ClariS - Colorful - Magibeat Remix

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Muya
hi! :)

[General]
offset: 1409 (better offset start here)

[Easy]
00:01:747 (1,3,4,1,2,3) - soft hitsound please, I think normal hitsound is unfit
00:02:758 (2) - remove whistle and add finish
00:05:454 (1) - add finish to beginning
00:09:499 (2) - ^
00:11:522 (2,4) - add finish
00:35:117 (4,2,3) - do not overlap here,
00:58:039 (1,1) - add finish
01:10:173 (1) - add finish to end
01:18:263 (1) - add finish
01:24:331 (2) - ^
01:27:027 (1,2) - soft hitsound, and (2)'s end at normal hitsound
01:30:398 (1) - add normal or soft finish here

[KRZY's Normal]
00:25:342 - need a note if you follow lyrics
00:34:949 (6,7) - add finish to (6)'s end and (7)
00:40:511 (5,6) - do not overlap here
01:30:398 (6) - add finish to 2nd note

[W h i t e's Hard]
00:11:522 (3,4,1,2,3) - too hard this rhythm... maybe :?
00:44:387 (4) - move to x:168 y:192? I think (3,4,1) is wrong spacing
01:01:915 (3) - this note should be move to x:468 y:272 if you use 1.6x distance snap

[Insane]
00:24:331 (8) - need a newcombo because slider speed has changed
00:32:421 (8) - add new combo
00:43:207 (5) - ^
00:45:904 (5,1) - switch new combo
00:47:252 (3) - add new combo
00:56:690 (1,2,3,4) - better pattern, maybe :?http://puu.sh/77pWM.jpg
01:11:522 (1) - add finish
01:18:263 (2) - add finish to beginning
01:24:331 (4) - add finish
01:25:342 (3) - ^
01:26:016 (3) - add finish to beginning and 5th note
01:30:904 (3) - add finish to beginning
01:31:746 (3) - add finish

[WhiteAries' Insane]
00:02:758 (4) - add finish to beginning
00:05:454 (1) - ^
00:24:331 (5) - need a newcombo because slider speed has changed
01:04:780 (7,1) - switch new combo
01:30:567 (1,2,3,4,5) - soft hitsound is better

good luck~
Topic Starter
Neta

Chocoliti wrote:

Write with Korean

[General]



[Easy]

00:31:072 (4) - NC FIXED
00:44:555 (4) - 여기에 NC 혹은 00:45:904 (5) - 이곳에 NC FIXED
01:16:241 ~ 01:18:263 - 큰 문제는 아니지만 이 부분이 노말 난이도의 느낌, 다른 부분의 경우 00:39:162 (1) 나 01:19:612 (3) 와 같이 1/1기준으로 2칸씩 사용했는데 여긴 1칸씩 사용, 수정할지 말지는 본인의 선택 일단 보류! Consider it

[Insane]

00:05:117 (7) - 사실 수정하기 제일 귀찮겠지만 00:07:140 (2,3,4) - 이런식으로 늘어뜨려 놓는게 훨씬 좋은것 같음 뒤쪽처럼 늘어뜨리면 그다음 노트에 지장을 줌 Sorry
00:09:499 (1,2,3,4,5) - 노래완 살짝 관계 없는 5연타라 생각됨, 1/2로 단타 3개가 오히려 나아보임
00:13:881 (3) - (240, 256) 이동 FIXED
00:14:050 (4) - (248, 324) 이동 FIXED
00:32:421 (8) - 아마 NC FIXED
00:52:308 (5) - 슬라이더를 00:52:477 까지만 하고 00:52:645 여기에 일반 노트를 하나 넣은게 노래와 더욱 맞는것 같음
히트사운드를 0으로 해놓고 들어보면 노래와 전혀 맞지 않게 오버맵핑되어있음, 보컬에 맞춰서 아래와 같이 추천함
01:30:904 (3) - 노래와 맞지 않는 3연타 슬라이더 일반노트로 바꿔야함
01:31:409 (2) - ^, 개인적으론 아예 곡이 끝나는 부분인데 보컬에 맟줘서 01:31:409 (2,3) - 이 두개 노트도 지워버리는걸 추천함 물론 삭제후 노트 재배치 일단 이부분에 관해선 좋은 대안이 나오면 나중에 고치겠음

Good Luck!
Thanks for MOD~
WhiteAries
Topic Starter
Neta

-Kirito wrote:

hello from my queues ~(M4M)

모딩 늦어서 죄송합니다 ;w;
잡을 게 없어서 인지..그냥 대충잡았습니다.. :lol:

[General]
- 태그에 ニーワルス, ニコニコ, nicovideo, nico nico douga를 추가해주세요.
리믹스한사람이 니코니코동에 ニーワルス라는 분이 하셨습니다. 동영상 위치 OK~ 나중에 한꺼번에 고치겠습니다
- 타이틀에 있는 Magibeat Remix를 -Magibeat Remix- 붙여주시는게 좋을꺼 같네요. ^
- 00:02:758 - 여기에 BPM 178.00 하나 더 추가해야합니다. 그래야 박자가 맞습니다. 00:02:758 - BPM 178.00 one more add 무야 모딩대로 오프셋 바꾸니까 해결 됬어요~
- 크랩소리가 약간 좀... 다른 크랩사용하시는게.. Download Consider it

[Easy]
00:01:747 - ~ 00:07:477 - 이 구간은 소프트로 조용한 소리를 내야될꺼 같네요.
00:14:555 - 여기 서클 추가? 이지라서 필요없을듯 합니다 sorry
00:14:893 (2) - NC 추가해주세요
00:44:555 (4) - ^ Both Fixed

