BlackYooh vs. siromaru - BLACK or WHITE?

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10nya
Hello Frobe! Love your maps so it's really a honor to mod your map, let's see what I can find

[General]
  1. seems clean


[BASIC]
  1. 00:01:360 (1) - : add Finish to the head, it'll help player to realize that the map already began and support the music as well
  2. 00:07:846 (3) - : you can drag last slider point 1grid down to make better shape (sorry for the nazi ><)
  3. 00:31:197 (1) - : how about ctrl+> this slider? well previous flow is upside-down (00:29:900 (1,2) - ) and previous one is right-right (00:28:603 (1,2) - ) so why dont make this one flows to right-left-right? :D
  4. 00:32:495 (1) - : add Finish here would support the music


[NOVICE]
  1. 00:01:360 (1) - : same as BASIC
  2. 00:32:495 (1) - : ^
  3. 01:12:387 - : in fact there's no sound at here, but there's sound at 01:12:549 - so how about rearrange like this?
    [spoilerbox]
  4. 01:55:197 (3) - : it's hard for normal player to recognize that this is 1/3, how about change this into a circle started from 01:55:197 - , it'll make player more easy to catch next note


[ADVANCED]
  1. 00:01:360 (1) - : same as BASIC
  2. 01:13:684 (2,3) - : why don't make this 1,0x distance like you did on all previous patterns ? i'm afraid player will miss-read this one as 1/2 notes D:


[EXHAUST]
  1. 00:01:360 (1) - : same as BASIC, and please add this one for INFINITE diff too


neat beatmap, sorry i can't find much, good luck and have a star :)
Topic Starter
Frobe

tm1209 wrote:

Really awesome map XD


[INFINITE]


00:17:414 (1,2,3) - Ctrl+G ? i want to keep the symmetry.

00:21:143 (1,2) - I think you can increase SV to make them faster than 00:20:819 (1,2) - , that may bacome more suitable . well... i don't know the need to change the sv.

00:21:792 (5) - I think tone changed here so NC plz .

00:21:873 (6) - I think this place is not enough to use a circle to reflect rhythm or music , use a 1/4 slider to instead 00:21:792 (5,6) - may better , if you still wanna use these 3 circles , I recommend increase 00:21:792 (5,6,7) - theirs DS . i found that there are empty rhythm of 00:21:873 - due to your mod, i had changed to 1/2 beat slider.

00:38:981 (1,2,3,4) - This thythm is similar as 00:37:684 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - , why not use the similar pattern ? i think it's a little different the rhythm.

00:51:143 (1) - Why NC here ? i think it is will give a better reading to the player.

00:52:927 (1) - I think this place happened a lot of things , but you used a simple a straight line slider to reflect these things , the piano's tone down ,at least you can make the slider also slide downward , this is just my little view , you can ignore this .

01:55:927 (1) - I think kiai needn't continue to this spinner end .



I hardly ever play this kind of map so I think this mod may a little terrible , sorry for this . D:

10nya wrote:

Hello Frobe! Love your maps so it's really a honor to mod your map, let's see what I can find

[General]
  1. seems clean


[BASIC]
  1. 00:01:360 (1) - : add Finish to the head, it'll help player to realize that the map already began and support the music as well i think this whistle is better than the finish.
  2. 00:07:846 (3) - : you can drag last slider point 1grid down to make better shape (sorry for the nazi ><)
  3. 00:31:197 (1) - : how about ctrl+> this slider? well previous flow is upside-down (00:29:900 (1,2) - ) and previous one is right-right (00:28:603 (1,2) - ) so why dont make this one flows to right-left-right? :D
  4. 00:32:495 (1) - : add Finish here would support the music oh, i forgot it xD


[NOVICE]
  1. 00:01:360 (1) - : same as BASIC me too lol
  2. 00:32:495 (1) - : ^
  3. 01:12:387 - : in fact there's no sound at here, but there's sound at 01:12:549 - so how about rearrange like this?
    [spoilerbox]
  4. 01:55:197 (3) - : it's hard for normal player to recognize that this is 1/3, how about change this into a circle started from 01:55:197 - , it'll make player more easy to catch next note your opinion is correct. but, because i want to keep it, i'll hold it.


