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Nishizawa Hagumi - Yureru Cycle

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Irreversible
Hi alacat!
Well, as Konei wishes, please reply to his mod first.

[Easy]

The hitsounding is a creative idea, but I'm not a fan at all of custom ones like that; they sound exactly the same as the background beat, and due to that it seems quite inaudible. Furthermore, additional hitsounds appear rather random. For example: 00:26:817 (3) - in easy. Just wanted to mention that, I don't think it would be a good idea to change it anyway.

00:01:103 (1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2) - I can see what you try here, although I'm not really okay with the NCing here, it gives many HP back, and makes it really no difficulty at all. Could you reduce them?

Really nice easy!

[Normal]

00:48:245 (1) - Any possibility to make this slidershape even neater?
01:21:245 (4,1) - Don't you wanna leave out this weird rhythm here, and instead map the building up vocals starting from 01:22:317 - ? http://puu.sh/7mkgk/aedf9594da.jpg This might be an idea, but too hard, but I guess it's okay for one time since you lead in the new part of the kiai.

[Hard]

00:03:460 - How about lowering this sounds here by maybe 10%? Seems quite loud how it is now.
00:28:317 (4) - Well, i Kind of saw it, so could you make them completely parallel? Would be nicer to me.
00:41:817 (5) - In my opinion, this stack breaks the flow here. I suggest this: http://puu.sh/7mkw1/222b35167e.jpg to Keep the flow!
00:43:960 (1) - That one is quite Close to the last slider, even if the DS is correct, could you by any Chance move it a bit to the left?
01:11:388 (2) - ^
01:08:388 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Well, that lead in of the kiai isn't made that great if you ask me; what about making something more outstanding? As you can see, you go in an anti-ClockWise pattern, and this is Kind of boring. I suggest making a left right jump there, a zigzack pattern, a direction Change, whatever suits you; but it would be nice if you could Change this. (sorry for the randomly capitalized letters, my Laptop makes this on his own :roll: )
01:12:031 (3) - You could map the vocals so good here with 3 circles, why wasting it with a Long slider?
01:21:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why not adding some normal / drum hitsounds as you've usually did here?
01:25:745 (2) - Same as above (3 circles)
01:38:388 (1) - not sure whether this NC is placed correctly; i'd rather have it 01:39:674 (3) - .

all in all; a pretty good hard!

[Insane]

00:50:603 (1) - I don't really like this NC, placing a NC 00:50:817 (3) - would give a much better effect!

Enjoyable Insane!

call me back ;)
Umi

Konei wrote:

Hai hai, from the ero Queue. ~

[-Umi-'s Normal]

  1. 00:37:960 (4) - You probably missed a clap at the start.
  2. 00:55:960 (1) - Finish on the end sounds far too strong for this calm part, better replace it with a whistle.
  3. 01:05:388 (6) - Hmm, the clap on the start sounds a bit out of music, try a whistle, would be better.
  4. 01:16:531 (1) - Piano becomes really strong here, sure you don't like a finish at the start better?
  5. 01:18:031 (4) - If you added the one above, I'd recommend to give this start a finish aswell so the piano emphasis is the same.
  6. 01:22:960 (3) - Change the end to Normal sampleset? Would give the drums in the background a nice touch.
    All fixed :3, sorry i didn't see your mod >.<

Irreversible wrote:

[Normal]

00:48:245 (1) - Any possibility to make this slidershape even neater? the current one is good for me
01:21:245 (4,1) - Don't you wanna leave out this weird rhythm here, and instead map the building up vocals starting from 01:22:317 - ? http://puu.sh/7mkgk/aedf9594da.jpg This might be an idea, but too hard, but I guess it's okay for one time since you lead in the new part of the kiai. fixed on my own way
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TitleUnicode:ユレルサイクル
Artist:Nishizawa Hagumi
ArtistUnicode:西沢はぐみ
Creator:alacat
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Source:Cocoro@Function!
Tags:KSHR umi -umi- Melophobia visual novel eroge hentai Willplus pulltop ココロ@ファンクション!
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Topic Starter
alacat

