This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 25 พฤษภาคม 2557 at 12:36:47

Artist: SHK
Title: Identity Part 4
Source: O2Jam U
Tags: IP4 IV Angelfault Chamelo_th
BPM: 140
Filesize: 2910kb
Play Time: 01:55
Difficulties Available:

1. AngelFault's HD - 4Key (3.23 stars, 776 notes)
2. Chamelo's MX - 4Key (4.48 stars, 1071 notes)
3. HD+ - 4Key (3.45 stars, 824 notes)
4. NM - 4Key (2.08 stars, 484 notes)

Download: SHK - Identity Part 4
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st 4K Beatmap! has been ranked~ (1st ranked map :3)
Last Updated : 25/5/2014
Ranked : 26/5/2014

SHK - Identity Part 4
BPM:140
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NM by me
AngelFault's HD by AngelFault
HD+ by me
Chamelo's MX by Chamelo_Th
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Offset and BPM by AngelFault
Overall Hitsound by me and Chamelo_Th
Bubble by PROGUY
Ranked by [Shi-Ra]

Love it !
fun to play :3
Good luck ! Will put KD later :3

Secretpipe wrote:

Love it !
fun to play :3
Good luck ! Will put KD later :3

Thanks

Mod Request

Hi! From queue!

[4k NM]

OD and HD 7

00:03:435 add note
00:12:864 (12864|2,13292|2) - move to 1
00:19:721 (19721|1,20149|1) - move to 1
00:24:007 add note
00:41:149 add note
00:41:792 add note
00:44:578 add note
01:01:292 (61292|2) - move to 4
01:09:114 (69114|1) - delete this
01:10:292 add note

[4K HD]

Ask around for the sv changes. the sv changes is just unrankable sorry if i was unable to help you there.

00:10:721 (10721|1) - move to 1
00:25:078 (25078|2) - move to 1
00:46:292 (46292|3,46399|2,46507|3,46721|0,46828|1,46935|0) - ctrl j
01:30:864 (90864|3) - move to 1
01:39:221 (99221|1,99221|2,99328|2,99328|1) - delete this. this is 1/6

[4K MX]

00:05:149 add note
00:06:568 add note
00:29:042 (29042|1) - delete not needed.
00:30:864 add note
00:32:578 add note
00:34:292 add note
01:01:721 (61721|0,61721|2) - end it on 01:02:149 and delete 01:02:149 (62149|2) -


Goodluck!

YunoFanatic wrote:

Hi! From queue!

[4k NM]

OD and HD 7

00:03:435 add note
00:12:864 (12864|2,13292|2) - move to 1
00:19:721 (19721|1,20149|1) - move to 1
00:24:007 add note
00:41:149 add note
00:41:792 add note
00:44:578 add note
01:01:292 (61292|2) - move to 4
01:09:114 (69114|1) - delete this
01:10:292 add note

[4K HD]

Ask around for the sv changes. the sv changes is just unrankable sorry if i was unable to help you there.

00:10:721 (10721|1) - move to 1
00:25:078 (25078|2) - move to 1
00:46:292 (46292|3,46399|2,46507|3,46721|0,46828|1,46935|0) - ctrl j
01:30:864 (90864|3) - move to 1
01:39:221 (99221|1,99221|2,99328|2,99328|1) - delete this. this is 1/6

[4K MX]

00:05:149 add note
00:06:568 add note
00:29:042 (29042|1) - delete not needed.
00:30:864 add note
00:32:578 add note
00:34:292 add note
01:01:721 (61721|0,61721|2) - end it on 01:02:149 and delete 01:02:149 (62149|2) -


Goodluck!

Thank you so much!

