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Nice song!

[Easy]

  • Looks to be well-mapped overall

  1. 02:47:515 - , 02:50:015 - maybe have some timing points with increasing volume to match the increasing volume of the music/vocal

    [Hard]
    I have a couple of suggestions for flow below. Note that the suggestions also apply to other parts of the map that are mapped similarly to the parts I mentioned.
  2. 00:04:077 (2) - try ctrl+g for better flow
  3. 00:44:077 (4) - same here, see if ctrl+g makes it flow better. I personally think it's more fun to play that way
  4. 00:45:015 (1) - , 00:45:483 (2) - , 00:45:796 (3) - try ctrl+g (each of them individually), the only reason I suggest this is because the transition from (3) into 00:46:108 (4) - feels a bit weird.
  5. 00:55:952 (2) - see if ctrl+g makes the flow better
  6. 01:11:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you can add a timing point at 01:11:890 (1) - with a low volume (maybe around 10-20%), then increase it on every slider head for a cool effect
  7. 01:56:421 (2) - for effect (to sort of match the vocal) you can move this to around x 248 y 92 (almost stacked with (1) ) and move 01:56:733 (3) - somewhere far away, maybe stacking it with the head of 01:55:640 (4) -
  8. 03:30:952 (6) - maybe ctrl+g

    [Insane]
  9. 00:08:608 (1) - instead of just a hitcircle followed by mini break, you can have a spinner here that ends on 00:08:608 (1) -
  10. 01:29:390 - maybe you could have a timing point with slower slider velocity here since this part feels a bit slower than the rest of the song
  11. 03:30:952 (5) - try ctrl+g and see if it makes the flow better
  12. 03:53:452 (12) - maybe place this somewhere around x 416 y 48 for better flow

Not much to say, song appears to be very well-mapped. I hope this gets ranked! (I think all of the ranked ones are only the TV size versions)
Topic Starter
Frostings

pkmnyab wrote:

[Easy]

  • Looks to be well-mapped overall

  1. 02:47:515 - , 02:50:015 - maybe have some timing points with increasing volume to match the increasing volume of the music/vocal added

    [Hard]
    I have a couple of suggestions for flow below. Note that the suggestions also apply to other parts of the map that are mapped similarly to the parts I mentioned. some parts were fixed throughout the map. not all because of intended effect
  2. 00:04:077 (2) - try ctrl+g for better flow
  3. 00:44:077 (4) - same here, see if ctrl+g makes it flow better. I personally think it's more fun to play that way
  4. 00:45:015 (1) - , 00:45:483 (2) - , 00:45:796 (3) - try ctrl+g (each of them individually), the only reason I suggest this is because the transition from (3) into 00:46:108 (4) - feels a bit weird.
  5. 00:55:952 (2) - see if ctrl+g makes the flow better
  6. 01:11:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - you can add a timing point at 01:11:890 (1) - with a low volume (maybe around 10-20%), then increase it on every slider head for a cool effect made a little bit different.. i don't really like 10~20% hitsounds at loud parts
  7. 01:56:421 (2) - for effect (to sort of match the vocal) you can move this to around x 248 y 92 (almost stacked with (1) ) and move 01:56:733 (3) - somewhere far away, maybe stacking it with the head of 01:55:640 (4) -
    ok. applied on some instances
  8. 03:30:952 (6) - maybe ctrl+g not fixed

    [Insane]
  9. 00:08:608 (1) - instead of just a hitcircle followed by mini break, you can have a spinner here that ends on 00:08:608 (1) - not applied.. specifically mapped for a little pause
  10. 01:29:390 - maybe you could have a timing point with slower slider velocity here since this part feels a bit slower than the rest of the song i kept SV fast, so that the speed contrasts the part at 01:39:390 where it actually is slow. I feel like if i make this part slow, then the next part won't feel as slow (unless I make that part even slower). I changed the mapping style at this part instead of slowing it down to provide contrast with the previous mapped section
  11. 03:30:952 (5) - try ctrl+g and see if it makes the flow better oo kinda nice
  12. 03:53:452 (12) - maybe place this somewhere around x 416 y 48 for better flow
    yep fixed
Thanks for the mod and star :)
Tari
I have not forgotten about this map (super long yes)

