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Tsukasa - The Clear Blue Sky
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Topic Starter
easy:
normal:
hard:
SPOILER
00:52:84 - ugh seizures. not much you can do about it if it's part of the video though...
00:57:06 (1) - either have this slider start earlier or the kiai start sometime else (there's a blinding white flash just as you *think* the note should start)
00:57:06 (1) - either have this slider start earlier or the kiai start sometime else (there's a blinding white flash just as you *think* the note should start)
normal:
SPOILER
00:55:71 (1) - unless intentional, space this a bit farther.
01:04:98 (1,2) - which note does the slider belong to?
01:04:98 (1,2) - which note does the slider belong to?
hard:
SPOILER
this is more like insane, given that i'd probably need 50 tries to beat this.
00:21:33 (3) - I normally hate these things but this cresc. is so cleverly done.
00:43:07 (5,6) - why is this pattern different?
00:56:894 - lots of visibility problems here, a combination of kiai, overlapping combos, and the objects colour being similar to the background colour. When it flashes the number becomes invisible and thus it's impossible to tell which direction sliders go. See replays and look at which notes i missed (as opposed to bad aim or wrong tempo)
01:11:05 (4) - this one is especially difficult to see.
01:16:697 - lessen the fade, they're barely audible and only if you listen for them.
00:21:33 (3) - I normally hate these things but this cresc. is so cleverly done.
00:43:07 (5,6) - why is this pattern different?
00:56:894 - lots of visibility problems here, a combination of kiai, overlapping combos, and the objects colour being similar to the background colour. When it flashes the number becomes invisible and thus it's impossible to tell which direction sliders go. See replays and look at which notes i missed (as opposed to bad aim or wrong tempo)
01:11:05 (4) - this one is especially difficult to see.
01:16:697 - lessen the fade, they're barely audible and only if you listen for them.
Did hutka gave up?
Done 
Download: (DJPop) The Clear Blue Screen.rar
I think at least 1 diff should snap on the vocal.
~Easy~
00:15:09 (1,2) - should copy from 00:12:40 (1,2) and flip them
00:32:62 (1) - start at 00:32:793
00:42:06 (1,2,3,4,5) - hitfinish all
01:26:55 (1) - end at 01:29:253
~Normal~
01:26:55 (1) - end at 01:29:253
~Hard~
SilderTickRate: 2
00:33:97 (1) - silence it
00:49:64 (5) - hitclap at the end
01:17:45 (1) - too short
01:26:55 (1) - end at 01:29:253
+Star
Download: (DJPop) The Clear Blue Screen.rar
I think at least 1 diff should snap on the vocal.
~Easy~
00:15:09 (1,2) - should copy from 00:12:40 (1,2) and flip them
00:32:62 (1) - start at 00:32:793
00:42:06 (1,2,3,4,5) - hitfinish all
01:26:55 (1) - end at 01:29:253
~Normal~
01:26:55 (1) - end at 01:29:253
~Hard~
SilderTickRate: 2
00:33:97 (1) - silence it
00:49:64 (5) - hitclap at the end
01:17:45 (1) - too short
01:26:55 (1) - end at 01:29:253
+Star
Topic Starter
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Beautyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!
Mod Info's:
Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!
Starts Suggestions:
All seems fine.
[Easy]
00:57:006 (1) - 1/2 backward and lenght it by 1/2.
01:17:062 (1) - Spinner too hard for an easy.
[Normal]
00:14:059 (3) - New combo.
00:15:009 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:061 (3) - New combo.
00:17:079 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:19:098 (3) - New combo.
00:20:048 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Hard]
Cute~
[DJPop's Insane]
00:23:018 (13) - New combo.
00:23:035 (1) - Remove new combo.
Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!
Starts Suggestions:
All seems fine.
[Easy]
00:57:006 (1) - 1/2 backward and lenght it by 1/2.
01:17:062 (1) - Spinner too hard for an easy.
[Normal]
00:14:059 (3) - New combo.
00:15:009 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:061 (3) - New combo.
00:17:079 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:19:098 (3) - New combo.
00:20:048 (1) - Remove new combo.
[Hard]
Cute~
[DJPop's Insane]
00:23:018 (13) - New combo.
00:23:035 (1) - Remove new combo.
