The Downtown Fiction - Circles · forum

-Teina-

Joined October 2013

-Teina- 2014-02-10T18:36:30+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
[Hard]
00:12:859 (6) - X:165 Y:136 嗯
00:20:685 (5,6) - 這2個是一組但1個SLIDER 1個就是圈咦我感觉前面那是有两个音啊個人感覺不同吧...~
00:14:000 - / 00:24:435 - 相同的節奏但距離不同令人太難跟不怎么构成问题叠在底下反而不好读
00:28:511 (7,8,9) - 長短節奏/拍子但客觀距離太近容易出現誤讀关系不大已经贴够近
01:07:315 (6,7,1,2,3,4) - 覺得不是完美的十字形(個人感覺) 尽量调了一下儿=。=
01:38:620 (5) - X:305 Y:143 不太好会破坏我的blanket
01:47:098 (11) - X:510 Y:262 改了
02:48:354 - 可以加個note 不加也沒問題太勉强
整體上排板非常好
但距離前後不一有點難跟拍子
距離錯誤只說了一個小部份都有這個問題 (如果距離沒問題的話就可以了可能我的技術還未打到這個難度所以感到很奇怪吧~)
還有有空的話抽空補回NC (00:59:489 (7) - ETC) 觉得没必要

感謝你能抽空寫下你改了什麼~^o^~

Kayano

1,286 posts

Joined July 2011

Kayano 2014-02-11T06:33:54+00:00

Mod request from Popner's Modding Team
I wanna M4M (划掉)

Red - Unrankable
Purple - Highly recommended
Black - You'd better fixed
Gray - Just suggestion

General
Not AIMod
Error: [Hard] 02:25:576 有重叠的timing线
Error: [Hard] 02:43:906 有重叠的timing线
Error: [Hard] 02:45:218 有重叠的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 02:45:218 有多余的timing线
Error: [Hard] 02:58:424 有重叠的timing线
Error: [Hard] 02:59:488 有重叠的timing线
Error: [Hard] 01:08:185 timing线在物件之后
Error: [Hard] 01:08:294 timing线在物件之后
Error: [Hard] 01:08:240 物件未对齐时间轴
Error: [Hard] 02:04:381 timing线在物件之后
Error: [Hard] 03:01:215 物件未对齐时间轴
Warning: [Irie's Easy] 02:12:859 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 00:51:989 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 00:52:641 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 01:36:337 有多余的timing线
Error: [Normal] 02:43:906 有重叠的timing线
Error: [Normal] 02:45:218 有重叠的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 02:45:218 有多余的timing线

Irie's Easy

00:13:511 (1) - 在00:14:000 - 回转一下吧
01:46:120 (3,1) - *nazi* 包歪了

Normal
00:13:511 (1) - 开头和结尾也加whistle吧理由见Hard（我倒着摸的但是模版是顺着的xD）后面00:18:728 (1) - 之类的同
00:15:141 (2) - 这个note现在的位置有低音往前放1/4是跟吉他我觉得后者更舒服一点你可以考虑一下 fixed的话顺带加上whistle 后面的也一起改了
01:24:924 (2,3) - 把2 CTRL+G掉 flow会顺点 01:26:065 - 有个重音所以把3改成回转中间Sampleset Normal
02:25:902 (4) - 首尾soft whistle跟吉他

