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peppy
I'm so glad someone is making my dreams come true of how I hoped to see storyboarding used. <3

(shoot me an email with any SB-specific requests you have and i'll mark them top priority. i already plan to look at improving performance)
HanzeR
noooooo its not possible howwwww omgg
Ephemeral
all of us in #dev just had a massive nerdgasm at how fucking incredible this storyboard is

WE SHALL BE TALKING TO YOU SOON, SIR
Avena
Damnae deserves to be in the tags more than anyone else.
Loctav
Granted him a usertitle. hue
Marcin
thank me

Either way, you are the most awesome sb maker I have seen my osu!life
Sonnyc
SB so amazing...
Faust
I watched Another on autoplay/Editor. Don't think the background is doing/projecting anything that adds to the storyboarding.

Here are 2 backgrounds that you could use to swap if you'd like. Both are themed to "Far east nightbird".



Damnae


wow Elite Storyboarder? thanks!

peppy wrote:

I'm so glad someone is making my dreams come true of how I hoped to see storyboarding used. <3

(shoot me an email with any SB-specific requests you have and i'll mark them top priority. i already plan to look at improving performance)
Thanks! While I enjoy searching for ideas within the current limitations, I could think of some things that would add more possibilities/make some things easier...


HanzeR wrote:

noooooo its not possible howwwww omgg
I made this using sgl's ability to write storyboard code, directly in c#, skipping the sgl language and some of its limitations (which also allowed me to load the 3d models).

If you're curious extremely bored I streamed myself finishing the storyboard for the kiai parts: http://fr.twitch.tv/damnae/b/516691794
Sorry for the angry Windows sounds when I reload the map :D
-kevincela-

Loctav wrote:

this SB

I came
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
whoa i thought damnae added himself to tags, guess i will do that when i get home

@Faust: I have considered those BGs before, but through searching up RLC's original BG i was able to trace the artist for the image and find his/her other artworks. They really seem to complement each other so i decided to use these set of pictures to distinguish between difficulties mapped by guests and myself. fyi each difficulty has specific storyboarded elements that match with the BG hue, which is something i'd like to keep as well.
Ayu
damnae delivers
onotoleonide
nazi mod
feel free to ignore this
look out for links
[Beginner]
  1. sliderslide sounds awful, replace it with this file
  2. 00:30:862 (2) - blanket
  3. 01:20:919 (3) - ^^^^
  4. 01:26:405 (2) - ^^^^
  5. 01:31:891 (2) - ^^^^
  6. 01:37:376 (1) - ^^^^
  7. 01:38:405 (2) - ^^^^
  8. 01:56:576 (2) - ^^^^
  9. 02:19:891 (2) - ^^^^
  10. 02:21:948 (1) - ^^^^
  11. 02:55:891 (2) - ^^^^
  12. 03:02:748 (1) - ^^^^
  13. 03:22:291 (3) - ^^^^
  14. 04:03:433 (1) - ^^^^
  15. 04:11:319 (3) - ^^^^
  16. 04:21:262 (2) - ^^^^
  17. 04:25:376 (1) - ^^^^
  18. 04:50:062 (2) - ^^^^
[Normal]
  1. 00:13:033 (4) - add normal-clap for slidertick
  2. 00:18:519 (4) - ^^^^ also blanket
  3. 00:56:919 (1) - blanket
  4. 01:04:805 (1) - ^^^^
  5. 01:12:005 (5) - ^^^^
  6. 01:18:862 (1) - ^^^^
  7. 01:47:491 (4) - ^^^^
  8. 01:53:833 (4) - ^^^^
  9. 02:01:376 (3) - ^^^^
  10. 02:04:119 (3,4) - ^^^^
  11. 02:15:091 (3,4) - ^^^^
  12. 02:46:633 (1) - ^^^^
  13. 02:57:605 (1) - ^^^^
  14. 03:31:891 (3) - ^^^^
  15. 03:36:005 (1) - ^^^^
  16. 04:31:891 (2) - ^^^^
  17. 04:36:348 (1) - ^^^^
  18. 04:47:319 (1) - ^^^^
[Hyper]
  1. 00:16:462 (4) - teknalb
  2. 00:33:091 (9) - wow this word sounds like german
  3. 00:45:948 (1) - do you speak german
  4. 00:59:662 (1) - I know a lot of germans
  5. 01:02:062 (1) - one of them just gived damnae usertitle
  6. 01:03:604 (3) - fun fact:
  7. 01:08:233 (2) - I'm actually DDoSing puush
  8. 01:21:948 (2) - fun fact #2:
  9. 01:32:919 (2) - wtf ctrl+g?
  10. 01:34:633 (1) - ughh what I was talking about...
  11. 01:43:891 (2) - zexous wtf stop
  12. 02:04:291 (4) - ah, yeah, fun fact #2
  13. 02:21:948 (1) - osu crashed at least 3 times
  14. 02:33:948 (5) - move to 227;125
  15. 02:49:376 (1) - osu crashed because my pc is too old for damnae's awesome sb
  16. 03:32:233 (6) - WTF IS THIS SHIT STOP
  17. 03:34:976 (6) - you have no mapper spirit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
  18. 03:41:491 (1) - really, these 1/4 jumps are awful
  19. 03:44:576 - add circle
  20. 03:52:462 (1) - it's hyper, not extra
  21. 04:01:891 (1) - black another hahahahhahaha
  22. 04:12:233 (3) - I'm almost out of funny phrases
  23. 04:19:548 (1,2) - actually they're not funny
  24. 04:30:519 (1) - ackchyually
  25. 04:32:062 (3) - osu crashed again
  26. 04:46:633 (3) - r8 my naziness m8
[RLC]
  1. 03:00:348 (1) - Blanket, my lord.
Xinely
Damnae best storyboarder ever
I was suprising how to make the effects so smooth <3
Groumiezi
Elite Mapper + Elite Storyboarder = Elite ???


