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Kicks N Licks Feat. Nicole Millar - Own The Night (MitiS DnB

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Ami
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Samstag, 8. März 2014 at 22:03:56

Artist: Kicks N Licks Feat. Nicole Millar
Title: Own The Night (MitiS DnB Remix)
Tags: cheesiest Asphyxia drumnbass Irreversible
BPM: 172
Filesize: 5086kb
Play Time: 01:45
Difficulties Available:
  1. Asphyxia's Insane (5 stars, 285 notes)
  2. cheesiest's Easy (2,19 stars, 77 notes)
  3. Hard (4,96 stars, 194 notes)
  4. Irre's Insane (5 stars, 308 notes)
  5. Normal (3,5 stars, 98 notes)
Download: Kicks N Licks Feat. Nicole Millar - Own The Night (MitiS DnB Remix)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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cheesiest's Easy = by cheesiest (Done)
Normal = by Me (Done)
Hard = by Me (Done)
Asphyxia's Insane = Asphyxia (Done)
Irre's Insane = by Irreversible (Done, Hitsounding by Priti)
Big thanks for Frostmourne for Bubble!
Biggg thanks for Blue Dragon for Rank! <3

HAPPY BIRTHDAY KYSHIRO, YOURE THE BEST OK. <3333
Last edited by Ami , edited 23 times in total.
Beige
Elite Mapper
2,191 posts
Joined February 2011
Beige
yay, I'm First xD As your request!

[General]

Why used only sampleset 'Normal' Q_Q

And Fine.

[Easy]

HP -1 OD +1 is better

Good Blanket :D I respect you

00:40:544 (3) - Noob Player hate this overlap, also Some BAT check that pattern. How about Blanket with 00:39:148 (1) - ?

00:45:079 (2) - Little bit weird, Because overlapped with 00:43:858 (2) - this slider.

00:55:892 (1) - NC bug

01:08:451 (3) - Same as 00:40:544 -

01:29:381 (1,2,3,4) - Noob Player hate these overlap, too Q_Q, I think It should be remapped some patterns.

[Normal]

HP, OD +1

00:30:776 (1) - Move 1 grid left is blanket with 00:30:079 (3) - , 00:32:172 (2) - :D

And Fine

[Hard]

HP +2

00:25:195 (1) - weird Slider, How about to make like this?

00:32:172 (5) - Same as 00:25:195 - , This slider's Balance does not match.

00:38:451 (7) - Yes... move 1 grid up at Second red point.

00:41:852 (8,2,3) - It is not weird rhythm, but It is Hard diff, Some people confused that pattern. red tick and white tick is better, to hit the circles.

00:54:497 (5) - NC

01:02:869 (5) - Same as 00:25:195 -

01:06:358 (6) - Bad flow, How about this?

01:16:823 (4) - NC

01:17:520 (5,6,7,8,9) - It's Hard diff, If you added stream to some part is fine. but, This diff isn't had stream, Only this part have stream. I suggest repeat slider is better.

01:40:544 - Spinner is better. If you accept this, Add circle in 01:40:544 - and Add slider in 01:40:631 - .

[Insane]

00:26:590 (1) - Weird slider because second point's balance doesn't match. How about like this

00:53:799 (9) - NC

01:23:799 (1) - Nazi, unblanket(?) Move (288,200) at second point is better.

01:38:799 - Add note or slider.

Pro Ami <3
Asphyxia
osu! Alumni
1,986 posts
Joined June 2012
Asphyxia
First! Fixing the mod soon, thanks!!

W h i t e

W h i t e wrote:

[Insane]

00:26:590 (1) - Weird slider because second point's balance doesn't match. How about like this
Fixed I guess.

00:53:799 (9) - NC Although I didn't want to add a NC there the first time, I guess it's better with it so yeah, fixed.

01:23:799 (1) - Nazi, unblanket(?) Move (288,200) at second point is better. Fixed somehow.