[Insane]
00:01:747 - ~ 00:07:477 - 이지랑 동일
00:02:084 (2,3) - 휘슬 추가 연속 3휘슬은 어색하네요 Sorry~
00:04:780 (6,7) - ^ ^
00:16:241 (8) - NC 추가 9번에 넣었습니다~
00:24:331 (8) - ^ 여기에 대해 말이 많아서 잠시 생각좀 해보겠습니다
00:32:421 (8) - ^ Fixed~
00:57:702 (4) - 애매한 흐름이네요.. 여기에 배치해보면 어떨까요? 다른 방법으로 고쳤습니다~
01:03:432 (3) - 갑자기 1/1 슬라이드 나오니 지루해지네요. 1/2로 계속 나가면 좋지않을까요? 보컬에 맞춰서 한거에요~ sorry
01:04:106 (4) - NC 추가. 변속입니다.
01:05:960 (5) - NC 추가
01:07:140 (1,3) - NC 교체 3 All fixed
01:29:387 (1) - 서클 삭제. 소리가 없습니다. 빈느낌이 들긴하지만 고려해보겠습니다

good, claris song remix lol
Thanks for mod
Topic Starter
Neta

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

From my Queue.

[General]
KRZY's Normal's colors are different from the rest diff.
Kiai times of all difficulties are not the same, consider using the same kiai times in all maps to provide the same environment in different difficulties. I think this will be OK because it's GD

The Background is 1365x768, which differs from the recommended size of 1024x768. Can't find it T_T

[All difficulties]
The audio lead-in is about 1700, consider making it at least 2000 since it starts quite weirdly.

[Insane]
00:20:117 (5,1) - You use the new combo and the music to make out a jump here which has a very understadable and fitting logic for the specific beatmap, yet you don't do it here: 00:21:213 (5,1) - which could be more fun to play and very easy to play. In short, make another jump there too if you'd like. Can't understand
00:27:027 (1,2,3) - The same mistake with Aries, triplets that don't stand anywhere.
00:28:376 (2,3,4) - ^ BOTH FIXED
00:41:185 (3,4,5,6,7) - The 5 circle steam doesn't fit, there I'd expect two triplets following the sliders before them. I think it's OK sorry
00:55:342 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I find this space increase bad, it just doesn't feel nice while playing. Personal opinion, besides it doesn't have a clear pattern. consider it for better patterns
01:02:758 (1,2,3) - Make something more beautiful out of it, it's a moment of slow motion which player has to feel every milliesecond well made. ^

That's all, the same comment applies as with Aries difficulty, the specific placement is not something I'd enjoy playing but that's something fully personal.


[Easy]
That's also good. well done.

About the offbeat line, the song has a very low volume constant stream but as long as the player can't hear it clearly, it cannot be considered a on-beat hit cause you can't synchronize it yourself while playing. I hope I made my self clear. :p
THANKS FOR MOD
Topic Starter
Neta

Muya wrote:

hi! :)

[General]
offset: 1409 (better offset start here) OK~ Fixed

[Easy]
00:01:747 (1,3,4,1,2,3) - soft hitsound please, I think normal hitsound is unfit
00:02:758 (2) - remove whistle and add finish
00:05:454 (1) - add finish to beginning
00:09:499 (2) - ^
00:11:522 (2,4) - add finish
00:35:117 (4,2,3) - do not overlap here,
00:58:039 (1,1) - add finish
01:10:173 (1) - add finish to end
01:18:263 (1) - add finish
01:24:331 (2) - ^
01:27:027 (1,2) - soft hitsound, and (2)'s end at normal hitsound
01:30:398 (1) - add normal or soft finish here

ALMOST FIXED!

[Insane]
00:24:331 (8) - need a newcombo because slider speed has changed To many modders saying lol FIXED~
00:32:421 (8) - add new combo FIXED~
00:43:207 (5) - ^ ^
00:45:904 (5,1) - switch new combo FIXED~
00:47:252 (3) - add new combo FIXED~
00:56:690 (1,2,3,4) - better pattern, maybe :?http://puu.sh/77pWM.jpg I think mine is better!
01:11:522 (1) - add finish
01:18:263 (2) - add finish to beginning
01:24:331 (4) - add finish
01:25:342 (3) - ^
01:26:016 (3) - add finish to beginning and 5th note
01:30:904 (3) - add finish to beginning
01:31:746 (3) - add finish Consider this all hit sound

good luck~
I'll check hitsound one more time

OK thanks for mod
W h i t e
Really Good Modders lol

Thanks for Mod~

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: MagiBeat.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62698
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 37645,38994
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Colorful Magibeat Remix (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:カラフル Magibeat Remix (Short Ver.)
Artist:ClariS
ArtistUnicode:ClariS
Creator:Neta
Version:W h i t e's Hard
Source:魔法少女まどか☆マギカ
Tags:ニーワルス ニコニコ nicovideo nico nico douga madoka magica w_h_i_t_e White KRZY WhiteAries
BeatmapID:371605
BeatmapSetID:146474

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"maxresdefault.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
3,100,163,162,255

[TimingPoints]
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8150,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
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48600,-200,4,2,2,70,0,0
49948,-133.333333333333,4,2,2,70,0,0
51296,-200,4,2,2,70,0,0
52644,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
64779,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
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75903,-100,4,2,1,70,0,1
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89723,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
90060,-100,4,2,2,70,0,0
90397,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
93094,-100,4,2,1,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 128,255,128
Combo2 : 128,255,255
Combo3 : 255,255,128
Combo4 : 255,128,192

