Hi, mod from my queue
NORMAL- 00:51:138 (1,2) - what about placing these two in this way?
- 01:18:830 (2,1) - just blancket a bit better?
- 01:21:348 (1,2) - ^
- 02:01:627 (1,2) - ^
- 02:04:145 (2,1) - ^
- 02:36:453 (3,1) - ^
- 03:22:187 (1,2) - ^
the diff is nice but maybe a bit repetitive.
OSLEA'S HARD- 00:24:914 (3) - if you move the second point of the slider 2 grids up the blancket with 00:25:754 (5) - will be better
- 00:28:481 (3) - move the last point of the slider 3 or 4 grids down so that it will be in the middle of 00:29:740 (1,2) - and also a bit blancketed with 00:29:740 (1) -
- 00:50:509 (5) - what about moving this to x:208 y:208 to make a better triangle with 00:50:089 (3,4) - and also to increase the jump between 00:50:509 (5,6) - I feel like it's better having one in there.
- 00:52:816 (1,3) - stack better
- 00:54:390 (6) - move 1 grid right, so that the stream will have a better curve
- 00:55:754 (4) - what do you think of trying this placement?
- 01:10:858 (5) - make this curve? I think it fit better
- 01:22:187 (3,4) - I think here: or you make this 01:22:607 (4) - curve, or you make this 01:22:187 (3) - straight
- 01:38:970 (3,4) - make them in this way maybe: firtly I crtl+g this 01:38:970 (3) - for a better flow and then fixed the rest for the placement.
- 02:03:306 (1,3) - fix the blancket?
- 03:12:117 (1) - maybe place it in this way?
- 03:33:096 (2) - crtl + G and also ctrl+ G this 03:33:935 (1) -
- 04:02:047 (5) - or you move this to x:208 y:44 or you make a better blancket with 04:01:208 (2,5) -
- 04:04:984 (4) - move the second point of this slider to x:24 y:116 , in your way I feel like it was too random placed.
- 04:17:571 (1,3) - also here fix the blancket
- 04:27:956 (2) - what about a stream instead of a slider?
INSANE-00:20:299 (3) - make this end at 00:20:089 - and add a note at 00:20:194 - . that's because I think is better to tap that note instead of just hearing the sliderthick.
- 00:25:858 (6) - this note is too silent. maybe is better to just deleate it.
- 00:40:229 (3,4,5,6) - here I tryed this placement and rhythm. if you want you can change the order of the note, but I think the placement is more tidy in my way itf you want to try it:
- 00:44:425 (1) - here is more or less the same situation of 00:20:299 (3) -
- 00:45:054 (3) - also this I think it should end at 00:45:369 - or 00:45:264 -
- 00:58:271 - you should add a note here
- 00:59:949 - here too
- 01:01:942 - add a note here and make a stream like this? (or try a better placement if you want, but I think the rhythm is better with the stream)
- 01:03:306 - also here a missing note, you can stack it with 01:02:886 (1) -
- 01:07:082 (3,4,5,6,7) - maybe here is better to create a stream that is not stacked, anyway you can also leave it as it is if you want.
- 01:22:607 (6) - maybe move it to x:300 y:64 (more or less) also because I think the triangle should be with these 01:22:397 (5,6,7) - and not these 01:22:187 (3,6,7) -
- 01:28:061 (1) - move the third point of this slider to x:244 y:40 just for a more defined form.
- 01:30:159 (3,1) - swich these 2 notes' placement
- 01:47:572 (5) - move 2 grids left for a better curve.
- 02:11:698 (1,2,3) - what do you think of this placement here?
- 02:33:306 (6) - stack this with 02:33:516 (1) - ans swich these 2 placement 02:33:726 (2,3) - for a better flow imo
- 02:34:879 (7) - move just 1 grid right
- 02:54:495 (1,2,3) - flip vertiaclly? maybe is better? ddon't know, try it
- 03:09:390 (4) - better to curve this slider
- 03:12:747 (3) - if you move this just one grid left or one left and one up this will follow better the curve of 03:12:117 (1) -
- 03:15:474 (1) - curve this?
- 03:17:572 (3) - stack this with 03:16:733 (4) - ?
Ok, that's all :3
good luck with this map
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BGMに従ってこんな感じにしてみては？
3番を消して、手前の2番をスライダーに変えてみるのはどうでしょうか。
こんな感じにするとボーカルとうまく合うと思います。
こんな感じはいかがでしょうか。
