Tomato n' Pine - Nanairo*Namida -TV EDIT-

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10crystalmask01
Hey, mod from queue 8-)

Insane


00:03:086 (1) - Nazi suggestion (sorry!) move the middle anchor point to 316:172 to ensure a perfect blanket.

00:08:519 (2,3,4) - Looks like a confusing stack,because each note is spaced out differently with the other one. 00:08:519 (2,3) - is a full 1 beat apart, but 00:08:992 (3,4) - is spaced out only 1/2 a beat apart. This could trick players (especially if they're using HD) into thinking that 00:08:992 (3,4) - is also 1 beat apart.

One way to fix is is to unstack 00:08:519 (2) - . Why not place it under 00:07:811 (1) - 's tail instead?

00:13:480 (4,1) - This sort of pattern doesn't quite fit here, because 00:13:480 (4) - 's tail is hitting an empty beat. Might as well extend 00:13:953's tail to 00:13:953.

00:20:094 (3) - Hmm interesting. Try adding a drum clap on the head to match that funny beat heard here.

249's Hard


00:03:795 (1,2) - Try swapping their timing spots. With the slider starting at 00:03:795 now, it will run smoothly with the vocals long hold on the "rai" in morai.

00:34:976 (2,3) - ^ Same suggestion as above. Slider on 00:34:976 can follow smoothly with the "ra" in arashi.

01:11:827 (5,1) - ^ Same suggestion as above. With the slider on 01:11:827, it can follow with the vocals "ki" in nakikuzuresouna.

01:14:189 (2,3,4) - Kinda can tell that your following vocals because of the triplets here, each hitting the "Ki-mi no"

01:17:260 (3,1) - Swap objects timing points. With the slider on 01:17:496, it will follow more smoothly with the vocals long hold on the "bu" in Daijoubu.

01:19:622 (1) - Sounds awkward here, because it completely runs over the strong words "ii" in iinda. One way to fix this is to swap 01:19:386 (6,1) - 's timing points. With the slider starting at 01:19:386 now, not only does its tail hit the strong word "ii", but the sldier itself will run through matching the vocals long hold on the "te" in naitete.

Normal


Circle size -1 looks better imo, but that's up to you.

00:15:370 (5) - NC because it starts in a new rhythm cycle (on the big white tick mark).

00:51:275 (1) - Forgot to add a finish on the head here.

01:23:401 (1,2,3) - unstack, it's funny how this is the only spot you decided to stack the notes, rather then have them lined up based on their DS.

Easy


00:51:275 (1) - Forgot to add a finish on the head here.

Good luck!
YTYuyu

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, mod from queue 8-)

249's Hard


00:03:795 (1,2) - Try swapping their timing spots. With the slider starting at 00:03:795 now, it will run smoothly with the vocals long hold on the "rai" in morai. no the idea here is to follow the BGM 1st, and then follow it up with the vocals. it'll play awkwardly for me during gameplay.

00:34:976 (2,3) - ^ Same suggestion as above. Slider on 00:34:976 can follow smoothly with the "ra" in arashi. ^

01:11:827 (5,1) - ^ Same suggestion as above. With the slider on 01:11:827, it can follow with the vocals "ki" in nakikuzuresouna. ^

01:14:189 (2,3,4) - Kinda can tell that your following vocals because of the triplets here, each hitting the "Ki-mi no"yup exactly.

01:17:260 (3,1) - Swap objects timing points. With the slider on 01:17:496, it will follow more smoothly with the vocals long hold on the "bu" in Daijoubu. same reply as 00:03:795.

01:19:622 (1) - Sounds awkward here, because it completely runs over the strong words "ii" in iinda. One way to fix this is to swap 01:19:386 (6,1) - 's timing points. With the slider starting at 01:19:386 now, not only does its tail hit the strong word "ii", but the sldier itself will run through matching the vocals long hold on the "te" in naitete. that's not what i'm aiming for. the idea here is for (4) to act as a setup to the piano, and (1) to basically follow it up. following the vocals would ruin that purpose, and it'll flow awkwardly during gameplay like i said before.

