1. 00:23:040 - Add a circle to follow the vocal? It's very dominant in this part to the point where it feels weird to leave the vocal unmapped. It'll also help players to follow the map's rhythm better (I find the current pattern very hard to play).
2. 00:25:567 (3) - Make it a little more curved like this for a better flow?
3. 00:28:093 - Why don't you add a whistle to follow the piano here like 00:27:461?
4. 01:35:123 (5,1) - Place them like this? At first, it might look like a trap pattern, but actually, this pattern plays more intuitively than just stacking (1) above 01:35:529 (2)'s head.
5. 02:04:361 (1,2) - Make them spaced the same as 02:03:448 (1,2,1,2,1,2)? It's weird to see that the spacing is smaller here, especially since there is a strong instrument playing at 02:04:463.
6. 02:18:778 (4,1) - I personally feel that it's hard to read the stack here because of what you have done with 02:17:864 (1,2,3,4). Select 02:17:864 (1,2,3,4) and move to (53,248) so (4) will be at (199,265), creating an anti-jump to 02:19:082 (1)? Again, just like the suggestion above, this is far more intuitive than the current pattern.
7. 02:56:849 (1,2) - Space them further? From02:52:788 (3) up to this point, all objects are spaced by 2/3 beats, but it's suddenly 1/1 here, and the spacing can trap players to think that the rhythm is still the same.
8. 03:32:077 (8,1) - Same as 02:04:361 (1,2).
9. 05:45:580 (3,4) - Space them further too, maybe by 1.8x? The music is strong at 05:45:884, and the spacing here doesn't reflect that well enough.
10. 05:46:189 (1,2,3,4) - I personally feel it's better to place them far away from 05:45:884 (4). That brown circle being so close to 05:46:189 (1), to the point of making an anti-jump, might create an awkward flow of play.

Satellite wrote:

Hi General check here~ /o/

[General]

Artist:Meramipop めらみぽっぷ
Title:Rakujitsu Romance 落日ロマンス

try this~

Rei Hakurei wrote:

dat album, goodluck!

Konei wrote:

Loneight pro mapper!

Oh yea, and please reduce the volume of your SB hitsounds by 10%, it sounds much smoother. :3

Decipher wrote:

sexy hitsound as always :Q

oh no i want gd too..

emmy wrote:

i was waiting for you to submit this!
your most fun map yet

Mikarunoel131 wrote:

I like this x3
The song and the beatmap work so great together!
I am so hyped now. ~(^w^~)

Zero__wind wrote:

和我做1/3完全不是一个感觉=。=
话说300的stream简直诗人

smallboat wrote:

Hi,L18!

[General]

Nothing.

[Romance]

00:23:040 (4) - 我是覺得這邊可以加個note,因為我覺得這個人聲蠻重的,如果加了話,後面456這樣點的才比較順暢.
01:13:295 (1) - 感覺flow有點不太流暢,放到(292|344)? 我是覺得原本的這樣移動起來比較舒服些, 因為後面的1/1距離有點遠, 這邊來個大跳剛剛好能抵銷那衝擊
01:17:559 (3) - 怎麼感覺好像疊錯了,應該是stack 01:16:950 (1) 頭比較合理? 改回原本的, 雖然不是你說的這個方法
01:34:615 (4) - 前面的變速我是覺得不用加NC所以我就沒挑了,不過這跟前面的2比起來太快了吧? 最好來個NC.
01:47:103 (4) - 1到3我剛test數次都可以讀出來,但4這邊感覺需要加一個NC辨別這個加速.
01:51:976 (4) - ^
01:54:361 (8,9) - 這個1/6跳也太遠?
01:56:849 (4) - 同01:34:615
02:01:722 (4) - ^
02:13:905 (9) - 同01:54:361
02:19:996 (4) - 最後一個滑條速度都很快呢..設一個NC?
02:23:651 (9) - 推薦也一個NC加在這裡比較好讀。
03:02:331 (3) - ^
03:07:813 (1) - ^
03:09:336 (2,4) - 4overlap到3了,或許你可以把這兩個sliders移上面一點點。 自己另外用別的方式改了~
03:12:077 (3) - 推薦NC,因為換了一個不同旋律在這裡。(而且也很快)
03:19:691 (4) - 跟上面一樣的理由來個NC
03:25:783 (4) - ^
03:36:747 (4) - NC?
03:42:534 (3) - ^
04:02:229 (3) - 錯過note?
04:02:331 (3) - 加個跟04:01:417 (1) 一樣的slider?