01:38:799 - Add note or slider. There isn't a sound that a note could fit, besides I like the break there so nah.[/notice]

Pro Ami <3



http://puu.sh/6QNb0.txt
or if you prefer it as a code
Code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Kicks_N_Licks_-_Own_The_Night_Feat._Nicole_Millar_...mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 55892
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 22404
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Own The Night (MitiS DnB Remix)
TitleUnicode:Own The Night (MitiS DnB Remix)
Artist:Kicks N Licks Feat. Nicole Millar
ArtistUnicode:Kicks N Licks Feat. Nicole Millar
Creator:Ami
Version:Asphyxia's Insane
Source:
Tags:
BeatmapID:368306
BeatmapSetID:149045

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:7
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:8
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.8
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.png",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

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485,119,69497,2,0,L|499:0,1,107.999996704102,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
307,202,69846,6,0,B|204:242|216:163|96:214,1,215.999993408203,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
337,118,70369,1,0,0:0:0:0:
337,118,70544,2,0,P|351:59|339:1,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
182,220,70892,2,0,P|174:273|188:325,1,107.999996704102,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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394,170,72113,1,0,0:0:0:0:
394,170,72201,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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296,93,74555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,67,74730,2,0,P|114:51|44:59,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
207,193,75079,1,0,1:0:0:0:
336,190,75253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
454,242,75427,6,0,L|440:353,2,107.999996704102,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
296,93,75951,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,93,76125,2,0,L|282:200,2,107.999996704102,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
177,38,76648,1,0,0:0:0:0:
114,89,76823,6,0,P|81:110|87:268,1,202.500007724762,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
135,311,77520,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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215,312,77695,1,0,0:0:0:0:
251,328,77782,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,349,77869,1,0,0:0:0:0:
310,317,77956,1,0,0:0:0:0:
341,290,78044,1,0,0:0:0:0:
379,277,78131,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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369,52,78741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,332,80137,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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116,148,80834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,129,80922,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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369,347,82230,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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8,146,82753,2,0,P|55:170|109:169,1,107.999996704102,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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112,267,83625,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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292,313,84323,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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126,213,85544,1,0,1:0:0:0:
126,213,85718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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333,162,87113,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,80,87288,1,2,0:0:0:0:
119,143,87462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
25,53,87637,1,0,1:0:0:0:
227,197,87811,1,0,0:0:0:0:
131,30,87985,5,2,0:0:0:0:
9,179,88160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
110,270,88334,1,0,1:0:0:0:
236,302,88509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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282,357,90427,1,0,1:0:0:0:
401,306,90602,1,0,0:0:0:0:
203,163,90776,6,0,B|310:202|306:132|419:176,1,215.999993408203,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
152,245,91299,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,76,91474,2,0,B|141:37|145:107|32:63,1,215.999993408203,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
102,318,91997,1,0,0:0:0:0:
102,318,92084,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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503,166,92869,2,0,P|520:112|500:53,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
383,24,93218,1,0,1:0:0:0:
260,64,93392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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6,205,93916,2,0,P|92:179|221:200,2,215.999993408203,0|2|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
6,205,94788,1,0,0:0:0:0:
311,237,94962,6,0,P|371:236|416:260,1,107.999996704102,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,294,95311,2,0,P|215:236|324:143,1,215.999993408203,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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89,340,96881,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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510,252,97404,1,0,1:0:0:0:
461,131,97579,1,0,0:0:0:0:
461,131,97666,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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99,134,98276,2,0,P|133:165|232:160,1,135.000005149842,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
58,212,99148,2,0,L|41:346,1,135.000005149842,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
229,170,99672,2,0,L|212:36,1,135.000005149842,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,213,100195,2,0,P|345:216|397:204,1,67.5000025749208,8|8,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
478,67,100544,6,0,L|470:160,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,104,100892,2,0,L|267:36,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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280,116,101590,2,0,L|285:57,1,58.4999973220826,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,113,101939,6,0,L|452:168,1,49.5000015106202,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
302,132,102288,2,0,L|305:82,1,49.5000015106202,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,209,102637,6,0,L|214:262,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
71,307,102985,2,0,L|76:254,1,45,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
210,229,103334,6,0,L|205:282,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
93,291,103683,2,0,L|98:238,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,257,104032,6,0,L|193:310,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,272,104381,2,0,L|127:219,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
187,284,104730,6,0,L|184:333,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
149,255,105079,2,0,L|154:202,1,45,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

Thank you so much for modding~

edit: For Ami, UWS tested my diff and he said this:



Just leaving it here
Ami
177 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Ami
I fixed all! thx w h i t e

Thank you so much for modding~

edit: For Ami, UWS tested my diff and he said this:



Just leaving it here
fixed too .3.
Lidan
268 posts
Joined February 2011
Lidan
[Easy]
  1. 01:27:642 - Add circle here?
[Insane]
  1. Turn off countdown
Not much, no need for kd.

