1. Angelic~ (5 stars, 681 notes)
2. Hard (4.89 stars, 399 notes)
3. Insane (4.91 stars, 540 notes)
4. Normal (3.84 stars, 205 notes)

arviejhay wrote:

Hi from my modding queue

Normal

00:26:203(4) - slider end - add whistle
00:32:600 - Add circle then add whistle
00:42:199(4) - slider end - add whistle
00:45:379(6) - add whistle
01:33:399 - Add circle then add whistle
01:36:617(6) - Add whistle
01:46:235(3) - slider end - Add whistle
01:49:425(3) - slider end - Add whistle

Hard

00:39:203(1) - new combo

Insane

01:26:566(4) - object end isn't snapped

Hard, Insane. and Angelic~ diffs are very nice but no other hitsounds? like whistle, finish, clap?
and you need to set the preview for the map all the same time.
Good luck mapping

Raszero wrote:

From my thread
Normal
00:48:616 (6) - This not doesn't feel as powerful as the others, a slider starting at 00:48:216 (5) - to it feels better to me
o Slider does sound better!
02:16:897 - It feels like there should be a beat added in here
I think it's fine and the time you wrote isn't on a tick xD
02:17:316 (6) - Seems too empty to me, could add a reverse slider here that goes on for 3 ticks before reversing
o Not sure what you mean, but I've made an arrangement
02:19:687 - It feels like there should be a beat added in here
x your times and ticks seem to not match o.o
02:21:667 - Seems too empty to me, could add a reverse slider here that goes on for 2 ticks before reversing
o added circles instead

Hard
00:35:616 (6,7,8) - I don't know if its just me but I wanted to go back to where 3 2 and 1 were and kept doing it instead of your route, it felt better when I changed it but could just be me
x Feels better the way it is, for me
02:10:816 - Add a 1 tick slider here, feels like missing too much without something here
x I think it's fine and adding a tick slider would mean adding a super duper short slider
02:11:277 - See above
x time not on tick again
02:11:616 (5) - This should start 1 tick earlier and go on for an extra one
x umm no.. xD and also there isn't a 5th numbered slider there.
02:12:516 (3) - Either delete this or add one between 5 and 6, its the same rhythm but missing out beats feels very odd. Personally rather just delete this as it matches the slider a 7 better
o I see what you mean
02:14:216 (3) - feels like this should start 2 ticks earlier, not sure about when to end it
x I think it's fine the way it is. it follows the melody behind
02:16:947 - have a slider here ending at where 1 is
x your idea seems nice, too but I'll see what I can do

Hope it helped, I'll do the other later :p

Faces3 wrote:

ooh, hitsounds. me loves them. I could try to do them/

Zekmer wrote:

From my queue.

[Normal]

01:48:216 (1,2,3) - Make them look like this instead

SPOILER

o distance snap was restricting it but, that could be an exception
00:45:816 (1,2) - Instead of having them overlap, try doing something like this

SPOILER

o too far away from each other. but I've made them otherwise to not overlap!
[Hard]

00:21:816 (5,6) - Looks better like this

SPOILER

o agreed
[Insane]

Looks fine

[Angelic~]

Can't say much about this one, I'm not good enough to mod this. Sorry!


Well then.
Good mapping, I enjoyed playing it. Good luck on getting this ranked!

TheLastMO wrote:

FINE

[normal]


00:15:416 (4,5) - off with distance snap, and one space down for 5th slider to match 4th.
o lol done
01:08:216 9(1,2) - overlaps?
o you're right. arranged
01:29:416 (4) - Suggestion- repeat 3 times instead of 5 and place a note 01:30:216 -
o it actually does sound better!
01:47:416 - try a different pattern, seems boring to use 4 same patterns
o right about that, too.
01:54:616 - overlap?
o done
-gud-

[hard]

00:21:616 (3,4) - I found out that the distance between these two aren't the same from 1 and 2. And your intentions were were to.
o ..perfectionist
00:29:816 (1,2) - tiny tiny bit not aligned
o thank you
00:39:416 (1,2) - ^

02:17:016 - add a note?
o I'm pretty sure I had a note there.. added, again
-fun-

[insane]

00:25:816 - nc
o
00:26:616 (1,3) - are not identical, just saying.
o caught, and fixed
01:14:616 (1,3) - slightly not overlapped completely
o fixed
-wee-

[angelic~]
looking at patterns mostly.

