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Rihanna - Diamonds

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Sword Hunter
164 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sword Hunter
Hi, stalkers, I see you, if you wanna mod, please come in
stars are always welcome ^_^_^
Sword Hunter
164 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sword Hunter
UPDATED! please check latest version!

MODS!!! MODS!!!
COME IN ALL OF YOU!!!! :)
Gamu
Elite Mapper
2,606 posts
Joined December 2010
Gamu
Hello~

Mod request from you

[General]

  1. About BG : Correct resolution is 1366*768, so you must change. I've prepared it for you :D
    Save this, please use~
    image
  2. I'd suggest to that you disable "Lettebox during breaks".
[Easy]

  1. Many sliderwhiste is unnecessary. You should remove them. (e.g. 00:30:842 (6), 00:32:147 (1), 00:33:451 (2)...etc)
  2. Increase OD by 1 tick in order to adjust the difficulty level. If you have done it, balance is better~
  3. 00:30:842 (6) - Add a finish at the end point. Because there is a strong sound in back sound.
  4. 00:32:147 (1) - spacing error. You should unify the spacing.
  5. 01:13:233 (5) - ^
  6. 01:34:103 (4) - ^
  7. 01:54:319 (4) - ^
  8. 02:36:058 (2) - ^
  9. 02:46:493 (2) - ^
  10. 02:47:145 (3) - ^
  11. 03:07:362 (2) - ^
  12. 03:08:015 (3) - ^
  13. 03:17:797 (2) - ^
  14. 03:35:895 (1) - Move to 03:36:058 the start point.
[Bakari's Normal]
  1. Disable the "Widescreen Support". It is unnecessary because does not use SB.
  2. 00:36:711 (1) - spacing error.
  3. Placement and rhythm is good, but I think hitsound is bad ): Maybe, hitsound has not been added to enough. Especially, chorus part. I'd suggest to add a lot of whistle and clap! In addition, the use of custom hitsound is better.
[Hard]

  1. Disable the "Widescreen Support". It is unnecessary because does not use SB.
  2. Many sliderwhiste is unnecessary.
  3. 01:23:667 (6) - Add a finish at the start point.
  4. 01:30:678 (1) - Move to 01:30:841 the start point.
  5. 01:58:232 (5) - try this?
    image
  6. 02:26:276 (8) - Add at the start point instead of the end point.
  7. 02:36:058 (4) - Add a finish at the end point.
  8. 02:37:363 (6) - Remove a finish.
sorry for very short mod orz

good luck~
Sword Hunter
164 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sword Hunter
Thanks gamu ^-^!
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
will fix the hitsounds later
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: rihanna_-_diamonds_(zaycev.net).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74649
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11123,83690,105701
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Diamonds
TitleUnicode:Diamonds
Artist:Rihanna
ArtistUnicode:Rihanna
Creator:Sword Hunter
Version:Bakari's Normal
Source:
Tags:Rihanna English Pop 7th album -Bakari-
BeatmapID:372042
BeatmapSetID:148234

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"small-island-under-the-colorful-night-sky-digital-art-hd-wallpaper-1920x1080-2132.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
2,94762,105945
2,167345,176380
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,0,0,0

[TimingPoints]
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Applied both of the suggestions, thanks.
Sword Hunter
164 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sword Hunter
UPDATED!
check latest version before modding.
Vhy
678 posts
Joined November 2012
Vhy
m4m from your request ~
tugas kuliah masi numpuk.. hadeeeh :3

[General]
delete "rihanna" dari tags karna nama itu udah ada di artist nya, jadi nda perlu dimasukin di tags
inconsistency combo colours on "-Bakari-" diff. make sure to make it same on all diffs
ukuran BG km 1920x1080. kalo bisa di ubah ukuran nya jadi 16:9 or 4:3. contoh nya 1024x768
banyak banget green line yang unsnapped. ga tau juga sih ini diperbolehkan atau engga tapi kalo bisa dibuat snapped semua aja biar mencegah modder selanjutnya mengira kalo ini error

