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Feint - Sky Dance

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Angelo
313 posts
Joined November 2012
Angelo
Hi Secret' !

Here is a new version of the background with a better quality (i spend 1 hour on it to resize the original image etc... :o )
I hope you'll like it :) :

Click me ! :D

PS: I try it with the storyboard and it was fine ;)
DJNightmare
882 posts
Joined February 2009
DJNightmare

Angelo wrote:

Hi Secret' !

Here is a new version of the background with a better quality (i spend 1 hour on it to resize the original image etc... :o )
I hope you'll like it :) :

Click me ! :D

PS: I try it with the storyboard and it was fine ;)
I was gonna make use of the low quality, but if SecretPipe wanna change it, I dont mind :P
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Secretpipe
Everything is updated !
For the new Background , I'll ask DJN cause I dunno if it's good !
DJNightmare
882 posts
Joined February 2009
DJNightmare

Secretpipe wrote:

Everything is updated !
For the new Background , I'll ask DJN cause I dunno if it's good !
I'm okay with it if you prefer high quality :3
Angelo
313 posts
Joined November 2012
Angelo

Secretpipe wrote:

I dunno if it's good !
I told you this, trust me xD :

Angelo wrote:

PS: I try it with the storyboard and it was fine ;)
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Secretpipe
Done O/
Aurele
osu! Alumni
7,408 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
oublie pas d'ajouter gabe et veus dans les tags
c;
Nozhomi
Global Moderator
4,568 posts
Joined May 2013
Nozhomi
Heyo j'ai essayé de mod mais ce mapset est vraiment trop bien ^^

- Normal :
  1. 00:41:734 (5,1)- Spacing de x1.34 au lieu de x1.20. Il vaudrait peut être mieux que tu garde le spacing constant pour une normal diff.
- Hard :
  1. 00:41:492 (4,5)- Tu peux blanket ces 2 la.
  2. 01:50:444 (7,2,3)- Tu pourrais peut être les stack.
-Alu's Extra :
  1. 00:38:589 (7,1)- Don't like this overlap. But maybe it's good for you.

Lol that's all I can found ^^'
Awesome map (cool song, badass SB).
Rank pls :D
Okoratu
Nomination Assessment Team / Elite Nominator
4,912 posts
Joined May 2012
Okoratu


General

  1. yes for this song, I suck at modding Easy / Normal though

Easy

  1. so contrary to how i'm doing things usually I'll start with this now (22222222 CS,HP,AR,OD)
  2. 00:46:090 (4) - would change this one for a 1/2 slider like you did here 00:36:171 (3) - followed up by a circle similarly to 00:33:751 (6) - (just shorter?)
  3. 00:57:220 - alternative start point for the spinner that follows maybe...?
  4. 01:15:123 (2) - would make it like you did in 01:12:946 (4) - (in order to have the same distance between all object and no 3/2 pause for one circle, maybe)
  5. 01:21:414 (1) - constant snap maybe? idk
  6. 01:24:801 (3) - should be a repat like 01:16:817 (4) - considering the simple rhythm you stick to imo
  7. 02:02:060 (4) - awesome slider just saying <3

Normal

  1. and continue with the normal... well consider using some hitsounds in the intro maybe, this doesn't really sound that nice considering the different sounds in the music (is ok for the easy because it only maps the same dominant sounds but this is getting a bit annoying here)
  2. 00:21:896 (5) - might use an 1/2 slider instead of the circle
  3. 00:38:589 - consider mapping this sound maybe, you do that many times already, so it would be more consistent to do that here e.g. as well..?
  4. 00:50:444 (1) - maybe the soft hitset with some whistles would be more apropiate for this part...?
  5. 00:55:041 - adding acircle here would be kinda better rhythm-wise imo
  6. 01:10:525 (2) - ... and here i think a 3/2 slider like 01:18:267 (2) - would be more fitting
  7. 01:32:541 (6,1) - replacing these 2 with an 1/2 slider would be fitting the background sounds better imo
  8. 01:33:751 - I demand a circle here :<
  9. 01:41:492 ^
  10. 01:55:767 (6) - for the sake of the background sounds here i'd make this an 1/2 slider
  11. 01:57:702 (3,5) - mildly annoyed that these 2 don't blanket (guess it doesn't matter as these aren't visible when playing anyways)
  12. 02:03:871 (1) - ... dunno shouldn't this start on the white tick then or at least on the red tick, i see no reason for the blue tick here

Hard

  1. why is the break longer than on the normal???
  2. 00:18:509 (7) - ... might add a whistle?
  3. 00:26:734 (5,6) - because of 00:21:654 (2,3,4) - (would be easier to guess how to play also the sounds for that are there)
  4. 00:30:726 (5) - would simply put this circle to 00:30:847 - in order to empathize this sound instead of the more quiet one on the blue tick?
  5. 00:33:025 (1,2) - would prefer something similar to 00:27:218 (1,2) - here (same applies to following stacks, I ain't point them all out now)
  6. 00:31:089 (1) - ^ if you fix that you might think about the DS here again
  7. 00:36:775 (4,1) - would go for a less sharp edge in this like CRTL + R 180 deg and CRTL+G or sth
    Example
  8. 00:46:089 (1,2,3) - would use a higher spacing to empathize these sounds maybe
  9. Sooo... uhhh why is the breaktime here longer than on the Normal...? xD
  10. 01:13:186 (7,8,9,10,1) - making this one a straighter stream would fit better in with 01:13:912 (2,3,4) - , or 01:09:557 (8,9,1) - i think
  11. 01:48:267 (8) - because you do this 01:22:380 (4,5,6) - this circle might be misleadingly suggesting 1/4 instead of 1/2 idk
  12. 02:01:573 (6) - would make a 1/2 slider out of this to have no bigger time spaces without objects in the kiai time
  13. 02:03:751 - might consider mapping this one, as it uses the similar sounds to 00:46:089 (1,2,3) -

Alu's Extra

  1. because of the slider velo of this diff i wished the streams in the beginning were using more spacing, cuz 124 bpm AR9 is pretty unpleasant with such low spacing imo
  2. 00:20:928 (11,12) - would swap those on the timeline because of spacing
  3. 00:26:734 (11,12) - spacing shouldn't be that big here imo, was ok for the strong sounds in 00:22:863 (5,6) - but i think these shouldn't be bigger than 00:24:799 (11,12) -
  4. 00:40:767 (1) - not a perfect blanket omg :o
  5. Btw Combo colour 1 might be too similar to the color used in the storyboard and thus unreadable when playing with that enabled, just saying
  6. 01:48:871 (2,3) - if i understood what you're doing here correctly, these circles shoud do a similar turn to 01:46:936 (2,3) - or 01:50:807 (2,3) -
  7. 02:04:113 - might add a spinner here for consistency with like... every other diff?

