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Feint - Sky Dance

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Secretpipe
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jeudi 29 mai 2014 at 11:56:21

Artist: Feint
Title: Sky Dance
Tags: shoegaze gaze Lizzy Alumetorz DJNightmare Veus Gabe Kenterz
BPM: 124
Filesize: 10735kb
Play Time: 02:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Alu's Extra (5 stars, 445 notes)
  2. Hard (4,92 stars, 315 notes)
  3. Kenterz's Insane (5 stars, 331 notes)
  4. Normal (4,33 stars, 146 notes)
  5. Veus' Easy (2,04 stars, 98 notes)
Download: Feint - Sky Dance
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#2 Ranked map
05/29/14 : Added spinner objects and different things on folder ! Please redl !
Mapset :
→Veus's Easy by Gabe 100%
→Normal by me ! 100%
→Hard : Epic Collab with Lizzy100%
→Kenterz's Insane by Kenterz 100%
→Alu's Extra by Alumetorz 100%
→Storyboard by DJNighmare 100%
Last edited by Secretpipe , edited 182 times in total.
quiz-chan_DELETED
quiz-chan_DELETED
move to WIP \o/
Aldwych
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Aldwych
C'est chiante qu'elle soie longue car je serais bien tenté de faire une GD. La problème suivant est que j'aime pas faire des easy.
:x
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe
On verra :D
Ozato Fumika
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Ozato Fumika
IRC modded

