1. Lv.10 - 4Key (3.73 stars, 662 notes)
2. Lv.13 - 4Key (5 stars, 973 notes)
3. Lv.6 - 4Key (1.85 stars, 328 notes)

Luyuja wrote:

LV13
00:05:218 - 换成232的排列
00:20:870 - 这种楼梯加速好点吧

xxbidiao wrote:

Playtime: 00:13 -简直吊炸天

For Lv13，
有些小的细节建议～
00:27:555 (27555|2,27637|1,27718|3,27718|2) - 不知是你刻意的1/4点后条呢还是为了把那些音一定要塞进去不小心搞出来的...建议调整一下。而且这里放个1/4本来就偏向于唐突（音是有的，但抓音不大一致，一会抓了这个，一会抓了那个的感觉），可以考虑干脆Remove 蓝线上的东西，也方便调整。 把鼓点抓齐了
00:32:854 (32854|0) - 这个放col1其实比放col3更加卡手...建议就是搞个3连点凸显一下（毕竟是13级歌），或者就去掉后面那个条子...改2连
00:42:718 (42718|0,42718|3,42718|2,42718|1,42881|0,42881|1,42881|2,42881|3) - 建议这2个4拍改成3拍，或者是之前那两个3拍改成4拍。现在这样也不知道你要强调的是啥 打起来会很迷惑的...gJ
00:46:060 (46060|1) - Move to 4ok
00:57:066 (57066|3,57066|2,57066|0) - 这边几个变速我个人感觉非常之奇怪。。不是说这里变速不好，而是你的SV设定似乎有点小问题...问问纳米姐？我觉的没问题丫
01:01:957 (61957|3,62039|2,62120|1,62202|0) - 之前聊的时候提到过这个段子，的确有点卡手。比较让人迷惑的是01:02:609 (62609|3,62691|2,62772|1,62854|0) - 这里为啥不是对称下呢？（和后面一段一致）orz 改了

总体来说，还可以，只是整个谱子给人一种小生硬的感觉，像是人造梗一样 加油！

richardfeder wrote:

13

00:14:593 (14593|2) - 我觉得没东西fixed

00:17:202 (17202|1) - ^fixed

00:19:973 - ^fixed

00:21:196 (21196|3,21196|1,21196|2,21196|0,21522|0,21522|1,21685|2,21685|1,21848|3,21848|2) - ctrl+Hfixed

00:19:729 - puu.sh/6yOmK.jpgfixed

00:27:637 (27637|1) - 没东西fixed

00:48:751 (48751|1,48832|2) - 这..声音太小了点吧...(还是根本没有)有就好嘛

00:50:381 (50381|1) - addfixed

00:51:196 (51196|2) - add, 00:51:359 (51359|2,51441|3) - ctrl+Jfixed


00:52:582 (52582|0) - move to 00:52:501 (52501|0) - fixed

00:58:941 (58941|2) - 不存在fixed
其实想人性一点可以把01:02:283 (62283|0,62935|3) - 去掉(虽然我觉得还行)我不想去

01:07:093 - 漏音fixed

01:09:376 (69376|1) - 不存在fixed

01:18:343 (78343|1) - ^fixed

01:18:588 (78588|0) - addfixed

01:21:278 (81278|2) - 不存在

fixed

10

00:09:050 (9050|3,9376|1) - 不存在fixed

00:11:903 (11903|0) - http://puu.sh/6yPqj.jpg 哦草煞笔了00:12:066 (12066|0) - 还应该有一个note换了差不多的

00:14:838 (14838|0) - addfixed

00:17:202 (17202|1) - 不存在x

00:19:647 (19647|3) - ^x

00:19:973 (19973|1) - ^
x
00:58:941 (58941|1) - move to 00:58:859 (58859|1) - x换了排列

01:09:376 (69376|2) - ^x换了排列

01:12:229 (72229|3) - add

x换了排列

6

00:16:957 (16957|0) - move to 1ok
wocao too shi >,<

干嘛不直接拿去rank了? 这图这么叼你家里人知道吗?
o/

Edit:我切换到lv.13的时候预览刷新了一次...检查一下? 还有就是如果没看错的话好像有几条重叠的绿线

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Mod by request!