Gl with your map!

Edit:

RIPRIPRIP
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Secretpipe

Nozhomi wrote:

Heyo j'ai essayé de mod mais ce mapset est vraiment trop bien ^^

[notice]- Normal :
  1. 00:41:734 (5,1)- Spacing de x1.34 au lieu de x1.20. Il vaudrait peut être mieux que tu garde le spacing constant pour une normal diff. Right
- Hard :
  1. 00:41:492 (4,5)- Tu peux blanket ces 2 la. Non
  2. 01:50:444 (7,2,3)- Tu pourrais peut être les stack. Great idea !
Lol that's all I can found ^^' Thanks !
Awesome map (cool song, badass SB). :D
Rank pls :D I'll try
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Secretpipe

Okoratu wrote:



General

  1. yes for this song, I suck at modding Easy / Normal though
That's okay


Normal

  1. and continue with the normal... well consider using some hitsounds in the intro maybe, this doesn't really sound that nice considering the different sounds in the music (is ok for the easy because it only maps the same dominant sounds but this is getting a bit annoying here)
  2. 00:21:896 (5) - might use an 1/2 slider instead of the circle nah
  3. 00:38:589 - consider mapping this sound maybe, you do that many times already, so it would be more consistent to do that here e.g. as well..? nah , I wanted it , it'ill be overmapped I think !
  4. 00:50:444 (1) - maybe the soft hitset with some whistles would be more apropiate for this part...? Yeah sure !
  5. 00:55:041 - adding acircle here would be kinda better rhythm-wise imo nah
  6. 01:10:525 (2) - ... and here i think a 3/2 slider like 01:18:267 (2) - would be more fitting yup
  7. 01:32:541 (6,1) - replacing these 2 with an 1/2 slider would be fitting the background sounds better imo nah
  8. 01:33:751 - I demand a circle here :< nah
  9. 01:41:492 ^ nah , I want keep that part calm
  10. 01:55:767 (6) - for the sake of the background sounds here i'd make this an 1/2 slider you're right
  11. 01:57:702 (3,5) - mildly annoyed that these 2 don't blanket (guess it doesn't matter as these aren't visible when playing anyways) I'll try
  12. 02:03:871 (1) - ... dunno shouldn't this start on the white tick then or at least on the red tick, i see no reason for the blue tick here It was an error from me ! Fixed !

Hard

  1. why is the break longer than on the normal???
  2. 00:18:509 (7) - ... might add a whistle? I'm not sure
  3. 00:26:734 (5,6) - because of 00:21:654 (2,3,4) - (would be easier to guess how to play also the sounds for that are there) I don't get it
  4. 00:30:726 (5) - would simply put this circle to 00:30:847 - in order to empathize this sound instead of the more quiet one on the blue tick?I dunno if it's great idea , I wanted to do that before
  5. 00:33:025 (1,2) - would prefer something similar to 00:27:218 (1,2) - here (same applies to following stacks, I ain't point them all out now)I'll think about it
  6. 00:31:089 (1) - ^ if you fix that you might think about the DS here again [/color]
  7. 00:36:775 (4,1) - would go for a less sharp edge in this like CRTL + R 180 deg and CRTL+G or sth Awesome idea !
    Example
  8. 00:46:089 (1,2,3) - would use a higher spacing to empathize these sounds maybe Sure
  9. Sooo... uhhh why is the breaktime here longer than on the Normal...? xD Now , the breaktime on Normal is the same :D
  10. 01:13:186 (7,8,9,10,1) - making this one a straighter stream would fit better in with 01:13:912 (2,3,4) - , or 01:09:557 (8,9,1) - i think
  11. 01:48:267 (8) - because you do this 01:22:380 (4,5,6) - this circle might be misleadingly suggesting 1/4 instead of 1/2 idk
  12. 02:01:573 (6) - would make a 1/2 slider out of this to have no bigger time spaces without objects in the kiai time nah
  13. 02:03:751 - might consider mapping this one, as it uses the similar sounds to 00:46:089 (1,2,3) - Sure


Gl with your map!

Edit:

RIPRIPRIP
EDIT ; I'll fix when Lizzy will be online cause I need to ask her some questions !
Thanks a lot for modding !
Last edited by Secretpipe , edited 1 time in total.
Alumetorz
408 posts
Joined October 2011
Alumetorz

Nozhomi wrote:

-Alu's Extra :
  1. 00:38:589 (7,1)- Don't like this overlap. But maybe it's good for you. Keep overlap owo
Thanks for modding!

Okoratu wrote:

Alu's Extra

  1. because of the slider velo of this diff i wished the streams in the beginning were using more spacing, cuz 124 bpm AR9 is pretty unpleasant with such low spacing imo I disagree with you here, I think the lower spacing fits better
  2. 00:20:928 (11,12) - would swap those on the timeline because of spacing No, the spacing between the slider and the next stream would be awkwardly low imo
  3. 00:26:734 (11,12) - spacing shouldn't be that big here imo, was ok for the strong sounds in 00:22:863 (5,6) - but i think these shouldn't be bigger than 00:24:799 (11,12) - Ok, nerfed
  4. 00:40:767 (1) - not a perfect blanket omg :o I think I fixed LOL
  5. Btw Combo colour 1 might be too similar to the color used in the storyboard and thus unreadable when playing with that enabled, just saying You shouldn't tell me LOL
  6. 01:48:871 (2,3) - if i understood what you're doing here correctly, these circles shoud do a similar turn to 01:46:936 (2,3) - or 01:50:807 (2,3) - If you understood what I was thinking while mapping this, you'd know more than me, cause I have no idea what I was thinking while doing this LOL
  7. 02:04:113 - might add a spinner here for consistency with like... every other diff? Hm, yeah why not
Thanks for modding!
http://puu.sh/8NzWH.osu Change to Alu's Insane if you want
AlexaBM
755 posts
Joined March 2013
AlexaBM
hi Secret o/
as requested

  • [Easy]
  1. 00:21:412 (2,3,4) - I suggest to make simple rhythm like this:
    img
  2. 00:23:348 (1) - Maybe it's better to make 2/1 slider? If you agree, change at least some of such sliders further. Rhythm should be a bit easier.
  3. 00:30:606 (4) - lift up slider's tail to have a better flow. x:480 y:24 for example.
  4. 00:31:574 (1,2,3) - IMO such patterns are too hard for newbies, they can missunderstand it. try to make 2/1 slider instead.
  5. 01:17:543 (1) - Try to make it smoother. For example: 7th point - x:88 y:48, red point - x:80 y:92, and three last points: 1 - x:72 y:140, 2 - x:48 y:164, end of a slider - x: 0 y:168
  6. 01:31:092 (3,4,1) - Newbies can missunderstand this moment and click on (4) or on a (1)'s tail. Maybe replace it to direct the player to the correct objects?
  7. 02:02:060 (4) - Miiddle point at x:256 y:304?

