Normal00:09:963 (4) - add a circle here? goes along well with the buildup in the song
00:21:573 (1) - I don't know, but this feels rather unfitting..I think mapping 1/1 here like you did previously would feel nicer
00:35:343 (3) - add a cricle?
00:46:413 (3,4,1) - should probably even out the spacing, it's quite noticeable
00:57:753 (4,1) - spacing is 0.5 off, not sure how much stuff like this is bothering you but I feel obligated to point it out
01:19:893 (1,2,3) - again, might want to even out the spacing ovo
01:47:974 (1,2,3) - ^very noticeable for this one actually
02:01:744 (2) - almost overlapping with the surrounding sliders, might want to get it to 0.9 DS
02:51:154 (2) - this one doesn't really make a lot of sense to me since the strong piano sound is on the blue tick not the red tick :/
03:00:874 (1,1) - gap here feels kinda weird with so much stuff going on in the background. I think having some 1/1 breaks occassionally is needed but the song feels so strong during this particular part that I think having it a bit more taxing is fine
03:35:975 (1,2,3) - spacing again. only pointing this one out because it's quite noticeable ovo
04:12:695 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - might just be me, but I feel like this is rather boring and doesn't really do the song justice :c
Try to tidy up the spacing here and there if you feel like it. It's annoying but I feel like I'd make the map look neater overall.
Insane00:03:213 (5) - is this ending on a blue tick on purpose? I honestly can't see how this servers any purpose besides confusing the player as there is nothing on the blue tick that'd stand out enough to justify a slider like this ;w;
00:18:603 (3,4) - shouldnt this be more spaced out? feels stronger than the previous triplets yet these are fairly close together
00:25:893 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - song is gradually increasing in intensity here, so it would be cool if you could have your map gradually increase in intensity to during this part, it feels kinda umm random right now
00:31:293 (1) - whislte on the tail of this really needed?
00:39:933 (5,6) - missing hitsounds completely for these two?
01:20:973 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - eh this is my personaly preference, but I feel as though this section kinda calls for jumps rather than the long repeat slider which will keep the player stationary :c
01:34:878 (8,1,2) - even spacing is obviously not required for a Diff like this, but I feel as though these would look neater with even spacing
01:49:999 (4,2,3) - stack messed up on purpose?
02:14:434 (1) - is this NC really neccessary?
02:19:699 (3,4) - very questionable flow between these two, I honestly don't know if this is sharp or really just bad flow
02:46:834 (3,4) - is this small overlap really neccessary?><
03:13:699 (6) - add a circle? song feels reaaally fast here so a 1/1 break here feels...ugh
03:31:115 (6,1) - shouldn't these be spaced out more? feels a bit weird not to have ANY emphasize on this downbeat especially since it does have a finish
03:54:875 (3) - was honestly expecting the ctrl+g'd version of this haha
04:14:315 (3,2) - nazi stack
Universe00:05:103 (4,9) - why not stack these?
00:06:858 (2,3,4,5,6) - feels a bit odd going from a very mild curve into a triangle like this because it requires the player to move in a rather sharp angle
00:12:258 (4,5) - does the song really call for a such a taxing jump? didn't emphasize the exact same slider like this in your next pattern :c
00:16:983 (4,1) - feels too close
00:38:718 (7,1) - stack these? I feel like this helps emphasizing the downbeat appropriately
01:03:288 (2,3,4,5) - might just be me, but I feel as though placing 5 below the triplet (like stacking it with 01:02:883 (3) - ) wouldve felt nicer. Though doing that now would require a lot of remapping I think so I'm obviously not asking you to do it
01:17:463 (6,1) - feels a bit close, especially since 1 feels so powerful
01:52:159 (4,1) - flow is kinda meh...not sure if this is just sharp or actually bad flow...your call, though I'm not 100% sure
01:57:964 (2,3,4) - ^ though I'm a bit more confident about the flow being unneccessarily harsh with this one
01:08:553 (1,2,3,4) - just realized this while looking at the second kiai, but aren't these rather close? I mean the song feels really jumpy and the exact same pattern in the second kiai is waaay more spaced out and this one too
02:57:027 (8) - is this one really neccessary?
03:16:467 (8,1) - transition from this stream into the slider is rather odd since the slider doesn't really do a good job of continueing the streams shape, forcing the player to move in an unnatural way to properly catch the slider
03:30:575 (1,2,3,4) - even out the spacing here?
03:46:100 (6,2) - huh why not stack these for extra neatness?
03:47:855 (1,2,3) - I honestly liked the way you mapped this during the previous kiai more
03:50:825 (6,1) - feels too close coming from a rather jumpy pattern, especially since the downbeat feels like it needs more emphasize than previous notes rather than less
04:15:395 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,1) - wouldn't it be cool to space these out a liiiitle bit more for a perfect circle?ovo
Good luck! o3o 
OD 3? 
must have took loooooong time to mod 5 diffs on 4:30 map!
. I hope some of this will be helpful to you! Lets get started:
