First, please observe this:
0 - 1st column
1 - 2nd column
2 - 3rd column
3 - 4th column
4 - 5th column
5 - 6th column
6 - 7th column
7 - 8th column

4K NM
00:53:185 (53185|2) - end this hold to 00:53:497 and move it to 1
00:53:497 - add note to 2
00:53:653 - add note to 3
00:53:810 - change it to hold and end it on 00:54:122
00:54:435 (54435|2) - move to 1
00:55:060 (55060|0) - move to 3
01:01:935 (61935|3) - remove
01:02:560 (62560|2) - this should not be in hold
01:05:685 (65685|0) - move to 1
01:13:185 (73185|2) - move to 1

7K NM
00:30:372 (30372|0) - move to 1
00:30:528 (30528|2) - move to 0
00:30:685 (30685|1, 30685|3) - move to 4 and 5
00:33:185 (33185|4, 33185|6) - move to 0 and 1
00:35:685 (35685|0, 35685|2) - move to 3 and 5
00:38:185 (38185|3) - move to 1
01:01:935 (61935|5) - remove
01:02:560 (62560|2) - remove this and add note on 5, same time

4K HD
00:33:185 (33185|1) - remove this hold

7K Another
00:16:290 (16290|3) - remove this hold and add note on 1, same time.

GOOD LUCK

zeejhay24 wrote:

First, please observe this:
0 - 1st column
1 - 2nd column
2 - 3rd column
3 - 4th column
4 - 5th column
5 - 6th column
6 - 7th column
7 - 8th column

4K NM
00:53:185 (53185|2) - end this hold to 00:53:497 and move it to 1
00:53:497 - add note to 2
00:53:653 - add note to 3
00:53:810 - change it to hold and end it on 00:54:122
00:54:435 (54435|2) - move to 1
00:55:060 (55060|0) - move to 3
01:01:935 (61935|3) - remove
01:02:560 (62560|2) - this should not be in hold
01:05:685 (65685|0) - move to 1
01:13:185 (73185|2) - move to 1

7K NM
00:30:372 (30372|0) - move to 1
00:30:528 (30528|2) - move to 0
00:30:685 (30685|1, 30685|3) - move to 4 and 5
00:33:185 (33185|4, 33185|6) - move to 0 and 1
00:35:685 (35685|0, 35685|2) - move to 3 and 5
00:38:185 (38185|3) - move to 1
01:01:935 (61935|5) - remove
01:02:560 (62560|2) - remove this and add note on 5, same time

4K HD
00:33:185 (33185|1) - remove this hold

7K Another
00:16:290 (16290|3) - remove this hold and add note on 1, same time.

GOOD LUCK

Thanks

Hi, Yuutosan, sorry for a late mod lol ( soalnya pulsa modem abis, terpaksa nabung sampai beberapa hari baru bisa )
Here's my mod, i afraid to destruct any style, so just a suggestions and minor fix

Tags : i think 'nano' and 'born to be' is not recommended to write them in the tags, so remove it

Note : From 00:00:685 to 00:04:278 - Actually... this part is very good for making a patterns, but you just empty it. I know this part is a little hard to make a pattern, so.. no need then, because you mapset are done

[7K NM]
*00:45:060 (45060|5,45216|4) - for a balance, move it to 3rd column and 2nd column respectively ( http://puu.sh/78YnH.jpg )
*00:19:747 (19747|5) - emm i think put it to 5th column. if that is your style so ignore this
*00:53:185 (53185|4) - forever alone sliders, maybe you should add a note with hihat.wav in 4th column at 00:53:497 ( look at 00:54:435 (54435|4,54747|0) )

[7K HD]
*01:16:935 (76935|5) - i think that will be better if you move this note to 5th column
*Since 00:11:935 and 00:12:247 has a double notes, so 00:12:872 - add a notes here with hihat.wav ( 1st column maybe a good place )
*00:13:810 - i don't know why you are not make note in this part in 7K HD, but you made a note in this part in 4k HD xD. Add a note in 2nd column

[7K MX]
*since the note in here are doubled, and the hitsound are doubled too, so..i think you should decrease the volume in hitsound from 70 to 60 ( the hitsound are little noisy for me )
(Not at all of note in this diff is double hitsounded, just some of them, so check it patiently)
*00:15:294 (15294|3) - move to 5th column. if that is your style so ignore this
*00:25:060 (25060|0) - that will be better if you move this note to 6th column
*01:08:810 - add a note in 3rd column with hihat.wav


4k NM and 4K HD is a done pattern, so i don't need to mod them
But, you must still need some mod from other modders, maybe - R u m i a - or Reikosaka can help you ( if they aren't busy )

Nice hitsound, mapset, and i love nano song xD
Good luck for ranked, and stars ~

Remillion Cross wrote:

Hi, Yuutosan, sorry for a late mod lol ( soalnya pulsa modem abis, terpaksa nabung sampai beberapa hari baru bisa )
Here's my mod, i afraid to destruct any style, so just a suggestions and minor fix

Tags : i think 'nano' and 'born to be' is not recommended to write them in the tags, so remove it

Note : From 00:00:685 to 00:04:278 - Actually... this part is very good for making a patterns, but you just empty it. I know this part is a little hard to make a pattern, so.. no need then, because you mapset are done

