inverness wrote:

Nice, but why cut version?
Anyway don't put that (Cut ver.) in title, put it in creator's words

Also remove dnb from tags, even Feint himself stated that this is not dnb
Good luck btw!

DJNightmare wrote:

Good luck on the map :3
I hope the SB is awesome

Damnae wrote:

Storyboard mod because I feel like it :p Hurray \:D/


00:46:331 - it looks like the clouds are moving, align them better or show that sprite since the beginning of the map. Due to the showing of that sprite for the whole map, sprites are re-ordered.

http://puu.sh/8yytX.jpg make sure the transparent parts of the sprite are black, or it looks like this. Recreated using Photoshop (Pen Tool is getting annoying ;_;)

http://puu.sh/8yyB5.jpg left and right edges are smooth but top and bottom are pixelated, add some transparency on top and bottom of the sprite so that all edges are smooth. Added a "Glow" effect to it

http://puu.sh/8yyHp.jpg I can't read most of the text :/ Properly timed the sprite's Add Parameter for more visibility

PARALLELOGRAMS ARE SO HARD QAQ

#secretpipelogic

Cherry Blossom wrote:

tu vois bien que la hard ne ressemble pas à une hard mais à une soft insane...

Secretpipe wrote:

Mais de toute façon , j'vais essayer de faire une super map dans tout les cas !

Cute Bunny wrote:

Normal

It seems need to lower the HP Drain. [ -1 ] Sure !

00:46:816 ~00:50:203 - Want you to add something to this point. Is too short to put blank. It's break

Hard

00:27:702 (4,5) - I think it's easy to get confused. Must be a change in the pattern. I'll see !

Alu's Extra

00:47:390 ~ 01:01:870 - Continue to decrease without recovery. Add new combo persuaded.

New Combo list

00:47:574 / 00:49:462 / 00:51:398
00:53:333 / 00:55:269 / 00:56:960

or...

HP Drain -1 ?

It seems almost perfect level right.Maybe it is, but I did not see ...

Good luck. I think it is good.

p.s. I want to have a low graphics technology.

EDIT :: 2014-05-11 19:21
+★

1. are you mapping an Easy? cause Normal is far too hard atm. you need one diff below 3.30 star rating, iirc
2. and wow, that SB load is high. @@
   it's nice tho, so instead of changing it, please add a note somewhere in the map's description for people with low PCs.
   they should disable it, otherwise they'll lag like hell. >:
3. check uninherited timing point in Extra diff, it's off.
4. consider lessen the intensity of your combo colours, they're extremely bright, which doesn't go that well with the SB, imo
   example

   

1. where'd the hitsounds go? O-O
2. HP and OD -1 > HP3 and OD3
3. 00:23:348 (1) - if you rotate this a bit, it flowes slightly better with 00:22:380 (6) - but doesn't work as well with 00:24:316 (3) -
   my suggestion is to swap the shape of 6 and 3, so it looks like this -
   screen

   
4. 00:34:477 (7,1) - stack correctly (move 7 to 332|192)
5. 00:42:703 (1,2) - you can improve movement here if you rotate them a bit
   screen

   
6. 00:46:574 (1) - move to 128|216 for better triangle
7. 01:02:059 (1,2) - it's just a sliiight break of DS, but still. move 2 to 36|136 and move middle anchor one grid down (to keep DS with following)
8. 01:11:736 (4) - I think there is a NC missing here o.o
9. 01:27:221 (4) - ^
10. 01:42:705 (1,2,3,4) - might work better if you bend 2 in the other direction and unstack 3, so it looks like this -
    screen

    
11. 01:45:850 (3) - consider rotating this by -18°? it matches better with 01:46:576 (4) - then and doesn't break the flow at all
12. 01:57:705 (3,5) - you could blanket this really beautifully ;w;

1. overall diffspread is a bit unbalanced, consider decreasing OD by 1
   I'd prefer less AR as well, but that looks just weird orz
2. 00:18:267 (6) - feels more natural if you unstack this similar to 00:17:299 (4) -
3. 00:18:509 (7,8) - if you compare the distance between thee two and other patterns, eg 00:15:605 (1,2) - , they are rather close
   maybe move 8 further down? or think about changing it up a bit -
   example