Fixed.osuplayer111 wrote:
[DJPop's Insane]
00:23:018 (13) - New combo.
00:23:035 (1) - Remove new combo.
Download: Tsukasa - The Clear Blue Sky (MoonFragrance) [DJPop's Insane].osu
DJMAX ~ 
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Topic Starter
fixed :3
Fuuko's mod DEKIMASHITA~ <3
Check this. =o
Hints. :3
Awesome map. I don't even need to say this will be ranked soon...lol
Star, and keep up the good work. :3
Check this. =o
Hints. :3
Easy
1:10:00 (1) - Move this 1/2 beat back.
1:13:242 (1) - ^
Normal
No errors found, awesome. :3
HardWell, I prolly don't need to check DJPop's ( Well, I did, but didn't find anything wrong...surprising. *ironic* )
Dammit, awesome! I want to play this, like, all the time. lol
Awesome map. I don't even need to say this will be ranked soon...lol
Star, and keep up the good work. :3
Mod Info's:
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Easy]
01:10:004 (x) - add a circle
[Normal]
omg i love it *w*
[Hard]
It's ok
[DJPop]
Nice
starred~
Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.
Starts Suggestions:
All seems ok.
[Easy]
01:10:004 (x) - add a circle
[Normal]
omg i love it *w*
[Hard]
It's ok
[DJPop]
Nice
starred~
Easy
00:20:048 (1,2) - move 1 tiny square down to center (2)
00:29:075 (3) - align with (1)
Normal
00:14:059 (3) - ?????? start at 00:14:422 and end at 00:14:759
Hard
00:17:079 (1) - Center this combo
DJPop is awesome.
Star[ite].
00:20:048 (1,2) - move 1 tiny square down to center (2)
00:29:075 (3) - align with (1)
Normal
00:14:059 (3) - ?????? start at 00:14:422 and end at 00:14:759
Hard
00:17:079 (1) - Center this combo
DJPop is awesome.
Star[ite].
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
star~
Easy: fine
Normal: fine, just one suggestion
00:48:804 (1) - remove new combo to make the combo 8 whole notes long also
Hard: fine, just one suggestion
00:48:635 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to be consistent with 00:47:287 (5)
DJPop's Insane: fine
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Great map. Star.
Normal: fine, just one suggestion
00:48:804 (1) - remove new combo to make the combo 8 whole notes long also
Hard: fine, just one suggestion
00:48:635 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2 to be consistent with 00:47:287 (5)
DJPop's Insane: fine
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Great map. Star.
Overall (all diffs)
make offset in all diffs 265,cause right now Djpop's has a different offset from the rest, just add 265 as the offset in all diffs, map should still be same as it is, (don't forget to re-snap all notes just in case
)
Easy
00:23:035 (1) - move this 1/2 back, on the white tick, make sure spacing is still perfect after doing this, i'm saying to do this atm, cause it sounds better on the white tick, i don't really hear anything ur mapping at
Normal
00:17:079 (1) - remove new combo
00:19:098 (3) - add new combo
00:20:048 (1) - remove new combo
Hard
00:55:037 (9) - center this in the middle of all that cool stuff,
DJpop's Insane
nothing ._.
make offset in all diffs 265,cause right now Djpop's has a different offset from the rest, just add 265 as the offset in all diffs, map should still be same as it is, (don't forget to re-snap all notes just in case
)Easy
00:23:035 (1) - move this 1/2 back, on the white tick, make sure spacing is still perfect after doing this, i'm saying to do this atm, cause it sounds better on the white tick, i don't really hear anything ur mapping at
Normal
00:17:079 (1) - remove new combo
00:19:098 (3) - add new combo
00:20:048 (1) - remove new combo
Hard
00:55:037 (9) - center this in the middle of all that cool stuff,
DJpop's Insane
nothing ._.
Enough Stars, You need a BAT, not my STAR><
comboburst too big?
map comboburst: 551x784
starred
Don't make skinned elements larger than template skin dimensions. This is especially true for combobusts.templateskin comboburst: 388x767
map comboburst: 551x784
starred
lolsonnyc wrote:
Enough Stars, You need a BAT, not my STAR><
[General]
You can remove the .osb if you want.
Please remove the lead-in time on all the difficulties but DJPop's.
