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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on dimanche 24 mai 2015 at 20:48:41

Artist: Romaji
Title: VOiCE
Tags: hatsune miku vocaloid Kin
BPM: 135
Filesize: 4749kb
Play Time: 02:51
Difficulties Available:
  1. Kin's Futsuu (1,82 stars, 269 notes)
  2. Kin's Kantan (1,12 stars, 160 notes)
  3. Muzukashii (2,9 stars, 541 notes)
  4. Oni (4,63 stars, 962 notes)


Download: Romaji - VOiCE
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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And here we go with my first complete Mapset, Map ready for mod, so feel free for trying to mod =3
Can you mod this map please? X)

Kantan By Kin
Futsuu By Kin
Muzukashi By Me
Oni By Me

Thanks to krah & Kin for their big help with the bg

Extra Diff with TaikoJi & Light TaikoJi by me

Enjoy the map X)
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first >_>
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bonsoir
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Bon, faut bien des mods \o

general :

Oublie pas de resnap TOUTE tes notes sur tes diffs
un petit check sur ce post http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2925339
Oublie pas de m'ajouter en tag sur toute les diffs D:

Oni :

00:13:494 (56) - j'ai remarqué que içi les 3 notes sont exprès pour le vocal, si c'est le cas, je pense que changé celui en d passera mieux pour le vocal. Vu que la voix descend à ce moment la.
00:17:049 (63) - ^
00:25:049 (101) - vu que le ranking criteria dit ça http://puu.sh/7rvC9.png on est donc obligé d'enlevé le finish
01:01:494 - ~ 01:11:938 - j'ai du mal a voir ce que tu suis ><
01:22:937 (392) - perso je préfère delete pour bien marqué la fin du son instru.
02:42:379 (914,915) - d k ?
02:48:157 (942) - si tu décide de finish celui, il faudrait finish celui la aussi 02:49:049 (945) -

Muzukashii :

00:33:049 (88) - change le en D.
Si tu as finish les autres, je te conseil de finish aussi celui la 00:40:160 (102) - . Je dirais qu'il passe mieux en D qu'en K. Car le son est un peu + grave que sur les 2 autres.
Tu as finish les autres patterns ayant exactement le même son, du coup pour être consistent je dirais finish sur ceux la aussi 00:41:715 (103,104) - 00:43:493 (1,2) -
00:47:271 (14) - je dirais qu'en D il passe mieux. Car le son est fort et + grave.
01:01:494 - ~ 01:11:938 - j'ai du mal a voir ce que tu suis ><
01:21:715 (124) - t'en pense quoi de le changé en d ? Je dirais que ça passe mieux avec le triplet qui suit.
02:11:494 (284) - ^
01:33:493 (159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - t'en pense quoi pour un pattern de ce genre ? http://puu.sh/7rG13.jpg
02:42:379 (406,407) - d k ? perso j'trouve que ça passe mieux avec la melody.
02:44:605 (413) - change en D ? ça passe bien mieux avec les 2 K d'avant.
Si tu finish celui la 02:48:157 (426) - , finish aussi celui la pour être consistent 02:49:046 (429) -

voila fast check
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Kin wrote:

Bon, faut bien des mods \o

general :

Oublie pas de resnap TOUTE tes notes sur tes diffs
un petit check sur ce post p/2925339
Oublie pas de m'ajouter en tag sur toute les diffs D:

Oni :

00:13:494 (56) - j'ai remarqué que içi les 3 notes sont exprès pour le vocal, si c'est le cas, je pense que changé celui en d passera mieux pour le vocal. Vu que la voix descend à ce moment la. Fait
00:17:049 (63) - ^ Fait
00:25:049 (101) - vu que le ranking criteria dit ça http://puu.sh/7rvC9.png on est donc obligé d'enlevé le finish Fais
01:01:494 - ~ 01:11:938 - j'ai du mal a voir ce que tu suis >< Si t'essaye de bien écouté, tu distingueras un son derrière la voix et la guitare, c'est lui que je suit
01:22:937 (392) - perso je préfère delete pour bien marqué la fin du son instru. Tu à raison, Fait
02:42:379 (914,915) - d k ? J'ai Changé 02:42:379 (913,914) - En d k
02:48:157 (942) - si tu décide de finish celui, il faudrait finish celui la aussi 02:49:049 (945) - Fait

Muzukashii :