SPOILER
09:51 Secretpipe: Normal one!
09:53 No Dap: mm
09:53 No Dap: feels a bit hard
09:53 No Dap: but 124 bpm
09:53 Secretpipe: Yeah xD
09:53 Secretpipe: Where do you think it's hard ?
09:53 No Dap: you mihgt want to keep the ditance same here
09:54 No Dap: 00:25:297 (1) - 
09:54 No Dap: 00:26:265 (3) - 
09:54 No Dap: they are 1.0
09:54 Secretpipe: Oh yeah !
09:55 No Dap: 00:27:233 (1,2,3,4) - this is the part that felt a bit too hard
09:55 Secretpipe: Fix'd
09:56 No Dap: stacked notes, and 3 1/2 beat tapping
09:56 Secretpipe: Should I delete some notes here ?
09:56 No Dap: the music is so repetitive
09:56 No Dap: so you only get so much pattern..
09:57 Secretpipe: hmm
09:57 No Dap: how about this? http://puu.sh/8hxH2.jpg
09:57 Secretpipe: So , I have to C/c a  lot of pattern ?
09:57 No Dap: what is c/c
09:57 Secretpipe: Yeah , I should probably copy the slider 1
09:57 Secretpipe: Copy paste lol
09:57 No Dap: oh lol
09:57 Secretpipe: But it's in french x)
09:58 No Dap: XD
09:58 Secretpipe: Something like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1533888
09:59 No Dap: nice
10:00 Secretpipe: But I have to fix all the spacnig now xD
10:00 Secretpipe: or not lol
10:00 No Dap: XD oh
10:00 No Dap: 00:37:878 (3,4) - this stacked note makes sense
10:00 No Dap: but might be too hard for beginners
10:00 Secretpipe: 00:33:039 (1,2,3,4) - 
10:00 Secretpipe: But for that , it's 1.0 lol
10:00 No Dap: oh yeah
10:01 No Dap: you need to fix that too
10:01 Secretpipe: Okay , fix your suggestion 1st
10:01 Secretpipe: I delete circle 4 ?
10:01 No Dap: yeah
10:01 No Dap: and move 00:38:846 (1) - 
10:01 No Dap: so teh spacing is consistent
10:01 No Dap: i just noticed your NC pattern too
10:02 No Dap: 00:25:297 (1) - 00:29:168 (1) - 00:33:039 (1) - 00:36:910 (1) - 
10:02 Secretpipe: 00:38:846 (1) - 
10:02 No Dap: delete NC there
10:02 No Dap: its not following your pattern
10:02 Secretpipe: How can I fix spacing for this ? OWO
10:02 Secretpipe: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1533897
10:02 No Dap: by moving the rest of the note o3o
10:02 No Dap: or
10:03 Secretpipe: Are you sure for deleting NC ?
10:03 No Dap: change the shape of 00:37:878 (3) - 
10:03 No Dap: yes
10:03 No Dap: 00:17:555 (3) - according to this
10:03 No Dap: 00:21:426 (4) - 
10:03 No Dap: you NC every 2 stanza
10:03 Secretpipe: Yeah x)
10:03 No Dap: 00:25:297 (1) - from here it changed to 1 stanza
10:03 No Dap: and the song is still the same
10:04 Secretpipe: wowowo su much suggestion xD
10:04 *Secretpipe is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/386042 Feint - Sky Dance [Normal]]
10:04 Secretpipe: oops
10:04 Secretpipe: 00:37:878 (7) - 
10:04 Secretpipe: For that
10:05 Secretpipe: Changed the shape https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1533908 But still impossible to fix teh spacing 
10:05 No Dap: 00:41:749 (4,1) - also spacing here
10:06 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1533913
10:06 Secretpipe: It breaks the flow ?
10:07 No Dap: no it doesnt
10:07 No Dap: thats drop flow
10:07 Secretpipe: Okay !
10:08 No Dap: 00:42:717 (1) - spacing her
10:08 No Dap: here
10:08 Secretpipe: 00:33:039 (4,5,6,7) - But about these ? Fix spacing here is impossible too! I can't keep 1.0 for here ?
10:08 No Dap: thats a bad idea
10:08 No Dap: changing DS for no reason in easier diff
10:09 Secretpipe: Yeah but I can't move them further !
10:09 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1533919
10:09 Secretpipe: It's ugly I think :( It's not a square then !
10:09 Secretpipe: Oh
10:10 Secretpipe: I have an idea !
10:11 Secretpipe: Oh no it's a bad idea
10:11 Secretpipe: AAAAH >.<
10:12 No Dap: 00:45:620 (4) -  to 212 228?
10:12 No Dap: 00:46:588 (1) - also spacing here
10:12 No Dap: also this overlap with 00:44:653 (3) -  looks ulgy
10:12 No Dap: maybe this http://puu.sh/8hyyv.jpg
10:13 Secretpipe: Just move circle 1 ?
10:13 No Dap: and 00:45:620 (4) - 
10:13 No Dap: to where i said
10:13 No Dap: spcing is 1.26 :3 
10:13 Secretpipe: Yeah
10:13 No Dap: and mine still works well with blanket
10:14 No Dap: 00:54:330 (1,2) - spacing here too
10:16 Secretpipe: fix'd
10:16 No Dap: 00:58:201 (1,1) - this
10:16 No Dap: beginners are going to need more recovery time from spinning
10:16 No Dap: and 01:02:072 (1) - is too far away from the center
10:17 No Dap: so it's going to be really hard for players
10:17 Secretpipe: What do you suggest ? o3o
10:18 No Dap: 01:02:072 (1) - put this
10:18 No Dap: more close to the center
10:18 No Dap: so players at least don't have to jump
10:18 Secretpipe: So I have to remap all the pattern ?
10:20 No Dap: yeah
10:20 No Dap: and fix the NC isue
10:20 No Dap: lat01:02:072 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - 
10:20 No Dap: thats all i have for you
10:20 No Dap: good luck \o/
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe
Thank you No Dap for your help :D
Lust
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Lust

Timing Request


Requested in game. Here is what I found to be the most accurate BPM and offset
  1. BPM: 124.001
  2. offset: 122

Good luck!
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe
Thanks for the Timing Lust !
It was pretty useful :D
Alumetorz
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Alumetorz
plsssss dont ever request me again to make an extra diff for a ~125bpm song
don't add it if you don't like it, i don't either LOL
i'm gonna hitsound tomorrow depending on whether you'll add it or not
shitdiff