[Easy]
slidertick 1 aja cukup lah
SV nya kok bisa lebih gede dari normal :3
00:17:798 (2) - pindah 1 grid ke kiri biar simetri ama note sebelum nya. slain itu coba ini slider di buat bengkok karena mumpung slider ini ada reverse nya jadi biar enak aja dimainin
00:21:059 (5) - knp engga ada whistle disini? coba pertahankan hitsound nya. sekalian NC nya
00:22:364 (1) - hapus NC dsni
00:36:712 (4) - NC
00:39:320 (1) - hapus NC. ikuti aja stanza nya
00:47:146 (4) - NC
01:54:972 (5,1) - coba hindari overlap yang seperti ini
02:00:189 (4) - NC
02:03:450 (1) - hapus NC
02:10:624 (5) - bentuk slider kaya gini, ngga cocok banget untuk easy diff. pemula jelas bingung dan kemungkinan akan sliderbreak disini. jadi coba di ubah bentuk nya yang simple aja.
02:24:971 (2) - terlalu banyak reverse. sama seperti di atas, ngga cocok untuk easy diff. kalo menurut saya mending di bagi jadi 2 slider aja
02:32:797 (5) - same here

[Bakari's Normal]
00:40:624 (6) - this finish looks like unnecessary because i hear nothing here to put finish. better to remove it
02:26:276 (1) - adding finish here would be a good one since it is a beginning of the kiai
nice normal, placement and flow. i'd agree with Gamu about the hitsound, it seems "random" for me. since im not good at hitsounding mod so yeah huess i'll leave as it is.

ok aku stop dulu disini, besok pagi nanti malem aku lanjutin.
kasian mata butuh istirahatmau berangkat kuliah dlu heuheuehueh

EDIT :
[Hard]
entah knp spacing nya terkesan "berantakan". jadi aku skip aja tentang masalah spacing
aku heran knp note nya engga start di 00:10:624 seperti diff lain nya?
00:36:059 (5) - dibikin curve biasa aja biar flow nya lebih enak
01:11:602 (2) - coba di geser ke kanan nya slider, biar flow nya lebih enak juga karena bpm yang rendah
01:23:667 (6) - lengkukan slider ini coba di bikin ke atas lebih cocok imo
02:28:884 (4) - kurang suka ama bentuk slider ini.

overall : untuk map pertama tergolong lumayan, rhythm dan flow nya udah bagus. permasalahan nya cuma 1, sama kata hinsvar yaitu spacing. dan untuk blanket coba lebih dirapikan lagi. oh ya hitsound nya juga agak random kalo diliat2 :3

well, pertama kali bikin map ya gini ini banyak banget masukan2. tapi itu tanda nya mereka niat ngebantu km biar bisa bikin map yang bagus. jadi jangan malas untuk belajar dan berusaha. dulunya aku juga kaya gini kok hueheuheue >w<

hope this helps ~
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Sword Hunter
164 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sword Hunter
Thanks, nanti kuganti

bg nya udah digantu kali masa masih 1900-an? udah kuganti jadi 1368 brepa gitu..
Sword Hunter
164 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Sword Hunter
Thanks for the star -umi- :)
riffy
osu! Alumni
8,060 posts
Joined December 2010
riffy
aight, hitsounded it on my own. should be better now

code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: rihanna_-_diamonds_(zaycev.net).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 74649
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 11123,83690,105701
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Diamonds
TitleUnicode:
Artist:Rihanna
ArtistUnicode:
Creator:Sword Hunter
Version:Bakari's Normal
Source:
Tags:Rihanna English Pop 7th album -Bakari-
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:-1

