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xWillx

Joined February 2011

xWillx 2014-10-18T21:32:01+00:00

qoot8123 wrote:
hi:3

xWillx's part

00:25:581 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - i suggest you try different pattern with 00:23:081 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - because the song's pitch is not as same as 00:25:581 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - changed this to k k d kd kd d
03:17:303 (64,65) - reverse? more fit the music fixed
03:26:936 (65,67) - this pattern is too hard to play, try remove them changed to D D D only
03:35:744 (136,138) - ^ ^same

bbj0920 wrote:
Captain Jack - xWillx
00:22:915 (18,19,20,21) - ddkd or kdkd seems fit changed to kdk as shown in qoot's mod
00:42:831 (175) - d changed
00:44:165 (185) - ^ changed
00:51:415 (226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234) - Another 1/6 stream... *sigh Sorry but I would like keep this.

- xWillx
03:08:588 (17,19) - k no change
03:26:753 (64,66,68) - Just d would be enough. This pattern bothers playing A LOT. fixed this on qoot's mod
03:28:679 (76,90) - k d works also and plays better than a k
03:31:799 (102) - Move to 03:31:890 - and also k please. fixed
03:32:533 (108,118,128) - k d works also and plays better than a k
03:35:560 (135,137,1) - dfixed on qoot's mod

Captain Jack

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Jack Story

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64,160,216111,5,4,0:0:0:0:

Thank you very much for the mods!

Akiyama Mizuki

2,710 posts

Joined March 2009

Akiyama Mizuki 2014-10-19T13:55:25+00:00

Congratz me for taking 88th post of this thread :3 I deserve it because look at my stars!?
IT'S FINALLY HAPPENING ANYWAY!

Leader

osu! Alumni

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Joined January 2011

Topic Starter

Leader 2014-10-19T14:01:53+00:00

Updated, just waiting for a proper update after some BSS errors.

Yuzeyun

7,622 posts

Joined September 2010

Yuzeyun 2014-10-20T07:57:37+00:00

Huit.

TicClick

Global Moderator

4,416 posts

Joined February 2011

TicClick 2014-10-20T15:41:24+00:00

there's no "no video" button

Yuzeyun

7,622 posts

Joined September 2010

Yuzeyun 2014-10-22T13:12:26+00:00

XlovesMiku is also known as MatrixMarioX
I recall KJNegaman is actually KJ Negaman (in 2 words)

leaderplsimappedmvs

blaterwolf

267 posts

Joined November 2013

blaterwolf 2014-10-27T12:24:59+00:00

okay i cri to the Blue Dragon part but holy shit i did it ;w;

~_~

moar Stars plz~

Grimbow

424 posts

Joined February 2012

Grimbow 2014-11-06T17:53:39+00:00

This is a ton of fun to play! Have some stars

Michii-chan

Michii-chan 2014-11-15T05:29:08+00:00

afuhgsingjthds xDDD
Awesome beatmap!! x3

Kurosanyan

2,642 posts

Joined November 2009

Kurosanyan 2014-11-22T03:22:52+00:00

SPOILER

Modding this on a whim after spending 2 days modding another Octagon Marathon. ~~osu! needs more octagons!~~
[General]

qoot8123 wrote:
Remember to enable widescreen support
You might have forgotten that.
Unused Image Files: "angles\collab parts\15wond-leader-nobg.png" and "angles\titles\15wond-nobg.png" (this was also mentioned before)
Add an epilepsy warning for the video on the beatmap description?
02:37:153 - Remove this timing point.
02:37:212 - Check the timing here, it sounds off. I think the offset is +16~18ms.
03:36:653 - Same as above. +16~18ms too.
04:49:691 - Not sure about this one, it sounds a bit off, but I might be wrong.
07:24:405 - This one probably needs +20~25ms.
07:33:909 - This one probably needs +20~25ms too.
07:43:229 - ^ and since this whole part is off, 07:19:605 - might be off the same way.
I'm most likely not the best at timing check, so please try finding someone to recheck it even more accurately.
02:37:212 (1) - Since the timing change makes it a bit awkward to hit accurately, put a spin and end it at 02:42:716 - ? This isn't really an issue in standard mode but I really think you should do it on the taiko map.
06:33:400 - You might want to use this kiai on the Taiko collab too.

