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Topic Starter
haha5957
graveyard perventing
NXTKitKat
It's back. AWESOME :D noob-ish modding time

Add tag: happy hardcore (genre of the song), kurante/current (name of girl in the picture, not sure if related?)
Add ↓ in name?

Easy

00:15:093 (5) - NC?
00:51:813 (5) - ^
00:53:973 (7) - I think this slider should end at 00:55:053 - and 00:55:593 - should be a note
02:57:094 (5) - NC here instead of following note
04:13:775 (4) - ^
No grand final spinner?

Normal
CS4 OD5 XD

00:49:383 - no note here?
04:17:083 (1) - Begin the spinner a bit later. Maybe 1/4 beat later or next beat?

Hard

01:02:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ok....
03:34:895 (2,3) - A bit too far?

Insane

00:36:558 (4) - why not double note? Same for another slider which I forgot where....
03:18:694 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wow

Anyway nice map :D
Good luck
[Shiny]
Nice map, please rank! I want a Freedom Dive map that I can play XD :P
Topic Starter
haha5957

NXTKitKat wrote:

It's back. AWESOME :D noob-ish modding time

Add tag: happy hardcore (genre of the song), kurante/current (name of girl in the picture, not sure if related?)
Add ↓ in name?

Easy

00:15:093 (5) - NC?
00:51:813 (5) - ^
00:53:973 (7) - I think this slider should end at 00:55:053 - and 00:55:593 - should be a note
02:57:094 (5) - NC here instead of following note
04:13:775 (4) - ^
No grand final spinner?

Normal
CS4 OD5 XD

00:49:383 - no note here?
04:17:083 (1) - Begin the spinner a bit later. Maybe 1/4 beat later or next beat?

Hard

01:02:613 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ok....
03:34:895 (2,3) - A bit too far?

Insane

00:36:558 (4) - why not double note? Same for another slider which I forgot where....
03:18:694 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - wow

Anyway nice map :D
Good luck
thanks for the mod ovo fixed everything but one in hard, which is already x0.6 distance snapped.

The_Manu_ wrote:

Nice map, please rank! I want a Freedom Dive map that I can play XD :P
haha thanks but not likely though, primarily because the map isnt enough yet(universe diff is on its way to remap anyway right now), and I just keep prefer to change maps so I don't think I'll even try to think untill I'm happy with my own map owo/

edit : reworking done
Myko
good map, much more enjoyable than the other version we all know and hate
some parts should be tuned a bit down in the Universe I feel cause high spacing is good, but it's also mostly not fun to play

Else, keep up the good work! I want to see it ranked
Topic Starter
haha5957
haha thanks :D

current universe (after remapping, not sure if you still have old though) does not have excess spaced-out stream imo, probably one part that I REALLY want to emphasize I guess?

However I actually love the currently approved FD(by nakagawa-kanon) though, lets not try to bring out another map here :>
Polarize101
Really enjoy this mapset :D
NXTKitKat
I'll just throw in a few stars :D
Topic Starter
haha5957
whoaaaa, that was lot of stars xDD

thanks yo!
neonat
General

Earth - Galaxy - Universe do not scale with Easy - Normal - Hard - Insane

This is why you cannot have both in the mapset, they are unrelated, and you cannot have Earth Galaxy and Universe as they are considered custom names

Universe

00:06:318 (9) - pretty additional here, extra note, would be better to remove it to be a break like 00:04:158
00:11:448 (4) - slider ends on a pretty heavy beat at 00:11:583 which I would think would be better clickable
00:14:553 (1,2,3,4,1) - the shape is odd, 00:14:958 (3,4,1) doesn't really move so well from 00:14:755 (2)
00:27:108 (3,4,5) - unpolished
00:31:428 (2,3,4,5,6) - very very straight, doesn't feel right
00:41:958 (1,2,3,4) - more curve
00:51:813 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - reduce the number of finishes used
00:56:403 (2,3) - align their heads more
01:05:043 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't think they should all be facing left, that makes the direction of flow reset over and over again
01:20:973 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - could use a better curve
02:49:264 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2) - honestly the shape is neither being straight nor curved, it's not really nicely placed
03:01:819 (1,2,3) and 03:03:979 (1,2,3) - do not present the rhythm of the music at that section really well
You use a lot of angular and straight movements, which really inhibits flow, like 04:05:135 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - this is one of the main reasons why the whole difficulty overall is not really so polished, because it's very rigid

I believe the streams could look better and more distinct in stream shape, they tend to look disorganised right now.

