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Rabpit - Saika

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Kashimaria
455 posts
Joined November 2011
Kashimaria
As mod request.

[General]

각 난이도의 태그마다 게스트 난이도 참여자의 유저네임을 넣어주세요. iNickel Karia HabiHolic
이지를 제외한 모든 난이도에 카운트다운이 들어가 있는데 빼는 게 낫다고 봅니다.

[iNickel's Easy]

00:20:625 (3) - 앞 슬라이더 00:19:687 (2) 와 겹치기는 피해주세요.
00:21:562 (4) - 앞 슬라이더 00:20:625 (3) 와 디스턴스를 지켜주세요.
00:34:921 (2) - 앞 슬라이더 00:33:750 (1) 와 디스턴스를 지켜주세요. 단 한칸의 좌표라도 어긋나 있으면 디스턴스를 지키지 않은 것으로 간주될 가능성이 높습니다.
00:43:125 (2) - 00:42:890 이 부분에 이 노트를 놓는게 더 타이밍이 맞는 듯 합니다.
01:31:875 (1) - 스피너 뒤에 브레이크 타임을 넣어보는 건 어떨까요?
01:35:625 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 제가 보기에는 이 부분의 박자는 이지에는 걸맞지 않다고 봅니다. 노말이나 하드에나 쓰일 법한 박자 같습니다.
1/1박 슬라이더를 쓰시는게 더 나은 것 같습니다.
SPOILER

[Karia's Normal]

좋습니다, 제가 보기엔 문제는 없습니다.

[Habi's Hard]

디스턴스가 너무 들쭉날쭉합니다...

00:17:812 (3,4,5) - 여기선 0.5x 디스턴스로 3번 슬라이더 끝 부분에 붙이는게 더 좋다고 봅니다. 그리고 5번 서클은 안 겹치는게 더 좋지 싶습니다.
00:21:562 (3,4,5) - 3연타 대신 반복 슬라이더를 넣어보는건 어떨까요?
00:31:406 (1) - 뉴 콤보는 제거해주세요.
00:31:875 (2) - 만약 위의 모딩을 수용하신다면, 이 부분에 뉴 콤보를 넣는 편이 더 낫다고 봅니다.
00:36:093 (6,7,8) - 보니까 1.5x 디스턴스를 쓰신 모양인데, 디스턴스 스냅은 지키는 편이 낫다고 봅니다. 너무 변칙적인 디스턴스는 하드에서는 보기 안 좋습니다. 7번 슬라이더는 1.5x를 쓰신 것 같지 않고, 8번 서클도 다른 디스턴스를 쓰신 걸로 보이네요.
00:38:437 (3,4,5,6) - 앞의 1,2번 슬라이더와 뒤의 7,8번 슬라이더와 간격을 지켜주세요.
00:45:000 (6) - 1.2x를 사용하신 것 같은데 디스턴스 스냅을 지켜주세요.
00:51:328 (6) - ^
00:53:203 (3) - ^
00:55:546 (7) - ^
01:00:937 (3,4,5,6) - 이것도 00:38:437 (3,4,5,6) 에서 했던 지적처럼 간격을 지키는 편이 낫다고 봅니다.
01:03:281 (10) - 1.2x를 사용하신 것 같은데 디스턴스 스냅을 지켜주세요.
01:10:312 (8) - ^
01:11:250 (1) - ^
01:11:953 (2,3,5) - ^
01:16:640 (5) - ^
01:17:578 (7) - ^
01:22:500 (5) - 뉴 콤보를 넣어주세요.
01:28:125 (5,6,7,8) - 이것도 00:38:437 (3,4,5,6) 에서 했던 지적처럼 간격을 지키는 편이 낫다고 봅니다.
01:30:000 (1) - 스피너의 끝은 01:33:515 보다는 01:33:281 이곳이 더 낫지 싶습니다.
01:35:625 (3) - 뉴 콤보를 넣어주세요.
01:45:703 (3) - 이 부분도 디스턴스를 지켜달라고 말씀드리고 싶지만, 다른 난이도들을 보면 이 타임은 현재 키아이 타임에 돌입한 상태입니다. 그래서 변칙적인 디스턴스나 점프가 허용이 될 수도 있겠지만, 박자가 같은 같은 타이밍의 다른 패턴들을 비교해보면 디스턴스를 맞추는 편이 좋겠지요.
01:52:968 (2,3) - 디스턴스 스냅을 지켜주세요.
01:58:828 (2,3) - ^
02:00:703 (3,4) - ^

[Insane]

HP를 7로 낮추고, 그 반대로 OD는 8로 높이는게 어떨까요?

00:11:718 (3,4,5) - 깨끗하게 보이는 패턴은 아니라고 봅니다.
00:46:875 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - 스트림 패턴을 다르게 바꿔보는건 어떨까요?
00:56:250 (1,2,3,4) - 이 패턴은 아마도 00:56:250 (1,2) 슬라이더를 먼저 만드신 후에 복붙하셔서 회전하신 모양인데, 1,2,3,4번 슬라이더 전체를 놓고 보자면 1,2,3번까지는 괜찮습니다만 4번 슬라이더의 위치는 그렇게 보기 좋진 못합니다.
00:58:125 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 요즘에도 이런 패턴이 허용이 될 지는 모르겠군요.
01:03:046 - 이 부분에 노트를 추가하는게 좋을 것 같습니다. 하지만 노래 박자를 생각해보면 그렇지도 않은데, 뭔가 이 부분은 허전함이 느껴집니다.
01:44:062 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 패턴 자체가 부자연스러운 것은 아닙니다. 다만 2연타 패턴으로 나가시다가 갑자기 3연타 패턴을 쓰신 이유가 궁금합니다.
01:51:562 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 기본 디스턴스를 1.2x를 사용하신 모양인데, 간격을 더 띄우시는 편이 낫다고 봅니다. 적어도 디스턴스 스냅은 지켜주세요.
01:53:437 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
01:55:312 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:59:062 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:00:937 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ^
02:02:812 (1,2,3,4) - ^
Nickelony
402 posts
Joined January 2013
Nickelony

Gomo Pslvarh wrote:

As mod request.

[iNickel's Easy]

00:20:625 (3) - 앞 슬라이더 00:19:687 (2) 와 겹치기는 피해주세요. LOL! I have no Idea who did that. It wasn't me. (Fixed!)
00:21:562 (4) - 앞 슬라이더 00:20:625 (3) 와 디스턴스를 지켜주세요. ^
00:34:921 (2) - 앞 슬라이더 00:33:750 (1) 와 디스턴스를 지켜주세요. 단 한칸의 좌표라도 어긋나 있으면 디스턴스를 지키지 않은 것으로 간주될 가능성이 높습니다. X
00:43:125 (2) - 00:42:890 이 부분에 이 노트를 놓는게 더 타이밍이 맞는 듯 합니다. X
01:31:875 (1) - 스피너 뒤에 브레이크 타임을 넣어보는 건 어떨까요? X
01:35:625 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 제가 보기에는 이 부분의 박자는 이지에는 걸맞지 않다고 봅니다. 노말이나 하드에나 쓰일 법한 박자 같습니다.
1/1박 슬라이더를 쓰시는게 더 나은 것 같습니다. X
SPOILER
OK... I don't speak Korean but... Google Translator FTW!

http://puu.sh/725wy.zip
Kashimaria
455 posts
Joined November 2011
Kashimaria

iNickel wrote:

Gomo Pslvarh wrote:

As mod request.