[7K NM]
*00:45:060 (45060|5,45216|4) - for a balance, move it to 3rd column and 2nd column respectively ( http://puu.sh/78YnH.jpg )
*00:19:747 (19747|5) - emm i think put it to 5th column. if that is your style so ignore this
*00:53:185 (53185|4) - forever alone sliders, maybe you should add a note with hihat.wav in 4th column at 00:53:497 ( look at 00:54:435 (54435|4,54747|0) )

[7K HD]
*01:16:935 (76935|5) - i think that will be better if you move this note to 5th column
*Since 00:11:935 and 00:12:247 has a double notes, so 00:12:872 - add a notes here with hihat.wav ( 1st column maybe a good place )
*00:13:810 - i don't know why you are not make note in this part in 7K HD, but you made a note in this part in 4k HD xD. Add a note in 2nd column

[7K MX]
*since the note in here are doubled, and the hitsound are doubled too, so..i think you should decrease the volume in hitsound from 70 to 60 ( the hitsound are little noisy for me )
(Not at all of note in this diff is double hitsounded, just some of them, so check it patiently)
*00:15:294 (15294|3) - move to 5th column. if that is your style so ignore this
*00:25:060 (25060|0) - that will be better if you move this note to 6th column
*01:08:810 - add a note in 3rd column with hihat.wav


4k NM and 4K HD is a done pattern, so i don't need to mod them
But, you must still need some mod from other modders, maybe - R u m i a - or Reikosaka can help you ( if they aren't busy )

Nice hitsound, mapset, and i love nano song xD
Good luck for ranked, and stars ~

Thank so much mate
I'll think about pattern at 00:00:685 ~ 00:04:278 .. also thanks for your stars!

*looks at BG*
Those eyes o.e

Anyway hello. Here's my mod as requested.

[4K NM]
01:00:685 (60685|1) Remove this note. This part is silent, so it's not needed.

[7K NM]
00:14:747 (14747|0) Move to 4th or 7th column.
00:47:872 (47872|6) Change to normal note.
01:18:185 (78185|0) Move to 5th column for balance.

[7K HD]
00:04:200 There's a note somewhere here in the non-play area (press Tab). Remove it.
00:27:716 (27716|6) Either change to normal note or remove it.
00:40:216 (40216|3) Add "hihat.wav" keysound sample.

[7K MX]
- I noticed that MOST of the long notes in this chart makes no sense to the song whatsoever. You should redo them entirely.

Hope this helps though.

PROGUY wrote:

*looks at BG*
Those eyes o.e

Anyway hello. Here's my mod as requested.

[4K NM]
01:00:685 (60685|1) Remove this note. This part is silent, so it's not needed.

[7K NM]
00:14:747 (14747|0) Move to 4th or 7th column.
00:47:872 (47872|6) Change to normal note.
01:18:185 (78185|0) Move to 5th column for balance.

[7K HD]
00:04:200 There's a note somewhere here in the non-play area (press Tab). Remove it.
00:27:716 (27716|6) Either change to normal note or remove it.
00:40:216 (40216|3) Add "hihat.wav" keysound sample.

[7K MX]
- I noticed that MOST of the long notes in this chart makes no sense to the song whatsoever. You should redo them entirely.

Hope this helps though.

Thanks for your modds PROGUY
Im very helped.

1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[7K NM]
00:15:685 (15685|4) - Add LN on 5
00:40:685 (40685|5) - Remove LN on 6

1 2 3 4

[4K HD]
01:23:810 (83810|2) - Add note to 3
01:24:122 (84122|1) - Add note to 2
01:24:747 (84747|3) - Add note to 4
01:25:060 (85060|0) - Add note to 1
01:25:685 (85685|3) - Add note to 4
01:25:841 (85841|0) - Add note to 1
01:26:310 (86310|3) - Remove note on 2, add notes on 3 and 4
01:26:622 (86622|1) - Add note to 2
01:27:247 (87247|0) - Add note to 1
01:27:560 (87560|1) - Add note to 2
01:27:716 (87716|2) - Add note to 3
01:27:872 (87872|0) - Remove note on 1, add notes on 2 and 4

I would love it if you added a 4k MX too! ^^

Hello, there are mods for your mania 7K chart ^w^ (7k the main priority for me)

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
7K NM

7K HD

7K MX

Good luck :3/

RebelSlayer wrote:

1 2 3 4 5 6 7

[7K NM]
00:15:685 (15685|4) - Add LN on 5
00:40:685 (40685|5) - Remove LN on 6

1 2 3 4

[4K HD]
01:23:810 (83810|2) - Add note to 3
01:24:122 (84122|1) - Add note to 2
01:24:747 (84747|3) - Add note to 4
01:25:060 (85060|0) - Add note to 1
01:25:685 (85685|3) - Add note to 4
01:25:841 (85841|0) - Add note to 1
01:26:310 (86310|3) - Remove note on 2, add notes on 3 and 4
01:26:622 (86622|1) - Add note to 2
01:27:247 (87247|0) - Add note to 1
01:27:560 (87560|1) - Add note to 2
01:27:716 (87716|2) - Add note to 3
01:27:872 (87872|0) - Remove note on 1, add notes on 2 and 4

I would love it if you added a 4k MX too! ^^

Oh sry i guess i didn't well at 4K MX.. thanks a lot for your modd.