//EDIT: HITSOUNDED
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe
THANKS <3
Let's add this /O/
Alumetorz
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Alumetorz
You didn't update my hitsounded one :(
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe
I was at school lolol
69653863
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Nice, but why cut version?
Anyway don't put that (Cut ver.) in title, put it in creator's words

Also remove dnb from tags, even Feint himself stated that this is not dnb
Good luck btw!
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe

inverness wrote:

Nice, but why cut version?
Anyway don't put that (Cut ver.) in title, put it in creator's words

Also remove dnb from tags, even Feint himself stated that this is not dnb
Good luck btw!

1 week ago , it wasn't Cut Version.
I founded it boring and a lot repetitive so I decided to cut it .
I'll fix the little suggestions about settings !

Thanks !
DJNightmare
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DJNightmare
Good luck on the map :3
I hope the SB is awesome :P
Ovoui
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Ovoui
Don't worry, SB is very cool o/
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe

DJNightmare wrote:

Good luck on the map :3
I hope the SB is awesome :P

DUUUUUUDE YOU'RE AWESOME <3
DJNightmare
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DJNightmare
Also, you should mention the names of people who were involved in the map in the tags. So Alumetorz, Lizzy, Kyshiro and me :3

Thanks and Good Luck onyour 2nd ranked map :D
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe
I'm definitely a baka x)

Thanks again !
Asphyxia
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Great work guys :3 Looks so cool !
Damnae
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Damnae
Storyboard mod because I feel like it :p


00:46:331 - it looks like the clouds are moving, align them better or show that sprite since the beginning of the map.

http://puu.sh/8yytX.jpg make sure the transparent parts of the sprite are black, or it looks like this.

http://puu.sh/8yyB5.jpg left and right edges are smooth but top and bottom are pixelated, add some transparency on top and bottom of the sprite so that all edges are smooth.

http://puu.sh/8yyHp.jpg I can't read most of the text :/
DJNightmare
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Damnae wrote:

Storyboard mod because I feel like it :p Hurray \:D/


00:46:331 - it looks like the clouds are moving, align them better or show that sprite since the beginning of the map. Due to the showing of that sprite for the whole map, sprites are re-ordered.

http://puu.sh/8yytX.jpg make sure the transparent parts of the sprite are black, or it looks like this. Recreated using Photoshop (Pen Tool is getting annoying ;_;)

http://puu.sh/8yyB5.jpg left and right edges are smooth but top and bottom are pixelated, add some transparency on top and bottom of the sprite so that all edges are smooth. Added a "Glow" effect to it

http://puu.sh/8yyHp.jpg I can't read most of the text :/ Properly timed the sprite's Add Parameter for more visibility
Also, "spaced out" the birds (as per inverness's suggestion in IRC)