[4K NM]
HP : 7 OD : 8

00:04:721 - add note here
00:05:578 - ^
00:06:435 - ^
00:07:292 - ^
00:08:149 - ^
00:09:007 - ^
00:09:864 - ^
00:12:007 - ^
00:13:721 - add note one more
00:16:292 (16292|0) - delete
00:16:292 (16292|0) - add note
00:16:292 (16292|0) - add note
00:37:507 (37507|0) - move to 2nd i think is better
01:38:149 (98149|2) - move to 1st

[4K HD]
00:06:428 - add note
00:09:864 - add note
00:24:007 - 00:24:328 - 00:24:649 - 00:25:078 - add one more note
00:28:935 ~ 00:29:792 - same as ^ if you use 1/4 , add note at redline.
00:51:435 (51435|2) - delete this
00:51:435 (51435|2,68578|2,68578|1) - delete one of these
01:10:292 - 01:10:614 - 01:10:935 - 01:11:364 - add note here
01:39:435 (99435|2,99435|0,99435|1) - delete one of these
01:51:435 (111435|2,111435|3,111435|0,111435|1) - delete one of these

That's all for this time

I can't mod MX . sry

I'll mod AngelFault HD later.. i have to school.

Good luck!

Yuutosan wrote:

[4K NM]
HP : 7 OD : 8

00:04:721 - add note here
00:05:578 - ^
00:06:435 - ^
00:07:292 - ^
00:08:149 - ^
00:09:007 - ^
00:09:864 - ^
00:12:007 - ^
00:13:721 - add note one more
00:16:292 (16292|0) - delete
00:16:292 (16292|0) - add note
00:16:292 (16292|0) - add note
00:37:507 (37507|0) - move to 2nd i think is better
01:38:149 (98149|2) - move to 1st

[4K HD]
00:06:428 - add note
00:09:864 - add note
00:24:007 - 00:24:328 - 00:24:649 - 00:25:078 - add one more note
00:28:935 ~ 00:29:792 - same as ^ if you use 1/4 , add note at redline.
00:51:435 (51435|2) - delete this
00:51:435 (51435|2,68578|2,68578|1) - delete one of these
01:10:292 - 01:10:614 - 01:10:935 - 01:11:364 - add note here
01:39:435 (99435|2,99435|0,99435|1) - delete one of these
01:51:435 (111435|2,111435|3,111435|0,111435|1) - delete one of these

That's all for this time

I can't mod MX . sry

I'll mod AngelFault HD later.. i have to school.

Good luck!

Thanks Yuutosan

Hope thie will be rank~like SHK
Remember AngelFault HD--->AngelFault's 4K HD

Simple_Star wrote:

Hope thie will be rank~like SHK
Remember AngelFault HD--->AngelFault's 4K HD

. . .

ตอนเอาดิฟให้น่าจะโพสต์ลงตรงนี่เนาะ จะได้เอาkudosu ให้ด้วย - -
ไม่คิดว่าจะเอาแรงค์ด้วย นึกว่าทำเล่นๆซะอีก

AngelFault wrote:

ตอนเอาดิฟให้น่าจะโพสต์ลงตรงนี่เนาะ จะได้เอาkudosu ให้ด้วย - -
ไม่คิดว่าจะเอาแรงค์ด้วย นึกว่าทำเล่นๆซะอีก