00:33:049 (88) - change le en D. Fait
Si tu as finish les autres, je te conseil de finish aussi celui la 00:40:160 (102) - . Je dirais qu'il passe mieux en D qu'en K. Car le son est un peu + grave que sur les 2 autres. Fait
Tu as finish les autres patterns ayant exactement le même son, du coup pour être consistent je dirais finish sur ceux la aussi 00:41:715 (103,104) - 00:43:493 (1,2) - tout à fait d'accord, Fait
00:47:271 (14) - je dirais qu'en D il passe mieux. Car le son est fort et + grave. Fait
01:01:494 - ~ 01:11:938 - j'ai du mal a voir ce que tu suis >< Même chose que ce que j'ai dit sur la Oni
01:21:715 (124) - t'en pense quoi de le changé en d ? Je dirais que ça passe mieux avec le triplet qui suit. Fait
02:11:494 (284) - ^ Fait
01:33:493 (159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167) - t'en pense quoi pour un pattern de ce genre ? http://puu.sh/7rG13.jpg Je te cache pas que j'étais coincer ici pour arriver a trouver quelque chose de bien, et ce que tu me propose m'a fais sauter de joie en l'essayant, donc Fait
02:42:379 (406,407) - d k ? perso j'trouve que ça passe mieux avec la melody. Fait
02:44:605 (413) - change en D ? ça passe bien mieux avec les 2 K d'avant. Fait
Si tu finish celui la 02:48:157 (426) - , finish aussi celui la pour être consistent 02:49:046 (429) - Fait

voila fast check
Merci beaucoup pour ce mod, tellement bien fait que j'ai tout changé >_<
posted
A Taiko M4M :3 not modding Oni (or at least not in detail) because there's others who can do that better (AKA Taiko BATs >_>)

Lower HP and OD of Muzu and Oni by 1
Increase HP and OD on Futsuu by 1
00:07:272 - add note here to emphasise the vocal :3
00:25:494 (23) - perhaps make this a big kat to fit with the two notes next to it
00:33:049 (33) - remove finisher since it goes quiet here?
00:40:161 (38,39) - ^
00:54:383 (49) - cymbal crash here, no voice, change to big kat
02:17:049 (121) - perhaps make it big kat since higher pitch vocal?
02:32:161 (137,138,139) - These notes are quite inaudible, not giving the player good feedback (raise the volume, Jinyan)
02:37:494 - to 02:51:716 - the music is way louder here than in previous point so non-finisher notes are almost completely inaudible, and are thus unrankable.
00:25:049 (28,29) - make these big kats perhaps to fit the higher pitch?
00:33:049 (45) - see suggestion on Kantan
00:39:272 (52) - make this a big kat for consistency with previous patterns
00:40:161 (53) - see suggestion on Kantan
00:46:383 (60) - make this a big kat for consistency with the 2nd suggestion (if applied)
00:57:049 (78) - instrument plays a lower sound here, make this don to show that
00:59:716 (82) - higher pitch here, make this a kat?
01:35:272 (140) - cymbal crash here, make this a big kat
01:47:716 (163) - extend to 01:49:050 - for greater effect?
02:47:272 (258,259,260,261) - make this a dk kK pattern
00:06:161 (6,7,8) - remove 7 for better flow with the music
00:22:383 (49) - maybe make this a don since lower pitch?
00:25:494 (59) - make this a big kat too since emphasis?
00:46:827 - weird...this gap shouldn't be there imo
00:58:161 (156) - move this to where 157 is, delete 157.
01:01:827 (170) - this doesn't fit the music at all, move it 1/4 beat forward
01:08:826 (192,193,194,195) - ??? these don't fit the rhythm, move them all 1/2 beat back
01:27:272 (248,249,250) - maybe make this kkk instead since 1/4 triplets are normally mono-colour in Muzu?
01:35:272 (271) - finisher since this is emphasised?
01:42:383 (294) - ^
01:49:827 (320) - see 01:01:827
01:56:827 (342,343,344,345) - see 01:08:826
02:03:716 (363) - replace with a spinner for greater effect!
02:09:494 - add a note here maybe?
02:17:050 (407,408,409) - see 01:27:272
02:19:268 (412,413,414) - delete these and extend the slider to 414, for better playability :3 (since the song sounds weird at this part...;;)
02:22:827 - add note here perhaps?
Tags conflict with other diffs and there are SO MANY UNSNAPPED OBJECTS please fix them ;~;
00:01:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54) - AAAAAAAAAAA this is way too hard compared to the Muzu's beginning :o
00:31:272 (135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154) - don't map everything in this song please...it's too much of a jump from Muzu. remove some things ;w;
01:01:826 (281) - see the issue in Muzukashii diff, it applies here; the instrument mainly plays on the beat, not on the 3/4 line. you can map 01:01:938 - to make it better like in the next pattern but if you don't want to, put this on the beat
01:06:827 - why such a weird gap here? add a note here since it flows better with the music
01:09:049 - and 01:09:938 - and 01:11:494 - ^
01:42:383 (509) - cymbal crash, make this a big kat for emphasis :3
02:43:712 (918,919,920,921,922,923) - remove 919, 920, 922 and 923, make 918 and 921 finishers
02:51:420 (962,963,964) - this is actually meant to be mapped on 1/8s like this but idk if that would be suitable...
posted

