1. Easy (2.08 stars, 63 notes)
2. Forseen's Hard (4.9 stars, 166 notes)
3. Insane (5 stars, 223 notes)
4. Railgun's Normal (3.78 stars, 83 notes)

CodeS wrote:

Thanks for the Tips!
They Helped me a lot!

1. Add Forseen and Railgun to the beatmap's tags since we're guest mappers.
2. You can remove the artist, title, and yourself from the beatmap's tags. It's not needed.
3. Capitalize the I in the source "Mai-Otome Original Soundtrack Vol.2 Otome no Inori".

Regraz wrote:

Hi! From #modreq!


[Forseen's Hard]

00:00:481 (1) - it should be longer Fixed

others are really good!
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Good luck!

1. where is an Easy diff? that Normal diff has 3.5 stars, so you must make an Easy diff or remap current Normal diff..
2. Don't you want to add silent soft-sliderslide? the song is kind of relax.. sliders are noisy to me
3. also useless widescreen support and letterbox during breaks, cause doesn't have SB and break time.

• 
  00:35:776 (3) - Blanket like this would be nice http://puu.sh/6yT19.jpg

• 
  01:01:893 (1,2,3) - Remove last finish and replace use 3 claps to match the insane one.

• 
  00:03:305 (3) - Remove the clap from the last note and keep it only on the first to make it sound better
  00:13:187 (3) - Either try something like http://puu.sh/6yTBZ.jpg or http://puu.sh/6yTEI.jpg. I think the NC after (8) looks a bit weird.
  00:06:481 (4) - Add clap
  00:37:011 (2) - Somehow this has a different hitsound so I removed it and placed it again
  00:38:423 (2) - ^
  00:41:776 (6) - ^
  I think these sound a bit out of place.
  00:40:893 (6) - Consider placing a NC here
  00:48:481 (1) - Try this http://puu.sh/6yU6M.jpg
  01:01:893 (1,2,3) -
  This would make nice hitsounding just like with the Normal diff
  http://puu.sh/6yTvl.osu

• 
  00:24:128 (9) - Clap on the last note of the slider
  00:40:893 (2,3,4) - Maybe turn the volume down to about 55% on these, I think they're a bit loud
  00:43:717 (1,2,3) - ^
  00:41:776 (2) - Somehow there keep having different hitsounds also clap on the first one of this
  00:48:481 (1,2,3) - 3x clap?? maybe
  01:01:893 (1,2,3) - The volume on this could be 50% they're a little too soft
  http://puu.sh/6yUBl.osu

Delis wrote:

also useless widescreen support and letterbox during breaks, cause doesn't have SB and break time. Done

Tenderz wrote:

[Insane]

• 
  00:03:305 (3) - Remove the clap from the last note and keep it only on the first to make it sound better
  00:13:187 (3) - Either try something like http://puu.sh/6yTBZ.jpg or http://puu.sh/6yTEI.jpg. I think the NC after (8) looks a bit weird.
  00:06:481 (4) - Add clap
  00:37:011 (2) - Somehow this has a different hitsound so I removed it and placed it again
  00:38:423 (2) - ^
  00:41:776 (6) - ^
  I think these sound a bit out of place.
  00:40:893 (6) - Consider placing a NC here
  00:48:481 (1) - Try this http://puu.sh/6yU6M.jpg
  01:01:893 (1,2,3) -
  This would make nice hitsounding just like with the Normal diff
  http://puu.sh/6yTvl.osu

[Jump-A-Sane]

• 
  00:24:128 (9) - Clap on the last note of the slider
  00:40:893 (2,3,4) - Maybe turn the volume down to about 55% on these, I think they're a bit loud
  00:43:717 (1,2,3) - ^
  00:41:776 (2) - Somehow there keep having different hitsounds also clap on the first one of this
  00:48:481 (1,2,3) - 3x clap?? maybe
  01:01:893 (1,2,3) - The volume on this could be 50% they're a little too soft
  http://puu.sh/6yUBl.osu

CATS :3

1. this mod is a good suggestion for you, for every diffs,especially Normal and Easy.The Hard diff is a good example for you and Project Railgun to learn, a good blanket can make the map more beautiful.