    [Normal]
  8. 00:15:605 (1,3) - Maybe blanket? also if you agree, change 00:18:509 (5) - shape too.
  9. 00:19:476 (1,2,3) - It looks better if you replace it, I'm about the symmetry relative to the OY axis. Just lift it up.
  10. 00:33:509 (5) - That circle is too low, lift all this square up and rotate it to make it a square again.
  11. 00:42:702 (1,2) - Here should be symmetry relative to the OY axis. And make it really symmetrical
    img
  12. 00:50:444 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This moment doesn't look well IMO, I suggest to remove it and to continue the break time.
  13. 01:24:799 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved.
  14. 01:38:831 (1) - It's a bit out of screen, maybe make it more straight? It doesn't look well for players with 4:3
  15. 01:50:928 (4) - Too low again. I already told you how to make it better
  16. 02:03:992 - Shouldn't the slider begin here?

    [Hard]
  17. AR -1?
  18. 00:23:105 - Put a circle here?
  19. 00:23:347 (1,2) - Make a straight line with these objects?
  20. 00:25:283 (1,2) - ^
  21. 00:30:726 (5) - Maybe put it here 00:30:847 - ?
  22. 00:31:815 (3,1) - Bad overlap.
  23. 02:00:847 (5,6) - Blanket.
    OMG I LOVE THIS KIAI <333

    [Extra]
  24. 00:16:573 (7) - NC. Too big combo IMO
  25. 00:18:509 (7) - ^
  26. 00:20:444 (7) - ^
  27. 00:24:315 (7) - ^
  28. 00:26:251 (7) - ^
  29. 00:28:186 (7) - ^
  30. 00:30:121 (7) - ^
  31. 00:40:525 (7,1) - Blanket can be better.
  32. 00:42:460 (7,1) - ^
  33. 00:46:936 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Those jumps looks a bnit randomly and IMO it's better to make a Break Time here.
  34. 01:12:460 (4) - It's out of screen, it doesn't look well for players with 4:3.
That's all from me. Good luck o3o
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Secretpipe

AlexaBM wrote:

hi Secret o/
as requested

  • [Normal]
  1. 00:15:605 (1,3) - Maybe blanket? also if you agree, change 00:18:509 (5) - shape too. Yeah sure
  2. 00:19:476 (1,2,3) - It looks better if you replace it, I'm about the symmetry relative to the OY axis. Just lift it up. Nah , consistent
  3. 00:33:509 (5) - That circle is too low, lift all this square up and rotate it to make it a square again. nah
  4. 00:42:702 (1,2) - Here should be symmetry relative to the OY axis. And make it really symmetrical Fix'd
    img
  5. 00:50:444 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This moment doesn't look well IMO, I suggest to remove it and to continue the break time. Nah , I prefer keep it sorry x)
  6. 01:24:799 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved. Fix'd
  7. 01:38:831 (1) - It's a bit out of screen, maybe make it more straight? It doesn't look well for players with 4:3 I'll fix it if anyone else say this
  8. 01:50:928 (4) - Too low again. I already told you how to make it better ^
  9. 02:03:992 - Shouldn't the slider begin here? Yeah but I aleady fix in the last mod but I couldn't update yesterday !
  • [Hard]
  1. AR -1? I'm not sure
  2. 00:23:105 - Put a circle here? Nah cause I'll have to add a circle here too 00:21:170 -
  3. 00:23:347 (1,2) - Make a straight line with these objects? Nah , it's volunteer
  4. 00:25:283 (1,2) - ^ ^
  5. 00:30:726 (5) - Maybe put it here 00:30:847 - ? Thought the same idea but I'll keep that for the moment !
  6. 00:31:815 (3,1) - Bad overlap.I don't see any bad overlap here
  7. 02:00:847 (5,6) - Blanket. Fix'd
    OMG I LOVE THIS KIAI <333 YEEE
That's all from me. Good luck o3o
Thanks a loooooot for modding <3

EDIT : Everything updated !
Alumetorz
408 posts
Joined October 2011
Alumetorz

AlexaBM wrote:

[Extra]
  1. 00:16:573 (7) - NC. Too big combo IMO Oh, wow. I didn't even notice the inconsistency in NCing. But I prefer longer NCs...
  2. 00:18:509 (7) - ^
  3. 00:20:444 (7) - ^
  4. 00:24:315 (7) - ^
  5. 00:26:251 (7) - ^
  6. 00:28:186 (7) - ^
  7. 00:30:121 (7) - ^
  8. 00:40:525 (7,1) - Blanket can be better. I tried...
  9. 00:42:460 (7,1) - ^ I tried...
  10. 00:46:936 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Those jumps looks a bnit randomly and IMO it's better to make a Break Time here. I disagree...
  11. 01:12:460 (4) - It's out of screen, it doesn't look well for players with 4:3. Fixed
Thanks for modding!
http://puu.sh/8PyeT.osu
Fatfan Kolek
589 posts
Joined January 2013
Fatfan Kolek
Worst mod ever inc. <3

[Easy]
  1. 00:28:671 (2) - Too near at the Hp-bar on the top.
  2. 00:33:026 (4) - Too near at the bottom. ^^ Try to centre your map a bit more pls. :D
  3. 01:17:543 (1) - Wow, this slider is actually touching the Hp-bar, lol. :D Try to avoid it. :3
  4. 01:29:882 (2) - Too near at the bottom.
  5. 01:36:414 (4) - Too near at the top.
The rest seems ok. :)

