[4K MX]
- not fond of the SV changes personally, I feel like they're quite unnecessary
- a lot of the stream in this map doesn't really follow anything present in the background, it's overmapped quite a bit
- SV changes don't really go to anything special in the music
- 00:04:721 (4721|3,4721|0), 00:05:149 (5149|3,5149|0), 00:05:578 (5578|3,5578|0) - what do these doubles follow?
- 00:06:542 (6542|0,6542|2) - this double is out of place
- 00:10:292 (10292|3,10292|0) - it would be more interesting if you followed the melody here rather than using a stream, especially because your stream patterns use a lot of snaking/staircases (1234321 or some variant)
- 00:10:721 (10721|3) - regardless of whether or not you change to stream, add note to make double for percussion/clap
- 00:24:007 (24007|2,24007|0,24007|3) - a stream would be more appropriate here because there is a running hi-hat that goes every 1/4 beat
- 00:27:221 (27221|2,27435|1,27435|0,27435|3) - why is there a triple here and nowhere else before?
- 00:30:864 (30864|3,30864|0) to 00:36:864 (36864|3,36864|0) - pitch relevancy could be drastically improved
- 00:44:578 (44578|2,44578|0) - more areas where pitch relevancy can be improved
- 00:54:864 (54864|0) - another area where the stream seems overdone; there are more interesting things going on that can be represented without stream
- 00:55:292 (55292|1) - missing note; make a double
- 00:55:399 and 01:01:399 - what are these gaps?
- 01:04:185 (64185|0) - missing note; make a double
- 01:17:149 (77149|0,77149|3) - pitch relevancy, etc
- 01:21:649 (81649|2) - missing note; make a double
- 01:23:364 - fill this gap in
- 01:36:007 (96007|3,96007|0) - fix the doubles here, they should be every 1/1, not every 3/4
- 01:44:899 (104899|0) - fill gap; also, from this point on, your jumps become wildly inconsistent to the point where it's difficult to understand what's going on -- take some time to listen to the song in detail and fix accordingly
- even with these fixes, I feel like the map should be restructured a bit because it is quite redundant for a high-level player
[4K HD]
- SV changes don't work too well here, honestly
- 00:10:828 (10828|2), 00:11:685 (11685|1), 00:12:542 (12542|1,13399|1,14257|2,15114|2,15971|1,16828|1), ETC - remove notes, they don't follow the melody - this goes on for a bit
- 00:24:007 (24007|0,24328|0,24649|3,25078|2) - remove these notes, since the rest of this section uses single LNs
- 00:28:935 (28935|3) - ^
- 01:13:721 (73721|1) - if you're going to use doubles, do it all the way through for consistency; I personally think it would be better if you only used doubles when the melody plays on top of those loud bangs
- 01:32:471 (92471|0) - abrupt gap, could use a note
- 01:35:471 (95471|0) - ^
- 01:39:221 (99221|0) - missing notes for the melody?
- 01:44:899 (104899|1,104899|0,105542|2,105542|1,105864|2,105864|1,106078|1,106078|2,106399|2,106399|1,106721|1,106721|2,106935|2,106935|1) - these doubles make the very end of this map substantially harder than the rest coupled with the fact that this is also the longest stream, you probably should remove these on that sole fact alone
- 01:51:007 (111007|0,111007|3) - seems a bit out of place
[AngelFault's HD]
- 00:10:828 (10828|2), 00:11:685 (11685|1), 00:12:542 (12542|1,13399|1,14257|2,15114|2,15971|1,16828|1), ETC - remove notes, they don't follow the melody - this goes on for a bit
- other than that, not much else to say
[4K NM]
- 00:25:721 (25721|3,25721|0) - not sure what these doubles follow compared to the parts that have single notes; why are they three beats apart instead of 4?
- 00:30:864 (30864|3,30864|0) - too much like the HD charts, tone this down to 1/2 notes to separate the difficulty a bit more
- 00:37:721 (37721|3,37721|0) - see 25.721
- 00:44:578 (44578|0,44578|3) - see 30.864
- 01:10:721 (70721|3) - move up 1/4
- 01:17:149 (77149|3,77149|0) - see 25.721/30.864
- 01:27:435 (87435|3,87435|0) - check the doubles again
- 01:36:007 (96007|3) - cut to 1/2 to separate from HD
- 01:38:149 (98149|1,98149|0) - move up 1/4
- 01:44:578 (104578|3,104578|2) - cut to 1/2 to separate from HD
- this is just a minimal list for now, there's a lot more that can be done to make this chart easier while still being relevant to the music
(also, I would not at all mind helping with a guest difficulty if need be)
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