[ADVANCED]
  1. 00:01:360 (1) - : same as BASIC ;w;
  2. 01:13:684 (2,3) - : why don't make this 1,0x distance like you did on all previous patterns ? i'm afraid player will miss-read this one as 1/2 notes D:


[EXHAUST]
  1. 00:01:360 (1) - : same as BASIC, and please add this one for INFINITE diff too ._.


neat beatmap, sorry i can't find much, good luck and have a star :)
i had fixed a not mentioned. thank you all for the mod and star!
Racoon-
이 곡은 저주받았슴다
Topic Starter
Frobe

- Racoon - wrote:

이 곡은 저주받았슴다
ㅇㄴ
Satellite
please don't give up I can support this mapset :3
Topic Starter
Frobe

Satellite wrote:

please don't give up I can support this mapset :3
i'm busy because of practicing for cwc mappool.

i will move this map for the pending after end of the cwc.

thank you for your mind ^^
Stirezet
정말 잘만드신듯!!!
전 개인적으로 Infinity의 써클사이즈가 좀더 작았으면 좋을꺼 같네요...
한 4.5정도로요...
Mortem
hi. as requested.

NOVICE:
• 01:52:927 (1,2) - Can be blanketed better.

ADVANCED:
• 01:54:873 (1,2) - Make the DS like you did here: 01:54:224 (1,2) - (consistency).

Other things seems fine to me.
Sorry for little mod but this song is good mapped.
Good Luck!
Topic Starter
Frobe

Stirezet wrote:

정말 잘만드신듯!!!
전 개인적으로 Infinity의 써클사이즈가 좀더 작았으면 좋을꺼 같네요...
한 4.5정도로요...
괜찮으신 제안이긴 한데... 제 생각엔 지금 인센이랑 엑스트라 난이도 격차가 조금 있는 편이라 생각하거든요.

안 그대로 하드와 인센 사이 난이도 격차가 좀 좁은 편인데 여기서 엑스트라를 4.5로 줄여버리면 인센-엑스트라 사이의 난이도 격차가 커져서 하드-인센 사이의 난이도 격차랑 눈에 띄게 벌어질거 같기 때문에 여기서 cs를 줄이긴 힘들거 같네요. 그리고 칭찬 감사합니다 ㅎㅎ



Pjecoo wrote:

hi. as requested.

NOVICE:
• 01:52:927 (1,2) - Can be blanketed better.

ADVANCED:
• 01:54:873 (1,2) - Make the DS like you did here: 01:54:224 (1,2) - (consistency).

Other things seems fine to me.
Sorry for little mod but this song is good mapped.
Good Luck!
fixed both, thank you!
Frey
From PM request

  • NOVICE


  1. 01:36:062 (1) - better end at 01:36:387 - , ending at a blue line in Normal is really unexpectable to new players

    ADVANCED

  2. 00:23:414 (5) - add NC to make difference with 00:22:765 (3) - , or extend it to 00:23:738 -

    EXHAUST

  3. 00:23:414 (1,2) - making them a reverse slider is more readable

    INFINITE

  4. 01:12:387 (3) - move it to x204 y164 or make 01:12:387 (3,4,5,6) - curving
  5. remove NC of 01:29:035 (1) - 01:29:251 (1) - 01:29:467 (1) - . Don't overuse it

well, INFINITE is a bit risky to me, especially those big distance streams and 1/3. but, it should be fine.
Star attached, good luck :)
Topic Starter
Frobe

Frey wrote:

From PM request

  • NOVICE


  1. 01:36:062 (1) - better end at 01:36:387 - , ending at a blue line in Normal is really unexpectable to new players ok

    ADVANCED

  2. 00:23:414 (5) - add NC to make difference with 00:22:765 (3) - , or extend it to 00:23:738 - fixed