mod will be here nvm soon.
Kibbleru
17:51 Kibbleru: fark i closed tab by accident say that again pls
17:51 FlawlessTea: am i looking at insane?
17:51 Kibbleru: yes
17:52 FlawlessTea: i don't get how the rhythm is off :C
17:52 FlawlessTea: maybe i'm just bad
17:52 Kibbleru: ok
17:52 Kibbleru: time for explination
17:52 Kibbleru: well its really just for this part 00:47:671 -
17:52 Kibbleru: i can barely hear what you're trying to map
17:52 Kibbleru: with the slider HEAD
17:52 Kibbleru: and usualy slider heads are used for mapping really strong sounds
17:52 Kibbleru: and yet you have this trong sound at a slider end 00:47:827 -
17:53 FlawlessTea: oh should 2 slider end on the red
17:53 Kibbleru: strong sounds should be placed on slider head or circles
17:53 Kibbleru: actualy
17:53 Kibbleru: a suggestion for rhythm
17:53 Kibbleru: 00:47:202 (2,3) - just ctrl g these and thats a pretty fitting rhythm actualy
17:53 Kibbleru: but rearrange obviously
17:54 Kibbleru: 00:49:233 (1,2,3) - just make it like this rhythm here
17:54 FlawlessTea: ok
17:54 Kibbleru: you should never express a strong sound with a slider end
17:54 Kibbleru: it just feels weak
17:55 Kibbleru: i'd also use the rhythm of these 00:58:452 (6,7) - ctrl g'd as well
17:56 Kibbleru: oh right
17:56 Kibbleru: this overlap here 00:57:515 (4,5) -
17:56 Kibbleru: would be better if you used (4) to blanket the head of (5)
17:56 Kibbleru: so like this kinda http://puu.sh/7W7pY.jpg
17:56 FlawlessTea: uuuuuu too fast
17:58 Kibbleru: 01:00:483 (5,6) - for here try something like this instead http://puu.sh/7W7w9.jpg
17:58 FlawlessTea: ok i'll just
17:58 FlawlessTea: save this chat
17:58 Kibbleru: lel k
17:58 FlawlessTea: and then edit all of it later
17:58 FlawlessTea: can't keep up ><
17:59 Kibbleru: xD
17:59 Kibbleru: im not exactly sure why you have this slider going that extra 1/4 though 01:04:546 (3) -
18:00 Kibbleru: 01:05:640 (3) - same with this one
18:00 Kibbleru: if you have a good reason you can keep
18:00 Kibbleru: but it would map out these sounds 01:04:702 - 01:05:796 -
18:00 Kibbleru: ill post this log on the forum actualy
18:00 Kibbleru: after im done
18:00 FlawlessTea: ok ^^
18:01 Kibbleru: so 01:08:140 (1) - ASSUMING that you're mapping the vocals then you should not map 01:08:296 - with a slider end
18:01 Kibbleru: ASSUMING ur mapping vocals though
18:02 Kibbleru: i hear like a guitar thing or osmething
18:02 Kibbleru: or something
18:02 Kibbleru: in the back too
18:02 Kibbleru: so if you're mapping that then this is fine
18:02 FlawlessTea: uhhhhhh
18:02 FlawlessTea: i think i mapped the vocals for 1 and 2 of the beat
18:02 FlawlessTea: and then 3 + 4 i mapped the beat
18:03 FlawlessTea: = v=
18:03 Kibbleru: i think it would be interesting to map the guitar part though
18:03 Kibbleru: its good to have interesting rhythms
18:03 Kibbleru: however, if so, i suggest nc here 01:10:640 (6) - for consistency
18:05 Kibbleru: wait do u have claps?
18:05 Kibbleru: i havent heard any claps so far
18:05 Kibbleru: as in the hitsound
18:05 FlawlessTea: i have a few claps
18:05 FlawlessTea: like here 01:08:140
18:05 FlawlessTea: o_o;;;;
18:05 Kibbleru: wtf i dont see it lol
18:06 Kibbleru: o here 01:10:640 (6) -
18:06 FlawlessTea: yeah like that entire part
18:06 Kibbleru: ok do u know how to hitsound?
18:06 FlawlessTea: uhhhhhhh apparently not
18:06 Kibbleru: ok dw
18:06 Kibbleru: its easy
18:06 Kibbleru: ok
18:06 Kibbleru: first of all,
18:06 Kibbleru: the basic clap pattern
18:07 Kibbleru: well people usually find a custom clap
18:07 Kibbleru: that sounds like their drum
18:07 Kibbleru: i think u did that
18:07 Kibbleru: um
18:07 FlawlessTea: i think i'm using the default clap
18:07 Kibbleru: so u can A: put a clap ever 4 white ticks
18:07 Kibbleru: B: put one every 2
18:07 Kibbleru: C: put one every white ticks
18:07 Kibbleru: personally i'd put on every 2 white ticks
18:08 Kibbleru: on the 2nd and 4th white tick of the stanza
18:08 FlawlessTea: of every loud part of the map?
18:08 Kibbleru: every part of the map where u can hear drums
18:08 Kibbleru: ofc if you don't hear drums don't put clap
18:08 Kibbleru: but uh
18:08 Kibbleru: just for an example
18:09 Kibbleru: so starting from where the drums start
18:09 Kibbleru: 00:10:952 - 00:11:577 - 00:12:202 -
18:09 Kibbleru: so and so every 2
18:09 Kibbleru: white ticks
18:10 Kibbleru: and for streams or 1/4 patterns like this i would put a clap on every one of them 00:10:640 (2,3,4) -
18:11 FlawlessTea: seems kinda loud
18:11 Kibbleru: turn the volume down then lol
18:11 Kibbleru: also i wouldnt suggest using the default clap
18:11 Kibbleru: look for custom ones
18:11 Kibbleru: they sound 100x better
18:12 FlawlessTea: phew ok
18:12 Kibbleru: when i say turn the volume down i mean like
18:12 Kibbleru: press f6 and go to the volume tab
18:12 FlawlessTea: but like here 00:11:108
18:12 Kibbleru: i mean audio
18:12 FlawlessTea: wouldn't i put claps on the red
18:12 Kibbleru: u dont o-o
18:12 Kibbleru: u put claps every 2 WHITE ticks
18:13 Kibbleru: oh
18:13 Kibbleru: here
18:13 Kibbleru: um
18:13 Kibbleru: i think you should because there is like a stream thing ish
18:13 Kibbleru: a drumroll
18:13 FlawlessTea: no like
18:13 Kibbleru: and you definitely SHOULD put claps
18:13 FlawlessTea: maybe i'm musically illiterate o3o
18:14 Kibbleru: 00:11:108 - actualy don't put clap here cant hear drums so no clap
18:14 FlawlessTea: ok white ticks
18:14 Kibbleru: wait let me explain about stanzas and stuff
18:14 FlawlessTea: claps everywhere
18:14 Kibbleru: 00:08:765 -
18:14 FlawlessTea: got it
18:14 Kibbleru: this large white tick
18:14 Kibbleru: is called a stanza
18:14 FlawlessTea: mhm
18:15 Kibbleru: 1 large white tick is followed by 3 smaller ticks
18:15 Kibbleru: so lets say the large one is tick 1, then followed by 2,3,4
18:15 Kibbleru: that basically makes up a bar
18:15 Kibbleru: claps
18:15 FlawlessTea: on 2 and 4
18:15 Kibbleru: you can either put them on 2,4 or 1,3
18:15 Kibbleru: i think 2,4 works better for this song though
18:15 Kibbleru: cuz the loud drums come on 2,4
18:16 Kibbleru: like u can hear it right?
18:16 Kibbleru: 00:12:827 - here,
18:16 Kibbleru: 00:13:452 - here
18:16 FlawlessTea: possibly = v =
18:16 FlawlessTea: i might also be deaf
18:16 Kibbleru: lel
18:16 Kibbleru: so just put claps on 2/4, thats the basis of hitsounding
18:16 Kibbleru: after that
18:17 Kibbleru: use whistles to emphasize certain sounds
18:17 FlawlessTea: i have some whistles o3o
18:17 Kibbleru: 00:41:265 (1,2,3,4) - for places where they clearly emphasize drums, i'd break the 2,4 and put a clap on every one
18:18 Kibbleru: the 2,4 is juts a base
18:18 Kibbleru: put claps on anywhere else where you feel like they're emphasized
18:18 Kibbleru: and finishes i think you know how to use them :P
18:19 Kibbleru: u getting this so far xD?
18:19 FlawlessTea: hopefully
18:19 Kibbleru: mk
18:19 Kibbleru: and the last thing
18:19 Kibbleru: is
18:19 Kibbleru: for some sections of the music
18:19 Kibbleru: you can't hear any drums right?
18:20 FlawlessTea: i...guess?
18:20 FlawlessTea: maybe i should turn off hitsounds so i can actually hear
18:20 Kibbleru: for these parts what you can do is (well i think im the only one who does this) you can subsitute the claps with whistles
18:20 Kibbleru: actualy you can go to view>volume
18:21 Kibbleru: and you can basically adjust the hitsound volumes and stuff
18:21 FlawlessTea: whaaaaaa
18:21 FlawlessTea: sorcery
18:21 Kibbleru: lel
18:21 Kibbleru: 01:49:390 (1,2) - btw going back to rhythm here, ctrl g this and use that rhythm
18:21 Kibbleru: no the placement
18:21 Kibbleru: not*
18:22 Kibbleru: actualy the placement isnt bad lel
18:22 FlawlessTea: what is lel
18:23 Kibbleru: oh lel -> lol
18:23 FlawlessTea: oh
18:23 FlawlessTea: haha xD
18:23 Kibbleru: i started using lel cuz of fking no dap
18:23 Kibbleru: t-t
18:23 Kibbleru: he sais lel and it caught on to me
18:24 FlawlessTea: can i ask one question o:
18:24 Kibbleru: 02:21:890 (7) - stream recommended- go ahead
18:24 FlawlessTea: should i have a beat here 01:37:515
18:24 Kibbleru: ok first of all can u just copy and paste the timestamp pls
18:24 Kibbleru: lol
18:24 Kibbleru: so i can click on it
18:24 Kibbleru: litteraly just press ctrl c when ur at that place
18:24 FlawlessTea: 01:37:515 -
18:24 Kibbleru: and paste it into chat
18:24 FlawlessTea: sorry i backspaced the dash
18:24 Kibbleru: ah
18:25 Kibbleru: and yes i would put one there
18:25 FlawlessTea: hm
18:25 FlawlessTea: this messes up everything D:<
18:26 FlawlessTea: unless i stack the note with the 6
18:26 Kibbleru: well
18:26 FlawlessTea: or make the whole thing a square i suppose
18:26 Kibbleru: u can put the new note on top of 01:37:046 (4) -
18:26 Kibbleru: and stack 01:37:827 (1) - with it
18:26 Kibbleru: works too i think
18:27 FlawlessTea: oh
18:27 FlawlessTea: oooooh it's pretty
18:27 Kibbleru: also i didn't really want to comment on this but like
18:27 Kibbleru: 01:38:765 (5,6) - stuff like this
18:27 Kibbleru: flow is just meh
18:27 Kibbleru: like it'd be much better if you have it curving the other way
18:28 FlawlessTea: D:
18:28 FlawlessTea: does that apply for EVERYTHING
18:28 FlawlessTea: 01:43:140 (4,5) -
18:28 Kibbleru: yes (satan face)
18:28 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/7W9xz.jpg
18:28 Kibbleru: suggestion for this
18:28 FlawlessTea: and my entire kiai
18:28 Kibbleru: yes (satan face)
18:28 FlawlessTea: 01:52:046 (2,1,2) -
18:28 FlawlessTea: noooooo
18:28 Kibbleru: but some u can fix really easily
18:29 Kibbleru: like for this 01:43:765 (5) - just ctrl j
18:29 Kibbleru: and move it around abit ofc
18:29 FlawlessTea: i think i saw that in someone's map
18:29 FlawlessTea: and though ooh this is cool
18:29 FlawlessTea: and then put it everywhere
18:29 Kibbleru: 01:52:046 (2,1) - this part seems okay
18:29 Kibbleru: well
18:29 Kibbleru: i mean
18:29 Kibbleru: just curve some of the sliders the other way xD
18:30 Kibbleru: i suppose you can have some
18:30 FlawlessTea: can i map just be
18:30 Kibbleru: but like
18:30 FlawlessTea: different from every other map
18:30 Kibbleru: its just a little too frequent
18:30 Kibbleru: well if u want it to be original
18:30 Kibbleru: you can have patterns but at least try to keep flow o3o
18:31 FlawlessTea: you probably shouldn't look at my Hard then
18:31 Kibbleru: lmao
18:31 Kibbleru: im not telling you to fix ALL of it
18:31 Kibbleru: keep some
18:31 Kibbleru: just i think its a bit too overused lmao
18:31 Kibbleru: so just fix the ones that seem easy to fix
18:31 FlawlessTea: i think it's cool T_____T
18:32 FlawlessTea: oh nooo my combo colors
18:32 Kibbleru: this one is fine tho 02:08:140 (1,2) -
18:32 FlawlessTea: they don't end nicely
18:32 Kibbleru: k
18:33 FlawlessTea: i tried to map so that all the major parts end with the 3rd combo color
18:33 Kibbleru: o-o
18:33 Kibbleru: why lmao xD
18:33 FlawlessTea: is that wrong
18:33 FlawlessTea: and now it's ruinnnned
18:33 Kibbleru: not really it just seems a bit pointless since ppl will hardly notice
18:34 Kibbleru: but if you REALLY want to do so
18:34 Kibbleru: click the little arrow beside the new combo button
18:34 Kibbleru: and u can select ur combo color
18:35 FlawlessTea: yeahhhh but
18:35 FlawlessTea: it all has to be dark blue, medium blue, light blue
18:35 FlawlessTea: i can't change that order
18:35 Kibbleru: still seems pointless to me lmao
18:35 FlawlessTea: Q_Q
18:35 FlawlessTea: i'm probably too OCD
18:35 Kibbleru: lol
18:36 Kibbleru: if u want some ocd 01:02:983 (4) - this blanket isnt that even
18:36 Kibbleru: move the middle point up a bit
18:36 FlawlessTea: but then
18:37 FlawlessTea: they won't all be the same slider D:
18:37 Kibbleru: oh
18:37 Kibbleru: nvm then
18:37 Kibbleru: its fine then
18:37 FlawlessTea: oh noeesss
18:38 Kibbleru: 00:11:890 (3) - i suggest a slight curve :ohttp://puu.sh/7Wafn.jpg
18:38 *Kibbleru is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/364936 nano feat. MY FIRST STORY - SAVIOR OF SONG [Hard]]
18:38 Kibbleru: btw
18:38 Kibbleru: this is hard
18:38 FlawlessTea: 02:21:890 (7) - do i make this entire slider into a stream o:
18:38 FlawlessTea: oh
18:39 FlawlessTea: i don't even know why i have 0.75 sv
18:39 Kibbleru: and ur choice actualy i recommend
18:40 Kibbleru: 00:26:265 (1) - i'd rearrange some stuff so u can get this slider at 268|212
18:40 Kibbleru: just so u can continue
18:40 Kibbleru: that little triangle pattern thingy
18:41 FlawlessTea: what triangle pattern
18:41 Kibbleru: 00:23:765 (1,2,1) - the shuriken thing idk
18:41 Kibbleru: to make it look like a 3 sided shuriken thing
18:42 FlawlessTea: uh
18:42 Kibbleru: 00:32:202 (2) - this maybe? look at how nice it looks :U http://puu.sh/7WavX.jpg
18:42 FlawlessTea: uuuuuuuuuuuu
18:42 FlawlessTea: so pretty
18:43 FlawlessTea: i don't know how i feel about this slider 00:44:077 (4) -
18:43 Kibbleru: 01:02:515 (3,4,5) - maybe u can curve these a bit more
18:44 Kibbleru: 00:43:765 (3,4,5) - yah i was gunna say something a bout this
18:44 Kibbleru: i have a suggestion
18:44 FlawlessTea: i originally had 4 going the other way
18:44 FlawlessTea: but someone said the flow was bad
18:44 FlawlessTea: :C
18:45 Kibbleru: this maybe http://puu.sh/7WaHK.jpg
18:45 FlawlessTea: but the 4 was facing down obviously
18:45 FlawlessTea: yeah that's what i had before
18:45 Kibbleru: oh
18:45 Kibbleru: well i don't see whats the problem with that
18:45 FlawlessTea: except 3 was straight i think
18:45 Kibbleru: if you have good patterns you can ignore flow slightly
18:45 Kibbleru: yah ic
18:46 Kibbleru: that seems fine imo Oo
18:46 Kibbleru: what youve had b4 i mean
18:46 FlawlessTea: o3o ok
18:47 FlawlessTea: also 01:02:515 (3,4,5) -
18:47 FlawlessTea: i was using the 01:01:108 (3) - slider i think
18:47 Kibbleru: oh a thing about stacks, im not saying it applies to any of ur things but only stack things when you hear a slight pause or moment of quietness in music
18:47 Kibbleru: i think u can use this slider instead 01:04:390 (1) - :O
18:48 FlawlessTea: are they... the same
18:48 Kibbleru: they arent o3o
18:48 Kibbleru: bleh don't worry about it too much
18:48 Kibbleru: that just me being nazi
18:49 Kibbleru: 01:16:265 (3) - but for this slider
18:49 Kibbleru: well idunno this looks better i think? http://puu.sh/7WaYm.jpg
18:50 FlawlessTea: why are your patterns soooo pretty
18:50 Kibbleru: they're not lmao i think ur patterns look better
18:50 FlawlessTea: teach me senpai pls
18:50 Kibbleru: i think its just the thing that everybody else's thing slook better lol
18:51 Kibbleru: bleh gunna be bold here and just gunna say this map would probably be ranked if the rhythm was better lel
18:52 FlawlessTea: yeahh... it was even worse before though
18:52 FlawlessTea: tells me how good of a rhythm person i am :D
18:52 Kibbleru: do u want an honest answer owo?
18:52 FlawlessTea: yesyes
18:52 FlawlessTea: should i remap everythinggggggg
18:53 Kibbleru: uh no
18:53 Kibbleru: but
18:53 Kibbleru: rhythm is
18:53 Kibbleru: probably
18:53 Kibbleru: 5/10 lel
18:53 Kibbleru: 10 being like rankable
18:53 Kibbleru: 0/10 being like wtf r u doing
18:53 FlawlessTea: well at least it's not less than 5
18:53 FlawlessTea: :D
18:53 Kibbleru: lol 50 and go
18:54 Kibbleru: 01:15:327 (5,1) - spacing here is inconsistent
18:54 FlawlessTea: how do you see that
18:54 Kibbleru: its ok the only reason i have any idea with rhythm is cuz zero taught me alot
18:54 Kibbleru: how do i see that... with eyes lol?
18:54 Kibbleru: it just looks closer than the rest/
18:54 Kibbleru: ?
18:55 FlawlessTea: too much sorcery
18:55 FlawlessTea: oh i just realized this part
18:55 FlawlessTea: 01:29:077 -
18:56 FlawlessTea: should i ... remap
18:56 FlawlessTea: this section
18:56 Kibbleru: 01:29:077 (1,2) - u can actualy stack these
18:56 Kibbleru: um
18:56 Kibbleru: no what i want u to do
18:56 Kibbleru: is go through your ENTIRE
18:56 Kibbleru: mapset
18:56 Kibbleru: look for places with bad rhythm
18:56 Kibbleru: and meanwhile hitsounding them
18:56 Kibbleru: if ur not sure about the rhythm juts ask me
18:57 FlawlessTea: should i do that...right now? o3o
18:57 Kibbleru: if u want
18:57 Kibbleru: let me give another example
18:57 Kibbleru: 01:46:108 - so at this section
18:57 Kibbleru: there's an interesting little
18:57 Kibbleru: idk wha the insturment is
18:57 Kibbleru: 01:46:108 - but like you should probably map this with a slider head
18:58 Kibbleru: rhythm > patterns
18:58 Kibbleru: 01:49:858 - and yah stuff like this should be mapped with slider head
18:58 Kibbleru: ::warning:: this is gunna be lots of work lol
18:59 Kibbleru: imma post this log on website now btw
21:17 Kibbleru: how long has this mod been going for o_O
21:18 FlawlessTea: i have no idea
21:23 Kibbleru: r u guys on hard right now?
21:23 FlawlessTea: i think so
21:23 FlawlessTea: i don't even know anymore
21:24 Kibbleru: 00:12:827 - why these empty ._. 00:13:452 -
21:24 Kibbleru: 00:26:265 (1,2) - and dammit fix this overlap plis
21:25 FlawlessTea: wat
21:25 Kibbleru: doesn't looks gud imo :<
21:27 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/82Lvz.jpg ew ugly suggestion
21:28 FlawlessTea: am i receiving
21:28 FlawlessTea: two mods at the same time right now
21:29 Kibbleru: 01:51:890 (1) - just something that may be interesting http://puu.sh/82LBG.jpg make any kind of jump http://puu.sh/82LCd.jpg
21:29 Kibbleru: a jump and the antijump emphasizes the w/e vocal part
21:30 Kibbleru: 02:20:640 (4) - i think flow better if curved other way instead?
21:31 Kibbleru: 03:13:140 (1) - same as previous one
21:32 Kibbleru: 03:17:671 (6,2) - u can try stacking? not very relevant tho
21:32 FlawlessTea: i can't even
21:33 Kibbleru: 03:34:702 (4,5) - i cant agree to this stack here, stops flow and i hear no pause in music
21:33 Kibbleru: 03:37:202 (3,4) - ^
21:33 Kibbleru: 03:47:827 (1,2) - why not make symmetrical?
21:34 Kibbleru: 03:53:140 (7) - overlap not too good
21:36 FlawlessTea: can you uh post this later
21:36 Kibbleru: sure no kd tho
21:37 Kibbleru: actualy im just gunna post it on an edit from my previous post
21:38 Kibbleru: 01:07:827 (4,5) - yo whats with these stacks man
21:52 FlawlessTea: did this save o3o
21:52 FlawlessTea: i gotta go
21:54 Kibbleru: oh
21:54 Kibbleru: leme upload then
Topic Starter
Frostings