   
4. 00:19:718 (2,3,4) - hmh, this is one of these triplets that start to sound so monotonous after a while
   maybe remove the second circle (3) here, it's still the beginning of the song, it migth be as well a bit more relaxing. (and you get rid of the monotony)
   smilar thing for 00:21:654 (2,3,4) - but you might as well keep it here, so you already start to change the pattern in the beginning
5. 00:25:767 (4,5,6) - overall shape of them is a bit off, try to arrange them more like 00:27:702 (4,5,6) - ? that'd look better!
6. 00:31:089 (1,2) - feels more natural if unstacked as well (but maybe that's just me, I'm not sure xD)
7. 00:32:541 (5,6,1,2) - make sure to stack everythig here correctly
8. 01:02:057 - starting with the kiai the pattern gets sooo repetitive, consider deleting a few circles, eg 01:12:097 (3) - or 01:14:033 (3) - or 01:17:904 (2) - that's all up to you! (atm it just feels a bit too much :c)
9. 01:03:025 (5) - if you rotate this by -38° you can improve the movement to 01:03:509 (6) -
10. 01:33:992 (5) - looks better to me if you bend it in the other direction
11. 01:48:025 (7,8,1,2,3) - could be blanketed nicely
12. 02:00:847 (1) - I'd prefer if you unstack this, it feels kinda forced to play atm
13. 02:04:113 (1) - copy green lines from Normal for this? o.o

1. beginning feels really monotonous, I'd prefer if you alternate some patterns
   but I'm not sure, this might be totally standard for extra diffs T_T
2. 00:31:075 (1) - mabye only use half the size and add a reverse? there's this beat at 00:31:317, a reverse emphasizes that better
   same applies to similar patterns afterwards, but it might be nice to alternate between both to break the monotony?
3. 01:04:704 (4) - this blanket is really off, the tail needs to be further away .o. (there are more, but they most likely go unnoticed anyway)
4. 01:20:914 (7) - ^

Squirrel wrote:

hey, m4m here! :3

[General]

1. are you mapping an Easy? cause Normal is far too hard atm. you need one diff below 3.30 star rating, iirc
2. and wow, that SB load is high. @@
   it's nice tho, so instead of changing it, please add a note somewhere in the map's description for people with low PCs.
   they should disable it, otherwise they'll lag like hell. >:
3. check uninherited timing point in Extra diff, it's off.
4. consider lessen the intensity of your combo colours, they're extremely bright, which doesn't go that well with the SB, imo
   example

   

[Normal]
Since this is the easiest difficulty of the mapset, I'll try to point out some things that can lessen difficulty slightly to make it playable for beginners as well.
I'm not trying to get it on an Easy level, but a Normal that's a enjoyable for both - beginners and a bit experienced players. (which is what the easiest diff should be, imo)

1. where'd the hitsounds go? O-O
2. HP and OD -1 > HP3 and OD3
3. 00:23:348 (1) - if you rotate this a bit, it flowes slightly better with 00:22:380 (6) - but doesn't work as well with 00:24:316 (3) -
   my suggestion is to swap the shape of 6 and 3, so it looks like this -
   screen

   
   I'll see
4. 00:34:477 (7,1) - stack correctly (move 7 to 332|192) Sure !
5. 00:42:703 (1,2) - you can improve movement here if you rotate them a bit
   screen

   
   Don't think so
6. 00:46:574 (1) - move to 128|216 for better triangle Sure !
7. 01:02:059 (1,2) - it's just a sliiight break of DS, but still. move 2 to 36|136 and move middle anchor one grid down (to keep DS with following) Sure !
8. 01:11:736 (4) - I think there is a NC missing here o.o Sure !
9. 01:27:221 (4) - ^ Sure !
10. 01:42:705 (1,2,3,4) - might work better if you bend 2 in the other direction and unstack 3, so it looks like this -
    screen

    
    Sure !
11. 01:45:850 (3) - consider rotating this by -18°? it matches better with 01:46:576 (4) - then and doesn't break the flow at all Sure !
12. 01:57:705 (3,5) - you could blanket this really beautifully ;w;

I wanted to do a square ! I'll see about it

[Hard]
diff looks really nice, it gets a bit monotonous at the end, tho. >:

1. overall diffspread is a bit unbalanced, consider decreasing OD by 1
   I'd prefer less AR as well, but that looks just weird orz
2. 00:18:267 (6) - feels more natural if you unstack this similar to 00:17:299 (4) - Sure
3. 00:18:509 (7,8) - if you compare the distance between thee two and other patterns, eg 00:15:605 (1,2) - , they are rather close
   maybe move 8 further down? or think about changing it up a bit -
   example

   
   Sure
4. 00:19:718 (2,3,4) - hmh, this is one of these triplets that start to sound so monotonous after a while
   maybe remove the second circle (3) here, it's still the beginning of the song, it migth be as well a bit more relaxing. (and you get rid of the monotony) I dunno . Put doubles and triples is kinda confusing sometimes
   smilar thing for 00:21:654 (2,3,4) - but you might as well keep it here, so you already start to change the pattern in the beginning
5. 00:25:767 (4,5,6) - overall shape of them is a bit off, try to arrange them more like 00:27:702 (4,5,6) - ? that'd look better! Yeah
6. 00:31:089 (1,2) - feels more natural if unstacked as well (but maybe that's just me, I'm not sure xD) Sure
7. 00:32:541 (5,6,1,2) - make sure to stack everythig here correctly Sure
8. 01:02:057 - starting with the kiai the pattern gets sooo repetitive, consider deleting a few circles, eg 01:12:097 (3) - or 01:14:033 (3) - or 01:17:904 (2) - that's all up to you! (atm it just feels a bit too much :c) I'll see
9. 01:03:025 (5) - if you rotate this by -38° you can improve the movement to 01:03:509 (6) - No
10. 01:33:992 (5) - looks better to me if you bend it in the other direction I don't think so lol
11. 01:48:025 (7,8,1,2,3) - could be blanketed nicely Yeah
12. 02:00:847 (1) - I'd prefer if you unstack this, it feels kinda forced to play atm Sure
13. 02:04:113 (1) - copy green lines from Normal for this? o.o

Sure

[Alu's Extra]
hmmh, I can't play this. T__T usually I don't mod what I can't play, but I'll try!

1. beginning feels really monotonous, I'd prefer if you alternate some patterns
   but I'm not sure, this might be totally standard for extra diffs T_T
2. 00:31:075 (1) - mabye only use half the size and add a reverse? there's this beat at 00:31:317, a reverse emphasizes that better
   same applies to similar patterns afterwards, but it might be nice to alternate between both to break the monotony?
3. 01:04:704 (4) - this blanket is really off, the tail needs to be further away .o. (there are more, but they most likely go unnoticed anyway)
4. 01:20:914 (7) - ^

sorry, that's all. :c

good luck with this! you improved sooo much since the first map, this is really nicely done! Whoa Thanks <3
and pm me if you need mods once the Insane diff is added. :3 Okay
*squee* o/

Squirrel wrote:

hey there! :3

[Hard]

1. 01:02:057 - starting with the kiai the pattern gets sooo repetitive, consider deleting a few circles, eg 01:12:097 (3) - or 01:14:033 (3) - or 01:17:904 (2) - that's all up to you! (atm it just feels a bit too much :c) I don't quite get your point here, actually. But I unfortunately have to say, those objects are placed to a beat each, the beats are there, and that's what I was going for.
2. 01:03:025 (5) - if you rotate this by -38° you can improve the movement to 01:03:509 (6) - it doesn't do much to the movement, it's oriented towards (7) anyways, I dunno.

Kirin wrote:

Mod request o////////

[Normal]
00:16:574 (2) x:336 y:244
00:33:509 (5) Out of screen?
01:10:768 (3) Rotate this by -3
01:33:753 Maybe add a circle?
01:34:721 ^
01:41:495 ^
01:42:463 ^
01:44:156 (3,4) Why you stacked this ;_;
01:49:237 Maybe add a circle?
01:50:205 ^
01:56:979 ^

[Hard]
00:23:710 (2,3) x:328 y:180 (in a few words, move them a little bit left)
00:46:573 (1) x:228 y:192

[Alu's Extra]
Oh god the spacing D:

Gl with the map (i'll give a star )

Hair wrote:

[Extra]

00:33:011 (1) - Change to something like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1595108 I don't think a straight line fits in, seeing as the rest are curves
00:38:575 (7,1) - overlap

Cute Bunny wrote:

Alu's Extra

00:47:390 ~ 01:01:870 - Continue to decrease without recovery. Add new combo persuaded.

