music is calling for them
01:20:907 (5) - touches HP bar
01:29:365 (3) - I suggest cutting it in half and adding a note at the downbeat 01:29:788 for a better play experience
01:38:246 (1) - drum whistle does not fit here, please change
01:39:937 (1) - ^
02:07:531 (1,2) - consider reversing these, because it's quite incomfortable to play them. It also differs from 02:06:897 (2,3,4,5) and breaks the flow
02:07:848 (3,4) - ^
02:47:600 (1,2,3,4) - chances are, this is not gonna be read correctly from the first time, considering it's 3/4 and forms a manual stack. You need to change this somehow, probably spread them out or something
02:52:569 (6) - I'd replace this with two notes to emphasize the beginning of the new part in the music (also, downbeat)
02:59:124 (2) - reverse it for a better flow
03:01:133 (1,2,1,2) - first two of these are 3/4, and the rest is 1/2, yet you placed them very similar, and this will confuse people for sure
03:22:277 (5,1) - what the hell. why did you place this jump for a calm part that has absolutely nothing jumpy in the music? Why? It's unneeded and unwelcome
03:33:273 (1,2,1,2) - make them sound more quiet and gradually increase the volume, following the singer

This is a jump spam, basically. You also have to repair most of your new combos in order to follow the music:

Combos in the most basic sense divide the hit circles of a beatmap so that they are easier to read. Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity

If your pattern does not follow the timing signature or blatantly ignores a downbeatm and you have to adjust your combos based on patterns, this means you need to destroy, or alter, or remap the pattern, as it doesn't follow music. Random examples (you can find the rest yourself):

03:09:591 (4) - should have NC
03:19:740 (3) - should have NC
03:23:123 (4) - ^

[Shiro's Insane]
100% volume could make me deaf. Please decrease it by ~30%

00:12:399 - mind adding a note here to not lose the drum beat and guitar from the music?
00:18:108 (3,4) and so on - drum whisthes could fit the music if they haven't had so awkward dull metallic sound. It's up to you to keep them or not, but I personally do think that they don't go well with the background guitar and all and that even soft whistles are better. I won't mention it anymore
00:34:178 (1) - start it right after the note because guitar starts at 00:33:966, don't keep the gap inbetween
01:28:731 (3) - un-bend it a little
01:51:778 (1) - how about you add a little curve here to match 01:50:721 (9,11)
02:01:928 (1) - I like how you switch between normal and soft additions as vocals change
02:22:227 (7) - unstack for a better movement

Everything else is fine? I guess you could add a kiai fountain at least at 04:15:350 for more epicness.

[Hard]
HP-1? Because Shiro's has it 6..

00:05:209 (1) - consider adding a break after this note, there's nothing really to hit and there's no need to keep player under stress
00:32:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you sure it's still Hard? Consider compressing these jumps
01:34:017 (3) - make a better blanked; use new sliders for this (remove and add the central point again to get it nice and round)
01:35:074 (1) - goes under HP bar
02:07:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - isn't it a bit of overkill? Consider stacking them
03:33:273 (1,2,1,2) - make them sound more quiet and gradually increase the volume, following the singer

[Sieg's Normal]
I'll mod in mapper's mother tongue, hope it doesn't bother you.

в начале между слайдерами 1.2х, но за счет пустоты кажется, что они далеко
00:59:974 (5,6,1) - неудобное движение получается. посмотри все такие куски, мне они что-то не нравятся
01:11:181 (6) - я увидел этот слайдер и понял, что нк должно быть на НЁМ. перепроверь нк, пожалуйста, особенно вот на таких моментах, когда почти все почему-то стремятся расставлять их в угоду паттернам. в начале поста немного об этом есть
01:17:736 (6) - аналогично. фраза старая, но куплет новый и звучит сильней
01:24:713 (6,7) - вот это вот реально неудобно, ломает все к чертям
01:39:937 (1) - зачем свисток из драмсета, когда он звучит по-инопланетному. как будто диверсанты рис в жестяной банке встряхнули на записи у найтвиша. не только здесь, кстати. они проворные парни и трясут его на протяжении всей дифки время от времени
02:02:562 (2) - плохо, повтор падает в пустоту и отчетливо видно, что звука там в песне никакого нет. убери повтор, продли на 1/4, чтобы кончался где надо. нота на даунбит~~— по вкусу~~ обязательно добавь ее
02:20:747 (2) - мне пришло в голову его выгнуть http://puu.sh/9rBWt/60d8698fc4.jpg, но я сам не знаю, нужно ли или нет
03:09:591 (6) - если ты уже забыл про «пофиксить нк под музыку», я напоминаю на всякий случай
03:26:506 (1) - придумай что-нибудь со звуком. вокал затухает, спиннер — нет, кроме того, на конце у него пианино, а не шуршание из софта. я подумал, на что бы это поменять, но мне стало лень думать
04:10:487 (8,9) - не знаю, насколько целесообразно начинать слайдер частично из-под другого слайдера на нормале. наверное, все в порядке, но я так никогда не делаю и сдвинул бы его вправо и немного вниз
04:14:399 - лишний оффсет. я его случайно нашёл

Возможно, тебе захочется (но не захотелось) добавить хотя бы фонтанчик в той же манере, в какой я посоветовал Широ, ну да ладно.

To be honest, I don't feel like modding Easy at all, and I know I'll have no mood to edit it in my mod later, so I just leave it as that and hope it isn't this bad and awful (my mod, that is). Cheers!

Luvdic

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Topic Starter

Luvdic 2014-06-14T04:01:05+00:00

Boxed because its so long!

TicClick wrote:
hi

General
Add album name, Century Child, to tags?
Ok, will add after Shiro's and Sieg's fixes
I personally would never use grey combo colours in my maps, so I advise you to change these to something blu-ish or cyan, according to the background: http://puu.sh/9ryPH/1ddc4c5639.png
[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,0
Combo2 : 149,194,219
Combo3 : 245,0,0
Combo4 : 120,197,189
Also think of tweaking red and yellow colours, they;'re too bright and unfitting as of now.
Not really sure why not grayish colours, I have used them quite frequently, and some people have commented something about red and yellow being too bright, but I honestly think that precisely because its too bright, its easier to see those objects, thus improving the game play.
00:40:732 - drag break time's beginning to the big white tick for more emphasis! It's worth it
Only in insane was needed, and I could swear I did that before, Anyways, fixed
04:15:350 - to correctly emphasize the hit object you have here, move kiai fountain from 04:15:139 to 04:15:350, because the beat at 04:15:350 is much, much more stronger than the one at 04:15:139
Okay, although in easy was omitted, because I still think its better to place the final note at 4:15:139 instead of 04:15:350
[Insane]
00:25:508 (1) - listen to this, and you will hear that sliders like this one should have finish on their beginning, because it appears in the music Done
00:54:899 (5,7) - your custom soft-hitnormal is unfitting as hell, please replace it. Also there's no note in the music at 00:55:004 (6) Its a hitnormal hitsound, and its throughout the whole map, not really why it doesnt fit, unless you actually mean the whistle, on which case I also disagree
01:02:511 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why the jumps? Nothing in the music is calling for them Well, Im not the only one whos abusing jumps for this part in specific *cough*Shiro*cough*
01:20:907 (5) - touches HP bar Not important to me, but okay, fixed
01:29:365 (3) - I suggest cutting it in half and adding a note at the downbeat 01:29:788 for a better play experience
I think that the way it currently is, provides a better playing experience
01:38:246 (1) - drum whistle does not fit here, please change
01:39:937 (1) - ^
Dont really what to say here other than the fact that I think it fits here >_>....
02:07:531 (1,2) - consider reversing these, because it's quite incomfortable to play them. It also differs from 02:06:897 (2,3,4,5) and breaks the flow
02:07:848 (3,4) - ^
I differ, different pattern, different way to see it flow, and its not like Im using it only once out of nowhere
02:47:600 (1,2,3,4) - chances are, this is not gonna be read correctly from the first time, considering it's 3/4 and forms a manual stack. You need to change this somehow, probably spread them out or something
Its fine, the pattern itself is very easy, and its the hardest diff, just see it as another part with lots of streams where many players are bound to get 100s anyways
02:52:569 (6) - I'd replace this with two notes to emphasize the beginning of the new part in the music (also, downbeat)
Will think about it, but no changes for now.
02:59:124 (2) - reverse it for a better flow
They are fine, and work as intended.
03:01:133 (1,2,1,2) - first two of these are 3/4, and the rest is 1/2, yet you placed them very similar, and this will confuse people for sure
Same reasoning as 02:47:600 (1,2,3,4)
03:22:277 (5,1) - what the hell. why did you place this jump for a calm part that has absolutely nothing jumpy in the music? Why? It's unneeded and unwelcome
My maps is so totally not about DS.
03:33:273 (1,2,1,2) - make them sound more quiet and gradually increase the volume, following the singer
Okay
This is a jump spam, basically. You also have to repair most of your new combos in order to follow the music:
Kinda sad that you only see it as jump spam