Good Luck
gervin51
I like the mapping you made. I hope it gets approved someday. I want to be the first person to witness the beatmap to be approved and ranked. :D :)
Topic Starter
haha5957
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MondoKuma
Im modding this only easy tho cuz ima rebel ayy


00:38:853 (2) - I would make this symmetrical. It's slightly curved to the right.

00:42:093 (1) - Do not stack in easy difficulties. Seriously. It's unrankable

00:47:493 (1,3) - Please make these symmetrical >.< it really improves the flow (by copying 1 and pressing ctrl h ctrl comma and ctrl g

01:17:733 (1) - Again make this symmetrical

01:30:693 (1,2,1) - Again don't stack. It's just confusing for beginners

03:38:135 (1,2) - Maybe you could blanket this :o Imo it would make the map more enjoyable

04:17:015 (1,1) - Remove the circle make the spinner start where the circle was

04:16:475 (5) - If you want a nc at the end put it here instead


Nice Map! Good Job!

Ps Thanks for getting me warmed up. now I have to mod the requests from my queue :(
18-21-9
I like this song and I have tested this beatmap. In my opinion, it's in a good way to be ranked :)

Ranking this beatmap is a great idea because it has many difficulties, so beginners, advanced and expert players can enjoy playing this beatmap while listening to the music :)

Keep up the good work, haha5957 :D
Affirmation
m4m...?

[이지]
00:25:353 (6,1,2) - 정삼각형 어떤가요
00:30:213 (2,3) - 흐름이 이상해요
01:35:013 (1,4) - 이거 오버랩 괜찮으려나요
01:46:894 (1) - 강조한다고 해도 이건 이지낳아요. 뉴콤 있으면 안되는걸로 알아요
01:51:214 (4,1) - 흐름이 이상해요
04:06:215 (1,2,1) - 티나게 흐름이 이상해요.

[노말]
cs 3.5나 3으로 하는게 보통인데....
00:02:133 (1,2) - 흐름
01:02:613 (1,2) - ^
01:02:073 (4,1) - 거리
02:47:104 (2,3,1) - 얘네도 흐름
02:59:254 (1,2) - 이런패턴은 http://puu.sh/njolR/5589ee46dd.jpg 이런식으로 하는게 더 낫지 않으려나요... 이지도 그렇고
04:03:785 (4,1) - ^

[하드]
00:09:693 (3,4,5,6) - 완적한 정사각형 만드시는걸 권장합니다
02:59:254 (1,2,1,2) - 하드치곤 조금 어려운 패턴이네요
04:02:975 (4,1) - 블랭킷

[인세인]
00:03:213 (5,6) - 리딩 겁나 어려워요. 그냥 리버스 해주세요
01:03:018 (4,1) - 갑자기 꺾였네요
02:12:814 (1,1) - 스택

[익스트림]
00:10:503 (4,3) -너무 가까워요. 조금만 띄워주세요
01:09:498 (3,2) - 스택
00:08:073 (3) - ^
딱히 안보이는...?

최고난도는 실력이 안되서 모딩 못하겠네요
Topic Starter
haha5957
ranking too hard :/
Topic Starter
haha5957
buffed hard a bit due to difficulty spread
-Yuni
Why isn't this ranked already? WHYYYYYY , it's such a good and fun map.
Topic Starter
haha5957
that feel when you leave a map alone for like trillion years and see it has some favs lel cute~!!
Plush
I'm sure newbies will have fun playing some fast BPM maps! But please take note most people choose not to take the alternation route. I used to be very slow in everything! and I still don't alternate.
I'll be modding Hard, Insane, Extra, and Ultra.