[iNickel's Easy]

00:20:625 (3) - 앞 슬라이더 00:19:687 (2) 와 겹치기는 피해주세요. LOL! I have no Idea who did that. It wasn't me. (Fixed!)
00:21:562 (4) - 앞 슬라이더 00:20:625 (3) 와 디스턴스를 지켜주세요. ^
00:34:921 (2) - 앞 슬라이더 00:33:750 (1) 와 디스턴스를 지켜주세요. 단 한칸의 좌표라도 어긋나 있으면 디스턴스를 지키지 않은 것으로 간주될 가능성이 높습니다. X
00:43:125 (2) - 00:42:890 이 부분에 이 노트를 놓는게 더 타이밍이 맞는 듯 합니다. X
01:31:875 (1) - 스피너 뒤에 브레이크 타임을 넣어보는 건 어떨까요? X
01:35:625 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 제가 보기에는 이 부분의 박자는 이지에는 걸맞지 않다고 봅니다. 노말이나 하드에나 쓰일 법한 박자 같습니다.
1/1박 슬라이더를 쓰시는게 더 나은 것 같습니다. X
SPOILER
OK... I don't speak Korean but... Google Translator FTW!

http://puu.sh/725wy.zip
you are not korean? ok, wait please.
Kashimaria
455 posts
Joined November 2011
Kashimaria
No kds

[iNickel's Easy]

00:20:625 (3) - Don't stack on 00:19:687 (2) this note.
00:21:562 (4) - You should check distance from 00:21:562 (4) to 00:20:625 (3).
00:34:921 (2) - You should check distance from 00:34:921 (2) to 00:33:750 (1).
00:43:125 (2) - I think this timing of note move to 00:42:890 is more fine.
01:31:875 (1) - Why don't you add break time? well, it is no need to fix.
01:35:625 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - this pattern is difficult and too hard for easy, even harder than normal. you should use this rhythm. http://puu.sh/7223Z.jpg
koreapenguin
1,747 posts
Joined March 2012
koreapenguin
General MOD
2014-02-19 23:19 koreapenguin: IRC로할게요
2014-02-19 23:19 Caffe_[Latte]: ;ㅅ;
2014-02-19 23:19 koreapenguin: 난이도전체적으로 레테박스체크해제하시고
2014-02-19 23:19 koreapenguin: 이지에 와이드스크린 해제
2014-02-19 23:20 koreapenguin: 하비님 난이도보시면
2014-02-19 23:20 koreapenguin: 타이밍 겹쳐있음
2014-02-19 23:20 koreapenguin: 하나지워주셈
2014-02-19 23:20 koreapenguin: 인센 카운트다운 해제
2014-02-19 23:20 koreapenguin: 그리고 태그에
2014-02-19 23:20 koreapenguin: 겟난매퍼들 닉네임 추가
2014-02-19 23:20 Caffe_[Latte]: 그런데
2014-02-19 23:20 Caffe_[Latte]: 레터박스는
2014-02-19 23:20 Caffe_[Latte]: 체크빼야되는 이유가 뭔가요??
2014-02-19 23:20 Caffe_[Latte]: 그
2014-02-19 23:20 Caffe_[Latte]: 휴식시간에 뜨느거 아님??
2014-02-19 23:20 koreapenguin: 브레잌따임없잖슴
2014-02-19 23:21 Caffe_[Latte]: ㅇㅎ
2014-02-19 23:21 koreapenguin: 레테박스가뭐냐면
2014-02-19 23:21 koreapenguin: 브레잌때
2014-02-19 23:21 koreapenguin: 위아래 검은거나오는거
2014-02-19 23:21 koreapenguin: 레테박스체크안하고 브레잌보면
2014-02-19 23:21 koreapenguin: 위아래 검은거안나옴
2014-02-19 23:21 Caffe_[Latte]: ㅇㅎ
2014-02-19 23:21 Caffe_[Latte]: 그리고 하비님맵도
2014-02-19 23:21 Caffe_[Latte]: 카운트 해제해야되나여?
2014-02-19 23:21 koreapenguin: 네
2014-02-19 23:21 koreapenguin: 다 해제
2014-02-19 23:23 koreapenguin: 태그에 겟난매퍼분들이름추가
P o M u T a
2,284 posts
Joined December 2010
P o M u T a
[General]
  1. 'Deemo'(already song name) 'Collection' 'Game' (Genre) 'Soundtrack' both tag add better. album name!
  2. add 'piano' tag? more kind!
  3. remove osb. file better. because not use SB.
  4. not need Widescreen Support.
  5. Please remove Countdown check please. (Normal,Hard,Insane)
[iNickel's Easy]
  1. lol... AR5.. really high. I suggest AR-2.
  2. 00:20:625 (3) - really hard to read imo. (x:92 y:198) move better.
[Karia's Normal]
  1. 00:03:750 (1) - i suggest add finish slider head.
  2. 00:18:750 (1) - ^
  3. 00:33:750 (1) - add finish.
  4. 00:52:265 (1,2,4) - add whistle slider head. strong piano part.
  5. 00:57:187 (2,3,4) - ^
  6. 00:58:828 (4) - add whistle slider end.
  7. 01:10:546 (6) - add whistle slider head and end.
  8. 01:49:921 (6) - add whistle slider head and end.
  9. 01:52:500 (1) - add finish (drum)
[Habi's Hard]
  1. 00:24:375 (7) - add NC.
  2. 00:25:312 (1) - remove NC.
  3. 00:26:250 (3) - add NC. this three NCs is set.
  4. 00:30:000 (6) - add NC.
  5. 00:31:406 (1) - remove NC.
  6. 00:31:875 (2) - add NC. this therr NCs is set.
  7. 00:33:750 (1) - add finish slider head. (normal and low volume fit)
  8. 01:33:515 - add 5% volume. really does'nt fit sound.
  9. 01:35:625 (3) - add NC. also, add finish slider head.
[Insane]
  1. 00:03:750 (1) - i suggest add finish slider head.
  2. 01:10:546 (1,3,4) - add whistle?
  3. 01:18:046 (1,3,4,1,3,4,1,3,4,1,3,4,1,3,1) - ^
  4. 01:33:750 (1,3,4,5) - add whistle.
  5. 01:50:625 (1) - add finish slider head.
good luck!
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia

P o M u T a wrote:

[Karia's Normal]
  1. 00:03:750 (1) - i suggest add finish slider head. A bit strange to me. Sorry
  2. 00:18:750 (1) - ^ added
  3. 00:33:750 (1) - add finish. added
  4. 00:52:265 (1,2,4) - add whistle slider head. strong piano part. ok
  5. 00:57:187 (2,3,4) - ^ fixed
  6. 00:58:828 (4) - add whistle slider end. fixed
  7. 01:10:546 (6) - add whistle slider head and end. A bit strange and if I fixed this, I should change the rhythm and arrangement. I'm lazy ww Sorry
  8. 01:49:921 (6) - add whistle slider head and end. ^ for consistency
  9. 01:52:500 (1) - add finish (drum) added on all same others
good luck!
Thanks for modding~

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 14 Saika.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 93750
Countdown: 1
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Saika
TitleUnicode:Saika
Artist:Rabpit
ArtistUnicode:Rabpit
Creator:Caffe_[Latte]
Version:Karia's Normal
Source:DeeMo
Tags:
BeatmapID:368121
BeatmapSetID:146947

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"BG.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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Nickelony
402 posts
Joined January 2013
Nickelony

P o M u T a wrote:

[General]
  1. 'Deemo'(already song name) 'Collection' 'Game' (Genre) 'Soundtrack' both tag add better. album name!
  2. add 'piano' tag? more kind!
  3. remove osb. file better. because not use SB.
  4. not need Widescreen Support.
  5. Please remove Countdown check please. (Normal,Hard,Insane)
[iNickel's Easy]
  1. lol... AR5.. really high. I suggest AR-2. X
  2. 00:20:625 (3) - really hard to read imo. (x:92 y:198) move better. X
Sorry, Nothing changed.
Beige
Elite Mapper
2,191 posts
Joined February 2011
Beige
As your request!