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212,4,36970,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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292,248,37476,2,0,L|296:176,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,312,37813,6,0,P|304:332|364:296,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,256,38656,1,0,0:0:0:0:
148,348,38824,2,0,L|60:344,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,252,39161,6,0,P|104:192|88:124,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,56,39667,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,36,39835,2,0,P|152:32|184:40,1,70
256,132,40173,2,0,P|222:140|187:136,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,80,40510,6,0,L|476:76,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,40,41352,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,132,41521,2,0,P|248:160|256:208,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,284,41858,6,0,P|336:236|328:148,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
428,176,42364,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,176,42532,2,0,L|504:172,1,70
480,296,42869,2,0,L|410:292,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,284,43206,6,0,B|232:288|232:288|208:296|208:296|148:300,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,360,43712,1,0,0:0:0:0:
80,360,43880,2,0,P|57:295|86:233,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,192,44386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
86,150,44555,6,0,P|57:88|80:24,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,84,45397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,84,45566,2,0,P|276:88|312:80,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,44,45903,6,0,L|464:48,2,70,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,136,46408,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,136,46577,2,0,L|432:140,2,35
300,172,46914,1,8,0:0:0:0:
372,224,47083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,300,47251,6,0,P|268:304|220:285,1,105.000004005432,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,208,47757,2,0,L|80:212,1,105.000004005432
0,216,48262,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,284,48431,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,144,48600,6,0,L|32:104,1,35
116,120,48937,2,0,L|119:79,1,35,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,112,49274,2,0,L|208:40,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,42,49948,6,0,P|260:48|312:36,1,105.000004005432,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,8,50453,2,0,L|388:112,1,105.000004005432
392,192,50959,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,148,51128,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,160,51296,6,0,L|284:156,1,35
324,240,51633,2,0,L|288:236,1,35,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,320,51970,2,0,L|252:312,1,70
258,313,52644,6,0,P|192:328|128:296,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,220,53150,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,220,53234,1,0,0:0:0:0:
84,220,53319,2,0,L|80:148,1,70
208,168,53656,2,0,L|204:237,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
156,96,53993,6,0,P|88:104|24:72,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,60,54835,2,0,B|264:52|264:52|332:56,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,64,55173,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,64,55257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
400,64,55341,6,0,L|396:140,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
496,200,55678,2,0,L|500:124,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,212,56015,2,0,L|340:288,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,348,56352,2,0,L|444:272,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
397,133,56689,6,0,P|337:169|269:161,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,128,57195,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,128,57279,1,0,0:0:0:0:
184,128,57364,2,0,L|112:132,1,70
52,64,57701,2,0,P|24:112|32:172,1,105,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,180,58038,6,0,L|28:252,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,281,58375,2,0,L|112:212,1,70,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,244,58712,2,0,L|188:316,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
268,345,59049,2,0,L|272:276,1,70,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,188,59386,6,0,B|264:152|264:152|236:104|260:52,2,140,4|12|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,100,60229,2,0,L|404:96,1,70,0|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,188,60566,2,0,L|190:184,1,70
244,280,60903,6,0,P|308:268|348:208,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,163,61408,2,0,P|399:113|332:100,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,164,61914,1,4,0:0:0:0:
44,268,62757,5,4,0:0:0:0:
104,200,62925,1,0,0:0:0:0:
136,284,63094,1,2,0:0:0:0:
80,356,63262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
172,368,63431,5,4,0:0:0:0:
136,284,63600,1,0,0:0:0:0:
196,216,63768,1,2,0:0:0:0:
232,300,63937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,228,64105,6,0,L|334:224,2,46.6666666666667,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,307,64442,2,0,L|384:304,2,46.6666666666667,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,372,64779,6,0,P|460:324|432:244,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
380,184,65285,2,0,L|384:112,1,70
404,24,65622,2,0,P|369:25|336:37,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,65959,6,0,L|288:300,1,140
232,372,66465,1,8,0:0:0:0:
196,288,66633,2,0,P|124:280|68:312,1,140
144,364,67139,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,220,67307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,220,67392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,220,67476,6,0,B|48:192|68:168|68:168|36:136|40:88,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,32,67982,2,0,P|124:60|128:108,1,70
200,164,68319,2,0,P|204:129|221:99,1,70
296,48,68656,6,0,B|352:68|352:68|384:40|428:40,1,140
504,92,69161,1,8,0:0:0:0:
420,136,69330,2,0,L|428:276,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,368,69835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,272,70004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,272,70088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,272,70173,6,0,P|264:280|192:276,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,252,70678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,160,70847,2,0,L|4:164,1,70
168,184,71184,2,0,L|237:187,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,196,71521,6,0,P|336:148|356:68,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,0,72026,2,0,P|440:48|420:128,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
364,196,72532,2,0,L|368:268,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,356,72869,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,352,73206,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,220,73543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,40,73880,2,0,B|268:16|208:84|376:56,1,280,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,144,74892,6,0,L|246:140,2,46.6666666666667,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,220,75229,2,0,L|232:216,2,46.6666666666667,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,168,75903,6,0,P|108:228|156:292,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,348,76408,2,0,L|8:352,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,376,76746,2,0,P|232:356|332:364,1,140
396,368,77251,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,284,77420,2,0,P|340:220|348:120,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,60,77925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
428,120,78094,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,120,78178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,120,78262,6,0,L|500:116,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,88,78600,2,0,L|206:84,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,80,78937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,124,79105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,212,79274,1,8,0:0:0:0:
35,300,79442,6,0,P|88:260|99:189,1,140
188,168,79948,2,0,L|260:164,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,260,80285,2,0,L|170:252,2,140,0|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,96,81296,6,0,P|364:84|324:80,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,80,81633,2,0,P|201:83|165:100,1,70,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,172,81970,2,0,L|92:312,1,140,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,256,82644,6,0,L|260:184,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,292,82982,2,0,L|352:220,1,70
412,352,83319,2,0,L|452:216,2,140,8|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,380,84161,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,332,84330,2,0,B|196:312|196:312|108:328,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,344,84835,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,240,85004,6,0,L|200:224,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,152,85341,2,0,L|204:136,1,70,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
260,184,85678,2,0,L|308:176,2,46.6666666666667,4|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,100,86015,2,0,L|312:92,2,46.6666666666667,12|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,52,86352,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,56,87026,1,0,0:0:0:0:
188,60,87701,6,0,L|192:164,1,105.000004005432,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,184,88206,2,2,L|104:80,2,105.000004005432,0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,332,89723,6,0,L|296:328,3,35
316,316,90060,2,0,L|356:312,3,35,8|8|8|8,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,300,90397,6,0,P|404:236|384:172,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,108,90903,2,0,P|256:132|192:108,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,172,91408,2,0,P|107:237|135:300,1,140,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,91830,12,0,93094,0:0:0:0:
KRZY
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Topic Starter
Neta
OK~ UPDATED
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Hi~