Nice map~
Yauxo
1,622 posts
Joined June 2011
Yauxo
[Easy]

00:43:863 (2) - Move this one to 00:44:037 (2) - and shorten it to stop at 00:44:386

I like this one alot :3

[Normal]
Looks flawless to me, so I'll go Nazi on the Blankets

00:30:781 (1) - Move the last tick one (small grid) up for a better blanket
00:40:549 (3) - Middle tick one (small grid) to the right, last tick one up
00:48:223 (2) - Last tick one (small grid) to the left
01:16:130 (2) - Last tick one to the left
01:25:200 (3) - Last tick one to the right

[Insane]
So pretteh :3

01:01:130 (4) - ctrl+g
01:06:014 (2) - ctrl+g


[Hard]

00:45:258 (2) - Add a circle. Would fit there and adds consitency


The Mapset is very well done, gl with it!
onotoleonide
onotoleonide
[General]
check AiMod
[Easy]
  1. 00:41:944 (1) - you've used one repeat on whole map, why did you use two repeats here
  2. 01:39:851 (3) - >1/2 >easy >funney meme arrows
[Normal]
  1. omg where's 1/2 spam, this diff looks like easy+
[Hard]
  1. nothing, good diff
[Insane]
  1. 00:29:386 (1,2,3,4) - 2, 3, 4 are spaced with 1.2 ds, while 1 and 2 are spaced with ~1.5
  2. 00:43:427 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - move this one tick left and you'll get proper rhythm ~imho~
  3. 01:01:130 (4) - ctrl-g? omg didn't read post above
  4. 01:18:223 (1) - 419;272?
  5. 01:30:084 (3) - rotate by 8 degrees anticlockwise and re-adjust?
  6. wow that ending perkele vittun : D D D D
Sakaue Nachi
558 posts
Joined September 2012
Sakaue Nachi
I don't know how to mod easy normal & hard xD
[Insane]
00:22:932 (2) - try this?
SPOILER
00:53:804 (1,2,3) - SV 1.2 better?
00:56:944 (4) - try this?
SPOILER
01:16:653 (4) - I think it's too closed to the next slider
will be better?
SPOILER
01:38:979 (3) - add a note
Ami
177 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Ami
Im editing this post after I changed the things. haha

Yauxo
Checked AiMod, fixed.
fixed everything in Normal
00:45:258 (2) - Add a circle. Would fit there and adds consitency
no.

onotoleonide:
omg where's 1/2 spam, this diff looks like easy+
I dont like too much 1/2 in Normal, idk haha.
nothing, good diff
Thx!

And thx for random mod .3.

Thx for mods haha.
Asphyxia
osu! Alumni
1,986 posts
Joined June 2012
Asphyxia
Yauxo

Yauxo wrote:

[Easy]

[Insane]
So pretteh :3

01:01:130 (4) - ctrl+g
01:06:014 (2) - ctrl+g These two are intentionally placed like this and I want to keep them as they are.

onotoleonide

onotoleonide wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:29:386 (1,2,3,4) - 2, 3, 4 are spaced with 1.2 ds, while 1 and 2 are spaced with ~1.5 Yep, that's intentional!
  2. 00:43:427 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5) - move this one tick left and you'll get proper rhythm ~imho~ I think if you listen with 25%, the current one is better.
  3. 01:01:130 (4) - ctrl-g? omg didn't read post above Intentional.
  4. 01:18:223 (1) - 419;272? Nah, the current place for this slider is fine due to it's strong beat so I kind of wanted it to be more far away from the previous note.
  5. 01:30:084 (3) - rotate by 8 degrees anticlockwise and re-adjust? I like my current one a bit better, sorry. >:
  6. wow that ending perkele vittun : D D D D
LOOOOOL nice one ^

Sakaue Nachi

Sakaue Nachi wrote:

I don't know how to mod easy normal & hard xD
[Insane]
00:22:932 (2) - try this? It'd create an unnecessary jump which I don't want, besides the current one flows fine so I'll keep it.
SPOILER
00:53:804 (1,2,3) - SV 1.2 better? Doesn't make a difference tbh and current one is also fine.
00:56:944 (4) - try this? I don't like that jump actually so I'd rather keep what I have now.
SPOILER
01:16:653 (4) - I think it's too closed to the next slider Well, you can hear the music go from intense to slow so it should be like that.
will be better?
SPOILER
01:38:979 (3) - add a note But isn't there a slider already? Anyway, slider fits there imho way better and it's consistent with the previous sliders so yeah, keeping mine.

Thanks for the nice mod guys! Even though I didn't change much due to personal preferences they were nice suggestions!

http://puu.sh/6QZWw.txt
cheesiest
721 posts
Joined September 2009
cheesiest
W h i t e

W h i t e wrote:

[Easy]

HP -1 OD +1 is better

Good Blanket :D I respect you

00:40:544 (3) - Noob Player hate this overlap, also Some BAT check that pattern. How about Blanket with 00:39:148 (1) - ?