[General]

모든 난이도 태그 통합시켜주세요.

이지노말과 하드와 키아이타임이 다릅니다. 확인해주세요.

letterbox 체크 해제 해주세요.

인세인 드레인타임이 하드보다 적네요. 매핑해주세요.

[Easy]

AR -2

00:20:625 (3) - Move (92,200) is better.

00:33:750 - Some BAT hate part of changed SV speed, also can make confuse some noob player.
Please Consider this mod.

00:52:031 (4) - I know your purpose, but humm... overlap with 00:50:156 (3) - this slider can make confuse.

really...

01:35:625 - humm... I hope this part is not unrankable because blue tick little hard in Easy diff.

Anyway really good mapset.


[Normal]

카운트다운 혼자 되있습니다. 체크 해제 해주세요.

01:45:703 (5) - 그냥 통일 시켜주는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

진짜 잘만드시는 듯...

[Hard]

00:55:546 (7) - 클랩 제거

01:10:546 - 실수로 넣으신건가요? 타이밍 라인 제거

01:20:625 (3) - NC

01:22:500 (1) - NC

01:24:375 (3) - NC

01:28:125 (5) - NC

01:35:625 (3) - NC

02:09:375 (5) - 여기까지 매핑해주시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

ㅇㅅㅇbb

[Insane]

인세인 드레인타임이 하드보다 적네요. 매핑해주세요. 아니면 하비님꺼 없애서 브레이크타임으로...

00:41:250 (1) - 슬라배치가 약간 어색합니다. 이렇게 해보세요!

01:35:625 - 이 부분 부터 클랩 안 넣으셨네요. 넣어주세요.

01:44:062 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 박자 통일 시켜주세요.

02:04:218 (1,2,3,4) - 너무 멉니다... 고려해주시길...

02:09:375 (5) - 여기까지 매핑해주세요.
Little
2,509 posts
Joined November 2012
Little
Hi, modding as requested.

[General]
  1. Make all diffs have the same tags: Karia iNickel HabiHolic Soundtrack Collection piano
  2. Enable letterbox in breaks for all diffs since there are breaks and you don't have a video or storyboard.
  3. Disable widescreen support for all diffs since you don't have a storyboard.
  4. Disable countdown in Karia's Normal for consistency.
[iNickel's Easy]
  1. There's a huge imbalance between the amount of circles versus the amount of sliders in this map. Maybe you intended for it to be this way, but I find it a bit ridiculous, and there are many parts where circles could be appropriate to use, especially in the later part of the song.
  2. I suggest using consistent distance spacing to make it easier for beginners to read. In particular, some lower spacings are confusing, like 00:19:687 (2,3) and 00:04:687 (2,3)
  3. I think AR5 is not appropriate for this map. The BPM is not high, and you use many long sliders, so using AR5 makes this very difficult for beginners to read. I suggest using AR3 or AR4. This is actually a problem because the current AR makes it extremely difficult to read the slider velocity change at 00:32:343 (2,1) since the slidertick on (1) only appears after slider (2) ends. Using lower AR would make this easier to read.
  4. Many of your blankets are not clean, but I won't bother you about it since it's not really a major problem. It's up to you whether you want to make your map look nicer.
  5. 00:21:562 (4,1,2) - The flow here is unnatural and quite awkward to play. In my opinion, you should opt for more natural flow by changing the orientation of (2). Here is a couple of examples: http://puu.sh/73wnw.jpg http://puu.sh/73wpP.jpg You'd have to rearrange the objects after that for spacing.
  6. 00:43:125 (2) - Shift this earlier by 1/2 tick. It matches much better with the music and prevents the player from clicking early. It would put the click on 00:42:890 which matches with your earlier rhythm at 00:36:328 (3) to make it consistent. It would also but the repeat on one of the piano notes. You may need to adjust the shape and position a bit to conserve spacing.
  7. 01:01:406 (1) - I think it would be better to put a circle at 01:01:406 and start the spinner instead at 01:01:875
  8. 01:10:546 (1) - Might confuse the player. The click is on an offbeat, so it might be clicked late, but it's up to you.
  9. 01:35:625 (1,2) - Triplet rhythm is too advanced for Easy diff. If you really want to use them, I'd suggest this rhythm so the player doesn't need to click on a blue tick: http://puu.sh/73x1J.jpg (Same for the rest of this section) I suggest using your rhythm from 01:43:125 (1,2,3,4) starting at 01:35:625 to have a repetitive rhythm for the player to follow and not have clicks on blue ticks.
  10. If you decided not to change that^ then I suggest to change the direction of 01:36:679 (2) for better flow like this: http://puu.sh/73yjI.jpg
  11. 00:03:750 - The green line here is unnecessary. Remove it and set the volume of the red line to 70%.
  12. 00:32:109 - This inheriting section does not affect any hit objects. Remove it.
  13. 01:19:218 - I think it might be nice if you used soft-whistle on beat 4 of each measure to make things a bit more interesting and emphasize piano sound. So add whistle to the white tick before the finish for this section.
  14. 01:37:500 - I think you can add finish on every downbeat or at least the start of each combo (every 2 measures) in this section for the excitement of kiai time.
  15. 01:43:125 (1) - Add finish to head.
  16. 01:45:703 (4) - Whistles instead of claps for consistency.
  17. 00:52:031 - I feel that this slider should be part of the next phrase, so add new combo here and remove it from 00:53:203
[Karia's Normal]
  1. Disable countdown.
  2. 00:25:312 (5) - Might be too hard to read for Normal diff, but it's up to you.
  3. 01:54:375 - Seems like this inheriting section doesn't change anything. Remove it.
  4. 02:02:812 (3) - This slider doesn't match the rhythm of the music. Consider using a 1/2 slider to get the sound on the red tick.
  5. 02:08:906 (4,5) - I think it's better to remove these since the notes after (3) don't change pitch, and just fades out.
Nice map