Good luck!
sorry no changes made but ty for the mod. the only thing i changed are the combo colors ><.

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: nanaironamida.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1000
PreviewTime: 54090
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Nanairo*Namida (TV size)
TitleUnicode:Nanairo*Namida (TV size)
Artist:Tomato n' Pine
ArtistUnicode:Tomato n' Pine
Creator:LexiaLovesU
Version:249's Hard
Source:Beelzebub
Tags:ed tui hina wada hiruda azusa onepiece314 byakugan249
BeatmapID:359077
BeatmapSetID:144599

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
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Topic Starter
LexiaLovesU

10crystalmask01 wrote:

Hey, mod from queue 8-)

Insane


00:03:086 (1) - Nazi suggestion (sorry!) move the middle anchor point to 316:172 to ensure a perfect blanket.
Done owo
00:08:519 (2,3,4) - Looks like a confusing stack,because each note is spaced out differently with the other one. 00:08:519 (2,3) - is a full 1 beat apart, but 00:08:992 (3,4) - is spaced out only 1/2 a beat apart. This could trick players (especially if they're using HD) into thinking that 00:08:992 (3,4) - is also 1 beat apart.

One way to fix is is to unstack 00:08:519 (2) - . Why not place it under 00:07:811 (1) - 's tail instead?
I made it an anti jump instead i feel like it is a Anti since of the lack of music inbetween the notes ;w;

00:13:480 (4,1) - This sort of pattern doesn't quite fit here, because 00:13:480 (4) - 's tail is hitting an empty beat. Might as well extend 00:13:953's tail to 00:13:953.
Done

00:20:094 (3) - Hmm interesting. Try adding a drum clap on the head to match that funny beat heard here.
Done owo.

Normal


Circle size -1 looks better imo, but that's up to you.
Did it. it does look better >w<

00:15:370 (5) - NC because it starts in a new rhythm cycle (on the big white tick mark).
Done owo
00:51:275 (1) - Forgot to add a finish on the head here.
Done
01:23:401 (1,2,3) - unstack, it's funny how this is the only spot you decided to stack the notes, rather then have them lined up based on their DS.
Done owo

Easy


00:51:275 (1) - Forgot to add a finish on the head here.
opps XD
Good luck!
Thanks for modding :D
Tari
I really enjoy this song, will mod when i can
Topic Starter
LexiaLovesU

Tari wrote:

I really enjoy this song, will mod when i can
yay :D
Tari
[Insane]

  1. 00:15:370 (1) - Really should delete the notes, hopefully you put anti-jumps because you wanted to skip the instrumental beats and use anti-jumps to emphasize the vocals, and right now a anti-jump for this part is best, so please try to remove it. feels really awkward to play D: it should be the same as 00:04:267 (5) - because after playing that I thought there wasn't a note here D:
  2. 00:07:811 (1) - Maybe no need for finish here? it sounds really noisy and unfitting with the music. the sound really stands out!
  3. 00:31:197 (3) - Move this note somewhere else? while playing I notice that the movement is not smooth and very hard to reach at its current position, but if you move it like this : http://puu.sh/8eADz.jpg
  4. 00:30:016 (3) - Move it slightly to the left, its a little bit too much pushed to the right and yet again harder tor reach. http://puu.sh/8eACH.jpg
  5. 00:24:346 (4,5,6) - Tbh, this feels better as a 5 circle stream. http://puu.sh/8eALc.jpg
  6. 00:39:937 - A SV change works great here, i don't understand why you didn't do it XD
  7. 00:48:441 (5,6,7) - I don't think this rhythm is a good idea, it's so tricky to follow and doesn't really follow anything.
  8. 00:50:094 (4) - This note is a bit curved up, move it down so it can be straight?
  9. 00:56:000 (4,5) - Why can't remove 5 and extend 4 to white tick? this song isn't fast enough to allow the usage of 3/4 which is usually only used for AR9 mapping.
  10. 01:02:142 (6,7) - Noiiiiisy claps orz, remove some T_T
  11. 01:04:031 (5) - The end of the slider, check the stacking because it's not stacked perfectly.
  12. 01:04:504 (1) - The note is too close! spread it apart and change the next note too, like this : http://puu.sh/8eBbr.jpg
  13. 01:09:464 (5) - New combo here?
  14. 01:19:504 - Add a note here? be consistent with 01:17:614 (7) -