Kibbleru wrote:

17:58 Kibbleru: 01:00:483 (5,6) - for here try something like this instead http://puu.sh/7W7w9.jpg i think i'm mapping vocals? not sure ><
everything else fixed! (hopefully) ;w;

thanks for the mod ! :oops:
Momoka
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Topic Starter
Frostings

No Dap wrote:

adfdsfasdfasdfadfadfadfadfadfadfadgdfagfbvcnbcvngdhhwetywerter
/me runs and hides

you can cancel the mod if you want ^^

just please don't hurt me ;w;
Yumeno Himiko
Hihi~ From my NM Queue~~

[General]
00:11:108 Add a red timing point here.Reset the metronome. And remove other red timing points after it.

[Easy]
AIMOD problems
00:03:608 (3,4) - DS
00:20:015 (2,3) - DS

01:52:358 (2,3) - You'd better move the slider 2 since it hides part of 3.
03:13:608 (2,3) - ^
03:24:077 (1) - move the tail to 88,148

[Normal]
Many DS problems and I won't pick them out here,move those stuffs by yourself.

00:21:186 (1) - move to 00:21:108
00:28:140 (3,1,2) - A regular triangle is needed here.
00:50:015 (2,3,4) - ^
00:53:140 (3,4,1) - make them on a line seems better.
00:57:202 (1,2,3) - A symmetrical pattern seems better.
03:50:796 (5) - should be moved to 248,156

[Hard]
I believe that this Hard Diff is too hard!

Since I can't play Hard and Insane by myself, I think I can't give useful suggestions,sorry.
Good luck~ Your mapsets seem very nice~
Topic Starter
Frostings

examination wrote:

Hihi~ From my NM Queue~~

[General]
00:11:108 Add a red timing point here.Reset the metronome. And remove other red timing points after it.
actually if i do that, i'll need another red timing point around here 00:21:264 - because the metronome resets again. if i do this, i still need to keep my other timing points. I didn't add timing point where you suggested because it isn't necessary.

[Easy]
AIMOD problems
00:03:608 (3,4) - DS distance is fine
00:20:015 (2,3) - DS ^

01:52:358 (2,3) - You'd better move the slider 2 since it hides part of 3. this really isn't a big deal ... fixed anyways
03:13:608 (2,3) - ^ also fixed
03:24:077 (1) - move the tail to 88,148 fixed

[Normal]
Many DS problems and I won't pick them out here,move those stuffs by yourself. fixed on some instances. aimod says distance problem from other instances because of SV changes I think. i intentionally changed the distance snap at those parts so that the objects appear to be equal distance throughout

00:21:186 (1) - move to 00:21:108 not sure about this.. what i have is awkward to play but i think it matches the song. no change for now
00:28:140 (3,1,2) - A regular triangle is needed here.
ok fix
00:50:015 (2,3,4) - ^ ^
00:53:140 (3,4,1) - make them on a line seems better. fix
00:57:202 (1,2,3) - A symmetrical pattern seems better. alright
03:50:796 (5) - should be moved to 248,156 alright

[Hard]
I believe that this Hard Diff is too hard! ;w; I get too excited when I map and put objects everywhere...