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Hello, there are mods for your mania 7K chart ^w^ (7k the main priority for me)

Shi-Ra's Pattern Review:
(notice that columns are following like 0 1 2 3 4 5 6 for 7K diffs)
7K NM

Inside :3

00:05:685 (5685|1) - I recommend you to move this note to 3rd column, it's more comfortable position for it according to previous pattern

00:06:622 (6622|6,6935|1,7247|3) - hm...I think you need to re-arrange these LNs and turn some of them into single notes coz it's hard to find accentable sounds here for NM diff

00:10:685 (10685|6) - and this one you I suggest you to move to 0 column and make here more balanced transition for hands when you playing it

00:14:435 (14435|1) - there's no need to place such LN here, I recommend you to remove it and follow only drums in this part

00:25:685 - delete one of these notes, three note chords are hard for novices

00:48:810 (48810|4) - move this one to 6th column, it'll be more comfortable to catch it with next going notes

01:05:685 (65685|2) - open this chord and move this note to 3rd or 5th column to perform here more comfortable chord transition

01:28:028 (88028|2) - finally move this note to 0 column, it'll be more exiting ending here and more symmetrical pattern

7K HD

Inside :3

00:04:435 (4435|3,4747|3,5216|3) - three notes in a row in same column here...it's not good, I recommend you to re-arrange them between different columns to make your pattern more playable here

00:13:497 (13497|4) - I recommend you to move this note to 3rd column, it's more suitable position with your next going notes here, check that

00:21:153 - you can add here one more note to 3rd column according to the sound which goes there

00:24:122 (24122|4,24122|0) - I suggest you to move these notes to 2nd and 5th columns accordingly, it'll be more comfortable to play such chord here

00:29:591 (29591|5) - and this one I suggest you to move to 3rd column to connect you previous and next going patterns here correctly

00:39:747 (39747|6) - there's no need to place two notes to accent hi-hat and there's no another accentable sound so I recommend you to remove this note

00:45:060 (45060|2) - move this note to 3rd column to perform more comfortable stair transition between your pattens here

00:55:997 (55997|6) - this one move to 5th column, same reason as above ^

01:01:935 (61935|6,61935|0) - there's no need to place both LNs here to accent vocals, I recommend you delete one of them

7K MX

Inside :3

This diff seems overmapped, please, try to accent only hear-able sounds, I'll point the most problem sections for you:

From 00:14:435 to 00:15:372 - there are no suitable sound for each note in this stream, delete extra notes which aren't follow the song and re-arrange pattern here

From 00:35:060 to 00:36:935 - short LNs aren't follow anything, if main LNs follows guitar, bass here goes in another way, so I recommend you to delete short LNs here

00:56:935 (56935|6) - according to the guitar this LN should ends here 00:58:185

00:57:872 (57872|4) - and this one should starts here 00:58:185 too

From 01:00:841 to 01:01:466 - same situation like in the beginning, delete extra notes, music here goes in another way

Good luck :3/

Whoa thanks a lot Shi-Ra senpai

ALL UPDATED

Hello there~ I saw your request in #modreqs so yeah~
Map requested: an hour ago.


4K - 1/2/3/4
7K - 1/2/3/4/5/6/7

I'm only focusing on the notes positon, notes consistency and note patterns. No hitsounds so if I selected a note with an hitsound and removed, you can just assign it to the note beside it.


[4K NM]

[4K HD]
This difficulty is kinda messy.. or not organized in terms of note patterns and placement. I suggest to rearrange them after this mod. Remove some inconsistent 2-noted notes.

[7K NM]
Patterns are kinda messy. Suggesting to rearrange and create more comfortable patterns.


[7K HD]

[7K MX]
Looks like this difficulty is overmapped and many unnecessary notes and LNs. I'm skipping this sorry.

[Overall]
I must say that the song itself is good. You should put notes with art. Its like designing. Design note patterns that will be comfortable to your hands. Alternating taps/trills will do on some
percussions. Try not to note vocals that much with LNs especially on NM and HD. Sometimes in some cases they make the mania map weird to play. So better listen and note the instruments but do not overmap and just balance according to its difficulty.

That's all and goodluck! o/


If you have more request, try to visit in my modding queue:
t/189004

arcwinolivirus wrote:

Hello there~ I saw your request in #modreqs so yeah~
Map requested: an hour ago.


4K - 1/2/3/4
7K - 1/2/3/4/5/6/7

I'm only focusing on the notes positon, notes consistency and note patterns. No hitsounds so if I selected a note with an hitsound and removed, you can just assign it to the note beside it.


[4K NM]

SPOILER

00:05:372 - add note to 4. Strong sound because of Cymbals. like 00:13:185 (13185|3,13185|1)
00:08:185 - add note to 1 ^
00:18:185 (18185|0) - extend to 00:19:747. I assume this is the LN of guitar. Or even if its the vocal it still need to be extended.
00:25:685 - add note to 4. strong cymbals
00:30:685 (30685|1,33185|2,35685|0) - it feels empty on this part of LNs. Put some 1/2 notes. Suggestion: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371692
00:35:685 - add note to 4. strong cymbals
00:40:685 - add note to 2. ^ and as a strong start
00:53:185 - add note to 2 like 00:55:685 (55685|3,55685|2)
01:10:685 (70685|3,70997|2,71310|0) - remove these. why 2 noted?
01:11:622 (71622|1,72247|0) - these LNs are kinda off. move to 01:11:778 and adjust the LNs to the right size.
01:20:685 - add note to 1 for strong cymbals.
01:21:935 - add note to 4 ^

[4K HD]
This difficulty is kinda messy.. or not organized in terms of note patterns and placement. I suggest to rearrange them after this mod. Remove some inconsistent 2-noted notes.