[General]
  1. Combo colours in KRZY's Normal are different from the other diffs. I think it would be better to make combo colours consistent across all diffs.
  2. The quality of your background is not good. Here is an image of better quality: http://puu.sh/783Ah.jpg Additionally, I suggest to horizontally flip the image. If you look at the background while in the songs menu, the songs tabs on the right side of the screen would completely cover Madoka and Homura, so if you do a horizontal flip, they will be visible as shown in this screenshot: http://puu.sh/7846O.png Here is a flipped background... though you could probably do it yourself: http://puu.sh/784ay.jpg However, note that this will make some of the aspects of the characters on the wrongs side, ie. Homura's ribbon, so maybe don't do this xD It's up to you.


[Easy]
  1. 00:12:532 - I think there should be a note on this beat to build up intensity with the music. You could either add a circle here, or make a 1/1 repeat slider starting at 00:12:195
  2. 00:29:723 (1,2,3) - I suggest this rhythm: http://puu.sh/77Q9V.jpg I think this rhythm would work well because of sustained note in vocal starting on 00:29:723 and pickup on fourth beat to lead into next phrase.
  3. 00:47:251 (1,2) - I think this will be difficult for beginners to read, so maybe you should use this rhythm instead which fits to the music in a more obvious way for the player to understand: http://puu.sh/77Qqk.jpg
  4. 00:49:948 (3,4) - Same as above.
  5. 00:51:970 (1) - I think that this slider doesn't really play well with the music since the strong beat is on the repeat. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/77QHB.jpg
  6. 01:04:779 - Well... I just think object density is a bit low considering that you just entered kiai time. Consider using less 2/1 spacing, and adding some slightly more complex rhythms.
  7. 01:14:892 (1) - I think the player might click this early because of pickup in vocals at 01:14:555 so I think that maybe you should move this slider to start at 01:14:555 and then make 2/1 spacing between (1,2) You'll need to fix the spacing after if you do this.
  8. 01:28:880 (2) - This rhythm does not match the music. Make it like this instead: http://puu.sh/77R55.jpg Even this won't follow vocal entry, it will make much more sense to play.
  9. 01:30:482 (1) - I suggest to move the spinner to start at 01:31:746 and end at 01:33:094 To fill the space, you can add a slider from 01:30:903 to 01:31:408 like http://puu.sh/77Rh7.jpg
  10. 01:20:959 (4) - Maybe add New Combo?
  11. 00:28:375 (4,1) - Swap the New Combo
  12. 00:20:285 (3) - New Combo
  13. 00:02:757 (2) - Add NC for start of phrase?


[KRZY's Normal]
  1. Generally, I feel that this is too hard to be Normal diff. Some of the patterns used make it feel like a Hard diff. For example, the section from 00:14:892 to 00:24:330 and complex rhythms like 00:46:577 (5,6,7,1) Most of the map feels like it has very high distance spacing and high object density.
  2. I strongly recommend using AR6. AR6 is more appropriate here, considering that your object density is so high. AR5 is very hard to read in the faster sections, especially with the spacing changes like 00:14:892 (1,2) on which the player could hit (2) late because it is unexpected. Higher AR would make this more readable and easier to play.
  3. Combo colour 5 is too dark and hard to see for players using full background dim. I suggest to use the same combo colours as all other diffs in this mapset.
  4. 00:30:903 (2,3) - Why not blanket these? /.\
  5. 00:46:577 (5) - I think you should have new combo here since you seem to be following vocal phrase throughout the section previous to this.
  6. 01:30:397 (6) - New Combo?
  7. I think that first kiai should end at 01:15:566 instead


[W h i t e's Hard]
  1. AR8 might be better considering that BPM of this song is high.
  2. 00:02:757 (2,3) - /nazi Make (3) parallel with the end of (2)
  3. 00:26:858 (5) - New combo, since the rest of this section is mostly four beat phrases like at 00:37:813
  4. 01:28:206 (2) - I don't understand why you used whistle on this sliderslide. There's nothing in the music that suggest this.


[Insane]
  1. All of the hitsound volumes are too high! You should not have 100% volume for all sections -.-
  2. I think HP7 would give a better difficulty balance.
  3. 00:13:543 (1,2,3,4) - Increase the distance spacing between these so it reads better. About 1.92x would be good.
  4. 00:16:240 (8,1,2) - I think this rhythm is a bit confusing because the emphasis of beats in the map is different from the music. I think you should use either: http://puu.sh/77VWc.jpg or http://puu.sh/77W0H.jpg or http://puu.sh/77W2v.jpg
  5. 00:32:083 (6,7,1) - In my opinion, it may feel better if you increase the spacing a bit here.
  6. 00:43:206 (1,2,3) - I think this doesn't flow well. You could either move (2) up like this: http://puu.sh/780HT.jpg or down like this: http://puu.sh/780IV.jpg
  7. 01:30:903 (3,2) - Consider changing these to 1/2 tick sliders or single circles since they don't seem to actually follow any sound in the music, and this is a relatively calm part of the song, so it doesn't really make sense to overmap.
  8. 01:20:959 (6,1) - Swap NC
  9. 00:46:577 (6,7,1) - The combo needs to be consistent with 00:49:274 (1,2,3) Change one of them so they match each other.
  10. 00:25:678 (3,1) - Swap NC
  11. 00:16:240 - There should be NC at this time instead of 00:16:324 Ignore this if you changed the rhythm as I said earlier
  12. 00:14:892 (3,1) - Swap NC
  13. 00:08:824 (1) - This NC is unnecessary imo. Maybe you should remove it.
  14. 00:02:757 (4) - Add new combo. It parallels 00:05:453 (1)