Dainesl wrote:

A Taiko M4M :3 not modding Oni (or at least not in detail) because there's others who can do that better (AKA Taiko BATs >_>)

Lower HP and OD of Muzu and Oni by 1
Increase HP and OD on Futsuu by 1
00:07:272 - add note here to emphasise the vocal :3 here I follow a lil melody sound, would be kinda strange if I follow the melody and suddenly 1 note for vocal
00:25:494 (23) - perhaps make this a big kat to fit with the two notes next to it fix'd
00:33:049 (33) - remove finisher since it goes quiet here?
00:40:161 (38,39) - ^ would be strange if only both of strong guitare note is finish, and not other one
00:54:383 (49) - cymbal crash here, no voice, change to big kat D or K doesn't change a lot, but there's a lil boom with cymbal sound, I prefer keep D
02:17:049 (121) - perhaps make it big kat since higher pitch vocal? fix'd
02:32:161 (137,138,139) - These notes are quite inaudible, not giving the player good feedback (raise the volume, Jinyan) I changed green line for my diffs
02:37:494 - to 02:51:716 - the music is way louder here than in previous point so non-finisher notes are almost completely inaudible, and are thus unrankable. I can hear them at 60%, but changed with other green line
00:25:049 (28,29) - make these big kats perhaps to fit the higher pitch? sound nice, fix'd
00:33:049 (45) - see suggestion on Kantan same as kantan
00:39:272 (52) - make this a big kat for consistency with previous patterns fix'd
00:40:161 (53) - see suggestion on Kantan same as kantan
00:46:383 (60) - make this a big kat for consistency with the 2nd suggestion (if applied) fix'd
00:57:049 (78) - instrument plays a lower sound here, make this don to show that fix'd
00:59:716 (82) - higher pitch here, make this a kat? ^
01:35:272 (140) - cymbal crash here, make this a big kat changed as D
01:47:716 (163) - extend to 01:49:050 - for greater effect? fix'd
02:47:272 (258,259,260,261) - make this a dk kK pattern changed as kk dK
thanks for mod !

update : http://puu.sh/7xsFd.rar
posted

Dainesl wrote:

A Taiko M4M :3 not modding Oni (or at least not in detail) because there's others who can do that better (AKA Taiko BATs >_>)