Hard
00:15:467 - 听得出来你是用whistle跟吉他那么我觉得这里也应该有一个whistle 一来这里也有个吉他音二来00:14:000 - 00:14:489 - 00:14:978 - 每隔3/4放whistle的节奏可以保持下来和后面一个whistle的衔接也能连贯一点
00:13:511 - 加whistle 纯推荐理由跟上面的差不多总之加着好听顺带如果你这两个都fixed的话后面类似的地方比如00:18:728 - 00:20:685 - 也要加
00:18:565 (7) - 额这个地方我觉得可以remove掉whistle（当然我知道这里有吉他音但是感觉往后移1/4再whistle会更舒服而且你之前00:13:348 (8) - 地方也没加……当然如果这条没采纳的话 00:13:348 (8) - 加whistle）
00:23:783 (7) - ^ 后面不说了
00:23:294 (6,7,1) - 这里的flow感觉不太好打着的时候6和7太近挺难受的
00:58:185 - remove whistle 本身这个地方背景音就很静前面几个类似处结尾都没有whistle所以我觉得不加为宜后面01:03:076 (1,2,3) - 有加制造出了类似回声的效果很赞如果你要参考这个地方加的话我觉得也不错
01:18:728 (1,2) - 这个地方和歌曲开头差不多 1的开头推荐加whistle 而你如果还是跟吉他下whistle的话1结尾的whistle应该移到2上
01:38:620 (5,6) - 分别CTRL+G一下如何 flow会更顺手一点点点
01:45:141 - remove whistle 理由之前说过了
02:06:826 (4) - Sampleset Normal 和02:01:609 (4) - 保持一致
02:18:076 (8,9,12) - 纯属个人爱好加soft-whistle （改的话记得Normal难度也要改）
02:25:576 (5,6) - 5的结尾以及6的开头和中间加whistle跟吉他音 6的中间Sampleset Drum因为你前后的红线上都是这么加的
02:50:486 (1) - missing whistle
02:54:296 (2) - 加个whistle跟吉他

That's all. Good Luck~

用中文来mod就是ber爽23333

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2014-02-12T17:55:08+00:00

From my queue~
[Irie's Easy]
00:10:902 (1) -Remove note.
00:18:076 (2) -Move it a little bit up with DS.
00:18:728 (1,2,3,1,2) -DS
00:32:750 (2) -Remove finish.
00:37:967 (2) -^
00:43:185 -^
01:05:033 (3) -^
01:51:989 (3) -^

GL ~ ! Star.

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-02-12T18:25:16+00:00

wut 竟然有人只摸easy 我真是受宠若惊我醒了改摸睡了

Winek

887 posts

Joined September 2013

Winek 2014-02-19T00:05:19+00:00

Hello! From No Dap's Modding queue.

[Irie's Easy]

Feedbacks
It's a really nice difficulty, I don't think there is nothing wrong, so i'll try giving out some suggestion. My First one is: Try blanketing more? For Easy difficulty, as notes are slow, You can make greats blankets that can improve the mapset. There are already alot ; I know. But these : 01:05:685 (1,2) Like example could be blanket. My 2nd one is for every note like 00:15:467 (2) - What about adding a whistle here? I really think the note is a bit too silencious.. This apply to other similar notes.

[Normal]

Feedbacks
Again it's really great. Your entire mapset is really great. Though i have some suggestions.
00:25:902 (3) - I think you can increase of 1/4 ticks, since it has a good effect. Due to low BPM, going on 1/4 tick is okay on Normals.
00:31:772 (1) - Applying to other notes similar - I think you should reduce of 1/4 tick. The actual is great but followin more the vocals would be even better.
00:38:946 (3) - What about adding a reverse arrow here? It will cover the music enough.
00:56:554 (3,4,5) - This somehow break the flow ; Try making it goes one sided wave ; It will be prettier.
01:25:902 (3) - What about reducing this slider of 1/4 tick and adding a reverse arrow? Or even add a circle. I think it will fits better for covering the music. I think you should also add a note here at 01:26:391 or expend the reverse arrow up to here.
01:51:500 (4) - I think it would be better without this note.

[Hard]
Got my suggestion.
00:18:728 (1) - What about removing the reverse arrow? I think it will fits better.
00:23:294 (6,7) - This overlap isn't really pretty. What about stacking the end of (6) and (7) together?
01:31:120 (5,6,7,1) - What about doing this: http://puu.sh/71w24/65843b9351.jpg I think fitting the vocals here is the best.
02:59:488 (2,3,4) - You must NC these note due to BPM/SV change.

Feedbacks
Very good diffuclty. I really like it. Nothing wrong with it, just the NC at the end.

I really know this map is ready for Bubble. Good luck on it!