damn that storyboard was so AWESOME *.*
Asphyxia
holy mother of hell this sb is amazing
captin1

.osb file and all diff specific events copied into word
Damnae

captin1 wrote:


.osb file copied into word
I think you forgot the diff specific lines :D
captin1
ahaha so i did, fixed
RLC

Natteke wrote:

holy shit.
woshiguabi
wpcap
Sunao Yoshikawa
my godness
Azer
holy fucking macaroni
daddy when i grow up i want to be like damnae
Callum
The storyboard on this map absolutely blew my mind.

Amazing job
Lust
That storyboard though
Zexous
Holy fucking shit this thread got like one post every two weeks and I come home and suddenly 28 posts turned into 62
Freya
have my babies
DJNightmare
SO AWESOME QAQ
I want to create stuff like that too...

(But idk how to code...)

You don't suppose peppy will create some sort of storyboard generating elements like particle generation? or allowing movements to be curved? (by adding a line as a pathway to allow the changing of how the sprite will move?)
Horo
i came
tiper
Damnae, you are awesome. I do respect how much effort you have put in this storyboard real to make it real. Although I had been thinking this one is the best storyboard I have ever seen, you just surpassed yourself.
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
finally have Damnae in tags now xD

now i feel the obligation to rank this just so more people can enjoy his epic storyboard 8-)
Zexous

jonathanlfj wrote:

now i feel the obligation to rank this just so more people can enjoy his epic storyboard 8-)
>:)
Timorisu

Azer wrote:

holy fucking macaroni
daddy when i grow up i want to be like damnae
cheesiest

Timorisu wrote:

Azer wrote:

holy fucking macaroni
daddy when i grow up i want to be like damnae
Timorisu
Shitmod forgive me orz No kds please thanks

You should find more experienced people to mod this

Damnae have my children omg

[General]

I'd find a bell hitsound to support the beginning/intro of the song!

[EruJazz's Beginner]

00:16:805 (3) - I feel like a normal slider would do the job here idk

00:21:159 - Unnecessary inherited point since there's no custom slidertick (yet?)