[Hard]

  1. 00:31:197 (2) - Put at the same place as 00:29:307 (2) - I can clearly see that overlap.
  2. 00:39:937 (1,2,3,4) - This is not the best transition to the easy part, all a sudden there is a sudden surge of circles for it, which doesn't make sense because of the calm part of the song, that being said I think you should change both to sliders. two 1/4
  3. 00:56:000 (3) - The blanket can be better here, right now it's a bit messy, are you using bezier slider?
  4. 01:14:189 (2,3,4) - Put it in a center and make sure 2 and 4 are in the same y-axis for some symmetry here.
  5. 01:17:496 (4) - Add a whistle?
  6. 01:24:346 (4,5) - Do a reverse slider rhythm here? http://puu.sh/8eBMp.jpg


[Easy]

  1. 00:35:212 (4) - The slider here is a bit too curvy, just move the middle point down a little and I think that should fix it.
  2. 00:53:165 (3) - Add a whistle to the start of the slider.
  3. 01:19:622 (3) - Not alligned well, need to move this whole slider to the left a little bit and move the next note to the left more also to fix the spacing.
  4. 01:24:346 (5) - New combo and add a whistle to the start?
  5. Awesome diff!


[Normal]

  1. 00:04:031 (4) - Add a whistle to the start?
  2. 00:14:897 (3,4) - I think using a slider is better here, since you have choice to follow instruments or vocals.
  3. 00:35:685 (4,5,1) - Make the two circles lead to the next note, by placing it in a straight direction : http://puu.sh/8eC79.jpg
  4. 01:02:142 (5,6,1) - ^ http://puu.sh/8eCdH.jpg
  5. 00:52:220 (2,3) - Whistle to the start of either slider should be added. but start of 2 is better
  6. 01:16:551 (5) - Add a whistle?
  7. 01:23:401 (1,2,3,4) - A little overmapped, how about try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/8eCiO.jpg


Easier diffs (Easy and Normal) are very nice! great job and insane is good enough, and should be fine after some more mods :3
Topic Starter
LexiaLovesU

Tari wrote:

[Insane]

  1. 00:15:370 (1) - Really should delete the notes, hopefully you put anti-jumps because you wanted to skip the instrumental beats and use anti-jumps to emphasize the vocals, and right now a anti-jump for this part is best, so please try to remove it. feels really awkward to play D: it should be the same as 00:04:267 (5) - because after playing that I thought there wasn't a note here D: yeah i agree right there i put that note their because of the very promient Instrument that made a new phase of music. but i guess it probably better to keep consistency in my anti jumps and give less confusion owo
  2. 00:07:811 (1) - Maybe no need for finish here? it sounds really noisy and unfitting with the music. the sound really stands out! agreed
  3. 00:31:197 (3) - Move this note somewhere else? while playing I notice that the movement is not smooth and very hard to reach at its current position, but if you move it like this : http://puu.sh/8eADz.jpg Done i understand changed owo sorry i have some weird preferences since im a TabletPC player xD
  4. 00:30:016 (3) - Move it slightly to the left, its a little bit too much pushed to the right and yet again harder tor reach. http://puu.sh/8eACH.jpg Okie owo
  5. 00:24:346 (4,5,6) - Tbh, this feels better as a 5 circle stream. http://puu.sh/8eALc.jpg Done owo
  6. 00:39:937 - A SV change works great here, i don't understand why you didn't do it XD I really wanted to ephmsasis 00:51:275 (1) since this is much more of a slower part so i really wanted to make this more stood out owo xD
  7. 00:48:441 (5,6,7) - I don't think this rhythm is a good idea, it's so tricky to follow and doesn't really follow anything. Its follows her vocals but if i get more suggestions about this ill change ><
  8. 00:50:094 (4) - This note is a bit curved up, move it down so it can be straight? I think i did it >~<
  9. 00:56:000 (4,5) - Why can't remove 5 and extend 4 to white tick? this song isn't fast enough to allow the usage of 3/4 which is usually only used for AR9 mapping. Donesies owo
  10. 01:02:142 (6,7) - Noiiiiisy claps orz, remove some T_T i removed the 1/4 claps owo
  11. 01:04:031 (5) - The end of the slider, check the stacking because it's not stacked perfectly. Done owo
  12. 01:04:504 (1) - The note is too close! spread it apart and change the next note too, like this : http://puu.sh/8eBbr.jpg Done owo
  13. 01:09:464 (5) - New combo here? Okie oops :oops:
  14. 01:19:504 - Add a note here? be consistent with 01:17:614 (7) - Done owo


