Mod time. Been busy last couple days, but here I am!
[General]
Consider adding "GigaP" to your tags as some people have labeled these both ways.
[Easy]
Missing Video | I refuse to star this map until it comes back </3
.... When the video is readded on Easy ;_;
[General]
Consider adding "GigaP" to your tags as some people have labeled these both ways.
[Easy]
Missing Video | I refuse to star this map until it comes back </3
- 00:13:400 (1) - Please remove this note. It's hard enough for a new players as is when there isn't anything major sounding to hit besides a random beat thing in the background. Highly highly recommended. Easy diffs are much better started with a slider anyways.
- 00:10:600 (1) - If you do the above, maybe consider ending this at 00:13:000 - so the length of the spinner is a bit longer. If you do this, consider placing 00:13:800 (2) - closer to the middle.
- 00:22:200 (4,5,1) - You should consider using the same level of descent, for which you ascended 00:19:800 (4,1) - to. What? Put (4) lower, and rework (5,1) to fit. | http://puu.sh/8imMe.jpg | First thing that bugged me was the oddly placed (5) slider so I'm offering this
- 00:37:800 (3) - Add a small curve into this so it gives better flow to the next notes. | http://puu.sh/8imXv.jpg
- 00:41:000 (3) - This slider really bugs me. I don't really have much of a suggestion though, Maybe try curving it just a bit more.
- 00:49:000 (1,3) - Try adding finishes to all points of these notes for more effect at the end of the Kiai.
- 00:50:600 (3) - Is the reverse missing a Normal sampleset? (I notice you don't do this to the other spots at this point in the kiai, so I won't mention this anymore)
- 01:06:600 (3) - Control+J and blanket? | http://puu.sh/8ioxP.jpg
- 01:22:600 (3) - I feel this slider could be improved on greatly as well. why not try to blanket it around the upcoming (4) or something? The current way you have the tail pointing makes it seem like its just there without any thought or focus on the notes around it.
- 01:24:200 (1,2,3) - All of these missing Normal sampleset?
- 01:29:000 (4,5) - For a bit of variety, how about trying to incorporate a 3/2 slider with a reverse? This will change up your constant 1/1 patterns a little bit, and hit the important note at 01:30:400 - | You can also try a 3/2 slider with a 1/2 slider afterwards at 01:30:000 -
- 01:43:000 (1) - Just a circle at 01:43:400 - ? It feels more correct to hit than a slider that begins too early.
- 01:41:800 (4) - Finishes on the points, much like 49 secs
- 02:05:800 (1) - Something like this? | http://puu.sh/8ipcT.jpg | Feels much more natural than how you currently have it curved. (which is pretty sharp again)
- 02:28:200 (3) - whistles on the head and reverse? Mostly for effect like you have on the previous set
- 02:31:400 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - A lot of these notes are missing normal sampleset. I don't think this is intentional?
- 02:45:800 (1) - This curve is way to tight. Try something like this | http://puu.sh/8ioia.jpg
- 02:45:800 (1,2,3) - same idea as 49 seconds with adding finishes to the heads of (1,2,3) and the reverse and end of (3)
- 02:46:600 (2) - and one more missing Normal sampleset on the head of this.
- 00:18:600 (3,4) - Try joining these up as a slider? that way it doesn't make hitting 3 circles in a row so awkward.
- 00:16:600 (1) - reverse 1/2 slider? to capture all of the watashi.. Or you can make this a 1/2 slider with a 1/1 slider afterwards? | This gets rid of the incorrect slider startings (as they normally begin on the big white tick or the middle small white tick on Easy/Normal Diffs)
- 00:21:600 (4) - for the sake of a normal, how about removing this so you don't have such a long chain of 1/2 notes?
- 00:37:800 (3) - x242 y260 for a proper stack?
- 00:36:200 (1) - Missing Normal sampleset
- 00:42:200 (5) - Just a normal circle is enough, no need for a 1/2 slider because of the lyrics and nothing actually plays on the end of the slider.
- 00:48:000 - Add a note here?
- 00:48:200 (4) - Missing Normal sampleset on Tail.
- 01:07:000 (5) - Slight curve so it flows a bit better into (6)? | http://puu.sh/8jq3R.jpg
- 01:08:200 (1) - More nazi. Try moving this up and left a little bit with Distance snap, then have the tail end flow/curve a bit more nicely into the next two notes. | http://puu.sh/8jqcE.jpg
- 01:09:800 (4) - Missing normal as well?
- 01:20:600 (6) - ^
- 01:25:000 (2) - There is a similar descent between the previous and next notes. so Why not just make the slider horizontally bound? | http://puu.sh/8jqu2.jpg maybe?
- 01:29:000 (4,5) - This is kind of a repeat of what I mentioned in Easy, but how about a pattern like this so it feels more compatible with the music? | http://puu.sh/8jpVn.jpg
- 01:33:800 (1) - Missing normal on Tail
- 01:36:200 (4) - More 1/2's? Try a circle and then a 1/2 slider maybe? Just so there is a bit more variety in the kiai time.
- 01:42:200 (2) - Normal missing here? or is this intentional? Thought I'd just leave this in-case
- 01:44:600 (3) - Normal Circle here? It feels like it'd match the other patterns since they all use 1/2 notes.
- 01:49:000 (3,4) - Try swapping these so it goes the reverse slider, then the circle. This will mimic the pattern at 01:50:600 (2,1) -
- 01:55:400 (5) - probably missing normal here as well.