ทำใจ 5555+

[4K MX]
- not fond of the SV changes personally, I feel like they're quite unnecessary
- a lot of the stream in this map doesn't really follow anything present in the background, it's overmapped quite a bit
- SV changes don't really go to anything special in the music
- 00:04:721 (4721|3,4721|0), 00:05:149 (5149|3,5149|0), 00:05:578 (5578|3,5578|0) - what do these doubles follow?
- 00:06:542 (6542|0,6542|2) - this double is out of place
- 00:10:292 (10292|3,10292|0) - it would be more interesting if you followed the melody here rather than using a stream, especially because your stream patterns use a lot of snaking/staircases (1234321 or some variant)
- 00:10:721 (10721|3) - regardless of whether or not you change to stream, add note to make double for percussion/clap
- 00:24:007 (24007|2,24007|0,24007|3) - a stream would be more appropriate here because there is a running hi-hat that goes every 1/4 beat
- 00:27:221 (27221|2,27435|1,27435|0,27435|3) - why is there a triple here and nowhere else before?
- 00:30:864 (30864|3,30864|0) to 00:36:864 (36864|3,36864|0) - pitch relevancy could be drastically improved
- 00:44:578 (44578|2,44578|0) - more areas where pitch relevancy can be improved
- 00:54:864 (54864|0) - another area where the stream seems overdone; there are more interesting things going on that can be represented without stream
- 00:55:292 (55292|1) - missing note; make a double
- 00:55:399 and 01:01:399 - what are these gaps?
- 01:04:185 (64185|0) - missing note; make a double
- 01:17:149 (77149|0,77149|3) - pitch relevancy, etc
- 01:21:649 (81649|2) - missing note; make a double
- 01:23:364 - fill this gap in
- 01:36:007 (96007|3,96007|0) - fix the doubles here, they should be every 1/1, not every 3/4
- 01:44:899 (104899|0) - fill gap; also, from this point on, your jumps become wildly inconsistent to the point where it's difficult to understand what's going on -- take some time to listen to the song in detail and fix accordingly
- even with these fixes, I feel like the map should be restructured a bit because it is quite redundant for a high-level player

[4K HD]
- SV changes don't work too well here, honestly
- 00:10:828 (10828|2), 00:11:685 (11685|1), 00:12:542 (12542|1,13399|1,14257|2,15114|2,15971|1,16828|1), ETC - remove notes, they don't follow the melody - this goes on for a bit
- 00:24:007 (24007|0,24328|0,24649|3,25078|2) - remove these notes, since the rest of this section uses single LNs
- 00:28:935 (28935|3) - ^
- 01:13:721 (73721|1) - if you're going to use doubles, do it all the way through for consistency; I personally think it would be better if you only used doubles when the melody plays on top of those loud bangs
- 01:32:471 (92471|0) - abrupt gap, could use a note
- 01:35:471 (95471|0) - ^
- 01:39:221 (99221|0) - missing notes for the melody?
- 01:44:899 (104899|1,104899|0,105542|2,105542|1,105864|2,105864|1,106078|1,106078|2,106399|2,106399|1,106721|1,106721|2,106935|2,106935|1) - these doubles make the very end of this map substantially harder than the rest coupled with the fact that this is also the longest stream, you probably should remove these on that sole fact alone
- 01:51:007 (111007|0,111007|3) - seems a bit out of place

[AngelFault's HD]
- 00:10:828 (10828|2), 00:11:685 (11685|1), 00:12:542 (12542|1,13399|1,14257|2,15114|2,15971|1,16828|1), ETC - remove notes, they don't follow the melody - this goes on for a bit
- other than that, not much else to say

[4K NM]
- 00:25:721 (25721|3,25721|0) - not sure what these doubles follow compared to the parts that have single notes; why are they three beats apart instead of 4?
- 00:30:864 (30864|3,30864|0) - too much like the HD charts, tone this down to 1/2 notes to separate the difficulty a bit more
- 00:37:721 (37721|3,37721|0) - see 25.721
- 00:44:578 (44578|0,44578|3) - see 30.864
- 01:10:721 (70721|3) - move up 1/4
- 01:17:149 (77149|3,77149|0) - see 25.721/30.864
- 01:27:435 (87435|3,87435|0) - check the doubles again
- 01:36:007 (96007|3) - cut to 1/2 to separate from HD
- 01:38:149 (98149|1,98149|0) - move up 1/4
- 01:44:578 (104578|3,104578|2) - cut to 1/2 to separate from HD
- this is just a minimal list for now, there's a lot more that can be done to make this chart easier while still being relevant to the music

(also, I would not at all mind helping with a guest difficulty if need be)

don't mods MX now
i have to change something with it

complete mods it please

maybe i delete MX diff because of some bad SV and note :v

hi~ from queue :3


sorry
I checked all, but there was no problem.

ganbatte~

Hi.