[WhiteAries' Insane]
  1. 00:32:083 (5,6,1) - For me, the flow is a bit awkward here, and I would suggest to do Ctrl+G on (1)
  2. 00:58:038 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - It's up to you, but I think you could make something much more interesting here, as the music has accents on (1,5) but you didn't really show this emphasis in your mapping. I think you could do something creative to fit with the music accents here.
  3. 01:03:431 (1,2,3,4) - How about Ctrl+G these? It would have more interesting flow imo, and would give nice distance for a nice jump to get momentum into the stream.
  4. 00:12:195 - Remove useless green line
  5. 01:16:914 (5) - New combo?
  6. 01:06:128 (6) - New combo
  7. 00:30:734 (5,1) - Swap NC to parallel 00:28:038 (1,3) and 00:25:341 (1,3)
  8. 00:26:521 (6) - New combo here?
  9. 00:16:240 (12,1) - Swap NC to start combo on downbeat


Good luck!
GugUCorn
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[General]

  1. "widescreen support", "Letterbox during breaks" 체크 풀어주세요


[Easy]

  1. 00:09:498 (2) - 슬라이더 끝에 피니쉬 제거
  2. 00:20:285 (3) - 뉴콤보
  3. 00:25:341 (1,2) - 뉴콤보 바꿔주는 것은 어떤가요?
  4. 00:35:116 (4) - 슬라이더 끝에 클랩 제거
  5. 00:46:577 (4) - 역시 의도적으로 하신 것 같은 데, 클랩이 없는 게 나을 것 같아요
  6. 00:47:251 (1,2) - 이런 리듬 추천!
  7. 00:49:948 (3,4) - 마찬가지로~
  8. 01:02:757 (1) - 끝에도 휘슬 다는 것도 좋을 것 같아요
  9. 01:20:959 (4) - 뉴콤보
  10. 01:28:880 (2) - 애로우 부분(01:29:470) 을 01:29:386 으로 줄여주세요


[KRZY]

  1. 00:25:678 (2) - 이부분 클랩 N:C2가 나을 것 같아요
  2. 00:46:914 (6) - 이부분은 클랩 N:C1이 나을 것 같고요
  3. 00:53:993 (5) - 뉴콤보?
  4. 01:02:757 (1) - 01:04:105 으로 줄이는게 낫지 않을까요? 노멀에게는 너무 갑작스러운데..물론 가운데에 노트가 놓여져있긴말이죠 ㅎ
  5. 01:13:206 (3) - 클랩 소리는 잘 안 들리는 것 같아요, 제거 / 아니면 하드 난이도 처럼 전부 클랩 넣는 것도 나쁘지 않아 보여요
  6. 01:30:397 (6) - 뉴콤보


[white]

  1. 00:07:476 (3) - 끝에 클랩?
  2. 01:00:903 (1,2) - 첫부분에 휘슬 넣어봐요
  3. 01:01:914 (3) - 똑같이 휘슬
  4. 01:08:319 (3) - 클랩 빠졋어요
  5. 01:09:330 (3,4) - 3번 클랩 지우고 4번에 클랩
  6. 01:28:206 (2) - 몸통에 휘슬 쬐금 신경 쓰여요.. 지워주는게 좋아보여요


[WhiteAries]

  1. 00:25:678 ~ 00:35:959 Part - maybe S:C1 is better than S..If you want to Soft clap, i recommend Normal hitsound than soft hitsound.
  2. 00:46:914 (13) - clap


[Insane]

  1. 00:25:173, 00:25:257 - 리듬 추가
  2. 00:36:128 (1) - 클랩 제거
  3. 00:36:465 (2) - 끝에 클랩
  4. 01:31:914 (1) - 맨 뒷부분 소리 줄여주세요 ㅎ
[ Zzz ]
Hi~ Neta

[ General ]

사진의 크기가 1365x768이시네요 ... 1366x768로 바꿔주세요.

[ Easy ]

00:04:105 (4) - 조금 더 펴주시고 .. 00:05:116 (5) - 서클추가해주세요.

00:05:453 (1) - 슬라이더의 길이를 2배 늘려주세요.
( 00:06:465 (2) - 슬라이더의 끝이 여기까지 오도록.. )

00:09:498 (2) - Ctrl + G 누르셔서 리버스 해주세요.

00:31:071 (1,2) - 두개 다 좀더 펴주세요.

00:32:420 (2) - 리버스 해주시는게 더 좋을듯 싶네요.

00:40:510 (2) - 리버스

00:47:251 (1) - 슬라이더를 조금 더 늘려주셔서 00:48:094 (2) - 슬라이더의 끝이 이쪽으로 오게 해주세요.

00:49:948 (3) - ^ ( 위와같음 표시. )

01:20:959 (4) - 리버스

01:25:678 (4,1) -

[ KRZY's Normal ]

00:31:071 (3) - 패치되서 이거 둥글둥글하게 하실수있어요!
( 뾰족뾰족한게 좀 그러네요 .. 둥글둥글하게 만들어주세요! )

[ W h i t e's Hard ]

.....

화이트님 맵을 보면 항상 생각하는게 .. 제 완성된 하드를 잡는거랑 마찬가지라서 ..너무 맵이 완벽한듯 싶네요 ..

대단... 는 거의 나지모딩밖에 안할꺼같아서 .. 모딩 x ㅠㅠ... 나중에 실력이나 더 올리고 모딩해드려야겠음!

는 거의 님맵을 모딩하면 스타밖에 못줄듯 ㅠㅠ...

[ Insane ]

00:20:875 (3) - 여기 아래쪽으로 향하게 해주세요. ( 흐름떄문에. )

00:22:223 (3) - 이건 위쪽으로.