[Easy]

  1. 00:35:212 (4) - The slider here is a bit too curvy, just move the middle point down a little and I think that should fix it.
  2. 00:53:165 (3) - Add a whistle to the start of the slider.
  3. 01:19:622 (3) - Not alligned well, need to move this whole slider to the left a little bit and move the next note to the left more also to fix the spacing.
  4. 01:24:346 (5) - New combo and add a whistle to the start?
  5. Awesome diff! Thanks :D Lots of people think my easys are the best out of my mapsets XD

Done all owo
[Normal]

  1. 00:04:031 (4) - Add a whistle to the start?
  2. 00:14:897 (3,4) - I think using a slider is better here, since you have choice to follow instruments or vocals.
  3. 00:35:685 (4,5,1) - Make the two circles lead to the next note, by placing it in a straight direction : http://puu.sh/8eC79.jpg
  4. 01:02:142 (5,6,1) - ^ http://puu.sh/8eCdH.jpg
  5. 00:52:220 (2,3) - Whistle to the start of either slider should be added. but start of 2 is better
  6. 01:16:551 (5) - Add a whistle?
  7. 01:23:401 (1,2,3,4) - A little overmapped, how about try this rhythm? http://puu.sh/8eCiO.jpg

Done all owo
Easier diffs (Easy and Normal) are very nice! great job and insane is good enough, and should be fine after some more mods :3
Thank you for the complements and the very nice and helpfull mod owo Ill call a BAT after 3-4 more mods >w< i did just get a ticket from KSHR owo
Topic Starter
LexiaLovesU
ByakUsagi is having trouble with his internet so he replied via forum pm owo

Maruyu
Hey~ From modding queue.

1- 00:07:811 (1) - Flow is a bit off on the end of this one. Just a slight bit, so easily fixeable.
2- 00:35:449 (4) - Rotate this counter clockwise just a little bit, and it's perfect c:
3- 00:40:409 (2) - I'd prefer if you rotated this just a little bit, to go into 00:40:882 (3).

Pretty poor mod, but the map is really good. Star~ :3
Topic Starter
LexiaLovesU

Yuzu- wrote:

Hey~ From modding queue.

1- 00:07:811 (1) - Flow is a bit off on the end of this one. Just a slight bit, so easily fixeable.
2- 00:35:449 (4) - Rotate this counter clockwise just a little bit, and it's perfect c:
3- 00:40:409 (2) - I'd prefer if you rotated this just a little bit, to go into 00:40:882 (3).

Pretty poor mod, but the map is really good. Star~ :3
Thanks for modding ill check this soon owo
waxman
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LexiaLovesU wrote:

Dariano wrote:

[Timing]
After lots of testing I think you should change your offset to 2,132 (Current one -10) because the offset was fluctuating from 0-15 specially in the first part of the song. No its fine ><
[General]
I played many times. but it's not comfortable for me to beat. I guess offset 2,122 (-20±5), then all objects would be moved correct position.
.....

It's time to consider timing.

If you changed it, I would mod soon....
Sephibro
This one seems fine:




Just select all the timing sections and move them by -26 ms:




And then timing > move all notes in time... > -26 ms




Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
LexiaLovesU

Sephibro wrote:

This one seems fine:




Just select all the timing sections and move them by -26 ms:




And then timing > move all notes in time... > -26 ms




Good luck! :)
done thanks soo much >w<
waxman
I'm glad to hear about that. Then I give you DERISHASU .