[Habi's Hard]
  1. Your combos are very inconsistent.
  2. Add kiai time from 01:35:625 to 01:50:625
  3. 00:26:953 (4) - I think you can improve the flow if you move this a bit down and left.
  4. 00:30:000 - This is very suddenly very quiet, and sounds weird when playing. Maybe increase the volume a bit, you can still keep the growing effect.
  5. 01:10:546 - This section is almost inaudible. Volume should be increased. It's just too quiet.
  6. 01:35:625 (3) - Add NC (new combo)
  7. 00:45:000 (6,1) - Swap NC
  8. 00:42:890 (1) - Remove NC
  9. 00:40:312 (1,4) - Swap NC
  10. 00:31:406 (1,2) - Swap NC
  11. 00:24:375 (7,1) - Swap NC
  12. 00:13:125 (6,1) - Swap NC
  13. For the beginning section, I feel that the phrase is only 4 beats long, so you should shorten your combos to that length. So.. Add NC at these times: 00:05:625 00:09:375 00:15:000 00:26:250 00:30:000
[Insane]
  1. Add kiai time from 01:35:625 to 01:50:625
  2. 00:05:390 (8,1) - Flow between these is a little awkward imo. My natural cursor movement when playing would be kind of like this: http://puu.sh/73SYO.png which makes it feel awkward to play. I suggest to change the orientation of the slider like this: http://puu.sh/73T58.jpg You may need to adjust the objects after it.
  3. 00:07:500 (1) - I suggest to rotate it more clockwise like this: http://puu.sh/73Tb0.jpg It flows better imo.
  4. 00:16:640 (1,2,3) - Try this: http://puu.sh/73Tge.jpg I think it flows nice and is more fun to play.
  5. 01:01:406 (5,1) - I think you should make the distance between these larger. It feels weird to play now.
  6. 01:35:625 - In this section, I think you need to establish the rhythm in sliders first to allow the player to feel it before you put it in circles. So I think you should change 01:36:562 (2,3,4,5) into two 1/4 sliders. Same with 01:38:437 (2,3,4,5) This way, you can introduce the rhythm to the player before they actually have to click all the beats, so you can use the two circles for the patterns at 01:40:312 (2,3,4,5) which is already that way, and change 01:42:187 (3,4) into circles.
  7. 01:44:062 (2,3,4) - Since (3) is strong, I think you should replace (3,4) with a slider. (5) is strong, so you can leave the other triplet the way it is now.
  8. 01:55:312 (1,2,3,4,1) - Space these out more. It's easy to click (2) early thinking it's 1/4
  9. 00:40:781 (8) - Remove clap. It doesn't fit well imo, and you didn't do it at 00:46:406 (8)
  10. 00:40:781 (8,9) - Add whistle for both to go with piano sound?
  11. 00:46:406 (8,9) - Same here
  12. 01:31:875 - Add a green line here to lower volume a bit. The hitsound is obnoxiously loud.
  13. 01:43:125 (1) - Finish on head?
  14. 01:58:125 (1) - Add finish on head.
  15. 01:57:187 (3) - Add NC (new combo) for consistency with the other patterns in this section.
  16. 00:44:296 (1,4) - Swap NC
  17. 00:42:890 (5) - Add NC
  18. 00:39:375 (4) - Add NC
  19. 00:37:500 (4,1) - Swap NC
  20. 00:35:390 (4,1) - Swap NC
  21. 00:33:750 (5,1) - Swap NC
  22. 00:26:953 (1) - Remove NC
  23. 00:17:812 (1) - Remove NC
  24. 00:15:703 (1) - Remove NC
  25. 00:13:828 (1) - Remove NC
  26. 00:12:890 (1,3) - Swap NC for consistency with 00:22:265 (7,1)
Good luck!
Caffe_[Latte]
112 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Caffe_[Latte]

CS16 wrote:

Insane

]Add kiai time from 01:35:625 to 01:50:625
00:05:390 (8,1) - Flow between these is a little awkward imo. My natural cursor movement when playing would be kind of like this: http://puu.sh/73SYO.png which makes it feel awkward to play. I suggest to change the orientation of the slider like this: http://puu.sh/73T58.jpg You may need to adjust the objects after it.
00:07:500 (1) - I suggest to rotate it more clockwise like this: http://puu.sh/73Tb0.jpg It flows better imo.
00:16:640 (1,2,3) - Try this: http://puu.sh/73Tge.jpg I think it flows nice and is more fun to play.
01:01:406 (5,1) - I think you should make the distance between these larger. It feels weird to play now.
01:35:625 - In this section, I think you need to establish the rhythm in sliders first to allow the player to feel it before you put it in circles. So I think you should change 01:36:562 (2,3,4,5) into two 1/4 sliders. Same with 01:38:437 (2,3,4,5) This way, you can introduce the rhythm to the player before they actually have to click all the beats, so you can use the two circles for the patterns at 01:40:312 (2,3,4,5) which is already that way, and change 01:42:187 (3,4) into circles.
01:44:062 (2,3,4) - Since (3) is strong, I think you should replace (3,4) with a slider. (5) is strong, so you can leave the other triplet the way it is now.
01:55:312 (1,2,3,4,1) - Space these out more. It's easy to click (2) early thinking it's 1/4
00:40:781 (8) - Remove clap. It doesn't fit well imo, and you didn't do it at 00:46:406 (8)
00:40:781 (8,9) - Add whistle for both to go with piano sound?
00:46:406 (8,9) - Same here
01:31:875 - Add a green line here to lower volume a bit. The hitsound is obnoxiously loud.
01:43:125 (1) - Finish on head?
01:58:125 (1) - Add finish on head.
01:57:187 (3) - Add NC (new combo) for consistency with the other patterns in this section.
00:44:296 (1,4) - Swap NC
00:42:890 (5) - Add NC
00:39:375 (4) - Add NC
00:37:500 (4,1) - Swap NC
00:35:390 (4,1) - Swap NC
00:33:750 (5,1) - Swap NC
00:26:953 (1) - Remove NC
00:17:812 (1) - Remove NC
00:15:703 (1) - Remove NC
00:13:828 (1) - Remove NC
00:12:890 (1,3) - Swap NC for consistency with 00:22:265 (7,1)

Applied all.

Thanks for wonderful mod XDD

白 wrote:

Insane

인세인 드레인타임이 하드보다 적네요. 매핑해주세요. 아니면 하비님꺼 없애서 브레이크타임으로... 딱히 상관은 없어서 수정하지 않았습니다.

00:41:250 (1) - 슬라배치가 약간 어색합니다. 이렇게 해보세요!

01:35:625 - 이 부분 부터 클랩 안 넣으셨네요. 넣어주세요.

01:44:062 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 박자 통일 시켜주세요.

02:04:218 (1,2,3,4) - 너무 멉니다... 고려해주시길...

02:09:375 (5) - 여기까지 매핑해주세요.

all applied except 1

감사합니다 ^^
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia

W h i t e wrote:

As your request!

[Normal]

카운트다운 혼자 되있습니다. 체크 해제 해주세요. fixed

01:45:703 (5) - 그냥 통일 시켜주는게 좋을 것 같습니다. 뭔가 지루한감이 좀 있는것 같아요.

진짜 잘만드시는 듯... 에,,잘 못만들어요 ㅋㅋ ㅜ

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Hi, modding as requested.

[Karia's Normal]
  1. Disable countdown. Already fixed :D
  2. 00:25:312 (5) - Might be too hard to read for Normal diff, but it's up to you. Keep about this. I'll consider it after I get more modding about this.
  3. 01:54:375 - Seems like this inheriting section doesn't change anything. Remove it. fixed
  4. 02:02:812 (3) - This slider doesn't match the rhythm of the music. Consider using a 1/2 slider to get the sound on the red tick. fixed
  5. 02:08:906 (4,5) - I think it's better to remove these since the notes after (3) don't change pitch, and just fades out. Same as above. Get more moddings, then I'll consider this.
Nice map :3

Good luck!
Thanks for moddings~

SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 14 Saika.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 93750
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Saika
TitleUnicode:Saika
Artist:Rabpit
ArtistUnicode:Rabpit
Creator:Caffe_[Latte]
Version:Karia's Normal
Source:DeeMo
Tags:Karia iNickel HabiHolic Soundtrack Collection piano
BeatmapID:368121
BeatmapSetID:146947

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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428,308,26250,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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Nickelony
402 posts
Joined January 2013
Nickelony
Fixed almost everything.

http://puu.sh/74qZo.zip
-[-dummiexx-]-
20 posts
Joined August 2013
-[-dummiexx-]-
Easy
No problems found :)

Normal
No problems found :)

Hard
No problems found :)

Insane
This is my opinion but I think the AP is too high.