[Easy]
I felt the patterns in the opening section before the break might be confusing to start with for Easy.
As a whole, the map's fine. It might be better if you followed the vocals more than the accompaniment though; the beat there is much easier to sense.
[Normal]
00:22:000 (1) - The part before this note is a bit hard to follow.
01:23:069 (3) - Didn't like the looks of this slider, lol.
Nice.
[Hard]
00:31:095 (2) - The extra repeat on this came as a bit of a surprise.
00:55:037 (9) - Consider stacking this under 8.
01:23:069 (3) - Could this be made to look nicer?
[DJPop's Insane]
Background colour is different here, consider making it consistent.
Didn't see anything here.
Star~
You can remove the .osb if you want.
Please remove the lead-in time on all the difficulties but DJPop's.
[Easy]
I felt the patterns in the opening section before the break might be confusing to start with for Easy.
As a whole, the map's fine. It might be better if you followed the vocals more than the accompaniment though; the beat there is much easier to sense.
[Normal]
00:22:000 (1) - The part before this note is a bit hard to follow.
01:23:069 (3) - Didn't like the looks of this slider, lol.
Nice.
[Hard]
00:31:095 (2) - The extra repeat on this came as a bit of a surprise.
00:55:037 (9) - Consider stacking this under 8.
01:23:069 (3) - Could this be made to look nicer?
[DJPop's Insane]
Background colour is different here, consider making it consistent.
Didn't see anything here.
Star~
Topic Starter
Others all fixed :3 thanks >w<Kytoxid wrote:
[General]
Please remove the lead-in time on all the difficulties but DJPop's.
- it's for MV backgrounds.
[Hard]
00:31:095 (2) - The extra repeat on this came as a bit of a surprise.
- it's fit on drum beat.
00:55:037 (9) - Consider stacking this under 8.
- it's a jumpy zone lol
Star
[Normal]
00:12:399 (3) - Allign with 2
[Hard]
00:19:815 (6) - Allign with 5 (end of slider
01:00:602 (4) - Move 1 grid up
Not bad. Star
00:12:399 (3) - Allign with 2
[Hard]
00:19:815 (6) - Allign with 5 (end of slider
01:00:602 (4) - Move 1 grid up
Not bad. Star
[Easy]
00:15:09(1,2) - 왼쪽으로 1칸 옮기는게 어떨까요?
00:17:79(1,2) - 위쪽으로 1칸 옮기는게 어떨까요?
[Normal]
00:23:18(1,2) - [제안] (1)의 화살표부분하고 (2)의 피니시를 겹치는게 좋을듯 싶네요 ㅜㅜ
00:32:79(4) - [제안] 위쪽으로 1칸 옮기는게 어떨까요?
[Hard]
문제 없음 ㅇㅅㅇ
[DJPop's Insane]
당연히 문제 없음 ㅇㅅㅇ
음...
일단 얼마 안남았으니 힘내시길 바랍니다 XD
여기 제 별이군요 ㄷㄷ
00:15:09(1,2) - 왼쪽으로 1칸 옮기는게 어떨까요?
00:17:79(1,2) - 위쪽으로 1칸 옮기는게 어떨까요?
[Normal]
00:23:18(1,2) - [제안] (1)의 화살표부분하고 (2)의 피니시를 겹치는게 좋을듯 싶네요 ㅜㅜ
00:32:79(4) - [제안] 위쪽으로 1칸 옮기는게 어떨까요?
[Hard]
문제 없음 ㅇㅅㅇ
[DJPop's Insane]
당연히 문제 없음 ㅇㅅㅇ
음...
일단 얼마 안남았으니 힘내시길 바랍니다 XD
여기 제 별이군요 ㄷㄷ
[Normal & Hard]
00:56:894 - Add the kiai time on a note.
Except that, all maps are flawless. Love the background and the hitcircles.
00:56:894 - Add the kiai time on a note.
Except that, all maps are flawless. Love the background and the hitcircles.
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Nice. ~
Why the genres are Any(Other)? Add something maybe?
Oh, I feel so bad
Oh, I feel so bad
Ranked.
Oh lovely I've just been KS'ed after announcing my intentions publicly.
Still, I'd have ranked it as well. Nominated for Beatmap Charts.
Still, I'd have ranked it as well. Nominated for Beatmap Charts.