Zweib wrote:

hi~ kudos request

[hard]
00:15:742 (3,4) - ok
00:17:129 (1) - no ncok
00:35:164 (2,3) - distance is different with 00:35:164 (2,3) - opps, changed
00:39:499 - map?ok
00:56:667 (1,2,3,4) - use rhythm you used laterok

osama7 wrote:

i dont know if i should post this here, but can you put the word 'dance' in the tags?
thanks

1. from here 00:01:176- to here 00:15:395 -, will be nice if you add claps every 2º and 4º downbeat, since them fit really nice the song IMO, if you have some reason to don't explain me pls
2. from here 02:00:829 to here 02:04:297 -, apply the same as above
3. 02:06:378 to 02:16:782 ^
4. Use tick rate 2 in every diff pls

1. 00:16:262 (6) - add whistle? since that beat is kinda inaudible atm, also the whistle follow the vocal really nice here, if you agree this apply to every diff.
2. 00:17:129 (1,2) - this should be drum sampleset right? like you did in 00:16:436 (1,2) - (this apply to every diff as well)
3. 00:22:678 (5) - this is missplaced I think, is better if you follow the line with 00:21:985 (1,3) - , this is what I mean
4. 00:27:707 (2) - missing whistle I think
5. 00:28:921 (1) - add clap in the tail and yeah this apply to every diff and every next slider 00:29:615 (1,1,1,1) -
6. 00:39:499 (1) - remove whistle from slider body and tail, just keep it in the head
7. 00:43:141 (3,4) - this is not stacked perfectly
8. 00:44:181 (1) - add whistle in the tail, since the vocal is really prominent there
9. 01:00:829 (1,2,3) - I was thinking about this rhythm and I feel it really weird.. my suggestion is that you should start the circle stream from 01:00:829 (1) - like this
10. 01:14:181 (3) - this slider should end 1/4 back in 01:14:355 - , if you do this add clap in 01:14:355 -, since is in the music
11. 01:23:025 (1) - remove this NC and add one in 01:23:372 - will fit better the music and your stream comboing!
12. 01:28:574 (3) - should be a NC here, but not in 01:29:268 -
13. 01:31:349 (1) - missing whistle.
14. 01:34:037 - there is nothing in the music right? same goes to 01:35:424 (6) -
15. 01:47:649 remove NC seems totally not necessary
16. 01:54:586 (3,4) - this 1/4 jump is so evil lol, try this
17. 02:26:667 (4) - a single circle will fit the music better and also will be consistent with your next patterns
18. 02:35:164 (1) - I prefer what you did in first and second kiai, this slider is not fun to play :c, this is better

1. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them pls
2. OD 8 is better here try to don't have OD-2 respect to AR
3. 00:16:436 (1,2) - finish with drum sampleset fit a lot better than claps
4. 00:17:129 (1,2) - ^
5. 00:32:736 (4,1) - this rhythm is really weird and doesn't fit the music and vocals nicely, try this instead
6. 00:33:777 remove NC is not necessary
7. 00:39:499 (1) - add whistle in the head
8. 00:48:690 (1,2) - swap NC
9. 01:02:910 (3) - add finish
10. 01:36:898 in every kiai you are missing a finish hitsound here (in all the similar places)
11. 01:52:158 (6) - missing NC
12. 02:04:644 (1) - finish will be nice here as well
13. 02:39:326 add finish here as well
14. 02:46:609 (2,3,4) - this blanket can be improved a lot

1. OD 7 is better for this diff
2. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them pls
3. 00:16:436 (1,2) - finish with drum sampleset fit better here, just like you did in Extra
4. 00:17:129 (1,2) - same as above
5. 00:17:303 (2) - btw this rhythm is not nice , try this instead
6. 00:19:210 (5) - missing NC
7. 00:33:430 (2) - try this rhythm instead
8. 00:39:499 add a slider here, since even the hard diff has one here
9. 00:53:719 (1,2) - swap NC
10. 00:57:360 (3) - this is touching the hp bar
11. 01:02:910 (1) - add finish
12. 02:15:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this play really weird use normal spacing instead
13. 02:36:898 (6,1) - swap NC
14. 02:37:418 (2) - add nc for consistency with your pattern
15. 02:50:424 add NC

