Moo-Chan wrote:

Hay, M4M ;w;

[Easy]

1. Maybe make the CS 2.8? So it doesn't match the Normal's CS
   Understandable but I'm not gonna fiddle with this since it's an old map.
   
2. 00:39:767 (1) - Slider seems a bit too short for an Easy. Maybe take it out and put a break here until the next note?
   I'd like to think it's ok, the spinner can be cleared with only a few spins.
   
3. 00:43:393 (2) - You should make this the same shape as 00:42:239 (1). Or at least something pretty close to it
   ok gave it more curve
   
4. 01:08:613 (1,2) - Make both of these straight
   Hm I think these are identical sliders.
   
5. 01:19:162 (1,2) - Blanket is off
   Honestly looks fine for me.
   
6. 02:26:085 (2,1) - Make these straight
   Again these are identical sliders, try putting one over the other you'll see.
   
7. 03:32:349 (1,1) - Blanket is off
   I'm not seeing it.
   
8. Add a break in between 03:36:305 (3,1)? Like how I mentioned in the mod for Normal
   It's too short, osu won't allow a break time there. It will delete it after exiting the editor.

[Normal]

1. I would suggest making this AR4
   Can't really agree there. The song is fast and 5 is a better spread.
   
2. 00:00:042 (1,2) - Blanket is a bit off
   Honestly I can't see it.
   
3. 00:05:646 (4,1) - ^ (Sorry, I'm a nazi to blankets)
   I think fixed ;_;
   
4. 00:10:591 (4) - NC?
   Makes it inconsistent. Check the rest of the section.
   
5. 00:18:009 (2,1) - Blanket off
   ya
   
6. 00:20:151 (3) - I'd do something like this. Move the 2nd to last white anchor up a bit to blanket 00:19:162 (2)
   
   SPOILER

   
   Hm this one seems fine for me, makes the 3 too curved.
   
7. 00:44:877 (1,2) - Could be blanketed better
   Seems fine.
   
8. 00:44:712 (5) - Since this is a Normal, I would remove this note. New players probably wouldn't understand it if there was this note
   Hm yea can't really agree there. Fits with the music and follows in a pattern through the section. This sort of thing is standard at this difficulty level.
   
9. 00:55:261 (5) - ^ (This is just my opinion)
10. 01:14:877 (2) - Make this slider straight?
    Do you mean perfectly horizontal? I think I prefer it slightly angled.
    
11. 01:47:514 (4,1) - Blanket this better
    kk
    
12. I would add a break in between 03:36:305 (3,1). It would give the player some time to react to the next note
    Can't do it.

[Hard]

1. 00:08:613 (3) - Maybe make this slider the same shape as 00:09:107 (4)?
   I think more curve is better to twist into 4-5.
   
2. 00:28:393 (6,7) - Make the same shape?
   Hm seems they are so similar, I think I copy pasted them.
   
3. 00:31:360 (6) - I would consider making this slider the same as 00:31:031 (5), then blanketing it with 00:30:536 (4)
   I liked it better straight like the 4 and contrasting flow with 1.
   
4. 00:32:349 (3,4) - Blanket is a bit off
5. 00:33:668 (6,1) - ^
   Not sure, these seem fine to me.
   
6. 00:39:767 (1) - Maybe instead of this spinner, you could map her vocals?
   Naw, spinner fits much better with the music in a general sense.
   
7. 00:53:448 (3,5) - Check stack (Move 00:53:448 (3) - to x:435 y:171)
8. 01:07:129 (4,7) - ^ (Move 01:07:954 (7) - to x:436 y:312)
   tried
   
9. 01:09:272 (3,4) - Blanket is off
   k
   
10. 01:15:866 (5) - Maybe turn this into 2 1/2 sliders? Imo it fits better
    Think I'd like to keep it, it's a pattern followed through the whole section.
    
11. 01:20:316 (4,5) - Blanket is off
    Fixed it
    
12. 01:26:085 (1,2,3) - This could be mistaken as a stream, and since this is a Hard difficulty, players might not know it's 3 single taps
    Possibly but it adds some difficult and fits the song. I don't want to change it since it can be an enjoyable pattern.
    
13. 02:24:107 (5,1) - I don't see the point in the spacing here. Maybe keep this part to DS?
    Hm I feel it adds to the build up there. I feel the music really starts to pick up.
    
14. 02:26:580 (6,8) - Blanket is off
    Blanket wasn't intended.
    
15. 02:28:723 (4,5) - ^
    Seems fine for me.
    
16. 02:30:701 (2,3) - ^
    Guess I don't really see how it's off.
    
17. 02:30:701 (2,3) - Maybe remove NC?
    Maybe you added it on accident. I don't have one here.
    
18. 03:25:756 (1,2) - Check stack (Move 03:26:745 (2) 's x to 127)
    Seems fine.
    
19. 03:29:547 (2,3) - Maybe do something like this?
    
    SPOILER

    
    That is what I did, it's just at a slight angle.
    
20. 03:40:426 (3) - Move to x:224 y:83
    I think I fixed the star.
    