后面就還好了(也是一樣的情況),在此就不多提ww ~~ Good Luck!

Hinsvar wrote:

Yo; modding here!

*Bolded = Unrankable or very, very strongly suggested; red = Highly suggested or questionable (still weaker than the bolded ones); black = Minor suggestions/rants; blue = Notes/advices to avoid/fix repeated problems. Also note that hitsound suggestions on a diff may apply on similar parts of the song and the other diffs of the mapset.

>Romance

1. 00:23:040 - Add a circle to follow the vocal? It's very dominant in this part to the point where it feels weird to leave the vocal unmapped. It'll also help players to follow the map's rhythm better (I find the current pattern very hard to play).
2. 00:25:567 (3) - Make it a little more curved like this for a better flow?
3. 00:28:093 - Why don't you add a whistle to follow the piano here like 00:27:461?
4. 01:35:123 (5,1) - Place them like this? At first, it might look like a trap pattern, but actually, this pattern plays more intuitively than just stacking (1) above 01:35:529 (2)'s head.
5. 02:04:361 (1,2) - Make them spaced the same as 02:03:448 (1,2,1,2,1,2)? It's weird to see that the spacing is smaller here, especially since there is a strong instrument playing at 02:04:463.
6. 02:18:778 (4,1) - I personally feel that it's hard to read the stack here because of what you have done with 02:17:864 (1,2,3,4). Select 02:17:864 (1,2,3,4) and move to (53,248) so (4) will be at (199,265), creating an anti-jump to 02:19:082 (1)? Again, just like the suggestion above, this is far more intuitive than the current pattern.
7. 02:56:849 (1,2) - Space them further? From02:52:788 (3) up to this point, all objects are spaced by 2/3 beats, but it's suddenly 1/1 here, and the spacing can trap players to think that the rhythm is still the same.
8. 03:32:077 (8,1) - Same as 02:04:361 (1,2).
9. 05:45:580 (3,4) - Space them further too, maybe by 1.8x? The music is strong at 05:45:884, and the spacing here doesn't reflect that well enough.
10. 05:46:189 (1,2,3,4) - I personally feel it's better to place them far away from 05:45:884 (4). That brown circle being so close to 05:46:189 (1), to the point of making an anti-jump, might create an awkward flow of play.

Not much to say. Cool 1/3 (with 1/6 streams!) map you have here, although I believe the intuitiveness of the map can still be increased (particularly on spots where there is only a very small or no movement needed). Still a great stuff though~

Good luck on the way

Chloe wrote:

最近心烦的事略多.. 来晚了 >.< 放心 慢慢來大丈夫, 自己事情最重要的

00:23:356 (5,6,7) - 这个间距现在有点高 感觉这么柔和的背景下挺突然的 建议1.1x
00:25:567 (3) - 有点丑....
01:35:224 (6) - 去掉NC 加在01:35:529 (1) - 不然有点难读 因为和前面那组间距也拉的挺开的 最好的建议是 我是認為目前這個比較好讀
01:43:143 (1) - nc? 感覺會混淆, 所以還是保持原樣
01:53:397 (1) - 这种地方我也是建议NC加在这里 因为可读性大大增加 你目前这样打起来有点疼...
02:04:361 (1) - 我觉得保持1.0x间距比较好 虽然后面是滑条而且是1/3 但是我还是喜欢当1/4的方式来打 不懂;w:
03:05:072 (5) - 没有和03:04:463 (2) - 重叠好 复制一下？
03:10:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 这坨挤在一起比较难看 感觉可以拉开一点间距
04:26:696 (2) - 移到04:26:290 (1) - 这个的位置？