00:26:250 Remove the tenth note.
00:47:812 Set the fifth red note to a new combo. (for it to look nice c:)

I suck.
Reol
998 posts
Joined September 2012
Reol
Hi, Caffe Latte! as your req :D

스크린 샷은 예시로만 사용됩니다. 꼭 똑같이 수정하실 필요는 없습니다.
커스텀 히트 사운드를 쓰지 않으신다면 굳이 커스텀을 붙여둘 필요는 없다고 생각합니다. 전부 디폴트로 돌리셔도 될 것 같네요.

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

[General]
AIMod 체크해주세요.

[iNickel's Easy]

01:34:687 - 01:35:156 - add a note here? feels like really empty. I think add a slider(or circle) is better.

[Karia's Normal]

00:25:312 (5) - 갑자기 두번이나 리버스가 되니 약간 혼동이 올 수도 있을 것 같습니다. 다른 것으로 바꾸는 것이 좋을지도...

[Habi's Hard]

00:09:375 (4) - 약간 곡선의 느낌을 주는 것이 어떨까요? This

01:11:250 - 이 부분 부터는 다시 사운드가 돌아오는게 좋을 것 같네요.
01:18:046 - 그리고 이 부분은 똑같이 줄이고, 다시 01:18:750 - 여기서 돌아오는 그런 식으로 가는게 좋을 것 같네요.

01:35:625 (3) - NC? 뉴콤이 들어가는게 좋을 것 같아요. 음악의 느낌이 확 바뀌는 곳이라서 말이죠.

01:47:343 (2) - 다른 부분하고 똑같이 1.0 디스턴스가 좋을 것 같습니다. 위치도 x.296, y.108 정도에 두셔서 약간 동선이 어긋나는 느낌도 좋겠네요.

Good :3

[Insane]

00:08:554 (6,7) - 동선이 너무 이상하게 느껴집니다. 이런 정도로 고쳐주시는게 좋을 것 같습니다.

00:36:562 (2,3) - 약간 곡선으로 바꿔주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. This

01:01:875 (1,2) - 위와 동일합니다. 약간 곡선의 느낌으로 가는게 좋을 것 같습니다. This

01:03:750 - 01:10:546 - 이 부분의 브레이크 타임은 어쩔수 없다고 치더라도 01:11:250 - 01:18:046 - 이 부분의 브레이크 타임은 정말로 채워주시면 좋겠습니다. 너무 허전한 느낌이 듭니다. 개인적으로는 두 부분 모두 채워주시면 좋겠습니다만...

01:50:625 (1) - 이 슬라이더의 경우 01:50:859 - 이부분부터 슬라이더에 '약간 위로 올라가는 듯한 느낌의' 모양을 넣어주시면 좋을 것 같습니다. 전체적으로 사운드가 끌리는 느낌은 아니라고 생각되서입니다.

01:54:375 (1) - 이 슬라이더의 경우도 01:54:609 - 여기서부터 '약간 아래로 내려가는 듯한 느낌의' 모양을 넣어주시면 좋겠네요.

01:58:125 (1) - 이 슬라이더는 01:50:625 (1) - 이 슬라이더에서 말씀드린 것과 일치합니다.

02:01:875 (1) - 이 슬라이더는 01:54:375 (1) - 이 슬라이더에서 말씀드린 것과 일치합니다.

02:07:500 - 이 부분부터 소리가 점점 줄어들게 하면 좋을 것 같습니다. 02:07:968 - 02:08:437 - 02:08:906 - 02:09:375 - 차례대로 말이죠.


모딩은 이걸로 끝입니다. 도움이 되셨으면 좋겠네요 :3
Good Luck!
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia

[ HalLoWeeN ] wrote:

Hi, Caffe Latte! as your req :D

스크린 샷은 예시로만 사용됩니다. 꼭 똑같이 수정하실 필요는 없습니다.
커스텀 히트 사운드를 쓰지 않으신다면 굳이 커스텀을 붙여둘 필요는 없다고 생각합니다. 전부 디폴트로 돌리셔도 될 것 같네요. 이건 저만 커스텀이니 제 난이도를 말씀하시는듯 하네요.. 커스텀힛사는 사용하고 있어요 ㅜ

[Karia's Normal]

00:25:312 (5) - 갑자기 두번이나 리버스가 되니 약간 혼동이 올 수도 있을 것 같습니다. 다른 것으로 바꾸는 것이 좋을지도... 이부분은 왠만하면 그냥 두고 싶네요..일단 지켜봐야겠어요

모딩은 이걸로 끝입니다. 도움이 되셨으면 좋겠네요 :3
Good Luck!
Thanks for modding~
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Not really a mod, just giving some assistance regarding the last part's sliders (especially the four 1.25x slider arts) + some (not all) streams as well on the ending part (:

Forgive me for that 4th one orz, it's really made without inspiration ._.

SPOILER
22:50 Caffe_[Latte]: NIVA
22:50 Caffe_[Latte]: Can you help me just a minute??
22:50 Niva: umm...
22:51 Niva: on what o.o
22:52 Caffe_[Latte]: twisted slider shape
22:52 Niva: oh...
22:52 Niva: okay...
22:54 *Caffe_[Latte]  is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/368121 Rabpit - Saika]
22:54 Caffe_[Latte]: Insane...
22:54 Niva: ooh ok2 downloading first
22:54 Caffe_[Latte]: Last part needs many twisted slider
22:54 Caffe_[Latte]: :D
22:58 *Niva  is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/363982 Rabpit - Saika [Insane]]
22:58 Niva: yes, you've told me previously o.o
22:58 Caffe_[Latte]: :)
22:59 Niva: ah, what is the example of a 'twisted slider' you want? o.o
23:00 Caffe_[Latte]: um...
23:00 Caffe_[Latte]: propely fit with music
23:02 Niva: 01:50:625 (1) - something like this?
23:02 Niva: imo speeding the slider a bit will help :D
23:03 Caffe_[Latte]: how about shape??
23:03 Niva: experimenting currenlty
23:15 Caffe_[Latte]: I really wonder how can you make map really nice
23:28 Niva: uhh idk http://tny.cz/f9becaed
23:29 Caffe_[Latte]: :3?
23:29 Caffe_[Latte]: oh
23:29 Niva: (new diff called Insane2, btw)
23:30 Caffe_[Latte]: XDDDDDD
23:30 Niva: idk, the 4th one is really made without inspiration ._.
23:31 Niva: (no need to kudosu btw, just mention in the map's description something like 'thanks to niva for the help in the 1.25x part' xD)
23:31 Niva: hope you liked it, though~
Autumn
501 posts
Joined October 2011
Autumn
From req~

Karia's Normal

  1. 00:50:625 (3) - Starts at 00:50:390 - might be better: http://puu.sh/7792K.jpg

Habi's Hard

Nice diff
  1. 01:03:281 (10) - NC here seems better )
  2. 01:52:500 (1) - Drag it to 01:52:851 - ? http://puu.sh/778W6.jpg

Insane


  • Add notes~
  1. 00:05:976 - Add a note on the next slider's head
  2. 00:09:726 - ^
  3. 01:56:601 - ^

    Try Jumps!
  4. 00:35:390 (5,6,7,8) - http://puu.sh/777KM.jpg
  5. 00:37:500 (1,2,3,4,5) - http://puu.sh/777Zg.jpg
  6. 00:40:546 (4,5) - Ctrl+G
  7. 00:42:656 - Add a note then ↓
    00:42:187 (3,4,5,1) - http://puu.sh/7785x.jpg
  8. 00:44:062 - Add a note on X=264 Y=336
GL! Star~
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia

Autumn wrote:

From req~

Karia's Normal

  1. 00:50:625 (3) - Starts at 00:50:390 - might be better: http://puu.sh/7792K.jpg a bit strange for me. Sorry
GL! Star~
Thanks for modding~
Caffe_[Latte]
112 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Caffe_[Latte]
Autumn - Thanks for star :D and nice jump suggestion.