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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2,167345,176380
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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428,32,124102,1,0,0:0:0:0:
392,100,124428,2,0,L|272:196,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,184,125406,6,0,P|176:156|192:52,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,136,127363,1,8,0:0:0:0:
468,228,128015,2,0,L|480:372,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,160,129645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,92,129971,1,8,0:0:0:0:
340,184,130624,6,0,P|316:180|272:76,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,84,132580,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,156,132906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
480,220,133232,2,0,P|480:268|404:304,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,260,134211,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,312,134537,2,0,P|244:332|160:292,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,168,136493,5,8,0:0:0:0:
271,28,137145,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,94,137471,2,0,P|208:102|164:98,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
19,57,138450,2,0,L|27:213,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,336,139754,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,312,140080,2,0,P|172:284|168:244,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
96,272,141058,6,0,B|76:244|100:204|120:164|92:132,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,328,143015,2,0,P|276:332|320:324,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,268,143667,2,0,L|368:120,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,72,144645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
356,32,144971,2,0,P|316:20|224:60,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,128,145950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,196,146276,6,0,P|148:212|48:172,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
48,104,147254,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,144,147580,2,0,L|96:296,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,48,149537,1,8,0:0:0:0:
296,96,149863,2,0,P|336:104|376:92,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,48,150841,1,8,0:0:0:0:
112,140,151493,6,0,P|96:184|144:264,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,260,152471,2,0,P|212:292|181:327,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,188,153450,2,0,P|220:180|259:193,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,224,154102,6,0,P|364:228|424:148,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,152,155080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
284,108,155406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,220,156058,2,0,P|168:244|184:288,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,312,156710,6,0,P|272:276|236:176,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,144,157689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,196,158015,2,0,P|96:204|52:196,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
8,140,158667,2,0,L|16:284,2,140,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,44,160623,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,88,160950,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,40,161276,1,8,0:0:0:0:
380,128,161928,6,0,P|392:168|332:252,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,220,162906,1,0,0:0:0:0:
208,264,163232,1,0,0:0:0:0:
68,200,163884,2,0,P|52:172|64:68,2,140,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,260,165515,2,0,P|120:292|92:336,2,70,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,204,166493,1,8,0:0:0:0:
176,100,167145,5,0,0:0:0:0:
304,104,177580,6,0,L|444:100,2,140,4|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,172,179536,2,0,P|152:212|168:240,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,268,180189,2,0,P|252:240|228:124,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,308,181819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,356,182145,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,276,182797,6,0,P|400:264|500:304,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,356,184754,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,280,185080,1,0,0:0:0:0:
220,208,185406,2,0,P|184:172|92:200,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,260,186384,1,0,0:0:0:0:
156,240,186710,2,0,L|136:92,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,36,187689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
236,88,188015,6,0,P|288:104|380:88,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
504,16,189319,1,0,0:0:0:0:
468,84,189645,2,0,P|464:116|468:156,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,304,190623,6,0,P|456:348|372:344,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,212,191928,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,272,192254,2,0,P|224:280|180:272,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,204,193232,2,0,L|192:64,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,12,194210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,52,194536,1,0,0:0:0:0:
8,192,195189,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,320,195841,6,0,P|140:344|224:316,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,256,196819,1,0,0:0:0:0:
324,304,197145,2,0,P|356:312|448:252,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,188,198123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
460,124,198449,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,28,199102,6,0,P|304:24|272:32,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,108,199754,2,0,L|276:256,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,28,201710,1,8,0:0:0:0:
84,88,202036,2,0,P|72:128|80:164,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,240,203015,2,0,L|196:320,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,364,203667,6,0,P|320:356|364:276,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,224,204645,1,0,0:0:0:0:
420,184,204971,2,0,P|444:145|412:50,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,168,206928,1,8,0:0:0:0:
132,96,207580,2,0,P|96:88|56:96,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
4,140,208232,1,8,0:0:0:0:
116,248,208884,6,0,P|124:284|108:332,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,184,209862,1,0,0:0:0:0:
132,136,210188,2,0,L|284:144,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,104,211167,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,152,211493,5,0,0:0:0:0:
316,280,212145,2,0,P|280:288|240:280,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,236,212797,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,260,213123,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,196,213449,2,0,L|88:48,2,140,8|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,300,215406,1,0,0:0:0:0:
248,252,215732,2,0,P|264:216|260:176,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,216710,12,2,219319,0:0:0:0:
Sword Hunter
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Sword Hunter
Thanks man :)
Sword Hunter
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Sword Hunter
UPDATED

check latest version.
Hinsvar
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2011
Hinsvar
Oke, remod!