- 02:15:000 (3) - Mostly just a suggestion so you can retain your big white tick back. Try changing this to a circle and adding a circle or slider to the now empty spot.
- 02:32:000 - another circle? You have a big gap of 1/1s coming up, so it'd be awesome to have a little more variety.
- 02:35:400 (5) - Stuff like this you can use the lead-in 1/2 slider if you want (Like 1:36)
- 02:37:800 (3) - Missing normal on head
- 02:40:200 (2) - Missing normal on reverse
- 02:44:200 (3) - stack this on (1)
- 02:44:800 - Circle?
- I don't really understand your NC patterning for this diff. Most of them are two measures, but there are quite a number that only last 1 measure
http://puu.sh/8leuO.jpg & http://puu.sh/8leAz.jpg | As you can see in this, It is very very inconsistent. I highly highly recommend going through this and NCing every measure so you don't end up with random long 9+ combos and keep them around 4-5. - 00:18:600 (1,2,3,4) - A lot of these notes are missing the Normal hit sound. Try turning down your music volume while keeping the effect high. It sticks out pretty badly
- 00:32:000 (3) - how about a Normal on the head?
- 00:47:400 (5) - Missing normal sampleset
- 00:51:000 (2) - missing Normal as well?
- 01:07:400 (7) - whistle on slider intentional?
- 01:30:600 (1) - Missing finish on head (comparing to first kiai)
- 01:36:200 (7) - Missing normal on tail?
- 00:49:000 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Read below ---v
- 01:40:200 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Try a finish on (1,3)'s head, and then the second (1,2,3) with all finishes. Remove (2,4)'s finishes.
- 02:33:000 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - same idea.
- 02:45:800 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same idea, just to reduce finish spam a litt.e remove from (2,4)
- 01:45:400 (2) - Missing normal
- 01:49:400 (3) - ^
- 01:51:000 (4) - ^ on tail
- 01:55:000 (2) - This is intentional with the normal on the tail?
- 02:11:800 (4,4) - Not sure if this is intended as well, maybe, for not having Normal
- 02:29:800 (1) - Finish?
- So that about wraps up the hitsounding. Be sure to turn your music down to low when you edit the above part
- 00:17:400 (2) - Lower the tail end of this by a bit? It has such a tight curve.
- 00:20:000 (4) - x236 y250 to stack with the previous (2) properly.
- 00:45:000 (6) - x279 y229
- 01:16:000 (5) - Maybe try moving this just a bit lower to like x205 y305 so it'll help slowly decrease your big spacing you've been using for the past few notes?
- 01:17:800 (1,2) - Make these a 180° rotate of each other? you have two different sliders right now and it kinda ruins the point of having them rotated like this.
- 01:22:600 (1) - Lift the end of this up a bit more so it provides some extra flow to the next couple notes | http://puu.sh/8lYIm.jpg
- 01:27:200 (9) - Honestly, try putting this off to the left instead of stacking so it gets the same feel as (4,5,6) |
- 01:31:400 (3,4) - This feels kind of sharp, and doesn't look that great overall. Maybe try coming off the bottom end? or redesigning the shape of it? | http://puu.sh/8lZ6U.jpg
- 01:43:400 (1,3) - This awkward placing really makes it visually annoying to look at. It feels way too cluttered to understand what's going on with only the 1/2 (2) slider to serve as a gap. I feel this needs to be moved elsewhere, instead of crammed up with all the other notes.
- 02:32:000 (6) - x215 y168 for a proper stack (currently x216)
- 02:45:600 (8,3) - Eh, I realize you aren't a fan of stacking, but why not at least these?
- 00:18:600 (3) - Normal
- 00:31:400 (1) - Feels like it's missing a normal (maybe add one for (2) as well. This is just trying to go with the flow of the hitsounding)
- 00:35:400 (4) - Normal
- 00:39:800 (2) - ^
- 01:07:400 (4) - ^
- 01:09:800 (1) - ^
- 01:30:600 (1) - Finish?
- 01:37:800 (4) - Normal
- 01:51:800 (2,4) - and this whole section around it. probably missing some normal hits as well. I suggest going through this yourself so you get what you want. Again, listen at 10% music volume so you can hear the hitsounds.
- 02:10:600 (4) - Normal
- 02:38:600 (5) - ^
- 02:39:400 (1) - ^
- 02:41:400 (3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - what.. happened? You completely ignored all of your normal sampleset???
- 00:25:400 (2,3) - Swap places? It'd make the stream less stupid to try and hit lol.
- 00:30:400 (2) - x216 y108 so it fits more naturally in the blanket the (1) slider provided?
- 00:45:600 (4) - Maybe try stacking on the previous (2) for more circular flow and having a nice triangle?
- 01:09:800 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Try remaking this with the polygon creator. Right now if you line up all your notes in a circle. they have varied distance snapping. Go to 1/2 Beat snap divisor and try at 1.4ish distance snapping with 5 circles (you can add the extra one later, as it'll just be a stacked note. Control+G them around after.
- 01:22:100 (4) - Make the distance spacing between these even? It looks really sloppy.
- 01:45:400 (2) - x12 y172?
- 02:21:400 (5) - I'm surprised you didn't make this a stream. It would work pretty well actually. from the start to end. Try just converting the slider to a stream so you get nice spacing :3
- 02:48:800 (7,8) - even out this spacing? Currently 1.14 while the rest are 1.10 or 1.09