[Normal]
  1. 00:29:638 (5,6) - For me personally you're using too much stacked notes. Try to avoid double circles I would say. Circle + Slider is ok, but for new players double circles could irritate them maybe. I'm not quite sure tho. :D
Good difficulty. You're improving! :)

[Hard]
00:44:154 (3,4,1,2) - I don't like the flow here. ^^

All these triples are quite hard for a hard difficulty. But it's fun to play and has a nice flow overall. Good job here aswell. <3

[Extra]

Cool difficulty.:3 Didn't find anything where I could say that this looks awkward or doesn't flow well. :)
MoodyRPG
2,754 posts
Joined August 2010
MoodyRPG
Hi there

General
  1. ~
Veus' Easy
  • - 00:46:574 (1) - Add a finish here?
    - 00:23:106 (4) - This is so hard for newbies players, I'd suggest remove
Normal
  • - 00:46:574 (1) - Finish
    - 01:16:815 (3) - I would like to see this slider a bit curve, like this
    - 01:19:476 (3) - According with your combo pattern, you need to agree a new combo here
Hard
  • - 01:12:702 (6) - Spacing?
Kenterz' Insane
  • - 00:34:113 (7) - Is was intentional this spacing?, if not, fix it
Alu's Extra
  • -- Meh, fine
Good luck
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
Was requested to (re?)hitsound the Normal..
Here ya go :3
Code
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Feint - Sky Dance.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 92529
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Normal
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
EpilepsyWarning: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 40781,43685,70782,77315,81868,96896,97138,97380,97621,97863,98105,107302
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.5

[Metadata]
Title:Sky Dance
TitleUnicode:Sky Dance
Artist:Feint
ArtistUnicode:Feint
Creator:Secretpipe
Version:Normal
Source:
Tags:shoegaze gaze Lizzy Kyshiro Alumetorz DJNightmare Veus Gabe
BeatmapID:414100
BeatmapSetID:146251

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.4
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
2,46773,56866
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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126899,-100,4,2,0,15,0,0
127383,-100,4,2,0,10,0,0
127867,-100,4,2,0,5,0,0


[Colours]
Combo1 : 255,255,0
Combo2 : 255,150,45
Combo3 : 240,240,0
Combo4 : 81,168,255
Combo5 : 32,255,88

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376,316,26009,1,8,0:0:0:0:
376,316,26251,2,0,P|320:296|236:316,1,140,2|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
76,340,27218,6,0,P|56:296|56:268,1,70
56,192,27702,2,0,P|60:157|76:126,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,76,28186,2,0,B|212:56|212:56|288:80,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,196,29154,2,0,P|391:230|375:261,1,70
328,332,29638,1,0,0:0:0:0:
328,332,29880,1,8,0:0:0:0:
244,336,30121,2,0,B|178:315|178:315|110:335,1,140,2|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,188,31089,6,0,P|100:156|124:84,1,140
188,32,31815,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,88,32057,2,0,P|273:153|332:188,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,216,33025,1,0,0:0:0:0:
474,381,33509,1,0,0:0:0:0:
307,359,33992,1,2,0:2:0:0:
332,192,34476,1,8,0:0:0:0:
332,192,34960,6,0,P|276:148|192:164,1,140
144,204,35686,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,288,35928,2,0,P|184:332|268:316,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,272,36654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,192,36896,2,0,L|320:52,1,140
244,16,37621,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,28,37863,2,0,P|80:64|56:108,1,140,2|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
56,280,38831,6,0,P|94:336|159:359,1,140
296,260,39799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,188,40283,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,40,40767,2,0,B|292:24|368:32,1,140
464,164,41734,2,0,B|396:180|320:172,1,140,2|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,248,42702,6,0,P|155:182|176:116,1,140
344,115,43670,2,0,P|364:181|344:246,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,296,44638,2,0,B|132:320|132:284|80:300,2,105,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,228,45605,2,0,P|268:292|244:356,1,140,2|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,216,46573,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58186,12,8,61573,0:0:0:0:
36,136,62057,6,0,B|36:236|36:236|60:276,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,324,62783,2,0,P|188:336|260:324,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,304,63509,1,8,0:0:0:0:
480,220,63992,6,0,B|480:124|480:124|456:80,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,44,64718,2,0,P|312:32|240:44,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,72,65444,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,192,65928,6,0,P|32:244|32:280,2,70,2|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,136,66654,2,0,P|184:124|256:140,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,180,67380,1,8,0:0:0:0:
464,280,67863,6,0,P|484:228|484:192,2,70,2|0|0,0:2|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,336,68589,2,0,P|332:348|256:336,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,308,69315,2,8,P|152:280|116:268,1,70
60,220,69799,6,0,P|56:123|130:38,1,210,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,40,70767,2,0,P|276:64|344:40,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,116,71734,6,0,P|512:181|488:246,1,140,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,292,72460,2,0,L|272:320,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,328,73186,1,8,0:0:0:0:
44,244,73670,6,0,P|44:168|84:108,1,140,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,64,74396,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,60,74880,2,0,L|396:48,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,180,75605,6,0,P|492:256|448:304,1,140,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,332,76331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
204,348,76815,2,0,L|124:356,1,70,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,356,77299,1,8,0:0:0:0:
52,356,77541,6,0,L|28:208,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,140,78267,2,0,P|188:136|236:64,1,210,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,64,79476,2,0,L|424:212,1,140,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,280,80202,2,0,P|264:284|216:356,1,210,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,344,81412,6,0,B|40:272|40:272|60:184,1,140,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,128,82138,1,8,0:0:0:0:
109,47,82380,2,0,P|165:108|161:167,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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195,273,84073,2,0,P|211:201|275:161,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
346,148,84799,2,8,P|387:131|415:95,1,70
479,155,85283,6,0,P|415:215|351:231,1,140,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,250,86009,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,266,86251,2,0,P|134:290|87:340,1,140,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
26,182,87218,6,0,P|91:157|138:107,1,140,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,54,87944,2,0,P|271:78|318:128,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
366,198,88670,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,328,89154,6,0,P|192:348|104:316,1,140,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,272,89880,2,0,P|32:188|72:80,1,210,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,40,91089,2,0,P|296:20|368:44,1,140,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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452,236,92299,1,8,0:3:0:0:
388,292,92541,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,236,92783,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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100,240,93992,2,0,P|124:292|216:340,1,140,2|8,0:2|0:2,0:0:0:0:
360,344,94960,2,0,P|412:316|420:284,2,70,4|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,352,95686,2,0,L|136:344,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
52,340,96412,1,8,0:0:0:0:
76,260,96654,1,0,0:0:0:0:
76,260,96896,6,0,P|52:196|68:124,1,140,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,84,97621,2,0,P|216:72|272:28,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,44,98347,1,8,0:0:0:0:
500,120,98831,6,0,P|524:190|496:268,1,140,2|0,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,316,99557,2,0,B|388:344|388:344|320:320,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
244,288,100283,2,8,P|208:268|160:252,1,70
104,224,100767,2,0,P|84:160|112:84,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
272,92,101734,2,0,P|293:157|273:223,1,140,2|8,0:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,352,102702,6,0,P|124:304|124:280,2,70,4|0|0,0:3|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,356,103428,2,0,P|312:322|381:322,1,140,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,340,104154,1,8,0:0:0:0:
440,260,104396,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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316,112,105363,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,128,105847,2,0,P|113:139|74:147,2,70,0|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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152,248,107299,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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416,224,108267,1,8,0:0:0:0:
416,224,108509,6,0,P|400:144|356:104,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:2,0:0:0:0:
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435,327,111412,1,0,0:0:0:0:
377,169,111896,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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272,60,117218,1,2,0:2:0:0:
320,220,117702,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Secretpipe
Thanks ! I tried yesterday but I didn't save x_X
I'll check it now !