[General]
- Ok

[4K NM]
01:04:292 (64292|3,64507|1) - ctrl + h
01:08:149 (68149|0) - swap this to normal note

[Angel Faults' HD]
00:03:864 - add note to 1 for strong sound (snare)
00:04:721 - add note to 4 ^
00:05:578 - ^
00:06:435 - add note to 3 ^
00:07:292 - add note to 4 ^
00:08:149 - add note to 4 ^
00:09:007 - ^
00:09:864 - ^
00:10:185 (10185|0) - move this to 00:10:078 at 1
01:15:221 - add note
01:16:078 - add note to 4

[HD]
Cool....

00:26:364 - add note
00:28:078 - ^
00:29:792 - ^
00:37:292 (37292|1,37399|2,37507|3) - swap to normal note?
00:42:649 - add note to 2
00:43:507 - ^

Great map.. hope this will be rank soon~

Yuutosan wrote:

Hi.

[General]
- Ok

[4K NM]
01:04:292 (64292|3,64507|1) - ctrl + h
01:08:149 (68149|0) - swap this to normal note

[Angel Faults' HD]
00:03:864 - add note to 1 for strong sound (snare)
00:04:721 - add note to 4 ^
00:05:578 - ^
00:06:435 - add note to 3 ^
00:07:292 - add note to 4 ^
00:08:149 - add note to 4 ^
00:09:007 - ^
00:09:864 - ^
00:10:185 (10185|0) - move this to 00:10:078 at 1
01:15:221 - add note
01:16:078 - add note to 4

[HD]
Cool....

00:26:364 - add note
00:28:078 - ^
00:29:792 - ^
00:37:292 (37292|1,37399|2,37507|3) - swap to normal note?
00:42:649 - add note to 2
00:43:507 - ^

Great map.. hope this will be rank soon~

thank you for your star and mod

Here's my mod ^^

Luckman wrote:

Here's my mod ^^

Yay!!

4K NM
00:17:792 - add note here
00:18:542 - ^
00:21:221 - ^
00:21:971 - ^
00:24:649 - ^
00:28:078 - ^
00:28:828 - ^
00:38:364 - ^
and so on,, there are kick drum sound there..., I suggest you give it a note,, but it will become little harder, so you can Ignore this suggestion If you want
difficulty is relative, each person have their opinion, I don't change anything because of hitsound and i don't want to make it harder sorry

4K HD
I have some pattern suggetion,, you can ignore this if you feel it's bad ^^ I don't want to change your style...
00:05:042 (5042|1) - move to 3
00:05:149 (5149|2) - move to 2
00:05:257 (5257|0) - move to 4
and so on
It based on the lower and higer notes... ^^
OK~ [/spoilerbox]

Thanks for mod

From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue!

Take note that I'm only focusing on note patterns, note placements and note consistency. Not the actual hitsound itself (Just in case if you already implemented hitsounds).

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
      _ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[NM]

[AngelFault's HD]

[HD]

[Overall]
Good map! and nostalgic o2jam music. Thank you for requesting and goodluck

arcwinolivirus wrote:

From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue!

Take note that I'm only focusing on note patterns, note placements and note consistency. Not the actual hitsound itself (Just in case if you already implemented hitsounds).

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!
AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
      _ _ _ _
4K - |1|2|3|4|

[NM]

SPOILER

00:03:864 - add note to 1 since you made the snares 2-noted like 00:04:721 (4721|1,4721|3)
00:06:007 (6007|0,6221|1,6435|2,6435|3) - ctrl H so it wont be duplicate of 00:05:149 (5149|0,5364|1,5578|2,5578|3)
00:23:578 - add note to 1 for the strong sound:cymbals
00:24:007 - ^ to 2
01:08:364 (68364|3) - remove this and..
01:08:149 - add LN to 2 until 01:08:578 for the roll sound.
01:08:578 - add note to 3 for the synth sound.
01:49:721 (109721|1) - remove. Not recommended to have 3-noted in NM and also same strength sound as 01:50:149 (110149|2,110149|3)

[AngelFault's HD]

SPOILER

00:10:828 (10828|1) - remove as it does not have hithat sound. Im not going to check it one by one but Apply this to all similar pattern sounds. Check if there's really an hithat on 1/4 lines. This is also to avoid the repetition of those 3-note stairs.
• I highly suggest to note the main synth only. Without the hithat sound in the mp3.
• and everything seems good already. Only avoid repetion of patterns I suggest.