Halloween - thanks for mod. applied all
Main Black
110 posts
Joined October 2011
Main Black
안녕하세요
짧아서 죄송..

[Habi's Hard]

01:35:625 (3) - NC

.. 제 수준에서 보면 엄청난 프로급 수준의 맵이네여; 잘못된곳이 안보여 ㅠㅠ..
Sonnyc
7,753 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
iNickel's Easy:

00:32:343 (2) - Consider adding a clap at the head.
00:41:484 (1,2) - WTF Fix jump please.
00:45:468 (1,1,2) - Please take a look, and make the spacing same. 0.8x will do it.

Karia's Normal:

00:33:281 (6) - 여기 힛사는 시작 클랩 - 끝 무음 이 어울릴것 같네요.
00:33:984 (2,3,4,5) - 이 부분은 모든 박자에 휘슬 있는게 어울릴것 같아요. 큰 소음도 안될 것이구요.
00:55:078 (5) - 끝에 휘슬?
01:26:250 (1) - 여기의 피니시 소리는 좀 이질적인것 같습니다. 굳이 어울리게 하려면 2/1 박자마다 해서 01:27:187 (3,5,6) 에도 넣는게 나을듯하고, 아니면 그냥 없애주시는게,,
01:49:921 (6) - 힛사 없어서 너무 무난해 보입니다. 리버스에 휘슬이라도 넣는게 어떨까요?
01:51:562 (3) - 여기 머리 힛사는 클랩으로 설정하는게 더 어울릴듯 합니다. 01:52:500 (1) 등의 시작음이 드럼 피니시이고 이것을 동일하게 계속 사용하니 다양성 면에서 좀 아쉬움을 주는듯 하네요. 01:53:437 (3) 등등 유사 구간 모두 수정바랍니다.
01:57:421 - 여기에 필히 뉴콤을 가진 노트를 추가해 주시기 바랍니다. 안그러면 01:57:656 (3)가 동떨어져 있고, 01:56:250 (1)의 콤보가 따라가는 박자는 드럼인데 비해 노말 특성상 01:57:539에 노트를 넣기 곤란하여 피아노로 리듬을 갈아타야 하기 때문입니다.
02:08:906 (4) - 뉴콤?
02:10:781 - 개인적으로 끝나는 박자가 좀 애매한거 같은데 여기에 노트 하나 넣는거도 나쁘지 않을듯 합니다.

Habi's Hard:

-- 키아이 비선호 하셔도 fountain 정도는 넣어도 좋을듯요.

00:24:375 (7,3) - 여기 뉴콤 틀어진듯 합니다. 00:25:312 (1) 뉴콤 풀어주시고 ~~
00:30:000 (6,1,2) - ^
00:33:281 (4) - 개인적으로 이 부분에서 드럼으로 음이 00:31:875 (1,2,3) 과 달리 변하고 있기 때문에 동일한 패턴으로 두신 점이 효과가 떨어져 보입니다. 이제 와서 패턴 바꾸긴 곤란할테니 뉴콤 제안.
00:34:453 (3) - 개인적으로 이 슬라이더 모양이 좀 아쉽네요. 00:51:328 (6) 처럼 바꾸면 더 좋겠지만 두셔도 뭐 상관없겠지요.
01:01:875 (7) - 뉴콤
01:19:687 (2,4) - 01:18:750 (1,3)가 대칭 패턴인 만큼 저 직각 슬라이더들도 신경써 주시기 바랍니다.
01:22:500 (5) - HP 부담스럽습니다. 뉴콤 해주세요.
01:53:437 (3,1) - 1/4 연타 슬라이더 이후 점프 패턴은 이거 뿐인데 간격 줄이는거 고려해 주시기 바랍니다. ctrl+G?
02:03:750 (1,2) - 그냥 간격이 부담스럽다는 제 의견 던집니다.

Insane:

00:11:484 (2) - 노말 휘슬?
00:34:687 (3) - (344,240) 어때요? (1,2) 흐름 잘 형성할것 같은데,, 그리고 이후 00:35:390 (5,6,7)와도 잘 상응할듯 싶고.
00:40:781 (5) - (386,234) 두셔서 꺾이는 흐름 고려해 보시길.
00:47:343 (1) - 콤보 해제해주세요. 간격 변화나 음악 변화가 없어서 미적으로 보기 안좋은듯 합니다.
00:54:140 (5) - 현재 위치 보다는 (396,228) 쪽에 두는게 흐름상 옳게 여겨집니다.
01:02:343 (2) - 시작에 클랩.
01:03:281 (5) - Additions 드럼으로 바꿔주세요.
01:30:000 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 음..... 개인적으로 연타 배치가 맘에 안듭,, (runs) 특히 01:31:054 (2) 가 이전과 겹쳐서 매우 신경쓰이네요
01:42:656 (6,1) - 리버스 안보입니다. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1361594 랭크 가능하다고는 해도 꼭 수정 부탁합니다.
01:46:992 (2) - 여기는 삭제해주시는게 기존 박자와 통할듯요
01:54:375 (1) - 수정 필히 해주세요. 독창적인 모양 보기 좋지만 슬라이더 경로가 시작점과 붙어있어서 읽기 어렵습니다.
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
늦음 ㅋㅋ ㅈㅅ여

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lolia
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lolia

Sonnyc wrote:

Karia's Normal:

00:33:281 (6) - 여기 힛사는 시작 클랩 - 끝 무음 이 어울릴것 같네요. fixed
00:33:984 (2,3,4,5) - 이 부분은 모든 박자에 휘슬 있는게 어울릴것 같아요. 큰 소음도 안될 것이구요. 전 뭔가 좀 어색하네요..
00:55:078 (5) - 끝에 휘슬? 시작부분에 넣을게요
01:26:250 (1) - 여기의 피니시 소리는 좀 이질적인것 같습니다. 굳이 어울리게 하려면 2/1 박자마다 해서 01:27:187 (3,5,6) 에도 넣는게 나을듯하고, 아니면 그냥 없애주시는게,, fixed
01:49:921 (6) - 힛사 없어서 너무 무난해 보입니다. 리버스에 휘슬이라도 넣는게 어떨까요? fixed
01:51:562 (3) - 여기 머리 힛사는 클랩으로 설정하는게 더 어울릴듯 합니다. 01:52:500 (1) 등의 시작음이 드럼 피니시이고 이것을 동일하게 계속 사용하니 다양성 면에서 좀 아쉬움을 주는듯 하네요. 01:53:437 (3) 등등 유사 구간 모두 수정바랍니다. 이부분이랑 01:59:062 (3) - 여기만 클랩으로 넣을게요
01:57:421 - 여기에 필히 뉴콤을 가진 노트를 추가해 주시기 바랍니다. 안그러면 01:57:656 (3)가 동떨어져 있고, 01:56:250 (1)의 콤보가 따라가는 박자는 드럼인데 비해 노말 특성상 01:57:539에 노트를 넣기 곤란하여 피아노로 리듬을 갈아타야 하기 때문입니다. fixed
02:08:906 (4) - 뉴콤? 음...여긴 뉴콤이 없어도 괜찮을것 같아요
02:10:781 - 개인적으로 끝나는 박자가 좀 애매한거 같은데 여기에 노트 하나 넣는거도 나쁘지 않을듯 합니다. 끝부분은 저도 애매해서 잘 모르겠네요ㅋㅋ ㅜ
Thanks for modding~

