Kibbleru wrote:

from our queue

[Hard]

00:12:489 (3,4) - fix blanket don't see any problem here
00:12:489 (3,5) - ^ done

00:21:086 (2,3) - don't like this overlap
03:13:586 (2,3) - ^ ^I'm ok with this

00:32:245 (1) - this isn't parallel with 00:31:330 (6,7) fixed

00:32:245 (1,2) - overlap this a bit more don't see any reason

00:35:903 (3,5) - stack properly done

00:47:428 (3,1) - this doesn't flow well, i think ctrl + g (1) would help a bit I purposely use the same pattern, because lyrics are same too

01:04:623 (1,2) - blanket here? there isn't intended a blanket

01:45:415 (1,3) - blanket this better done

01:48:982 (2) - why make this start on a blue tick and not the red? if you put it on the red tick you can stack 01:47:610 (7,2) and make it look better It starts from blue tick because of vocal

02:11:391 (7,8) - the overlap is kinda meh, but it doesn't flow well i think ctrl + g (8) would make flow better good suggest, but I need some comments from other modders

02:25:293 (3) - ctrl + g? okaay

03:00:064 - i think needs something here
03:03:357 - ^ ^sure, added notes with whistles

03:47:610 (2) - doesn't really flow well I know, in this way I want to emphasize a vocal


[Normal]

00:36:635 (5,1) - stack? done

00:55:659 (1,2) - not parallel fixed

00:58:586 (1) - angle this down more would improve flow done

03:41:025 (1) - ctrl + g?
03:41:757 (2) - ^ ^sure

03:58:586 (1,1) - i don't think these nc are necessary It's because of change of rhythm from 1/4 to 1/3


[Easy]

02:36:634 (1) - ctrl + g
02:37:367 (2) - ^

02:37:367 (2,1) - stack ^done

03:20:537 (3,4) - space out nope, I like this overlap

03:25:293 (1) - make this more parallel with the last part of 03:23:464 (2) fixed



really nicely mapped

luxoDeh wrote:

Hi! mod from my queue.

EASY

00:20:171 (4,1) - maybe you can blancket these. I use blanket for next two sliders; don't want to overdo with blankets
01:12:489 (3,1) - you can try to improve the flow at this point. maybe make something like this: why not

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(anyway I think is ok also in your way if you don't want to change)
03:20:537 (3,4) - you neved did such an evident overlap in this map, maybe is better to avoit it. I really don't wanna change this overlap :<
03:39:196 (3,4) - here too, better avoid overlap ok, it didn't look so good, so fixed
very good easy diff.

NORMAL

01:13:037 (1) - maybe if you really want to follow the vocals is better to use this rhythm imo

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also because there is a very loud sound here 01:13:403 - and I think is better to enphasize it. You proposed right rhythm, but I don't want to make it more difficult. Also this slider=word, so it fits vocal
01:18:342 (5) - maybe move this some grids up? just for a question of flow also with 01:19:074 (6) - done
01:34:440 (3) - also here maybe better move it in this way for a better flow: fixed, but in my own way

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01:51:635 (3) - if you want to follow vocals, you should make this slider end at 01:52:001 - in this case 1 word=1 slider
02:33:525 (1) - to follow vocals move this to 02:33:708 - , make it end at 02:34:440 - and add a note at 02:33:525 - same; also, it will be to difficult for Normal: 1/2 slider - 1/2 slider - 1/2 circle - slider
03:54:196 (3,4,5) - the flow is not great here fixed
03:59:562 (1) - delete NC? ah, okay

HARD

00:34:806 (5,6,1) - I think is better to have a jump between these 2 00:34:989 (6,1) - and not between 00:34:806 (5,6) - done
01:42:123 (8,9,1) - same here in this case circle and next slider match one word, so I leave it as is
01:45:049 (5,6,1) - ^ same
03:13:586 (2,3) - this pattern is not the best I think. maybe somethink like this is more good looking: done

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03:21:818 (8) - maybe this should start at 03:22:026 - and there should be a note at 03:21:818 - he sings "tyaa" inseparably and that sharp turn matches a downbeat

that's all. I never heared an ukrainian song XD anyway the map is really good, take a star too :3

-Kirito wrote:

hi owo/ from my queues

[General]
- remove the except for the first BPM done
02:44:150 -
03:07:367 -

[Easy]
00:27:854 - circle add. combo is low.
00:30:781 - ^
00:51:269 - ^ ^added
01:16:147 - ~ 01:20:537 - why lyrics are part of the note does not exist in it? mapped that part
01:20:537 (1,2) - i think the "finish" is not good here, i think. 01:22:001 (3) - here finishi? Nope, these finishes absolutely fit the music
01:34:440 - circle add
02:30:780 (1,2,3) - 01:20:537 (1,2,3) - same as above.
03:11:757 - ^
03:41:025 (1,2,3) - 01:20:537 (1,2,3) - same as above.
03:56:391 - circle add ^circles added

