1. Hard (4,99 stars, 377 notes)
2. Pjecoo's Easy (2,62 stars, 176 notes)
3. Rotten's Normal (3,81 stars, 209 notes)

Kodora wrote:

;_;

1. Тайминг в некоторых местах сходит, попроси Фауста или кого-нибудь ещё
2. Widescreen support нужен вроде только для СБ, но я точно не знаю
3. Убери из тэгов electronica (есть жанры), а Серебро перенеси в Artist (не забудь про Romanised Artist), и насчёт Silver я не уверен (в тэги ещё, наверное, нужно добавить rotten yellow и pjecoo, но это наверное)

1. Со спейсингом беда, постоянно скачет, раз берёшь 1.2, так и продолжай с ним, а хитсаунды слишком рандомные, дам несколько подсказок, с ритмом хорошо
2. 00:10:639 - добавь круг
3. 00:17:792 (2) - вистл на конец
4. 00:36:945 - зачем делать два inherited point'а, если можно использовать это?
5. 00:46:175 (1) - спиннер в середине карты не есть хорошо, но это на твоё усмотрение
6. 00:55:405 (1,2) - вистл
7. 01:02:558 (1) - ^
8. 01:03:020 (2) - офф-бит слайдер, 01:02:558 (1,2) - переделай это как-нибудь по-другому (и да, на 01:03:250 - должен быть вистл)
9. 01:04:404 (1,2) - то же самое
10. 01:05:558 (3) - вистл на начало
11. 01:21:249 - здесь inherited point не нужен, удали его и измени громкость 01:06:481 - вот этого на 35%
12. 01:47:785 (2) - два круга вместо слайдера
13. 02:35:089 - продли киай до сюда

1. 00:00:020 (1) - убери вистл с начала
2. 00:06:948 (4) - вистл на начало
3. 00:11:563 (1) - вистл на середину и конец
4. 00:12:255 (2) - вистл
5. 00:27:717 (4) - убери вистл
6. 00:28:409 (2) - ^
7. 00:28:640 (3,4) - вистл
8. 00:29:101 (5) - убери вистл
9. 00:30:948 (4) - клэп на конец
10. 00:33:255 (1) - клэп
11. 00:33:717 (3) - клэп на конец
12. 00:34:640 (5) - клэп на начало
13. 00:36:948 (1) - убери вистл
14. 00:39:601 (3) - убери клэп с конца, не понимаю этих слайдеров, лучше бы вместо них круги поставил
15. 00:42:025 (5) - клэп на начало
16. 00:44:794 (2) - ^
17. 00:49:640 (1,2,3,4,5) - вистлов не достаёт, может что-нибудь с кастомными хитсаундами сделать?
18. 00:54:717 (4) - клэп на конец
19. 00:57:717 (3,4) - спутал куда клэп поставить
20. 01:00:371 (3) - клэп на конец
21. 01:01:409 (2) - клэп на начало
22. 01:02:794 (1,2,3) - вистл на сами слайдеры (поставить на слайдер вистл, убрать с начала и конца)
23. 01:04:409 (1) - убери вистл с начала и конца
24. 01:06:025 (4) - клэп
25. 01:08:794 (2) - клэп на начало
26. 01:18:025 (2) - ^
27. 01:50:794 (1) - убери вистл
28. 01:51:255 (1) - убери клэп с конца
29. 01:54:025 (5) - клэп
30. 01:55:755 (4) - клэп на конец
31. 02:01:409 (4) - клэп
32. 02:02:332 (2) - убери вистл с конца
33. 02:13:409 (1) - клэп на начало
34. 02:28:063 (1) - клэп на конец
35. 02:29:794 (1) - убери вистл с начала и конца, клэп на конец
36. 02:30:717 (3) - убери вистл с начала, середины и конца, клэп на середину
37. 02:31:409 (1) - клэп на середину
38. 02:35:101 - продли киай до сюда

onotoleonide wrote:

o3o
предложения
[General]

1. Тайминг в некоторых местах сходит, попроси Фауста или кого-нибудь ещё потом доберусь
2. Widescreen support нужен вроде только для СБ, но я точно не знаю да, просто кто-то его забыл выключить
3. Убери из тэгов electronica (есть жанры), а Серебро перенеси в Artist (не забудь про Romanised Artist), и насчёт Silver я не уверен (в тэги ещё, наверное, нужно добавить rotten yellow и pjecoo, но это наверное)