00:45:016 (5,6,7,8,9) - uh line them up? I THINK the spacing might get confusing
hm.. it has been arranged
01:11:416 (2) - and 01:13:016 (2) - not at the same spot
o fixed
02:46:916 - add a note? Your choice
x I don't know, I'll consider it
-weehee-

There you go~

No Dap wrote:

안녕하세요~ 모딩큐

[Normal]
HP +1 OD+1 하나씩 올리면 스타 난이도가 하드로 되버려요 괜찮겟죠?
00:17:016 (1) - 이런슬라 모양은 추천하지 않아요
o 약간 바꾸긴 했는데 거기서 거기같네요
00:25:016 (3,4) - 같은모양으로 해주세요 o
00:46:616 (2,4) - 겹치지말아주세요 o
00:49:016 (1,2) - o 바꿨습니다

SPOILER

01:07:816 (6,1) - 이렇게 겹치는거 보기 좋지않아요 o 바꿨습니다
01:10:216 (4,5) - 디스턴스 o 위에꺼 바꾸면서 조절했네요
01:13:016 (4,5) - 담요해주세요 o
01:37:816 (2,3) - 담요해주세요 o
01:38:616 (3) - 틱하나 줄여주시고 서클 추가 o
01:47:416 (3,4,5) - 슬라이더로 o
01:52:216 (6,1) - 같은모양 x 이건 모양 틀린게 괜찮은거같아요
02:28:216 (3,4,5) - 슬라이더 o
02:43:416 (2,3) - 담요이쁘게 해주세요 o

[Hard]
HP+2 OD+1
00:14:616 (3,4,1) - 거리가 일정하지 않네요 o
00:17:816 (7,1) - 언랭요소입니다. 리턴 겹치지마세요 o 그 중간에 노트있는데도요? 바꿧습니다
00:18:616 (1) - 안좋아요. 슬라이더 여러개로 나눠주세요 음.. 그런가요 바꿧습니다
00:26:616 (1,2) - 거리 너무 가까워요 쉬는박자도 있는데 o 그낭 노트를 쉬는박자에 더했습니다
00:32:216 (5) - 약간 늘려주세요. o
00:34:616 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 너무 어려워요. 바꿔주세요 배치 o
00:51:016 (1,1,1) - 뉴콤 삭제 o
01:11:016 (7) - 이거 끝나는 시간이 이상한데 레드틱에서 끝내주세요 o 잉 그렇네요
01:19:816 (2) - 여기부터 거리가 늘어나는거 같은데 기분탓일까요 일부로 늘렸는데
01:23:416 (3) - 이것도 펼쳐주세요 o
01:34:216 (2,4) - 슬라 펴주세요 o
01:39:816 (4) - ^ o
01:40:616 (3) - 이건 정말 펴주셔야되요 o
01:52:216 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - 약간 어려운 느낌인데 x 괜찮은듯
02:12:416 (2,3,4) - 겹쳐주세요 o
02:12:816 (5,6,7) - ^
02:18:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - 거리를 약간 줄여주시거나 아예 겹쳐주세요 o
02:42:616 (1,2) - 펴주세요 o
02:47:416 (1,1) - 뉴콤삭제 o

Secretpipe wrote:

Hi Ruby !
From M4M !

[Normal]
00:31:416 (5) - Weird flow ! x seems fine, i've added a note after it
00:34:616 (3,4,5,6) - Make a straight line ! x it's fine the way it is
00:37:816 (3) - Make more than 2 repeats is bad ! x i don't know why it's bad
00:52:216 (6) - Put it near the end of slider x yeah i've tried it but middle seems better
01:10:616 (5) - Make it more curve o
01:19:816 (5) - Put it on right o
01:35:416 (3,4,5,6) - Straight line !x seems fine
01:45:816 (3,1) - Flow is weird tho x
01:54:616 (4,5,6) - Please that pattern , my eyes !! Just kidding ! x) Remove and put another thing! o hmm i changed it
02:14:616 (4) - Wrong spacing x I don't think it'll become a big deal

[Hard]
00:16:216 (3) - Make point in the middle of slider ! o okayy
00:36:416 (2) - wrong spacing o
00:49:416 (2) - Put it on a white tick o
01:35:016 (4) - Remove , put another thing x I don't know yet
01:54:616 (1,1) - You should continue pattern like this instead of spinner ! And turn off new combo o guess so
Can't mod the rest because the distance spacing change every time owo! Try to respect Distance Spacing ! Or put x1.0. I've made if farther purposely and i don't follow distance snap for hards