SPOILER

00:05:372 - add note to 4. It has a strong sound. Cymbals.
00:05:997 - add note to 1 like these 00:06:622 (6622|3,6622|1,7247|3,7247|0)
00:07:872 - ^ add note to 4
00:08:185 - add note to 2 for strong sound cymbals.
00:19:825 (19825|1,20138|3, 20294|1) - remove. Unnecessary notes.
00:20:685 - add note to 4.
00:35:997 (35997|3) - remove and make it single note not LN.
00:40:294 (40294|2) - remove off note.
00:43:185 - add note to 1
00:45:685 (45685|2) - remove
00:50:372 (50372|2) - move to 4
00:53:185 - add note to 4
00:55:997 (55997|0) - I suggest to shorten this until 00:56:935
00:55:216 (55216|2) - move to 4
00:55:997 (55997|3) - remove
01:01:935 (61935|3) - remove
01:08:810 (68810|0) - move to 3
01:13:028 (73028|2) - remove and make it single note.
01:15:685 - add note to 4 strong sound.
01:18:185 (78185|3) - remove. why 3-noted?
01:20:685 - add note to 4
01:22:247 (82247|1,82560|2,82872|1) - I hear no sounds in these notes. remove.

[7K NM]
Patterns are kinda messy. Suggesting to rearrange and create more comfortable patterns.

SPOILER

00:08:185 - add note to 7
00:20:216 (20216|5,20372|1) - move to 00:20:372. much better and consistent position.
00:30:528 (30528|2) - move to 7
00:48:185 - add note to 4
00:50:685 - add note to 3
00:53:185 - add note to 2
00:55:685 - add note to 2
00:56:935 - add note to 5
01:11:622 (71622|2,72247|3) - off LNs. move as I said previously on 4K NM
01:15:372 (75372|6) - move to 01:15:685
01:20:685 - add note to 4
01:21:935 - add note to 7

[7K HD]

SPOILER

00:04:435 (4435|1) - move to 7
00:04:903 (4903|4) - remove not necessary.
00:05:372 (5372|2) - move to 2
00:05:685 (5685|0) - remove
00:05:997 (5997|6,6622|6,7872|1,9278|6) - remove these LNs and make them single notes.
00:08:185 - add note to 3
00:19:747 (19747|6,19825|5,19903|4,19981|3,20060|2,20138|3,20216|2,20294|1,20372|0) - off notes. Suggesting to make it similar like 4K's HD
00:35:685 - add note to 4
00:39:513 (39513|2,39669|4,39825|4,39981|2,40294|2) - remove\

[7K MX]
Looks like this difficulty is overmapped and many unnecessary notes and LNs. I'm skipping this sorry.

[Overall]
I must say that the song itself is good. You should put notes with art. Its like designing. Design note patterns that will be comfortable to your hands. Alternating taps/trills will do on some
percussions. Try not to note vocals that much with LNs especially on NM and HD. Sometimes in some cases they make the mania map weird to play. So better listen and note the instruments but do not overmap and just balance according to its difficulty.

That's all and goodluck! o/


If you have more request, try to visit in my modding queue:
t/189004

Thanks a lot... updated

7K MX : I've delete unnecessarily LNs

'Kay i'll visit your queue .. If i need your help thanks again for your mods.

hi Yuutosan, another re-check by mod req via pm
Here's the 7K MX mod ( ini saran aja kok, jadi di tolak juga gpp )

[7K MX]

Sorry, i didn't mean to changing your style, but i think this will make your diff is better
Good luck :3

Remillion Cross wrote:

hi Yuutosan, another re-check by mod req via pm
Here's the 7K MX mod ( ini saran aja kok, jadi di tolak juga gpp )

[7K MX]

Open here

*00:04:435 (4435|6) - delete, cause no need to make 4-notes in here, the sound is same as 00:04:747 - or 00:05:060 -

*00:05:685 - move the end of slider to 00:06:153 - ( dari suara tettt ) , terus 00:06:622 (6622|6) - pindah ke 00:06:622 (6622|6) - dan akhir slidernya di 00:06:778 - lebih cocok

*00:06:310 (6310|5) - untuk konsisten notenya, apus ini, biar 3 - 3 - 3 gitu

*00:06:153 (6153|6) - pindahkan ini ke 2nd column

*00:05:685 (5685|1) - akan lebih baik jika ke 7th column ( kalau kamu setuju dengan mod2 diatas ini ^ )

*00:07:560 - tambahin 2 circle di 1st dan 2nd column, untuk konsisten seperti timing sebelumnya ( 00:06:935 -,00:06:310 - )

*00:10:372 (10372|2) - kayaknya note ini kalau di 1st column lebih cocok sih, tapi kalau ngerusak style kamu ya abaikan ini ;_;

*00:10:685 (10685|4) - delete, hitsoundnya pindahan ke note di sebelahnya ( disitu sebenarnya 4 aja, tapi 5 juga gpp sih )

*00:11:310 - coba ini http://puu.sh/7rsK5.png

*00:11:622 - mungkin coba taruh slider di sini, sampai ke 00:11:935 - ( soalnya kasian sama slider 00:10:997 (10997|5) - sendirian FA banget ;_; )

*Dari 00:14:747 ke 00:15:372 - coba buat begini, biar lebih rapi dan komplek, balance juga http://puu.sh/7rsOL.jpg

*00:29:278 - buat slider dari sini sampai 00:29:591 - ( suara gitar nya itu gimana gitu wkwk)

*00:30:997 (30997|6) - hapus ini, biar konsisten notenya

*00:32:403 (32403|3) - coba pindahkan note ini ke 3rd column

*Dari 00:37:560 - ke 00:38:185 - kayaknya kalau dibuat begini lebih enak diliat http://puu.sh/7rt3B.png

*00:51:700 (51700|5) - geser slidernya ke 00:51:778 -

*00:52:950 (52950|0) - aku bingung, note ini antara hapus atau dibiarkan aja, soalnya aku ga tau ini notenya ditaruh disini karena untuk suara yg mana xD

*00:59:591 - taruh circle di 1st column

*00:59:435 (59435|2) - akhir slidernya lebih baik kalau dimundurin ke 01:00:528 - sih, tapi gpp juga sebenarnya kalau ditaruh disitu

*01:15:606 (75606|0) - slidernya majuin ke 01:15:685 -, terus bagian akhir slidernya taruh ke 01:18:497 -

*Dari 01:27:560 - ke 01:28:028 - mungkin kalau dibuat begini lebih keren http://puu.sh/7rtlL.jpg

Sorry, i didn't mean to changing your style, but i think this will make your diff is better
Good luck :3

Thanks RC senpai, i'll check it soon.

ahuehue... here's the Storyboard fix.. with some adjustment color... moar beautiful zoon.. :">

added '7k SC by Remillion Cross' in 2nd line

oh, dont forget to uncheck 'widescreen support' for all diff, i designed the storyboard for 4:3 screen ratio... ^^;

http://puu.sh/7s6Ri.zip

ajeemaniz wrote:

ahuehue... here's the Storyboard fix.. with some adjustment color... moar beautiful zoon.. :">

added '7k SC by Remillion Cross' in 2nd line

oh, dont forget to uncheck 'widescreen support' for all diff, i designed the storyboard for 4:3 screen ratio... ^^;

http://puu.sh/7s6Ri.zip

ok then i'll put that SB later

i'm mod this tomorrow^w^

Sorry for too late...
Actually I'm still busy these times, so these are some quick thoughts on improving this map... maybe?

RC's 7Key SC:
Actually when I first saw this, I think this one has too many random things...
Many inconsistency lies in the map, such as:
(1)00:10:685 (10685|1,10841|3,10841|5,10997|4,10997|1,11153|0,11153|6,11153|5,11310|1,11310|2,11310|4,11466|6,11466|0,11466|3,11622|2,11622|5,11622|1,11778|6,11778|0) - I believe there are some sliders representing guitar melodies missing?
(2)00:25:528 (25528|2,25685|5,25997|6,26075|1) - ^
(3)00:48:185 (48185|5,48653|4) - One sentence vocal mapping ( I believe you didn't map vocals in early and later parts, or I didn't get what these notes represents...)
(4)01:05:841 (65841|2,65997|1,66153|4,66153|3,66310|2,66466|2,66622|4,66778|1,66778|3,66935|4) - Some vocal notes missing? I heard しんじで - something at least 3 charaters assuming しん is one part. I recommend mapping 4 notes like in the earlier part, because it's pitch is something like CDCD.
(5)01:15:841 (75841|2,75841|6,75997|3,76153|5,76153|2,76466|4,76466|2,76622|6,76778|5,76778|3,76935|2) - ^ Similar like this.

Some other suggestions:
00:40:138 (40138|2,40216|3,40294|4,40372|0,40450|1,40528|2,40606|3,40685|0,40685|4) - I suggest not placing them as stairs: It looks like these notes are representing drums without concept of pitch relevancy. With a random hit (34251635...) Maybe you can show the transition of the music? (1 more in later parts)

Since there are no one who already modded SC, you may ask more people for modding this diff? Maybe other people would have different thoughts.

7K MX:
00:08:185 (8185|1,9278|6) - If you know what you are doing, ignore this. If not, it looks like there are an intended gap representing that they are 2 different sound. (too many more case later)
00:15:060 (15060|3,15216|3) - I suggest moving to the 1st column starting from the left or changing the patterns. I believe you didn't intended to do so like what I see now (A tiny jackhammer, and maybe a nightmare (3 hold + 4 hits)to left space players)
00:16:310 (16310|4,16935|3,17560|2) - ? Actually I suggest stacking them XD
00:42:403 (42403|5) - Move to 3? It seems it should not be intended jackhammer.
00:43:966 (43966|4,44122|4) - Maybe you are intended. If so, ignore this one and the former one. BTW, I assume you are showing these notes as either guitar hits or drum hits, but it seems for 8 1/4s guitar hits are always at the same pitch velocity... Or you are mapping drums. But if they are drum hits you have missed some notes... Overall this is not so natural
00:45:528 (45528|1) - Place to 7 to avoid an unintended "hit-just-before-slider".
00:50:138 (50138|2,50294|4) - It looks like there are no sound at all? it follows something like o_o_ooooo.
00:53:966 (53966|4,54044|5,54122|4,54200|5,54278|4) - If this is intended, ignore it. If not, I suggest making it a 2-hand balanced style and rearrange this part.
01:00:841 (60841|3,60997|2,61075|1,61153|0,61231|2,61310|3,61388|4,61466|6,61466|5) - ?! This is pure overmapping.
01:01:935 (61935|0,61935|3,61935|6,61935|1,62560|2,62560|5,62560|4) - ^ ?! Yeah this one too.
01:05:138 (65138|3,65294|1) - ?! ^
01:07:638 (67638|3,67794|1,67950|3,68106|1) - ?! ^
01:11:310 (71310|6,71388|5,71466|4,71544|5) - ? Something like vocal, but it doesn't seems that such many notes are needed...
01:15:138 (75138|1,75294|3) - ?! ^ I give up figuring out all of them.