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2014-02-19T07:15:38+00:00

OniJAM wrote:
Mod request from Popner's Modding Team
I wanna M4M (划掉)

Red - Unrankable
Purple - Highly recommended
Black - You'd better fixed
Gray - Just suggestion
General
Not AIMod
Error: [Hard] 02:25:576 有重叠的timing线
Error: [Hard] 02:43:906 有重叠的timing线
Error: [Hard] 02:45:218 有重叠的timing线
Warning: [Hard] 02:45:218 有多余的timing线
Error: [Hard] 02:58:424 有重叠的timing线
Error: [Hard] 02:59:488 有重叠的timing线
Error: [Hard] 01:08:185 timing线在物件之后
Error: [Hard] 01:08:294 timing线在物件之后
Error: [Hard] 01:08:240 物件未对齐时间轴
Error: [Hard] 02:04:381 timing线在物件之后
Error: [Hard] 03:01:215 物件未对齐时间轴
Warning: [Irie's Easy] 02:12:859 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 00:51:989 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 00:52:641 有多余的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 01:36:337 有多余的timing线
Error: [Normal] 02:43:906 有重叠的timing线
Error: [Normal] 02:45:218 有重叠的timing线
Warning: [Normal] 02:45:218 有多余的timing线
需要改的都改了有的完全是误报啊=。=

Normal
00:13:511 (1) - 开头和结尾也加whistle吧理由见Hard（我倒着摸的但是模版是顺着的xD）后面00:18:728 (1) - 之类的同觉得那样太多了我基本都只加了相对音调教高的音
00:15:141 (2) - 这个note现在的位置有低音往前放1/4是跟吉他我觉得后者更舒服一点你可以考虑一下 fixed的话顺带加上whistle 后面的也一起改了这么比较困扰确实放到蓝线不错但是作为Normal diff就有点不太好把握所以只能这样了也不算坏
01:24:924 (2,3) - 把2 CTRL+G掉 flow会顺点 01:26:065 - 有个重音所以把3改成回转中间Sampleset Normal 不太想改要动太多东西了而且现在这样也没什么问题 3的那个地方我是考虑吉他的
02:25:902 (4) - 首尾soft whistle跟吉他还是加太多

Hard
00:15:467 - 听得出来你是用whistle跟吉他那么我觉得这里也应该有一个whistle 一来这里也有个吉他音二来00:14:000 - 00:14:489 - 00:14:978 - 每隔3/4放whistle的节奏可以保持下来和后面一个whistle的衔接也能连贯一点我是加在高音的地方这样感觉合适一些不然吉他很多连续四分拍的音全都加的话就太夸张了
00:13:511 - 加whistle 纯推荐理由跟上面的差不多总之加着好听顺带如果你这两个都fixed的话后面类似的地方比如00:18:728 - 00:20:685 - 也要加
00:18:565 (7) - 额这个地方我觉得可以remove掉whistle（当然我知道这里有吉他音但是感觉往后移1/4再whistle会更舒服而且你之前00:13:348 (8) - 地方也没加……当然如果这条没采纳的话 00:13:348 (8) - 加whistle）一样的这个地方有比较明显的音我就加了而且比后面音调高
00:23:783 (7) - ^ 后面不说了
00:23:294 (6,7,1) - 这里的flow感觉不太好打着的时候6和7太近挺难受的我觉得没什么大不了的只不过是走到一半儿不走了转一下儿笔的事儿
00:58:185 - remove whistle 本身这个地方背景音就很静前面几个类似处结尾都没有whistle所以我觉得不加为宜后面01:03:076 (1,2,3) - 有加制造出了类似回声的效果很赞如果你要参考这个地方加的话我觉得也不错 kiai里面whistle我也都是跟着吉他走的
01:18:728 (1,2) - 这个地方和歌曲开头差不多 1的开头推荐加whistle 而你如果还是跟吉他下whistle的话1结尾的whistle应该移到2上是的
01:38:620 (5,6) - 分别CTRL+G一下如何 flow会更顺手一点点点这个想法确实不赖不过我还是比较喜欢在6那个重音的时候去底下抓滑条的感觉=。= 改了的话距离就小了
01:45:141 - remove whistle 理由之前说过了
02:06:826 (4) - Sampleset Normal 和02:01:609 (4) - 保持一致其实应该是drum 这个地方不一致
02:18:076 (8,9,12) - 纯属个人爱好加soft-whistle （改的话记得Normal难度也要改）呃……没需求
02:25:576 (5,6) - 5的结尾以及6的开头和中间加whistle跟吉他音 6的中间Sampleset Drum因为你前后的红线上都是这么加的没有啊这里没有鼓啊orz
02:50:486 (1) - missing whistle 好的
02:54:296 (2) - 加个whistle跟吉他还是有点多音调低的都没考虑
That's all. Good Luck~
用中文来mod就是ber爽23333

Winek wrote:
Hello! From No Dap's Modding queue.