    EXHAUST

  3. 00:23:414 (1,2) - making them a reverse slider is more readable hmm, now pattern good feels to me

    INFINITE

  4. 01:12:387 (3) - move it to x204 y164 or make 01:12:387 (3,4,5,6) - curving same as above, and i think it pattern is fit the song
  5. remove NC of 01:29:035 (1) - 01:29:251 (1) - 01:29:467 (1) - . Don't overuse it i think it is helps in reading for player. but your opinion is a right. i will fix if BN says need a fix.

well, INFINITE is a bit risky to me, especially those big distance streams and 1/3. but, it should be fine.
Star attached, good luck :)
thank you take a my request and give me a star!
-Sh1n1-
Hey Frobe~~ how amazing map bro *-*/ ~~

General



  1. Add tags: yooh symphonic schranz

Basic



  1. 00:08:819 - here you should add a note as you did on 00:03:630 (4) -
  2. 00:19:197 - here is the same sound as 00:14:008 (3) - and 00:16:603 (3) - should be Slider for consistency? and at 00:20:170 - should be a note to add more emphasis at high pitch
  3. 00:26:981 (4,1) - improve this blanquet
  4. distance between 00:27:305 (1,2) - is 1.06x, fix this because you are using 1.00
  5. 01:26:981 (1,2) - blanquet can be improved.
  6. 01:54:224 (1) - This slider it can be confusing for newbies, to avoid problems you can rotate like this

Novice


  1. 00:23:089 (2,1) - unsightly pattern, looks messy, make more playable, maybe like this
  2. 01:25:684 (1,2) - can be better sliders
  3. 01:29:900 (1) - move to x:20 y: 260 to fix a better blanquet with 01:28:278 (1) -

Advanced



  1. 00:12:387 (3,4) - mmm good spacing and consistency with next patterns but DD: looks unsightly :( (just my personal opinion, it's up to you)
  2. 01:44:981 (4,1) - tail of slider is closer to the note than the head
  3. 00:21:305 (4,1,2) - why jump here? keep consistency with 01:33:954 (4,5,6) -
  4. 00:58:765 - new combo? consistency with 00:53:576 -

That's all from me because I don't have experience on Insanes and Extras, Best of Luck bro *-*/
Topic Starter
Frobe

-Sh1n1- wrote:

Hey Frobe~~ how amazing map bro *-*/ ~~

General



  1. Add tags: yooh symphonic schranz

Basic



  1. 00:08:819 - here you should add a note as you did on 00:03:630 (4) -
  2. 00:19:197 - here is the same sound as 00:14:008 (3) - and 00:16:603 (3) - should be Slider for consistency? and at 00:20:170 - should be a note to add more emphasis at high pitch
  3. 00:26:981 (4,1) - improve this blanquet
  4. distance between 00:27:305 (1,2) - is 1.06x, fix this because you are using 1.00
  5. 01:26:981 (1,2) - blanquet can be improved. hmm, i think this blanket haven't problem.
  6. 01:54:224 (1) - This slider it can be confusing for newbies, to avoid problems you can rotate like this

Novice


  1. 00:23:089 (2,1) - unsightly pattern, looks messy, make more playable, maybe like this
  2. 01:25:684 (1,2) - can be better sliders keep it :3
  3. 01:29:900 (1) - move to x:20 y: 260 to fix a better blanquet with 01:28:278 (1) -

Advanced



  1. 00:12:387 (3,4) - mmm good spacing and consistency with next patterns but DD: looks unsightly :( (just my personal opinion, it's up to you)
  2. 01:44:981 (4,1) - tail of slider is closer to the note than the head
  3. 00:21:305 (4,1,2) - why jump here? keep consistency with 01:33:954 (4,5,6) -
  4. 00:58:765 - new combo? consistency with 00:53:576 -

That's all from me because I don't have experience on Insanes and Extras, Best of Luck bro *-*/
i had fixed a not mentioned. thank you and star! ;)
Artavia
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Frobe
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