нужно, да. исправил теги, но артист SEREBRO (проверял по iTunes)

[Hard]
только предложения

1. 00:00:020 (1) - убери вистл с начала начало трека, нужно что-нибудь сюда
2. 00:06:948 (4) - вистл на начало ~
3. 00:11:563 (1) - вистл на середину и конец на конец, да. в середине не звучит
4. 00:12:255 (2) - вистл мне кажется, что не нужен. не знаю, я бы так оставил
5. 00:27:717 (4) - убери вистл вокал + музыка, не стоит убирать
6. 00:28:409 (2) - ^ и так нету о3о
7. 00:28:640 (3,4) - вистл там на тройку, да
8. 00:29:101 (5) - убери вистл ~
9. 00:30:948 (4) - клэп на конец
10. 00:33:255 (1) - клэп
11. 00:33:717 (3) - клэп на конец
12. 00:34:640 (5) - клэп на началовсе, что не отметил - исправил, и этот тоже
13. 00:36:948 (1) - убери вистл не, тут такой звук. я оставлю, мне кажется вписывается
14. 00:39:601 (3) - убери клэп с конца, не понимаю этих слайдеров, лучше бы вместо них круги поставил хард же, не хочу спамить 1/4 да и хлопок там звучит
15. 00:42:025 (5) - клэп на начало да
16. 00:44:794 (2) - ^ ага
17. 00:49:640 (1,2,3,4,5) - вистлов не достаёт, может что-нибудь с кастомными хитсаундами сделать? конечно
18. 00:54:717 (4) - клэп на конец угу
19. 00:57:717 (3,4) - спутал куда клэп поставить blame Ctrl+G \:D/
20. 01:00:371 (3) - клэп на конец
21. 01:01:409 (2) - клэп на начало
22. 01:02:794 (1,2,3) - вистл на сами слайдеры (поставить на слайдер вистл, убрать с начала и конца)
23. 01:04:409 (1) - убери вистл с начала и конца
24. 01:06:025 (4) - клэп
25. 01:08:794 (2) - клэп на начало
26. 01:18:025 (2) - ^ да, ко всему вышесказанному
27. 01:50:794 (1) - убери вистл нет, тут он вписывается
28. 01:51:255 (1) - убери клэп с конца
29. 01:54:025 (5) - клэп
30. 01:55:755 (4) - клэп на конец
31. 02:01:409 (4) - клэп
32. 02:02:332 (2) - убери вистл с конца
33. 02:13:409 (1) - клэп на начало
34. 02:28:063 (1) - клэп на конец
35. 02:29:794 (1) - убери вистл с начала и конца, клэп на конец
36. 02:30:717 (3) - убери вистл с начала, середины и конца, клэп на середину
37. 02:31:409 (1) - клэп на середину да, и все, что выше тоже применил
38. 02:35:101 - продли киай до сюда нет, там вообще тогда киаи будет длиннючий, а есле еще и первый продлить, то вообще перебор

the most useless mod ever

onotoleonide wrote:

[Normal]

1. Со спейсингом беда, постоянно скачет, раз берёшь 1.2, так и продолжай с ним, а хитсаунды слишком рандомные, дам несколько подсказок, с ритмом хорошо
2. 00:10:639 - добавь круг
3. 00:17:792 (2) - вистл на конец
4. 00:36:945 - зачем делать два inherited point'а, если можно использовать это?
5. 00:46:175 (1) - спиннер в середине карты не есть хорошо, но это на твоё усмотрение
6. 00:55:405 (1,2) - вистл
7. 01:02:558 (1) - ^
8. 01:03:020 (2) - офф-бит слайдер, 01:02:558 (1,2) - переделай это как-нибудь по-другому (и да, на 01:03:250 - должен быть вистл)
9. 01:04:404 (1,2) - то же самое
10. 01:05:558 (3) - вистл на начало
11. 01:21:249 - здесь inherited point не нужен, удали его и измени громкость 01:06:481 - вот этого на 35%
12. 01:47:785 (2) - два круга вместо слайдера
13. 02:35:089 - продли киай до сюда