[HD]

SPOILER

00:24:007 (24007|2) - move to 1 for hand balance.
01:00:864 (60864|0) - is this for the raising sound? it starts at 01:00:649 but I suggest to remove this instead so this pattern can spread out: 01:00:864 (60864|3,60971|2,61078|3,61185|2,61292|1,61292|3)
01:08:578 (68578|3,68578|2) - I suggest to remove these Ln and just make 1 note for the synth sound.
01:16:935 (76935|0) - remove as there is no sound or hithat here
01:51:007 (111007|3) - I suggest to remove this LN as the chime-sound is not consistent anymore and cannot be heard. This is also to spread out the roll note patterns. like 00:51:007 (51007|0,51060|1,51114|2,51167|3,51221|0,51274|1,51328|2,51382|3)

[Overall]
Good map! and nostalgic o2jam music. Thank you for requesting and goodluck

Thank you
maybe i'll fix it tomorrow
it's my bed time now :3

Hello,mod by request

[General]
Title : Identity Part 4 ?
Source : O2Jam
Remove o2jam from tags.

[NM]
00:10:292 to 00:22:292 - Here,uh,sorry,I really don't understand what you catch.
00:24:435 to 00:49:721 - Same
00:54:864 to 01:06:864 - Same
01:18:649 (78649|0) - Remove
01:22:078 (82078|0) - Remove
01:22:935 (82935|0) - Move to 01:22:721
01:23:364 (83364|2) - Move to 01:23:149
01:24:007 to 01:30:864 - I still don't understand what you catch..
01:31:935 (91935|1) - Move to 01:31:721
01:33:649 (93649|1) - Move to 01:33:435
01:35:364 (95364|1) - Move to 01:35:149
01:38:149 to 01:44:578 - Same.
01:45:649 (105649|1) - Move to 01:45:435
01:47:363 (107363|1) - Move to 01:47:149
01:49:078 (109078|2) - Move to 01:48:864

[AngelFault's HD]
Start from 00:10:292 to 00:22:292 - Reset your hitsounds here,feel weird while playing
00:24:007 (24007|3) - End on 00:24:435
00:24:328 (24328|1) - Start from 00:24:435
00:25:721 (25721|3) - End on 00:26:149
00:26:042 (26042|1) - Start from 00:26:149
Start from 00:30:864 to 00:37:292 - Reset your all hitsounds.
00:37:721 (37721|3) - End on 00:38:149
00:38:042 (38042|1) - Start from 00:38:149
00:39:435 (39435|3) - End on 00:39:864
00:39:757 (39757|1) - Start from 00:39:864
Start from 00:44:578 to 00:49:721 - Reset your all hitsounds.
00:51:435 - Add a note
00:52:292 - Add a note
00:53:149 - Add a note
00:53:578 - Add a note
00:54:007 - Add a note
00:54:435 - Add a note
Others are still same problem

Hope these are helpful.

Spy wrote:

Hello,mod by request

[General]
Title : Identity Part 4 ?
Source : O2Jam
Remove o2jam from tags.

[NM]
00:10:292 to 00:22:292 - Here,uh,sorry,I really don't understand what you catch.
00:24:435 to 00:49:721 - Same
00:54:864 to 01:06:864 - Same
01:18:649 (78649|0) - Remove
01:22:078 (82078|0) - Remove
01:22:935 (82935|0) - Move to 01:22:721
01:23:364 (83364|2) - Move to 01:23:149
01:24:007 to 01:30:864 - I still don't understand what you catch..
01:31:935 (91935|1) - Move to 01:31:721
01:33:649 (93649|1) - Move to 01:33:435
01:35:364 (95364|1) - Move to 01:35:149
01:38:149 to 01:44:578 - Same.
01:45:649 (105649|1) - Move to 01:45:435
01:47:363 (107363|1) - Move to 01:47:149
01:49:078 (109078|2) - Move to 01:48:864 lol don't you hear crap sound and drum sound. . .?

