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Tomato n' Pine - Nanairo*Namida -TV EDIT-

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KSHR
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KSHR
[General]
  1. Title Unicode: なないろ☆ナミダ -TV EDIT- (Need to fix the romanized one as well.)
    ”source”

    http://www.play-asia.com/nanairo-namida ... -49vw.html
  2. Add the original anime title “べるぜバブ” into Tags.
[Easy]
  1. Reduce the overall difficulty to 2 for the better difficulty spread.
  2. 40% in the calm part kinda sounds low to me. I’d highly recommend increasing to at least 50%. Same goes for Normal and Insane.
  3. This difficulty includes some unnecessary green lines. Check by yourself and remove them. e.g. 00:02:116 -
  4. 01:02:549 - This is not unrankable stuff, but this should be snapped in 1/4 (to 01:02:470 - ) imo since it seems like 1/12 snap doesn’t make any sense. Same goes for 01:17:667 - if you apply this. (Normal and Insane as well.)
  5. 00:39:675 - How about adding a drum clap instead of a soft one by changing the Additions to Drum? Since a similar sound goes here. It should be more fitting.
  6. 01:08:257 - Swap a hitsound with 01:09:202 - since a finish sound goes at 01:09:202 - . + If I were you, I’d add an extra green line to make the volume lower (-10%) at 01:09:202 - because I’d like to make difference with 01:10:147 - .
[Normal]
  1. 00:09:675 (1,2) - Swap rhythms. The guitar goes from 00:09:675 - to around 00:10:147 - . + there is a vocal stresses at 00:10:383 - . So the rhythm will be more natural if you follow it with a note.
  2. 00:39:438 (4) - It’s a bit too hard for beginners to play 00:38:966 (3,4,1) - since this short repeat slider makes the rhythm harder to play. It’d be better to simplify it like this image imo.
  3. 00:51:249 - An unnecessary green line
  4. 01:08:257 (1) - Adding a whistle to the head, a finish to the end should be more fitting.
[Senpai~]
  1. 00:15:344 (1) - Add a whistle since the synthesizer (or the piano?) goes around here.
  2. 00:54:320 (1) - It’d be nicer if you make difference with the previous clap at 00:54:084 (5) - by reducing the volume by 10% or so.
  3. 01:09:911 (3) - Remove this drum clap. Only (2) should be enough.
[Insane]
  1. 00:05:423 (4) - This slider will look neat if you make it curved like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1608685
    212,148,5423,2,0,P|168:176|132:228,1,101.250003862381
  2. 00:21:958 (3,4) - This flow doesn’t look good. + It’s kinda hard to play because of that. It’d be better to make this pattern flowier and more friendly.
  3. 00:24:793 (5,1) - I think you should let players move the cursor more by making the spacing larger since that way it’s more fun to play than the current idea.
  4. 00:38:966 (1,2,3,4) - Inaudible objects. (Especially 00:39:438 (3,4) - .) Increase the volume like you did at 01:01:643 (5,6,7) - . I’d say (3,4) are unrankable because of that.
  5. 00:39:911 (1) - This one is not unrankable, but I’d highly recommend increasing the volume to around 50%.
  6. 00:44:635 (4,5) - The current rhythm kinda sounds strange since there is not any sounds such as the drum, the vocal, the guitar to follow with an object at 00:44:753 - . I’d rearrange 00:44:635 (4,5,6) - like this if I were you.

    + It will be more nicer if you make a jump with (7,1) since it can emphasize the stress at 00:46:053 - .
  7. 00:48:415 (5,6) - This kinda sound strange as well for the same reason as above (no sound at 00:48:533 - ). Remove (1,2) and then make a 3/4 slider at 00:48:415 - instead.
  8. 00:52:194 (2,1,2,3,4) - Inaudible objects. Increase the volume to at least 50% or so. + 00:53:139 (1) - remove a clap from this note, and add a normal-hit by changing the sampleset to Normal at 40% instead. It sounds like a default clap here doesn’t fit with the song to me.
  9. 00:54:084 (5,6,7) - ^
  10. 00:57:627 (3) - I’d move this note to upper rightward to make more comfortable to play if I were you. e.g. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1609016
  12. 01:13:927 (1,1) - What did you make a stack here for? The current idea probably will give players an uncomfortable feeling. Therefore it’d be better to unstack like you did at 00:58:808 (1,2) - .
Take your time~
YTYuyu
osu! Alumni
4,146 posts
Joined January 2011
YTYuyu
fixed everything. ty for the mod KS-sama~ <3