[Normal]

Feedbacks
Again it's really great. Your entire mapset is really great. Though i have some suggestions.
00:25:902 (3) - I think you can increase of 1/4 ticks, since it has a good effect. Due to low BPM, going on 1/4 tick is okay on Normals. nice idea
00:31:772 (1) - Applying to other notes similar - I think you should reduce of 1/4 tick. The actual is great but followin more the vocals would be even better. no it's better to have that basic drum
00:38:946 (3) - What about adding a reverse arrow here? It will cover the music enough. reasonable, but too much for a Normal
00:56:554 (3,4,5) - This somehow break the flow ; Try making it goes one sided wave ; It will be prettier. currently just fine to me, just like a big wave slider
01:25:902 (3) - What about reducing this slider of 1/4 tick and adding a reverse arrow? Or even add a circle. I think it will fits better for covering the music. I think you should also add a note here at 01:26:391 or expend the reverse arrow up to here. too much for this diff as well
01:51:500 (4) - I think it would be better without this note. there is drum sound imo

[Hard]
Got my suggestion.
00:18:728 (1) - What about removing the reverse arrow? I think it will fits better. it's ok, but as I've already done all similar ones like this, I don't feel like a change now
00:23:294 (6,7) - This overlap isn't really pretty. What about stacking the end of (6) and (7) together? fine as it is
01:31:120 (5,6,7,1) - What about doing this: http://puu.sh/71w24/65843b9351.jpg I think fitting the vocals here is the best. sorry I don't really care about the vocal, English pronunciation is not always accurately on-beat, so I always just rather let it go
02:59:488 (2,3,4) - You must NC these note due to BPM/SV change. considerate

Feedbacks
Very good diffuclty. I really like it. Nothing wrong with it, just the NC at the end.

I really know this map is ready for Bubble. I don't dare to be blunt like you lol Good luck on it!

thx for your mods~

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-02-19T15:17:26+00:00

Lapis Aoki wrote:
From my queue~
[Irie's Easy]
00:10:902 (1) -Remove note.
00:18:076 (2) -Move it a little bit up with DS.
00:18:728 (1,2,3,1,2) -DS
00:32:750 (2) -Remove finish.
00:37:967 (2) -^
00:43:185 -^
01:05:033 (3) -^
01:51:989 (3) -^

GL ~ ! Star.

fixed the DS stuff, thanks for modding

Winek wrote:
Hello! From No Dap's Modding queue.

[Irie's Easy]

Feedbacks
It's a really nice difficulty, I don't think there is nothing wrong, so i'll try giving out some suggestion. My First one is: Try blanketing more? For Easy difficulty, as notes are slow, You can make greats blankets that can improve the mapset. There are already alot ; I know. But these : 01:05:685 (1,2) Like example could be blanket.
hmm I'd say I would like to keep balance between straight sliders and curvy ones.

My 2nd one is for every note like 00:15:467 (2) - What about adding a whistle here? I really think the note is a bit too silencious.. This apply to other similar notes.lol added

thanks for your mod

--

我也懒了

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Oriance

87 posts

Joined May 2013

Oriance 2014-02-20T01:27:26+00:00

Yes Yes, Hello! Random mod you requested

[General]
Shouldn't it be Pineapple - EP for the album? Add EP to the tags.

[Irie's Easy]
Go through each of your notes and sliders to see if DS is correct. Little minor problem, but just to be safe.