[AngelFault's HD]
Start from 00:10:292 to 00:22:292 - Reset your hitsounds here,feel weird while playing I. . .just. . .do Arcwin mod. . .
00:24:007 (24007|3) - End on 00:24:435 Good Idea~. . .
00:24:328 (24328|1) - Start from 00:24:435 ^
00:25:721 (25721|3) - End on 00:26:149 ^
00:26:042 (26042|1) - Start from 00:26:149 ^
Start from 00:30:864 to 00:37:292 - Reset your all hitsounds. the same. . .cause Arcwin mod. . .
00:37:721 (37721|3) - End on 00:38:149 OK~. . .
00:38:042 (38042|1) - Start from 00:38:149 ^
00:39:435 (39435|3) - End on 00:39:864 ^
00:39:757 (39757|1) - Start from 00:39:864 ^
Start from 00:44:578 to 00:49:721 - Reset your all hitsounds. the. . .same. . .
00:51:435 - Add a note I choose. . .to. . .move instead. . .of. . .add note
00:52:292 - Add a note ^
00:53:149 - Add a note
00:53:578 - Add a note ^
00:54:007 - Add a note
00:54:435 - Add a note ^
Others are still same problem

Hope these are helpful.

Thank you
Your mod is good
I have change something to my HD diff too!
and it really better

hi V1A2
mod

[NM]
00:05:578 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1486673

two HD done perfectly
Star
Good luck

Alright!
maybe it ready

This map haven't MX?

Simple_Star wrote:

This map haven't MX?

lol
MX is not ready and not good so i delete it
sorry. . .
But i use some pattern of MX to my HD diff

เสร็จแล้วนะครัช :v

http://puu.sh/7YfaQ.osu
Chamelo's MX

หลังๆนี่ OP กันหน่อย lol
//สงสัยได้แก้บาน - 0-

Chamelo_Th wrote:

เสร็จแล้วนะครัช :v

http://puu.sh/7YfaQ.osu
Chamelo's MX

หลังๆนี่ OP กันหน่อย lol
//สงสัยได้แก้บาน - 0-

โอเค เพิ่มดิฟ

add diff. Chamelo's MX

Hi~! Mods for your chart \o/

[General]

Fine.

[NM]

00:49:721 (49721|3,50363|0) - These ln's have the wrong placement. I suggest: 00:49:721 (49721|3) - end it on 00:50:578 and 00:50:363 (50363|0) - start at 00:50:578 according to the sound. this placements will give the sound more cover listen to it.

01:09:864 (69864|3,69971|2,70078|1,70185|0) - I dont suggest 1/4 in NM but, ok

01:36:649 (96649|2) - Wrong placement. I suggest to 01:36:864 (96864|3) - delete this note then 01:36:649 (96649|2) - start this to 01:36:864 . because that part starts another sound not on 01:36:864

01:49:721 (109721|0,110364|1) - ^ Wrong placement again. I suggest 01:50:578 (110578|0) - move this note to 4 , 01:49:721 (109721|0) - end this on 01:50:578 and start 01:50:364 (110364|1) - at 01:50:578 so it follows the sound better.

[Angelfault's HD]

00:15:007 (15007|2) - I suggest you to move this to 3 for the composition of pattern because 00:15:221 (15221|2) - its not good to stack the note with this note.

00:58:721 (58721|2,58935|2,59149|2) - These jacks doesnt fit to the song very good. i suggest to change the pattern.

01:22:292 (82292|0) - I suggest you to add another note here because the sound is way to deep for 1 note.

[HD]

00:03:435 (3435|3,3435|1,3435|0) - Dont you think triple is too high enough? . I suggest to delete one of these notes. to balance the sound cause its not too deep enough.

00:32:792 (32792|1) - Wrong hitsound i guess.