Sieg wrote:

Kodora wrote:

;_;

Sword Hunter wrote:

GENERAL:
Add light blue to the combo colour please~~~ would look nice with more colour variations. will re-do the colous after changing the BG
Fix tag conflict with hard diff, make all the tags same. yeah, sure
Add Russian song to the tag? BATs will set the language after ranking the map


Pjcoo’s EASY

The BPM is 130,001 make it to 130,000 instead.? i feel like it's getting off near the end of the song :/ need some help with that
ADD pjcoo to the tag (lol, you forget again bakari.) oh, that's right. silly me

HARD

Sup man? yo
Just please tidy up those TAGS!! Argh^_^ I cant stand them! yeah, fixed them
Here goes, hope useful.

00:01:640 (5) –IMO it looks better on x100 y272 i kinda want that jump here, it sounds nice with the music
00:05:101 (4,5) –I think the spacing is too messy, out of grid even, tidy it up a bit. as long as it's not offscreen - that's okay
00:05:101 (4) –I think x48 y316 looks good.
00:05:332 (5) –x 16 y 228
00:36:255 (11) –Delete this to make some fresh space and room, really! that'd ruin rhythm of the song and will be really confusing for players. even for the hardest diff, that's just too cruel, sorry
I can’t mod much, just…. Your mapping style, yeah you know…. I think you should add some hitsound to make your mapping style more clear, normal clap do a good work in here. well, maybe yes. will consider that