EDIT : Fixed things mo my diff for Moody and Fatfan's mods !

Thanks a lot for modding guys ! :D
Kirin
267 posts
Joined August 2012
Kirin

Lizzy wrote:

Squirrel wrote:

hey there! :3

[Hard]
  1. 01:02:057 - starting with the kiai the pattern gets sooo repetitive, consider deleting a few circles, eg 01:12:097 (3) - or 01:14:033 (3) - or 01:17:904 (2) - that's all up to you! (atm it just feels a bit too much :c) I don't quite get your point here, actually. But I unfortunately have to say, those objects are placed to a beat each, the beats are there, and that's what I was going for.
  2. 01:03:025 (5) - if you rotate this by -38° you can improve the movement to 01:03:509 (6) - it doesn't do much to the movement, it's oriented towards (7) anyways, I dunno.
Sorry for the lack of changes; though, I get what you meant with the last point, I'll consider it again later.
Thanks for your feedback! :)

Kirin wrote:

Mod request o////////

[Normal]
00:16:574 (2) x:336 y:244
00:33:509 (5) Out of screen?
01:10:768 (3) Rotate this by -3
01:33:753 Maybe add a circle?
01:34:721 ^
01:41:495 ^
01:42:463 ^
01:44:156 (3,4) Why you stacked this ;_;
01:49:237 Maybe add a circle?
01:50:205 ^
01:56:979 ^

[Hard]
00:23:710 (2,3) x:328 y:180 (in a few words, move them a little bit left)
00:46:573 (1) x:228 y:192

[Alu's Extra]
Oh god the spacing D:

Gl with the map (i'll give a star :D)
As for your mod on Normal, I think you could have gone a little more into detail, like justify your suggestions, so they come across clearly and convincing.
Just saying "add circle", "^ ^ ^" and "x: <?> y: <?>" doesn't add much to constructive criticism. :(
*Don't get me wrong, I don't hate you for it omg ofc I do, why'd you not give suggestions for my part jkjk*

Thanks to you guys!
I think i should say sorry for not explaining that "Add circle" etc.
I said to add circle because there is a rhythmic gap (?) between one note and the next one so i said to add circle for fill up that gap.
i know that my english is very bad and my explaination was terrible :(
69653863
1,818 posts
Joined January 2012
69653863
Mod request from my queue

Guide
Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

Some useful links for mapping:
Analyzing flow in beatmaps
Mapping polarity
How to make beautiful sliders
How to make beautiful sliders (advanced)
Difficulty naming
Advanced Timing

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General
  1. Remove Kyshiro from tags
  2. Why is Gabe on tags?

    Secretpipe wrote:

    Gabe's Easy by Gabe 100%
    ?????????? where
Easy
  1. CS2 is just.. too much imo
  2. This mapset lacks proper hitsounding, all it has is just normal-hitnormals. Really?
  3. The rest is fine though
Normal
  1. 00:19:476 (1,2,3) - You know you could place this in the center of the playfield for symmetry niceties http://puu.sh/8SdtT.jpg
  2. 00:22:380 (6) - Improper proportion
  3. 00:41:492 - Add note?
  4. 00:58:186 (1) - Replace clap sound with softwhistle
  5. 01:58:186 (4,5) - Place this like http://puu.sh/8SdCi.jpg Notice the blanket
Hard
  1. 00:33:025 (1,4) - This overlap is bad, fix it pls
  2. 00:40:767 (1,4) - Same here
  3. 01:09:678 (9) - This hitnormal sound is actually unneeded, if it's removed it'll still follow music
  4. 01:25:283 (1,2,3) - Stack? It'll look better
  5. 02:01:815 - Why missed this note?
Insane
  1. AR9 is kinda too fast here, due to slow song speed
  2. 00:58:246 (1) - End this spinner at the next white tick?
  3. 01:05:807 (7,2) - Why don't you just stack? It'll look better
  4. 01:43:065 (2,4) - Blanket maybe?
  5. 01:51:412 (4) - Too far
Extra
  1. 00:36:896 (1,2) - Blanket is slightly off
  2. 01:01:573 (1) - Place on the center of playfield maybe? It's kinda too far
  3. Nice!
Good luck!

>>>>Some of the mods above haven't got their kudosu.
>>>>>>>>>>To DJNightmare, you should put the collab parts name on the storyboard (participant name in the end is not enough)
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
100% Dank.

General:
For the beginning section, I reccomend a whistle on every white tick. It helps keep the drive of the map going, and matches the song's drums.
In the kiai time, consider using custom hitcolors to make all of the combos blue. Be careful not to make it hard to read, though.

Storyboard:
So are the birds going behind the clouds or. Because clouds aren't that transparent. (Also, I know it's difficult to fix, but the birds look storyboarded. By that, I mean that it looks super stiff. Try loosening them up a bit?)