[Insane]
00:06:016 (2,3,4) - Straight line o
00:26:216 (3) - Put it 4/5 grids left x not sure what you mean
00:41:816 (5,6) - Not in rythm o eh i changed it
00:49:016 (1,2,3,4) - Make a better square x it's a rhombus!
00:51:916 (8,9) - Spacing and not in the rythm I think x
01:36:216 (7) - Remove x i don't see why
01:40:216 (1,2,3,4) - Make a square x it's fine
02:11:016 - Add a note here o
02:33:016 (1,2,3,4,5) - Stack it perfectly ! ( nazi :3 ) o

[Angelic]
You should rename it cuz new rule : ExtrA or Expert maybe ? Angelic seems enough to know the difference. we'll see
Slider Velocity is too fast !i think it's fine
Try to remap it and I'll mod this diff !

I love teh song ! And the map tho !
Good luck~

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod as requested o̿ ̭ o̿

[General]
*Vocaloids are no longer considered appropriate for the Artist title. Funny coincidence, I previously just modded a map with the same song And the appropiate Artist is Yasuo-P.I knew i read that somewhere. Either way bs. yasuo reminds me of LoL all the time..
Put Rin and Len in the tags.
*BG needs to be at least 1366x768 or 1024x768.
*01:43:416 - Kai time should end here.

[Normal]

00:16:216 (5) - Move lower.o
00:17:016 (1,4) - Please move apart, their overlap looks confusing o while doing the first.
00:20:616 (2,5) - Stack properly, they're positioning is very messy. o
00:23:016 (6,2) - ^o
00:26:616 (1) - Add finisho
00:33:016 (1) - Double-click on the head until it glows red, and add finish.
00:39:416 (1) - ^
00:52:216 (6) - Move to 88/56 with finish hitsound. o okay more modding coming about the samething
01:09:816 (3) - Move away from 01:10:616 (5) - 's tail, it forms a very crowded look.o
01:17:816 (1) - Add finish.
01:30:616 (1) - ^
01:36:616 (6,2) - Move apart, same reason as 01:09:816 (3) - o
01:43:416 - Add a finish on the note here
01:56:216 - Add a note here, with a finish to give this verse a better ending before the break.o
02:21:816 (1) - Add finish.
02:48:216 (4) - Double click the tail, and add a finish.

[Hard]
00:14:616 (3,2) - Move apart, I can see that overlap.o
00:26:616 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:30:616 (4,1) - Move apart, so there's a gap in between them.o
00:36:416 (2,3) - Not an appropriate spot for a jump, especially since it kinda comes out of nowhere.o
00:39:416 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:49:016 - 00:50:216 Rhythm suggestion: o

Mainly because of how 00:49:416 (3) - takes up almost the entire rhythm cycle.
00:52:216 (6) - Add finish.
01:17:016 (3) - ^ On the tail.
01:30:216 - 01:30:816 Another rhythm suggestion: x i'll keep mine

01:34:816 (3,1) - Stack, these notes look unorganized. o
01:56:216 - Add a note here with a finish.o
02:36:216 (1) - Add finish
02:49:016 (2) - ^

[Insane]

00:26:616 (1) - Add finish on the head.
00:39:416 (1) - ^
00:52:116 (9) - Add finish on the tail.
01:30:616 (1) - Add finish on the head.
.....

For now, I'd suggest you focus on the flow of your objects. They should run into the next object smoothly, without having the cursor to bend and move towards weird angles too much. I also want to point out making jumps, but for now just focus on how you can arrange your notes more neater.

Eg. In your hard diff 00:45:816 (1,2,3) - :

Random sharp curve - not very favoring to the players eyes.well this one certainly is not it for me.. i don't see any effort in having to follow these nor would anyone actually care when it comes to playing it. Plus, I like it this way more than the other ._.(solely my opinion). But I will skim through for any "unnatural flows" that I could find.

Something like this would look better:

See how the flow natural curves in sync with 00:45:816 (1) - ?

Work hard, and good luck.