PARALLELOGRAMS ARE SO HARD QAQ




#secretpipelogic
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe
Umi mod !
2014-05-07 20:31 Secretpipe: Umi /O/
2014-05-07 20:31 Secretpipe: T'es fort en mapping pour tout ce qui est Easy / Normal right ?
2014-05-07 20:31 Umi: oui assez '-'
2014-05-07 20:32 Secretpipe: Ce serait possible que tu juges ma Normal ? Tu peux juste la voir dans l'editor o/
2014-05-07 20:32 Umi: envoi je vais look
2014-05-07 20:33 Secretpipe: Merci beaucoup <3
2014-05-07 20:33 Secretpipe: ACTION is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/414100 Feint - Sky Dance]
2014-05-07 20:33 Secretpipe: Also , sB !
2014-05-07 20:33 Secretpipe: SB*
2014-05-07 20:35 Umi: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/414100 Feint - Sky Dance [Normal]]
2014-05-07 20:35 Secretpipe: o/
2014-05-07 20:35 Secretpipe: Si t'as le temps , le SB commence au break ! :3
2014-05-07 20:35 Umi: c'toi qui a fait le SB ?
2014-05-07 20:36 Umi: et sinon franchement rien a redire sur la normal elle est vraiment comme elle est
2014-05-07 20:36 Secretpipe: Le SB non ce n'est pas moi
2014-05-07 20:36 Secretpipe: La normal est bien ? On m'a dit que c'était le flow qui était cool
2014-05-07 20:36 Umi: kay sinon good sur la normal
2014-05-07 20:36 Umi: good flow
2014-05-07 20:37 Secretpipe: nice
2014-05-07 20:37 Umi: good shape
2014-05-07 20:37 Secretpipe: Oo
2014-05-07 20:37 Umi: ça me rappelle un peu mes normals
2014-05-07 20:37 Secretpipe: ACTION cries of happiness lol
2014-05-07 20:37 Umi: lol
2014-05-07 20:37 Secretpipe: Now , stuck sur la hard lolol
2014-05-07 20:38 Secretpipe: Au moins c'est bien que ma diff est cool , 1ère fois lol:
2014-05-07 20:38 Secretpipe: J'ai remap a normal 17 fois sur Breathe
2014-05-07 20:38 Umi: i know x)
2014-05-07 20:38 Umi: 00:33:509 (2) -
2014-05-07 20:38 Secretpipe: La , ca va etre la meme sur la Hard XD
2014-05-07 20:38 Umi: wtf is this ? D:
2014-05-07 20:38 Umi: c'est quoi ce DS
2014-05-07 20:39 Secretpipe: J'ai voulu un peu stack le cercle
2014-05-07 20:39 Umi: utilise le DS normal c'est super confus la
2014-05-07 20:40 Secretpipe: Juste pour cette note ?
2014-05-07 20:40 Umi: ou alors
2014-05-07 20:40 Umi: 00:33:025 (1) -
2014-05-07 20:40 Umi: étend jusqu'a
2014-05-07 20:40 Umi: 00:33:388 -
2014-05-07 20:40 Umi: et ensuite stack le 2 sur la fin du 1
2014-05-07 20:41 Secretpipe: Ouais
2014-05-07 20:41 Secretpipe: J'avais étendu jusqu'au blue tick
2014-05-07 20:41 Secretpipe: Mais CB m'a dit que c'était MAUVAIS
2014-05-07 20:41 Umi: l'écoute pas ce CB
2014-05-07 20:41 Umi: nice SB sinon je regarde un peu mieux la
2014-05-07 20:41 Umi: by ?
2014-05-07 20:41 Secretpipe: DJNightmare
2014-05-07 20:41 Secretpipe: Next time : Damnae
2014-05-07 20:42 Umi: ah ouais ok je comprend xD
2014-05-07 20:42 Umi: les 2 pro du SB
2014-05-07 20:42 Secretpipe: xD
2014-05-07 20:42 Secretpipe: On est mutual lolol
2014-05-07 20:42 Secretpipe: Et le mec aime bien la dnb
2014-05-07 20:42 Umi: :)
2014-05-07 20:43 Secretpipe: Also , t'es sur d'étendre les notes sur les blue ticks ?
2014-05-07 20:43 Secretpipe: Par ce que , ce que tu m'as dit , c'était comme ça avant
2014-05-07 20:43 Secretpipe: Mais je l'ai changé
2014-05-07 20:43 Umi: bah en faite y'en a qui aime et d'autre qui aime pas
2014-05-07 20:43 Secretpipe: CB , c'est pas un expert mais du coup , je l'ai cru
2014-05-07 20:44 Umi: aprés tu peux varier
2014-05-07 20:44 Umi: 00:36:896 (1) -
2014-05-07 20:44 Umi: genre la tu réduite a 00:37:138 -
2014-05-07 20:44 Umi: 00:40:767 (1) -
2014-05-07 20:44 Umi: same here
2014-05-07 20:44 Umi: comme
2014-05-07 20:44 Umi: ça
2014-05-07 20:44 Umi: un coup tick bleu, un coup tick rouge
2014-05-07 20:45 Umi: personnellement j'aime la diversité de rythm
2014-05-07 20:45 Secretpipe: Ah ouais , bonne idée !
2014-05-07 20:45 Secretpipe: Et pour le kiai , quelque chose a dire ?
2014-05-07 20:45 Secretpipe: Y a un truc qui est pas stack dans le kiai je crois
2014-05-07 20:46 Umi: bah tu t'es amélioré lol !