Extra:
00:31:089 (1) - What's with the style change here? Nothing changes in the music that I'm hearing. If anything, switch the style choices between the two, and have the beginning have long sliders, and then get progressively harder with the streams.
00:46:573 (1) - For this section, have hitsounds to emphasize this. I honestly could hear in the music where this came in until I listened a few more times, and the lack of hitsounds just made these seem random until I heard it in the music. I'd prefer whistles or drumnormals or something. I can give further suggestions on what to do, but I like to leave room for your creative design ;3;

Another:
00:15:605 - For the beginning, use soft hitsounds. It sounds WAY too heavy right now.
01:12:097 (2,3) - Maybe have this directly above (1)?
01:22:863 (7) - For some reason I keep wanting to hit this early. The spacing is fine, but maybe with the momentum of the previous notes, it might be a good idea to add a SLIGHT jump here.
01:47:178 (3) - Center this out. You have one note that's overlapped and one note that isn't. Choose which one fits better ;3;
02:03:992 - Add a note here with a normalfinish addition.

Hard:
If this is a collab as the description says, please storyboard in who mapped where (or mention it in the post at least)
00:15:605 - Soft hitsounds yay
01:09:073 (6) - Add drumfinish here
01:48:509 (1) - Stack pls ;3;. Or have the previous note start below the slider (or to the left) rather than above, since it looks pretty cramped like that.

Normal:
00:15:605 - Soooft

Gabe's Veus's Easy:
00:15:605 - Soooft.
Please hitsound your diff. It's actually unrankable to have a map without hitsounds. plus, I don't mod WIPs, and I consider a map without hitsounds WIPs :P. but its the last diff so eeeh
Aurele
osu! Alumni
7,408 posts
Joined January 2011
Aurele
http://puu.sh/8Tikc.txt


yup. hitsounds added.
Alumetorz
408 posts
Joined October 2011
Alumetorz

inverness wrote:

Extra
  1. 00:36:896 (1,2) - Blanket is slightly off I tried to fix!
  2. 01:01:573 (1) - Place on the center of playfield maybe? It's kinda too far That was actually intended :o
  3. Nice! Thanks :D

CDFA wrote:

Extra:
00:31:089 (1) - What's with the style change here? Nothing changes in the music that I'm hearing. If anything, switch the style choices between the two, and have the beginning have long sliders, and then get progressively harder with the streams. I'd like to have both patterns seperately, but it does make sense what you mean by the difficulty. So I switched both!
00:46:573 (1) - For this section, have hitsounds to emphasize this. I honestly could hear in the music where this came in until I listened a few more times, and the lack of hitsounds just made these seem random until I heard it in the music. I'd prefer whistles or drumnormals or something. I can give further suggestions on what to do, but I like to leave room for your creative design ;3; I hoenstly have no idea how to hitsound these without them sounding awkward. I'd tried before giving this to Secretpipe, but removed them, because it was kinda unnatural. It would be awesome, if you could help me with these! :D
Thanks a lot guys :)

http://puu.sh/8THFB.osu
AruOtta
1,296 posts
Joined May 2012
AruOtta

inverness wrote:

Mod request from my queue

Insane
  1. AR9 is kinda too fast here, due to slow song speed
  2. 00:58:246 (1) - End this spinner at the next white tick? No because it's exacly the moment when the song changes
  3. 01:05:807 (7,2) - Why don't you just stack? It'll look better Why everybody is so annoying with that kind of stuff ;w; It's not a problem in play mod... Fixed because it bother me xD
  4. 01:43:065 (2,4) - Blanket maybe? Done
  5. 01:51:412 (4) - Too far I used 1.3 of distance snap, like for every 1/2 spacing
Good luck!

>>>>Some of the mods above haven't got their kudosu.
>>>>>>>>>>To DJNightmare, you should put the collab parts name on the storyboard (participant name in the end is not enough)

CDFA wrote:

100% Dank.

General:
For the beginning section, I reccomend a whistle on every white tick. It helps keep the drive of the map going, and matches the song's drums.
In the kiai time, consider using custom hitcolors to make all of the combos blue. Be careful not to make it hard to read, though.

Another Insane 8-) :
00:15:605 - For the beginning, use soft hitsounds. It sounds WAY too heavy right now. soft-hitwhistle because I hate soft-hitclap xD
01:12:097 (2,3) - Maybe have this directly above (1)? Fixed
01:22:863 (7) - For some reason I keep wanting to hit this early. The spacing is fine, but maybe with the momentum of the previous notes, it might be a good idea to add a SLIGHT jump here. I forget to use 1.3 (I used 1.0) so it's already done (?)
01:47:178 (3) - Center this out. You have one note that's overlapped and one note that isn't. Choose which one fits better ;3; Done
02:03:992 - Add a note here with a normalfinish addition. Fixed
Update : http://puu.sh/8U4LI.osu
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Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Secretpipe
modmodmodmodmodmod

CDFA wrote:

100% Dank.

General:
For the beginning section, I reccomend a whistle on every white tick. It helps keep the drive of the map going, and matches the song's drums.
In the kiai time, consider using custom hitcolors to make all of the combos blue. Be careful not to make it hard to read, though.

Storyboard:
So are the birds going behind the clouds or. Because clouds aren't that transparent. (Also, I know it's difficult to fix, but the birds look storyboarded. By that, I mean that it looks super stiff. Try loosening them up a bit?)


Hard:
If this is a collab as the description says, please storyboard in who mapped where (or mention it in the post at least)
00:15:605 - Soft hitsounds yay yay
01:09:073 (6) - Add drumfinish here I'll see
01:48:509 (1) - Stack pls ;3;. Or have the previous note start below the slider (or to the left) rather than above, since it looks pretty cramped like that. Done

Normal:
00:15:605 - Soooft Yeah sure

modmodmodmodmodmod

inverness wrote:

Mod request from my queue

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General
  1. Remove Kyshiro from tags
  2. Why is Gabe on tags?

