1. Easy (1.92 stars, 201 notes)
2. Hard (4.98 stars, 509 notes)
3. HATACHI (5 stars, 688 notes)
4. Normal (3.14 stars, 287 notes)

Bonch0 wrote:

Hi!~ From my Queue

Not bad (especially HATACHI , i like the rythm on this diff) map but I have some things I would recommend you

1. Use beat snap divisor of 1/4 (on every diff!)
2. much more curvy sliders ( this makes your map more beautiful) will do
3. no overlapping on easy and normal diff ( this makes your map unrankable!) fixed
4. try to add more Hitsounds] will do

[Easy]

00:03:134 (2) - place it on x144 y176 fixed
00:05:534 (4,1) - they are overlapping fixed
02:32:534 (2,3,1,2,3) - they are all overlapping, fix this fixed
00:52:934 (1) - place it on x160 y80 fixed
00:56:534 (4,5) - they are overlapping fixed
01:08:534 (5,1) - ^same fixed
01:27:134 (3,1) - ^ fixed
01:35:534 (3,1) - ^ fixed
01:57:734 (1,2) - ^ fixed
02:10:934 (5,1) - ^ fixed
02:32:534 (2,3,1,2,3) - ^ fixed
02:54:134 (5,1) - ^ fixed
03:10:934 (4) - place it on x192 y336 fixed
03:18:134 (1,2) - overlapping fixed

[Normal]

00:03:134 (2) - place it on x96 y144 fixed
00:03:734 (3) - place it on x256 y96 fixed
01:12:134 (3,1) - overlap fixed
01:14:534 (3) - try to make this slider like this:
tried
01:20:534 (1,2) - overlap fixed
01:38:534 (1,2) - ^ fixed
01:46:934 (5) - try to make this slider like this:
tried

01:50:534 (3,4) - overlapping fixed
02:07:334 (3) - New Combo fixed
02:08:534 (1) - remove New Combo fixed
02:17:534 (2) - New Combo fixed
02:18:134 (1) - remove New Combo fixed
02:18:134 (1,2) - overlapping fixed
02:20:534 (4,2,3) - ^ fixed
02:45:734 (1,2,1) - ^ fixed
02:50:534 (1,2) - ^ fixed
03:00:134 (1,2) - ^ fixed
03:12:134 (1) - I am not sure but I think NC here is not necessary changed
03:19:334 (3) - NC fixed
03:24:134 (3) - NC fixed
03:28:934 (1,2) - overlapping fixed
03:45:734 (1) - remove NC fixed
03:46:934 (2) - NC fixed

[Hard]
00:09:884 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:16:934 (1) - remove NC fixed
00:17:684 (2) - NC fixed
00:46:484 (1) - remoce NC fixed
00:53:384 (1) - remove NC fixed
01:11:984 (1) - remove NC fixed
01:16:034 (1,1) - remove NC fixed
01:23:384 (3,1) - why is the distance suddenly getting bigger? changed
01:27:884 (3,1) - overlapping fixed
02:18:134 (4,2) - ^ fixed
02:40:334 (3,4,5,1) - ^ fixed
03:21:884 (1) - remove NC fixed
03:49:484 (1,3) - overlapping fixed

GOOD LUCK!

jaob99 wrote:

if normal is still open:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/147653
please skip easy and normal difficulties

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No Dap wrote:

From my modding Q..

jaob99 wrote:

if normal is still open:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/147653
please skip easy and normal difficulties

huh?

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eeezzzeee wrote:

Hi, from modding queue.

[General]
Not related to mapping but the "no-video" link in this thread is broken, leading to the "This beatmap has not been uploaded correctly"
Try 01:18:734 - 01:37:334 and 02:35:534 - 02:54:134 and 03:13:934 - 03:36:134 as Kiai Time done
You should try leave less empty spaces with no notes on Hard and Insane difficulties
Try to make different shapes (especially curve shapes) for your sliders to make it look nice

[Easy]
01:31:934 (1) - make this part of the last combo fixed
01:36:734 (1) - ^ fixed
03:32:534 (1) - how about just make this a spinner, this is not typical on easy done
03:46:934 (1) - make this part of the next combo fixed

[Normal]
I think you should make a break somewhere in this
00:24:134 (4) - new combo fixed
00:33:734 (4) - ^ fixed
00:43:334 (3) - ^ fixed
00:57:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - i think a pattern would be nice rather than just stack done
02:28:934 (1,2,1,2,3) - make this one combo fixed

[Hard]
00:09:134 (5,6) - maybe try removing one reverse from (5) and make a new 1/1 slider at 00:09:584 - 00:09:884 fixed
00:51:284 (1,1) - make this one combo fixed
01:04:334 (3) - make this repeat 3 times fixed
01:07:784 (1) - make this part of the last combo fixed
01:22:784 (1) - ^ fixed
01:23:534 (1) - ^ fixed
01:37:484 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think a pattern would be nice rather than just stack I quite like this stack
02:51:884 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - i think you can fix these triangles using distance snap not really sure what you mean by that, I have used distance snap here
03:50:684 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - make this one combo fixed
Theres a lot of empty space on this difficulty, see if you can fill some in.. you can try to map like drums in parts with no singing like how you did in HATACHI difficulty done

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00:10:034 - 00:11:384 -
00:14:834 - 00:16:184 -
00:42:134 - 00:42:884 -
00:44:534 - 00:45:584 -
etc..

[HATACHI]
The difference in difficulty is a lot from hard to this map. I might make an easier Insane and have this as an extra
HP = 7, OD = 7
also consider making the CS = 4
00:35:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - i think a pattern here would be nice instead of just a stack i quite like this stack
00:38:384 (1) - unnecessary new combo here fixed
00:45:434 - try adding a note here fixed
00:57:284 (4,1,2) - how about starting the new combo on (2) instead of (1) I'd rather keep the combo with the vocals here
01:03:434 (1,1) - make this one combo fixed
01:11:534 (1,1) - ^ fixed
01:58:634 (1,1) - i think this can be part of the previous combo fixed
02:04:334 (1,1) - ^ fixed
02:17:234 (1) - make this part of the next combo fixed
03:31:184 (3) - please change this shape its impossible to follow because the sides are overlapping changed

That's all. Best of luck