Combos in the most basic sense divide the hit circles of a beatmap so that they are easier to read. Combos are usually placed to either match the vocal/musical phrases or to indicate the downbeat of each measure. In special cases, combos are used in indicating any discrepancies in spacing or slider velocity
If your pattern does not follow the timing signature or blatantly ignores a downbeatm and you have to adjust your combos based on patterns, this means you need to destroy, or alter, or remap the pattern, as it doesn't follow music. Random examples (you can find the rest yourself):

Well, it also says that its to indicate DS discrepancies, and Im also a believer who taking advantage of NC to make patterns more readable

03:09:591 (4) - should have NC
03:19:740 (3) - should have NC This one I didnt put NC because was following something else on the music, and NC doesnt fit.
03:23:123 (4) - ^
[Hard]
HP-1? Because Shiro's has it 6.. Ok, also holy shit, we can use decimals HP drain and OD
00:05:209 (1) - consider adding a break after this note, there's nothing really to hit and there's no need to keep player under stress
Im against this, and the HP drained is not that much, specially after the -1
00:32:274 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you sure it's still Hard? Consider compressing these jumps
Will wait for more opinions, actually, there are some patterns I still want to change on this hard
01:34:017 (3) - make a better blanked; use new sliders for this (remove and add the central point again to get it nice and round)
Not really intending a blanket, but something else, Not everything in mapping has to be blankets
01:35:074 (1) - goes under HP bar
Fine, fixed
02:07:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - isn't it a bit of overkill? Consider stacking them
They are fine, had around 10 play tests, and they were played fine.
03:33:273 (1,2,1,2) - make them sound more quiet and gradually increase the volume, following the singer
Done

Thanks for the mod!

ErunamoJAZZ

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ErunamoJAZZ 2014-06-14T23:30:04+00:00

Hello!
mod from ingame request (2 weeks ago?)

[easy]
Me encantan los mapas que no tienen necesidad de blankets como este *¬*

Aunque el flow no es tan fluido en algunas partes (por ejemplo 01:21:753 (2,1) - ) , el patron se repite tantas veces, y la velocidad es tan lenta, que creo que no hay problema
No estoy deacuerdo con el espaciado de la parte lenta. Allí multiplicas por 0.66x en el SV, así que el espaciado a 1.3 quedaría como un 0.85x si se tomara respecto al SV anterior (1.3*0.66=0.85x).
De ahí, que todo quede tan junto, y aunque el SV si queda bien para es a parte lenta, el espaciado lo siento mal.

Mi recomendación es que espacies toda esa parte a 1.6x (así quedaría 1.6*0.66= 1.05x). Como todo quedará un poco más alejado, se parecerá un poco más al espaciado anterior, sin dejar de ser más lento.
04:15:139 (1) - lol, quiero creer que aquí falta un slider solo por accidente y no por desición tuya xD

[Sieg's normal]
Hi Sieg, ^^

00:05:844 (2,3,4) - i dont understand that you are following here xD. Btw... i think a better rhythm for this seccion may be:
00:39:041 (10) - NC?
00:49:613 (3) - drum-wishtle?
01:54:316 (4) - i want suggest this:
02:10:386 (3) - i think you can make a blanked here.
02:31:319 (6) - (nazi) x:479, y:48 looks better.

cool diff

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~~break for cookies~~
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[hard]
Primero que nada, un replay con HR. Como hace tanto que no juego bien, y aun no me acostumbro del todo a la tableta, supongo que soy un buen tester para este hard xD
Test play

00:21:596 (12,13) - Realmente me gustaría que hicieras un slider de estos dos. En toda esa sección no hay dobles.. solo este... y de por sí es dificil de leer en AR7.. incluso en HR casi no lo hago. De verdad creo que el slider es más sensato
00:30:054 (8,9) - me gustaría sugerirte mejor este patron
me parece más legible. Lo unico malo es que entre ellos esta espaciado a 1.0x (aunque entre (9,10) sí queda a 1.3x).
01:06:106 (8) - probablemente te opongas, pero, yo usaría el NC en el siguiente slider... solo por legibilidad.
01:54:527 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nothing xD
LOL

Esto hace que en HR sea más facil xD
02:25:081 (12,13) - mismo de antes.
02:33:539 (8,9) - mismo de antes.
03:45:642 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Jugandolo, no me gustó mucho como sentí el flow... así que quisiera hacer una sugerencia, con el fin de llevar el flow de una forma que, al menos a mi, me parece más natural.
03:45:642 (3,4) - rotar -5 grados
03:45:959 (5,6,7,1) - rotar -10 grados (quizas incluso sin los dos ultimos, si ves que no te gusta).
Así los dobles mantienen una inclinación un poco más cercana al camino del flow.
04:15:139 (1,2) - mm.. por qué cambiar el DS? yo preferiría que lo dejaras como en todo el mapa

very slow-intense xD
and sexys normal-whistles *¬*

[Shiro's insane]
Hi Shiro

see AiMod for unsnaped objects xD
01:09:172 (6,12) - well... imo, this is overmapping, and... I do not find much sense xD!. If you were trying to follow the piano, in this part almost not audible. Please, consider dropping these two notes.
02:52:252 (13) - bit overlap with (1)
oh Shiro... why dont use kiai time?
04:01:606 (4,5,6,7) - and 04:03:298 (4,5,6,7) - Are difficult to predict the first time it is played. I think if there is a kiai since 04:00:338 - , is better and more readable.

[Insane]
Interesante diff

02:01:928 (2,4) - Ctrl+G?, creo que así sigue mejor el flow.
03:01:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - El patron es genial, pero... se me hace muy dificil de leer. Me gustaría que concideraras cambiarlo. Te sugeriría algo como esto:
Aunque te implicaría cambiar la parte amarilla un poco.
03:25:872 (1,2,3,4) - supongo que lo espaciaste así de gusto, pero... no se ve muy bien que digamos XDDD mejor colocalos todos a 1.0x
03:59:492 (1,2,3,4) - Creo que el espaciado es un poco exagerado /me falla con cualquier jump, así que realmente no sabe... orz.

uff...

time of modding

Good luck ^_^

Shiro

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Joined May 2009

Shiro 2014-06-16T16:36:20+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
[Shiro's insane]
Hi Shiro Hola.
see AiMod for unsnaped objects xD crap, fixed
01:09:172 (6,12) - well... imo, this is overmapping, and... I do not find much sense xD!. If you were trying to follow the piano, in this part almost not audible. Please, consider dropping these two notes. That isn't actually overmapped - there is a constant 1/4 riff going on in the background. The point of these two notes is to turn the 1/2 vocals into triples to emphasize them compared to the more spaced ones !
02:52:252 (13) - bit overlap with (1) yes, the overlap comes from the standard spacing between (13) and (1), I'm afraid changing it would be confusing, so I don't know if I should do it
oh Shiro... why dont use kiai time?
04:01:606 (4,5,6,7) - and 04:03:298 (4,5,6,7) - Are difficult to predict the first time it is played. I think if there is a kiai since 04:00:338 - , is better and more readable. I don't think there is anything emphasized enough to warrant a kiai time, so I'm leaving everything kiailess!

