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I can't speak English very well.
I will try my best to express what I mean by images.
[General]
Hitsounds maybe too loud , consider to decrease 10% ~ 15%
No kiai time? I think you should add some.
Wonderful sound! I like it! Especially from here ( 09:21:348 - ) to here ( 11:07:581 - )
[Marathon]
00:06:473 (4,5,6) - I prefer this↓
00:12:343 (1,2,3,4) - ↓
00:36:908 (4,5,6,7) - ↓
01:10:169 (4) - ↓
01:22:560 (3) - change to (X:208,Y:132)
01:41:039 (1) - Ctrl+G and change to (X:324,Y=76)
01:42:126 (1) - ↓
02:34:082 (7) - change to a slider with a note
02:41:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - I prefer this↓
02:55:821 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is a bad idea... Please consider to make it more interesting like this
03:09:734 (3,1) - Add some distance between the slider and note like this ( 03:10:604 (3,1) - )
03:12:343 (4) - Move to (X:300,Y:131)
03:47:456 (5), 04:02:873 (3) - I thought this slider was a little bit strange...
04:25:373 (5) - I think it will be better to add a inherited point making the end of this slder become mute
04:50:203 (3) - This slider should start here ( 04:50:090 - )
05:00:805 (4,5) - Make the blanket better
05:24:376 (7) - This slider should start here ( 05:24:489 - )
06:06:815 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe no need to add a jump here?
06:56:938 (6,7) - ↓
07:00:665 (4) - Maybe add a jump will be better?
07:23:212 (8) - Don't cover the reverse arrow ( 07:23:398 - )
07:31:224 (4) - This slider should end here (07:32:342 - )
07:56:566 (1,2,3) - I prefer this↓
08:01:597 (1,2,3) - I prefer this↓
08:07:560 (7,8) - I prefer this↓
08:48:367 (2) - Ctrl+G maybe better ?
10:30:204 (3,4,5) - Consider change to↓
11:02:663 (3,4) - Add some distance between these two sliders
11:58:203 (7) - This slider should start here ( 11:58:328 )
12:07:203 - add 3 notes here
12:23:203 - ths same as↑
12:46:703 (3) - move to (X:344,Y:128)
12:49:828 (6,1) - Consider change it become a 1/8 slider like this( 12:49:328 (3) - )
12:54:078 (2), 13:01:578 (1) - Maybe player can't react this two...
13:01:578 (1) - add a note here
13:28:524 (1,2,3,4) - make the note1234 more close or change to a 1/6 slider
14:13:700 (1,2,3,1) - I prefer this↓
14:31:348 (2) - This slider should start here ( 14:31:171 - )
I can't speak English very well.
I will try my best to express what I mean by images.
[General]
Hitsounds maybe too loud , consider to decrease 10% ~ 15%
No kiai time? I think you should add some.
Wonderful sound! I like it! Especially from here ( 09:21:348 - ) to here ( 11:07:581 - )
[Marathon]
00:06:473 (4,5,6) - I prefer this↓
00:12:343 (1,2,3,4) - ↓
Suggestion
00:15:604 (4,5,6,7) - ↓from
change to this↓
change to this↓
Suggestion
00:25:676 (2) - This slider is unnecessary, please consider change it to a 1/6 slider(slider7 is under the note5)
00:36:908 (4,5,6,7) - ↓
Suggestion
00:52:343 (4,5) - ↓(Slider7 is under the slider 4)
01:10:169 (4) - ↓
01:22:560 (3) - change to (X:208,Y:132)
01:41:039 (1) - Ctrl+G and change to (X:324,Y=76)
01:42:126 (1) - ↓
Suggestion
01:45:821 (1) - The slider should end here( 01:46:039 - )from
change to
change to
02:34:082 (7) - change to a slider with a note
02:41:473 (1,2,3,4,5) - I prefer this↓
02:55:821 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This is a bad idea... Please consider to make it more interesting like this
03:09:734 (3,1) - Add some distance between the slider and note like this ( 03:10:604 (3,1) - )
03:12:343 (4) - Move to (X:300,Y:131)
03:47:456 (5), 04:02:873 (3) - I thought this slider was a little bit strange...
04:25:373 (5) - I think it will be better to add a inherited point making the end of this slder become mute
04:50:203 (3) - This slider should start here ( 04:50:090 - )
05:00:805 (4,5) - Make the blanket better
05:24:376 (7) - This slider should start here ( 05:24:489 - )
06:06:815 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe no need to add a jump here?
06:56:938 (6,7) - ↓
07:00:665 (4) - Maybe add a jump will be better?
07:23:212 (8) - Don't cover the reverse arrow ( 07:23:398 - )
07:31:224 (4) - This slider should end here (07:32:342 - )
07:56:566 (1,2,3) - I prefer this↓
08:01:597 (1,2,3) - I prefer this↓
08:07:560 (7,8) - I prefer this↓
08:48:367 (2) - Ctrl+G maybe better ?
10:30:204 (3,4,5) - Consider change to↓
Suggestion
10:32:172 (3,4,5) - same as↑from
to
to
11:02:663 (3,4) - Add some distance between these two sliders
11:58:203 (7) - This slider should start here ( 11:58:328 )
12:07:203 - add 3 notes here
12:23:203 - ths same as↑
12:46:703 (3) - move to (X:344,Y:128)
12:49:828 (6,1) - Consider change it become a 1/8 slider like this( 12:49:328 (3) - )
12:54:078 (2), 13:01:578 (1) - Maybe player can't react this two...
13:01:578 (1) - add a note here
13:28:524 (1,2,3,4) - make the note1234 more close or change to a 1/6 slider
14:13:700 (1,2,3,1) - I prefer this↓
14:31:348 (2) - This slider should start here ( 14:31:171 - )