2014-05-07 20:46 Umi: juste quelque truc qui m'embete
2014-05-07 20:46 Umi: 01:09:799 (1,2) -
2014-05-07 20:47 Umi: just emon opinion
2014-05-07 20:47 Umi: mais c'pas trés plaisant à jouer
2014-05-07 20:47 Umi: remplace par 2 note plutot
2014-05-07 20:47 Secretpipe: Ouais
2014-05-07 20:47 Secretpipe: Le flow est bof bof
2014-05-07 20:47 Secretpipe: Tu trouves que je me suis amélioré ? lol
2014-05-07 20:48 Umi: comparé à ta derniere map ? oui clairement
2014-05-07 20:48 Secretpipe: yay <3
2014-05-07 20:49 Umi: ensuite
2014-05-07 20:49 Umi: 01:21:775 (2) -
2014-05-07 20:49 Umi: move en x:155,y:110
2014-05-07 20:49 Umi: ç
2014-05-07 20:49 Umi: meillleur flow
2014-05-07 20:49 Secretpipe: ouais
2014-05-07 20:50 Secretpipe: C'est ca le stack dont je t'ai parlé
2014-05-07 20:50 Secretpipe: :D
2014-05-07 20:50 Umi: mais si tu veux vraiment le garder la alors curve 01:21:896 (3) -
2014-05-07 20:50 Umi: dans l'autre sens
2014-05-07 20:50 Umi: tu fais comme tu le sens
2014-05-07 20:50 Secretpipe: J'ai fait comme tu m'as dit
2014-05-07 20:50 Secretpipe: Ca fit très bien
2014-05-07 20:50 Secretpipe: Décidément, Umi pro mapper :D
2014-05-07 20:50 Umi: kay
2014-05-07 20:50 Umi: et pour finir
2014-05-07 20:50 Umi: 01:26:251 (5,6,7) -
2014-05-07 20:50 Umi: confus
2014-05-07 20:51 Secretpipe: Ouais
2014-05-07 20:51 Umi: 01:26:371 (6) -
2014-05-07 20:51 Secretpipe: Mais ca c'est une personne du collab
2014-05-07 20:51 Umi: en x:281,y:239
2014-05-07 20:51 Umi: Ah kay :x
2014-05-07 20:51 Umi: bah tu lui diras
2014-05-07 20:51 Secretpipe: Mais j'peux changer pour elle ? nvm je lui dirai
2014-05-07 20:51 Secretpipe: Done
2014-05-07 20:52 Umi: bah franchement tu peux ça se joue bcp mieux
2014-05-07 20:52 Umi: sinon rien d'autre à dire :3
2014-05-07 20:53 Secretpipe: Ah bon ? owo
2014-05-07 20:53 Umi: j'ai pas regardé les hitsounds (lazy)
2014-05-07 20:53 Secretpipe: CB m'a limite dit que tout el truc avant le kiai est overmap et que c'était de la merde
2014-05-07 20:53 Secretpipe: no hitsounds atm :3
2014-05-07 20:53 Umi: je pourrai faire plus détaillé mais bon c'est pas nécessaire ^^
2014-05-07 20:53 Secretpipe: Ouais x)
2014-05-07 20:53 Secretpipe: Tu veux un KD pour ça ?
2014-05-07 20:54 Umi: bah CB a pas vraiment tord
2014-05-07 20:54 Umi: c'est un peu overmappé
2014-05-07 20:54 Umi: mais ça se joue
2014-05-07 20:54 Secretpipe: Where ?
2014-05-07 20:54 Secretpipe: Si c'est overmap , je remap du début
2014-05-07 20:54 Umi: atttend
2014-05-07 20:54 Umi: laisse moi reduire le volum des hitsounds a fond
2014-05-07 20:55 Umi: fin non c'pas overmappé
2014-05-07 20:55 Umi: mais l'intru que tu suis
2014-05-07 20:55 Secretpipe: Ah xD
2014-05-07 20:55 Umi: on l'entend pas peine
2014-05-07 20:55 Umi: à peine*
2014-05-07 20:56 Secretpipe: Si tu as un exemple , ce serait tip top
2014-05-07 20:56 Umi: un exemple de ?
2014-05-07 20:56 Secretpipe: ou l'instru on l'entend a peine
2014-05-07 20:57 Umi: ah
2014-05-07 20:57 Umi: 00:23:347 (1,2,3) -
2014-05-07 20:57 Umi: tu tu tu
2014-05-07 20:57 Umi: ce son
2014-05-07 20:57 Umi: la on l'entend plutot bien
2014-05-07 20:57 Umi: mais ailleurs trés peu
2014-05-07 20:57 Secretpipe: C'est bizarre
2014-05-07 20:57 Umi: oh wait
2014-05-07 20:58 Secretpipe: Mais j'ai l'impression que c'est en accéléré OWO
2014-05-07 20:58 Umi: y'a un autre instru derriere que j'écoutais pas
2014-05-07 20:58 Umi: ouais CB à dit de la merd c'pas overmappé x)
2014-05-07 20:58 Secretpipe: Ouf tu me rassures
2014-05-07 20:59 Secretpipe: Mais par contre
2014-05-07 20:59 Secretpipe: L'offset était bon
2014-05-07 20:59 Secretpipe: J y ai pas toucé
2014-05-07 20:59 Secretpipe: touché
2014-05-07 21:00 Umi: faudrai que tu passe en S:C1 pour l'intro
2014-05-07 21:00 Umi: N ça fit pas
2014-05-07 21:00 Secretpipe: okay
2014-05-07 21:00 Umi: comme ça t'ajoute un soft-sliderslide silence
2014-05-07 21:01 Secretpipe: c'est pour les HS ca nan ?
2014-05-07 21:01 Umi: ui
2014-05-07 21:01 Secretpipe: Okay , c'est noté
2014-05-07 21:01 Umi: voila voila