00:46:507 (46507|1) - ^ Hmmm if this is intentional i can say it doesnt fit, its very odd tho.

01:02:364 (62364|0) - I dont hear/see what this follows, I suggest you to delete it.

[MX]

00:04:935 (4935|1) - I dont quite see the purpose of this ln, Maybe i suggest you to delete it, some notes will be odd if you followed no sounds.

00:10:721 - 00:11:792 these patterns dont make sense enough. it doesnt follow the rhytmn like in hd. i suggest you to redo this section and listen to the sound more.

00:48:328 (48328|0,48435|0) - I dont like the stack between these two, i suggest you to change the note's column so it will give more ideal pattern. like 00:48:328 (48328|0) - move it to 2 so the transition between 00:48:328 (48328|0,48435|3) - is good.

01:11:899 (71899|0,71899|2) - Double notes for a 1/4? thats quite rare. but my opinion only is do not use doubles on a stream. it might get a little confusing.

01:17:471 (77471|0) - I suggest you to move this note to 2 so the pattern can be neat aswell. ( i dont like the stack between this note and the ln)


Goodluck!

YunoFanatic wrote:

Hi~! Mods for your chart \o/

[General]

Fine.

[NM]

00:49:721 (49721|3,50363|0) - These ln's have the wrong placement. I suggest: 00:49:721 (49721|3) - end it on 00:50:578 and 00:50:363 (50363|0) - start at 00:50:578 according to the sound. this placements will give the sound more cover listen to it.

01:09:864 (69864|3,69971|2,70078|1,70185|0) - I dont suggest 1/4 in NM but, ok

01:36:649 (96649|2) - Wrong placement. I suggest to 01:36:864 (96864|3) - delete this note then 01:36:649 (96649|2) - start this to 01:36:864 . because that part starts another sound not on 01:36:864

01:49:721 (109721|0,110364|1) - ^ Wrong placement again. I suggest 01:50:578 (110578|0) - move this note to 4 , 01:49:721 (109721|0) - end this on 01:50:578 and start 01:50:364 (110364|1) - at 01:50:578 so it follows the sound better.

[Angelfault's HD]

00:15:007 (15007|2) - I suggest you to move this to 3 for the composition of pattern because 00:15:221 (15221|2) - its not good to stack the note with this note.

00:58:721 (58721|2,58935|2,59149|2) - These jacks doesnt fit to the song very good. i suggest to change the pattern.

01:22:292 (82292|0) - I suggest you to add another note here because the sound is way to deep for 1 note.

[HD]

00:03:435 (3435|3,3435|1,3435|0) - Dont you think triple is too high enough? . I suggest to delete one of these notes. to balance the sound cause its not too deep enough.

00:32:792 (32792|1) - Wrong hitsound i guess.

00:46:507 (46507|1) - ^ Hmmm if this is intentional i can say it doesnt fit, its very odd tho.

01:02:364 (62364|0) - I dont hear/see what this follows, I suggest you to delete it.

[MX]

00:04:935 (4935|1) - I dont quite see the purpose of this ln, Maybe i suggest you to delete it, some notes will be odd if you followed no sounds.

00:10:721 - 00:11:792 these patterns dont make sense enough. it doesnt follow the rhytmn like in hd. i suggest you to redo this section and listen to the sound more.

00:48:328 (48328|0,48435|0) - I dont like the stack between these two, i suggest you to change the note's column so it will give more ideal pattern. like 00:48:328 (48328|0) - move it to 2 so the transition between 00:48:328 (48328|0,48435|3) - is good.

01:11:899 (71899|0,71899|2) - Double notes for a 1/4? thats quite rare. but my opinion only is do not use doubles on a stream. it might get a little confusing.

01:17:471 (77471|0) - I suggest you to move this note to 2 so the pattern can be neat aswell. ( i dont like the stack between this note and the ln)


Goodluck!

Thank you

I'm currently at school

fix soon this evening.

Chamelo_Th wrote:

I'm currently at school

fix soon this evening.

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