(ノ≧∇≦)ノ

I'll mod soon.
waxman
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NO KUDASU PLS




[Insane]
00:05:423 (8,1) - There is no isuue because you added NC here. but this spacing would be changed like this spacing 00:05:895 (1,2,3).
00:21:013 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer my idea tho...
00:38:021 (1,2,3) - spacing miss. Those spacing are different a bit.
00:49:950 (3) - move this circle up a bit. 00:49:596 (2,3,4) - this shape isn't cool for me. :(
00:53:139 (1,2,3,4,5) - It makes me bored.. If you like this idea...
00:59:753 (5,6) - worst idea ↓
01:07:549 (5,6,1) - Objects are close. According to 01:05:895 (5,6,1), those closely spacing are not necessary.
01:13:927 (1,2) - this is unreadable a bit. so I guess 01:14:163 (2) would be added NC.
01:18:178 (2,3,4,5) - idea
01:22:903 (4,1,2,3) - Those spacing are not necessary and intentional for me. So you can follow regular spacing. move to x:180 y:164.
01:25:029 - add Whistle instead of Finish. There is no sound at 01:25:029. so it's not necessary. listen to this section carefully on playback Rate 25%.


I wanted you to fix about offset before Sephibro write. In recently, my idea in regard to offset is trash. So there have been no point that I moded.... (´・ω・`)



GOOD LUCK.
Topic Starter
LexiaLovesU

waxman wrote:

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NO KUDASU PLS




[Insane]
00:05:423 (8,1) - There is no isuue because you added NC here. but this spacing would be changed like this spacing 00:05:895 (1,2,3). i made 1's spacing differently to emphasis the finish
00:21:013 (1,2,3,4) - I prefer my idea tho... Done owo nice jump
00:38:021 (1,2,3) - spacing miss. Those spacing are different a bit. LOL didnt notice fixed
00:49:950 (3) - move this circle up a bit. 00:49:596 (2,3,4) - this shape isn't cool for me. :(moving the circle up would make the patterns flow awkward so i just made the triple more straight so that it follows the flow owo
00:53:139 (1,2,3,4,5) - It makes me bored.. If you like this idea... idk i wanted the pattern to be like that so it matches with the music
00:59:753 (5,6) - worst idea ↓ Done idk why my pattern was done like that
01:07:549 (5,6,1) - Objects are close. According to 01:05:895 (5,6,1), those closely spacing are not necessary. its fine owo
01:13:927 (1,2) - this is unreadable a bit. so I guess 01:14:163 (2) would be added NC. :idea:add nc
01:18:178 (2,3,4,5) - idea done owo
01:22:903 (4,1,2,3) - Those spacing are not necessary and intentional for me. So you can follow regular spacing. move to x:180 y:164. its fine owo
01:25:029 - add Whistle instead of Finish. There is no sound at 01:25:029. so it's not necessary. listen to this section carefully on playback Rate 25%.
there is a finish sound and very very prominent sound so no change

I wanted you to fix about offset before LexiaLovesU write. In recently, my idea in regard to offset is trash. So there have been no point that I mod.... (´・ω・`)



GOOD LUCK.
thanks 4 modding :D
KSHR
[General]
  1. Title Unicode: なないろ☆ナミダ -TV EDIT- (Need to fix the romanized one as well.)
  2. Add the original anime title “べるぜバブ” into Tags.


[Easy]
  1. Reduce the overall difficulty to 2 for the better difficulty spread.
  2. 40% in the calm part kinda sounds low to me. I’d highly recommend increasing to at least 50%. Same goes for Normal and Insane.
  3. This difficulty includes some unnecessary green lines. Check by yourself and remove them. e.g. 00:02:116 -
  4. 01:02:549 - This is not unrankable stuff, but this should be snapped in 1/4 (to 01:02:470 - ) imo since it seems like 1/12 snap doesn’t make any sense. Same goes for 01:17:667 - if you apply this. (Normal and Insane as well.)
  5. 00:39:675 - How about adding a drum clap instead of a soft one by changing the Additions to Drum? Since a similar sound goes here. It should be more fitting.
  6. 01:08:257 - Swap a hitsound with 01:09:202 - since a finish sound goes at 01:09:202 - . + If I were you, I’d add an extra green line to make the volume lower (-10%) at 01:09:202 - because I’d like to make difference with 01:10:147 - .