1. 00:09:658 (1,3) overlapped, in the lower diiff, it would be better to avoid this arrangement
2. 00:10:011 (2,3) but overlap this single note is good in sight
3. 00:17:423 (1,3) same as first
4. 00:31:540 (1,2,3) you can see there is a good blanket between the note 2 and slider 3, try to make slider 1 same as them
5. 00:34:364 (1,2,3) try this:
   
   SPOILER

   
6. 00:36:481 (3,1) this arrangement in normal is bad, it's too hard to read for a new player
7. 00:40:717 (2,1,3) here is a bad arrangement, too
8. 00:52:364 (5,1) you shouldn't use this idea in Normal, it's not good for a new player

1. you can see, most of notes focus on center (just see 00:05:364 - 00:21:615 is very evident)
   and the arrangement of note is casual and disorganized (like 00:09:658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 、 00:45:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) or this
   
   SPOILER

   
   all of them are ugly and hated by players,
   try to use ctrl+shift+D to creat a good arrangement

the rhythm is no problem for your diff, just fix your arrangement for last two diffs
GL

Azure wrote:

[General]

1. this mod is a good suggestion for you, for every diffs,especially Normal and Easy.

Yeah the Easy needs a lot of Help, because it's the first Easy I done so.. yeah.. thanks!


[Insane]

1. you can see, most of notes focus on center (just see 00:05:364 - 00:21:615 is very evident)
   and the arrangement of note is casual and disorganized (like 00:09:658 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) 、 00:45:482 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) or this
   
   SPOILER

   
   all of them are ugly and hated by players,
   try to use ctrl+shift+D to creat a good arrangement

I like mapping in the Center, Still move some notes a bit to avoid everything being there, but the main focus is still, Also I love those kind of patterns, gave them some Spacing and a bit of position so they don't luck as clusterfuck anymore.


the "Jump-A-Insane" has a same problem as Insane Being notes in the center?, I like it, still, changed the Jump a insane a lot, new patterns and more stuff so doesn't look the same all the map, thanks.

the rhythm is no problem for your diff, just fix your arrangement for last two diffs
GL

1. 00:02:599 (3,1) - Just a little comment about this. It's not bad, but however, it can it reworked. What's going on here, is the flow that is broken from the shape of the slider (3) to the slider (1). So first, the movement from those sliders is a bit bad since the slider (3) goes at the left but in order to catch the next slider, you have to back behind this slider. This can be problematic. Maybe you can try to change the slider's (3) shapes like that, which will help the flow a bit.
   
   example

   
2. 00:05:776 (4) - since the circle is overlapping the previous circle, it looks a bit bad. You have two choices here: either move this circle and stack it with the previous one or, you move the circle to x:146 y:260 so it would be overlapped. (I highly suggest you to use the second suggestion)
3. 00:06:128 (5) - A new combo is required here.
4. 00:06:128 (5) - This slider could have a blanket with the previous slider (2). If you followed the previous suggestion, move this slider to x:180 y:344 and move the second dot of the slider a bit and it's going to make a blanket with this circle.
5. 00:11:776 (4) - The song requires a new combo
6. 00:14:599 (1) - Please, keep your spacing consistent with your previous objects. You will need to do the same thing for those objects: 00:16:011 (3,4,5,6) -
7. 00:17:423 (5) - add a new combo here, the current combo is a bit long and the song requires one.
8. 00:20:246 (1) - Both flow and spacing can be improved here. For the flow, we can see that this slider is completely behind and at the opposite side of the previous slider and as for the spacing, it's inconsistent.
9. 00:23:070 (5) - For here, you will need to first, add a new combo after that, to keep it consistent, you have to delete the combo on 00:24:481 - , add another combo on 00:25:893 (2) - and finally delete the new combo on the next circle.
10. 00:31:540 (4) - The song requires a new combo
11. 00:34:011 (1,3) - Stack both of these objects, it's going to look a lot better if you do so.
12. 00:36:834 (5,1) - If we follow the song, add a new combo and 5 and delete the new combo on 1. After that, add another combo on 00:40:011 (4) - .
13. 00:51:305 (3) - I think a new combo would be better here, what do you think?
14. 00:57:305 (3,1) - The way the slider is placed with the circle, it looks like you wanted to do a blanket and it's not pretty good. You should actually either make a blanket or move the slider completely so it will look better o:
15. 00:57:658 (1,2) - Delete the new combo on 1 and add a new combo on 2, it's going to follow the song.