[General]
  1. Please reduce the 'normal-hitclap' sound's volume! On lower diffs it's too loud and very noticeable.
[Hard]
  1. 04:15:395 (4,5,6) - This one and stuff near it feels weird, how about changing the whole thing to this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6764674
    Overall I think the map flows well.
[Insane]
  1. Consider reducing the ratio of max singletaps in a row from 5 to 4 or 3
    1. Below are the points where you have 4 (1/2 singletaps) in a row (it's somewhat recommended to change)
      00:48:978 (2,3,4,5) - 00:55:728 (3,4,5,1) - 00:56:538 (2,3,4,5) - exp https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6764167
      00:55:728 (3,4,5,1) - 00:56:538 (2,3,4,5) - exp https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6764182
    2. Below are the points where you have 5 (1/2 singletaps) in a row (it's highly recommended to change)
      01:02:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - 01:51:754 (1,2,3,4,1) - 02:09:034 (3,4,5,6,1) - 02:25:234 (3,4,5,6,7) - 03:41:915 (3,4,5,6,1)
    3. Below are the points where you have 6 (1/2 singletaps) in a row (change it unless it's completely intentional)
      03:59:195 (1,2,3,4,1,2)
  2. 02:46:834 (1) - shorten this slider by one 1/4 tick. keep it consistent or the player will be confused
  3. 02:49:939 (2,3,4) - please do not mix up kicksliders and reverse sliders especially at 4*, like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6764242
  4. 03:00:064 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - no need to NC everytime?
  5. 04:11:615 (1,2,3,4,5) - I really recommend removing the 4th note and move 1,2,3 away a little bit since it's very hard to differentiate.
[Extra]
  1. 00:27:783 (1) - the sv is too high. too unnatural. consider lessening the increments after you reach ~1.2 sv to 0.05 increments instead of 0.1 increments (1.10, 1.20, 1.25, 1.30, 1.35,...)
  2. 01:03:153 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - you increased the density here, I thought it's for warming up for the next part, but after this 01:04:773 the density is low again. please consider lowering the density on the point above
  3. 01:38:253 (1,2,1,2) - I think this will play better https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6764410
  4. 02:59:457 (2) - please avoid starting streams from the blue tick
  5. 03:07:759 (6,1) - don't do this. player's won't expect. change 03:07:759 (6) to circle. Same as above on Insane at 02:49:939 (2,3,4).
  6. 03:29:495 (1,2,3,4) - increase spacing to avoid player thinking it's a 1/2 singletap
  7. 04:11:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - too long. consider splitting
[Ultra]
  1. 00:18:468 (2,3) - I know you want to make it further than the previous one.. but this is a little bit too far imo
  2. 00:27:783 (1) - sv too fast, look Extra 00:27:783 (1) mod above
  3. 01:38:253 (1,2) - look Extra 01:38:253 (1,2,1,2) above.
  4. 03:29:495 (1,2,3,4) - looks copied from Extra diff. If you plan on getting this map ranked, please change it atleast a little bit!
Topic Starter
haha5957
[quote="Garryanderson"]I'm sure newbies will have fun playing some fast BPM maps! But please take note most people choose not to take the alternation route. I used to be very slow in everything! and I still don't alternate.
I'll be modding Hard, Insane, Extra, and Ultra.



[Insane]
  1. Consider reducing the ratio of max singletaps in a row from 5 to 4 or 3
    1. Below are the points where you have 4 (1/2 singletaps) in a row (it's somewhat recommended to change)
      00:48:978 (2,3,4,5) - 00:55:728 (3,4,5,1) - 00:56:538 (2,3,4,5) - exp https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6764167
      00:55:728 (3,4,5,1) - 00:56:538 (2,3,4,5) - exp https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6764182
    2. Below are the points where you have 5 (1/2 singletaps) in a row (it's highly recommended to change)
      01:02:613 (1,2,3,4,1) - 01:51:754 (1,2,3,4,1) - 02:09:034 (3,4,5,6,1) - 02:25:234 (3,4,5,6,7) - 03:41:915 (3,4,5,6,1)
    3. Below are the points where you have 6 (1/2 singletaps) in a row (change it unless it's completely intentional)
      03:59:195 (1,2,3,4,1,2)
    uhhhh i understand what you're trying to say but this is 4 stars already, this should be OK regarding the difficulty itself. this difficulty doesn't have anything hard except for those which are meant to be challenging part.