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181,188,77470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
181,188,77706,6,0,P|103:187|62:120,1,150,4|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
80,59,78415,2,0,P|125:32|166:33,1,75
218,51,78887,1,0,0:0:0:0:
285,84,79123,1,8,1:0:0:0:
345,128,79360,1,0,0:0:0:0:
345,128,79596,6,0,B|360:165|360:203|341:226|341:226|341:295,1,150,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,336,80304,2,0,B|233:299|233:261|252:238|252:238|252:169,1,150
285,84,81013,2,0,P|324:60|369:61,1,75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,90,81486,6,0,P|438:132|438:180,1,75,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,233,81958,1,8,1:0:0:0:
358,276,82194,1,0,0:0:0:0:
296,233,82430,2,0,P|228:206|154:233,1,150,2|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
101,326,83139,1,0,0:0:0:0:
214,326,83375,5,0,0:0:0:0:
286,306,83612,1,0,0:0:0:0:
349,266,83848,2,0,P|369:230|368:190,1,75,8|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
360,122,84320,2,0,B|307:67|307:67|226:68,1,150,0|8,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
168,105,85029,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85147,12,0,87391,0:0:0:0:
LexiaLovesU
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KSHR wrote:

[Insane]
  1. 00:38:966 (1,2,3,4) - Inaudible objects. (Especially 00:39:438 (3,4) - .) Increase the volume like you did at 01:01:643 (5,6,7) - . I’d say (3,4) are unrankable because of that. I raised to 35 I wanted to keep that part calm and not loud
Take your time~
Everything else done owo
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LexiaLovesU
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KSHR wrote:

finally after three months of laziness i got a bubble xD
alacat
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hi :)

[General]
  1. 01:17:667 - You must snap kiai section to here 01:17:588 - in Easy and Normal diffs.
  2. Please unify combo colors in all diffs. I recommend you to use byakugan's color because his color fits this video/song.
  3. Don't forget to add "ending" to Tags. As you know this is ending song.
  4. About Normal and Hard diffs, HP Drain rate +1. " Easy 2 -> Normal 4 -> Hard 6 -> Insane 7 " This spread is best for TV Size map :3 Please consider about it.
[Easy]
  1. 00:04:005 - ,00:04:950 - ,00:06:840 - ,00:12:509 - add a whistle here ? It's better to use hitsounds with constant rhythm for beginners.
  2. 00:16:289 (4) - In my opinion, you don't need to follow this sound 00:16:643 - for this difficulty. It's enough to follow the vocal by one slider. well, add a whistle to the tail of this slider. it would fit well with this vocal.
  3. 00:38:021 (3) - I feel that these consecutive claps do not match here 00:38:021 (3,4) - . How about using a whistle to the tail of this slider instead a clap sound ?
  4. 00:53:139 (3) - Design and flow suggestion : Consider using ctrl + j to this slider. It would be natural flow!
    SPOILER
  5. 01:06:367 - ,01:07:312 - ,01:08:257 - finish sound pls! more exciting for #2 kiai time. then, How about increasing the volume gradually in this part? It is a minor adjustment to increase the tension leading into the chorus.
  6. 01:01:643 - Same as above about consecutive claps.
  7. 01:19:123 (2) - a bit nazi mod, Try to move this note left for flow. like this
    SPOILER
  8. 01:19:596 - finish
  9. 01:19:596 (3,4,1,2) - I prefer to make like the angle of slant like this :
    SPOILER
    SPOILER
    It's better than straight flow.
  10. 01:23:848 - missing a clap
  11. 01:24:320 (2) - Same as above about rhythm.
[Normal]
  1. 00:06:367 - ,00:07:312 - ,00:15:816 - whistle.
  2. 00:10:383 (2) - Please remove a finish since it follows nothing. A whistle sound fits this part.
  3. 00:52:667 - clap
  4. 00:58:572 (6) - I feel this note is unnecessary for this difficulty same as your next part 01:13:690 - . Consider removing it from here.
  5. 01:06:367 (1,2,3) - a bit nazi mod, Please check these spacings.
  6. 01:07:312 - ,01:08:257 - Same as Easy diff.
  7. 01:19:596 (1) - add a finish instead of a whistle.
  8. 01:23:848 - clap
[Byakunyan sensei]
  1. Nothing~ ;)
[Insane]
  1. 00:04:950 - ,00:05:423 - ,00:07:312 - whistle
  2. 00:08:966 (3) - As you can see your next patterns 00:10:856 (1) - ,00:12:745 (1) - , you used x0.24 spacing same rhythm. So please use same spacing here.
  3. 00:13:927 - add a whistle to follow the piano sound.
  4. 00:24:556 (3) - clap
  5. 00:25:265 - This green section is unnecessary.
  6. 00:51:604 - ,00:51:958 - How about using a clap here ? I think it would fit the vocal.
  7. 00:59:281 (4,5,6) - try to make the equal spacing of these notes consistent since the combo is still going. ~ x1.00
  8. 01:03:533 (3,4,5) - ^ Again
  9. 01:07:312 (4) - ,01:09:202 (4) - Same as Easy diff.
  10. 01:12:509 (3) - please move to y:246 lol
That's all ~ Let me know whenever you're ready :3
LexiaLovesU
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alacat wrote:

hi :)
hello owo
[General]
  1. About Normal and Hard diffs, HP Drain rate +1. " Easy 2 -> Normal 4 -> Hard 6 -> Insane 7 " This spread is best for TV Size map :3 Please consider about it.
    Byakugan said it would ruin the calm
[Easy]
  1. 00:16:289 (4) - In my opinion, you don't need to follow this sound 00:16:643 - for this difficulty. It's enough to follow the vocal by one slider. well, add a whistle to the tail of this slider. it would fit well with this vocal. i wanted to follow this since its very prominent and stands out also it spices up the rhythm owo
  2. 01:24:320 (2) - Same as above about rhythm.^
[Insane]
  1. 01:12:509 (3) - please move to y:246 lol i put it somewhere else owol
That's all ~ Let me know whenever you're ready :3
This is the first time I ever got A random bat mod lol
everything else is done and thanks for helping with the hit sounds they sounds so much better now :D
alacat
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Recheck


[General]
  1. You must to add "ending" to tags in Insane diff.
[Easy]
  1. 00:53:139 (3,1) - If you changed this part, Please change it about distance by yourself too.
[Normal]
  1. 01:17:667 - Why did not you change here ?
LexiaLovesU
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Ooops fixed owo :oops:
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ok Re~~
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:D
BeatofIke
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Short IRC mod! We basically fixed the timing by setting it to 2130. We also fixed a few things as well.
Map Re-bubbled
Short IRC Log
10:51 LexiaLovesU: hey ike checking offset owo>
10:51 LexiaLovesU: ?
10:52 BeatofIke: yup! owo
10:52 LexiaLovesU: :D yay owo
10:52 BeatofIke: 2130 sounds good :3
10:54 LexiaLovesU: it use yo be that ;w;
10:56 LexiaLovesU: fixing it now owo
10:57 BeatofIke: really? owo
10:57 LexiaLovesU: yes and dont worry im getting the preview point aswell owo
10:57 BeatofIke: okay :3
10:58 LexiaLovesU: you gonna rebubbled owo?
10:58 BeatofIke: yup!
10:59 LexiaLovesU: yay owo
11:01 LexiaLovesU: WAIT before rebubbled check aimod in insane
11:01 LexiaLovesU: is that a problem ;w;?
11:02 LexiaLovesU: the two points are on the same time
11:02 BeatofIke: owo
11:02 LexiaLovesU: i did it to adjust the SV ;w;
11:02 BeatofIke: no that's fine
11:03 BeatofIke: You are allowed to have red and green timing sections at the same time.
11:03 LexiaLovesU: okay yay :D
11:04 BeatofIke: just not red/red or green/green or green as the first timing section before red.
11:05 LexiaLovesU: yay i learned somthing :D
11:05 BeatofIke: <3
11:05 LexiaLovesU: okay rebubbled owo<3
11:06 LexiaLovesU: updated
11:06 BeatofIke: Hold on, let me double check everything first :3
11:06 LexiaLovesU: okie :3
11:06 LexiaLovesU: :4
11:06 LexiaLovesU: 4 cause 3 is overated
11:07 BeatofIke: :69
11:07 LexiaLovesU: :96 cause 69 is overused
11:08 BeatofIke: hue hue :3
11:08 LexiaLovesU: mow
11:13 BeatofIke: okay everything seems to be good......
11:14 BeatofIke: ....but I'm going to double-check a few things first :3
11:14 LexiaLovesU: :D
11:14 LexiaLovesU: okie owo
11:20 BeatofIke: 01:12:523 (3) - missing a clap
11:20 BeatofIke: on Insane owo
11:21 LexiaLovesU: fixed owo
11:21 BeatofIke: okay :3
11:24 LexiaLovesU: update owo?
11:24 BeatofIke: not yet owo
11:24 LexiaLovesU: okie
11:27 BeatofIke: okay upload :3
LexiaLovesU
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YAY another bubbie lol xD
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IRC Mod
17:20 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/359078 Tomato n' Pine - Nanairo*Namida -TV EDIT- [Easy]]
17:20 Irreversible: 00:29:990 (3,4) - i dislike that how the shape goes to the circle again
17:20 Irreversible: maybe make it smth straight?
17:21 Irreversible: 00:26:682 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - well this whole part is a bit meh imo
17:21 LexiaLovesU: wait gotta get som,ething
17:21 Irreversible: the flow is weird, maybe you could use zig zag
17:21 Irreversible: instead
17:21 Irreversible: you should avoid this :
17:21 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/97GSI/c1f44a25c3.jpg
17:21 Irreversible: better to have this :
17:21 Irreversible: http://puu.sh/97GTl/db7a3ed285.jpg
17:21 Irreversible: for future projects
17:22 Irreversible: 00:38:021 (3) -delete the white point it's useless xD
17:23 LexiaLovesU: back
17:24 Irreversible: wb!
17:25 LexiaLovesU: I did something a bit diff
17:26 Irreversible: okay
17:26 Irreversible: second XD
17:27 LexiaLovesU: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1659359 i did this instead owo
17:29 Irreversible: alright
17:29 Irreversible: well
17:29 Irreversible: also take care of 3 and 4
17:29 Irreversible: 00:29:990 (3,4) - make straight sliders maybe bette
17:30 Irreversible: rrest is good
17:30 LexiaLovesU: 4 and 5 owo>
17:30 LexiaLovesU: ?
17:30 Irreversible: yes
17:30 Irreversible: because the transition from 3 to 4 is bad / looks a bit bad xD
17:30 Irreversible: imo
17:30 LexiaLovesU: done owo
17:31 LexiaLovesU: yeah it does
17:31 *Irreversible is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/359080 Tomato n' Pine - Nanairo*Namida -TV EDIT- [Normal]]
17:31 LexiaLovesU: its flows weird potato XD
17:31 Irreversible: 00:08:966 (6) - http://puu.sh/97Hz2/64406180e0.jpg try to get smth like this /make sure it's not offscreen)
17:31 LexiaLovesU: okay in owo
17:31 Irreversible: it's easier to read for normal player
17:31 LexiaLovesU: done owo
17:32 Irreversible: 00:32:352 (1) - how about 264 200? it's the same reason as in easy, you should avoid blanketting in lower diffs to much, as it doesn't flow as good as it could
17:32 Irreversible: 00:36:131 (1) - did you miss a hitsound on the start?
17:33 Irreversible: 01:05:423 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - take this whole combo and move it to 284 204
17:34 Irreversible: 01:08:257 (1) - i'm sure you can get a neater shape herehttp://puu.sh/97HLQ/98e469c151.jpg with a red point
17:34 LexiaLovesU: done all iwi
17:34 Irreversible: rest is good