Thanks a lot Mr.Pantsu \o3o/
Umi
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Umi
la la la !
Cherry Blossom
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Cherry Blossom
"Secretpipe: J'avais étendu jusqu'au blue tick
2014-05-07 20:41 Secretpipe: Mais CB m'a dit que c'était MAUVAIS
2014-05-07 20:41 Umi: l'écoute pas ce CB "

Coucou creuvard de kd ♥
edit, j'ai jamais dit que c'était mauvais, j'ai juste dit "inapproprié ou quelque chose dans le genre D: tu vois bien que la hard ne ressemble pas à une hard mais à une soft insane...
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe
Totalement d'accord avec toi .
Et aussi , tes suggestions , je les utilise lolol.
J'étais juste déçu de ma diff ! Mais de toute façon , j'vais essayer de faire une super map dans tout les cas ! :D
quiz-chan_DELETED
quiz-chan_DELETED

Cherry Blossom wrote:

tu vois bien que la hard ne ressemble pas à une hard mais à une soft insane...
i sure don't think so.

Secretpipe wrote:

Mais de toute façon , j'vais essayer de faire une super map dans tout les cas ! :D
and i love ur attitude <3

keep thread english for those who don't understand

edit: 01:21:412 (1,2,3) - you still haven't fixed the stack! :(
Secretpipe
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Secretpipe
Yeah but it was a part of the mod by Umi.
Thought it was a pretty nice idea for you cause you weren't here ! I'll fix it anyway !
-Neipezi
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-Neipezi
it's good 'w'b
BigWilly
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BigWilly
[Normal]

00:41:735 (5,1,2) - Big Overlap here, change 00:41:735 (5) - to blanket ?