    [Extra]
    1. 00:27:783 (1) - the sv is too high. too unnatural. consider lessening the increments after you reach ~1.2 sv to 0.05 increments instead of 0.1 increments (1.10, 1.20, 1.25, 1.30, 1.35,...)
      I don't think its unnatural or too high (consider this map already is 5 stars and above, the difficulty should be more than fine)

    2. 01:03:153 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5) - you increased the density here, I thought it's for warming up for the next part, but after this 01:04:773 the density is low again. please consider lowering the density on the point above
      It's dense because this is the part I did want to emphasize though, not even sure how to decrease density either

    3. 03:29:495 (1,2,3,4) - increase spacing to avoid player thinking it's a 1/2 singletap
      Easy notable music different (much more quiet) should make them at least pay attention i think, should be OK

    4. 04:11:615 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - too long. consider splitting
intended to be the hardest part of the map, in fact every difficulty has its hardest part of last kiai and i'd like to keep that

[Ultra]
[list][*]00:18:468 (2,3) - I know you want to make it further than the previous one.. but this is a little bit too far imo
I doubt anything in this difficulty is too hard or too far, considering the star rating 6.33 this is relatively very easy part (it's the stream parts that probably is a little overdone if anything)


[*]00:27:783 (1) - sv too fast, look Extra 00:27:783 (1) mod above
same as above






haha at time of 2016(or 2017) i don't think this map deserves a rank anyway, so i don't really care that much about ranking anymore. thanks for your mod!
Catzzye
Just wanted to say Galaxy diff looks pretty good! I hope it gets Ranked/Loved soon! =)
Topic Starter
haha5957
Renamed difficulty names to gradually increase in astronomical measure.
Previously :
Easy - Normal - Hard - Insane - Extra - Ultra - Universe (7 difficulties)

Renamed :
Asteriod - Moon - Earth - Solar - Stardust - Galaxy - Hyperspace - Universe (8 difficulties)

Significant change on hyperspace(previously universe) difficulty.

added another difficulty above hyperspace(previously universe), aiming for top-tier players. map may change as always, but the map would be much more jump heavy while still keeping major streams, and will be around 7.5 ~ 8.0 stars.

Now the mapset has 8 difficulties.
Zyxas
Before I was a 200k scrub who could only stream at 180BPM, now I'm still a 200k scrub, but at least I can enjoy Freedom Dive at lower difficulties without my fingers falling off.
Broly
keep updating pls.

again .
MyAngelSatania
Hi, I found this map a while ago, and finally decided to give it a look, so here it :)
Also, this is my first mod, so Im sorry if its bad :|

[HP]
Change the HP to 6 on Univers, Hyperspace and Galaxy
HP 5 on Stardust and Solar
I think 3 is good on the other diffs

[Mod]
mod for Universe difficulty
Since I dont know much about mapping, I decided to just change some of the streams, since I dont really know how to change all these jumps in a good way (considering I'm a 70k scrub who is modding a map, I'll never be able to play)

01:13:143 (10,11,12,13,1) - that stream seems too generic, and doesnt really emphasize the the speed up at the end of it;
I am thinking about something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7804591 It spaces out at the end and emphasizes the speed up of the music

00:27:580 (10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - Same thing as above, was thinking avout someting like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7804615

00:45:198 (15,16,1) - The 16th note and the slider kinda seem out of place, here's my idea https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7804720

00:55:593 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - The stream doesnt look as interesting as the music sounds imo, so here's my idea https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7804745
That wasy the stream is a bit more curved, and it spaces out at the end because of the quick speed up of the music

01:04:233 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Tbh here I didnt had much of an idea how to change it up, so I just moved the notes around a bit,
as they seemed kinda strange placed https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7804768

01:12:873 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - Not a big change, just moved the 11 and 12 notes a bit down, and the 13th note and the slider a bit to the right https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7804791

03:16:332 (14,15,16,1) - Nothing too grand here, just moved the notes a bit higher, and moved the slider so it's at the height of the 15th note http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7804832

03:53:930 (10,11) - The notes were out of their place https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/7804868

I hope you will get it into Ranked, but if you cannot, once you reach 100 stars you can apply for loved :)
rssmv
awesome sync
erogamer04
waiting for rank, or at least, loved :<
CABERMAN
its been too long, wtf happened?
IOException
woah
Topic Starter
haha5957
I'm slightly surprised on how this is still getting even a tiny bit of attention, aka favs, I don't really play/map as much now but if anyone wants to still play this map / wants something to be changed I'm happy to do that.

It turns out that occasional spaced 1/4s ruin the gameplay so i guess i'll just remove them, haha
Shinx
y is the background missing?
Topic Starter
haha5957
thanks, the background should be there now
Vindrue
i just wanna say THANK YOU for this amazing map! i love it and its already my favorite, keep it up!!! :D
Aluk
This is actually a really good map! Hope it gets Ranked! :) :) :)
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