嘛我本身也是比较喜欢这样的图 我觉得没啥可挑的 混个sp吧 starrrrrrred

1. Mapset is lacking tags: consider adding all this (original theme, original creator, vocalist and publishing circle) 恋色マスタースパーク 東方永夜抄～Imperishable Night RD-Sounds めらみぽっぷ 凋叶棕 薦 -susume- C85
2. soft-hitfinish13.wav have bad quality, sounds very soft and weight kinda way too much (more than 800KB - that's really high, especially considering that mapset already goes higher than 16MB). Perhaps re-code this one or find another one with better quality?
3. I feel timing a bit early at the last 5 notes - try to add someone expeirenced to check this (sorry i can't handle such timing)

1. 00:03:461 (4) - This one should be extended to the blue tick too according to the previous pattern, or either way make 00:02:198 (2) - 1/2 instead
2. 00:13:567 (4) - same here, or else make 00:12:303 (2) - 1/2
3. 00:25:567 (3) - soft-whistle would work very well on slidertail imo
4. 00:28:093 (3) - and pehaps remove whistle here from here? doesn't works well at this part as for me
5. 00:39:966 (1) - extend it to the downbeat?.. feels more natural as for me orz
6. 01:24:564 (3,4) - That seems like spacing issue. Would be better if you'd re-space them properly or stack perfectly instead, currently it is kinda weird to play
7. 03:10:859 (4,6) - Re-space them a bit to avoid overlapping
8. 03:18:676 (1,3) - Kind of a bit messy spacing, perhaps try to make something like this instead?
   
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 04:13:295 (1) - I don't think that this NC is really nesessary
10. 04:18:169 (1) - ^
11. 04:21:823 (4) - kinda weird flow with 04:21:214 (2) - maybe try something like this instead?
    
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 04:25:072 (1) - >.< unrankable slider snape every slider must have visible part from start to the end x.x
13. 04:26:595 (1,2) - Ctrl+G them on timeline so it will be easier to read this pattern
14. 04:27:509 (1,2,3) - I'd re-space them a bit to avoid overlapping here
15. 04:30:047 (4,5) - Kind of weird flow again - repeat comes very fast, so it's high chance to get a 100 here, and actual placement feels a bit not intuitive.. perhaps try this?
    
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 04:51:265 - here should be note follow drums.. also, to make this section more intense as you planned you simple can add some 1/3 notes with bigger spacing follow drums
17. 05:09:031 (3) - :< might be bad idea since this slider is very fast, basically looks like previous 1/3 repeats so there is might be problem to read and not get 100 but not sure... at least i haven't get 100 here
18. 05:35:732 (3,4) - Spacing problem

Kodora wrote:

Loneight萌! Kodora萌est!

[General]

1. Mapset is lacking tags: consider adding all this (original theme, original creator, vocalist and publishing circle) 恋色マスタースパーク 東方永夜抄～Imperishable Night RD-Sounds めらみぽっぷ 凋叶棕 薦 -susume- C85 added!
2. soft-hitfinish13.wav have bad quality, sounds very soft and weight kinda way too much (more than 800KB - that's really high, especially considering that mapset already goes higher than 16MB). Perhaps re-code this one or find another one with better quality? I can't find better quality ;w;
3. I feel timing a bit early at the last 5 notes - try to add someone expeirenced to check this (sorry i can't handle such timing) changed!

[Romance]

*I'd suggest reduse HP Drain by 1 tick to make this map more passable for people with lower skill - 1/6 streams is very great challenge, so lower drain would make this map more friendly without hurting anything sure!