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Nickelony
402 posts
Joined January 2013
Nickelony
Fixed Sonnyc's mod!

http://puu.sh/78Dqe.zip
Kibbleru
osu! Alumni
5,844 posts
Joined August 2013
Kibbleru
M4M from ur queue

[Insane]
00:04:921 (7) - (nazi) move the middle slider point oh grid to the left (imperfect blankets just bother me :/)
uhg the whistle sounds bother me :/ im sure u can find better hitsounds. My suggestion, you put in some custom hitsounds
00:16:640 (1,2,3) - maybe have these blanket 00:17:343 (5)?
00:26:718 (3) - (more nazi) move this up 1 grid
00:34:453 (2,3,4) - how come the spacing is different than on 00:35:390 (5,6,7)
00:48:046 (1) - i suggest this for better flow from (8) and into (1)
SPOILER
00:48:046 (1,1) - not parallel
01:03:046 (4) - move to (196,340) for better symmetry
01:19:921 (1,2,3,4) - why not just make it the same as the previous one?
SPOILER
01:26:718 (2) - ctrl g
01:27:656 (4) - ^
01:42:187 (3,4) - ^ so its similar to 01:40:312 (2,3)
01:41:250 (1) - make this curve up instead of down, better flow
01:54:375 (1) - i don't think slider ends are allowed to overlap

[Habi's Hard]
00:07:500 (1) - these type of blankets just bother me so imma point it out anyway, move middle slider point up 1
01:45:703 (3) - ^
00:42:656 (7,3) - have the end of (3) blanket (7)?
01:26:250 (1) - ctrl g?
01:27:187 (3) - ^
01:47:578 (3,1) - blanket is a bit off o-o

[Karia's Normal]
00:05:156 (2,3) - ehh the distance snap makes these kind of weird overlaps. usually its fine but tbh, this one just barely overlaps, looks a bit weird >>
^should be fine though
00:25:312 (5) - this would confuse newer players, i suggest u put a circle on the drum beat then a 1/2 reverse slider for the insturment
00:31:875 (3,4) - avoid stacking on easier diffs
01:26:250 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:04:687 (3,2) - stack :3?

[iNickel's Easy]
00:20:625 (3) - how bout something like this? the way you have it before, it looked like you were trying to blanket (4)
SPOILER
00:23:437 (2,3) - blanket better? o-o
00:50:156 (3) - ctrl g? would make better flow
01:26:250 (1) - more than 1 reverse WILL confuse beginners and this is the easy difficulty
01:28:125 (2) - ^
01:45:937 (4) - V ? (ofc then move (1) accordingly)
SPOILER
Bara-
11,955 posts
Joined April 2013
Bara-
Good map, but first: Use custom hitsounds. You will want to use the one in Maware! Setsugetsuka, or Gigantic O.T.N.
You can yake them from my map if you want ;)
It is Harada Hitomi, Kayano Ai & Ogura Yui - Maware! Setsugetsuka
Ok, now, back to your map with the testplays ;)

Why, Easy - 'A', Normal 'SS', Hard 'S', Insane 'B', what the heck?
Easy
Kind of repetitive, instead of [ctrl] + [d], than [ctrl] + [>], try to use this as little as possible. Oh, avoid slowdowns and speedups in Easy/Normal, unless it is clear, like a kiai starts, don't do a sudden slowdown, which is where I got my 100
Normal
Hard
HP - 1, I did something in a slider, so I got a 100, and then I got
Insane
Maybe change HP to 6, I screwed up at the stream, missed 2, and almost got to 0 HP
Those long sliders are AWESOME, I LOVE THOSE SHAPES!

PM me if the links don't work
Good map, and good luck!
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
SPOILER
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: 14 Saika.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 93750
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 52617
DistanceSpacing: 0.5
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Saika
TitleUnicode:Saika
Artist:Rabpit
ArtistUnicode:Rabpit
Creator:Caffe_[Latte]
Version:Habi's Hard
Source:DeeMo
Tags:Karia iNickel HabiHolic Soundtrack Collection piano
BeatmapID:371377
BeatmapSetID:146947

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples
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lolia
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lolia

Kibbleru wrote:

M4M from ur queue

[Karia's Normal]
00:05:156 (2,3) - ehh the distance snap makes these kind of weird overlaps. usually its fine but tbh, this one just barely overlaps, looks a bit weird >> np IMO :D
^should be fine though
00:25:312 (5) - this would confuse newer players, i suggest u put a circle on the drum beat then a 1/2 reverse slider for the insturment I want to keep the current one. Sorry
00:31:875 (3,4) - avoid stacking on easier diffs np in Normal diff IMO. Sorry
01:26:250 (1,2,3,4) - ^ ^
01:04:687 (3,2) - stack :3? This is a just center note. Sorry
Thanks for modding~
10crystalmask01
10crystalmask01
Ello, mod from queue 8-)
[General]
*Volume of objects in non-kai times are a bit too loud imo. Try decreasing it to 50 %- 40%?
Otherwise, I think using soft as the default sound of your objects may be better.
[iNickel's Easy]
00:03:750 - I don't really see the point for adding a green timing point here?
00:48:750 (1,2) - Try not to stack in an Easy diff.
01:31:875 (1) - Finish here doesn't sound quite right.
01:41:250 (2) - Why not blanket this slider with 01:39:375 (1) - ?

It shouldn't affect neither the previous nor the next note, since 01:43:125 (1) - is on the same spot as 01:39:375 (1) -
01:43:593 (2) - Make it shaped in a way so that it does blanket 01:41:250 (2) - 's tail, and its' tail can be blanketed by 01:45:000 (3) -
[Karia's Normal]
00:13:593 (4,1) - Stack?
01:00:000 (1) - A little more curve in this guy, so that it can blanket 01:00:937 (2) - 's ripple perfectly.
[Habi's Hard]
00:05:625 (6) - NC
00:09:375 (4) - ^
00:13:125 (6) - ^ Instead of 00:14:062 (1) -
00:15:000 (5) - NC
00:48:750 (1) - A little more curve in this guy, so it can blanket 00:49:453 (2) - 's head more better.
01:25:781 (3) - Is not centered properly on the vertical axis.
01:35:625 - 02:05:625 No kai time here?
01:47:578 (3) - Move it's tail point a bit higher.
[Insane]
00:48:046 (1) - Add finish on the reverse.
01:03:750 (9) - NC for a little emphasis?
01:59:765 (6,2) - Any way you can move these 2 sliders apart, to get rid of that small crowding there?