Since I can't play Hard and Insane by myself, I think I can't give useful suggestions,sorry.
Good luck~ Your mapsets seem very nice~
thanks for the mod :)
Momoka
17:20 FlawlessTea: ok should we get started o3o
17:20 No Dap: ok
17:20 No Dap: i will kill you
17:20 No Dap: start from easy?
17:20 No Dap: or insane
17:20 *FlawlessTea wears metal gear
17:20 No Dap: lol
17:20 FlawlessTea: uh any difficulty i guess
17:21 No Dap: mk
17:21 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/390138 nano feat. MY FIRST STORY - SAVIOR OF SONG [Easy]]
17:21 FlawlessTea: ignore those first four sliders
17:22 No Dap: 00:04:858 (4) - I think whistle would be better on the end
17:22 No Dap: 00:06:108 (1) - no finish, this is supposed to be quiet
17:23 No Dap: let me know what you think
17:23 FlawlessTea: yeah changed both
17:23 No Dap: ok
17:24 No Dap: 00:14:077 (1) - this souds awkward
17:24 No Dap: although its following drum, you should follow the guitar here
17:24 No Dap: or whatever this instrument is
17:24 No Dap: like this one 00:11:108 (1) -
17:24 FlawlessTea: what rhythm then?
17:25 No Dap: mm
17:25 FlawlessTea: circle here? 00:14:858 -
17:25 No Dap: 00:11:108 (1,2) - like this
17:26 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1497676 this seems ok
17:26 No Dap: ignore the shape
17:27 FlawlessTea: ok
17:29 No Dap: 00:18:608 (1,2,3) - how about this http://puu.sh/82x81.jpg
17:29 No Dap: it doesnt sound right
17:30 FlawlessTea: i think 2 slider ending at the red tick sounds weird
17:31 No Dap: its following the music
17:31 FlawlessTea: i'm hearing louder drum here 00:20:327 -
17:32 No Dap: the melodies are dominant imo
17:32 No Dap: I wouldn't follow durms here since you haven't followed them till here
17:34 FlawlessTea: hmm i dunno
17:34 No Dap: if you want to keep thats fine
17:34 No Dap: but changing from vocal to drum when theres not much change at all isnt a good idea
17:35 FlawlessTea: ok i'll check back on it later
17:35 No Dap: ok
17:35 No Dap: 00:23:765 (2) - normal addition on head?
17:35 No Dap: soft finish doesnt fit imo
17:36 FlawlessTea: mhm
17:36 No Dap: normal sounds much better
17:37 FlawlessTea: oh i was agreeing with you
17:37 No Dap: oh
17:37 FlawlessTea: >< please don't hurt me
17:37 No Dap: i will kill you
17:37 FlawlessTea: T_T
17:37 No Dap: 00:28:140 (3) - curve this ?
17:37 No Dap: for consistent shape with 00:26:265 (1,2) -
17:37 No Dap: 00:28:140 (3,1) - blanket would be a good idea
17:37 FlawlessTea: yep
17:38 No Dap: 00:29:077 (2) - I don't think this whistle on reverse fits
17:39 No Dap: its not following your whistle pattern first of all
17:39 FlawlessTea: yep fixed
17:40 No Dap: ur spacing got smaller from this point
17:40 No Dap: 00:31:265 (1) -
17:40 No Dap: why is that
17:40 No Dap: it would make more sense if you increased it
17:40 No Dap: but really on easy diff it's highly suggested that you keep it consistent :3
17:41 FlawlessTea: spacing got smaller?
17:41 No Dap: its 1.4
17:41 No Dap: you've been using 1.5
17:41 No Dap: 00:27:202 (2,3) - inconsistent spacing here too
17:42 FlawlessTea: uh is that even noticeable
17:42 FlawlessTea: i think i used 1.4 spacing in those jumps
17:43 FlawlessTea: and then 1.5 when they were next to each other
17:43 No Dap: it's not noticeable cuz ur using .6 SV
17:43 No Dap: but believe me BAT's are gonna care
17:44 No Dap: it should still be increasing
17:44 No Dap: not decreasing cuz the song mood..
17:44 FlawlessTea: alright i fixed it
17:45 No Dap: 00:46:265 (1) - this circle appears during spinning
17:45 No Dap: and is not good for easy diff
17:45 No Dap: actually unrankable
17:45 FlawlessTea: hmm remove spinner completely?
17:45 No Dap: no id remove the circle
17:46 FlawlessTea: fair enough
17:46 No Dap: 00:58:765 (3) - not a good idea..
17:47 No Dap: 00:57:202 (1,2) - could be blanket
17:47 FlawlessTea: just hitcircle at the red tick then?
17:47 No Dap: on the white tick
17:48 FlawlessTea: ok fixed
17:48 FlawlessTea: i moved everything afterwards too to accomodate for distance space
17:49 No Dap: mk
17:49 No Dap: 01:05:483 (2) - whislte on the tail?
17:49 No Dap: don't think thats the place for finish
17:50 FlawlessTea: whistle here too then? 01:04:390 (1) -
17:50 FlawlessTea: at the tail
17:50 No Dap: yeah
17:51 FlawlessTea: alright
17:51 No Dap: 01:10:640 (3) - finish on head?
17:52 FlawlessTea: i don't reeeeally like two finishes
17:52 No Dap: ok
17:52 No Dap: 01:11:890 (1,2,3,4) - shouldn't this part be clap spam
17:53 FlawlessTea: just at the tails?
17:53 No Dap: on all
17:54 FlawlessTea: ok i'll put claps here then too 01:14:390 (1,2,3,4) -
17:54 No Dap: good idea
17:54 No Dap: whistles sound find so keep them
17:55 FlawlessTea: mhm
17:55 No Dap: 01:16:890 (1) - delete this spinner?
17:55 FlawlessTea: why is that o3o
17:55 No Dap: it isn't doing much here but making an awkward transition to break time
17:56 FlawlessTea: alright
17:56 FlawlessTea: i may or may not have spinners on all my other difficulties at that part
17:57 No Dap: if you do i think you should delete :3
17:57 No Dap: filling intro with a spinner then going into break is such a bad transition imo
17:58 No Dap: 01:51:890 (1) - delete this circle? same reason as previous
17:58 No Dap: 00:46:265 (1) -
17:58 FlawlessTea: no D:<
17:58 No Dap: wot
17:58 FlawlessTea: just kidding please don't kill me
17:59 No Dap: too late im gonna kill you
17:59 FlawlessTea: i'm already dead on the inside from my fear
17:59 No Dap: 01:57:827 (1,2) - try shaping them like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1497740
18:00 No Dap: but yours is fine
18:00 No Dap: except 01:58:765 (2,3) - this looks bad
18:00 FlawlessTea: ehhhh that'll make 01:56:890 (3,1) -
18:00 FlawlessTea: a straight line almost
18:00 No Dap: which is good flow
18:01 No Dap: or you can blanket 01:57:827 (1,2,3) -
18:01 FlawlessTea: ok fixed
18:02 FlawlessTea: nah i'll do first suggestion
18:02 No Dap: 02:17:515 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - clap spam
18:03 No Dap: 02:22:515 (1) - start this on 02:22:202 -
18:03 No Dap: it makes no sense
18:03 FlawlessTea: i thought spinner appeared while the last slider was still going so i moved it back
18:04 No Dap: nope
18:04 FlawlessTea: ok
18:05 No Dap: you have two options 03:13:140 (1) -
18:05 No Dap: you can keep this or delete for consistency
18:06 FlawlessTea: i'll delete
18:06 No Dap: id go with consistency but its your choice
18:06 No Dap: ok
18:06 No Dap: 03:16:108 (1) - finish?
18:06 FlawlessTea: i'll change break too then
18:06 No Dap: according to 00:49:233 (1) -
18:06 FlawlessTea: yep
18:07 No Dap: 03:18:140 (3) - finish on tail
18:07 No Dap: according to 00:51:890 (1) -
18:08 No Dap: 03:24:077 (1,2) - you should blanket this
18:08 No Dap: this shape is funny
18:08 No Dap: 03:23:140 (3,1) - and also this jump 03:23:140 (3,1) -
18:08 FlawlessTea: ;w; alright
18:09 FlawlessTea: jump shape is funny?
18:09 No Dap: `http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1497762 try this?
18:09 No Dap: no the jump is not acceptable
18:09 No Dap: 1.4->2.0 DS
18:10 FlawlessTea: yep ok
18:11 No Dap: 01:04:390 (1,2) -
18:11 No Dap: 03:31:265 (1,2) -
18:12 No Dap: actually delete the whislte on the tail 03:31:265 (1) -
18:12 No Dap: 01:04:390 (1) - here too
18:12 No Dap: and 02:10:015 (1,2,3) -
18:12 No Dap: consistency pls
18:13 FlawlessTea: ok fixed all
18:14 No Dap: 03:33:765 (1) - 02:12:515 (1) - 01:06:890 (1) - finish?
18:14 No Dap: 03:36:265 (1) - finish according to 02:15:015 (1) - 01:09:390 (1) -
18:14 FlawlessTea: ok
18:15 FlawlessTea: mhm
18:15 No Dap: 03:38:765 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - clap party
18:16 No Dap: 03:46:577 (1,2) - would be better if you follow melody here
18:16 No Dap: like 03:43:608 (1) - and keep the beat consistent
18:17 No Dap: 03:56:108 (1,2) - blanket would look better
18:17 No Dap: 03:58:608 (4) - there should be finish here
18:18 No Dap: 04:01:108 (1,2,3,4) - follow melody?
18:21 FlawlessTea: ok done everything
18:21 FlawlessTea: phew
18:21 No Dap: I thought you died
18:21 No Dap: ok
18:22 FlawlessTea: let's just uh
18:22 FlawlessTea: skip normal
18:22 No Dap: ok
18:22 No Dap: also
18:22 No Dap: on easy, +1 on everything
18:22 No Dap: for better balance
18:22 FlawlessTea: even circle size? ;w;
18:22 No Dap: your normal is 454 setting
18:22 No Dap: oh not that
18:23 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/364936 nano feat. MY FIRST STORY - SAVIOR OF SONG [Hard]]
18:23 FlawlessTea: uh oh time for death
18:24 No Dap: 00:04:077 (2) - this one
18:24 No Dap: http://puu.sh/82APn.jpg try this
18:25 No Dap: 00:04:077 (2) - this almost linear slider is ruining the shape
18:26 FlawlessTea: yep
18:27 No Dap: 00:10:640 (2) - this should be NC
18:28 FlawlessTea: oh noesss that'll break
18:28 FlawlessTea: all my combo colors
18:28 No Dap: lol
18:28 FlawlessTea: i think it's ok
18:28 No Dap: yeah
18:28 No Dap: just messing with you
18:29 FlawlessTea: >_>
18:29 No Dap: 00:11:890 (3,4,5) - this flow
18:29 No Dap: i must kill you
18:29 FlawlessTea: tbh i don't know why it's a straight slider
18:29 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1497793 this pls
18:29 FlawlessTea: and why there's a sv change there
18:29 No Dap: lol
18:30 No Dap: 00:12:983 (6,7) - fix this too
18:30 No Dap: if you take my suggestion
18:30 FlawlessTea: yep
18:31 No Dap: 00:18:608 (6,1,2,3) -
18:31 No Dap: 00:18:608 (6) - this should be a slider
18:32 No Dap: your ignoring every thing betwn 00:18:608 (6) - and 00:19:077 (1) -
18:32 No Dap: 00:19:546 (2,3) - and this doesnt follow music
18:33 FlawlessTea: ;w;
18:34 No Dap: http://puu.sh/82Bnh.jpg try this
18:34 No Dap: also 00:20:952 (4) - this starts on the wrong place
18:36 FlawlessTea: 00:19:077 (1) -
18:36 FlawlessTea: http://puu.sh/82Bv2.jpg
18:36 No Dap: no
18:36 No Dap: that 4 slider
18:36 FlawlessTea: wat
18:36 No Dap: isnt following the melody
18:37 No Dap: if you do that you'r ignoring
18:37 No Dap: 00:20:171 - this baby
18:37 FlawlessTea: where it starts or where it endsÉ
18:37 No Dap: and 00:20:483 - this baby
18:37 FlawlessTea: french keyboard orz
18:37 FlawlessTea: how about 4 as kickslider
18:38 No Dap: http://puu.sh/82Bnh.jpg
18:38 No Dap: wot is a kick slder
18:38 FlawlessTea: reverse slider
18:38 No Dap: no
18:38 No Dap: if you do like mine yes
18:38 No Dap: it still would be ignoring the strongest and most hearable melody
18:38 FlawlessTea: yours ignores 00:20:015 - noÉ
18:39 FlawlessTea: omg this keyboard
18:39 No Dap: wot the fark is noe
18:39 No Dap: rofl
18:39 FlawlessTea: no? *
18:39 No Dap: oh
18:39 No Dap: pff
18:39 No Dap: you can ignore drum
18:39 No Dap: infacet
18:39 No Dap: there isnt even any drum
18:40 FlawlessTea: there's an
18:40 No Dap: or you can do thi http://puu.sh/82BLQ.jpg
18:40 FlawlessTea: unidentifiable instrument o3o
18:40 FlawlessTea: http://puu.sh/82BMn.jpg
18:40 No Dap: which is not even noticeable
18:40 No Dap: thats now overmapping
18:40 No Dap: LOL
18:40 No Dap: ok do whatever you want
18:41 No Dap: i cant force you anything
18:41 FlawlessTea: plays pretty nice actually :D
18:41 No Dap: im not BAT or anything :3
18:41 No Dap: 00:23:452 (6) - nc
18:41 No Dap: or i kill you
18:41 FlawlessTea: not sure if being serious or joking
18:41 No Dap: serious
18:42 No Dap: its not even connected to
18:42 No Dap: 00:19:077 (1,2,3,4,5) -
18:42 No Dap: absolutely no reason to keep combo
18:43 FlawlessTea: how about this is NC 00:20:952 -
