Garven wrote:

The remap looks much better!

[Insane]
00:25:800 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - After these 1/4s, this spacing was rather tricky fixed
02:47:800 (3,4) - I'm not so keen on this jump though. Try to have the flow like what you did at 01:27:400 (1,2,3) - fixed

Garven wrote:

The remap looks much better! @w@ thanks

[Insane]
00:25:800 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - After these 1/4s, this spacing was rather tricky ok, I adjusted spacing so it was easier to read
02:47:800 (3,4) - I'm not so keen on this jump though. Try to have the flow like what you did at 01:27:400 (1,2,3) - alright, flow should be better now and the jump should be easier to read

Garven wrote:

Garven wrote:

Atrue wrote:

Hello~
From random bubble check

[Notion]
This color means it is a suggestion. I prefer to do this, but you can either choose to fix or not.
And this color means some issue to fix I think.

[General]
Good map and a little suggestions here.
Quite a successful remap, a lot better than what I last time saw. thank you ;w;
Please add Video in Kibbleru's Easy. lol for some reason video always disappears in kibbleru's easy, anyways I added back now
Just pointing out something worth saying.

[Kibbleru's Easy]
General
Good diff~

[Normal]
General
Good diff, especially on beats.

[Hard]
General
Just some minor stuff.
Placement
00:26:200 (4) - Maybe just make the note not stacked is better for reading. Example:

SPOILER

unstacked
01:07:400 (3,4) - Also here the stack is not recommended, because the rhythm here is really not as other parts of the music and stacking may lead to puzzling in first try. Example:

SPOILER

unstacked
01:19:400 (1,2,3) - Ah.. Also stacking here is not recommended. This time is because the music is quite flowing and the stop on the note would be a little strange imo. Example:

SPOILER

unstacked

[Insane]
General
Overall fine~ but some distance is still need to be more controlled. made some spacing between a few jumps consistent
Placement
01:27:200 (7) - Here the note needs a jump to show the jumps in next notes, and music is becoming more and more strong in that part. Example:

SPOILER

fixed
01:51:600 (2,3,4) - See the distance here, 1/2 and 1/4 are in the same distance, which is puzzling. I suggest making 1/4 jumps on 3,4. Example:

SPOILER

ok, fixed

Call me back when you are ready~

Atrue wrote:

The offset of the movie is different with other diffs in Easy... Please fix it. (others are -50)

Teru21 wrote:

before it get ranked. retake alook on it >< don't kd

pls check this one on hard and insane. 00:24:400 - ;; add time line on 00:24:400 - volume turn down to 30% , add timeline on 00:24:500 - volume turn down to 50% , and add timeline on 00:24:600 - make it 70% back. probably the last mod. >< the sound seems too loud and does bothers me alot

and on easy diff, 00:27:800 (2) - there shouldn't be any clap here, the clap suppose to be here 00:27:400 -
GOGO RANK *A*)///////////

Kibbleru wrote:

Yay my second ranked GD- i mean gratz on your first ranked map



whatever ill post this now

sorry i cant photoshop like you senpai

pkmnyab wrote:

Sorry, but could a BAT unrank this quickly?

As Lach pointed out, a few of the hitsounds where two noises were supposed to play at the same time are in fact several ms off of each other. Lach sent me the fixed .wav files and I've replaced them, I just need someone to unrank this so I can update.

Thanks~

EDIT: RIP scores

pkmnyab wrote:

thank you so much : DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

big thanks to everyone who helped make it possible <333333333333333

...(^・ω・^ )

koreapenguin wrote:

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

koreapenguin wrote:

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

No Dap wrote:

koreapenguin wrote:

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

크크크크크크크크킄

PK!!!! WHY AM I NOT IN THE POSTER

koreapenguin wrote:

Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Frostings wrote:

yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes yes

Zero__wind wrote:

Rip Unranked again due to bad timing, no one found that it's currently too early? /me runs
1014 (+14) shuold be a much more appropriate offset for this mapset fixed for all diffs

also, 00:32:412 (6) - in Insane diff should be snapped to 1/6 instead of 1/4 fixed

SPOILER

00:32:400 (7) - in Hard ^ fixed

00:36:900 (5) - in Insane shuold be snapped to 1/6 as well, there're four beats on 1/6 snap divisor from 00:36:800 - to 00:37:000 - if you listen closely
but for this case, the simplest sollution is to remove 00:36:900 (5) - and move 00:36:900 (5) - further to the upright, example below ↓

SPOILER

fixed

Besides, you could do some other minor changes for hitsounds or anything to improve the mapset, as long as you tell me what you've changed
maybe consider shorten 00:39:000 (1) - and 02:29:400 (1) - to 1/2 sliders, fixed like what you have in Hard diff, that would sound and play much better imo

Call me back when you think it's ready
Sorry for the inconvenience