Irreversible wrote:

Hi alacat! yo ~ Irrrr
Well, as Konei wishes, please reply to his mod first. okey~ :oops:

[Insane]

00:50:603 (1) - I don't really like this NC, placing a NC 00:50:817 (3) - would give a much better effect! ahh.. i see your feeling. But as you can see my diff, i made pattern of 3 hits new combo. 00:19:745 (1) - , 00:26:603 (1) - , 00:30:031 (1) - , 00:33:460 (1) - and so on ... So i keep to unify my pattern.

Enjoyable Insane! Thanks!

call me back ;)
for Konei

Konei wrote:

[General]

  1. As already said, game is already in the genre so you won't need it in the tags. Just remove it and you'll be fine. ok !
[Insane]

  1. 00:11:174 (5) - You could add a clap here aswell to hit all prominent drum beats. I feel it's too loud to this stream.
  2. 00:19:960 (1) - Add a whistle to the start? Sounds a bit empty otherwise. I didn't add a whistle to this sound. please check my pattern ar here.00:13:960 - ,00:14:388 - and so on.
  3. 00:23:174 (1) - If I was you I'd increase the spacing here, I firstly thought it was 1/4 since the spacing was lower than 00:21:674 (1,2) - . It's on purpose. i think it's better to put the spacing for flow.
  4. 00:55:531 (6) - Since you use 3/4 here to emphasize the next Slider's start, I'd recommend you to silence the end. ok, turned down the volume here
  5. 01:16:531 (1) - Same here. ^ kk
  6. Really nice, nothing else to point at! Thank you, Konei :3

Thank you for modding :oops:

Update Umi and My diff ! waiting for KSHR and Melo :3
KSHR

Irreversible wrote:

[Easy]

The hitsounding is a creative idea, but I'm not a fan at all of custom ones like that; they sound exactly the same as the background beat, and due to that it seems quite inaudible. Furthermore, additional hitsounds appear rather random. For example: 00:26:817 (3) - in easy. Just wanted to mention that, I don't think it would be a good idea to change it anyway.

> Slidertick & Soft-hitnormal: Hmm.. Considering they sound the same as the background beat, it seems like this hitsouding is against the rule.(I mean ↓) Ok, I'll ask alacat to remove "soft-slidertick4" and "soft-hitnormal4".
SPOILER
Hitsounds from notes and sliders must be audible.
> Drum Sampleset: In this song, it sounds like drum sampleset doesn't work well with soft-hitnormal. Removed.


00:01:103 (1,2,3,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2) - I can see what you try here, although I'm not really okay with the NCing here, it gives many HP back, and makes it really no difficulty at all. Could you reduce them?
Yea, you're right. Removed some.

Really nice easy! yay!
Thanks Irre~ :3


To alacat: "soft-slidertick4" "soft-hitnormal4" この二つだけ削除お願いしまっす!(他難易度では使われてなかったから兼ね合い気にせず消しちゃって大丈夫です!)


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TitleUnicode:ユレルサイクル
Artist:Nishizawa Hagumi
ArtistUnicode:西沢はぐみ
Creator:alacat
Version:KSHR's Easy
Source:Cocoro@Function!
Tags:KSHR umi -umi- Melophobia visual novel eroge hentai Willplus pulltop ココロ@ファンクション!
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Topic Starter
alacat
了解ですー! 8-)

Update!
BeatofIke

Konei wrote:

Could I have a reply to my mod?
Oops! Sorry about that Konei!
Melophobia

Konei wrote:

[Melo's Hard]