18:43 FlawlessTea: AND 00:23:452 (1) - this is NC
18:43 No Dap: 00:38:140 (5,1,2) - spacing
18:43 FlawlessTea: i need to keep my colors perfect ;w;
18:43 No Dap: lol
18:44 No Dap: regardless
18:44 No Dap: 00:23:452 (1) - this is completely separate
18:44 No Dap: you can't keep combo
18:44 FlawlessTea: 00:38:140 (5,1,2) - spacing is ok i think?
18:45 FlawlessTea: oh
18:45 No Dap: its too much
18:45 No Dap: and inconsistent
18:45 No Dap: 00:38:765 (1) - check this
18:45 FlawlessTea: don't ask why i have another sv change
18:45 No Dap: lmao
18:51 No Dap: are you dead
18:51 FlawlessTea: nope
18:51 FlawlessTea: oh sorry i fixed everything
18:52 FlawlessTea: i was waiting for my next instructions o3o
18:52 FlawlessTea: and crying over my combo colors
18:52 No Dap: 00:46:265 (1) - it be nice if you lower volume and delete clap
18:52 No Dap: lol
18:52 No Dap: 00:50:483 (1,2,3) -
18:52 *No Dap slaps
18:52 FlawlessTea: silent?
18:53 No Dap: not silent
18:53 No Dap: but really low
18:53 No Dap: it would emphasize the next note
18:54 FlawlessTea: aright
18:54 No Dap: 00:50:483 (1,2,3) -
18:54 No Dap: do you know why i slapped you
18:55 FlawlessTea: ok that was a from a mod
18:55 No Dap: someone told you to do this?
18:55 FlawlessTea: yep haha
18:55 No Dap: well he ruined your map
18:56 FlawlessTea: i think 2 was under the 3 slider before
18:56 No Dap: any way
18:56 No Dap: this anti jump and 2->3 flow is so bad
18:56 No Dap: remap this part
18:57 No Dap: by the way i might have to leave shortly
18:57 No Dap: ill continue when i get back
18:58 FlawlessTea: alright
18:58 No Dap: don't die
18:59 FlawlessTea: so you can kill me afterwards?
18:59 FlawlessTea: ><
18:59 No Dap: lol
18:59 No Dap: ok bye
18:59 FlawlessTea: see ya
19:42 FlawlessTea: still here? o3o
20:31 No Dap: im here
20:32 FlawlessTea: i'm ready for my death sentence
20:32 No Dap: lol
20:32 FlawlessTea: unless you want a break
20:32 *No Dap is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/364936 nano feat. MY FIRST STORY - SAVIOR OF SONG [Hard]]
20:32 No Dap: 00:50:483 (1,2,3) - did you fix this
20:33 FlawlessTea: there's sort of an overlap 00:50:015 (5,3) -
20:33 FlawlessTea: if that's ok
20:34 No Dap: just a sec
20:34 FlawlessTea: looks like this http://puu.sh/82ItZ.jpg
20:34 FlawlessTea: if you can see that 3 slider
20:37 No Dap: yeah
20:37 No Dap: sorry my mom called
20:38 FlawlessTea: np
20:38 No Dap: I think
20:38 No Dap: 00:48:765 (6,1) - this can be a jump
20:38 No Dap: let me think
20:39 No Dap: 00:48:765 (6) - stack this on end of 00:47:983 (4) -
20:39 No Dap: I think its good
20:39 FlawlessTea: and...rotate it?
20:39 No Dap: no dont
20:39 No Dap: wait isnt 00:48:765 (6) - a circle
20:39 FlawlessTea: wat
20:39 No Dap: how do you rotate
20:40 FlawlessTea: orz ... wrong object
20:40 No Dap: i kill you
20:40 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1497957
20:40 No Dap: notice that i moved 00:48:921 (1) - to the right a little bit
20:40 No Dap: so 00:48:452 (5,1,2) - look more neat
20:42 FlawlessTea: please teach me your ways
20:42 FlawlessTea: this sorcery
20:42 No Dap: lol wot
20:42 FlawlessTea: ok done
20:42 No Dap: 00:51:890 (1,2) - I think these 2 should be 1/2 slider
20:42 No Dap: 00:51:890 (1) - because it follows the guitar
20:43 No Dap: 00:52:202 (2) - because it follows the guitar and vocal
20:44 FlawlessTea: k
20:45 No Dap: hmmmm
20:45 No Dap: 00:54:390 (1,2,3) - let me think
20:48 FlawlessTea: o3o
20:48 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1497964 do you like this
20:49 FlawlessTea: seems ok
20:49 No Dap: 00:56:265 (3,1) - maybe this
20:50 No Dap: http://puu.sh/82JqO.jpg
20:51 No Dap: actually yours is fine
20:52 FlawlessTea: alright :P
20:52 No Dap: `00:57:124 (2) - you know this is triple
20:52 No Dap: this is fine but triple would make more sense
20:52 FlawlessTea: triple snap divisor?
20:53 FlawlessTea: or like a kick slider
20:53 No Dap: kick
20:53 FlawlessTea: starting from here 00:57:046 - right
20:53 No Dap: yes
20:53 FlawlessTea: ok
20:54 No Dap: 01:00:952 - you gonna ignore this drum?
20:55 FlawlessTea: mapping vocals
20:55 No Dap: 01:00:796 (2) - how about 1/2 slider
20:55 No Dap: by ignoring drum feels empty
20:56 No Dap: 00:58:608 (6,7) - you did it here
20:56 FlawlessTea: hmm i make it parallel to 01:01:108 (3) -
20:56 No Dap: 01:02:515 (1) - what is this NC
20:56 No Dap: i'll kill you
20:56 No Dap: thats good
20:56 FlawlessTea: is that bad flow with 01:00:483 (1,2) -
20:57 No Dap: i did this 01:00:796 -
20:57 No Dap: wtf
20:57 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1497981
20:57 FlawlessTea: hacks
20:57 No Dap: lol
20:58 No Dap: 01:02:515 (1) - what i this NC
20:58 No Dap: i will kill you
20:58 No Dap: is*
20:58 FlawlessTea: nooooo my combo colors
20:58 No Dap: 00:55:483 (1) - ok this too
20:59 No Dap: 01:05:171 (3) - would be nice if this is 1/2 to follow drum
21:00 FlawlessTea: still stack with 2?
21:00 No Dap: yeah
21:00 No Dap: like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1497984
21:01 FlawlessTea: alright
21:01 No Dap: btw dont forget to add clap
21:01 No Dap: cuz thats the whole point of using 1/2
21:02 FlawlessTea: oh woops
21:02 FlawlessTea: i'll recheck hitsounds after
21:02 No Dap: 01:05:952 (5) - this should be 1/1 ..
21:03 No Dap: since the vocal is holding
21:03 No Dap: but that would make 01:06:265 (6) - too hard
21:03 No Dap: which means its time to use 1.2
21:03 No Dap: 1/2
21:04 FlawlessTea: 1/2 for 01:05:952 (5) - ?
21:04 FlawlessTea: or 01:06:265 (6) -
21:04 No Dap: for
21:04 No Dap: 01:05:952 (5) -
21:05 FlawlessTea: alright
21:05 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1497994
21:05 No Dap: heres what i did
21:05 No Dap: i also remapped 01:06:265 (6,7,1) -
21:05 No Dap: not 01:06:890 (1) -
21:05 No Dap: sorry
21:08 FlawlessTea: ok done
21:09 No Dap: 01:07:358 (2,3) - i think these should merge
21:09 No Dap: to 1/1
21:09 No Dap: more intutivive and following vocal
21:10 FlawlessTea: are you a wizard
21:10 No Dap: lol wot
21:12 No Dap: 01:08:140 (1,2,3,4) - I like what you did here
21:12 No Dap: with the claps :3
21:12 No Dap: 01:09:077 (4) - but delete clap on the end
21:13 FlawlessTea: ? why is that
21:13 No Dap: it sounds better
21:14 No Dap: trust me i play drums
21:14 No Dap: 01:11:733 (6) - here too
21:14 FlawlessTea: ok
21:14 No Dap: well if you don't want to don't
21:14 No Dap: but I personally think its better
21:14 FlawlessTea: i trust you
21:14 FlawlessTea: you play drums
21:15 No Dap: lol
21:15 No Dap: 01:09:390 (1) - clap on tail missing?
21:15 No Dap: 01:10:327 (3) -
21:16 No Dap: 01:11:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - clap party
21:16 No Dap: remove whisltes is better imo..
21:16 No Dap: sounds too yucky when used with clap
21:18 FlawlessTea: gonna remove whistles at the next part then
21:18 FlawlessTea: like this section 01:14:233 -
21:19 No Dap: no thats good
21:19 FlawlessTea: wat
21:19 No Dap: 01:11:890 (1,2,3,4) - this part is yucky
21:19 No Dap: nvm actually its good
21:19 No Dap: fml
21:20 FlawlessTea: o_o
21:20 No Dap: 01:15:483 (1) - remove NC?
21:20 No Dap: or NC 01:13:140 (5) - here
21:20 No Dap: its inconsistent
21:20 FlawlessTea: alright
21:21 FlawlessTea: do i have to delete this spinner T_T 01:16:890 (1) -
21:21 No Dap: 01:16:265 (3) - mm how about finish on the end too
21:21 No Dap: you betcah
21:21 No Dap: LOL
21:22 FlawlessTea: soooo empty
21:22 No Dap: and oooo fitting
21:22 No Dap: 01:41:890 (1,1) - wot is this NC
21:22 No Dap: i will kill you
21:23 FlawlessTea: look at that nice little circle all by itself
21:23 No Dap: LOL
21:23 No Dap: 01:42:202 (1) - remove nc please
21:23 No Dap: i can bring more evidence
21:23 No Dap: 01:39:390 (1,2) -
21:24 FlawlessTea: LOL
21:24 No Dap: agreed?
21:24 FlawlessTea: what if i put NC here 01:39:702 (1) -
21:24 No Dap: I kill you
21:25 FlawlessTea: look at that effect
21:25 FlawlessTea: and hp recovery probably needed
21:26 No Dap: they got enough from here 01:29:077 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) -
21:26 FlawlessTea: LOL
21:26 FlawlessTea: i actually like NC here 01:39:702 (1) -
21:26 FlawlessTea: Q_Q
21:26 No Dap: no
21:27 No Dap: that is NC abuse
21:27 No Dap: 01:44:390 (1,1) - let me kill you
21:27 FlawlessTea: >_>
21:27 No Dap: please
21:27 FlawlessTea: alright fine
21:28 No Dap: 00:46:265 (1) -
21:28 No Dap: http://puu.sh/82LCw.jpg how about this
21:28 No Dap: i just realized
21:30 FlawlessTea: hm
21:30 FlawlessTea: can i change sv here actually
21:30 FlawlessTea: 00:46:265 -
21:30 FlawlessTea: to be slower
21:30 No Dap: yeah
21:30 No Dap: and http://puu.sh/82LKB.jpg
21:30 No Dap: thats what guy did
21:31 No Dap: pretty sweet
21:31 FlawlessTea: in this mod: how to plagiarize
21:32 No Dap: lol
21:32 No Dap: 01:51:890 (1) - you can do the samething here
21:32 No Dap: 01:56:108 (1,2,3) - k im gonna kill you right now
21:32 No Dap: or that modder
21:33 FlawlessTea: i fixed that already
21:34 No Dap: ok
21:34 No Dap: 02:02:749 (2) -
21:34 No Dap: you know it
21:35 No Dap: 02:11:108 (1) - remove NC?
21:36 No Dap: did you die
21:36 FlawlessTea: nope
21:36 FlawlessTea: all fixed
21:37 No Dap: 02:11:890 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1498031
21:38 FlawlessTea: mhm
21:40 FlawlessTea: i might have to leave in 20 minutes
21:40 FlawlessTea: we might be able to finish hard
21:41 No Dap: ok
21:41 FlawlessTea: you can skip insane if you want , or if you're feeling murderous you can post forum mod
21:41 No Dap: lol
21:41 FlawlessTea: along with this irc mod
21:41 No Dap: 02:14:702 (4) - detle clap on end
21:42 No Dap: 02:15:015 (1,3) - clap missing
21:42 No Dap: 02:17:358 (6) - remove clap
21:42 No Dap: 02:17:515 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - you know it
21:43 No Dap: 02:21:890 (3) - http://puu.sh/82Mt5.jpg
21:43 FlawlessTea: omg i had that before as well
21:44 FlawlessTea: someone told me to add a slider there
21:44 No Dap: lol
21:44 No Dap: don't take all words from modders
21:44 FlawlessTea: it's a very pretty slider though you gotta admit
21:44 No Dap: especially inexperienced ones
21:44 No Dap: they don't know what they are doing
21:44 No Dap: 03:06:265 (1) - remove NC
21:44 No Dap: for consistency
21:45 FlawlessTea: spinner starts from the blue tick?
21:45 No Dap: 03:08:608 (1) - here too
21:45 No Dap: yeah
21:45 No Dap: cuz the spinner is following the ahhhhhhhhhhhh or whatever vocal
21:45 FlawlessTea: lol
21:46 No Dap: 03:13:140 (1) - you know it
21:46 No Dap: 03:13:608 (2) - should be NC
21:46 No Dap: according to other kiai
21:46 No Dap: 03:23:999 (1) - you know it
21:47 No Dap: 03:33:140 (3,4) - you know it
21:47 No Dap: 03:35:952 (4) - you know it
21:47 No Dap: 03:36:265 (1,3) - you know it
21:47 No Dap: 03:38:608 (6) - you know it
21:47 FlawlessTea: oh god
21:47 No Dap: 03:42:358 (1) - this part do whatever you did on the other parts
21:48 No Dap: another inconsistent NC
21:48 No Dap: 03:44:858 (1) - remove NC?
21:48 No Dap: 03:47:827 (1) - ^
21:48 No Dap: 03:55:015 (1) - ^
21:48 No Dap: 03:57:827 (1) - ^
21:48 No Dap: because this isnt following your NC pattern here
21:48 No Dap: 00:10:640 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) -
21:49 No Dap: ok when are you coming back
21:49 FlawlessTea: uh tomorrow
21:49 No Dap: uh ok
21:49 No Dap: insane irc tmrw
21:50 FlawlessTea: oh you wanna kill me in person
21:50 No Dap: lol
21:50 FlawlessTea: well, not in person i suppose
-Teina-
From Teller's team modding queues ( ・´ω・`)