>Easy
  1. Banyak inherited timing point (timing point yang warna hijau itu) yang gak ke-snap pada tick apapun di sini. Resnap pls. (Yang di Hard juga tolong diperbaikin yah...)
  2. Yep, hitsounding di sini masih terkesan random. Coba pake whistle tiap tick putih pertama dan ketiga pada tiap stanza aja, lalu clap di tick kedua dan keempat. Di sana aja. Finish di kiai time dibiarin aja, udah pas. Oh iya, gak cocok masang whistle di body slider, kalau di dalem lagu ini, jadi tolong itu pada diapus-apusin juga yah... Bunyinya gak pas orz (Yep, ini berlaku buat Hard juga.)
  3. Well, 1,60 SV buat lagu 92 BPM itu... terlalu cepat buat Easy sih. Yang pas itu 1,0-1,3. Tapi karena udah terlanjur ya... sudahlah. Seenggaknya masih bisa dikatain Easy.
  4. 00:17:798 (2) - Coba pindahin ke (16,220) biar lebih rapi?
  5. 00:20:407 (4) - (132,80)? Alasan sama kayak yang di atas.
  6. 00:22:364 (1) - Geser node merah pertama (yang sebelah kanan) ke (336,148) biar slider ini simetris kiri-kanan? Tampak lebih bagus kayak gitu.
  7. 00:23:668 (2) - Pindahin ke (132,184)? (Alasannya udah tahu lah ya...)
  8. 00:34:755 (3) - Geser node merahnya ke (192,312) dan yang di ekor ke (120,280) biar lebih "nyambung" sama 00:36:712 (4)?
  9. 00:45:189 (3) - Bikin slider ini mirip kayak slider yang saya sebut di suggestion di atas ini, gih.
  10. 00:54:320 (2) - Pindahin ke (316,180)? (Kalau diterima... kerusakan spacing-nya diperbaiki sendiri yah lol)
  11. 01:05:407 (1,2,3) - Coba bikin kayak gini biar flow-nya lebih bagus dan pattern-nya tampak lebih rapi.
  12. 01:11:929 (3) - Geser ke (244,192)?
  13. 01:13:233 (5,1) - Swap NC biar pas dengan ritme dari lagunya?
  14. 01:14:538 (1,2) - Pilih dua-duanya, geser ke (112,100), lalu pindahin (2) ke (216,360)?
  15. 01:23:668 (6,1) - Swap NC?
  16. 01:32:798 (2,3,4) - Ini... terlalu berantakan orz. Slider-slider sama circle itu terlalu berdempetan. Mungkin coba pattern kayak gini?
  17. 01:49:754 (1) - Ini... terlalu landai, IMO. Gak ada yang salah sih, cuma terlihat dikit aneh aja. Coba lengkungin?
  18. 01:53:667 (3,4,5) - Sama kayak 01:32:798 (2,3,4).
  19. 02:00:189 (4,1) - Swap NC? Combo 01:55:624 (1,2,3,4,5) udah kepanjangan loh...
  20. 02:05:406 (1) - Sama kayak 01:49:754 (1).
  21. 02:10:624 (5,1) - Sama (lol) kayak 02:00:189 (4,1).
  22. 02:17:145 (3,1) - ^
  23. 02:20:406 (1) - Geser node merah ke (196,344) dan node sebelumnya ke (208,292) biar slider ini lebih simetris?
  24. 02:21:711 (2,1) - Swap NC?
  25. 02:22:363 (3) - Pindahin ke (88,144)?
  26. 02:24:971 (2) - Geser node di tengah ke (324,300) dan yang di ekor ke (248,248) untuk nge-blanket-in ekor 02:23:667 (1)?
  27. 02:26:928 (3,1) - Swap NC?
  28. 02:32:797 (5,1) - ^
  29. 02:37:363 (3,1) - ^, dan pindahin (3) ke (292,172) buat ngikutin lengkungan 02:36:058 (2)? (Inget, kamu biasanya naruh NC tiap dua stanza... Jadi coba bikin ini konsisten dari awal sampai akhir map, yah. Dan tentunya berlaku juga buat Hard...)
  30. 02:39:319 (2) - Node yang di (284,151) itu gak sengaja ditambahin kah? Kalau iya remove aja.
  31. 02:46:493 (2,3) - Coba pindahin (2) ke (400,92) dan (3) ke (296,24) biar kelihatan lebih rapi?
  32. 03:06:710 (1,2) - (2) nimpa (1) terlalu banyak tuh, jadi kelihatan gak rapi. Coba dijauhin biar lebih bagus...
  33. 03:17:145 (1,2) - ^
>Hard
  1. 00:15:842 (4) - Pindahin ke (400,160) biar rapi?
  2. 00:23:015 (2,3,4,5,6) - Err, spacing-nya gak konsisten nih di sini. (Oh iya, seperti yang udah saya (dan Vhy) bilang, spacing di sini... masih perlu diperbaikin. Masalahnya sekarang gak konsisten banget loh. Ini bakal bikin pemain merasa gak nyaman waktu main, dan akan bikin map tampak berantakan.)
  3. 00:36:059 (5,1) - Pilih dua-duanya, lalu pindahin ke (360,260)?
  4. 01:02:798 (4,1,2) - Coba bikin kayak gini biar lebih rapi (lagi)...
  5. 01:24:972 (2,3,4) - Uh, sekali lagi... Coba stack di sini dibikin perfect? Sekarang kelihatannya gak rapi.
  6. 01:27:580 (2,3,4) - ^
  7. 01:45:515 (1,2) - ^
Gak banyak yang bisa saya katain lagi sih... Ritme udah bagus, flow-nya lumayan, tapi spacing di Hard sama peletakan objeknya masih berantakan. Hitsound-nya juga terkesan random, seperti kata Vhy. Dan juga combo-nya.