00:24:077 (5,6,7) - 마음같아서는 ..위쪽으로 향하게 해주셧으면 좋겠어요.

00:32:504 (2) - 직선으로 향하게 ㄱㄱ
(
)

01:03:431 (3) - 이렇게 하는것보다는.. 박자에 맟춰서 01:02:757 (1,2) - 이걸 반복해주시는게 좋을꺼같아요.

이지는 조금 그래도 .. 인세인은 꽤 괜찮은듯 싶네요.!!

[ WhiteAries' Insane ]

( Good Map!! )
Topic Starter
Neta

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Hi~

[General]
  1. Combo colours in KRZY's Normal are different from the other diffs. I think it would be better to make combo colours consistent across all diffs.
  2. The quality of your background is not good. Here is an image of better quality: http://puu.sh/783Ah.jpg Additionally, I suggest to horizontally flip the image. If you look at the background while in the songs menu, the songs tabs on the right side of the screen would completely cover Madoka and Homura, so if you do a horizontal flip, they will be visible as shown in this screenshot: http://puu.sh/7846O.png Here is a flipped background... though you could probably do it yourself: http://puu.sh/784ay.jpg However, note that this will make some of the aspects of the characters on the wrongs side, ie. Homura's ribbon, so maybe don't do this xD It's up to you.
THANKS FOR NEW BG!

[Easy]
  1. 00:12:532 - I think there should be a note on this beat to build up intensity with the music. You could either add a circle here, or make a 1/1 repeat slider starting at 00:12:195 FIXED
  2. 00:29:723 (1,2,3) - I suggest this rhythm: http://puu.sh/77Q9V.jpg I think this rhythm would work well because of sustained note in vocal starting on 00:29:723 and pickup on fourth beat to lead into next phrase. FIXED
  3. 00:47:251 (1,2) - I think this will be difficult for beginners to read, so maybe you should use this rhythm instead which fits to the music in a more obvious way for the player to understand: http://puu.sh/77Qqk.jpg Sorry I think it has no problem
  4. 00:49:948 (3,4) - Same as above. ^
  5. 00:51:970 (1) - I think that this slider doesn't really play well with the music since the strong beat is on the repeat. Try this instead: http://puu.sh/77QHB.jpg Fixed~
  6. 01:04:779 - Well... I just think object density is a bit low considering that you just entered kiai time. Consider using less 2/1 spacing, and adding some slightly more complex rhythms. OK FIXED
  7. 01:14:892 (1) - I think the player might click this early because of pickup in vocals at 01:14:555 so I think that maybe you should move this slider to start at 01:14:555 and then make 2/1 spacing between (1,2) You'll need to fix the spacing after if you do this. FIXED~
  8. 01:28:880 (2) - This rhythm does not match the music. Make it like this instead: http://puu.sh/77R55.jpg Even this won't follow vocal entry, it will make much more sense to play. FIXED
  9. 01:30:482 (1) - I suggest to move the spinner to start at 01:31:746 and end at 01:33:094 To fill the space, you can add a slider from 01:30:903 to 01:31:408 like http://puu.sh/77Rh7.jpg FIXED
  10. 01:20:959 (4) - Maybe add New Combo?
  11. 00:28:375 (4,1) - Swap the New Combo
  12. 00:20:285 (3) - New Combo
  13. 00:02:757 (2) - Add NC for start of phrase? ALL FIXED ABOUT NC




[Insane]
  1. All of the hitsound volumes are too high! You should not have 100% volume for all sections -.-
  2. I think HP7 would give a better difficulty balance. both FIXED
  3. 00:13:543 (1,2,3,4) - Increase the distance spacing between these so it reads better. About 1.92x would be good. FIXED
  4. 00:16:240 (8,1,2) - I think this rhythm is a bit confusing because the emphasis of beats in the map is different from the music. I think you should use either: http://puu.sh/77VWc.jpg or http://puu.sh/77W0H.jpg or http://puu.sh/77W2v.jpg I think this will be OK
  5. 00:32:083 (6,7,1) - In my opinion, it may feel better if you increase the spacing a bit here. FIXED
  6. 00:43:206 (1,2,3) - I think this doesn't flow well. You could either move (2) up like this: http://puu.sh/780HT.jpg or down like this: http://puu.sh/780IV.jpg FIXED
  7. 01:30:903 (3,2) - Consider changing these to 1/2 tick sliders or single circles since they don't seem to actually follow any sound in the music, and this is a relatively calm part of the song, so it doesn't really make sense to overmap. FIXED
  8. 01:20:959 (6,1) - Swap NC
  9. 00:46:577 (6,7,1) - The combo needs to be consistent with 00:49:274 (1,2,3) Change one of them so they match each other.
  10. 00:25:678 (3,1) - Swap NC
  11. 00:16:240 - There should be NC at this time instead of 00:16:324 Ignore this if you changed the rhythm as I said earlier
  12. 00:14:892 (3,1) - Swap NC
  13. 00:08:824 (1) - This NC is unnecessary imo. Maybe you should remove it.
  14. 00:02:757 (4) - Add new combo. It parallels 00:05:453 (1) ALL FIXED ABOUT NC


Good luck! THANKS FOR MOD!!!