Sorry for mod it late>_< (a month)

if no reason, it is my suggestion.

  1. 00:01:265 - to 00:07:671 - rhythm too fast (too many note).
  2. 00:46:890 - remove red line
  3. 00:57:358 - add note. there is connection with 00:57:202 (3,4) - .
  4. 01:02:358 - add note or not. if you add note ,you can move 01:01:890 (1) - overlap with 01:01:108 (7) - .
  5. 01:16:733 - I think it is not need the kiai fountain
  6. 01:52:046 (2) - remove the slider.
  7. 01:52:515 - remove red line
  8. 02:42:515 - volume 50%~ 60%
  9. 02:45:015 - ^
  10. 03:01:577 - break end
  11. 03:26:577 (2,3) - CTRL + G
  12. 03:43:452 - remove green line
  13. 03:43:608 - I think it is not need the kiai fountain
  14. 03:48:765 - add note.
      
  15. 01:39:702 - to 01:48:296 - nice mapping~
  1. 00:50:483 (1,2) - ↓↓↓ should not use spacebeat too muxh in the kiai time.
  2. 00:51:890 (1,2) - slider here.
  3. 00:57:358 - add note
  4. 01:00:483 (1,2) - slidre here
  5. 01:01:890 (1,2) - slider here
  6. 01:04:858 (2,3) - slider here
  7. 01:06:108 - add note
  8. 01:56:108 (1,2) - slider here and try it↓↓↓.
  9. 01:57:515 (1,2) - slider here.
  10. 02:02:983 (3) - add note
  11. 02:06:108 (4,5) - slider here
  12. 02:07:515 (1,2) - slider here
  13. 02:10:952 - add note
  14. 02:11:733 - add note
  15. 02:42:671 - volume calm. Please put volume up here.
  16. 03:24:233 - add note
  17. 03:27:358 (1,2) - slider here
  18. 03:28:765 (5,1) - slider here
  19. 03:32:202 - add note
  20. 03:32:983 - add note
     
  21. remove the red line ,if this is unuseful.
  1. 00:46:265 (1) - circle here. It can make 00:46:733 (2) - outstanding .
  2. 00:56:577 - No.5 rebound slider
  3. 00:58:296 (1) - slider here.
  4. 01:46:890 (1) - like this?↓↓↓

     
  5. remove the red line ,if this is unuseful.

nice map,
Good luck~
Topic Starter
Frostings

tellertheworld wrote:

  1. 00:01:265 - to 00:07:671 - rhythm too fast (too many note). i might change distance spacing later based on other mods
  2. 00:46:890 - remove red line metronome actually resets here. Having red line here makes large white tick lineup with first beat of each bar in the song.
  3. 00:57:358 - add note. there is connection with 00:57:202 (3,4) - . actually no vocals and no instruments here
  4. 01:02:358 - add note or not. if you add note ,you can move 01:01:890 (1) - overlap with 01:01:108 (7) - . no change. note doesn't add to the song
  5. 01:16:733 - I think it is not need the kiai fountain fix
  6. 01:52:046 (2) - remove the slider. not sure why this is necessary
  7. 01:52:515 - remove red line same as above. another timing reset to match first beat of song with first white tick
  8. 02:42:515 - volume 50%~ 60% ok
  9. 02:45:015 - ^ ok
  10. 03:01:577 - break end no change
  11. 03:26:577 (2,3) - CTRL + G changed placement of 2
  12. 03:43:452 - remove green line oops
  13. 03:43:608 - I think it is not need the kiai fountain alright
  14. 03:48:765 - add note. doesn't contribute to song i think
      