Care for a collab..? Uh.. I don't feel like mapping anything, atm. sorrry it's just me
I wanna TASTE one ^_^!

~~~~~~~
nice map really but please consider this:

First, the song is nice really, after reading the translation and watch the video... yeah, it is NICE.
but the background, AW c'mon! I think it's bad and make me sad not just because it's not synchron with the video, I think it doesen't draw the lyric of the song too much, it looks so empty, so vain! like nothing to do with the song! (PLEASE) if you wanna make it rank, please change it into a better one, wait, I got this one you should try....

http://www.wallpaperup.com/27818/dark_f ... _moon.html

or
this suit the BEST I THINK
http://www.wallpaperup.com/27214/fantas ... w_elf.html

or that
http://www.wallpaperup.com/32284/mood_s ... orror.html

I highly recomend the second one

I've found another one, because I'm sure that the BG I've chosen will represent feelings/emotions which are expressed in the song. also the G is really nice and that girl looks attractive, so I really want to pick that one.

good luck

Sword Hunter wrote:

Pjecoo’s EASY

00:03:717 (4) –Place it in x:108 Y:100 to make it tidier and to make the spacing consistent. - Fixed
00:05:101 (6) – x 380 y 128 make spacing consistent (do you use distance snap?) - Fixed, and yes I'm using DS.
00:42:021 (7) –I guess this slider will surprise EASY”” player. I think u should make the pattern consistent by making triplets (slider with 1 reverse, right?) like no.6. And fill 00:42:944 with a hit circle. Fixed
00:47:559 (1,1,2) –Like the modders say in my map, too much reverse in easy is bad, and I think so too, because it is surprising for beginner, really! I highly recommend filling them with spinner instead. And it ends at 00:51:251 to give beginner a time to recover. Fixed, good idea, to put there spinners..
01:02:327 (4,5,6) - ^^^ - Fixed
Really cant say much its already okay, just remove some slider with too much reverse, not good for beginner, good job!
I know, it's not for total beginners, but anyway, thanks.

Sword Hunter wrote:

Rotten’s Normal
Add your name to the tags?
01:47:785 (2,3,4,5,6,7) –I think replace with spinner to make it more tidier, and fits the music, seriously, listen to the repeteadly drum sound.
02:29:090 (4,5) –Delete this rough”” part and make number 4 a triplets (slider with 1 reverse arrow right??), and for the next you can fill it with hitcircles
02:30:013 (5) –And make a slider here if you want to keep up with the beat.
02:35:089 (3) –For a tidier look for a break, place this on x88 72

Gabe wrote:

I wasn't able to see the mapping, because there's asses everywhere in the video.

kirukashi wrote:

Gabe wrote:

I wasn't able to see the mapping, because there's asses everywhere in the video.

you sir owe me a new cup of yogurt i spit out laughing lmao

1. 00:30:948 - There's missing a clap here to follow the consistency.
2. 00:37:409 (1,2) - There is a little problem here with the blankets. If you look at the slider 1's blanket, it is more closer to the previous object than the blanket of the slider 2. You should easily be able to fix that.
3. 00:41:563 (3) - With this slider, is feels a bit too close from the previous slider. I suggest you to move it on x:292 y:272, it will be moved a bit at the right and with the next two objects, it's going to be aligned.
4. 00:57:255 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't understand the way you placed these objects. Would you mind doing something else that will also keep the spacing consistent within each other?
5. 00:58:640 - Is it missing a clap?
6. 01:06:486 - To emphasize the end of the chorus, why not adding a finish with a normal-addition to it?
7. 01:23:794 (3) - You can easily have a better blanket with the previous slider's end of you move this one a bit at the right. (Disable the Grid Snap to help you)
8. 01:27:255 (2) - This slider could be aligned with the two previous objects if you move it to x:58 y:302
9. 01:47:101 - This clap feels a bit weird. Mind deleting it?
10. 01:48:948 (1,2,3) - These sliders makes a badly shaped flow, mainly the third one, which looks more straight than the others. I suggest you to make something more curved with these sliders, it will look better.
11. 02:05:563 (1) - You should try to emphasize this object with a normal-addition finish for the beginning of the kiai time and also because there's a louder sound here. 02:20:332 - Here too.
12. 02:12:025 (3) - The emplacement of this slider looks terrible. You tried to make a blanket, which is not a bad idea, but also tried to stack the end with another object that appeared previously. The reason why I find it terrible, is that this slider is placed very close to the previous slider (1). You should try to do something else here.
13. 02:27:255 (4) - This slider makes a bad flow with the previous and the next slider. I suggest you to do something else. For an example, I have replaced it with two circles, you might want to try it:
    
    Example

    

Gabe wrote:

Already in graveyard? What.

General
I highly suggest you to delete the video from the beatmap and maybe add a link into the beatmap's words if anybody wants to watch it. Actually, the video is rated +18 on Youtube since theres many sexual content and references, which is why someone aged less than that can't see it there, so I guess we should do the same thing here. I need to get more opinions on this. The video is cut in the end, so players won't see the most awesom part anyway. Anyway, added a warning and I'll consider removing it

Hard

1. 00:57:255 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't understand the way you placed these objects. Would you mind doing something else that will also keep the spacing consistent within each other? I tried to follow the vocals and did it in a wrong way, should be fixed now! Keeping some jumps, tho
2. 02:12:025 (3) - The emplacement of this slider looks terrible. You tried to make a blanket, which is not a bad idea, but also tried to stack the end with another object that appeared previously. The reason why I find it terrible, is that this slider is placed very close to the previous slider (1). You should try to do something else here. I think that it is quite alright and I wanna keep that. Pretty similar thing was used at 02:10:178 (3,4) - and it worked rather cool. I feel like these sliders give some smooth flow and it feels awesom to me!
3. 02:27:255 (4) - This slider makes a bad flow with the previous and the next slider. I suggest you to do something else. For an example, I have replaced it with two circles, you might want to try it: well, I feel like my flow here is not bad and it is a part of my own style, so I would really lile to keep it. It works good, imo and I really love this pattern.
   
   thi is how my flow works

   
   
   
   o3ob

btw, I'm almost done with Primadonna.

1. 00:26:332 - well.. that looks like the guy is trying to undress the girl
2. 00:29:101 - 00:38:101 - she obviously wants the d. you know.
3. 00:32:332 - Most disturbing part. I meant, that goes with the first point and also.. it just looks like she's getting f**ked.
4. 00:53:563 - don't tell me this is drug-related, right? D:
5. 01:14:448 - Just her face deserves to be nuked.. :3
6. 01:57:255 - Ass.
7. 01:58:525 - Sexual reference.
8. 02:02:332 - Ass.
9. 02:08:217 - Do I need to explain that? ):
10. 02:29:794 - Asses.