Lower HP and OD of Muzu and Oni by 1 done
00:06:161 (6,7,8) - remove 7 for better flow with the music "here, it's clear what i mapped, so i don't have to change it, if you want to know about the 1/4 rules for muzukashi ---> t/152263"
00:22:383 (49) - maybe make this a don since lower pitch? " 00:19:716 (40,43,46) - these 3 have k, i don't understand why you told me to change 00:22:383 (49) - and not the other, and personally, i don't see it so lower, so i'll keep it"
00:25:494 (59) - make this a big kat too since emphasis? done
00:46:827 - weird...this gap shouldn't be there imo added a k
00:58:161 (156) - move this to where 157 is, delete 157. Can't see why, i keep it
01:01:827 (170) - this doesn't fit the music at all, move it 1/4 beat forward So about here (i love to explain this part) if you focus well, you'll notice 3 different things, the voice of the singer, the principal music that we hear clearly and at the background, a sound that can be hard to be noticed, and that precisely why i mapped
01:08:826 (192,193,194,195) - ??? these don't fit the rhythm, move them all 1/2 beat back same as ^, i don't want to follow the principal music
01:27:272 (248,249,250) - maybe make this kkk instead since 1/4 triplets are normally mono-colour in Muzu? "well for this, like i said earlier, take a look at these rules t/152263 =)"
01:35:272 (271) - finisher since this is emphasised? done
01:42:383 (294) - ^ done
01:49:827 (320) - see 01:01:827 same as i said above
01:56:827 (342,343,344,345) - see 01:08:826 ^
02:03:716 (363) - replace with a spinner for greater effect! done
02:09:494 - add a note here maybe? don't want, sorry
02:17:050 (407,408,409) - see 01:27:272 t/152263 =)
02:19:268 (412,413,414) - delete these and extend the slider to 414, for better playability :3 (since the song sounds weird at this part...;;) I like this sound, i'll keep it =)
02:22:827 - add note here perhaps? i wanted to make a specific rythm here, if i add, it'll be broken, sorry no
Tags conflict with other diffs and there are SO MANY UNSNAPPED OBJECTS please fix them ;~;
00:01:050 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51,52,53,54) - AAAAAAAAAAA this is way too hard compared to the Muzu's beginning :o OMG, That was horrible long to fix T_T, done
00:31:272 (135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142,143,144,145,146,147,148,149,150,151,152,153,154) - don't map everything in this song please...it's too much of a jump from Muzu. remove some things ;w; it's fits the song, and it's an oni, and one of the only hard things on the map, so i don't think it's really usefull to remove some things, the map will be boring if i do >_>
01:01:826 (281) - see the issue in Muzukashii diff, it applies here; the instrument mainly plays on the beat, not on the 3/4 line. you can map 01:01:938 - to make it better like in the next pattern but if you don't want to, put this on the beat exactly the same thing i said for the muzu, followed the background sond, not the principal beat
01:06:827 - why such a weird gap here? add a note here since it flows better with the music ^
01:09:049 - and 01:09:938 - and 01:11:494 - ^ ^
01:42:383 (509) - cymbal crash, make this a big kat for emphasis :3 done
02:43:712 (918,919,920,921,922,923) - remove 919, 920, 922 and 923, make 918 and 921 finishers i didn't want to map the K sound
02:51:420 (962,963,964) - this is actually meant to be mapped on 1/8s like this but idk if that would be suitable... i know that this part is meant to be mapped on 1/8, but i don't know if BAT will accept, so i mapped on 1/6 for bringing the rythm closer to the 1/8 beat, i think i'll make 1/8 and see what BAT will say
Thank you so much for this Mod dainesl >_<
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Taiko Mod Request by Jinyan
Only Kin's Kantan and Futsuu have been done so far. I will do the Muzu and Oni some other day
Kantan
00:01:050 (1) - change to big K (to accentuate the loud cymbal sound)
01:05:049 - Change to d (Lower pitch)
02:03:494 - Change to D D (1/2 beat snap) starting from 02:03:272 (There are clearly two loud cymbal noises - copy as the same as Futsuu)
02:44:161 - This should be a finisher (big K) to match the pattern at 00:25:049 (22,23,24)
02:48:161 (155,156) - These should be both finishers, big K and D consecutively

Futsuu
00:01:050 (1) - change to big K (to accentuate the loud cymbal sound)
00:21:716 (20,21) - move the dk to 00:21:494 - and add a d on 00:21:938 - to make a dkd. (Kinda feels awkward with that little gap there but another reason is to match the notes on 00:28:605 (34,35,36,37)
00:31:716 (42) - Change to d (Pitch goes lower and flows better with the previous dk)
00:31:716 (42) - Add a d here
01:43:716 - Change to d here (Pitch goes high on the next note)
01:46:383 - Change to d (Vocal pitch falls down on this note and increases on the next note)
01:47:272 - Add a d here
01:55:272 - Add a d here (Flows better with that d)
02:25:494 - Add a k here
posted

xWillx wrote:

Taiko Mod Request by Jinyan
Only Kin's Kantan and Futsuu have been done so far. I will do the Muzu and Oni some other day
Kantan
00:01:050 (1) - change to big K (to accentuate the loud cymbal sound) I prefer keep d, because here, I'm following the lil synth sound
01:05:049 - Change to d (Lower pitch) it's higher pitch than previous one
02:03:494 - Change to D D (1/2 beat snap) starting from 02:03:272 (There are clearly two loud cymbal noises - copy as the same as Futsuu) I'm not really sure about it, because 1/2 D may be kinda hard, also fix'd
02:44:161 - This should be a finisher (big K) to match the pattern at 00:25:049 (22,23,24) fix'd
02:48:161 (155,156) - These should be both finishers, big K and D consecutively fix'd