Nice mapset. Take a star :lol:
Good luck!
lolia
1,356 posts
Joined May 2012
lolia

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Ello, mod from queue 8-)
[General]
*Volume of objects in non-kai times are a bit too loud imo. Try decreasing it to 50 %- 40%?
Otherwise, I think using soft as the default sound of your objects may be better.

[Karia's Normal]
00:13:593 (4,1) - Stack? Hmm..a bit strange flow to me, sorry
01:00:000 (1) - A little more curve in this guy, so that it can blanket 01:00:937 (2) - 's ripple perfectly. fixed

Nice mapset. Take a star :lol:
Good luck!
Thanks for modding~

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pw384
2,286 posts
Joined January 2012
pw384
woops, mod req via in-game PM >_<

mod info:
Black: Suggestions.
Bule: Emphasis suggestions.
Red: Unrankable stuffs. Must be fixed.


[Insane]
  1. Generally a good map. I'm fond of the hitsound and some interesting sliders in this diff :D
  2. 00:05:976 (2,3) - you may need to move both of them to x=208, y=216. This change will make the spacing between 1 and 2 a little lower, which will be easier to read. And also, it can make a blanket with 1 and 3. And this will avoid the overlap of 3 and 7
  3. 00:08:671 (7) - I suggest moving it to x=452,y=148 (move it when the Distance Snap is disabled or the border of the playing field will block it), and the stream will be smoother.
  4. 00:09:726 (2,3) - the same. Moving it a bit closer will be better
  5. 00:21:328 - Whistle here?
  6. 00:30:117 (2) - 00:30:351 (4) - 00:30:585 (2) - 00:31:054 (2) - 00:31:288 (4) - 00:31:523 (2) - remove whistle here? there's no need to add whistle to all the notes, or it sounds quite loud. I find it sounds better if you remove the six whistles
  7. 01:00:937 (3,4) - Ctrl+G and the flow will be good
  8. 01:03:281 (5) - Normal clap is better imo bcz it fits your universal hitsound choice :D
  9. 01:10:546 (1,2,3,4) - (nazi) you can make it a parallelogram by moving 4 to x=228,y=104
  10. 01:18:046 (1,2,3,4) - (nazi) ^ , and you need to move 01:18:046 (1) - to x=124,y=172
  11. 01:19:921 (1) - (nazi) ^, move it to x=388, y=212
  12. 01:50:625 (1) - 01:54:375 (1) - 01:58:125 (1) - 02:01:875 (1) - Nice!
  13. 02:05:859 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - I think using Soft hitsound here will be better bcz Normal is too loud and out of the song. If you accept this, you have to add some whistles to make it more awesome!


[Habi's Hard]
  1. 00:17:812 (3,4,5) - oh it looks bad when playing bcz of the automatically stack. Consider changing it
  2. 01:29:531 (6,7) - move them a bit further bcz the spacing is too low here. I suggest at least 1.75x spacing to fit the song better
  3. 02:03:750 (1) - Since it's hard diff, the spacing before and after the note will fool many players ;w; so I suggest you should enlarge the spacing between 02:02:812 (3,1) - or shrink the spacing between 02:03:750 (1,2) -
  4. Nothing to say. Quite neat diff. Good job :D


[Karia's Normal]
  1. Nothing. Solid map. :3


[iNickel's Easy]
  1. Check the Tag and the letterbox/wide-screen-support. It conflicts with other diff which is unrankable
  2. 00:50:156 (3) - Ctrl+G, and the flow will be much better
  3. 02:01:875 (1) - the blanket between 02:00:937 (4,1) - can be better. Such as:
    Picture

  4. Nothing else to say. Solid map. :D

Well I'll shoot a star if I have a kd..
Quite nice mapset

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EDIT: ok, starred
Last edited by pw384 , edited 1 time in total.
Nickelony
402 posts
Joined January 2013
Nickelony
I'm sorry... I'll fix these mods later. :/
HabiHolic
5,372 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
SPOILER
osu file format v12

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48,84,76640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Nickelony
402 posts
Joined January 2013
Nickelony
I'm soo sorry for let you wait. School is killing me D:

http://puu.sh/7l9q0.zip
Ringating
717 posts
Joined August 2013
Ringating
From my bg mod queue, I have finished modding ur bg. The artist put a signature in the bottom left corner, so I made a version with it and a version without it:
version with artist's signature
version without artist's signature

changes I made include:
- got rid of the letterboxing
- upped the resolution
- softened similar colors
- increased sharpness

you probably know how to save it, but if you have any problems free to pm me ;) and thanks for being my first mod :D
Caffe_[Latte]
112 posts
Joined November 2012
Topic Starter
Caffe_[Latte]

Ringating wrote:

From my bg mod queue, I have finished modding ur bg. The artist put a signature in the bottom left corner, so I made a version with it and a version without it:
version with artist's signature
version without artist's signature

changes I made include:
- got rid of the letterboxing
- upped the resolution
- softened similar colors
- increased sharpness

you probably know how to save it, but if you have any problems free to pm me ;) and thanks for being my first mod :D

Thanks :3
wa_
237 posts
Joined May 2012
wa_
Hm. Sorry for delay... orz

[Easy]
(I hope Nickel will be happy if he get suggestions in Polish~)

00:48:750 (1,2) - Hm. Unrankable? Spróbuj tak:
SPOILER
00:59:765 (1) - Przedłuż do 01:00:937, powinno być bardziej przejrzyście dla początkujących graczy.
01:56:250 (2) - Spróbuj ładniej przykryć poprzedni slider. Na przykład: środkowy punkt (136,212), końcowy punkt: (216,224)
01:57:656 (3,1) - Podobnie jak przy 00:48:750 (1,2)

[Normal]

00:46:640 (3) - This slider might be hard to not experienced players. What about to change it into circle at 00:46:875?

[Hard]

00:56:953 (2,3) - Suggestion: Move this pattern to (432,192) and rotate slider by 15-16 degrees anti-clokwise for better flow and transition to next slider.
01:37:500 (1,2,3) - This rhythm is just repeated in next patterns. Dunno if you consider it, but you can improve it, cause difficulty in overall is really good :)
01:45:468 (2,3) - Add blanket here?

[Insane]

00:34:218 -Place circle here?
00:34:921 (4) - Hitsound suggestion: I think soft-finish would fit better here, maybe try to use both hitsounds? You can also do it at 00:36:796 - 00:38:671 - 00:40:546 - 00:46:171
01:22:265 (3,4) - Try to rotate these circles by 10 degrees anti-clockwise with selection centre as origin. This way you can avoid overlaps in this pattern.
01:30:468 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Awww, this part of stream is so hard with AR8 :3
01:34:687 - Add note with normal hitsound?
01:35:625 (1,2,3,4) - Take a look in whole Kiai Time: You used almost only same rhythm which makes this part repetitive. Try to make more complex patterns with circles and sliders. This song gives a lot of possibilities to make rhythm better. For example: (You don't have to change it if you think current patterns are ok)
SPOILER


etc etc

Nice maps~
Aurele
osu! Alumni
7,408 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
[Normal]
02:06:562 (1,2,3,4,5) - This actually feel unneeded. Feel free to delete these.


Look at the mod above, and poke me back.
Nickelony
402 posts
Joined January 2013
Nickelony
Fixed: http://puu.sh/80NeX.zip
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