GUHROOVY wrote:

[Normal]

CS +1 보통 노말에서는 CS3 을 씁니다 CS4도 나쁘진않지만요 BPM을 고려해서 낮추는것도 좋을것같습니다 o

02:17:016 (4) - 여기리듬이 뭔가이상하네요 다른리듬으로 바꿔주세요 o

[Hard]

00:47:216 (5,1) - 여기두개 디스턴스 맞춰서 별모양만드세요 o

01:31:016 (3) - 이상한게 감이 여기만 어색해보임 서클 지우고 있었던곳까지 슬라확장 ㄱㄱo

[Insane]

00:51:416 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 짝수연타는 치기 힘듭니다 7서클 지우시고 그뒤 단타슬라들 앞으로땡긴뒤 o

마지막단타슬라에 반복한번넣어주세요 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1358189

01:34:916 (6) - 이것도 리딩이힘들어요 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1358197 이렇게 뙇 o

01:49:016 (5) - 뒤에서클지우고 반복슬라로 뙇 o

01:52:616 (6,7,8,9) - 스트림 간격이 너무넓음 o

02:21:016 (1) - NC o

02:33:016 (1,2,3) - ctrl G를 뙇o

02:44:616 (3,4) - 이거두개도 ctrl G를 뙇o

[angelic]

00:46:416 (3) - 뒤쪽 1번슬라랑 스택을 뙇

00:49:316 (2) - 노트삭제 헐.. o

01:06:516 (6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1358216 뙇o

01:11:016 (7) - 1/8 3반복 슬라로 넣어주세요 너무 무리한 처리력을 요구합니다 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1358221<<이렇겐 안했지만 비슷하게 더 쉽게 했습니다

01:22:216 (5,6,7,8,1) - 와 개어려움 별모양으로 연타뭉쳐주면 모양도이쁘고 치기도좋고o

01:23:616 (6) - 한칸위로 9번서클이랑스택o

01:29:016 (1,2) - 이거두개 점프길이 하향좀 x 점프를 뙇

01:49:316 (8,9,10) - 동선에따라 둥글게 뙇 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1358228o

01:51:316 (6) - 동선파괴잼 슬라꼬리랑 그냥 스택x 그냥 놥두는게 굴잼같음

02:07:016 (5) - 이와같은 다른 패턴과비교해 서클이 이상한데위치해있네요 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1358237 이렇게 뙇 o? 잘 모르겠지만

02:07:416 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,1) - 개굴잼 o

엔젤릭개굴잼

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

M4M From my Queue!

[General]
electric.angel.full.1431943.jpg is 900x700, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768.o
http://puu.sh/78DTm.wav You could use this as clap, it fits so well at some parts.I believe so, too!

[Angelic~]
There is only 616 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms. https://www.dropbox.com/s/t6u60qgciozbv ... 175654.jpg

[Normal]
I'd say CS+1, the circles are kinda small for the difficulty I suppose.Was an accident xd
00:29:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - There could be a better shape hereo
for example

SPOILER

00:46:616 (2,3) - The blanket looks wrong here even with that AR, make magics please ;po
00:48:216 (5) - The corner is not made properly, go to the middle of the slider and you'll understand. use grid level 4 to make it right.o
01:33:416 - You could put a circle here, it would fit the vocal very well.o
02:31:416 (4) - Fix a bit the red anchors of this slider so the down beats will hit the corners properly.x

[Hard]
00:51:016 (2) - Move this a grid left so it makes the good shape.o
01:44:416 (5) - One grid up and right for the spacing, for some reason it just look incosistent this way though it's just 0.05 difference in distance.o


[Insane]
There is only 616 ms of audio lead-in, which is less than the minimum of 2000 ms.
00:19:616 (6) - Maybe put it at x:192 y:40 (?)x
00:37:816 (1) - fell in love with this masterpiece.c;
00:51:416 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I don't like this space increase :/ People will tend to miss easily there and thats frustrating.arranged
01:21:016 (1,2) - Use Grid 4 to put these two better with the circle.x seems fine
01:34:916 (6,7) - That's almost unplayable, it's not easy to read it and I personally didn't enjoy it as I needed the editor to understand how it goes. Better ctrl+g the slider 7.o yeah another one i was careless about oopzz
02:25:416 (2) - ctrl+g ? o.o the flow is cool like thiso
02:31:816 (3,7) - Stack them?o
and also stack 02:33:016 (1) - this better with the previous one.o
02:47:416 (1) - The path overlaps itself here, that slider is unrankable, corrected by a BAT as well.o made it visible

[Angelic~]
00:51:416 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Wat. Why this NC spam?cuz
01:33:016 (5) - The path overlaps itself here, that slider is unrankable, corrected by a BAT as well.o
01:34:216 (2) - ^
01:38:616 (1,2,3,4,5) - this sounds terrible, I'd rather 1/4 sliders and a better pattern.o didn't think it was terrible but i took your suggestion
02:48:116 (4,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - NC spam, increasing spacing, no. I dislike ;/x I like both a lot!

I didn't enjoy this diff to be honest :/


Great job with the mapset, good luck!