  15. 01:39:702 - to 01:48:296 - nice mapping~
  1. 00:50:483 (1,2) - ↓↓↓ should not use spacebeat too muxh in the kiai time. following vocals here. i'll keep in mind for next time
  2. 00:51:890 (1,2) - slider here. yep
  3. 00:57:358 - add note not fixed. doesn't contribute to song
  4. 01:00:483 (1,2) - slidre here yep
  5. 01:01:890 (1,2) - slider here no drums no vocals here.. not fixed
  6. 01:04:858 (2,3) - slider here fix
  7. 01:06:108 - add note yep
  8. 01:56:108 (1,2) - slider here and try it↓↓↓. no fix. makes it needlessly complicated
  9. 01:57:515 (1,2) - slider here. no vocals no drums here
  10. 02:02:983 (3) - add note sorry i don't understand
  11. 02:06:108 (4,5) - slider here no vocals/drums
  12. 02:07:515 (1,2) - slider here^
  13. 02:10:952 - add note alright
  14. 02:11:733 - add note no fix. putting note here makes this section too hard
  15. 02:42:671 - volume calm. Please put volume up here. fix
  16. 03:24:233 - add note doesn't contribute to song
  17. 03:27:358 (1,2) - slider here^
  18. 03:28:765 (5,1) - slider here^
  19. 03:32:202 - add note added
  20. 03:32:983 - add notemakes section too hard
     
  21. remove the red line ,if this is unuseful.it's useful i think
  1. 00:46:265 (1) - circle here. It can make 00:46:733 (2) - outstanding . there's already a 1.2 SV here... don't think it needs any more emphasis ;)
  2. 00:56:577 - No.5 rebound slider following vocals here
  3. 00:58:296 (1) - slider here. don't really like rhythm
  4. 01:46:890 (1) - like this?↓↓↓ almost unrankable in my opinion

     
  5. remove the red line ,if this is unuseful.no fix here

Kibbleru wrote:

21:17 Kibbleru: how long has this mod been going for o_O
21:18 FlawlessTea: i have no idea
21:23 Kibbleru: r u guys on hard right now?
21:23 FlawlessTea: i think so
21:23 FlawlessTea: i don't even know anymore
21:24 Kibbleru: 00:12:827 - why these empty ._. 00:13:452 - same reason 00:17:827 - 00:18:452 - are empty ><
21:24 Kibbleru: 00:26:265 (1,2) - and dammit fix this overlap plis nooooooooooooo (fixed)
21:25 FlawlessTea: wat
21:25 Kibbleru: doesn't looks gud imo :<
21:27 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/82Lvz.jpg ew ugly suggestion
21:28 FlawlessTea: am i receiving
21:28 FlawlessTea: two mods at the same time right now
21:29 Kibbleru: 01:51:890 (1) - just something that may be interesting http://puu.sh/82LBG.jpg make any kind of jump http://puu.sh/82LCd.jpg
21:29 Kibbleru: a jump and the antijump emphasizes the w/e vocal part lowered hitsound volume for emphasis instead (also there's an extra slider somewhere)
21:30 Kibbleru: 02:20:640 (4) - i think flow better if curved other way instead? parallel to this 02:21:108 (1) -
21:31 Kibbleru: 03:13:140 (1) - same as previous one what. ok
21:32 Kibbleru: 03:17:671 (6,2) - u can try stacking? not very relevant tho i like jumps ^^
21:32 FlawlessTea: i can't even
21:33 Kibbleru: 03:34:702 (4,5) - i cant agree to this stack here, stops flow and i hear no pause in music fix
21:33 Kibbleru: 03:37:202 (3,4) - ^ fix
21:33 Kibbleru: 03:47:827 (1,2) - why not make symmetrical? i hate symmetry. jk fix ;w;
21:34 Kibbleru: 03:53:140 (7) - overlap not too good i think this one is fine
21:36 FlawlessTea: can you uh post this later
21:36 Kibbleru: sure no kd tho
21:37 Kibbleru: actualy im just gunna post it on an edit from my previous post
21:38 Kibbleru: 01:07:827 (4,5) - yo whats with these stacks man not reeeealy sure why stacking is bad but i fix anyways because i dunno
21:52 FlawlessTea: did this save o3o
21:52 FlawlessTea: i gotta go
21:54 Kibbleru: oh
21:54 Kibbleru: leme upload then
also No Dap threatened to kill me only 12 times during his mod ! :):?
Kibbleru

FlawlessTea wrote:

tellertheworld wrote:

  1. 00:01:265 - to 00:07:671 - rhythm too fast (too many note). i might change distance spacing later based on other mods
  2. 00:46:890 - remove red line metronome actually resets here. Having red line here makes large white tick lineup with first beat of each bar in the song.
  3. 00:57:358 - add note. there is connection with 00:57:202 (3,4) - . actually no vocals and no instruments here
  4. 01:02:358 - add note or not. if you add note ,you can move 01:01:890 (1) - overlap with 01:01:108 (7) - . no change. note doesn't add to the song
  5. 01:16:733 - I think it is not need the kiai fountain fix
  6. 01:52:046 (2) - remove the slider. not sure why this is necessary
  7. 01:52:515 - remove red line same as above. another timing reset to match first beat of song with first white tick
  8. 02:42:515 - volume 50%~ 60% ok
  9. 02:45:015 - ^ ok
  10. 03:01:577 - break end no change
  11. 03:26:577 (2,3) - CTRL + G changed placement of 2
  12. 03:43:452 - remove green line oops
  13. 03:43:608 - I think it is not need the kiai fountain alright
  14. 03:48:765 - add note. doesn't contribute to song i think
      
  15. 01:39:702 - to 01:48:296 - nice mapping~
  1. 00:50:483 (1,2) - ↓↓↓ should not use spacebeat too muxh in the kiai time. following vocals here. i'll keep in mind for next time
  2. 00:51:890 (1,2) - slider here. yep
  3. 00:57:358 - add note not fixed. doesn't contribute to song
  4. 01:00:483 (1,2) - slidre here yep
  5. 01:01:890 (1,2) - slider here no drums no vocals here.. not fixed
  6. 01:04:858 (2,3) - slider here fix
  7. 01:06:108 - add note yep
  8. 01:56:108 (1,2) - slider here and try it↓↓↓. no fix. makes it needlessly complicated
  9. 01:57:515 (1,2) - slider here. no vocals no drums here
  10. 02:02:983 (3) - add note sorry i don't understand
  11. 02:06:108 (4,5) - slider here no vocals/drums
  12. 02:07:515 (1,2) - slider here^
  13. 02:10:952 - add note alright
  14. 02:11:733 - add note no fix. putting note here makes this section too hard
  15. 02:42:671 - volume calm. Please put volume up here. fix
  16. 03:24:233 - add note doesn't contribute to song
  17. 03:27:358 (1,2) - slider here^
  18. 03:28:765 (5,1) - slider here^
  19. 03:32:202 - add note added
  20. 03:32:983 - add notemakes section too hard
     
  21. remove the red line ,if this is unuseful.it's useful i think
  1. 00:46:265 (1) - circle here. It can make 00:46:733 (2) - outstanding . there's already a 1.2 SV here... don't think it needs any more emphasis ;)
  2. 00:56:577 - No.5 rebound slider following vocals here
  3. 00:58:296 (1) - slider here. don't really like rhythm
  4. 01:46:890 (1) - like this?↓↓↓ almost unrankable in my opinion

     
  5. remove the red line ,if this is unuseful.no fix here

Kibbleru wrote:

21:17 Kibbleru: how long has this mod been going for o_O
21:18 FlawlessTea: i have no idea
21:23 Kibbleru: r u guys on hard right now?
21:23 FlawlessTea: i think so
21:23 FlawlessTea: i don't even know anymore
21:24 Kibbleru: 00:12:827 - why these empty ._. 00:13:452 - same reason 00:17:827 - 00:18:452 - are empty ><
21:24 Kibbleru: 00:26:265 (1,2) - and dammit fix this overlap plis nooooooooooooo (fixed)
21:25 FlawlessTea: wat
21:25 Kibbleru: doesn't looks gud imo :<
21:27 Kibbleru: http://puu.sh/82Lvz.jpg ew ugly suggestion
21:28 FlawlessTea: am i receiving
21:28 FlawlessTea: two mods at the same time right now
21:29 Kibbleru: 01:51:890 (1) - just something that may be interesting http://puu.sh/82LBG.jpg make any kind of jump http://puu.sh/82LCd.jpg
21:29 Kibbleru: a jump and the antijump emphasizes the w/e vocal part lowered hitsound volume for emphasis instead (also there's an extra slider somewhere)
21:30 Kibbleru: 02:20:640 (4) - i think flow better if curved other way instead? parallel to this 02:21:108 (1) -
21:31 Kibbleru: 03:13:140 (1) - same as previous one what. ok
21:32 Kibbleru: 03:17:671 (6,2) - u can try stacking? not very relevant tho i like jumps ^^
21:32 FlawlessTea: i can't even
21:33 Kibbleru: 03:34:702 (4,5) - i cant agree to this stack here, stops flow and i hear no pause in music fix
21:33 Kibbleru: 03:37:202 (3,4) - ^ fix
21:33 Kibbleru: 03:47:827 (1,2) - why not make symmetrical? i hate symmetry. jk fix ;w;
21:34 Kibbleru: 03:53:140 (7) - overlap not too good i think this one is fine
21:36 FlawlessTea: can you uh post this later
21:36 Kibbleru: sure no kd tho
21:37 Kibbleru: actualy im just gunna post it on an edit from my previous post
21:38 Kibbleru: 01:07:827 (4,5) - yo whats with these stacks man not reeeealy sure why stacking is bad but i fix anyways because i dunno
21:52 FlawlessTea: did this save o3o
21:52 FlawlessTea: i gotta go
21:54 Kibbleru: oh
21:54 Kibbleru: leme upload then
also No Dap threatened to kill me only 12 times during his mod ! :):?
lol how long did it take u to count?
Momoka

Kibbleru wrote:

lol how long did it take u to count?
crtl f
Topic Starter
Frostings
darn I thought I had actually received a mod :(
rip
10crystalmask01
Hey, mod from queue 8-)
3 ~4 minutes = 3 diffs

Hard


00:08:608 (1) - Consider moving it farther away from the previous slider. A jump would look nice here.