    Secretpipe wrote:

    Gabe's Easy by Gabe 100%
    ?????????? where
Easy
  1. CS2 is just.. too much imo
  2. This mapset lacks proper hitsounding, all it has is just normal-hitnormals. Really?
  3. The rest is fine though
Normal
  1. 00:19:476 (1,2,3) - You know you could place this in the center of the playfield for symmetry niceties http://puu.sh/8SdtT.jpg Done
  2. 00:22:380 (6) - Improper proportion Really?
  3. 00:41:492 - Add note? Sure
  4. 00:58:186 (1) - Replace clap sound with softwhistle Done
  5. 01:58:186 (4,5) - Place this like http://puu.sh/8SdCi.jpg Notice the blanket Thanks , I didn't have idea but it's great now
Hard
  1. 00:33:025 (1,4) - This overlap is bad, fix it pls Done
  2. 00:40:767 (1,4) - Same here Done too I think x)
  3. 01:09:678 (9) - This hitnormal sound is actually unneeded, if it's removed it'll still follow music I'm gonna ask Lizzy
  4. 01:25:283 (1,2,3) - Stack? It'll look betters I'll ask Lizzy for that
  5. 02:01:815 - Why missed this note? Added a note
Good luck! :3

>>>>Some of the mods above haven't got their kudosu.
>>>>>>>>>>To DJNightmare, you should put the collab parts name on the storyboard (participant name in the end is not enough)
[/box]

Thanks a lot guys for modding <3
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ouch.
So okoratu, I answered your mod, but then I accidentally refreshed the page and my whole answer was gone.
Basically in a nutshell, I said that changing that stream doesn't affect gameplay, it's only visual, and that way it's more my style.
But thanks anyway for your input!

AlexaBM wrote:

[Hard]]AR -1? I don't think AR7 was the real AR before the update (I believe it was 8). Anything below 7 would be too sluggish, though!
Sorry for not fixing! but I simply feel that AR<7 is too slow. Triples look awkward like that, I've checked twice.

MoodyRPG wrote:

Hard
01:12:702 (6) - Spacing? This actual jumps doesn't feel like a jump when played. Not sure, waiting for more opinions.

inverness wrote:

Hard
  1. 01:09:678 (9) - This hitnormal sound is actually unneeded, if it's removed it'll still follow music actually yeah, you're right
  2. 01:25:283 (1,2,3) - Stack? It'll look better hmpf fine, really reluctant on that one, though.
thanks inv! :)

CDFA wrote:

Hard:
If this is a collab as the description says, please storyboard in who mapped where (or mention it in the post at least)
01:09:073 (6) - Add drumfinish here Why specifically there?

wow sorry guys, I really feel bad for being extremely stubborn... I feel bad for fixing almost nothing, actually...
but most aspects are about my style and I'd love to keep it though!

PS: I have a hunch that you changed the AR, secretpipe :(
I changed it to AR8, even if only for the time being.
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DJNightmare
882 posts
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DJNightmare

CDFA wrote:

Storyboard:
So are the birds going behind the clouds or. Because clouds aren't that transparent. (Also, I know it's difficult to fix, but the birds look storyboarded. By that, I mean that it looks super stiff. Try loosening them up a bit?) Added easing on the birds to ease out into the sky. And yes, the clouds are not so transparent on purpose, as though the birds are going in between the clouds :3

inverness wrote:

>>>>>>>>>>To DJNightmare, you should put the collab parts name on the storyboard (participant name in the end is not enough) Added!~
Just sent Secretpipe the remaining changes to the storyboard to suit the different difficulties :3

Good luck Secretpipe!~ Cheers :)

Kudos to Secretpipe for the interesting Spinner Transition :P
Secretpipe
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Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Secretpipe
Everything updated !

PS: Also , I hope the spinner is a good idea o3o !
Kurai
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Joined March 2009
Kurai
[Veus' Easy]
  1. Le BPM est à 123.997 au lieu de 124, ralalah ces jeunes qui touchent à tous les boutons. :3
  2. 01:06:414 (2) - Enlève ce slider de près de la life bar *-*
[Normal]
  1. 01:09:799 (1) - Ce slider est un peu trop long, termine le sur 01:10:283, fait commencer 01:10:767 (2) à 01:10:525 - et termine sur 01:11:009 et met un cercle à 01:11:251 ?
    Image : http://puu.sh/8XYrf.jpg
  2. 01:22:380 (3) - Ce slider commence trop tôt,je ferais plutôt un slider 1/2 ici comme tu l'as fait pour 01:16:815 (3).
  3. 01:26:251 (3) - ^
  4. 01:33:751 - J'ajouterais une note ici, sinon ça fait comme un vide dans la musique.
  5. 01:41:492 - ^
  6. 01:49:234 - ^
  7. Pourquoi tu fais pas des hitsounds comme dans la Hard ? Ça rendrait beaucoup mieux imo.
[Kenterz's Insane]
  1. 01:47:178 (3,4) - A ta place, je ferais un petit slider ici. J'ai testé plein de fois cette partie, le doublet de cercles passe mal ici >w<
  2. 02:03:992 (7) - NC pour mettre l'accent sur la fin.
[Alu's Extra]
  1. Check for unsnapped objects. (AIMod : ctrl+shift+A).
  2. Stack leniency 7 please. owo
AruOtta
1,296 posts
Joined May 2012
AruOtta

Kurai wrote:

[Kenterz's Insane]
  1. 01:47:178 (3,4) - A ta place, je ferais un petit slider ici. J'ai testé plein de fois cette partie, le doublet de cercles passe mal ici >w< D'accord
  2. 02:03:992 (7) - NC pour mettre l'accent sur la fin. Un bleu pour que ça aille bien avec le spinner
http://puu.sh/8Y0a5.osu OwO
Alumetorz
408 posts
Joined October 2011
Alumetorz

Kurai wrote:

[Alu's Extra]
  1. Check for unsnapped objects. (AIMod : ctrl+shift+A).
  2. Stack leniency 7 please. owo
Fixed, thanks!

http://puu.sh/8Y4uD.osu
quiz-chan_DELETED
quiz-chan_DELETED
chui sure que tu m'as oublié, Kurai :(
je ne vois rien mod pour Hard, alors j'espère que la diff t'a plu!