Thanks for the mod.

http://puu.sh/9wcSW/38c79cd704.osu

Shiro

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Joined May 2009

Shiro 2014-06-16T17:21:00+00:00

TicClick wrote:
[Shiro's Insane]
100% volume could make me deaf. Please decrease it by ~30% Decreased by 20%. Anything else and I struggle to hear the soft hitsounds. =(
00:12:399 - mind adding a note here to not lose the drum beat and guitar from the music? I can see your point, but I dislike putting notes that far apart because it's horrible to play. I made a slider instead.
00:18:108 (3,4) and so on - drum whisthes could fit the music if they haven't had so awkward dull metallic sound. It's up to you to keep them or not, but I personally do think that they don't go well with the background guitar and all and that even soft whistles are better. I won't mention it anymore I'd rather keep the drum sampleset, I tried with soft whistles initially but didn't like how it sounds
00:34:178 (1) - start it right after the note because guitar starts at 00:33:966, don't keep the gap inbetween done
01:28:731 (3) - un-bend it a little good catch
01:51:778 (1) - how about you add a little curve here to match 01:50:721 (9,11) - at this point I switch my focus to the guitar in terms of rhythm, hence the straight sliders
02:01:928 (1) - I like how you switch between normal and soft additions as vocals change :3 structure, structure
02:22:227 (7) - unstack for a better movement hm k
Everything else is fine? I guess you could add a kiai fountain at least at 04:15:350 for more epicness. See above reply!

Thanks for the mod ! http://puu.sh/9wg89/c455d1c57e.osu

Luvdic

2,113 posts

Joined July 2009

Topic Starter

Luvdic 2014-06-17T13:27:47+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
Hello!
mod from ingame request (2 weeks ago?)

[easy]
Me encantan los mapas que no tienen necesidad de blankets como este *¬*
Aunque el flow no es tan fluido en algunas partes (por ejemplo 01:21:753 (2,1) - ) , el patron se repite tantas veces, y la velocidad es tan lenta, que creo que no hay problema
No estoy deacuerdo con el espaciado de la parte lenta. Allí multiplicas por 0.66x en el SV, así que el espaciado a 1.3 quedaría como un 0.85x si se tomara respecto al SV anterior (1.3*0.66=0.85x).
Esperare por mas opinion, la verdad simplemente quise seguir las normas establecidas por el editor de osu!

De ahí, que todo quede tan junto, y aunque el SV si queda bien para es a parte lenta, el espaciado lo siento mal.

Mi recomendación es que espacies toda esa parte a 1.6x (así quedaría 1.6*0.66= 1.05x). Como todo quedará un poco más alejado, se parecerá un poco más al espaciado anterior, sin dejar de ser más lento.
04:15:139 (1) - lol, quiero creer que aquí falta un slider solo por accidente y no por desición tuya xD
Agregue una nota final
[hard]
Primero que nada, un replay con HR. Como hace tanto que no juego bien, y aun no me acostumbro del todo a la tableta, supongo que soy un buen tester para este hard xD
Test play

00:21:596 (12,13) - Realmente me gustaría que hicieras un slider de estos dos. En toda esa sección no hay dobles.. solo este... y de por sí es dificil de leer en AR7.. incluso en HR casi no lo hago. De verdad creo que el slider es más sensato
00:30:054 (8,9) - me gustaría sugerirte mejor este patron
me parece más legible. Lo unico malo es que entre ellos esta espaciado a 1.0x (aunque entre (9,10) sí queda a 1.3x).
Yo... ermm... remapie esta parte! Lo siento!
01:06:106 (8) - probablemente te opongas, pero, yo usaría el NC en el siguiente slider... solo por legibilidad.
Ok
01:54:527 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - nothing xD
LOL

Esto hace que en HR sea más facil xD
Era mi intencion
02:25:081 (12,13) - mismo de antes.
02:33:539 (8,9) - mismo de antes.
03:45:642 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - Jugandolo, no me gustó mucho como sentí el flow... así que quisiera hacer una sugerencia, con el fin de llevar el flow de una forma que, al menos a mi, me parece más natural.
03:45:642 (3,4) - rotar -5 grados
03:45:959 (5,6,7,1) - rotar -10 grados (quizas incluso sin los dos ultimos, si ves que no te gusta).
Así los dobles mantienen una inclinación un poco más cercana al camino del flow.
Amo mis flows
04:15:139 (1,2) - mm.. por qué cambiar el DS? yo preferiría que lo dejaras como en todo el mapa
Es solo 1.45, una diferencia de 0.15 no se siente despues de 1/2 tick
very slow-intense xD
and sexys normal-whistles *¬*
Gracias

[Insane]
Interesante diff
02:01:928 (2,4) - Ctrl+G?, creo que así sigue mejor el flow.
Es intencional el flow asi.
03:01:767 (1,2,3,4,5) - El patron es genial, pero... se me hace muy dificil de leer. Me gustaría que concideraras cambiarlo. Te sugeriría algo como esto:
Aunque te implicaría cambiar la parte amarilla un poco.
Esperare por mas opiniones, aunque en realidad me gusta mas como esta orita.
03:25:872 (1,2,3,4) - supongo que lo espaciaste así de gusto, pero... no se ve muy bien que digamos XDDD mejor colocalos todos a 1.0x
Me parece que esta bien
03:59:492 (1,2,3,4) - Creo que el espaciado es un poco exagerado /me falla con cualquier jump, así que realmente no sabe... orz
Pues, en los test plays que vi, no vi mayor problema con esta parte..

Good luck ^_^

gracias por el mod!

Last edited by Luvdic 2014-06-17T15:30:46+00:00, edited 3 times in total.

Sieg

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Joined February 2012

Sieg 2014-06-17T14:43:32+00:00

TicClick wrote:
[Sieg's Normal]
I'll mod in mapper's mother tongue, hope it doesn't bother you.
в начале между слайдерами 1.2х, но за счет пустоты кажется, что они далеко
наверное....
00:59:974 (5,6,1) - неудобное движение получается. посмотри все такие куски, мне они что-то не нравятся
поменял
01:11:181 (6) - я увидел этот слайдер и понял, что нк должно быть на НЁМ. перепроверь нк, пожалуйста, особенно вот на таких моментах, когда почти все почему-то стремятся расставлять их в угоду паттернам. в начале поста немного об этом есть
просмотрел, поправил
01:17:736 (6) - аналогично. фраза старая, но куплет новый и звучит сильней
я знаю, что тут почти аналогично, но т.к. тут упор все-таки на фразу у меня просто не поднимается рука подвинуть тут нк, пусть это и не правильно
01:24:713 (6,7) - вот это вот реально неудобно, ломает все к чертям
и тут тоже, нк тут сделал
01:39:937 (1) - зачем свисток из драмсета, когда он звучит по-инопланетному. как будто диверсанты рис в жестяной банке встряхнули на записи у найтвиша. не только здесь, кстати. они проворные парни и трясут его на протяжении всей дифки время от времени
лол, но они же действительно ЭТО делают, к примеру 01:01:031 (1) - , не в текущем моменте ага, поменял, просмотрел
02:02:562 (2) - плохо, повтор падает в пустоту и отчетливо видно, что звука там в песне никакого нет. убери повтор, продли на 1/4, чтобы кончался где надо. нота на даунбит~~— по вкусу~~ обязательно добавь ее
но поменяю чуть позже
02:20:747 (2) - мне пришло в голову его выгнуть http://puu.sh/9rBWt/60d8698fc4.jpg, но я сам не знаю, нужно ли или нет
наверное нет...
03:09:591 (6) - если ты уже забыл про «пофиксить нк под музыку», я напоминаю на всякий случай
уху
03:26:506 (1) - придумай что-нибудь со звуком. вокал затухает, спиннер — нет, кроме того, на конце у него пианино, а не шуршание из софта. я подумал, на что бы это поменять, но мне стало лень думать
сделал
04:10:487 (8,9) - не знаю, насколько целесообразно начинать слайдер частично из-под другого слайдера на нормале. наверное, все в порядке, но я так никогда не делаю и сдвинул бы его вправо и немного вниз
не знаю, это такой момент, в котором без новичка и не сказать точно, попробую поискать
04:14:399 - лишний оффсет. я его случайно нашёл
убрал
Возможно, тебе захочется (но не захотелось) добавить хотя бы фонтанчик в той же манере, в какой я посоветовал Широ, ну да ладно.
захотелось