[Normal]
00:30:781 - ,00:31:147 - ,00:31:513 - circle add.
01:20:537 (1,2) - finishi remove
01:40:293 - ~ 01:42:123 - note add
02:01:513 - circle add. ^added circles/sliders where I need to make accent on some notes
02:30:781 (1,2) - finishi remove
03:26:939 (5,6) - specify the sound of vocals. but a bit confusing to beginners. I was trying to use your rhythm, but it sounds a bit weird

03:41:025 (1,2) - finishi remove
03:46:879 (1,2) - ^
03:52:732 (1,2) - ^

[Hard]
00:37:184 (6) - this 1/1 beat 'w'; remapped that part
01:20:537 (1,2) - finishi remove
02:30:781 (1,2) - ^
02:44:150 - ~ 03:04:454 - there must be a break time here. Do not want. I really like this whistling.
03:41:025 (1,2) - finishi remove
03:45:415 (5) - NC add?
03:48:342 (3) - ^
03:51:269 (5) - ^ ^don't see a reason

good lucky:3/

Snaggletooth wrote:

First off:

I am very sorry for this huge delay. I have been having lag issues. Now that they are gone I am ready to mod again so.. Here you go!

General

1. You should find a diffrent color than grey for your hitobjects as they blend alot with the background which
   make sit very hard to read esspecially for the newbs. It looks pretty clear as for me http://puu.sh/7eW2J/789148f160.jpg

General

1. Concider HP -1 as 6 is more appropriate for a Hard Diff Done

Placement

1. 00:21:269 (3,5) - This plays well, but I have something that looks more pleasing. Looks good, but it's worse for flow and creates a big jump between (4) and (5)
   
2. 00:24:928 It is a bit awkward to play on a red tick. I would suggest you add a circle here to keep the flow. Done
3. 01:25:476 (6,7,8,9) - This is confusing to play. I dont know if you wanted that to be so it would make the diff 'harder'
   or you placed it there for shits and giggles. jk. Please try and align this more clearly. Eh, confusing? Perhaps I'll change it if someone else notice it
4. Nazi: 01:42:306 (9,1) - Stack the cirlce properly. It's like a micro-millimeter off. fixed

General

1. AiMod Dunno how this happened 0o Fixed
   
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   Snap dem objects.

Placement

1. 03:41:025 (1,3) - Not so sure about this overlap. Need comments from other moders
2. 03:43:952 (1,2) - You could make this pattern pretty much perfect if you would move 03:43:952 (1) - to x:112 y:148 and 03:45:416 (2) - to x:20 y:116 Fixed, but in my own way

[*]Since it's a normal I would suggest you move 03:56:757 (2) - to x:268 y:312 so the slider is more visible. Fixed

General

1. AiMod tells me that there are a lot of unsnapped objects. Fix them. Fixed

Placement

1. 03:20:537 (3,4) - This overlap needs to be removed. It is a really bad idea to have those on an easy diff. Don't see a problem with readable of this pattern.

Imo, this is a really nice map. I'd love to see this ranked~

Gray Veyron wrote:

Hi, Trig! From my VV Modding Queue~

[> Genaral <]

• - Since your background is likely Sliver. Change the silver Combo Color, it's against the criteria. As for me, it looks clearly
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[> Easy <]

1. 00:13:586 (2,2) - You should move the second slider up, to avoid a little overlap with the first slider. It's not significantly
2. 00:19:074 (3) - Curve this slider, it's between the curved sliders. And why is this straight? Done
3. 00:32:610 (3,1) - You've used 1.1x DS all the way here and what??!
4. 00:44:318 (2,1) - ^ ^Here is a little break and real spacing is absurdly high.
5. 00:59:684 (2,1) - Overlap, or on purpose? 2nd
6. 01:02:976 (2,1) - Make a blanket on slider's tail. Done
7. 01:22:001 (3,1,2) - Weird flow here, i don't know if this is okay. Because I didn't plan to keep flow here
8. 01:39:196 (3,4,5) - The slider (3) and circle (5) overlapped, Intead of that, make a triangle formation here. It's not essentially while playing
9. 01:51:635 (3,1) - What DS you use here? it doesn't look like your using around 1.1x spacing.
10. 02:29:318 (4,1) - A bit close for a 1.1x DS, fix this one. Fixed
11. 03:20:537 (3,4) - Overlap, you've never did this on other parts of the track. Fixed
12. 03:37:001 (1) - Same as 00:19:074 (3) - Done
13. 03:42:489 (3,1) - Swap NC, new track. No need
14. - Good diff, but just try to fix a little DS.

[> Normal <]

1. 00:13:220 (3) - Curve for symmetry with 00:11:757 (1,2) - Done
2. 00:15:415 (2,3,4,1) - Make a square or diamond formation. It will be significantly while playing
3. 00:26:391 (3,1) - Same reason on Easy, fix DS. Fixed
4. 00:29:318 (3) - Curve this slider like the slider on 00:28:220 (2) - for better flowing. Done
5. 00:30:781 (5,1) - Same as 00:26:391 (3,1) -
6. 01:12:489 (4,1) - Overlap, or on purpose? 2nd
7. - A little perfect~ nice mappings!

Great map you have there!