1. 00:03:461 (4) - This one should be extended to the blue tick too according to the previous pattern, or either way make 00:02:198 (2) - 1/2 instead
2. 00:13:567 (4) - same here, or else make 00:12:303 (2) - 1/2 the song tells me it is better for 1/2 there
3. 00:25:567 (3) - soft-whistle would work very well on slidertail imo added!
4. 00:28:093 (3) - and pehaps remove whistle here from here? doesn't works well at this part as for me okay! and sorry Hinsvar, I changed it
5. 00:39:966 (1) - extend it to the downbeat?.. feels more natural as for me orz fixed!
6. 01:24:564 (3,4) - That seems like spacing issue. Would be better if you'd re-space them properly or stack perfectly instead, currently it is kinda weird to play I don't feel there should stack or re-space would be better, it's fine for me now
7. 03:10:859 (4,6) - Re-space them a bit to avoid overlapping keep it~
8. 03:18:676 (1,3) - Kind of a bit messy spacing, perhaps try to make something like this instead? used my style to change!
   
   
   SPOILER

   
9. 04:13:295 (1) - I don't think that this NC is really nesessary
10. 04:18:169 (1) - ^ I need to think about it
11. 04:21:823 (4) - kinda weird flow with 04:21:214 (2) - maybe try something like this instead? fixed by myself
    
    
    SPOILER

    
12. 04:25:072 (1) - >.< unrankable slider snape every slider must have visible part from start to the end x.x I need to think about it ;w;
13. 04:26:595 (1,2) - Ctrl+G them on timeline so it will be easier to read this pattern but would break the song's feeling which I feel, keep it!
14. 04:27:509 (1,2,3) - I'd re-space them a bit to avoid overlapping here fixed!
15. 04:30:047 (4,5) - Kind of weird flow again - repeat comes very fast, so it's high chance to get a 100 here, and actual placement feels a bit not intuitive.. perhaps try this? fixed by myself
    
    
    SPOILER

    
16. 04:51:265 - here should be note follow drums.. also, to make this section more intense as you planned you simple can add some 1/3 notes with bigger spacing follow drums okay! try it
17. 05:09:031 (3) - :< might be bad idea since this slider is very fast, basically looks like previous 1/3 repeats so there is might be problem to read and not get 100 but not sure... at least i haven't get 100 here keep it now, maybe will fix it
18. 05:35:732 (3,4) - Spacing problem fixed!

...and that's it

honestly best 1/3 map i ever saw

best of luck with approval!!!

1. 以下纯属个人感觉，请酌情考虑w

Rotte wrote:

[Insane]

1. 以下纯属个人感觉，请酌情考虑w

• Rhythm

1. 00:16:719 (1,2) - 00:17:983 (3,4) - 这俩尾巴重合有点瑕疵 瑕疵才美, 雖然我還是改了
   00:23:351 (5,6,7) - 5不给个nc能行么。 +了
   00:56:235 (1) - 后面这种的小段00:56:844 (3) - 这个也算吧，如果按照后面间隙越来越大的话，前面的无疑slider速度有点慢，因为你的这个00:55:930 (1) - 速度很快。 换句话说的话00:55:930 (1,1) - 这两个的距离太小，00:55:930 (1) - 这个速度很快貌似有点不和谐的样子。 Nice, 你讓我找到為何我會覺得這邊怪怪的原因了! 改了!
   01:24:458 (2,3,4) - 稍稍有点理解不能这个ds 改了
   03:46:488 (4) - 这里节奏感觉稍有奇怪，1/3slider折返这种节奏感觉能实在一些 對我來說這邊必須這樣, 比較符合節奏
   05:18:164 (1,2) - 说实在的这个梗感觉是为了美观，但是感觉要是打图的话这两个slider距离还是稍微大一点好 先納入考慮, 暫時保持

实在不知道说哪儿好，完全没槽点
哦对了，假如可以加入太鼓的蓝色鼓点音效在一些地方，感觉谱面音效可以更清脆一些的。 已經試過了, 但太違和所以拿掉了, 我知道這說法很奇怪但吐槽就輸了

打爆l18，你不去当狗简直是浪费资源 我英文渣死了, 還有消存在值的技能已經點滿, 而且已經懶得摸了...