00:45:079 (2) - Little bit weird, Because overlapped with 00:43:858 (2) - this slider.

00:55:892 (1) - NC bug

01:08:451 (3) - Same as 00:40:544 -

01:29:381 (1,2,3,4) - Noob Player hate these overlap, too Q_Q, I think It should be remapped some patterns.

denied all except the NC bug thing?(added nc, w/e) and the OD suggestion. HP is staying 3.

Accepted L i d a N's circle addition suggestion. Don't worry, Ami, I hitsounded it B)

Yauxo

Yauxo wrote:

[Easy]

00:43:863 (2) - Move this one to 00:44:037 (2) - and shorten it to stop at 00:44:386

I like this one alot :3

denied. it fits the music imo. it's one of those kinks (-:

onotoleonide

onotoleonide wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 00:41:944 (1) - you've used one repeat on whole map, why did you use two repeats here music changes
  2. 01:39:851 (3) - >1/2 >easy >funney meme arrows i LIKE THIS this is nice 1/2 sorry keeping

Here you go, Ami: http://puu.sh/6Rfxz.txt
Ami
177 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Ami
ah updated! :3
Frostmourne
osu! Alumni
3,733 posts
Joined November 2009
Frostmourne
This mapset is just awesome!

Offset can be 77 (-7) and gave some suggestion via IRC at Asphyxia

You can call me for a bubble when you want but heh, the map seems really young somehow and an amount of star isn't enough..
Ami
177 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Ami
I will! thanks.
p3n
Global Moderator
947 posts
Joined June 2009
p3n
Short song needs a nice SB... ;)
Ami
177 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Ami
I cant make, too stupid Q_Q
Asphyxia
osu! Alumni
1,986 posts
Joined June 2012
Asphyxia
Lemme throw this mapset few starts to get it ranked soon :3
Leader
osu! Alumni
1,849 posts
Joined January 2011
Leader
mod as requested

[cheesiest's Easy]
  1. 00:32:170 (1,2,3,4) - I'd rather have a square-ish pattern here instead of a diamond one because new players feel and play better the first one, easier to catch and to sightread
  2. 00:33:565 (1) - You could at least move the last archor points so that the slider will have a path which is pointing at 00:34:960 (2) -
  3. 00:43:856 (2) - You should move that leftwards to avoid the tinytiny overlap with 00:45:077 (2) - ;_; and also has a better flow with previous slider
  4. 01:25:193 (3) - Looks off the patterns you are currently doing, why this random shape? You can make a 1/1 slider with 2 repeats that you haven't used before instead
  5. 01:29:379 (1,2,3,4) - no pls
[Normal]
  1. 00:55:193 - Add a circle here?
  2. 01:03:913 (4,1,2) - It would be nice if you create a perfect triangle between (4) and sliders' tails
  3. 01:27:982 (3) - Music actually suggest me a 1/1 slider with 2 repeats instead of the current one, sounds at white ticks are pretty loud
  4. 01:37:750 (1,2) - To be honest, 01:38:796 (2) - doesn't follow anything relevant, so I'd rather make a 1/1 slider + 3/2 slider pattern to emphasize the sounds in 01:37:751 - and 01:38:274 - more
[Hard]
  1. 00:41:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I didn't really get this pattern while playing... maybe it's just me, but I can't get what it follows
  2. 01:02:874 (5) - Move the red point at the same line of white point, like this:
    SPOILER
  3. 01:38:281 (2,3) - I think it would be better if you replace them with a slider
[Asphyxia's Insane]
  1. 00:35:665 (3,4,5,6,7) - Sudden stream, huh. I didn't feel at all while playing and since it's not following anything relevant, you should remove it
  2. 01:21:711 (3) - I find this slider shape a bit awful and without sense since there's nothing to blanket; personally I'd go for a red point slider similar to 01:12:642 (1) -
Actually, I think this map could have been much better if more normal hitsounds were used.. Nice one, though!
Ami
177 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Ami
Hi.