Fixed also some hitsound in insane, Byakugans is fine! Upload please~
LexiaLovesU
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The two timing points in insane diff are fine. they are needed for the SV change and one of the point is red and the other is green dont unrank for this!!! lol
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haha oh well.. XD

Ranked!

second rank virginity taken hurr
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YAY Thanks irrrrr and thank you for being somewhat gentle lol xD
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Congratulations! :)
chaee
chaee

Knotts wrote:

Hello, here from my modding queue.

[249's Hard]
  1. 00:04:740 (3,4,5,6) - Better flow? http://puu.sh/7gz9V.jpg
  2. 00:39:464 (5,6,7,1) - Hard to read. Should move (5) somewhere else.
  3. 00:49:149 (6) - Move a little to the left
  4. 00:58:362(5) -try this? http://puu.sh/7gA1W.jpg
[Insane]
  1. 00:26:000 (3,4,1,2) - This might be better for flow http://puu.sh/7gxPk.jpg. The picture might so if you need more info PM me or something.
  2. 00:48:441 (3,4,5,6) - Reduce the DS if you're not going to stack.
  3. 01:05:212 (8) - Ctrl + G this, Ctrl + G at 01:05:921 (11) and stack
  4. 01:07:102 (2,3) - Maybe something like this http://puu.sh/7gxpE.jpg.
  5. 01:09:228 (9) - You could replace this with a circle bc it doesn't match the vocals you map after it.
  6. 01:12:535 (7,8,9) - Consider this? http://puu.sh/7gyN0.jpg
  7. 01:20:449 (3,4) - Possibly stack these on the end of (2)?
  8. 01:21:157 (6) - Remove clap?
woops can you delete this. quoted by accident
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I love this song ~
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