Niokin wrote:

yo higher quality bg

SPOILER

Hollow Wings wrote:

昨天忘记po了抱歉

irc mod

2014-08-06 20:23 Hollow Wings: 直接irc？
2014-08-06 20:24 Loneight: hao
2014-08-06 20:24 Loneight: 反正才一個難度 w
2014-08-06 20:24 Loneight: 嗚, 突然覺得你能實況, 網速一定很給力
2014-08-06 20:25 Hollow Wings: 00:23:351 (1,2,3) - 这三个别黏在一起吧
2014-08-06 20:25 Hollow Wings: 00:25:562 (3,1) - 不stack么
2014-08-06 20:25 Hollow Wings: 还好
2014-08-06 20:25 Hollow Wings: 00:28:719 (4) - 这个1/4？
2014-08-06 20:26 Hollow Wings: 似乎没跟着什么节奏？虽然我是无所谓233
2014-08-06 20:26 Loneight: 習慣性就會跟著vocal (汗
2014-08-06 20:26 Loneight: 三個那個改了, stack的話就在看看吧! 感覺那邊別stack會比較好, 但不知道如何解釋
2014-08-06 20:27 Hollow Wings: 不stack没事
2014-08-06 20:27 Hollow Wings: 我知道你的意思
2014-08-06 20:27 Hollow Wings: 毕竟我是脑洞大师hhh
2014-08-06 20:27 Loneight: loool!
2014-08-06 20:28 Loneight: 別吐槽那1/6 300bgm steam了 (逃
2014-08-06 20:28 Hollow Wings: 02:00:702 (1) - 估计这个要被挑
2014-08-06 20:29 Hollow Wings: 300bpm没事
2014-08-06 20:29 Hollow Wings: 02:04:356 (1) - 495，89
2014-08-06 20:29 Loneight: 對於slider的形狀我都做好準備了! (被打, 感覺那種樣子才符合歌曲, 所以先保持
2014-08-06 20:30 Hollow Wings: 02:03:747 (1,2) - 主要是你这两个的方向是这样的
2014-08-06 20:30 Hollow Wings: 突然变了就觉得略别扭
2014-08-06 20:30 Loneight: 495,89 那個 我改了, 難怪我覺得這裡怪怪的
2014-08-06 20:30 Hollow Wings: 02:23:950 (10) - nc
2014-08-06 20:30 Hollow Wings: 嗯
2014-08-06 20:31 Loneight: 昨結束NC起來是不錯, 不過在這想克制一下300激之類的分數, 所以先保留 (逃
2014-08-06 20:31 Loneight: *作結束
2014-08-06 20:32 Hollow Wings: 03:01:412 (5,1) - nc移动
2014-08-06 20:32 Hollow Wings: 03:02:224 (2) - nc
2014-08-06 20:33 Hollow Wings: 03:15:930 (4,5) - 换一下位置
2014-08-06 20:33 Loneight: 我自己稍微改變了NC一下, 但03:02:224 - 這個沒有NC, 我想應該是能讀的, 畢竟前面一堆slider變速 (被打
2014-08-06 20:35 Hollow Wings: 不，这个很难读
2014-08-06 20:35 Hollow Wings: 没有nc提示这个slider估计得有七成人出100
2014-08-06 20:35 Hollow Wings: 04:13:290 (1) -
2014-08-06 20:35 Loneight: 嗚 ;w;
2014-08-06 20:35 Hollow Wings: 后面的钢琴倚音可以另开一个note来强调
2014-08-06 20:36 Loneight: 這樣的話前面那個也得NC了
2014-08-06 20:36 Hollow Wings: 专业研究读图梗三十年
2014-08-06 20:36 Hollow Wings: 是啊，我就是这么建议的
2014-08-06 20:36 Hollow Wings: 04:21:209 (2) - 这边的一个小跳倚音柑橘很好玩啊
2014-08-06 20:37 Hollow Wings: 把这个slider改成一个很短的slider+note吧，note接后面slider头附近
2014-08-06 20:37 Loneight: lol!
2014-08-06 20:38 Hollow Wings: 04:49:230 (2,3) - 这边果然还是两个slier比较带感
2014-08-06 20:39 Hollow Wings: 04:50:143 (1) - 这段开始都是，全都快速slider
2014-08-06 20:39 Hollow Wings: 05:18:164 (1) - 反向
2014-08-06 20:40 Loneight: 不行, 雖然很有梗, 但在這邊我覺得用這樣的circle來表示drum也不錯
2014-08-06 20:40 Loneight: 畢竟前面都用了一堆slider
2014-08-06 20:40 Loneight: 這難度感覺都快變成slider歌了 www
2014-08-06 20:41 Hollow Wings: 还好吧
2014-08-06 20:41 Loneight: 好, 先ctrl+g 看看
2014-08-06 20:41 Hollow Wings: note感觉太单薄
2014-08-06 20:41 Hollow Wings: 我打打看