Column | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Lv.6]
00:07:664 (7664|2) - move to 4
00:08:805 (8805|2) - ^
00:12:066 - maybe add a note or 2 notes
00:12:718 (12718|1,13044|2) - Ctrl + H?
00:16:305 (16305|1,16468|2,16631|1,16794|2,16957|1,17120|2) - suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1284224
00:38:479 (38479|2) - move to 2
00:39:457 (39457|1) - move to 4
00:41:088 (41088|0) - move to 2
00:54:131 (54131|0) - ^
01:03:425 (63425|2) - ^
01:03:751 (63751|1) - move 1
01:13:696 (73696|2) - move to 2
01:14:512 (74512|2) - ^

[Lv.10]
HP 8 OD 8? Maybe
00:04:566 (4566|2,4892|3) - Ctrl + J
00:59:348 (59348|2) - move to 4
00:59:512 (59512|3) - move to 2
01:16:142 (76142|3,76223|2) - move to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1284233
01:16:794 (76794|3) - move to 3
01:17:772 (77772|2) - move to 4
Love this diff! Nice \:D/

[Lv.13]
Insane right? Maybe HP 8 OD 8
00:04:892 (4892|2) - move to 2
00:07:012 (7012|3) - ^
00:11:577 (11577|0,11658|1) - Ctrl + J
00:13:370 (13370|1,13533|3) - suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1284239
00:15:979 (15979|3) - move to 1
00:18:588 (18588|2,18751|0) - suggest https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1284242
00:24:620 (24620|1) - move to 3
00:33:425 (33425|1) - move to 1
00:42:229 - suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1284247 ?
00:59:838 (59838|3,60001|1) - Ctrl + J?
01:22:012 (82012|2,82093|1) - suggest http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1284250
Nice map and so kaiwaii song >w<! Good job, victorica_db \:D/ Shoot you a

Spy wrote:

Hello,I'll mod your map as request~

[General]
Source : NO-RIN
Tags : のうりん
Where is your hitsound ?
5% Volume..大丈夫?
KIAI : 01:16:305 - 01:21:522 - I think this is no need
hitsound just you know

[Lv.6]
00:47:609 to 00:48:098 - Heavy beat,add a note again ? i think now is better

[Lv.10]
00:28:044 - Add a note ?yes
00:30:490 - Add a note
00:30:571 - Add a note
{
00:32:772 - Add a note
00:32:854 - Add a note
00:32:935 - Add a note
}
{
00:53:642 - Add a note
00:53:723 - Add a note
I feel here is very ok to add these !} these place i made it easier

[LV.13]
{
01:01:957
01:02:283
01:02:609
01:02:935
01:03:262
01:12:392
01:12:718
01:13:044
01:13:370
01:13:696
Hard SV,is it ok ?
}
This map with nice SV,I like it 爽 >.>

Good luck o/ and

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

Miss one!

Column | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

[Lv.13]
00:14:512 (14512|3) - move to 3 x no change

No kud!

LeiN- wrote:

hi~ mod by request!

Line : 1 2 3 4

[Lv.13]
00:11:740 (11740|3) - move to 3
00:11:821 (11821|2) - move to 4
00:11:903 (11903|3) - move to 3
00:12:718 - add a note (option)ok
00:20:055 (20055|1) - move to 1
00:20:137 (20137|0) - move to 2
00:23:153 - add a note (option)
00:25:762 - ^
00:27:718 (27718|2) - delete
00:32:935 (32935|2) - ^
00:33:751 (33751|0) - move to 3
00:34:566 (34566|1) - move to 4
00:36:522 (36522|0) - move to 2
00:36:685 (36685|1) - move to 1
00:45:816 (45816|2) - delete
00:46:060 (46060|3) - move to 2 (option)
00:48:506 (48506|3) - move to 00:48:588 here
00:49:240 - suggest this pattern http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1287316good idea
00:50:381 (50381|1) - delete ↖
00:51:033 (51033|3) - delete ← accept both or not
01:00:979 (60979|1) - move to 3 (make it similar as previous pattern)
01:07:093 (67093|0) - deleteyes
01:15:653 (75653|3) - move to 3
01:15:734 (75734|2) - move to 4
01:15:816 (75816|3) - move to 3
01:21:604 - add on 3ok
01:21:930 - add on 2ok
01:22:175 - add on 1