The first half of the song seems only with some slight problem, but you did too much on the later part. Like others said I believe this one is overmapped... You should consider only map something that is hearable?

Hope these are helpful

xxbidiao wrote:

Sorry for too late...
Actually I'm still busy these times, so these are some quick thoughts on improving this map... maybe?

7K MX:
00:08:185 (8185|1,9278|6) - If you know what you are doing, ignore this. If not, it looks like there are an intended gap representing that they are 2 different sound. (too many more case later)
00:15:060 (15060|3,15216|3) - I suggest moving to the 1st column starting from the left or changing the patterns. I believe you didn't intended to do so like what I see now (A tiny jackhammer, and maybe a nightmare (3 hold + 4 hits)to left space players) fixed
00:16:310 (16310|4,16935|3,17560|2) - ? Actually I suggest stacking them XD fixed
00:42:403 (42403|5) - Move to 3? It seems it should not be intended jackhammer. fixed
00:43:966 (43966|4,44122|4) - Maybe you are intended. If so, ignore this one and the former one. BTW, I assume you are showing these notes as either guitar hits or drum hits, but it seems for 8 1/4s guitar hits are always at the same pitch velocity... Or you are mapping drums. But if they are drum hits you have missed some notes... Overall this is not so natural
00:45:528 (45528|1) - Place to 7 to avoid an unintended "hit-just-before-slider". fixed
00:50:138 (50138|2,50294|4) - It looks like there are no sound at all? it follows something like o_o_ooooo. fixed, thank you
00:53:966 (53966|4,54044|5,54122|4,54200|5,54278|4) - If this is intended, ignore it. If not, I suggest making it a 2-hand balanced style and rearrange this part. fixed
01:00:841 (60841|3,60997|2,61075|1,61153|0,61231|2,61310|3,61388|4,61466|6,61466|5) - ?! This is pure overmapping. fixed
01:01:935 (61935|0,61935|3,61935|6,61935|1,62560|2,62560|5,62560|4) - ^ ?! Yeah this one too. nope
01:05:138 (65138|3,65294|1) - ?! ^ fixed
01:07:638 (67638|3,67794|1,67950|3,68106|1) - ?! ^ fixed
01:11:310 (71310|6,71388|5,71466|4,71544|5) - ? Something like vocal, but it doesn't seems that such many notes are needed... fixed
01:15:138 (75138|1,75294|3) - ?! ^ I give up figuring out all of them. fixed

The first half of the song seems only with some slight problem, but you did too much on the later part. Like others said I believe this one is overmapped... You should consider only map something that is hearable?

Hope these are helpful

7K MX Done : Thank you for your mod

NaxelCL wrote:

i'm mod this tomorrow^w^

Okay

Mod by request ;3

[4K HD]

GUME i'm not can't mod this map but i'm like , this and is best ever ever song in my life<3

xxbidiao wrote:

Sorry for too late...
Actually I'm still busy these times, so these are some quick thoughts on improving this map... maybe?

RC's 7Key SC:
Actually when I first saw this, I think this one has too many random things...
Many inconsistency lies in the map, such as:
(1)00:10:685 (10685|1,10841|3,10841|5,10997|4,10997|1,11153|0,11153|6,11153|5,11310|1,11310|2,11310|4,11466|6,11466|0,11466|3,11622|2,11622|5,11622|1,11778|6,11778|0) - I believe there are some sliders representing guitar melodies missing? yeah, removing unnecessary note, and add missing guitar melodies, thanks for remembering me :3
(2)00:25:528 (25528|2,25685|5,25997|6,26075|1) - ^ added
(3)00:48:185 (48185|5,48653|4) - One sentence vocal mapping ( I believe you didn't map vocals in early and later parts, or I didn't get what these notes represents...) i follow some like this 00:49:278 (49278|1,49747|2) - for a symetrical pattern
(4)01:05:841 (65841|2,65997|1,66153|4,66153|3,66310|2,66466|2,66622|4,66778|1,66778|3,66935|4) - Some vocal notes missing? I heard しんじで - something at least 3 charaters assuming しん is one part. I recommend mapping 4 notes like in the earlier part, because it's pitch is something like CDCD.added
(5)01:15:841 (75841|2,75841|6,75997|3,76153|5,76153|2,76466|4,76466|2,76622|6,76778|5,76778|3,76935|2) - ^ Similar like this. ok

Some other suggestions:
00:40:138 (40138|2,40216|3,40294|4,40372|0,40450|1,40528|2,40606|3,40685|0,40685|4) - I suggest not placing them as stairs: It looks like these notes are representing drums without concept of pitch relevancy. With a random hit (34251635...) Maybe you can show the transition of the music? (1 more in later parts) hmm i don't know, but for not being make it overmapped, i will change this, thanks for your suggestions