New Combo list

00:47:574 / 00:49:462 / 00:51:398
00:53:333 / 00:55:269 / 00:56:960

or...

HP Drain -1 ?

Squirrel wrote:

[Alu's Extra]
hmmh, I can't play this. T__T usually I don't mod what I can't play, but I'll try!

1. beginning feels really monotonous, I'd prefer if you alternate some patterns
   but I'm not sure, this might be totally standard for extra diffs T_T I think it's alright, the beginning of the song is very monotonous as well lol
2. 00:31:075 (1) - mabye only use half the size and add a reverse? there's this beat at 00:31:317, a reverse emphasizes that better
   same applies to similar patterns afterwards, but it might be nice to alternate between both to break the monotony? I really want to emphasize the bass here, so no changes therefore...
3. 01:04:704 (4) - this blanket is really off, the tail needs to be further away .o. (there are more, but they most likely go unnoticed anyway) Yeah fixed this one. I map too sloppily haha
4. 01:20:914 (7) - ^

sorry, that's all. :c

Angelo wrote:

Hi Secret' !

Here is a new version of the background with a better quality (i spend 1 hour on it to resize the original image etc... )
I hope you'll like it :

Click me !

PS: I try it with the storyboard and it was fine

Secretpipe wrote:

Everything is updated !
For the new Background , I'll ask DJN cause I dunno if it's good !

Secretpipe wrote:

I dunno if it's good !

Angelo wrote:

PS: I try it with the storyboard and it was fine

Nozhomi wrote:

Heyo j'ai essayé de mod mais ce mapset est vraiment trop bien ^^

[notice]- Normal :

1. 00:41:734 (5,1)- Spacing de x1.34 au lieu de x1.20. Il vaudrait peut être mieux que tu garde le spacing constant pour une normal diff. Right

- Hard :

1. 00:41:492 (4,5)- Tu peux blanket ces 2 la. Non
2. 01:50:444 (7,2,3)- Tu pourrais peut être les stack. Great idea !

Lol that's all I can found ^^' Thanks !
Awesome map (cool song, badass SB).
Rank pls I'll try

Okoratu wrote:

General

• 
  

1. yes for this song, I suck at modding Easy / Normal though

That's okay

Normal

• 
  

1. and continue with the normal... well consider using some hitsounds in the intro maybe, this doesn't really sound that nice considering the different sounds in the music (is ok for the easy because it only maps the same dominant sounds but this is getting a bit annoying here)
2. 00:21:896 (5) - might use an 1/2 slider instead of the circle nah
3. 00:38:589 - consider mapping this sound maybe, you do that many times already, so it would be more consistent to do that here e.g. as well..? nah , I wanted it , it'ill be overmapped I think !
4. 00:50:444 (1) - maybe the soft hitset with some whistles would be more apropiate for this part...? Yeah sure !
5. 00:55:041 - adding acircle here would be kinda better rhythm-wise imo nah
6. 01:10:525 (2) - ... and here i think a 3/2 slider like 01:18:267 (2) - would be more fitting yup
7. 01:32:541 (6,1) - replacing these 2 with an 1/2 slider would be fitting the background sounds better imo nah
8. 01:33:751 - I demand a circle here :< nah
9. 01:41:492 ^ nah , I want keep that part calm
10. 01:55:767 (6) - for the sake of the background sounds here i'd make this an 1/2 slider you're right
11. 01:57:702 (3,5) - mildly annoyed that these 2 don't blanket (guess it doesn't matter as these aren't visible when playing anyways) I'll try
12. 02:03:871 (1) - ... dunno shouldn't this start on the white tick then or at least on the red tick, i see no reason for the blue tick here It was an error from me ! Fixed !

Hard

• 
  

1. why is the break longer than on the normal???
2. 00:18:509 (7) - ... might add a whistle? I'm not sure
3. 00:26:734 (5,6) - because of 00:21:654 (2,3,4) - (would be easier to guess how to play also the sounds for that are there) I don't get it
4. 00:30:726 (5) - would simply put this circle to 00:30:847 - in order to empathize this sound instead of the more quiet one on the blue tick?I dunno if it's great idea , I wanted to do that before
5. 00:33:025 (1,2) - would prefer something similar to 00:27:218 (1,2) - here (same applies to following stacks, I ain't point them all out now)I'll think about it
6. 00:31:089 (1) - ^ if you fix that you might think about the DS here again [/color]
7. 00:36:775 (4,1) - would go for a less sharp edge in this like CRTL + R 180 deg and CRTL+G or sth Awesome idea !
   