00:13:452 - Sounds incomplete here, it needs a note here, for consistency. In the previous rhythm, you have a note at 00:12:202 (4) - .

00:23:765 (1) - Could have a soft finish on the head.

02:12:983 (2,3) - Would sound better if it was a whole 1/1 slider instead. That way, it will run smoothly with the vocals long hold on the "da" in afuredasu, and still stick with the beats. Also in the previous chorus, on the similar verse you used a 1/1 slider at 01:07:358 (2) - .

02:21:968 (1) - Would work if it started at 02:22:671 instead. Right now, it's acting more like a filler to the strong drum rolls heard here on 02:22:046 - 02:22:358 (would you could actually map, with a mini-slider). Consider using this rhythm here:


02:34:077 (5,6) - Nazi suggestion (sorry!) please fix the blanket here.

03:34:233 (2,3) - Same suggestion as 02:12:983 (2,3) - . Please replace these notes with a long slider so it runs smoothly with the vocals "da" in dasu.

03:48:452 (9) - Forgot to add a finish on the tail here.
03:58:452 (7) - ^

Normal


00:05:171 (4,1) - Objects are too far apart ( check the DS). Make sure that all your objects are snapped accordingly in this and the Easy diff, as this is an unrankable issue.

Also for 00:06:108 - 00:08:765, try using this rhythm for better follow with the vocals:


00:13:608 (4,1) - Are too close together.
00:15:952 (4,1) - ^
00:35:952 (4,1) - ^

00:31:265 (1,2) - Are too far apart.
...Ahh too much DS changing in this diff @_@ stuck to using only one DS (eg 1.1) and stick to it throughout the entire map.

Easy


00:21:186 (1) - Uhh, this note should be at 00:21:265 if you want it to hit exactly on the cymbal crash.

00:23:765 (2) - Forgot to add a finish on the head. Also this note should be NC instead of 00:23:452 (1) - because it appears in the new rhythm ( the fact that it lands on the big white tick mark). 00:23:452 (1) - Appears before it, so it's in a separate rhythm.

01:16:265 (4) - Would sound better if it was a slider running till 01:16:733 with a finish on the tail. That way, it can fill for those loud drum rolls you hear through this time, and finishes with the strong cymbal crash at 01:16:733 (and it's okay for this object to end in the red tickmark, because it's the last object in this playtime before the break).

01:29:390 (2) - NC, because it's in the next stanza, and 01:29:077 (1) - is in a separate one.

03:23:140 (3,1) - Objects are too far apart :?

03:32:358 (2,1) - Objects are too close.

Good luck!
Topic Starter
Frostings

10crystalmask01 wrote:

[Normal]
Also for 00:06:108 - 00:08:765, try using this rhythm for better follow with the vocals:
deleted this entire section

00:13:608 (4,1) - Are too close together. these distances are fine.
00:15:952 (4,1) - ^
00:35:952 (4,1) - ^

00:31:265 (1,2) - Are too far apart.
...Ahh too much DS changing in this diff @_@ stuck to using only one DS (eg 1.1) and stick to it throughout the entire map.
all else fixed. thanks for modding !
Squichu
hellow! mod from my queue ~
I'm late, sorry. ;n;

[General]
  1. second combo colour is a tiny little bit to bright for my taste, you might wanna decrease intensity a bit
    suggestion
    this is the original
    (changed code to 130,255,255)


[Easy]
  1. 00:11:108 (1) - could start off with a nicer movement/flow here if you curve this slider
  2. 00:14:077 (1) - ^, it works better here tho, cause this angular slider matches better with the following object here 00:14:077 (1,2) -
  3. 00:16:577 (1,2) - why do you change from 1.5 DS to 1.4 here? I can't make out any particular reason for the change.
  4. 00:19:858 (2,1) - fix DS, if it's just 0.1 difference I won't say anything, but changing to 2.0 is a jump which is a no-no in Easy x:
    plus, the circle is snapped to 1/4 beat, which is considered "offbeat" (not follwing the actual bpm-beat) and makes this unreadable for beginner players
  5. 00:53:140 (3) - move to 328|204 for nicer triangle \:D/
  6. 01:14:390 (1) - move last anchor to 434|80 for better blanket
  7. 01:16:265 (4) - this is slightly "off-flow", move to 252|320
  8. 01:37:827 (2) - move two grids to the right for better symmetry
  9. 01:54:390 (3,1) - red/white tick changes are hard to read and here I'm not sure what you're following?
    anyway, I'd prefer if 1 starts on the white tick not the red, but that's up to you. c:
    similar here - 02:32:515 (1,2) - and 03:15:640 (3,1) -
  10. 02:12:515 (1,2,3) - difference in DS is extremely noticeable, please disable Grid Snap here and move the circle to 222|27
  11. 03:19:077 (1,2,3) - flow from 2 to 3 is rather meh, imo, you could improve it a lot if you rotate those sliders
  12. 03:24:077 (1,2) - fix DS
  13. 03:56:108 (1) - move last anchor one grid up


[Normal]
  1. DS should be consistent in Normal diff as well, imo.. |:
  2. 00:20:640 (3,1) - fix DS here
  3. 00:31:265 (1,2,3) - ^ really, jumps in E/N are unreadable
  4. 00:55:171 (2) - flow is better if you don't place that far on the right, move to 0|212?
    same goes for the mirrored part at the end
  5. 01:31:890 (2,3) - cause of the shape they totally break the flow here, try a different one maybe?
  6. 01:43:140 (2,3) - fix DS
  7. 01:46:890 (1,1) - ^
  8. 02:36:890 (4,1) - ^
  9. 03:02:515 (1,2) - try to blanket them?
  10. 03:45:483 (3) - move two grids to the right for better symmetry


modding only two diffs cause of long draining time.
hope I was of some help, tho. ;o;

good luck!
*squee* o/
Topic Starter
Frostings

Squirrel wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 01:54:390 (3,1) - red/white tick changes are hard to read and here I'm not sure what you're following?
    anyway, I'd prefer if 1 starts on the white tick not the red, but that's up to you. c:
    similar here - 02:32:515 (1,2) - and 03:15:640 (3,1) -
rhythm actually starts at red ticks. starting at white ticks sounds completely off

everything else fixed i hope :)
thanks for modding !
Tari
As told :3

[Easy]

  1. 00:28:765 (1) - You need to move this note down, it touches the hp bar! which isn't good/allowed. and you need to adjust the previous and next note and make sure the previous slider still blankets this after you move this note down.
  2. 00:41:265 (1) - Add a finish for a start of this note, the tempo of the song starts to change here and you want to signal that with a finish, to the start of the note.
  3. 01:46:890 (1) - ^
  4. 00:42:202 (1) - No need for a new combo to this note, there no special beat here that really signals it.
  5. 01:47:827 (1) - ^
  6. 00:59:233 (1) - Remove the finish, you don't need to finish the start of every new combo here, that ruins the purpose of the finish. You only do it for the strongest and most important beats in that music section.
  7. 01:11:890 (1) - Finish would work great here, since this is where the instrument beats change, you don't need the whistle if you keep the finish here because it will overpower it.
  8. 00:23:452 (2) - Going deeper into the map, I notice you put a new combo before the start of the actual vocals, can you do it here too? like you did at 01:29:077 (1) -
  9. 01:39:390 - The green liner here could be decreased even more to 30% , I think it fits better because this part is quiet
  10. 01:53:140 (2) - The blanket looks really bad for this slider, fix it up a bit?
  11. 03:14:390 (2) - ^
  12. 02:21:265 (3) - Reverse needs to clap with your hitsound pattern.
  13. 03:53:452 (3) - Move down, slider end is super close to touching the hp bar.
  14. I'm not sure this is the best way to map the easy, you should of mapped to just white tick, that way you can add hitsounds especially the clap to every other white tick, and to make it easier to follow for beginners, the only reason its easy to follow is slider leniency but that's all really, switching from hitting notes on red tick to white tick can be really difficult and hard for beginners, so please keep that in mind for your next maps.


[Normal]

  1. 00:42:202 (1) - Same as easy, no need for a new combo
  2. 00:41:265 (1) - Same as easy, needs a finish.
  3. 00:46:733 (2) - New combo here, to match with the easy diff please.
  4. 01:52:358 (1) - ^
  5. 01:16:265 (5) - Add a finish to the end of the slider please.
  6. 01:40:952 (3,4) - Why do such complex rhythm for a slow part? how about turn this all into 1 slider would be better?
  7. 01:46:890 (1) - Finish start like previously.
  8. 01:47:827 (1) - Add new combo like previously.
  9. 01:57:515 - Why skip note here? the kiai should have continuous notes coming at ya
  10. 02:20:952 (3,4) - The flow is better like this http://puu.sh/8eykQ.jpg
  11. 04:03:452 (3) - New combo to follow the easy.

    [Hard]

    1. 00:10:640 (2) - New combo, here the drain starts to hurt in harder diffs if you put such a big pause.

      [Insane]

      [[list]
    2. 00:48:921 (7) - No need to space them so closely, you can enlarge the spacing here so it fits well with the overall spacing and jumps of the map, just place them much farther from the previous note please. http://puu.sh/8ez0H.jpg
    3. 01:05:483 (8) - New combo here, because it starts to repeat here.
    4. 01:06:108 - Add a note here if you do the above.
    5. 01:06:265 (1) - Remove new combo if you do the above.
    6. 01:12:827 (4) - New combo, these can be split into two and this is part of the next pattern so it needs a new combo.
    7. 01:15:483 (5) - ^
    8. 02:02:983 (4) - Note here, put it stacked at the end of the next slider.
    9. 02:16:577 (4,5) - Try using a slider? http://puu.sh/8eznd.jpg
    10. 02:21:108 (1) - Repeat, add a new combo here.
    11. 03:22:358 (4) - ^

The hard diff is fine and my favorite diff, so I only had 1 thing to say about it. good luck!
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