Futsuu
00:01:050 (1) - change to big K (to accentuate the loud cymbal sound) fix'd
00:21:716 (20,21) - move the dk to 00:21:494 - and add a d on 00:21:938 - to make a dkd. (Kinda feels awkward with that little gap there but another reason is to match the notes on 00:28:605 (34,35,36,37) I changed this pattern
00:31:716 (42) - Change to d (Pitch goes lower and flows better with the previous dk) fix'd + changed the next pattern
00:31:716 (42) - Add a d here you failed your paste <_<
01:43:716 - Change to d here (Pitch goes high on the next note) fix'd
01:46:383 - Change to d (Vocal pitch falls down on this note and increases on the next note) fix'd
01:47:272 - Add a d here I prefer let a blank here
01:55:272 - Add a d here (Flows better with that d)
02:25:494 - Add a k here not fix'd for the 3
http://puu.sh/7I2z3.rar
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Sorry late Mod. Request from you. ( via PM ) Short check Mod.
[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that



[ General]


  1. Muzu.Oni Use 'S' => 'N'


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[ Kantan]
  1. okay


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[ Futsuu]
  1. okay

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[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:43:493 (105,106) - Swap. ( 00:41:937 (104) - 00:40:160 (102) - This note => D . why 00:43:715 (106) - K ? )

  2. 00:50:826 (128,129) - move 00:50:605 (128,129) - ? ( 00:50:605 (128) - Have a sound )

  3. 00:54:826 (144) - ~ 01:01:048 (168) - dkdkd ×5 ... Change perttern ?

  4. 01:01:827 (171) - ? move 01:01:938 (171) -

  5. 01:02:383 - add d Here ? ( 01:02:604 (172,173) - Unnatural )

  6. 01:03:605 (175) - move 01:03:494 (175) - and 01:03:716 - add d Here ? ( follow sound )

  7. 01:08:826 (194,195,196) - It's placed in the red line unnatural

  8. 01:12:160 (206) - Veru long slider... Change put note ?


Sorry short mod ;w; GL :3~
posted

toara_fict wrote:

Sorry late Mod. Request from you. ( via PM ) Short check Mod.
[ about]
  1. d is don note
  2. k is kat note
  3. D is Finish don note
  4. K is Finish kat note

  5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
  6. Green is I would strongly recommend
  7. black is Pointed out that



[ General]


  1. Muzu.Oni Use 'S' => 'N'

    changed the last S to N and added the volume for the others


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[ Kantan]
  1. okay


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[ Futsuu]
  1. okay

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[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:43:493 (105,106) - Swap. ( 00:41:937 (104) - 00:40:160 (102) - This note => D . why 00:43:715 (106) - K ? ) Because the music ask it, as at the K the sound is a little more acute the where the D is

  2. 00:50:826 (128,129) - move 00:50:605 (128,129) - ? ( 00:50:605 (128) - Have a sound ) Yes, there's a sound here, i didn't had to do overmap here as it's just a muzu, each note have a sound

  3. 00:54:826 (144) - ~ 01:01:048 (168) - dkdkd ×5 ... Change perttern ? hum, honestly i couln'd find something else to put here, but if i find something, i'll change

  4. 01:01:827 (171) - ? move 01:01:938 (171) -

  5. 01:02:383 - add d Here ? ( 01:02:604 (172,173) - Unnatural )

  6. 01:03:605 (175) - move 01:03:494 (175) - and 01:03:716 - add d Here ? ( follow sound )

  7. 01:08:826 (194,195,196) - It's placed in the red line unnatural for the three mods above: so about here, as i said at the other mods, i've followed the background music, it's not noticeable easily, but it's there, every note is on a sound

  8. 01:12:160 (206) - Veru long slider... Change put note ? It's the only slider of the map, lets just leave X)


Sorry short mod ;w; GL :3~
thank you for your help >_<
posted
Yo, encore désolé du retard

General
Comme jt'avais dit en mp, on entend jamais la musique ing si on la joue pas (à cause de preview point), pour corriger ça :
mets toi à - 01:15:605 - (ou l'endroit où tu veux entendre la musique quand tu choisis la map, perso ce timing me parait bien), clic sur l'option Timing en haut et fais "Définir le point de prévisualisation à la position actuelle".
Et oublis pas de décocher le widescreen support pour chaque diff, dans l'onglet design quand tu fais song setup.