"Lizzy u tryin'a speak french?!?!"
yee don't worry I'm kinda familiar with it *shot*
Aurele
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Aurele
je vais faire ça dès que j'ai mon ordi entre les mains et pour le bpm, g r1n tuché ):
Fatfan Kolek
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Joined January 2013
Fatfan Kolek
I smell a bubble. D:

It smells disgustingly good.
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe

Kurai wrote:

[Normal]
  1. 01:09:799 (1) - Ce slider est un peu trop long, termine le sur 01:10:283, fait commencer 01:10:767 (2) à 01:10:525 - et termine sur 01:11:009 et met un cercle à 01:11:251 ?
    Image : http://puu.sh/8XYrf.jpg Superbe idée :p Done
  2. 01:22:380 (3) - Ce slider commence trop tôt,je ferais plutôt un slider 1/2 ici comme tu l'as fait pour 01:16:815 (3). J'ai pas trouvé de moyen donc ej garde comme ça actually edit : thanks galv for the amazing idea !
  3. 01:26:251 (3) - ^ Done
  4. 01:33:751 - J'ajouterais une note ici, sinon ça fait comme un vide dans la musique. Ca ira je crois
  5. 01:41:492 - ^ Ca ira je crois ici aussi
  6. 01:49:234 - ^ Done !
  7. Pourquoi tu fais pas des hitsounds comme dans la Hard ? Ça rendrait beaucoup mieux imo. J'ai refais les HS
Thanks a lot Kurai for modding /O/

EDIT : Also Fatfan , I wish :D
Last edited by Secretpipe , edited 1 time in total.
Aurele
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http://puu.sh/8YjiL.txt
Kurai
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Kurai

Lizzy wrote:

chui sure que tu m'as oublié, Kurai :(
je ne vois rien mod pour Hard, alors j'espère que la diff t'a plu!

"Lizzy u tryin'a speak french?!?!"
yee don't worry I'm kinda familiar with it *shot*
Si il y a pas de mod, ça veut dire que j'ai rien à redire (ou plutôt rien qui ne mérite d'être dit, j'évite de faire trop de suggestions personnelles).
quiz-chan_DELETED
quiz-chan_DELETED
yessss

Bubble, here we come!!! maybe so? I dunno
Avena
2,158 posts
Joined December 2012
Avena
General
  1. There are a few unused .osb files in the folder, Please only have one of them in the set.
  2. These combo colors really don't fit the background and the storyboard, Maybe do some colorhaxing shananigans with a yellow scheme and a blue scheme? Also, Easy and Normal use different colors than the rest of the set.
  3. Consider doing -1AR on both Hard and Insane for better spread.
  4. How come the only skinned element you have is a Spinner? ._.
  5. Consider getting a sample for the snares in the song, the hitsounding is really bland currently.
  6. Easy and Insane don't have the diff-specific ending in the storyboard.

Alu's Extra
  1. 00:22:137 (2) - Object's end is not snapped!
  2. 00:26:008 (2) - Object's end is not snapped!
  3. 00:32:420 (10,11) - These stream jumps are a bit awkward to read sometimes, Maybe add a new combo on (11) So it's more reading friendly? This suggestion also applies to the rest of the stream jumps in the section.
  4. 00:50:081 (3) - 00:53:952 (3) - 00:57:823 (3) - Are these notes actually needed? They don't really sound like they emphasise anything in the song, making them play really strangely and make an uncomfortable feeling when playing. Consider removing these three.
  5. 01:02:057 - The hitsounding on this whole section doesn't make sense, you're using a tom (drum-hitclap) for the snare sounds in the song and a snare (drum-hitwhistle) for the kicks, I'd suggest you to remake the hitsounding on the kiai so the drum-hitwhistles are used for the snares.
  6. 2speedmapped5me

Kenterz' Insane
  1. Correct diffname would be Kenterz's Insane
  2. 00:18:871 (6) - This slider is a bit strange, it starts on a really weak beat while it ends on the strong snare, maybe just change this slider into two circles so it makes more sense rhythmically?
  3. 00:20:686 (4,5) - Spacing error, the spacing between these is x1.09 while the rest of the stream is x1.
  4. 00:22:621 (5,6,7) - Due to grid snap, there's an odd x0.5 gap in the stream's spacing, consider turning off grid snap and redo this triple so the spacing is consistent.
  5. 00:29:396 (2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing is a bit messed up here because of grid snap, please turn it off and remake this stream so it's consistent. (Please apply these suggestions to the rest of the streams in the map)
  6. 00:30:242 (7,8) - Again, these sliders start on weak beats and end on strong beats, making them a bit unnatural when playing, Consider making a rhythm like this:
    SPOILER
  7. 00:32:178 (6,7) - Same as above.
  8. 00:41:855 (6,7) - Same as above.
  9. 00:45:726 (8) - Same as above.
  10. 01:04:476 (3,6) - The stack between these is a bit off, Currently this isn't a problem, but if you apply the approach rate suggestion I wrote in the General section, then this will be noticeable when playing and will be worth a fix.
  11. 01:08:226 (2) - Again, blue tick 1/4 slider that feels odd when playing and doesn't really make sense with the rhythm, please consider changing this into two circles or something along those lines.
  12. 01:22:501 (6) - Same as above.
  13. 01:23:710 (2,3) - Same as above.
  14. 01:27:581 (2) - Same as above.
  15. 01:31:452 (2) - Same as above.
  16. 01:45:001 (2) - Same as above.
  17. 01:45:726 (4,5) - Same as above.
  18. 01:46:936 (2,3) - Bame as asove.
  19. 01:52:742 (2) - .evobe sa emaS
  20. I'll stop pointing these out now, but I think you'd be able to find the rest by yourself.

Hard
Change the diffname into "Hard Collab" to point out the fact that this is a collab?

Secretpipe:
  1. The whole intro part has inconsistent spacing for the 1/4, Sometimes you use x0.4, Sometimes you use x0.3, And sometimes even x0.6! Consider setting a consistent value for the whole section.
  2. 00:17:541 (5,6) - I really can't see a reason to stack these, maybe just space out (6) to create a triangle with 00:17:541 (5,6,7) - ?
  3. 00:27:944 (3,4) - I really don't like the current visual of these, the heads look really really close, making them look really cramped up. Here is a possible alternative instead of the current pattern:
    SPOILER
Lizzy:
  1. 01:10:162 (2) - This slider starts on a blue tick and ends on a white tick, making it not really make sense when it comes to the rhythm. Please consider replacing this with 2 circles.
  2. 01:25:283 (1,2,3) - This is the first (and only) time you used a pattern like this in the map, consider using consistent spacing for this, it might be really throwing off for players who are playing a Hard.
I really don't like the way the styles combine here, mainly due to Lizzy using quite a bit of small spacing jumps while Secretpipe used a consistent spacing value throughout most of the map.

I really can't mod Normal and Easy, they are both extremely strange to me, but I can tell you one thing, their flow is pretty darn awkward at the moment.
I don't believe you should rush to get the Bubble now, since there's so much more to improve in the set and it seems like you guys missed some of the potential you had in this, Especially Gabe, Lizzy and Secretpipe.
Also, as stated in the General section, the hitsounding still needs a lot of work and polishing in my opinion.
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