Since there are no one who already modded SC, you may ask more people for modding this diff? Maybe other people would have different thoughts.of course

Hope these are helpful

Thanks for mod xxbidiao, it's very helpful for me
Yuuto, update diff : http://puu.sh/7wWtU.rar

Remillion Cross wrote:

Yuuto, update diff : http://puu.sh/7wWtU.rar

Understood

NaxelCL wrote:

Mod by request ;3

[4K HD]

GUME i'm not can't mod this map but i'm like , this and is best ever ever song in my life<3

you're praise me too exaggerated ;w;
anyway, thank you

Hi Yuutosan, modding as requested, sorry for being late.

[General]
There is kiai inconsistency through your diffs. Set that in every diff from 01:03:190 - to 01:23:190 - .

[Ajee's 4K EZ]
Put at least HP drain 6... 5 is too low

00:10:372 (10372|3) - I would move left, pattern would be nicer
00:12:560 (12560|0) - Swap with normal note, then 00:12:872 (12872|3) - move in 2 and 00:13:185 (13185|1) - move in 3. This is like a repattern :v
00:30:372 (30372|2) - Add normal-hitclap here
00:43:810 (43810|2,44747|1) - Move both right, it looks better for me
00:50:060 (50060|1,50372|2) - Put normal-hitclap instead?
01:10:060 (70060|2) - Move in 1. It feels more comfortable for beginner players
01:15:685 (75685|3,75685|1) - I would put double note here 01:15:372 - instead of there
01:27:716 (87716|3,87872|0,88028|3) - Put normal-hitclap here too

[4K NM]
00:19:747 (19747|2,19903|1,20060|0,20216|2,20372|1) - I would do ctrl+h here
00:30:372 (30372|0,30528|3) - Add normal-hitclap here
00:49:747 (49747|2) - You need normal-hitclap here
01:23:185 (83185|1) - Hmm... I would delete this LN... It doesn't fit that much imo
01:27:716 (87716|1,88028|1) - Put normal-hitclap here too

[7K NM]
I think you should lower hihat.wav when you have a double... It's too loud imo

00:30:372 (30372|0,30528|6) - Add normal-hitclap here
01:00:060 (60060|2) - I'd move left
01:04:747 (64747|4) - ^
01:27:716 (87716|2,88028|0) - Put normal-hitclap here too

[4K HD]
Same thing as 7K NM about hihat.wav

00:20:216 (20216|2,20372|0) - I would add soft-hitwhistle here instead of hihat
00:30:216 (30216|1,30372|3,30528|2) - Add normal-hitclap here
00:50:060 (50060|1,50216|2,50372|2,50528|1) - ^
01:12:716 (72716|2,73028|2) - ^
01:27:716 (87716|1,87872|0,88028|1) - ^

[7K HD]
00:20:216 (20216|1,20372|3) - I would add soft-hitwhistle here instead of hihat
00:25:216 (25216|3) - Move right for a better pattern
00:43:497 (43497|4) - Move right, pattern
00:50:060 (50060|2,50216|3,50372|4,50528|2) - Add normal-hitclap
01:12:716 (72716|4,73028|4) - ^
01:27:560 (87560|0,87716|1,87872|0,88028|1) - ^ (even in both notes)

[7K MX]
00:10:841 (10841|1) - I would move this in 4
00:14:435 - Repattern this, there doesn't fit 1/4 notes http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1442151
00:47:247 - Put another note here please
00:53:028 - Add note please
01:07:872 - Add one or two note please
01:10:372 - ^
01:11:622 - ^
01:12:247 - Add note in 3
01:12:716 (72716|4) - Add normal-hitclap
01:17:794 (77794|1) - Put hihat here instead of normal-hitclap
01:20:372 - Add a note please
01:27:716 (87716|1,87872|0,88028|1) - Add normal-hitclap (you can add in doulblenotes too)

I would use less 1/4 notes here

[RC's 7K SC]
Nice patterns

00:12:091 - LNs should be like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1442181 (you can obviously change position)
00:30:216 - 00:30:372 - 00:30:528 - Add normal-hitclap here too
00:39:747 (39747|0,39825|1,39903|2,39981|0,40060|1) - Aaaah, I would delete this and add a stream from 00:40:060 - to 00:40:685 - (you can hear drums)
00:50:060 (50060|6,50216|6,50372|5,50450|3,50528|5,50606|3) - Add normal-hitclap (or add only in 1/2 notes 00:50:060 (50060|6,50216|6,50372|5,50528|5) - )
01:10:841 (70841|2,71153|3,71466|4) - Move them 1/2 forward like in the screenshot http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1442221
01:12:716 (72716|2,73028|1,73106|3) - Add normal-hitclap
01:26:935 (86935|5,87560|1) - Move them like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1442229
01:27:560 (87560|4,87560|2,87716|4,87716|2,88028|6,88028|0) - Add normal-hitclap

Roxas wrote:

Hi Yuutosan, modding as requested, sorry for being late.

[General]
There is kiai inconsistency through your diffs. Set that in every diff from 01:03:190 - to 01:23:190 - .