good luck

Momochikun wrote:

Epic map as always.. take a star ~ :3

Flask wrote:

泡泡泡泡泡

#1

1. 03:04:966 (4,5) - Move these down to help the stack a little bit more. You could also just new combo 03:04:763 (3) so you have the trail alone instead of moving.
2. 04:17:453 (1) - Try moving away from 04:16:945 (3,1) - since there's a little confusion here, it's pretty far compared to the previous ones. Maybe like this?
3. 05:12:681 (3) - add a new combo.

Love wrote:

Just a few things.

1. 03:04:966 (4,5) - Move these down to help the stack a little bit more. You could also just new combo 03:04:763 (3) so you have the trail alone instead of moving. ok!
2. 04:17:453 (1) - Try moving away from 04:16:945 (3,1) - since there's a little confusion here, it's pretty far compared to the previous ones. Maybe like this? I changed in other way
3. 05:12:681 (3) - add a new combo. add

The SV changes look pretty hard in editor but it's actually really easy and absolutely fun since it's consistent throughout the whole map. Leave me a PM when you've replied.

Oracle wrote:

doublepostingiscool isverycool

05:12:377 (2,2) - 稍微移开点 好
04:25:067 (1) - 这个感觉要死，还是做成普通的吧 這個我也想改, 被poke太多次
04:41:514 (1) - ^
01:55:829 (1) - ^
02:00:702 (1) - ^
03:13:798 (1) - ^ 其他部份我就沒改了, 因為這部分我覺得還是能讀, 沒說很危險
01:35:118 (5,1,2) - 这个antijump非常有迷惑性，我建议把01:35:219 (1) - stack到01:35:524 (2) - 的头上，感觉会好很多 我還蠻喜歡說, 原本是stack在(2)上沒錯, 聽從了hinsvar的建議, 發現這樣更有感覺, 所以還是先保留吧
02:03:240 (5,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - 这一段莫名感觉超级难打，考虑缩小一点点间距？或者做成03:30:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - 一样顺的flow，多次反跳实在很难打....我天天断;w; 換了個方式
02:50:752 (1) - 按照之前放音效的规律，我感觉可以放个clap(每次空拍前都有) 改了, 不過02:50:448 (4) - slider-end也取消了
04:10:854 (4) - 缩短1/3，在04:11:158 - 加个note来体现重音吧~ 這邊我是故意拉個slider來讓人有種蓄力感, 所以..保留
04:30:651 (6) - 要不要来个NC 感覺沒什麼必要, 雖然可以強調結束, 但, 我不知道怎麼說, 這邊先這樣就好

还有就是，老板 storyboard怎么突然没了;w; 救回來了;w;, 我不知道osb.被砍掉還上傳, 然後又清理了資源回收桶...F醬幫了我一個大忙

tell me when~

Oracle wrote:

嘘? 愛?


Masterpiece.



using this for some memorable old days w

Oracle wrote:

wow i'm actually capable of FCing the map i approved!!!
wwww