   Example

   
8. 00:46:089 (1,2,3) - would use a higher spacing to empathize these sounds maybe Sure
9. Sooo... uhhh why is the breaktime here longer than on the Normal...? xD Now , the breaktime on Normal is the same
10. 01:13:186 (7,8,9,10,1) - making this one a straighter stream would fit better in with 01:13:912 (2,3,4) - , or 01:09:557 (8,9,1) - i think
11. 01:48:267 (8) - because you do this 01:22:380 (4,5,6) - this circle might be misleadingly suggesting 1/4 instead of 1/2 idk
12. 02:01:573 (6) - would make a 1/2 slider out of this to have no bigger time spaces without objects in the kiai time nah
13. 02:03:751 - might consider mapping this one, as it uses the similar sounds to 00:46:089 (1,2,3) - Sure

Gl with your map!

Edit:

RIPRIPRIP

Nozhomi wrote:

-Alu's Extra :

1. 00:38:589 (7,1)- Don't like this overlap. But maybe it's good for you. Keep overlap owo

Okoratu wrote:

Alu's Extra

• 
  

1. because of the slider velo of this diff i wished the streams in the beginning were using more spacing, cuz 124 bpm AR9 is pretty unpleasant with such low spacing imo I disagree with you here, I think the lower spacing fits better
2. 00:20:928 (11,12) - would swap those on the timeline because of spacing No, the spacing between the slider and the next stream would be awkwardly low imo
3. 00:26:734 (11,12) - spacing shouldn't be that big here imo, was ok for the strong sounds in 00:22:863 (5,6) - but i think these shouldn't be bigger than 00:24:799 (11,12) - Ok, nerfed
4. 00:40:767 (1) - not a perfect blanket omg I think I fixed LOL
5. Btw Combo colour 1 might be too similar to the color used in the storyboard and thus unreadable when playing with that enabled, just saying You shouldn't tell me LOL
6. 01:48:871 (2,3) - if i understood what you're doing here correctly, these circles shoud do a similar turn to 01:46:936 (2,3) - or 01:50:807 (2,3) - If you understood what I was thinking while mapping this, you'd know more than me, cause I have no idea what I was thinking while doing this LOL
7. 02:04:113 - might add a spinner here for consistency with like... every other diff? Hm, yeah why not

• [Easy]

1. 00:21:412 (2,3,4) - I suggest to make simple rhythm like this:
   
   img

   
2. 00:23:348 (1) - Maybe it's better to make 2/1 slider? If you agree, change at least some of such sliders further. Rhythm should be a bit easier.
3. 00:30:606 (4) - lift up slider's tail to have a better flow. x:480 y:24 for example.
4. 00:31:574 (1,2,3) - IMO such patterns are too hard for newbies, they can missunderstand it. try to make 2/1 slider instead.
5. 01:17:543 (1) - Try to make it smoother. For example: 7th point - x:88 y:48, red point - x:80 y:92, and three last points: 1 - x:72 y:140, 2 - x:48 y:164, end of a slider - x: 0 y:168
6. 01:31:092 (3,4,1) - Newbies can missunderstand this moment and click on (4) or on a (1)'s tail. Maybe replace it to direct the player to the correct objects?
7. 02:02:060 (4) - Miiddle point at x:256 y:304?
   
   [Normal]
8. 00:15:605 (1,3) - Maybe blanket? also if you agree, change 00:18:509 (5) - shape too.
9. 00:19:476 (1,2,3) - It looks better if you replace it, I'm about the symmetry relative to the OY axis. Just lift it up.
10. 00:33:509 (5) - That circle is too low, lift all this square up and rotate it to make it a square again.
11. 00:42:702 (1,2) - Here should be symmetry relative to the OY axis. And make it really symmetrical
    
    img

    
12. 00:50:444 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This moment doesn't look well IMO, I suggest to remove it and to continue the break time.
13. 01:24:799 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved.
14. 01:38:831 (1) - It's a bit out of screen, maybe make it more straight? It doesn't look well for players with 4:3
15. 01:50:928 (4) - Too low again. I already told you how to make it better
16. 02:03:992 - Shouldn't the slider begin here?
    