[Lv.10]
00:01:305 (1305|1) - move to 1
00:01:794 (1794|3) - move to 3
00:01:957 (1957|2) - move to 4
00:08:316 (8316|0) - move to 2
00:08:397 (8397|1) - move to 00:08:316 here
00:08:316 (8316|0) - move to 00:08:479 here
00:13:044 (13044|1) - move to 4
00:13:207 (13207|2) - move to 2
00:13:370 (13370|1) - move to 1
00:13:370 (13370|3) - move to 3
00:13:533 (13533|0) - move to 2
00:25:762 - add a noteyes
00:40:598 (40598|1) - move to 4
00:48:506 (48506|0) - move to 00:48:588 here
00:52:582 (52582|2) - deletegood idea
01:15:490 - look at 00:11:577 here

I think, you should better to make it more easier

[Lv.6]
00:47:935 (47935|1) - move to 3 (option)
00:53:153 (53153|2,53316|1) - Ctrl + H
00:58:533 - add on 1
01:14:022 (74022|0) - move to 2 (option)
01:16:794 (76794|2) - move to 2
01:17:609 (77609|1) - move to 4
01:18:262 (78262|3) - move to 2


yeah! finished!
Good luck to you

Simple_Star wrote:

Mod by request
[Lv.6]
00:43:044 (43044|1) - Change to Hold,end at 00:43:696 -
00:53:153 (53153|2,53316|1) - 位置对换
01:14:185 (74185|2) - Move to 2 ok

[Lv.10]
HP8
00:16:957 - 去掉1个 这里突出另外一个音
00:17:120 - 去掉1个
01:14:185 (74185|1) - Move to 4

[Lv.13]
HP8 OD8 还是HP7 OD7吧 人性点
00:27:392 (27392|0,27392|1,27718|1,28044|0) - Ctrl+J
00:47:772 (47772|3) - Move to 1
00:47:935 (47935|0) - Move to 4
01:15:327 - Add a Note

找不出什么问题

- R u m i a - wrote:

from mod req
[Generals]
remove this from kiai
Source should be No-Rin , from the original title
remove のうりん,no-rin,nourin from the tags , its already on the source
add light novel to the tags , since its from light novel

[Lv 6]
00:12:066 - add a note
00:17:120 (17120|2) - this hold starts here 00:17:283 , and change the current hold to normal note
00:34:566 (34566|2,34892|2,35218|2) - move this to 4th collumnok
00:34:566 (34566|2,34892|2,35218|2,35544|2) - ^
00:52:175 (52175|0) - end this hold here 00:53:316
01:14:348 - add on 4th collumn
[Lv 10]
00:08:479 to 00:11:088 - its a clean stream so why would you cut itdrum only
00:11:169 (11169|2) - delete , the beat is too low so you should focus more on strong beat for easier diffs ok
00:14:838 (14838|2) - move here 00:14:919
00:15:001 (15001|2) - move to 1st collumn
00:17:120 - like this? http://puu.sh/6E8Pb.jpggood idea
00:21:522 (21522|2,21685|1,21848|0) - i think make double notes instead of hold is better feeling herestill use hold
00:32:772 - add the triplet = 232 don't want add drum here
00:37:175 (37175|0,37501|0,37827|0) - move up on the red lines?this part is better of alternating tho
00:46:060 (46060|1) - delete this . the triplet is kinda ruin the consistencyyeah i catch the drum here don't missing it here
00:48:588 - add a note yes
00:53:805 (53805|3,53805|2) - why don't you bring down these 2 notes make them as triplet from here 00:53:642 i think it is end here . and i want emphsis the sound here so i use the 4notes
01:21:685 - map the drum by 1 note at least , it shloudn't be ignore here i dont map drum here because just because the pattern . if i mapped that drum maybe feel very strange

[Lv 13]
00:08:316 (8316|0) - i dont hear the bass repeats here? maybe can change pattern like this - http://puu.sh/6E83L.jpg
00:08:968 (8968|0) - delete , there is no reason to double notes here .the stairs looks fine too without iti think there is drum Orz
00:09:865 - its strange when all of the part is double notes and this 1 is a single note?maybe add at 1st collumn and 00:09:783 (9783|0) - move to 2nd collumnyes
00:27:473 (27473|3,27555|2) - ctrl + j? the pattern is more cleanok
00:43:207 (43207|2) - i think this hold starts here? 00:43:044
00:44:022 - add a note
00:48:506 (48506|3) - move to 00:48:588
00:50:137 - add a note , dont kill the stream herebut i don't here it here
00:58:941 - add a note on 2nd
01:14:593 (74593|2,74675|3,74756|2,74838|1,74919|0,75001|1) - this part i'm not sure i heard streams here? it sounded like 1/2 beat
01:21:930 (81930|1) - delete , no sound
01:22:175 - add a note