Leader
mod as requested
[Normal]
  1. 00:55:193 - Add a circle here? fix
  2. 01:03:913 (4,1,2) - It would be nice if you create a perfect triangle between (4) and sliders' tails I tried.
  3. 01:27:982 (3) - Music actually suggest me a 1/1 slider with 2 repeats instead of the current one, sounds at white ticks are pretty loud fix
  4. 01:37:750 (1,2) - To be honest, 01:38:796 (2) - doesn't follow anything relevant, so I'd rather make a 1/1 slider + 3/2 slider pattern to emphasize the sounds in 01:37:751 - and 01:38:274 - more I didnt understand Q_Q
[Hard]
  1. 00:41:944 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I didn't really get this pattern while playing... maybe it's just me, but I can't get what it follows I think thats you :3
  2. 01:02:874 (5) - Move the red point at the same line of white point, like this: fix
    SPOILER
  3. 01:38:281 (2,3) - I think it would be better if you replace them with a slider fix
Thx 4 mod! :3
cheesiest
721 posts
Joined September 2009
cheesiest
Leader

Leader wrote:

mod as requested

[cheesiest's Easy]
  1. 00:32:170 (1,2,3,4) - I'd rather have a square-ish pattern here instead of a diamond one because new players feel and play better the first one, easier to catch and to sightread umm. i like the diamond i think the flow fits better.
  2. 00:33:565 (1) - You could at least move the last archor points so that the slider will have a path which is pointing at 00:34:960 (2) - "at least" hahaha haha ha ah a. i don't think so. this suffices and really what is the point of making it point at (2)
  3. 00:43:856 (2) - You should move that leftwards to avoid the tinytiny overlap with 00:45:077 (2) - ;_; and also has a better flow with previous slider opted for a different "solution"
  4. 01:25:193 (3) - Looks off the patterns you are currently doing, why this random shape? You can make a 1/1 slider with 2 repeats that you haven't used before instead "random shape" lol it's a straight 1/1 slider w/ a 2/1 slider attached. keeping
  5. 01:29:379 (1,2,3,4) - no plsok changed

hi ami: http://puu.sh/6TeWV.txt
Asphyxia
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Asphyxia

Leader wrote:

[Asphyxia's Insane]
  1. 00:35:665 (3,4,5,6,7) - Sudden stream, huh. I didn't feel at all while playing and since it's not following anything relevant, you should remove it This is the first time someone suggests this (i guess), it doesn't feel that bad and for me, it feels good. While we're at it, there's actually sounds on the ticks except on the blue one but imo it plays better as a stream so keeping it. >:
  2. 01:21:711 (3) - I find this slider shape a bit awful and without sense since there's nothing to blanket; personally I'd go for a red point slider similar to 01:12:642 (1) - I guess you're right, fixed.
Actually, I think this map could have been much better if more normal hitsounds were used.. Nice one, though!
http://puu.sh/6Thyg.txt

Thx Leader~
riffy
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riffy
Sup, throwing a mod here as per your request.

[General]
  1. Offset is different on the Insane diff,please fix it. You should fix the kiais, as well.
  2. Remove dnb from the tags, it's already in the title, no need oto use it as a tag!
[cheesiest's Easy]
  1. Your rhythm feels kinda choppy, I recommend you to reduce OD/HP in order to make the diff a bit more playable for beginners.
  2. 00:26:588 (1) - tail of this slider is too close to the previous object. Players may mistakenly hit it.
    Note: basically, beginners just click on the nearest objects they see and they don't really look at approach circles and such stuff.
  3. 00:41:937 (1) - newbies aren't used to such sliders. The second reverse-arrow is rather hard to notice and playerd don't even expect it. If it's possible, try to replace it with something else.
  4. 00:45:077 (2,3,4,1,2) - please, get more opinions on these sliders. I'm not sure that these stacks are easy enough for beginners. They may be confused with such patterns :(
  5. 01:04:263 (1) - honestly, the spinner feels like lazymapping. I'd remove the spinner and map this part, this would make more sense with the music, imo.
  6. 01:19:611 (3) - meh, imo, this slider feels a bit out of it's place. Long straight slider here, why? Try to convert it into a wave-shaped slider
  7. 01:24:146 (2,3) - flow feels kinda forced here, the transition between (2) and (3) looks really awkward to me. Try to make your flow a bit smoother, if it's possible.
  8. 01:27:635 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - how about placing them in a creative way? You know, you can make a star out of them, or so. You know, players will like neat patterns more. :)
  9. 01:29:379 (1,2,3,4) - yeah, that's unplayable for poor beginners. they'd fail on this pattern :(
    01:29:379 (1,2,3,4) - no pls
  10. 01:39:146 (2,3) - it's like the only 1/2 pattern on this diff. The BPM is pretty fast, try to avoid 1/2 beats here, I think beginners won't be able to play it properly.