1. 00:13:187 (3,1) - Just because there is a break in the timeline, you shouldn't stack both of these objects. Consider moving the slider (1) somewhere else.
2. 00:35:776 (3,1) - Same as the previous suggestion :3
3. 00:45:658 (1) - To be honest, it looks a bit weird since the previous circle is not between both beginning and end of this slider.. You should try to move or reshape this slider a bit, so the circle would be between them.
4. 00:52:364 (5,1) - Make a better stack here, please.
5. 00:54:128 (3,1) - Same as the first suggestion.

1. 00:18:128 (4,5) - I am not sure if the circle is perfectly stacked with the end of your previous slider, you might want to look at it o3o
2. 00:39:658 (1,2,3) - That's a sudden jump.. I suggest you not to do that. It's not terrible, but it's better if there's no jump in here.
3. 00:40:893 (4,5,6) - Personally, I'd prefer if those were replaced by a reversed slider, it should be more easy, right?

1. 00:13:187 (3,1) - Just because there is a break in the timeline, you shouldn't stack both of these objects. Consider moving the slider (1) somewhere else. Is part of my mapping style! New combo colors & hitsound before break should make it easier to read.
2. 00:35:776 (3,1) - Same as the previous suggestion :3 ~~
3. 00:45:658 (1) - To be honest, it looks a bit weird since the previous circle is not between both beginning and end of this slider.. You should try to move or reshape this slider a bit, so the circle would be between them. Yes I thought the same. Changed.
4. 00:52:364 (5,1) - Make a better stack here, please. I thought it was a bit strange too. Fixed.
5. 00:54:128 (3,1) - Same as the first suggestion. ~~

Gabe wrote:

#modreqs.

Easy
Done Everything

I will come back another day when you get more mods to look at it again, you need to work a lot on it, mainly on the combo, the spacing and the blanket of your objects. Yep, I'm having problems how to properly do Blanket and stuff, but your kind of Mods really helped me, real thanks!


So, I am stopping here, I modded another map before and I am pretty much tired, if you ask me.
For Jump-A-Insane, I don't think the difficulty is necessary, but you might want to rename it as "Extra" I Don't think it feel like an eXtra. but I will keep in mind

Feel free to call me back anytime (:

baraatje123 wrote:

Click HERE to get all diffs with proper hitsounds

Raiku wrote:

Short but sweet mod to smooth out edges~

[Insane]

00:04:011 (1) - I wouldn't NC here to keep the combo going throughout the first little melody (http://puu.sh/6VoIW.jpg). Done!

00:13:540 (1,2,3) - No NC on 1, start it on the slider at 3, just like u did later on in the song here 00:24:128 (1,2,3,4,5) (Continuity ) (http://puu.sh/6VoWP.jpg). Done

00:31:364 (1) - Bit skeptical about the NC here. I Will keep it!

00:32:599 (4,5) - How do you feel about this flow improving alteration? Also start a NC on the 5 to give the next 3 notes their own combo (http://puu.sh/6Vpbm.jpg). ohh that's actually a better one, Done!

00:50:246 (4) - I'd NC. Done

00:50:952 (7) - And NC here. Done

00:53:070 (4) - NC. Done

00:53:776 (7,8,1) - NC on 7 and not on 1. Done

00:55:540 (1) - No NC. Done

00:56:599 (1) - No NC. Done

00:59:423 (5) - NC. Done

01:00:834 (9) - NC. Done

Cute map, lav it~

Gomo Pslvarh wrote:

[General]

fine.

[Easy]

00:02:599 (3) - i think you should make more simply slider. It was changed from a Simple slider for better flow, will keep it thanks.
00:23:070 (5) - add new combo. Done
00:24:481 (1) - delete new combo. Done
00:30:128 (2) - too short time slider, you should fix this note. you can follow this. Done

SPOILER

00:31:540 (1,2,3) - i think this pattern is more hard than easy, normal or hard pattern. follow this? Done

SPOILER

if you follow this, 00:34:011 (1) - delete this circle. Done

00:48:481 (1,1) - i think this pattern is need more distance. That would make a too big Jump for the DS, it's better to add new combo
01:00:834 (1,2) - ^ Looks Boring if I put it far, I find it better to keep it in the same place and so new players doesn't have to move much.