Pokoknya perbaikin aja spacing, hitsound, sama combo, lalu juga bikin map ini lebih rapi biar enak dilihat, dan gak terkesan acak-acakan.

Good luck :D
Sword Hunter
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Sword Hunter
Sip, thanks :D .
Woah, males rasanya memperbaiki semua itu xD.
yaudah deh, udah terlanjur kamu mod, gada salahnya diliat dan dicoba :D
meskipun tadinya udah mau RANK, tapi kutunda dulu deh... >.<
soalnya kamu mod tentang hitsound dan spacing, 2 hal yg masih ingin kuperbaiki.
Sword Hunter
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Sword Hunter
hope this will get ranked soon.
what happened with the diff symbols?
Garven
osu! Alumni
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Garven
I just glanced at the easy. A couple things:

Your rhythms feel stagnant. It was all 1/1 from what I saw. Really boring to play. There's more than just the beat to map to. Experiment and see what you can do!

Another thing is that you had notes way too soon after spinners. Give more time for recovery.

Last: the pace felt really off. You have really low distance snap (0.6) but fairly fast sliders in comparison. You also had a lot of overlapping patterns due to this cluttered effect with really low AR. I suppose it's too late for this particular map, but if you do decide to change up the rhythms, consider changing the pace of the overall map as well to see if you can make it feel a bit more at pace with itself.