TaMul wrote:

From My M4M Queue! >>TAMUL's M4M Queue(Your Requestion)<<

[General]

  1. "widescreen support", "Letterbox during breaks" 체크 풀어주세요


[Easy]

  1. 00:09:498 (2) - 슬라이더 끝에 피니쉬 제거
  2. 00:20:285 (3) - 뉴콤보
  3. 00:25:341 (1,2) - 뉴콤보 바꿔주는 것은 어떤가요?
  4. 00:35:116 (4) - 슬라이더 끝에 클랩 제거
  5. 00:46:577 (4) - 역시 의도적으로 하신 것 같은 데, 클랩이 없는 게 나을 것 같아요
  6. 00:47:251 (1,2) - 이런 리듬 추천!
  7. 00:49:948 (3,4) - 마찬가지로~
  8. 01:02:757 (1) - 끝에도 휘슬 다는 것도 좋을 것 같아요
  9. 01:20:959 (4) - 뉴콤보
  10. 01:28:880 (2) - 애로우 부분(01:29:470) 을 01:29:386 으로 줄여주세요


[Insane]

  1. 00:25:173, 00:25:257 - 리듬 추가
  2. 00:36:128 (1) - 클랩 제거
  3. 00:36:465 (2) - 끝에 클랩
  4. 01:31:914 (1) - 맨 뒷부분 소리 줄여주세요 ㅎ


ALL FIXED~

Thanks for mod~

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ Neta

[ General ]

사진의 크기가 1365x768이시네요 ... 1366x768로 바꿔주세요. OK

[ Easy ]

00:04:105 (4) - 조금 더 펴주시고 .. 00:05:116 (5) - 서클추가해주세요.

00:05:453 (1) - 슬라이더의 길이를 2배 늘려주세요.
( 00:06:465 (2) - 슬라이더의 끝이 여기까지 오도록.. )

00:09:498 (2) - Ctrl + G 누르셔서 리버스 해주세요.

00:31:071 (1,2) - 두개 다 좀더 펴주세요.

00:32:420 (2) - 리버스 해주시는게 더 좋을듯 싶네요.

00:40:510 (2) - 리버스

00:47:251 (1) - 슬라이더를 조금 더 늘려주셔서 00:48:094 (2) - 슬라이더의 끝이 이쪽으로 오게 해주세요.

00:49:948 (3) - ^ ( 위와같음 표시. ) 죄송하지만 이거 두개는 어떤의미신지 몰라서 못고쳤어요 ㅠ

01:20:959 (4) - 리버스

01:25:678 (4,1) -

리버스를 제외하고 다 고쳤습니다~



[ Insane ]

00:20:875 (3) - 여기 아래쪽으로 향하게 해주세요. ( 흐름떄문에. )

00:22:223 (3) - 이건 위쪽으로. 둘다 고치면 슬라 모양상 이상해지는거 같아서 안고쳤습니다~

00:24:077 (5,6,7) - 마음같아서는 ..위쪽으로 향하게 해주셧으면 좋겠어요. 위쪽으로 하면 오버렙 되기때문에 아래쪽으로 일부로 한거에요 zz

00:32:504 (2) - 직선으로 향하게 ㄱㄱ 둥근게 나은듯!
(
)

01:03:431 (3) - 이렇게 하는것보다는.. 박자에 맟춰서 01:02:757 (1,2) - 이걸 반복해주시는게 좋을꺼같아요. 이건 좀 지적받았는데 고려해볼게요~

이지는 조금 그래도 .. 인세인은 꽤 괜찮은듯 싶네요.!!

Thanks for mod!
W h i t e
=3=

osu file format v12

[General]
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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62698
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Colorful Magibeat Remix (Short Ver.)
TitleUnicode:カラフル Magibeat Remix (Short Ver.)
Artist:ClariS
ArtistUnicode:ClariS
Creator:Neta
Version:W h i t e's Hard
Source:魔法少女まどか☆マギカ
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384,192,26858,6,0,P|344:240|352:320,1,140
428,272,27364,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,304,27532,2,0,B|204:288|204:288|120:308,1,140
48,364,28038,2,0,P|33:332|32:292,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
92,232,28375,6,0,P|112:160|84:104,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
24,172,28880,2,0,L|172:160,1,140
256,152,29386,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,216,29555,6,0,P|344:152|320:88,1,140
232,64,30060,2,0,L|160:60,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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480,76,30734,1,8,0:0:0:0:
432,0,30903,1,0,0:0:0:0:
444,160,31071,6,0,B|436:212|436:212|440:244|440:244|432:300,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,368,31577,1,0,0:0:0:0:
340,284,31746,2,0,P|276:296|212:264,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,180,32251,6,0,B|120:172|120:172|88:176|88:176|32:168,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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192,236,35959,1,4,0:0:0:0:
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86,150,44555,6,0,P|57:88|80:24,2,140,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,84,45397,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,84,45566,2,0,P|276:88|312:80,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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400,64,55257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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260,188,60566,2,0,L|190:184,1,70
244,280,60903,6,0,P|308:268|348:208,1,140,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
447,163,61408,2,0,P|399:113|332:100,1,140,6|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,164,61914,1,6,0:0:0:0:
52,276,62757,6,0,P|44:308|48:348,2,70,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,208,63262,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,124,63431,6,0,P|136:92|140:52,2,70,4|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,192,63936,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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424,372,64779,6,0,P|460:324|432:244,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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404,24,65622,2,0,P|369:25|336:37,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
280,160,65959,6,0,L|288:300,1,140
232,372,66465,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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144,364,67139,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,220,67307,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,220,67392,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,220,67476,6,0,B|48:192|68:168|68:168|36:136|40:88,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,32,67982,2,0,P|124:60|128:108,1,70
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296,48,68656,6,0,B|352:68|352:68|384:40|428:40,1,140
504,92,69161,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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436,368,69835,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,272,70004,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,272,70088,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,272,70173,6,0,P|264:280|192:276,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,252,70678,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,160,70847,2,0,L|4:164,1,70
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412,0,72026,2,0,P|440:48|420:128,1,140,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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372,356,72869,5,4,0:0:0:0:
192,352,73206,1,8,0:0:0:0:
68,220,73543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,40,73880,2,0,B|268:16|208:84|376:56,1,280,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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360,60,77925,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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428,120,78178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,120,78262,6,0,L|500:116,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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116,80,78937,1,0,0:0:0:0:
36,124,79105,1,0,0:0:0:0:
12,212,79274,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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WhiteAries
KRZY
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Topic Starter
Neta
UPDATED~
Sonnyc
(단촐한) 랜덤 모딩

Easy:

00:29:723 (2,3,4) - 클랩 패턴상 (2) 끝과 (4)에만 두는게 나을듯 합니다.
00:30:734 (4,1) - ㅋㅋ? 점프 제거 바랍니다.
00:53:993 (2) - ctrl+G로 점프 없애주세요.
01:00:060 (1) - (2)와 역 흐름이어서 약간 헷갈릴 여지도 있고, 음악이 00:59:386 부터 질질 끄는 거라 굳이 노트를 안넣는게 더 이지로서 어울릴 듯 합니다.
01:04:105 (1,2,1) - 맨 처음 (1) 뉴콤 푸시고, (2) 부터 콤보 시작하는게 좋을 듯 싶습니다.
01:29:049 (2) - 끝에 피니시?