00:26:554 (1) - Add a whistle on the end here? I find it strange how this slider has no whistles but in the next it does (Checked it with zero's diffs, and it has it too)
00:47:424 (1,2) - Try something like this?

zz

It feels strange to just have a slider repeating when the beat is really strong. The third slider is for the lead in to the chorus for novelty, You can extend it to 00:49:707 if you want...
01:08:620 - I feel that this is more appropriate for a spinner, the music fades away until 01:10:902.
02:14:815 (2) - If you were planning to blanket this to the previous slider, move it up a bit.

Nothing out of place, pretty straightforward, pretty easy... LOL. Nothing here that hurts the flow or anything, plays like a dream.

All I can say is, make sure to check your hitsounds!

[Normal]
01:25:902 (3) - I think this is more appropriate for a triplet like 01:36:337 (6,7,8) because of 01:26:065. Such a strong beat here. If you do follow this, change 01:26:554 (1) to a slider.
02:58:424 (1,2) - This can be blanketed a little bit better by pulling the middle tick away a little bit.

[Hard]
Really, really fun I don't know why but I thought this was CS 5...

00:42:044 (7) - I don't think theres any need for the middle point in this slider, it isn't like the ones like 00:40:739 (4). A 1/2 slider fits more accurately imo.
00:47:424 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I was expecting to see a pattern until it went to 00:49:054 (1). How about try making a shape like this?

zz

then you can follow it up with the line...

zz

01:46:446 (7,8,9,10,11) - It's all well but that last note ruins the look of things (Dammit screen!) Try changing this to a star maybe?

All diff's are really nice, can't find any more things that are out of the ordinary or strange (sorry!)... Make sure to check your hitsounds too zero! Hope this helps e.e

Zero__wind

osu! Alumni

3,314 posts

Joined August 2012

Topic Starter

Zero__wind 2014-02-20T02:39:00+00:00

Oriance wrote:
Yes Yes, Hello! Random mod you requested

[General]
Shouldn't it be Pineapple - EP for the album? Add EP to the tags. ah I see, I haven't been that considerate

[Normal]
01:25:902 (3) - I think this is more appropriate for a triplet like 01:36:337 (6,7,8) because of 01:26:065. Such a strong beat here. If you do follow this, change 01:26:554 (1) to a slider. lol everyone is talking about this, but I want to keep it as slider, focusing more on the guitar sound, which I think is more special
02:58:424 (1,2) - This can be blanketed a little bit better by pulling the middle tick away a little bit. tried to do so

[Hard]
Really, really fun I don't know why but I thought this was CS 5... 0.0 that would be too jumpy with spacing like this

00:42:044 (7) - I don't think theres any need for the middle point in this slider, it isn't like the ones like 00:40:739 (4). A 1/2 slider fits more accurately imo. I got your pattern, but I think it doesn't hurt to arrange like this as I've already formed a rhythm pattern in this part so it wouldd be pretty intuitive
00:47:424 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I was expecting to see a pattern until it went to 00:49:054 (1). How about try making a shape like this?
zz
then you can follow it up with the line...
zz
it currently flows better, and also, a jump from 5 to 1 is forced, after all, I build up the hexagon. It's common that some beautiful patterns could only be noticed by observant people
01:46:446 (7,8,9,10,11) - It's all well but that last note ruins the look of things (Dammit screen!) Try changing this to a star maybe? ah ikr what you're venting on, but well, don't worry, at least 9 10 11 formed a regular triangle

All diff's are really nice, can't find any more things that are out of the ordinary or strange (sorry!)... Make sure to check your hitsounds too zero! Hope this helps e.e

thx for the mod

Irie Miyuki

388 posts

Joined October 2010

Irie Miyuki 2014-02-20T05:48:09+00:00

Oriance wrote:
[Irie's Easy]
Go through each of your notes and sliders to see if DS is correct. Little minor problem, but just to be safe. fixed some 1.05x >_>

00:26:554 (1) - Add a whistle on the end here? I find it strange how this slider has no whistles but in the next it does (Checked it with zero's diffs, and it has it too) i copied the hitsounds works from his diff lol so i'd like to keep it consistent with his diffs
00:47:424 (1,2) - Try something like this?
zz
It feels strange to just have a slider repeating when the beat is really strong. The third slider is for the lead in to the chorus for novelty, You can extend it to 00:49:707 if you want... uh i followed the drum sound currently and it does work well to emphasize the next downbeat
01:08:620 - I feel that this is more appropriate for a spinner, the music fades away until 01:10:902. i guess it would be hard for a newbie to click next circle in 1 beat after a spinner, so i would keep this unchanged :3
02:14:815 (2) - If you were planning to blanket this to the previous slider, move it up a bit. ok fixed

Nothing out of place, pretty straightforward, pretty easy... LOL. Nothing here that hurts the flow or anything, plays like a dream.