вообще я все слишком быстро глянул, по подробнее все просмотрю как появится свободный часик

спасибо за мод (:

Last edited by Sieg 2014-06-17T14:55:01+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Sieg

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Joined February 2012

Sieg 2014-06-17T14:50:52+00:00

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:
[Sieg's normal]
Hi Sieg, ^^
heeeyyyy (:

00:05:844 (2,3,4) - i dont understand that you are following here xD. Btw... i think a better rhythm for this seccion may be:

kinda synth
00:39:041 (10) - NC?
no need
00:49:613 (3) - drum-wishtle?
fixed
01:54:316 (4) - i want suggest this:

prefer my way but this is nice also
02:10:386 (3) - i think you can make a blanked here.
yep
02:31:319 (6) - (nazi) x:479, y:48 looks better.
but ds..
cool diff

-------------------------
~~break for cookies~~
-------------------------

Good luck ^_^

thank you (:

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2014-06-17T14:51:52+00:00

http://puu.sh/9xzKB/26e9e142a6.osu

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2014-06-17T14:52:13+00:00

oh my... did i triple post? i'm so sorry

Luvdic

2,113 posts

Joined July 2009

Topic Starter

Luvdic 2014-06-17T15:29:17+00:00

C-c-c-ombo breaker!

All things should be updated, including Nwolf's taiko diffs.

mliencheng

460 posts

Joined November 2010

mliencheng 2014-06-18T19:23:11+00:00

mod via request queue

Nwolf's Muzukashii

00:26:988 k
01:01:666 k
01:13:612 k
01:13:718 k
02:39:777 d

Nwolf's Oni

00:22:019 d
02:03:514 k
02:06:791 k
02:55:529 k

i like that stream

Nwolf

2,604 posts

Joined September 2012

Nwolf 2014-06-18T19:46:36+00:00

mliencheng wrote:
mod via request queue

Nwolf's Muzukashii
00:26:988 k hm find it weird that you pointed out this one and not the same one a little bit earlier : ) Well not changing because it is supposed to have a lower pitch than (76) (guitar goes down more and more)
01:01:666 k don't think that it fits what I intended here
01:13:612 k
01:13:718 k changed both
02:39:777 d destroys previous rhythm

Nwolf's Oni
00:22:019 d changed
02:03:514 k changed the previous note to don instead because bass drum
02:06:791 k changed
02:55:529 k changed

i like that stream thanks : D

thanks for the mod^^

Muzu
Oni

Evening

2,464 posts

Joined December 2012

Evening 2014-06-25T09:26:23+00:00

Mod from quehue

odam
nightwish
many guitar

[Oni]
00:25:085 (99,100,101) - kdd > kdk | I think the pitch rises again on 101? It's rather hard to hear lol
00:32:274 (147,148,149,150,151,152) - Maybe change all to finishes to differentiate them from the other notes? 00:31:851 (145,146) -
00:38:195 (173) - There's a cymbal here you might want to have K or D
01:00:185 (85) - d > k | Pitch map guitar here
01:48:395 (74,76,77,78) - dkkd > kdkk | This is for the electric guitar in this section
02:32:164 (89) - d > k | For the guitar
02:56:058 - Maybe emphasize the guitars here like this? | http://puu.sh/9JdTG/607d7a7105.png 131 132 135 136 are Finishes
02:57:750 - Same here
02:59:652 (154,156,157,160) - dkdd > kdkk | It fits the guitar better imo
03:39:192 (10,11) - d > D | Having finishes here makes it more intense imo
04:02:663 (123) - Missed a finish here?
04:09:429 (169) - ^

- Addition/Deletion of notes

01:35:709 - Maybe add a k note here for guitar and change the previous note to k also? | This is for the guitar in this section
01:55:055 (106) - Remove | This gives more impact to 01:55:161 (107) -
03:02:190 - Add 2 finishes here in 1/2 Succesion? | D and K for the guitar

[Muzu]
02:26:244 (20,21,22) - Change to k | I think this pitch should use k triplet instead of d
03:07:899 (17) - k > d | I don't think a k is needed here
04:02:664 (99) - d > D | Not sure if you accidentally missed this finish here ( according to the finish patterns )
04:09:430 (130) - ^

00:33:120 - I don't think a break is suitable here, I suggest to add a d instead | The instruments here are rather strong

Nothing else orz, good luck owo/

Nwolf

2,604 posts

Joined September 2012

Nwolf 2014-06-26T14:53:57+00:00

lZenxl wrote:
Mod from quehue

odam
nightwish
many guitar

[Oni]
00:25:085 (99,100,101) - kdd > kdk | I think the pitch rises again on 101? It's rather hard to hear lol snare in drums :>
00:32:274 (147,148,149,150,151,152) - Maybe change all to finishes to differentiate them from the other notes? 00:31:851 (145,146) - don't find them to be important enough for finishers, changed 146 to don instead
00:38:195 (173) - There's a cymbal here you might want to have K or D K
01:00:185 (85) - d > k | Pitch map guitar here lol that's the reason why it is a don goes down from the k
01:48:395 (74,76,77,78) - dkkd > kdkk | This is for the electric guitar in this section mainly followed the drums, there's a snare on 76
02:32:164 (89) - d > k | For the guitar starts lower on this note :> (and changing the patterns a little bit)
02:56:058 - Maybe emphasize the guitars here like this? | http://puu.sh/9JdTG/607d7a7105.png 131 132 135 136 are Finishes don't like that
02:57:750 - Same here
02:59:652 (154,156,157,160) - dkdd > kdkk | It fits the guitar better imo no
03:39:192 (10,11) - d > D | Having finishes here makes it more intense imo changed
04:02:663 (123) - Missed a finish here? the notes here weren't as emphasized as before so I first didn't have one here, but added
04:09:429 (169) - ^ ^

- Addition/Deletion of notes

01:35:709 - Maybe add a k note here for guitar and change the previous note to k also? | This is for the guitar in this section slightly remapped instead for more consistency (woo)
01:55:055 (106) - Remove | This gives more impact to 01:55:161 (107) - gon
03:02:190 - Add 2 finishes here in 1/2 Succesion? | D and K for the guitar wut

[Muzu]
02:26:244 (20,21,22) - Change to k | I think this pitch should use k triplet instead of d ddd kkk ddd
03:07:899 (17) - k > d | I don't think a k is needed here changed
04:02:664 (99) - d > D | Not sure if you accidentally missed this finish here ( according to the finish patterns )
04:09:430 (130) - ^ changed both

00:33:120 - I don't think a break is suitable here, I suggest to add a d instead | The instruments here are rather strong would be too long : /

Nothing else orz, good luck owo/

thanks^^

Muzu
Oni

wasonz

714 posts

Joined July 2013

wasonz 2014-07-01T12:13:53+00:00

NWolf's Muzukashii

00:24:240 (68) - d
03:57:589 (78) - d

NWolf's Oni

00:31:640 (144) - k
01:17:312 (188,189,190) - Ctrl+G

Great Taiko GD

Good luck ~!!

Nwolf

2,604 posts

Joined September 2012

Nwolf 2014-07-01T13:35:06+00:00

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:
NWolf's Muzukashii
00:24:240 (68) - d is always double kat, also snare .-.
03:57:589 (78) - d changed

NWolf's Oni
00:31:640 (144) - k don't like it
01:17:312 (188,189,190) - Ctrl+G changed 01:17:736 (189) - to don instead, fits better and has the same effect as what you suggested

Great Taiko GD

Good luck ~!!

thanks!

http://puu.sh/9S8ig/d871ffa544.osu muzu
http://puu.sh/9S8iv/0623dd531c.osu oni

Secretpipe

3,316 posts

Joined December 2012

Secretpipe 2014-07-02T20:40:26+00:00

I'll mod it someday

AlexaBM

755 posts

Joined March 2013

AlexaBM 2014-07-07T07:06:52+00:00

hi~ Nightwish <3
[General]

What's about the Kiai times? Why not to add some?