    [Hard]
17. AR -1?
18. 00:23:105 - Put a circle here?
19. 00:23:347 (1,2) - Make a straight line with these objects?
20. 00:25:283 (1,2) - ^
21. 00:30:726 (5) - Maybe put it here 00:30:847 - ?
22. 00:31:815 (3,1) - Bad overlap.
23. 02:00:847 (5,6) - Blanket.
    OMG I LOVE THIS KIAI <333
    
    [Extra]
24. 00:16:573 (7) - NC. Too big combo IMO
25. 00:18:509 (7) - ^
26. 00:20:444 (7) - ^
27. 00:24:315 (7) - ^
28. 00:26:251 (7) - ^
29. 00:28:186 (7) - ^
30. 00:30:121 (7) - ^
31. 00:40:525 (7,1) - Blanket can be better.
32. 00:42:460 (7,1) - ^
33. 00:46:936 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Those jumps looks a bnit randomly and IMO it's better to make a Break Time here.
34. 01:12:460 (4) - It's out of screen, it doesn't look well for players with 4:3.

AlexaBM wrote:

hi Secret o/
as requested

• [Normal]

1. 00:15:605 (1,3) - Maybe blanket? also if you agree, change 00:18:509 (5) - shape too. Yeah sure
2. 00:19:476 (1,2,3) - It looks better if you replace it, I'm about the symmetry relative to the OY axis. Just lift it up. Nah , consistent
3. 00:33:509 (5) - That circle is too low, lift all this square up and rotate it to make it a square again. nah
4. 00:42:702 (1,2) - Here should be symmetry relative to the OY axis. And make it really symmetrical Fix'd
   
   img

   
5. 00:50:444 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - This moment doesn't look well IMO, I suggest to remove it and to continue the break time. Nah , I prefer keep it sorry x)
6. 01:24:799 (3,1) - Blanket can be improved. Fix'd
7. 01:38:831 (1) - It's a bit out of screen, maybe make it more straight? It doesn't look well for players with 4:3 I'll fix it if anyone else say this
8. 01:50:928 (4) - Too low again. I already told you how to make it better ^
9. 02:03:992 - Shouldn't the slider begin here? Yeah but I aleady fix in the last mod but I couldn't update yesterday !
   

• [Hard]

1. AR -1? I'm not sure
2. 00:23:105 - Put a circle here? Nah cause I'll have to add a circle here too 00:21:170 -
3. 00:23:347 (1,2) - Make a straight line with these objects? Nah , it's volunteer
4. 00:25:283 (1,2) - ^ ^
5. 00:30:726 (5) - Maybe put it here 00:30:847 - ? Thought the same idea but I'll keep that for the moment !
6. 00:31:815 (3,1) - Bad overlap.I don't see any bad overlap here
7. 02:00:847 (5,6) - Blanket. Fix'd
   OMG I LOVE THIS KIAI <333 YEEE
   

That's all from me. Good luck o3o

AlexaBM wrote:

[Extra]

1. 00:16:573 (7) - NC. Too big combo IMO Oh, wow. I didn't even notice the inconsistency in NCing. But I prefer longer NCs...
2. 00:18:509 (7) - ^
3. 00:20:444 (7) - ^
4. 00:24:315 (7) - ^
5. 00:26:251 (7) - ^
6. 00:28:186 (7) - ^
7. 00:30:121 (7) - ^
8. 00:40:525 (7,1) - Blanket can be better. I tried...
9. 00:42:460 (7,1) - ^ I tried...
10. 00:46:936 (2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Those jumps looks a bnit randomly and IMO it's better to make a Break Time here. I disagree...
11. 01:12:460 (4) - It's out of screen, it doesn't look well for players with 4:3. Fixed

1. 00:28:671 (2) - Too near at the Hp-bar on the top.
2. 00:33:026 (4) - Too near at the bottom. ^^ Try to centre your map a bit more pls.
3. 01:17:543 (1) - Wow, this slider is actually touching the Hp-bar, lol. Try to avoid it. :3
4. 01:29:882 (2) - Too near at the bottom.
5. 01:36:414 (4) - Too near at the top.

1. 00:29:638 (5,6) - For me personally you're using too much stacked notes. Try to avoid double circles I would say. Circle + Slider is ok, but for new players double circles could irritate them maybe. I'm not quite sure tho.