[Hard]

00:31:815 (3) - and 00:33:025 (1,2) - Make sure of the placing on these ones. it is slightly off.

[Extra]

00:33:011 (1) - Change to something like this ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1595108 I don't think a straight line fits in, seeing as the rest are curves
00:38:575 (7,1) - overlap

I might come back later and do some more. Got tons of homework to do for exams :( :( :( :(
Cute Bunny
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Cute Bunny
Normal

It seems need to lower the HP Drain. [ -1 ]

00:46:816 ~00:50:203 - Want you to add something to this point. Is too short to put blank.

Hard

00:27:702 (4,5) - I think it's easy to get confused. Must be a change in the pattern.

Alu's Extra

00:47:390 ~ 01:01:870 - Continue to decrease without recovery. Add new combo persuaded.

New Combo list

00:47:574 / 00:49:462 / 00:51:398
00:53:333 / 00:55:269 / 00:56:960

or...

HP Drain -1 ?

It seems almost perfect level right.Maybe it is, but I did not see ...

Good luck. I think it is good.

p.s. I want to have a low graphics technology. :?

EDIT :: 2014-05-11 19:21
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Secretpipe
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Joined December 2012
Topic Starter
Secretpipe
Thanks for the quick mod Hair ! Fixed some !

EDIT :

Cute Bunny wrote:

Normal

It seems need to lower the HP Drain. [ -1 ] Sure !

00:46:816 ~00:50:203 - Want you to add something to this point. Is too short to put blank. It's break

Hard

00:27:702 (4,5) - I think it's easy to get confused. Must be a change in the pattern. I'll see !

Alu's Extra

00:47:390 ~ 01:01:870 - Continue to decrease without recovery. Add new combo persuaded.

New Combo list

00:47:574 / 00:49:462 / 00:51:398
00:53:333 / 00:55:269 / 00:56:960

or...

HP Drain -1 ?

It seems almost perfect level right.Maybe it is, but I did not see ...

Good luck. I think it is good.

p.s. I want to have a low graphics technology. :?

EDIT :: 2014-05-11 19:21
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Squichu
1,013 posts
Joined November 2012
Squichu
hey, m4m here! :3