[Easy]

00:10:284 (2) - Make this slider like this?
00:17:050 (1) - Move the end to x:299 y:80
00:25:931 (2) - smth like this?
04:07:527 (2,2,2) - I'm not really sure about it it's a bit hard for beginners. Maybe just delete it and fix the spacing?
04:15:139 (1,2) - Same as above. I don't like stacking notes in Easy diffs, so I suggest to change it to slider.

[Sieg's Normal]

00:12:399 (1,2,3) - Сделай равносторонний треугольник?
00:24:451 (5,1) - (нази) Бланкет можно немного улучшить с:
00:31:217 (5,1) - ^
00:44:116 (1) - Оттяни первую белую точку на x:132 y:344 или примерно так для бланкета с 00:43:693 (5) -
01:16:044 (4) - Может как-то так? Лично я не люблю, когда вот так флоу ломается :с
01:28:096 (1) - Ситуация: новичок, быстрый спиннер, следующий объект далеко от центра. Не очень приятная ситуация, если честно. Начни (1) поближе к центру. Или как-нибудь еще, подумай над этим моментом.
02:18:843 (8,1) - Поменяй местами НК
02:22:227 (1,2,3) - Тут совсем чуточку подправить до правильного треугольника.
02:27:090 (4,5) - (нази) Бланкет можно подправить немного.
02:59:441 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]

01:01:666 (5) - Move it to x:304 y:244
01:28:731 (5,6) - Fix that overlap, it could be better
01:53:470 (7) - Add NC here.
02:07:532 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Personally I dislike that moment, maybe change it to 1/4 sliders?
02:16:729 (4,5,6) - Bad overlap, stack it better?
03:46:805 (1,2,3) - Make a perfect triangle?

[Shiro's Insane]
First of all I want to mention that Shiro is cute \:D/

HP Drain - +1-2?
00:17:050 (1) - You have some points that doesn't change almost anything. Maybe make smth like this?
02:13:769 (7,10) - Fix the blanket.

[Insane]

03:12:762 (9,1,2) - Make a perfect triangle?

Good luck!

Luvdic

2,113 posts

Joined July 2009

Topic Starter

Luvdic 2014-07-07T08:02:28+00:00

AlexaBM wrote:
Mod Post!

Almost everything done, except some slider changes, and the stacked stuff in easy as well, for which I admit that I have to find play tests to see how hard they really are. (Also the make perfect triangles, since Im not sure if they are perfect or not yet lol)

Also, the kiai thing, I already have them on my diffs, if the other mappers doesnt want to, I wont force them to

And thanks a lot for the mod!

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2014-07-09T08:05:33+00:00

AlexaBM wrote:
[Sieg's Normal]
00:12:399 (1,2,3) - Сделай равносторонний треугольник?
подправил что-то
00:24:451 (5,1) - (нази) Бланкет можно немного улучшить с:
ага
00:31:217 (5,1) - ^
^
00:44:116 (1) - Оттяни первую белую точку на x:132 y:344 или примерно так для бланкета с 00:43:693 (5) -
окай
01:16:044 (4) - Может как-то так? Лично я не люблю, когда вот так флоу ломается :с
поделись скином
01:28:096 (1) - Ситуация: новичок, быстрый спиннер, следующий объект далеко от центра. Не очень приятная ситуация, если честно. Начни (1) поближе к центру. Или как-нибудь еще, подумай над этим моментом.
даа, подучаю, но там мало что можно сделать
02:18:843 (8,1) - Поменяй местами НК
не уверен
02:22:227 (1,2,3) - Тут совсем чуточку подправить до правильного треугольника.
ага
02:27:090 (4,5) - (нази) Бланкет можно подправить немного
да.
02:59:441 (1,2) - ^

спасибо

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365,242,169080,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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414,140,174367,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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224,130,180921,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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256,61,181979,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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387,75,187476,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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390,312,189591,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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200,237,193820,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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94,297,198471,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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340,168,201009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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94,309,203123,5,10,0:0:0:0:
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250,110,204391,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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130,76,218770,1,8,0:0:0:0:
268,36,219193,1,8,0:0:0:0:
411,42,219616,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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429,205,221731,1,12,0:0:0:0:
446,62,222153,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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76,66,224057,2,0,L|151:76,1,60,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
110,215,224691,1,8,0:0:0:0:
87,357,225114,5,8,0:0:0:0:
157,345,225325,2,0,L|253:329,2,90,8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,357,226171,1,0,0:0:0:0:
16,368,226382,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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290,180,232302,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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220,79,236531,2,0,P|179:85|144:74,1,60,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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256,230,238223,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,238646,12,8,239914,0:0:0:0:
467,113,240338,6,0,P|425:70|350:67,1,120,10|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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12,27,246681,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Myxo

osu! Alumni

3,103 posts

Joined December 2012

Myxo 2014-07-16T15:49:33+00:00

General

Maybe you'd want to add your old username to the tags as well? Because people may still recognize you under that name. But since your other newer maps don't have it as well, I suppose the answer is no.

Easy

I'd probably go with OD1, since this diff involves quite heavy tapping, especially at the end 04:00:761 (2,3).
You were ignoring the stanza sometimes in this diff, which is bad, because the most emphasized beats should be clickable, in order to emphasize them even more. Here's a list of beats where it would sound much better if either a slider started at those beats or a circle is placed there:
1. 00:28:891 - Solution: http://puu.sh/adFth/42e576424d.jpg
2. 01:55:162 - Solution: http://puu.sh/adFO7/aacf36ee5a.jpg
3. 02:32:376 - Solution: http://puu.sh/adG70/288e26c76f.jpg
4. 03:53:571 - Solution: http://puu.sh/adG2v/31f639fe77.jpg
00:08:381 (1) - This sounds strange, because you mapped this beat, but not the following one 00:08:593. They obviously belong together and newbies will get very confused when they have to click once but hear two loud beats in the music. I recommend you this rhythm: http://puu.sh/adF6u/536b67a843.jpg
00:12:609 (1) - This would sound better when it ends at the downbeat at 00:15:359. You have to decide between three emphasized beats here, and I'd definitely choose the downbeat because it's the one where newbies will expect it to end.
00:17:050 (1,2,1) - Minor - At the moment this transition feels a bit bad, so I'd recommend you to curve the first slider the other way around, so you get something like this: http://puu.sh/adFlI/617a871c9c.jpg
00:25:508 (1,2) - Any reason for lower spacing here? Same applies to 01:38:246 (1)
01:01:454 (2,3,4) - This transition plays rather awkward, because it's unnatural to move down after the slider, as you create a clockwise oval-movement with this placement 01:01:031 (1,2). A nice solution would be to move (3) and (4), so you have a more straight transition between (2) and (3): http://puu.sh/adGsX/08133ee696.jpg
01:16:255 - This beat feels like it shouldn't be ignored, since there is a relatively loud cymbal sound there. Change 01:14:987 (3) to this rhythm to fix it: http://puu.sh/adFFC/3ce1a4c867.jpg
01:34:863 (4) - This combo currently covers a huge time compared to your other combos, so it might be a good idea to NC this object. Same applies to 01:48:395 (4)
04:13:870 (2,1) - I'd swap NCs for those, since he sings the final "Dead to the World" here 04:13:870 (2,1,2) without any background instruments, so it would be kinda cool to have these in one combo.
04:15:139 (2,3) - This is probably really hard to read for the newbies, because you have a 3/2-gap before. If they misread it as an 1/1-gap, they will have no chance here. That's why I would change these circles into this rhythm http://puu.sh/adGf5/b79031d5fb.jpg - Because you don't have to click accurately on a slider compared to circles.
Overall, very nice Easy! I like how you break the flow a little when you want to emphasize beats, that's good. It's not the mainstream wonderful smooth flow that you see in every second map :3 It's cool that you made it harder at the end of the diff, but only when you change the OD as I mentioned in my mod.