    Try to make your diff a bit neater and beginner-friendly.
[Normal]
  1. 00:33:564 (1) - nazi - maybe it's just me, but this shape feels a bi weird here. What's the point of using a blanket slider if it doesn't blanket anything? :) why don't you try something like this?
  2. 01:16:820 (3) - maybe a new combo here to emphasize vocals/music changes. Also, that'd fit with the end of kiai.
  3. 01:27:982 (3) - I would as you to fix this slider and replace the second repeat here with a circle. Why? Because it's kinda hard to see the 2nd repeat and it is too sudden. It doesn't feel good with your flow, imo.

    Just a couple of thinks that make your flow a bit.. random. Otherwise, that's a brilliant diff!
[Hard]
  1. Your OD and HP are way too low, increase them! The same HP was used in the Normal diff D: It inda ruins the balance in your diff spread!
  2. 00:48:565 (4) - use ctrl+g here? A little jump would fit perfectly, imo. You know, you have some similar patterns and they're awesome!
  3. 01:15:425 (1,2) - the transition doesn't flow realy good. Try to make it a bit smoother. Try to improve it a bit. example
    Note: don't really get it? just poke me and I'll tell you a bit more about the flow :)

    Impressive!
[Asphyxia's Insane]
  1. Did an IRC mod. Here's the log. A few lines are missing, but it doesn't really matter, I think.
    log
    19:20 -Bakari-: LET'S HAVE AN IRC MOD
    19:20 Asphyxia: LOOOOOL
    19:20 Asphyxia: LOOOOOOL
    19:21 Asphyxia: ok
    19:21 Asphyxia: LOL
    19:22 Asphyxia: I love you
    19:22 Asphyxia: gg
    19:22 -Bakari-: Ily, too :3
    19:22 Asphyxia: <33
    19:22 -Bakari-: 00:25:723 (2,3) - nazi - the slider itself looks like a blanket slider
    19:23 -Bakari-: use it to make a blanket [http://puu.sh/6S2eZ.jpg pls]
    19:24 -Bakari-: 00:35:752 (4) - isn't it a bit overmapped? I feel like this circle is extra here
    19:24 -Bakari-: at least, if you're sure about it, reduce the volume here, to make it more fitting
    19:25 Asphyxia: Fixed the slider (although I don't like the jump it makes from 00:26:421 (4,1) - ) but I guess thats fine
    19:25 Asphyxia: erm
    19:25 Asphyxia: lemme see the second suggestions
    19:25 Asphyxia: I guess it might be a bit overmapped but I like how it plays
    19:25 Asphyxia: as a stream
    19:26 Asphyxia: but yeah, I'll reduce the volume
    19:26 Asphyxia: a bit just for that
    19:26 -Bakari-: when there's nothing in music those loud streams are awkward, you know :P
    19:27 Asphyxia: I personally don't consider it as loud as you probably but I agree
    19:27 Asphyxia: it was quite awkward
    19:27 -Bakari-: uh.. and why don't you use slider tick rate 2? 
    19:27 -Bakari-: your rhythm is intense and STR 2 will make sense here
    19:28 Asphyxia: I don't want to be inconsistent with slider tick rates
    19:28 Asphyxia: so if you suggest that in the thread, I guess I can change it to 2
    19:29 -Bakari-: 00:42:118 - here and so on. such beats aren't really important, but the slider tick would fit here
    19:29 -Bakari-: talk to Ami about it
    19:30 Asphyxia: sure
    19:30 -Bakari-: 00:50:665 (2,3) - could you please test it once again. I just feel like something is wrong with your flow here
    19:30 -Bakari-: (3) isn't really well-catchable. I just feel like it's in a wrong place
    19:31 Asphyxia: it actually played pretty well for me, the movement wasn't crappy at all for me 
    19:31 Asphyxia: so I'd keep that for now I guess
    19:31 Asphyxia: (I'll change the position of this slider if someone else says about it though, that's for sure)
    19:32 Asphyxia: well, if you have any kind of a suggestion where to put it
    19:32 Asphyxia: you can always send it to me
    19:32 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/6S2A1.jpg
    19:32 Asphyxia: most likely will accept it then
    19:32 -Bakari-: the transition between (2) and (3) looks better to me. anyway, it's up to you
    19:33 Asphyxia: Well, sorry but I think I'm gonna keep it for now