[Ajee's 4K EZ]
Put at least HP drain 6... 5 is too low

00:10:372 (10372|3) - I would move left, pattern would be nicer
00:12:560 (12560|0) - Swap with normal note, then 00:12:872 (12872|3) - move in 2 and 00:13:185 (13185|1) - move in 3. This is like a repattern :v
00:30:372 (30372|2) - Add normal-hitclap here
00:43:810 (43810|2,44747|1) - Move both right, it looks better for me
00:50:060 (50060|1,50372|2) - Put normal-hitclap instead?
01:10:060 (70060|2) - Move in 1. It feels more comfortable for beginner players
01:15:685 (75685|3,75685|1) - I would put double note here 01:15:372 - instead of there
01:27:716 (87716|3,87872|0,88028|3) - Put normal-hitclap here too

[4K NM]
00:19:747 (19747|2,19903|1,20060|0,20216|2,20372|1) - I would do ctrl+h here
00:30:372 (30372|0,30528|3) - Add normal-hitclap here
00:49:747 (49747|2) - You need normal-hitclap here
01:23:185 (83185|1) - Hmm... I would delete this LN... It doesn't fit that much imo
01:27:716 (87716|1,88028|1) - Put normal-hitclap here too

[7K NM]
I think you should lower hihat.wav when you have a double... It's too loud imo

00:30:372 (30372|0,30528|6) - Add normal-hitclap here
01:00:060 (60060|2) - I'd move left
01:04:747 (64747|4) - ^
01:27:716 (87716|2,88028|0) - Put normal-hitclap here too

[4K HD]
Same thing as 7K NM about hihat.wav

00:20:216 (20216|2,20372|0) - I would add soft-hitwhistle here instead of hihat
00:30:216 (30216|1,30372|3,30528|2) - Add normal-hitclap here
00:50:060 (50060|1,50216|2,50372|2,50528|1) - ^
01:12:716 (72716|2,73028|2) - ^
01:27:716 (87716|1,87872|0,88028|1) - ^

[7K HD]
00:20:216 (20216|1,20372|3) - I would add soft-hitwhistle here instead of hihat
00:25:216 (25216|3) - Move right for a better pattern
00:43:497 (43497|4) - Move right, pattern
00:50:060 (50060|2,50216|3,50372|4,50528|2) - Add normal-hitclap
01:12:716 (72716|4,73028|4) - ^
01:27:560 (87560|0,87716|1,87872|0,88028|1) - ^ (even in both notes)

[7K MX]
00:10:841 (10841|1) - I would move this in 4
00:14:435 - Repattern this, there doesn't fit 1/4 notes http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1442151
00:47:247 - Put another note here please
00:53:028 - Add note please
01:07:872 - Add one or two note please
01:10:372 - ^
01:11:622 - ^
01:12:247 - Add note in 3
01:12:716 (72716|4) - Add normal-hitclap
01:17:794 (77794|1) - Put hihat here instead of normal-hitclap
01:20:372 - Add a note please
01:27:716 (87716|1,87872|0,88028|1) - Add normal-hitclap (you can add in doulblenotes too)

I would use less 1/4 notes here

[RC's 7K SC]
Nice patterns

00:12:091 - LNs should be like that http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1442181 (you can obviously change position)
00:30:216 - 00:30:372 - 00:30:528 - Add normal-hitclap here too
00:39:747 (39747|0,39825|1,39903|2,39981|0,40060|1) - Aaaah, I would delete this and add a stream from 00:40:060 - to 00:40:685 - (you can hear drums)
00:50:060 (50060|6,50216|6,50372|5,50450|3,50528|5,50606|3) - Add normal-hitclap (or add only in 1/2 notes 00:50:060 (50060|6,50216|6,50372|5,50528|5) - )
01:10:841 (70841|2,71153|3,71466|4) - Move them 1/2 forward like in the screenshot http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1442221
01:12:716 (72716|2,73028|1,73106|3) - Add normal-hitclap
01:26:935 (86935|5,87560|1) - Move them like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1442229
01:27:560 (87560|4,87560|2,87716|4,87716|2,88028|6,88028|0) - Add normal-hitclap

Thank you so much, it was very helpful. ALL UPDATED

[Shi-Ra] wrote:

Fully HSed, most of all patterns are correct, I can't catch any unranked issue here, so it's now Bubbled ^w^

Thank you shira ^o^

Kiai is still inconsistent. Set that in every diff from 01:03:190 - to 01:23:190 - please. It's an important thing.

Popped for now. When you will fix this, I will rank your mapset.

Roxas wrote:

Kiai is still inconsistent. Set that in every diff from 01:03:190 - to 01:23:190 - please. It's an important thing.

Popped for now. When you will fix this, I will rank your mapset.

Thanks for suggestion..
I didnt notice at all. since its not appear in aimod. im sorry for my mistake.

Now, all is done :3

*edited*
but 01:03:190 isnt snapped so i put it on 01:03:185

Yes sorry I was wrong. From 01:03:185 to 01:23:185.

It's still inconsistent in 7K HD (it ends in 01:23:263 - ) and 7K NM starts in 01:03:263. Fix them please and I will rank.

My fault, done ..

Now it's okay! Ranked~

congratz~~~~~<3

Thanks

gratz !!

gratz!!

Gratz on the rank -cough-

Congrats!! \:D/

selamat ya

Thanks all \o/

Reikosaka wrote:

selamat ya

makasih ya senpai :v