1. AR7 and OD6 is better here
2. use your soft custom hitsounds instead of the default ones
3. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them pls
4. 00:06:725 (1) - use a 1/2 repeat slider instead, to fit the vocal in 00:06:898
5. 00:06:725 (1,2,3) - also add more spacing the overlaps look bad
6. 00:09:499 (1,2,3) - ^
7. 00:12:274 (1,2,3) - ^
8. 00:15:048 (1,2,3) - ^ and all the similar ones
9. 00:16:436 (1) - finish with drum sampleset sound a lot better (head and tail)
10. 00:17:129 (2) - same as above
11. 00:18:517 (3,4) - this tiny jump doesn't place nice, make more sense to me to have the tiny jump in 00:19:037 (5,1) -
12. 00:21:985 (5) - missing NC
13. 00:28:921 (1) - finish + whistle sound better than the clap
14. 00:32:389 (2,3) - use more spacing here to avoid the overlap
15. 00:33:083 (4,5,1) - the spacing look the same, but the gaps are differents, add more spacing between 4 and 5
16. 00:33:777 (1,2,1) -use more spacing between them to avoid the overlaps
17. 01:09:152 (1) - add finish as well?
18. 01:24:412 (5) - missing NC, also use more spacing between 01:24:412 (5,6,7) - to avoid overlaps
19. 02:16:436 (3,4) - instead of this, will be more interesting to change the rhythm to this

1. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them pls
2. 00:16:436 (1) - finish with drum samplesetwrok better here (head and tail)
3. 00:17:129 (2) - same as above
4. 00:30:308 (2) - this is touching the hp bar
5. 00:41:060 (3,4) - spacing
6. 02:37:592 (4) - move this a bit up, is almost offscreen xD
7. 02:57:014 (6) - last slider should end in 02:57:274
8. Use your custom hitsounds instead of the defaults >: like you did in extra
   

1. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them pls
2. 01:34:817 (4,5) - this blanket can be better
3. 01:54:239 (2,3) - will be a nice idea to use a repeat slider instead
4. 02:26:840 (1) - too soon after a spinner, just remove this slider
5. 02:55:973 (4) - same as normal diff (about the last slider)
6. Use your custom hitsounds instead of the defaults >: like you did in extra

Natsu wrote:

Recheck no kds

General:

1. from here 00:01:176- to here 00:15:395 -, will be nice if you add claps every 2º and 4º downbeat, since them fit really nice the song IMO, if you have some reason to don't explain me plsdidn't apply
2. from here 02:00:829 to here 02:04:297 -, apply the same as abovesure
3. 02:06:378 to 02:16:782 ^sure
4. Use tick rate 2 in every diff plsdone

Extra:

1. 00:16:262 (6) - add whistle? since that beat is kinda inaudible atm, also the whistle follow the vocal really nice here, if you agree this apply to every diff.fixed
2. 00:17:129 (1,2) - this should be drum sampleset right? like you did in 00:16:436 (1,2) - (this apply to every diff as well)fixed
3. 00:22:678 (5) - this is missplaced I think, is better if you follow the line with 00:21:985 (1,3) - , this is what I meanfixed
4. 00:27:707 (2) - missing whistle I thinkfixed
5. 00:28:921 (1) - add clap in the tail and yeah this apply to every diff and every next slider 00:29:615 (1,1,1,1) - fixed
6. 00:39:499 (1) - remove whistle from slider body and tail, just keep it in the headfixed
7. 00:43:141 (3,4) - this is not stacked perfectlyfixed,nice
8. 00:44:181 (1) - add whistle in the tail, since the vocal is really prominent there
9. 01:00:829 (1,2,3) - I was thinking about this rhythm and I feel it really weird.. my suggestion is that you should start the circle stream from 01:00:829 (1) - like thisfixed,but use other rhythm since no sound on blue line
10. 01:14:181 (3) - this slider should end 1/4 back in 01:14:355 - , if you do this add clap in 01:14:355 -, since is in the musicfixed
11. 01:23:025 (1) - remove this NC and add one in 01:23:372 - will fit better the music and your stream comboing!fixed
12. 01:28:574 (3) - should be a NC here, but not in 01:29:268 -fixed
13. 01:31:349 (1) - missing whistle.fixed
14. 01:34:037 - there is nothing in the music right? same goes to 01:35:424 (6) - fixed
15. 01:47:649 remove NC seems totally not necessaryfixed
16. 01:54:586 (3,4) - this 1/4 jump is so evil lol, try thisfixed
17. 02:26:667 (4) - a single circle will fit the music better and also will be consistent with your next patternsfixed
18. 02:35:164 (1) - I prefer what you did in first and second kiai, this slider is not fun to play :c, this is betterfixed

lightr's Insane:

1. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them pls
2. OD 8 is better here try to don't have OD-2 respect to AR[/color]
3. 00:16:436 (1,2) - finish with drum sampleset fit a lot better than clapsfixed
4. 00:17:129 (1,2) - ^fixed
5. 00:32:736 (4,1) - this rhythm is really weird and doesn't fit the music and vocals nicely, try this insteadfixed
6. 00:33:777 remove NC is not necessaryfixed
7. 00:39:499 (1) - add whistle in the headfixed
8. 00:48:690 (1,2) - swap NCfixed
9. 01:02:910 (3) - add finishfixed
10. 01:36:898 in every kiai you are missing a finish hitsound here (in all the similar places)fixed
11. 01:52:158 (6) - missing NCfixed
12. 02:04:644 (1) - finish will be nice here as wellfixed
13. 02:39:326 add finish here as wellfixed
14. 02:46:609 (2,3,4) - this blanket can be improved a lotfixed..really a lot?

Hyper:

1. OD 7 is better for this difffixed
2. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them pls
3. 00:16:436 (1,2) - finish with drum sampleset fit better here, just like you did in Extrafixed
4. 00:17:129 (1,2) - same as abovefixed
5. 00:17:303 (2) - btw this rhythm is not nice , try this insteadfixed
6. 00:19:210 (5) - missing NCfixed
7. 00:33:430 (2) - try this rhythm instead fixed
8. 00:39:499 add a slider here, since even the hard diff has one here fixed
9. 00:53:719 (1,2) - swap NCfixed
10. 00:57:360 (3) - this is touching the hp barfixed
11. 01:02:910 (1) - add finishfixed
12. 02:15:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this play really weird use normal spacing insteadfixed
13. 02:36:898 (6,1) - swap NCfixed
14. 02:37:418 (2) - add nc for consistency with your patternfixed
15. 02:50:424 add NCfixed

Hard:

1. AR7 and OD6 is better herechange ar to 6.5
2. use your soft custom hitsounds instead of the default onesfixed
3. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them pls
4. 00:06:725 (1) - use a 1/2 repeat slider instead, to fit the vocal in 00:06:898 err.no
5. 00:06:725 (1,2,3) - also add more spacing the overlaps look badfixed
6. 00:09:499 (1,2,3) - ^fixed
7. 00:12:274 (1,2,3) - ^fixed
8. 00:15:048 (1,2,3) - ^ and all the similar onesfixed
9. 00:16:436 (1) - finish with drum sampleset sound a lot better (head and tail)fixed
10. 00:17:129 (2) - same as abovefixed
11. 00:18:517 (3,4) - this tiny jump doesn't place nice, make more sense to me to have the tiny jump in 00:19:037 (5,1) - fixed
12. 00:21:985 (5) - missing NCfixed
13. 00:28:921 (1) - finish + whistle sound better than the clapfixed
14. 00:32:389 (2,3) - use more spacing here to avoid the overlapfixed
15. 00:33:083 (4,5,1) - the spacing look the same, but the gaps are differents, add more spacing between 4 and 5fixed
16. 00:33:777 (1,2,1) -use more spacing between them to avoid the overlapsfixed
17. 01:09:152 (1) - add finish as well?fixed
18. 01:24:412 (5) - missing NC, also use more spacing between 01:24:412 (5,6,7) - to avoid overlapsfixed
19. 02:16:436 (3,4) - instead of this, will be more interesting to change the rhythm to thisfixed

Normal:

1. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them plsfixed
2. 00:16:436 (1) - finish with drum samplesetwrok better here (head and tail)fixed
3. 00:17:129 (2) - same as abovefixed
4. 00:30:308 (2) - this is touching the hp barfixed a little
5. 00:41:060 (3,4) - spacing? spacing is all right
6. 02:37:592 (4) - move this a bit up, is almost offscreen xDfixed
7. 02:57:014 (6) - last slider should end in 02:57:274fixed
8. Use your custom hitsounds instead of the defaults >: like you did in extrafixed
   

Easy:

1. Hitsound suggestions in Extra may apply here as well, so check them plsfixed
2. 01:34:817 (4,5) - this blanket can be betterfixed
3. 01:54:239 (2,3) - will be a nice idea to use a repeat slider insteadfixed
4. 02:26:840 (1) - too soon after a spinner, just remove this sliderfixed
5. 02:55:973 (4) - same as normal diff (about the last slider)fixed
6. Use your custom hitsounds instead of the defaults >: like you did in extra

Let me know when you reply to this, since are mainly hitsounds and NCs

1. 00:31:695 (1) - unsnapped slider tail >:

1. 00:01:176 (1) - this slider is wrongly snapped it should end in 00:01:869
2. 00:03:950 (3) - ^
3. 00:05:337 (4) - ^
4. 00:06:725 (1) - ^
5. 00:17:823 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:19:210 (2) - ^
7. 00:21:985 (5) - ^
8. 00:23:372 (1) - ^
9. 00:28:921 (1) - ^
10. 00:31:696 (2) - ^
    dunno how that happen, anyways be careful with the spacing there as well

Natsu wrote:

Extra:

1. 00:31:695 (1) - unsnapped slider tail >:

Easy:

1. 00:01:176 (1) - this slider is wrongly snapped it should end in 00:01:869
2. 00:03:950 (3) - ^
3. 00:05:337 (4) - ^
4. 00:06:725 (1) - ^
5. 00:17:823 (1,2) - ^
6. 00:19:210 (2) - ^
7. 00:21:985 (5) - ^
8. 00:23:372 (1) - ^
9. 00:28:921 (1) - ^
10. 00:31:696 (2) - ^
    dunno how that happen, anyways be careful with the spacing there as well

call me back

1. removed 1 circle in easy (was really stressful to play)
2. moved 1 circle that was touching the HP bar
3. Removed some unnecesary osb file

Natsu wrote:

Hey Jemmmy I'll have to pop this lol, since there are a lot of objects unsnapped by 1 ms....

Extra

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Insane:

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Hyper:

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Hard:

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Normal:

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Easy:

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idk if is a bug or something... but they are really unsnapped by 1 ms, just resnap them and call me back, sorry for the inconvenience

3snake9 wrote:

Awesome Map!!!! /)°^°)/!!!!!

Any Idea why Global Ranking won't show up for this beatmap? :3

Here you have a kawaii potato Gives Potato

Oracle wrote:

DANCE!

Qualified! ♥

Oracle wrote:

DANCE!

Qualified! ♥