    19:33 Asphyxia: :(
    19:35 -Bakari-: 01:16:130 (3,4,1) - nazi - shouldn't the DS be the same between these objects
    19:36 Asphyxia: Well, no and yes
    19:36 Asphyxia: 01:16:828 (1) - Considering the music goes from intense to slow, this spacing is pretty much because of it
    19:36 Asphyxia: and I like it this way though
    19:37 Asphyxia: 01:18:136 (9,1) - And like this, the music goes from slow to intense so that's why the spacing 
    19:37 -Bakari-: well. for me it was kinda weird. it looked more like some 1/4 jump :/
    19:39 Asphyxia: I understand your point well, if this becomes a problem I'll increase the spacing 
    19:40 -Bakari-: 01:38:804 - this beat was mapped in Normal and Hard
    19:40 -Bakari-: and you ignore it in the HARDEST diff
    19:40 Asphyxia: really?
    19:40 Asphyxia: wow
    19:40 Asphyxia: ok
    19:40 Asphyxia: adding a note
    19:40 -Bakari-: ha-ha, yeah
    19:41 -Bakari-: also, put some [s]kicks and licks[/s] new combo on 01:39:153 (3) - 
    19:42 -Bakari-: that'd fit with your comboing and music quite cool
    19:42 Asphyxia: agreed
    19:42 Asphyxia: fixed
    19:43 -Bakari-: 01:40:549 - creativity is a nice thing, but a spiner would fit here much better
    19:44 -Bakari-: all the diffs have a spinner here, so it'd be cool to keep consistency
    19:44 -Bakari-: x3.0+ jumps don't fit with this jumpy part, anyway :(
    19:45 Asphyxia: The only thing is that I don't want to add a spinner here in any cost. The first reason is that it doesn't fit as well as the sliders I have. Second reason is that this is the Insane diff
    19:45 Asphyxia: I think it's acceptable
    19:45 Asphyxia: even though it breaks some of the consistency in the mapset
    19:45 Asphyxia: well, that's just me
    19:45 -Bakari-: it's okay, yeah. 
    19:46 -Bakari-: let's say it's your style. :3
    19:46 Asphyxia: get yo kudos :3
    19:46 -Bakari-: 00:40:200 (4) - [http://puu.sh/6S39a.jpg not so soon]
    19:46 -Bakari-: go make some more jumps, that'd fit with the music, ofc
    19:47 -Bakari-: stacks in the insane diffs are borig, replace them with jumps, when it's possible and fits. y'know 
    19:47 Asphyxia: this suggestion is really nice
    19:47 Asphyxia: fixed
    19:48 -Bakari-: 00:42:467 (2) - pretty much the same. it won't even hurt your flow! [http://puu.sh/6S3dA.jpg ugu]
    19:50 -Bakari-: 01:17:874 - and the sound becomes kinda quite here. reduce the volume a bit, maybe? 
    19:51 -Bakari-: 01:21:711 (3) - nazi - so, the shape of the slider will make more sense. [http://puu.sh/6S3mM.jpg i love waves]
    19:52 Asphyxia: reduced the volume, added the jump
    19:53 Asphyxia: for the wave slider, I've used them (too) much, I gotta keep this one as it is
    19:53 Asphyxia: sorry
    19:54 Asphyxia: dont hurt
    19:54 Asphyxia: :(
    19:54 -Bakari-: don't hurt me
    19:54 -Bakari-: no more
    19:54 -Bakari-: what is love, baby don't hurt me 
    19:54 -Bakari-: don't hurt me 
    19:54 -Bakari-: no more 
    19:54 Asphyxia: NO MORE
    19:54 -Bakari-: THIS IS DUBSTEP REMIX 
    19:54 -Bakari-: WUBWUBWUBWUB
    19:54 Asphyxia: LOL
    19:54 Asphyxia: OMG
    19:54 Asphyxia: LOOOOOOOOOOOL
    19:55 -Bakari-: just one last thing
    19:55 -Bakari-: 01:04:270 (1,2) - these sliders are kinda weird. you know, you mostly use soft shapes, so their shape is a bit strange
    19:56 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/6S3yH.jpg
    19:56 Asphyxia: w
    19:56 Asphyxia: would this be fine
    19:56 Asphyxia: :(
    19:57 -Bakari-: http://puu.sh/6S3B7.jpg
    19:57 -Bakari-: people used such sliders in 2009-2010, still like the shape
    20:00 -Bakari-: the end.
    20:00 Asphyxia: I made it more fitting to my style
    20:00 -Bakari-: let me save the log and make some coffee
    20:00 Asphyxia: maybe not as curvy as yours
    20:00 Asphyxia: but still, some changes in those were made
    20:00 -Bakari-: alright

    Cool diff. Like it.
I like the mapset, but I think Easy diff needs some more attention, sorry. :(