Insane:

00:16:830 - 간격 같은데 박자가 달라져서 좀 헷갈리는 감이 있을 것 같은데 노트 추가 고려해 주시길,,
00:46:408 - 좀 비어 있어서 심심한 느낌입니다.
01:00:903 (2) - 이 박자도 01:01:914 (2)과 같은 음인데, 저 한 군데에만 피니시가 있어서 어색하게 느껴집니다. 모두 피니시를 넣어주셨으면 좋겠어요.
01:01:408 (2) - ^
01:24:330 (4,5) - (5) 대신 (4)가 옳은 피니시 스팟 같습니다.
01:30:566 - 음악상 이 부분에 박자가 있는거는 안어울릴 것 같습니다. 01:30:734에 노트 하나로 대체하는게 나을 것 같아요.
01:30:903 (3) - 시작에 피니시?
01:31:746 (3) - 피니시?

수고하세요~
Topic Starter
Neta

Sonnyc wrote:

(단촐한) 랜덤 모딩

Easy:

00:29:723 (2,3,4) - 클랩 패턴상 (2) 끝과 (4)에만 두는게 나을듯 합니다. FIXED
00:30:734 (4,1) - ㅋㅋ? 점프 제거 바랍니다. 헉 실수 FIXED~
00:53:993 (2) - ctrl+G로 점프 없애주세요. FIXED
01:00:060 (1) - (2)와 역 흐름이어서 약간 헷갈릴 여지도 있고, 음악이 00:59:386 부터 질질 끄는 거라 굳이 노트를 안넣는게 더 이지로서 어울릴 듯 합니다. 괜찮은듯 합니다 Sorry
01:04:105 (1,2,1) - 맨 처음 (1) 뉴콤 푸시고, (2) 부터 콤보 시작하는게 좋을 듯 싶습니다. FIXED~
01:29:049 (2) - 끝에 피니시? FIXED

Insane:

00:16:830 - 간격 같은데 박자가 달라져서 좀 헷갈리는 감이 있을 것 같은데 노트 추가 고려해 주시길,, Disagree
00:46:408 - 좀 비어 있어서 심심한 느낌입니다. 일부로 끊은거라 별로 상관없을듯 해요!
01:00:903 (2) - 이 박자도 01:01:914 (2)과 같은 음인데, 저 한 군데에만 피니시가 있어서 어색하게 느껴집니다. 모두 피니시를 넣어주셨으면 좋겠어요.
01:01:408 (2) - ^ 둘다 클랩 처리 되있으므로 괜찮다고 봅니다
01:24:330 (4,5) - (5) 대신 (4)가 옳은 피니시 스팟 같습니다. FIXED~
01:30:566 - 음악상 이 부분에 박자가 있는거는 안어울릴 것 같습니다. 01:30:734에 노트 하나로 대체하는게 나을 것 같아요. 괜찮은거같아요.. 노트가 있어서 문제 안될꺼 같아요 Sorry
01:30:903 (3) - 시작에 피니시?
01:31:746 (3) - 피니시? 둘다 고려해보겠습니다~

수고하세요~
Thanks for mod!
10crystalmask01
Ello, mod from queue 8-)
[WhiteAries' Insane]
00:25:678 (1) - Add finish on the head?
00:33:431 (5,1) - Move more apart please, so they're not attached to each other.
00:36:465 (1) - Add finish
00:42:195 (2,4) - Move more apart.
01:05:791 (5,3) - ^
01:10:004 (5,3) - ^
01:26:352 (1,2) - These two notes should be spaced out more bigger since they're 1 beat apart. Yet, they're equally spaced the same as
all of 01:27:026 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - , which are in fact 1/2 a beat apart - not 1 beat.
01:31:746 (9) - Add finish

[Insane]
00:02:757 (1) - Add finish on the head?
00:24:330 (1) - ^
00:27:532 (4,1) - You could easily have created a blanket here, so it makes the flow look more smoother.
00:31:577 (4,7) - Move more apart.
00:35:959 (2) - Add finish
00:36:465 (2,3) - Why not create a blanket here as well?
00:43:543 (3,4) - ^
00:47:251 (3) - NC instead of 00:46:577 (1) -
01:07:476 (1,2) - Why not create a blanket here as well?
01:31:746 (3) - Add finish

[W h i t e's Hard]
Ar - 1?
00:02:757 (2) - Why didn't you make this slider completely blanket 00:01:746 (1) - ? I understand you made the ending point form a straight point so that it's parallel to 00:04:442 (3) - , but you could've just made 00:04:442 (3) - a curved slider instead, so it blankets 00:02:757 (2) - which blankets 00:01:746 (1) - ....does that make sense?
01:15:903 (1) - This shouldn't be places so closely to 01:15:229 (2) - , since this creates a bad spacing confusion towards the player.
Either move much more farther away, or stack.

[Easy]
00:13:543 (1,1) - You could've blanketed these objects, like this:

00:37:813 (3,1) - Are too close together.
01:04:779 (1) - Add finish and/or clap
01:27:026 (1,2) - Are too close together.

Good luck!
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