Sieg's Normal

00:05:209 to 00:18:742 - This section feels completely weird rhythm-wise. The most emphasized notes in this section go like this all the way http://puu.sh/adQFb/afce0f059a.jpg as you can probably hear (and also see in the Insane diffs). This is relatively unmappable for a Normal diff, so I highly recommend you to apply something simple like at the Hard or Easy diff, because your current rhythm really sounds weird.
00:10:073 - If you didn't fix the above point, which I don't hope, then you should atleast add a note here. The 3/2-gap you created here feels very unintuitive.
00:24:451 (5) - This is a must-fix. It sounds really awkward. I just don't understand what you were following with this slider. 00:24:663 + 00:25:085 are the most emphasized beats around here, so a rhythm like this would work much better: http://puu.sh/adR7E/def4aa7aad.jpg Same applies for 00:31:217 (5)
00:33:966 (3) - This object marks the beginning of a new section in the song and should definitely have NC.
00:36:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Overall, this is way too difficult for a Normal diff. Even if this one is supposed to be hard, but such an amount of 1/2-tapping in a row is just cruel for the newbies. Think of something similiar to this: http://puu.sh/adRfJ/602d38e15e.jpg
00:37:349 - The NC should be here instead of at 00:36:504. It fits your NC pattern much better and the combo won't be so long anymore. Remember that very long combos (10+) should be avoided in Normal diffs, because it will cause the newbies to fail as the drain doesn't rise much.
00:49:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sounds a bit empty hitsound-wise, so a clap at 00:49:613 (3) would fit well.
00:50:882 (1,2) - It is really strange that you didn't map those beats 00:51:516 + 00:53:208, since the vocals are very emphasized there! And since you tried to follow vocals with these sldiers (otherwise they wouldn't make much sense), it should definitely be changed. Try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/adTkv/cdb5c59470.jpg Same applies for these 01:04:414 (1,2) of course.
01:09:912 (5) - You've been mainly following vocals with sliders in this section, so this long one sounds very strange. Again I don't see a reason why you decided for this rhythm here, it just makes no sense. A simple 1/1-reverse-slider http://puu.sh/adRzF/5906db9b31.jpg would sound much better and fit with your other rhythms more
01:22:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why did you spam claps in this combo? It seems really random and doesn't sound good. Try to make your hitsounding consistent with the other combos in this section.
01:41:630 (1,2) - Same as 00:50:882 (1,2)
01:47:128 (5) - I think you forgot a clap at the end. Same here 01:52:414 (2)
01:53:470 (3,4) - These might be a problem. Their heads are pretty close to each other, so they might be difficult to read for newbies. It seems to be a more complex movement than you usually used in this difficulty, so it will be better if you change it to something simple, for example: http://puu.sh/adS25/24a7feeb55.jpg
02:02:562 (2) - This rhythm is definitely wrong. It's the most major issue in this diff. There is nothing you would want to map on that blue tick! This would be a correct rhythm: http://puu.sh/adSGt/48c4e44b1e.jpg Same applies for 03:54:205 (2) obviously.
02:05:311 (7) - You should add NC here, to prevent the combo from being too long.
02:09:328 (2,3) - The transition between these sliders plays awkward at the moment. The curvy shape of (2) implies to move up-left, so (3) is placed too far down. In my example http://puu.sh/adSSR/18d135edf8.jpg I rotated (3) a bit and moved it more upwards, which makes a much better transition! You will have to rearrange the following pattern though.
02:20:535 (1,2,3,4) - Once again, pretty weird rhythm. You chose to map this blue tick 02:21:064, although 02:21:169 is much more emphasized. Try out this rhythm, it fits much better: http://puu.sh/adT1B/ca9db31f96.jpg Same applies for 03:45:114 (1,2,3,4)
02:27:936 (5) + 02:34:702 (5) - Same as 00:24:451
02:30:685 (5,6) - This is a pretty weird overlap to be used in a Normal diff. It will likely confuse the newbies! I'd suggest something like this: http://puu.sh/adT8n/d21c78acb3.jpg
02:35:759 to 02:49:292 - In this section, NCing is a bit messed up, which makes some of your combos too long! NCs should only be placed at 02:35:759 + 02:39:142 + 02:42:526 + 02:45:909
02:35:759 (1) - Again, you're missing out emphasized vocals at the red tick, so this would be a better rhythm: http://puu.sh/adTrV/f1ec36ffcd.jpg
02:45:909 (1,2,3,4) - Again, I think these overlaps might confuse newbies. Try to move the sliders more apart, for example: http://puu.sh/adTF0/a84ba51ed3.jpg
03:43:422 (8) + 03:56:955 (6) - These should be NCd as well, to prevent long combos.
It has much potential, but overall, this diff needs much work. Much of the rhythm is not really acceptable / fitting the song. It would've been better not to map blue ticks in this song, as they sometimes make it more complicated than it should be and you are missing other important beats. Often you used long sliders for no real reason, and left out very important beats with them. Another problem is the NCing, as your combos were often too long, but that can be easily fixed. Some of your transitions weren't the best either, but I didn't point everything out because the mod was already very long. Try fixing most of these issues and your difficulty will be really great, for sure!

Hard

I'm a bit worried about the difficulty gap between Hard and the two Insanes, as both Insane are pretty jumpy and this Hard doesn't contain any jumps. In fact, your jumps in the Insane diff are so huge, so I'd have expected atleast some simple sliderjumps in the Hard diff as well. You should really consider to implement some, if you want to improve the spread. Nothing major though, I think.
00:18:742 (1,2) - Here you started so nicely with 1,0x 1/4-spacing, but then starting at 00:20:434 you used 1,3x for 1/4. Such high 1/4-spacing can play really uncomfortable, especially in a Hard diff. Again, it's nothing you have to change, as it would also mean to rearrange many patterns, but you could try to make it consistent atleast.
01:02:300 (1,2,3,4) - The movement in this pattern feels a bit cramped. After this transition 01:01:666 (5,1), you wouldn't expect to move to the right like this to reach 01:02:723 (2) and after that you even have to move backwards to get to 01:03:146 (3). I can't explain this well, but try to make something more dynamic.
01:49:030 (2,3,4,5) - Don't use stacks like this in Hard diffs. It will likely confuse players that a 1/4-triplet is stacked again on a 1/2-circle. Moving them apart would also play much better
01:52:413 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - You know how cruel extensive 1/2-tapping like this can be for Hard players? It's not a must-fix, but I'd atleast include some sliders.
Overall, great Hard! The flow is flawless, as well as the rhythm! Except the high 1/4-spacing I'm fully satisfied :b

Shiro's Insane

Don't you think 100% of volume is a bit too much? If you lower every volume by 15-20% it will sound less noisy
00:12:399 (1) - I think it would be more natural to end it at 00:15:359. You have to decide between three emphasized beats here, and I'd definitely choose the downbeat because it's the one where most players will expect it to end.
00:17:050 (1) - Umm... Minor, but this slidershape looks kind of random and not really appealing. I know you can make awesome slidershapes (from other maps), so I'm sure you can think of something better here :b
01:01:877 (4,5,6,1) - The flow seems to break here a little bit. After the jump from (5) to (6) I didn't expect to slow down and move more upwards into the direction of (1). The major problem here is the slow-down, so it would be great if you could move (6) so that the distance between (5) - (6) - (1) is equal. http://puu.sh/adWpj/91bde96313.jpg
01:52:201 (2,3,4) - Again, slowing-down linearly plays weird for me. It's just not intuitive after a jump. Again, the simplest solution would be something like this http://puu.sh/adWKG/d28c5537bd.jpg , but you can probably think of a better pattern Same applies for 01:53:047 (5,6,1)
03:40:039 (1,2,3) - The flow can be improved here. After (1) and (2), it feels weird to jump so far to the left to reach (3) and then even change the direction of movement. In my opinion, something like this would be a good solution: http://puu.sh/adX57/2e4b8e2776.jpg
04:00:338 - Okay, here you went crazy lol xD
Good, as always! What I also said to your other guest diff I modded recently... It's great that you are putting much thought into your mapping, one can clearly see that! Also, I love your symmetry patterns like this 00:32:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11), it's simple made, but it's still fairly unique for some reason.