[General]
  1. are you mapping an Easy? cause Normal is far too hard atm. you need one diff below 3.30 star rating, iirc
  2. and wow, that SB load is high. @@
    it's nice tho, so instead of changing it, please add a note somewhere in the map's description for people with low PCs.
    they should disable it, otherwise they'll lag like hell. >:
  3. check uninherited timing point in Extra diff, it's off.
  4. consider lessen the intensity of your combo colours, they're extremely bright, which doesn't go that well with the SB, imo
    example
[Normal]
Since this is the easiest difficulty of the mapset, I'll try to point out some things that can lessen difficulty slightly to make it playable for beginners as well.
I'm not trying to get it on an Easy level, but a Normal that's a enjoyable for both - beginners and a bit experienced players. (which is what the easiest diff should be, imo)
  1. where'd the hitsounds go? O-O
  2. HP and OD -1 > HP3 and OD3
  3. 00:23:348 (1) - if you rotate this a bit, it flowes slightly better with 00:22:380 (6) - but doesn't work as well with 00:24:316 (3) -
    my suggestion is to swap the shape of 6 and 3, so it looks like this -
    screen
  4. 00:34:477 (7,1) - stack correctly (move 7 to 332|192)
  5. 00:42:703 (1,2) - you can improve movement here if you rotate them a bit
    screen
  6. 00:46:574 (1) - move to 128|216 for better triangle
  7. 01:02:059 (1,2) - it's just a sliiight break of DS, but still. move 2 to 36|136 and move middle anchor one grid down (to keep DS with following)
  8. 01:11:736 (4) - I think there is a NC missing here o.o
  9. 01:27:221 (4) - ^
  10. 01:42:705 (1,2,3,4) - might work better if you bend 2 in the other direction and unstack 3, so it looks like this -
    screen
  11. 01:45:850 (3) - consider rotating this by -18°? it matches better with 01:46:576 (4) - then and doesn't break the flow at all
  12. 01:57:705 (3,5) - you could blanket this really beautifully ;w;
[Hard]
diff looks really nice, it gets a bit monotonous at the end, tho. >:
  1. overall diffspread is a bit unbalanced, consider decreasing OD by 1
    I'd prefer less AR as well, but that looks just weird orz
  2. 00:18:267 (6) - feels more natural if you unstack this similar to 00:17:299 (4) -
  3. 00:18:509 (7,8) - if you compare the distance between thee two and other patterns, eg 00:15:605 (1,2) - , they are rather close
    maybe move 8 further down? or think about changing it up a bit -
    example
  4. 00:19:718 (2,3,4) - hmh, this is one of these triplets that start to sound so monotonous after a while
    maybe remove the second circle (3) here, it's still the beginning of the song, it migth be as well a bit more relaxing. :D (and you get rid of the monotony)
    smilar thing for 00:21:654 (2,3,4) - but you might as well keep it here, so you already start to change the pattern in the beginning
  5. 00:25:767 (4,5,6) - overall shape of them is a bit off, try to arrange them more like 00:27:702 (4,5,6) - ? that'd look better!
  6. 00:31:089 (1,2) - feels more natural if unstacked as well (but maybe that's just me, I'm not sure xD)
  7. 00:32:541 (5,6,1,2) - make sure to stack everythig here correctly
  8. 01:02:057 - starting with the kiai the pattern gets sooo repetitive, consider deleting a few circles, eg 01:12:097 (3) - or 01:14:033 (3) - or 01:17:904 (2) - that's all up to you! (atm it just feels a bit too much :c)
  9. 01:03:025 (5) - if you rotate this by -38° you can improve the movement to 01:03:509 (6) -
  10. 01:33:992 (5) - looks better to me if you bend it in the other direction
  11. 01:48:025 (7,8,1,2,3) - could be blanketed nicely
  12. 02:00:847 (1) - I'd prefer if you unstack this, it feels kinda forced to play atm
  13. 02:04:113 (1) - copy green lines from Normal for this? o.o
[Alu's Extra]
hmmh, I can't play this. T__T usually I don't mod what I can't play, but I'll try!
  1. beginning feels really monotonous, I'd prefer if you alternate some patterns
    but I'm not sure, this might be totally standard for extra diffs T_T
  2. 00:31:075 (1) - mabye only use half the size and add a reverse? there's this beat at 00:31:317, a reverse emphasizes that better
    same applies to similar patterns afterwards, but it might be nice to alternate between both to break the monotony?
  3. 01:04:704 (4) - this blanket is really off, the tail needs to be further away .o. (there are more, but they most likely go unnoticed anyway)
  4. 01:20:914 (7) - ^
sorry, that's all. :c

good luck with this! you improved sooo much since the first map, this is really nicely done!
and pm me if you need mods once the Insane diff is added. :3
*squee* o/
Kirin
267 posts
Joined August 2012
Kirin
Mod request o////////

[Normal]
00:16:574 (2) x:336 y:244
00:33:509 (5) Out of screen?
01:10:768 (3) Rotate this by -3
01:33:753 Maybe add a circle?
01:34:721 ^
01:41:495 ^
01:42:463 ^
01:44:156 (3,4) Why you stacked this ;_;
01:49:237 Maybe add a circle?
01:50:205 ^
01:56:979 ^

[Hard]
00:23:710 (2,3) x:328 y:180 (in a few words, move them a little bit left)
00:46:573 (1) x:228 y:192

[Alu's Extra]
Oh god the spacing D:

Gl with the map (i'll give a star :D)
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