00:40:805 (2,3,4) - Minor thing but I'd avoid overlaps

00:50:062 (1) - Way too close to previous object (0.3x)

01:17:319 - Unnecessary inherited point since there are no objects to make quieter here and the volume goes to 80% on the next object

01:29:148 (3) - Really nazi, but move the second last point one to the left and the last point one up so it's perfectly symmetrical

02:29:833 (1) - Way too close to the previous object again, you could just CTRL+G or whatever

03:30:519 (1) - Moving the end one right looks neater???

03:31:205 (2) - If you fixed the above you need to apply it on this too

[Normal]

00:22:462 - I feel like a note here couldn't hurt

00:56:919 (1) - Imperfect blanket

01:17:319 - to 01:18:176 - These inherited points seem useless since, again, there are no objects here

02:00:005 (1) - Move the second last point down by one

02:46:633 (1) - Work on yer blankets, boy

03:31:205 (2,4,2) - These sound very off for some reason, the following ones are fine though. You might want to make these

[Zexous's Hyper]

I agree that Zexous' looks better :L

00:53:833 (4,5) - Nazi but I'd avoid overlaps of the beginnings

01:16:805 (3) - A 1/8 slider fits better imho http://puu.sh/7X06f.jpg

01:24:262 (4) - Removing the clap wouldn't make this sound so aggravating

01:51:518 (3,5) - ^

02:33:948 (5) - The overlap of the end with 4 is really off

02:55:891 (5) - ^ But not by that much lol

04:13:376 (2) - A 1/3 repeat slider fits better

04:30:519 (1) - This blanket is kinda really off

04:33:262 (1) - This doesn't seem parallel, move the end one or two to the left

04:46:633 (3) - This blanket is way off

04:47:319 (1) - ^ Since copy paste

[Another]

00:28:462 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - All of these seem really off due to the offbeat sliders, the end of the sliders is a very strong beat and that should warrant a hitcircle

Idk man can't find anything else this is already really good

[RLC's Extra]

00:12:519 (4) - x:124 y:180 to make a neat triangle

00:59:662 (1) - I feel like this could be a blanket around 3s sliderfollowcircle

01:04:976 (2) - This blanket is horrid .-.

02:38:233 - A circle here wouldn't hurt
ErunamoJAZZ
To russian guy who want babies onotoleonide: i apply some ultra nazi blankets u.u


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Timorisu wrote:

[EruJazz's Beginner]

00:16:805 (3) - I feel like a normal slider would do the job here idk nope, because "swept" pattern 00:13:719 (3,3,3) -

00:21:159 - Unnecessary inherited point since there's no custom slidertick (yet?) yep, unnecesary in this diff :3

00:40:805 (2,3,4) - Minor thing but I'd avoid overlaps lel

00:50:062 (1) - Way too close to previous object (0.3x) close, but veeery away in time.

01:17:319 - Unnecessary inherited point since there are no objects to make quieter here and the volume goes to 80% on the next object This turns off the sound. Is very necesary o.o

01:29:148 (3) - Really nazi, but move the second last point one to the left and the last point one up so it's perfectly symmetrical ^^U

02:29:833 (1) - Way too close to the previous object again, you could just CTRL+G or whatever Ctrl+G to 02:26:062 (1) -

03:30:519 (1) - Moving the end one right looks neater??? lel

03:31:205 (2) - If you fixed the above you need to apply it on this too lel x2

http://puu.sh/7XgGI.osu

Damnae, great job *¬*
Timorisu

ErunamoJAZZ wrote:

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Timorisu wrote:

[EruJazz's Beginner]

00:16:805 (3) - I feel like a normal slider would do the job here idk nope, because "swept" pattern 00:13:719 (3,3,3) -

00:21:159 - Unnecessary inherited point since there's no custom slidertick (yet?) yep, unnecesary in this diff :3

00:40:805 (2,3,4) - Minor thing but I'd avoid overlaps lel What kinda fuckin reply is "lel"

00:50:062 (1) - Way too close to previous object (0.3x) close, but veeery away in time. That does not change the fact that a BEGINNER will see this object and click on it immediately