Insane

01:06:740 (6) - After the HUGE back-and-forth jumppattern this would REALLY play better with a smoother flow, aka curving the slider the other way around like this: http://puu.sh/adXFC/f25a3f4a51.jpg
01:29:788 - This is a very emphasized beat and therefore it should be clickable. Try to use this rhythm: http://puu.sh/adXKU/9281483977.jpg
02:06:897 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Minor, but it would be cool if you ctrl+g both 02:07:531 (1,2) and 02:07:848 (3,4). It would improve the structure of this pattern, since the doubles would always head away from the middle of the screen.
02:45:909 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Finally players will learn how to read approach circles + NCs lol... No, it's a cool pattern :3
02:51:829 (3,4,5,6) - It's pretty weird to have those sliders start on the blue tick, since the player has to click on the blue tick then. Try to make them start on the white and red ticks, for example with this rhythm: http://puu.sh/adY20/a59643671e.jpg Same applies for 02:58:913 (1,2,3)
03:24:815 (5,1,2,3,4) - Hmm, I don't know what to think about this. It doesn't seem to fit the map very well. I feel something like this http://puu.sh/adYiR/0114fb7e74.jpg (having higher spacing and sort of a curve) while still decreasing spacing would be better, but it's minor.
GG that you managed to create an almost-5-star Insane for 142 BPM without huge streamjumps and without making it feel overdone. This diff is so amazing, especially the kiai-parts and the calm section! I can see it coming that many people will complain again (like with your Xanandra map), for example that the jumps are too huge and not really fitting the music, or it has too much 1/4, or that the flow is bad or something like that. Please, don't listen to that shit and rank it with this style!

Overall, really enjoyable mapset! I feel that Hard and the two Insanes are almost ready, Easy follows. The Normal needs some more work though, but I already mentioned that in my little review at the end.
Good luck! ^-^

EDIT: Here you have my last 5 stars lol.

Last edited by Myxo 2014-07-16T15:53:38+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Mao

Elite Mapper II

2,963 posts

Joined December 2012

Mao 2014-07-16T15:50:12+00:00

This is too awesome <3
Take some Stars~

Luvdic

2,113 posts

Joined July 2009

Topic Starter

Luvdic 2014-07-16T17:20:16+00:00

Boxed because its so long!

Desperate-kun wrote:

General
Maybe you'd want to add your old username to the tags as well? Because people may still recognize you under that name. But since your other newer maps don't have it as well, I suppose the answer is no.
:(

Easy
I'd probably go with OD1, since this diff involves quite heavy tapping, especially at the end 04:00:761 (2,3).
Ok
You were ignoring the stanza sometimes in this diff, which is bad, because the most emphasized beats should be clickable, in order to emphasize them even more. Here's a list of beats where it would sound much better if either a slider started at those beats or a circle is placed there:
00:28:891 - Solution: http://puu.sh/adFth/42e576424d.jpg
01:55:162 - Solution: http://puu.sh/adFO7/aacf36ee5a.jpg
02:32:376 - Solution: http://puu.sh/adG70/288e26c76f.jpg
03:53:571 - Solution: http://puu.sh/adG2v/31f639fe77.jpg
Ok
00:08:381 (1) - This sounds strange, because you mapped this beat, but not the following one 00:08:593. They obviously belong together and newbies will get very confused when they have to click once but hear two loud beats in the music. I recommend you this rhythm: http://puu.sh/adF6u/536b67a843.jpg
This is fine, granted that I had only 2 test plays for this diff, but this part seemed to be played fine.
00:12:609 (1) - This would sound better when it ends at the downbeat at 00:15:359. You have to decide between three emphasized beats here, and I'd definitely choose the downbeat because it's the one where newbies will expect it to end.
This is done so it's more consistent with what I did in 00:08:381 (1) - and that is mapping only to the first beat, since they will hear it, and will hit, not wait until the downbeat
00:17:050 (1,2,1) - Minor - At the moment this transition feels a bit bad, so I'd recommend you to curve the first slider the other way around, so you get something like this: http://puu.sh/adFlI/617a871c9c.jpg
It feels fine more me, in any case, it should need a bit more of curve in the same direction, for which I applied now lol.
00:25:508 (1,2) - Any reason for lower spacing here? Same applies to 01:38:246 (1)
My bad, sorry, and thanks!
01:01:454 (2,3,4) - This transition plays rather awkward, because it's unnatural to move down after the slider, as you create a clockwise oval-movement with this placement 01:01:031 (1,2). A nice solution would be to move (3) and (4), so you have a more straight transition between (2) and (3): http://puu.sh/adGsX/08133ee696.jpg
Totally intended it to be this way
01:16:255 - This beat feels like it shouldn't be ignored, since there is a relatively loud cymbal sound there. Change 01:14:987 (3) to this rhythm to fix it: http://puu.sh/adFFC/3ce1a4c867.jpg
Ok
01:34:863 (4) - This combo currently covers a huge time compared to your other combos, so it might be a good idea to NC this object. Same applies to 01:48:395 (4)
04:13:870 (2,1) - I'd swap NCs for those, since he sings the final "Dead to the World" here 04:13:870 (2,1,2) without any background instruments, so it would be kinda cool to have these in one combo.
Ok
04:15:139 (2,3) - This is probably really hard to read for the newbies, because you have a 3/2-gap before. If they misread it as an 1/1-gap, they will have no chance here. That's why I would change these circles into this rhythm http://puu.sh/adGf5/b79031d5fb.jpg - Because you don't have to click accurately on a slider compared to circles.
Ok
Overall, very nice Easy! I like how you break the flow a little when you want to emphasize beats, that's good. It's not the mainstream wonderful smooth flow that you see in every second map :3 It's cool that you made it harder at the end of the diff, but only when you change the OD as I mentioned in my mod.
Thanks!, glad you like it

Hard
I'm a bit worried about the difficulty gap between Hard and the two Insanes, as both Insane are pretty jumpy and this Hard doesn't contain any jumps. In fact, your jumps in the Insane diff are so huge, so I'd have expected atleast some simple sliderjumps in the Hard diff as well. You should really consider to implement some, if you want to improve the spread. Nothing major though, I think.
I was actually worried that my hard was a bit too hard, but lets see for more opinions
00:18:742 (1,2) - Here you started so nicely with 1,0x 1/4-spacing, but then starting at 00:20:434 you used 1,3x for 1/4. Such high 1/4-spacing can play really uncomfortable, especially in a Hard diff. Again, it's nothing you have to change, as it would also mean to rearrange many patterns, but you could try to make it consistent atleast.
Actually its my mistake, and it should be 1,3 thanks for noticing, and fixed.
01:02:300 (1,2,3,4) - The movement in this pattern feels a bit cramped. After this transition 01:01:666 (5,1), you wouldn't expect to move to the right like this to reach 01:02:723 (2) and after that you even have to move backwards to get to 01:03:146 (3). I can't explain this well, but try to make something more dynamic.
Yeah... not really understanding what you mean, but I can say that making it kinda cramped was my intention, as can be seen at 01:38:880 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
01:49:030 (2,3,4,5) - Don't use stacks like this in Hard diffs. It will likely confuse players that a 1/4-triplet is stacked again on a 1/2-circle. Moving them apart would also play much better
Hahaha was something I meant to change, but forgot.
01:52:413 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - You know how cruel extensive 1/2-tapping like this can be for Hard players? It's not a must-fix, but I'd atleast include some sliders.
I know, its kinda intentional
Overall, great Hard! The flow is flawless, as well as the rhythm! Except the high 1/4-spacing I'm fully satisfied :b

Shiro's Insane

Not meaning to barge into Shiro's diff, but I believe that he fixed something related to hitsounds volume, and now I feel guilty that I might have messed up something with his diff...