All I can say is, make sure to check your hitsounds!

thanks for your mod xD

还是懒

SPOILER

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Zero's Edit:
Updated Easy diff

Strawberry

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Strawberry 2014-03-17T16:02:42+00:00

hello//

[General]

for the overall diffs i think they are integrally overtopped the levels described by their Difficulty, "Normal" - "Hard" - "Insane" should be more reasonable.

[Easy]

00:51:989 (3) - weird to have whistle on that start with hitnormal.. would be better to remove the whistle here imo.(same at 00:57:207 (3) - 01:02:424 (3) - 01:38:946 (3) - 01:49:381 (3) -
01:16:120 - i'd prefer to raise 10% volume here for sticking the finish out since i think there should be a downbeat.
01:58:511 (2,3) - how about to set whistles on the start of slider(3) and (4)'s tail, suitable for vocal imo.
02:12:859 - idk what is the use of the inherited point however i feel the finish here should be lighter(for extruding the following finish?). i'd like to decrease the volume to 30% and then set another new inherited point at 02:12:207 (2) - with 50% volume back.
02:58:424 ~03:01:157 - overmuch whistles breaking the feeling of there and i believe we could just retain two whistles on start of slider(3) and ending of (4).

[Normal]

02:27:533 (3) - removing the whistle on that head? since the bgm has turned into low here.
02:37:098 (7) - feel better to decrease the volume for the music.

[Hard]

00:23:783 (7) - 这里whistle感觉不太好吧..
00:56:391 (3) - same as easy diff

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2014-03-18T07:51:48+00:00

Strawberry wrote:
hello//

[General]
for the overall diffs i think they are integrally overtopped the levels described by their Difficulty, "Normal" - "Hard" - "Insane" should be more reasonable. is this must? I feel that the Easy/Normal would be too easy as a Normal/Hard diff so I'd personaly prefer to keep them
[Easy]
00:51:989 (3) - weird to have whistle on that start with hitnormal.. would be better to remove the whistle here imo.(same at 00:57:207 (3) - 01:02:424 (3) - 01:38:946 (3) - 01:49:381 (3) - the whistles are set according to the guitar sound, I suppose they should be fine as they are
01:16:120 - i'd prefer to raise 10% volume here for sticking the finish out since i think there should be a downbeat. ok, applied in all diffs
01:58:511 (2,3) - how about to set whistles on the start of slider(3) and (4)'s tail, suitable for vocal imo. ok, added on all the vocal "I"
02:12:859 - idk what is the use of the inherited point however i feel the finish here should be lighter(for extruding the following finish?). i'd like to decrease the volume to 30% and then set another new inherited point at 02:12:207 (2) - with 50% volume back. good, made it consistent with other two diffs
02:58:424 ~03:01:157 - overmuch whistles breaking the feeling of there and i believe we could just retain two whistles on start of slider(3) and ending of (4). yes you're right, also did for the other diffs
[Normal]
02:27:533 (3) - removing the whistle on that head? since the bgm has turned into low here. pl, also for Hard
02:37:098 (7) - feel better to decrease the volume for the music. eh, I think it's currently fine, to turn down the volume after that
[Hard]
00:23:783 (7) - 这里whistle感觉不太好吧.. there's a different tone of the guitar so I think it should be fine as it is
00:56:391 (3) - same as easy diff should be just fine =.=

thx for the mod~ updated!

Strawberry

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Strawberry 2014-03-18T14:16:45+00:00

love this song. :>

Re-checked. ~~Bubbled~!