01:17:319 - Unnecessary inherited point since there are no objects to make quieter here and the volume goes to 80% on the next object This turns off the sound. Is very necesary o.o But you do. not. need. something to turn off the sound when there is NOTHING TO TURN OFF

01:29:148 (3) - Really nazi, but move the second last point one to the left and the last point one up so it's perfectly symmetrical ^^U What the hell is "^^U"

02:29:833 (1) - Way too close to the previous object again, you could just CTRL+G or whatever Ctrl+G to 02:26:062 (1) -

03:30:519 (1) - Moving the end one right looks neater??? lel You could also give me a reason why you're denying that instead of making fun of me by blatantly saying lel, ya know

03:31:205 (2) - If you fixed the above you need to apply it on this too lel x2 Kinda pissed rn

http://puu.sh/7XgGI.osu

Damnae, great job *¬*
ErunamoJAZZ
Okay, im sorry but "lel" and "^^U". I know I am a unknown, and because of this everyone wants to demand more, but I have no problem. At no time mean to sound snippy.

Now, because http://puu.sh/7XjbJ.jpg, and Timorisu post, a not bit response:

Timorisu wrote:

[EruJazz's Beginner]

00:16:805 (3) - I feel like a normal slider would do the job here idk nope, because "swept" pattern 00:13:719 (3,3,3) -

00:21:159 - Unnecessary inherited point since there's no custom slidertick (yet?) yep, unnecesary in this diff :3

00:40:805 (2,3,4) - Minor thing but I'd avoid overlaps lel What kinda fuckin reply is "lel" lel=minor overlaps?, do not see them. Yes they are close but no have overlap.

00:50:062 (1) - Way too close to previous object (0.3x) close, but veeery away in time. That does not change the fact that a BEGINNER will see this object and click on it immediately pls, try play. This no happen.

01:17:319 - Unnecessary inherited point since there are no objects to make quieter here and the volume goes to 80% on the next object This turns off the sound. Is very necesary o.o But you do. not. need. something to turn off the sound when there is NOTHING TO TURN OFF Discuss this with jonathan. To me, it's necessary.

01:29:148 (3) - Really nazi, but move the second last point one to the left and the last point one up so it's perfectly symmetrical ^^U What the hell is "^^U" ^^U= i really sorry so much. I think I'm on the right to ignore the Nazi mod it deems unnecessary.

02:29:833 (1) - Way too close to the previous object again, you could just CTRL+G or whatever Ctrl+G to 02:26:062 (1) -

03:30:519 (1) - Moving the end one right looks neater??? lel You could also give me a reason why you're denying that instead of making fun of me by blatantly saying lel, ya know In no point I wanted to mock you.

03:31:205 (2) - If you fixed the above you need to apply it on this too lel x2 Kinda pissed rn

I know that in many ways I'm a weird person, but I'm not mean to ignore what you say me.
You give me a suggestion which I do not see the purpose of applying it, and I get a few laughs, but not to mock you, just the situation.

These sliders, as they are, are neater, or how you want them?
Well... each long answer takes me 30 min to 1 hour to read and write. I can read quickly, but take long to write. I really hoped you understood the terms I used, but I was wrong.
I have many things to do, and my intention was only to better manage my time.

btw... I hope this solves all your suggestions. :|

PD: I can not say I'm happy (edit translations from google takes time). But, thanks for your mod :)
Topic Starter
jonathanlfj
onotoleonide: fixed all the blankets you mentioned, although im not really a fan of tweaking slider tick hitsounds so i will keep that as-is

Timorisu: fixed everything on Normal except the last point, it probably feels off because its the transition measure onto 1/3s, you gotta start somewhere right? About that pattern on Another its meant to contrast 00:22:976 (2,3,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) since i switched from following the drums to that whistle thing in the music

Also thanks a lot for the stars Timorisu <3
Zexous

onotoleonide wrote:

[Hyper]
  1. 00:16:462 (4) - teknalb fixed
  2. 00:33:091 (9) - wow this word sounds like german fixed, that's cool
  3. 00:45:948 (1) - do you speak german fixed, and no, ich spreche kein deutsche (that's almost my entire knowledge of german)
  4. 00:59:662 (1) - I know a lot of germans fixed, i sure don't
  5. 01:02:062 (1) - one of them just gived damnae usertitle fixed, yep loctav i'd think
  6. 01:03:604 (3) - fun fact: fixed but ok seriously wtf though that was zoomed in like 1000% and still looked fine
  7. 01:08:233 (2) - I'm actually DDoSing puush fixed I hope, and sure ok
  8. 01:21:948 (2) - fun fact #2: fixed as best I can with two sliders
  9. 01:32:919 (2) - wtf ctrl+g? no
  10. 01:34:633 (1) - ughh what I was talking about... fixed
  11. 01:43:891 (2) - zexous wtf stop ya fk u ono
  12. 02:04:291 (4) - ah, yeah, fun fact #2 fixed...YOUR PUUSH WAS BORKED I DIDN'T KNOW WHAT TO DO so I just fixed blanket between 4 and 1 I hope that's what you meant
  13. 02:21:948 (1) - osu crashed at least 3 times fixed, and good, you deserved it
  14. 02:33:948 (5) - move to 227;125 fixed
  15. 02:49:376 (1) - osu crashed because my pc is too old for damnae's awesome sb fixed, and yea my computer freezes everytime I save this
  16. 03:32:233 (6) - WTF IS THIS SHIT STOP no
  17. 03:34:976 (6) - you have no mapper spirit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!correct but no
  18. 03:41:491 (1) - really, these 1/4 jumps are awful fixed, and no
  19. 03:44:576 - add circle Nowhere else did I have circles in 1/3 division, that was kind of the point, so no
  20. 03:52:462 (1) - it's hyper, not extra fixed, and yes wow correct -_-
  21. 04:01:891 (1) - black another hahahahhahaha fixed but FUCk i had to fix othe rblankets to fix thisf ufkadcu fuck
  22. 04:12:233 (3) - I'm almost out of funny phrases fixed, and none of them were funny to begin with
  23. 04:19:548 (1,2) - actually they're not funny fixed to the best of my ability, god that was a pain, and yea mmhmm you're not funny
  24. 04:30:519 (1) - ackchyually fixed (I tried), and shut up ono
  25. 04:32:062 (3) - osu crashed again fixed, and good
  26. 04:46:633 (3) - r8 my naziness m8 fixed, and ok I will
ono I rate your naziness 10/10 nazis who were successfully hanged at the nuremberg war trials (yes that is the real number)

Timorisu wrote:

[Zexous's Hyper]

I agree that Zexous' looks better :L Yes thank you it should totally be Zexous' but idk I guess sir lfj disagrees?

00:53:833 (4,5) - Nazi but I'd avoid overlaps of the beginnings *sigh* it wasn't really an overlap, i just wanted to make it not look too close to 3... but ok, fixed >_>

01:16:805 (3) - A 1/8 slider fits better imho http://puu.sh/7X06f.jpg Too bad it's a Hyper ^_^ I like my 3/4 slider more, a 1/8 slider would not be able to satisfactorily have the strong circle beat at 01:17:148 (4) - .

01:24:262 (4) - Removing the clap wouldn't make this sound so aggravating I see what you mean, but without it, it feels too weak

01:51:518 (3,5) - ^ ^

02:33:948 (5) - The overlap of the end with 4 is really off fixed from ono's mod

02:55:891 (5) - ^ But not by that much lol fixed

04:13:376 (2) - A 1/3 repeat slider fits better Unfortunately it would not fit better with the 3 slider right after it so no

04:30:519 (1) - This blanket is kinda really off fixed kinda-ish from ono's mod

04:33:262 (1) - This doesn't seem parallel, move the end one or two to the left fixed I hope, it's really hard to tell

04:46:633 (3) - This blanket is way off fixed from ono's mod but fixed more perhaps

04:47:319 (1) - ^ Since copy paste way ahead of you but yea fixed
Thanks ono and tim
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