[list:1337]
Insane
01:06:740 (6) - After the HUGE back-and-forth jumppattern this would REALLY play better with a smoother flow, aka curving the slider the other way around like this: http://puu.sh/adXFC/f25a3f4a51.jpg
I like the way it is curved right now :'(
01:29:788 - This is a very emphasized beat and therefore it should be clickable. Try to use this rhythm: http://puu.sh/adXKU/9281483977.jpg
Ok, you win, but did a slightly different thing
02:06:897 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Minor, but it would be cool if you ctrl+g both 02:07:531 (1,2) and 02:07:848 (3,4). It would improve the structure of this pattern, since the doubles would always head away from the middle of the screen.
Intended to be this way
02:45:909 (1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - Finally players will learn how to read approach circles + NCs lol... No, it's a cool pattern :3
Yay, finally someone understands me, and to defend more this pattern, you could see this as a stream, and yet some people no matter what will always get some 100s unless you have completely mastered it, so this kind of pattern its fine for an insane.
02:51:829 (3,4,5,6) - It's pretty weird to have those sliders start on the blue tick, since the player has to click on the blue tick then. Try to make them start on the white and red ticks, for example with this rhythm: http://puu.sh/adY20/a59643671e.jpg Same applies for 02:58:913 (1,2,3)
Due to popular demand, did something slightly different
03:24:815 (5,1,2,3,4) - Hmm, I don't know what to think about this. It doesn't seem to fit the map very well. I feel something like this http://puu.sh/adYiR/0114fb7e74.jpg (having higher spacing and sort of a curve) while still decreasing spacing would be better, but it's minor.
I want to do a curve, but in the end, I decided that theres to little amount of notes to do a nice curve, although I could try using a higher initial spacing (Yes, decreasing spacing is something I want to keep) Well, let me think more about it and wait for more opinions
GG that you managed to create an almost-5-star Insane for 142 BPM without huge streamjumps and without making it feel overdone. This diff is so amazing, especially the kiai-parts and the calm section! I can see it coming that many people will complain again (like with your Xanandra map), for example that the jumps are too huge and not really fitting the music, or it has too much 1/4, or that the flow is bad or something like that. Please, don't listen to that shit and rank it with this style!
Will try, and thanks

Overall, really enjoyable mapset! I feel that Hard and the two Insanes are almost ready, Easy follows. The Normal needs some more work though, but I already mentioned that in my little review at the end.
Good luck! ^-^

EDIT: Here you have my last 5 stars lol.

Thanks a lot for the mod!

And also for the stars, glad you guys like it!

Sieg

3,981 posts

Joined February 2012

Sieg 2014-07-16T20:55:36+00:00

Desperate-kun wrote:
Sieg's Normal

00:05:209 to 00:18:742 - This section feels completely weird rhythm-wise. The most emphasized notes in this section go like this all the way http://puu.sh/adQFb/afce0f059a.jpg as you can probably hear (and also see in the Insane diffs). This is relatively unmappable for a Normal diff, so I highly recommend you to apply something simple like at the Hard or Easy diff, because your current rhythm really sounds weird.
i don't really see how this rhythm is wrong

00:10:073 - If you didn't fix the above point, which I don't hope, then you should atleast add a note here. The 3/2-gap you created here feels very unintuitive.
nope, it's not

00:24:451 (5) - This is a must-fix. It sounds really awkward. I just don't understand what you were following with this slider. 00:24:663 + 00:25:085 are the most emphasized beats around here, so a rhythm like this would work much better: http://puu.sh/adR7E/def4aa7aad.jpg Same applies for 00:31:217 (5)
while i see both variants are acceptable, i prefer to keep

00:33:966 (3) - This object marks the beginning of a new section in the song and should definitely have NC.
00:32:275 (1) - marks not 00:33:966 (3)

00:36:504 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Overall, this is way too difficult for a Normal diff. Even if this one is supposed to be hard, but such an amount of 1/2-tapping in a row is just cruel for the newbies. Think of something similiar to this: http://puu.sh/adRfJ/602d38e15e.jpg
song is so slow, this is maybe a bit complicated than your average normal but still normal

00:37:349 - The NC should be here instead of at 00:36:504. It fits your NC pattern much better and the combo won't be so long anymore. Remember that very long combos (10+) should be avoided in Normal diffs, because it will cause the newbies to fail as the drain doesn't rise much.
rhythm wise to keep nc on 00:36:504 (1) -, also it fits new pattern

00:49:190 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Sounds a bit empty hitsound-wise, so a clap at 00:49:613 (3) would fit well.
fixed

00:50:882 (1,2) - It is really strange that you didn't map those beats 00:51:516 + 00:53:208, since the vocals are very emphasized there! And since you tried to follow vocals with these sldiers (otherwise they wouldn't make much sense), it should definitely be changed. Try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/adTkv/cdb5c59470.jpg Same applies for these 01:04:414 (1,2) of course.
i prefer to keep them long here to keep variance

01:09:912 (5) - You've been mainly following vocals with sliders in this section, so this long one sounds very strange. Again I don't see a reason why you decided for this rhythm here, it just makes no sense. A simple 1/1-reverse-slider http://puu.sh/adRzF/5906db9b31.jpg would sound much better and fit with your other rhythms more
current way represent lyrics far better

01:22:176 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Why did you spam claps in this combo? It seems really random and doesn't sound good. Try to make your hitsounding consistent with the other combos in this section.
uh, something happened here, fixed

01:41:630 (1,2) - Same as 00:50:882 (1,2)
same

01:47:128 (5) - I think you forgot a clap at the end. Same here 01:52:414 (2)
nope, all fine

01:53:470 (3,4) - These might be a problem. Their heads are pretty close to each other, so they might be difficult to read for newbies. It seems to be a more complex movement than you usually used in this difficulty, so it will be better if you change it to something simple, for example: http://puu.sh/adS25/24a7feeb55.jpg
yeah, that why this is called normal not beginner (:

02:02:562 (2) - This rhythm is definitely wrong. It's the most major issue in this diff. There is nothing you would want to map on that blue tick! This would be a correct rhythm: http://puu.sh/adSGt/48c4e44b1e.jpg Same applies for 03:54:205 (2) obviously.
ugu i know, buut prefer to keep

02:05:311 (7) - You should add NC here, to prevent the combo from being too long.
1,2 combo.... gross

02:09:328 (2,3) - The transition between these sliders plays awkward at the moment. The curvy shape of (2) implies to move up-left, so (3) is placed too far down. In my example http://puu.sh/adSSR/18d135edf8.jpg I rotated (3) a bit and moved it more upwards, which makes a much better transition! You will have to rearrange the following pattern though.
fine as for me

02:20:535 (1,2,3,4) - Once again, pretty weird rhythm. You chose to map this blue tick 02:21:064, although 02:21:169 is much more emphasized. Try out this rhythm, it fits much better: http://puu.sh/adT1B/ca9db31f96.jpg Same applies for 03:45:114 (1,2,3,4)
i can't see what is "much more" emphasized at 02:21:169

02:27:936 (5) + 02:34:702 (5) - Same as 00:24:451
same

02:30:685 (5,6) - This is a pretty weird overlap to be used in a Normal diff. It will likely confuse the newbies! I'd suggest something like this: http://puu.sh/adT8n/d21c78acb3.jpg
no it's not, i did see a tons of that kind in many normals

02:35:759 to 02:49:292 - In this section, NCing is a bit messed up, which makes some of your combos too long! NCs should only be placed at 02:35:759 + 02:39:142 + 02:42:526 + 02:45:909
02:35:759 (1) - Again, you're missing out emphasized vocals at the red tick, so this would be a better rhythm: http://puu.sh/adTrV/f1ec36ffcd.jpg
02:45:909 (1,2,3,4) - Again, I think these overlaps might confuse newbies. Try to move the sliders more apart, for example: http://puu.sh/adTF0/a84ba51ed3.jpg
fine as for me

03:43:422 (8) + 03:56:955 (6) - These should be NCd as well, to prevent long combos.
8 is not too long

It has much potential, but overall, this diff needs much work. Much of the rhythm is not really acceptable / fitting the song. It would've been better not to map blue ticks in this song, as they sometimes make it more complicated than it should be and you are missing other important beats. Often you used long sliders for no real reason, and left out very important beats with them. Another problem is the NCing, as your combos were often too long, but that can be easily fixed. Some of your transitions weren't the best either, but I didn't point everything out because the mod was already very long. Try fixing most of these issues and your difficulty will be really great, for sure![/list][/notice]

thanks (:

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