Good luck!
Sword Hunter
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Sword Hunter
Thanks, I fixed some things.
Sword Hunter
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Sword Hunter
NEED A BUBBLE AND MOD FROM BAT.
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Hi Sword Hunter. Here are some suggestions.
[General]
  1. Your map has some unsnapped timing sections (see AIBat spoiler box). Please re-snap them!
  2. Why are the combo colors different on every difficulty?
[Easy]
  • AIBat
    1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
      00:36:332 - snap to 00:36:385
      00:38:320 - snap to 00:38:341
      00:46:843 - snap to 00:46:820
      00:48:672 - snap to 00:48:613
      00:52:247 - snap to 00:52:200
      02:05:446 - snap to 02:05:406
      02:57:652 - snap to 02:57:580
      03:36:745 - snap to 03:36:710
    [Bakari's Normal]
    • AIBat
      1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
        00:38:320 - snap to 00:38:341
        00:48:672 - snap to 00:48:613
        00:52:247 - snap to 00:52:200
        01:14:025 - snap to 01:14:048
        01:34:781 - snap to 01:34:754
        02:05:446 - snap to 02:05:406
        02:27:119 - snap to 02:27:091
        02:47:547 - snap to 02:47:471
        02:57:652 - snap to 02:57:580
        03:19:418 - snap to 03:19:428
        03:36:745 - snap to 03:36:710
      [Hard]
  1. 00:13:233 (6) - Try to make this slider better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1495107
  2. 00:34:102 (3) - Try adding a soft-whistle at this slider head.
  3. 00:48:776 (4,5) - Remove these claps. It sounds too loud here.
  4. 00:52:363 (1) - You can also tweak this slider a bit: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1495118
  5. 01:21:059 (2) - This slider looks rigid. Make it smoother. :D
  6. 01:30:678 (1) - This spinner should start a blue tick earlier.
    AIBat
    Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:36:332 - snap to 00:36:385
    00:38:320 - snap to 00:38:341
    00:46:843 - snap to 00:46:820
    00:48:672 - snap to 00:48:613
    00:52:247 - snap to 00:52:200
    02:05:446 - snap to 02:05:406
    02:57:652 - snap to 02:57:580
    03:36:745 - snap to 03:36:710
This map is on the right direction. If you need help on making good sliders, check out this useful thread: t/37194 Good luck with your map.
Sword Hunter
164 posts
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Topic Starter
Sword Hunter

BeatofIke wrote:

Hi Sword Hunter. Here are some suggestions.
[General]
  1. Your map has some unsnapped timing sections (see AIBat spoiler box). Please re-snap them!
  2. Why are the combo colors different on every difficulty?
[Easy]
  • AIBat
    1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
      00:36:332 - snap to 00:36:385
      00:38:320 - snap to 00:38:341
      00:46:843 - snap to 00:46:820
      00:48:672 - snap to 00:48:613
      00:52:247 - snap to 00:52:200
      02:05:446 - snap to 02:05:406
      02:57:652 - snap to 02:57:580
      03:36:745 - snap to 03:36:710
    [Bakari's Normal]
    • AIBat
      1. Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
        00:38:320 - snap to 00:38:341
        00:48:672 - snap to 00:48:613
        00:52:247 - snap to 00:52:200
        01:14:025 - snap to 01:14:048
        01:34:781 - snap to 01:34:754
        02:05:446 - snap to 02:05:406
        02:27:119 - snap to 02:27:091
        02:47:547 - snap to 02:47:471
        02:57:652 - snap to 02:57:580
        03:19:418 - snap to 03:19:428
        03:36:745 - snap to 03:36:710
      [Hard]
  1. 00:13:233 (6) - Try to make this slider better: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1495107
  2. 00:34:102 (3) - Try adding a soft-whistle at this slider head.
  3. 00:48:776 (4,5) - Remove these claps. It sounds too loud here.
  4. 00:52:363 (1) - You can also tweak this slider a bit: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1495118
  5. 01:21:059 (2) - This slider looks rigid. Make it smoother. :D
  6. 01:30:678 (1) - This spinner should start a blue tick earlier.
    AIBat
    Unsnapped inherited (green) sections at:
    00:36:332 - snap to 00:36:385
    00:38:320 - snap to 00:38:341
    00:46:843 - snap to 00:46:820
    00:48:672 - snap to 00:48:613
    00:52:247 - snap to 00:52:200
    02:05:446 - snap to 02:05:406
    02:57:652 - snap to 02:57:580
    03:36:745 - snap to 03:36:710
This map is on the right direction. If you need help on making good sliders, check out this useful thread: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/t/37194 Good luck with your map.
Thank you so much ike!, where can I get bubble if i finished modding these?
Sword Hunter
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UpdateD!! ^^
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