[Kin's Kantan]
- déplaces 00:30:827 (30) - à - 00:29:049 - et ajoutes d ou k à - 00:31:716 - ? colle + avec ta structure de - 00:21:494 -.
- 02:03:494 (109) - mm pas très conseiller du'tiliser un DD 1/2 sachant que y'en a aucun autre sur la diff, jt'aurais bien dit de le del + add un truc genre spinner à - 02:03:716 - mais la diff c'est rip spinner donc idk x_x.
- 02:23:272 (130) - passes le en k et déplaces - 02:23:716 (131) - à - 02:24:605 - ? colle + avec ta strucure de - 02:09:938 -. Passer le premier d en k est un must en tout cas imo, ça rend mieux que tu déplaces le k suivant ou non.
- 02:49:938 - mm t'a oublié un truc ou c'est volontaire ? je vois pas trop de justification.

[kin's Futsuu]
les dk kd fonctionnent mal ici imo, ça copie qu'une partie de la mélodie qui fait dkdk ou kdkd et ça rend le truc un peu bizarre à jouer j'pense. les 1/2 su kiai marchent mieux par contre pour la voix.
- déplaces - 00:24:383 (29) - à - 00:24:161 - en d ? j'comprend dk kd mais c'est bizarre à jouer imo x_x.
- 00:29:272 (39) - ^ ça aère le finisher en+.
- 00:31:049 (43) - cette fois déplaces celui 1/2 après ?
- 01:29:176 (138) - 1/2 plus tôt ?
- 02:14:383 (209) - ^.
- 02:21:049 (218) - ^.
- même à la fin que c'que j'ai suggéré au début.

[Muzukashii]
les patterns 1/4 différents de kkk ou ddd c'est risqué (les autres modders vont probablement en parler ,_, genre - 00:06:161 (6,7,8) - etc. J'pense pas que ça soit trop dûr mais bon les gens sont trop bornés ajd donc bonne chance.
- 00:31:049 (80) - en k et - 00:32:161 (84) - en d ? ça suit mieux la mélodie et colle un peu plus avec tes autres patterns autours.
- 00:34:605 (91) - D ?
- 01:06:827 - ajoutes d ici et déplaces - 01:07:049 (187) - à - 01:07:161 - ? on dirait que t'as chois ce petit son à suivre ici (et c'est cool imo) donc autant le suivre sur tout la partie.
- 01:08:605 - ^ (plutôt un finisher cette fois).
- 01:09:938 - ajoutes un truc ici (k?) et déplaces - 01:10:605 (198) - à - 01:10:716 - ? ^.
- 01:33:494 (264,265,266,267) - mby passes les en d ? plus simple à jouer la transition 1/3 - 1/2 après.
- 01:53:049 - à partir d'ici même chose que c'que j'ai proposé vers - 01:06:827 - etc, pourquoi pas continuer à suivre le petit rythme avec les blue lines comme - 01:53:383 - etc.
- 02:19:272 - manques de break sur l'ensemble de notes ici.
- 02:49:716 - k ?

[Oni]
beaucoup trop de d pas nécessaires au début qu'est hyper calme imo, à toi de voir si tu peux faire plus soft.
- 00:34:605 (154) - d ?
- 01:01:827 - ressemble un peu à la muzu ici, pourquoi pas faire légèrement plus dense en rajoutant des notes aux endroits types - 01:02:161 -, - 01:05:716 -, - 01:06:827 - etc.
- 01:09:938 - et - 01:10:827 - sans notes ç fait vraiment bizarre imo.
- del - 01:15:124 (334,335) - et mets un finisher à la dernière note ? y'a un mini break dans la song ici.
- 01:24:049 (394) - ce d sonne mieux 1/4 avant imo, pour le vocal surtout.
- 01:33:494 (454,455,456,457) - ils sonnent juste mieux en d imo idk.
- 01:49:494 - Cette partie est bien plus cool à jouer que la première j'trouve (cette où j'ai dit que ça ressemblais à la muzu).
- 02:03:124 (651,652) - del ? encore un mini break et la dernière note en finisher serait bien encore.
- 02:13:827 (729) - pareil qu'au premier kiai.
- mm le dernier stream avec les 1/6 pourrait être amélioré j'pense.
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