[Normal]
  1. 00:09:675 (1,2) - Swap rhythms. The guitar goes from 00:09:675 - to around 00:10:147 - . + there is a vocal stresses at 00:10:383 - . So the rhythm will be more natural if you follow it with a note.
  2. 00:39:438 (4) - It’s a bit too hard for beginners to play 00:38:966 (3,4,1) - since this short repeat slider makes the rhythm harder to play. It’d be better to simplify it like this image imo.
  3. 00:51:249 - An unnecessary green line
  4. 01:08:257 (1) - Adding a whistle to the head, a finish to the end should be more fitting.


[Senpai~]
  1. 00:15:344 (1) - Add a whistle since the synthesizer (or the piano?) goes around here.
  2. 00:54:320 (1) - It’d be nicer if you make difference with the previous clap at 00:54:084 (5) - by reducing the volume by 10% or so.
  3. 01:09:911 (3) - Remove this drum clap. Only (2) should be enough.


[Insane]
  1. 00:05:423 (4) - This slider will look neat if you make it curved like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1608685
    212,148,5423,2,0,P|168:176|132:228,1,101.250003862381
  2. 00:21:958 (3,4) - This flow doesn’t look good. + It’s kinda hard to play because of that. It’d be better to make this pattern flowier and more friendly.
  3. 00:24:793 (5,1) - I think you should let players move the cursor more by making the spacing larger since that way it’s more fun to play than the current idea.
  4. 00:38:966 (1,2,3,4) - Inaudible objects. (Especially 00:39:438 (3,4) - .) Increase the volume like you did at 01:01:643 (5,6,7) - . I’d say (3,4) are unrankable because of that.
  5. 00:39:911 (1) - This one is not unrankable, but I’d highly recommend increasing the volume to around 50%.
  6. 00:44:635 (4,5) - The current rhythm kinda sounds strange since there is not any sounds such as the drum, the vocal, the guitar to follow with an object at 00:44:753 - . I’d rearrange 00:44:635 (4,5,6) - like this if I were you.

    + It will be more nicer if you make a jump with (7,1) since it can emphasize the stress at 00:46:053 - .
  7. 00:48:415 (5,6) - This kinda sound strange as well for the same reason as above (no sound at 00:48:533 - ). Remove (1,2) and then make a 3/4 slider at 00:48:415 - instead.
  8. 00:52:194 (2,1,2,3,4) - Inaudible objects. Increase the volume to at least 50% or so. + 00:53:139 (1) - remove a clap from this note, and add a normal-hit by changing the sampleset to Normal at 40% instead. It sounds like a default clap here doesn’t fit with the song to me.
  9. 00:54:084 (5,6,7) - ^
  10. 00:57:627 (3) - I’d move this note to upper rightward to make more comfortable to play if I were you. e.g. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1609016
  11. 01:13:927 (1,1) - What did you make a stack here for? The current idea probably will give players an uncomfortable feeling. Therefore it’d be better to unstack like you did at 00:58:808 (1,2) - .


Take your time~
YTYuyu
fixed everything. ty for the mod KS-sama~ <3

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260,219,48178,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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491,265,60462,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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23,238,62824,2,0,P|24:281|42:316,2,75,0|8|0,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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150,263,63769,2,0,P|187:281|224:282,1,75,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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336,195,66367,6,0,P|408:163|477:179,1,150,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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500,231,68257,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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LexiaLovesU

KSHR wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:38:966 (1,2,3,4) - Inaudible objects. (Especially 00:39:438 (3,4) - .) Increase the volume like you did at 01:01:643 (5,6,7) - . I’d say (3,4) are unrankable because of that. I raised to 35 I wanted to keep that part calm and not loud

Take your time~
Everything else done owo
KSHR
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