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Best of luck!

note: whoops, you guys have ninja'd me :(
cheesiest
721 posts
Joined September 2009
cheesiest
-Bakari-

-Bakari- wrote:

[cheesiest's Easy]
  1. Your rhythm feels kinda choppy, I recommend you to reduce OD/HP in order to make the diff a bit more playable for beginners. no.
  2. 00:26:588 (1) - tail of this slider is too close to the previous object. Players may mistakenly hit it.
    Note: basically, beginners just click on the nearest objects they see and they don't really look at approach circles and such stuff. wow! what an amazing discovery! how about instead of catering to the newbies' inclination to hit the nearest object, we condition them to look at approach circles and such stuff (-: :-) wow that seems rather radical of me haha i shouldn't speak out like that.
    denied.
  3. 00:41:937 (1) - newbies aren't used to such sliders. The second reverse-arrow is rather hard to notice and playerd don't even expect it. If it's possible, try to replace it with something else. half a second is p good reading time. i mean, the game was meant to be competitive, right? here's a good test for that, don't you think?
  4. 00:45:077 (2,3,4,1,2) - please, get more opinions on these sliders. I'm not sure that these stacks are easy enough for beginners. They may be confused with such patterns :( keeping them. i like them tbh
  5. 01:04:263 (1) - honestly, the spinner feels like lazymapping. I'd remove the spinner and map this part, this would make more sense with the music, imo. actually that spinner seems p cool and does make sense (remember, we're not mapping every single little sound or nuance. you want a beginner-friendly diff but not a beginner-trainer diff yet you objected to this spinner, lol. you may think it's lazy mapping, and perhaps it is (it isn't lol). but w/e you can think what you want.
  6. 01:19:611 (3) - meh, imo, this slider feels a bit out of it's place. Long straight slider here, why? Try to convert it into a wave-shaped slider that feels incredibly awkward to me. also i don't get your objection to that straight slider. it seems like you're just pulling shit out of nowhere for filler.
  7. 01:24:146 (2,3) - flow feels kinda forced here, the transition between (2) and (3) looks really awkward to me. Try to make your flow a bit smoother, if it's possible. hmm. nah, not possible. sorry.
  8. 01:27:635 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - how about placing them in a creative way? You know, you can make a star out of them, or so. You know, players will like neat patterns more. :) look at that fucking smug ":)". you tell me to be creative but you suggest making a star. haha, that's really fucking creative. i think it's also worthy to mention that the pattern is a wave. like y'know.two half-hexagons put together
  9. 01:29:379 (1,2,3,4) - yeah, that's unplayable for poor beginners. they'd fail on this pattern :( it's already been changed
    01:29:379 (1,2,3,4) - no pls
  10. 01:39:146 (2,3) - it's like the only 1/2 pattern on this diff. The BPM is pretty fast, try to avoid 1/2 beats here, I think beginners won't be able to play it properly. well, they better get to work on being able to play it.

    Try to make your diff a bit neater and beginner-friendly.

thanks for your mod
no changes.
Ami
177 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Ami

-Bakari- wrote:

Sup, throwing a mod here as per your request.

[General]
  1. Offset is different on the Insane diff,please fix it. You should fix the kiais, as well.
  2. Remove dnb from the tags, it's already in the title, no need oto use it as a tag!
fixed

[Normal]
  1. 00:33:564 (1) - nazi - maybe it's just me, but this shape feels a bi weird here. What's the point of using a blanket slider if it doesn't blanket anything? :) why don't you try something like this?
  2. 01:16:820 (3) - maybe a new combo here to emphasize vocals/music changes. Also, that'd fit with the end of kiai.
  3. 01:27:982 (3) - I would as you to fix this slider and replace the second repeat here with a circle. Why? Because it's kinda hard to see the 2nd repeat and it is too sudden. It doesn't feel good with your flow, imo.

    Just a couple of thinks that make your flow a bit.. random. Otherwise, that's a brilliant diff!


[Hard]
  1. Your OD and HP are way too low, increase them! The same HP was used in the Normal diff D: It inda ruins the balance in your diff spread!
  2. 00:48:565 (4) - use ctrl+g here? A little jump would fit perfectly, imo. You know, you have some similar patterns and they're awesome! fixed
  3. 01:15:425 (1,2) - the transition doesn't flow realy good. Try to make it a bit smoother. Try to improve it a bit. example
    Note: don't really get it? just poke me and I'll tell you a bit more about the flow :)
    I dont want to change it, sry :c
    Impressive!
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