  1. 00:10:853 (6) - Don't know how you think about it, but I would prefer a whistle here since the piano is much louder here than the drums, also the kick Slider behind it already backs the drums up. There's already a whistle on (5) so i find it kinda noisy.
  2. 00:24:031 (2) - Change this one to a kick Slider? Since you followed the instruments pretty closely until now, it sounds weird to ignore the drums here. The current rhythm represents how i feel the song better. I'd like to emphasize the heavy beats using long sliders.
  3. 00:33:567 (2) - Try to remove the whistle here and add it to 1. Since it sounds strange to have the 2 whistles of 2 and 3 so close to each other. (Also to keep consistency with 00:36:888 - ) Feels empty w/o it, i'd go with the current state anyways. 00:36:888 - is intentionally different. i'd like to provide some variety here.
  4. 00:34:531 (5) - Consider to remove the whistle from the end here aswell to give the one at 6 a better emphasis. I can see ur point but it sounds better to me w/ it.
  5. 01:05:174 (3) - Add soft default whistle addition to the end to catch the piano? since i didn't use any whistles in this section i'm afraid it'd be strange.
  6. 01:05:603 (4) - How about changing the end to a soft whistle? To seperate the tones a bit more from each other. ^
  7. 01:19:317 (5) - Make the angle strange? I feel that flow increases, may be personal preference tho. No difference considering players won't move thier cursors for a kick slider and the current one looks better imo
  8. 01:20:817 (3) - Remove the whistle from the end? Sounds too noisy since the powerful part just broke for a while and the emphasis should be on the finishes. i've added whistles on every red ticks in kiai sections, i dont find it noisy or bad.
  9. 01:27:674 (5) - I find this 3/4 too inconsistent since you only used it to follow instruments so far. I'd try to shorten it by 1/4. That way 01:28:103 - is emphasized in a better way.
  10. 01:28:103 (6) - Would be better to remove the whistle from the repeat, there is no high tone but a drum beat, so it fits the song better if the sound is deep. Feels empty if i removed it because there's no whistles around here due to the long slider.
  11. 01:40:531 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'd remove all whistles from this pattern since the chorus went down and the tones are not really high. it follows the bass-drum and i think it's funny.
  12. Jeez, awesome diff!

Irreversible wrote:

[Hard]
00:03:460 - How about lowering this sounds here by maybe 10%? Seems quite loud how it is now. Reduced by 20%
00:28:317 (4) - Well, i Kind of saw it, so could you make them completely parallel? Would be nicer to me. Never noticed LOL okay fixed
00:41:817 (5) - In my opinion, this stack breaks the flow here. I suggest this: http://puu.sh/7mkw1/222b35167e.jpg to Keep the flow! Intentional, the transition (direction change) can be more natural by stacking them imo.
00:43:960 (1) - That one is quite Close to the last slider, even if the DS is correct, could you by any Chance move it a bit to the left? good point!
01:11:388 (2) - ^ ^
01:08:388 (3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - Well, that lead in of the kiai isn't made that great if you ask me; what about making something more outstanding? As you can see, you go in an anti-ClockWise pattern, and this is Kind of boring. I suggest making a left right jump there, a zigzack pattern, a direction Change, whatever suits you; but it would be nice if you could Change this. (sorry for the randomly capitalized letters, my Laptop makes this on his own :roll: ) it's kinda part of my style and i don't find it boring at all :(
01:12:031 (3) - You could map the vocals so good here with 3 circles, why wasting it with a Long slider? it represents how i feel the song better and considering the level of difficulty i don't have to stick to vocals strictly.
01:21:888 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Why not adding some normal / drum hitsounds as you've usually did here? To emphasize the hi-hat (or whatever it's called lol) on the red ticks.
01:25:745 (2) - Same as above (3 circles) same answer
01:38:388 (1) - not sure whether this NC is placed correctly; i'd rather have it 01:39:674 (3) - . It's not that bad to have newcombo on heavy beat. if (3) had a newcombo the combo would be way too short and wouldn't look that great im afraid.
all in all; a pretty good hard!
Thank you!
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