21. 03:45:206 (3,4) - Blanket better
    k
    
22. 04:02:679 (1,4) - Check stack (Move 04:04:162 (4) to x:270 y:227)
    k

[Lunatic]

1. 00:00:701 (3,4) - Blanket?
   4 is blanketing the tail, seems fine.
   
2. 00:02:184 (6,2) - Check stack (Move 00:03:009 (2) 's y to 197)
3. 00:07:459 (6,2) - ^ (Move 00:08:283 (2) to x:331 y:179)
4. 00:55:756 (2,4) - ^ (Move 00:56:415 (4) 's y to 361)
   These seem fine. It makes no different in play.
   
5. 01:15:042 (1,4) - Dunno if you're going for blankets but this one is off
   fixed
   
6. 01:21:140 (3) - Maybe take out the red anchor and turn it into a slider like 01:21:800 (1)?
   Naw I think I'll leave it the way I originally mapped it.
   
7. 01:31:607 (1,2) - I see you're going for spacing, but maybe move these two closer together?
   I think you mean to the 6? I just feel this spacing fits with the music here, I'd like to keep it.
   
8. 01:52:789 (3,4) - Increase spacing on these and decrease spacing on 01:53:118 (4,1)
   k
   
9. 02:08:613 (4,6) - Idk if you're going for stacking, but if so, stack 02:09:107 (6) - under 02:08:613 (4)
   Prefer it this way. Makes the 6 more visible.
   
10. 02:09:932 (5,6) - Could be blanketed better
    fixed
    
11. 03:26:745 (2) - Move to x:137 y:165 to match the spacing of 03:25:426 (4,1)
    fixed
    
12. 04:06:470 (1,3) - Check stack (Move 04:07:294 (3) 's y to 65)
    seems fine
    
13. 04:07:954 (1,3) - Trying not to stack?
    Yep, plays nicer imo.
    
14. 04:14:877 (3,4,5) - The music seems to be getting slower (imo) so maybe decrease the spacing between these?
    Hm I just feel the music is the same at 04:04:571 (4) so I think it's alright.
    
15. 04:27:074 (5,6) - Blanket
    seems fine

So many sliders ;-;
;-;

Ah, so much. I hope this helped and sorry if some of it doesn't make any sense. I'm quite tired ;_;
Good luck!

Natsu wrote:

Modding this cuz I like this map a lot

General:

1. preview time is unnsnapped I think, snap it to 01:26:989
   fixed!
2. is the tag ¨o¨ really necessary?
   I'm really not sure, I copied the tags from Irie Miyuki's post. I think maybe it's best to keep it.

Lunatic:

1. 00:20:643 (6) - what about changing the rhythm here, since I'll like to have a click action here 00:20:808 - due to the vocals, something like:
   
   It's good but it can't work well with the symmetry and I like the current rhythm in that it mimics the 1/1 sliders in the section.
   
2. 01:02:676 (4,5,6,7) - a bit nazi, but I'll like if you make this stream a bit curved, for better transition with the previous circles
   I think I prefer the straight stream, but I'll moved 01:02:511 (3) more in line to make transition better. Let me know if it's not ok.
   
3. 01:36:962 (3,4) - make this a bit more close? not a big deal, but a bit hard to read in first play
   I'd like to keep this. I feel it's standard spacing in this section for 1/4 starting with 01:31:357 (6,1).
   
4. 01:40:258 (1) - a little part of this slider is offscreen
   fixed!
   
5. 02:03:335 (1) - is this NC really necesary?
6. 02:13:885 (1) - ^
   I think I'd like to keep these since the two sliders in the combo here are really transitional and have large spacing.
   
7. 03:25:423 add some hitsound here? maybe whistle or a finish with low volume
   kkkkkk added finish

Hard:

1. HP +1 for better spread with Lunatic? since Lunatic 7 and hard 5, Is better 6 IMO
   I'd like to keep 5 if it's alright. I've watched players fail Hard diffs because they can't keep up with the drain.
   
2. 00:39:599 why not a cool slider like the lunatic?
   Since there aren't a lot of 1/2 sliders like in Lunatic, I felt the 6 ending on the downbeat is best. A spinner after that is natural, I think it works well.
   
3. 00:56:412 (4,5) - blanket /me runs
   kk
   
4. 01:10:588 (7,1) - nice pattern, but make a perfect line? unless if it's on purpose
   fixed
   
5. 01:18:170 (5,7) - you can do a better blanket here
   ;w;
   
6. 03:25:423 (4) - same as lunatic
   kk

Normal:

1. 02:19:159 (5) - this is touching the HP bar
   I don't think it's touching the default skin bar. Maybe yours is bigger.

Easy:

1. Use OD2 instead to balance the settings and the spread; Easy 2 Normal 4 Hard 6
   ok
   
2. 01:27:071 (1) - too close after a spinner, the best solution here is removing the spinner and mapping that part properly
   kkk, let me know if it doesn't work for you.
3. 03:21:467 this greenline is unnecesary right?
   gone

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