Irie Miyuki

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Irie Miyuki 2014-03-20T15:23:51+00:00

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Last edited by Irie Miyuki 2015-02-03T10:20:13+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Shohei Ohtani

Shohei Ohtani 2014-04-26T18:36:52+00:00

hahaha lmao

DakeDekaane

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DakeDekaane 2014-05-20T07:35:16+00:00

This is not going to be bubbled forever

[General]
I feel like the space in Normal-Hard is a bit high, Hard is jumpy but not too much, so I guess it'd be fine, just wanted to comment this.

[Hard]
00:14:000 (2) - Use a 1/4 slider instead? the beat in 00:14:163 is stronger than 00:14:326, so it feels a bit weird passing over it.
00:19:217 (2) - ^
00:51:663 (5) - Use a circle here instead? the slider isn't bad (your hitsounding helps here), but I think the pause fits better. (Also you did it in 01:02:098).
00:54:272 (6) - ^
01:15:467 (1) - I think a 1/2 slider would fit better, as there's a stronger guitar hit there (and maybe increase the speed a bit if you do).
01:38:620 (5) - Use a circle here, already explained above.
01:43:837 (5) - Well, if you've been doing what I pointed above, keep the 1/2 rhythm here for consistency.
01:59:815 (6,1,2) - I know you're keeping consistency on NC'ing, but having the NC on (2) would be better so you keep the "I know, I know" (or whatever the singer says) in a single combo

02:05:033 (5,1,2) - Similar as above.
02:29:163 (1) - Is this snapped in 1/16 on purpose? If not, better fix it.
02:37:098 (1) - Maybe remove NC?

[Normal]
00:36:337 (4,1) - You could improve the blanket here.
01:36:826 - I feel like a note is missing here, it'd introduce the kiai better imo.
01:59:815 (4,1,2) - As in Hard.
02:05:033 (4,1,2) - ^

[Easy]
02:37:098 (1) - Remove NC? This could still belong to previous combo.

That'd be all I'd want to suggest here, I loved the mapset, poke me when you're done :3

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2014-05-22T01:18:56+00:00

DakeDekaane wrote:
This is not going to be bubbled forever

[General]
I feel like the space in Normal-Hard is a bit high, Hard is jumpy but not too much, so I guess it'd be fine, just wanted to comment this. yeah a little =.=

[Hard]
00:14:000 (2) - Use a 1/4 slider instead? the beat in 00:14:163 is stronger than 00:14:326, so it feels a bit weird passing over it. ok changed to 1/4 reverse =.= I like my previous pattern quite well though
00:19:217 (2) - ^ as well
00:51:663 (5) - Use a circle here instead? the slider isn't bad (your hitsounding helps here), but I think the pause fits better. (Also you did it in 01:02:098). I really feel like to keep this, replacing it with a circle makes this pattern less flowy imo, a bit poor to me
00:54:272 (6) - ^ also kept this, and for the similar ones, they're pretty consistent? lol
01:15:467 (1) - I think a 1/2 slider would fit better, as there's a stronger guitar hit there (and maybe increase the speed a bit if you do). I tried this one,really but I feel it's rather less impressive if it isn't dragged up longer and then go down boom* lol
01:38:620 (5) - Use a circle here, already explained above.
01:43:837 (5) - Well, if you've been doing what I pointed above, keep the 1/2 rhythm here for consistency.
01:59:815 (6,1,2) - I know you're keeping consistency on NC'ing, but having the NC on (2) would be better so you keep the "I know, I know" (or whatever the singer says) in a single combo reasonable
02:05:033 (5,1,2) - Similar as above. yes
02:29:163 (1) - Is this snapped in 1/16 on purpose? If not, better fix it. lol
02:37:098 (1) - Maybe remove NC? maybe not, since it's like, going out of a pattern, not like in Normal diff

[Normal]
00:36:337 (4,1) - You could improve the blanket here. yeah
01:36:826 - I feel like a note is missing here, it'd introduce the kiai better imo. too difficult, I never used more than 3 coherent circles in this diff
01:59:815 (4,1,2) - As in Hard. did these two
02:05:033 (4,1,2) - ^

[Easy]
02:37:098 (1) - Remove NC? This could still belong to previous combo. ok

That'd be all I'd want to suggest here, I loved the mapset, poke me when you're done :3