[Octaikon]

Remove the video from the .osu? Only a suggestion, I don't think it's an issue.
Please use HP Drain 4! The drain system of Taiko makes it really hard to clear maps with lots of objects. 5 would be too hard already, 6 and above means death for almost anyone. Basically, only top player who can almost FC the map will be able to enjoy it.
OD5 would be nice too. It's not as important as the HP Drain, but OD6 is high for taiko mode and the multiple bpm and slow bpm make it even harder.
02:43:817 - until 04:26:382 - PLEASE use SV x1,5 (or maybe x1,75 or x2 but I would not recommend this). 1/6 mapping with x1,6 makes it really awkward to read since it's an unusual SV. x1,5 is the closest to what it looks like with 1/4 mapping and x1; x1,75 looks like SV 1.6; x2 looks like 1/3 mapping.
Consider adjusting the hitsounds volume to the music. I know some mappers prefer a constant volume but it's way too loud for most of the map. A constant volume of 60~70% would be fine too I guess, if you really want to keep it this way.

Leader's parts

00:20:081 (1,3,5) - If 00:14:748 (104,106,108) - has finishers, why no finishers here?
04:10:166 (134,135,136) - I think dkd would fit better to the music here.
04:16:653 (165,166,167,168,169,170) - While I have no issue playing the pattern, it's definitely overmapping, it's 1/3 here. There's some parts where 1/6 might fight though, like 04:14:490 (155,156,157,158,159) - , 04:19:085 (179,180) - , 04:20:166 (183,184) - , 04:21:247 (187,188) - and 04:22:328 (192,193,194) -
I understand that you're waiting for the drums to put dons, so feel free to ignore this, but putting dons at 07:19:605 (1) - , 07:20:505 (4) - , 07:21:405 (8) - , 07:22:005 (10) - and 07:22:905 (14) - would sound really nice.
07:23:355 - You really should add a k here to be consistent with your previous patterns and the music. I don't think leaving a break before the drum fits.
07:24:405 (20) - This note definitely calls for a finisher, even if the song is calm.
07:43:229 (1) - ^
07:24:405 - until the end of the map: Since the melody and vocals isn't constant and the drums are really strong here, your structure sounds a bit awkward. I think it would be better to follow the drums with a base structure like this(? means there's no strong drums here so you can put whatever feels better to you, this is 1/1): "d k ? k d k ? k d k ? k d k k k" then "d k ? k d k ? k d k ? k d k ? k" then "d k d k d k d k d k d k d k k k"
Leaving 1/1 breaks when there's no drums, no melody and no vocals (it happens from 07:24:405 - until 07:43:229 -

xWillx's parts

00:25:581 (39) - , 00:28:415 (62) - for good consistency and playability with the rest of this part, you really should consider putting kats here! Otherwise, it's kinda awkward to play.
Maybe move 00:28:498 (63) - to 00:28:331 - ? (k kdkkd -> kdk kkd) For even more pattern consistency and playability. Even a kdkdkkd would be easier to play than the current k ddkkd because of pattern consistency.
00:29:415 (71,72) - Again, it really breaks the map's consistency. 00:21:415 (6,17,27,38,48,60) - were all dons, why not this one? You should replace K d with D k. D k dkkk D k dkk is easier to play too... please?
00:30:081 (76,77) - ^
00:32:081 (88) - Finisher here to follow drums?
00:33:748 (101,102,103,104) - This would feel waaaay more natural to play with kkd d or kkk d, for consistency reasons. Putting a k at 00:32:748 (94) - would solve the consistency issue more or less too, but I think the first suggestion fits better to the music.
00:47:081 (203,204,205) - Not hard at all to play, but it just sounds bad imo. kkd or kdd would be better.
00:46:415 (199,207,208) - k to follow the drums?
00:52:248 (234,235,236,237) - This 1/6 really sounds like overmapping. 1/4 would be better here.
03:18:129 (68,69) - dk instead? Plays better imo.
03:19:505 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - kdddk fits better with dk kd and dddk fits better with kd kk, so you should consider replacing your kdddk with dddk or you kd kk with dk kd. If you change it, do the same for the following patterns until 03:22:624 - .
03:22:808 (32,33) - IF and only if you picked dk kd in the previous suggestion, replace this kd dd with dk dd.

~~dialgadu~~Sayaka-'s parts

While I don't mind the 2 note pattern at 01:15:581 (130,131) - , I feel like, even if you're following vocals, it's a bit sad to break the flow at 00:54:415 - , 00:59:748 - and 01:02:915 - . It's fine this way too, but consider replacing with 2 ddk and a kkd.
01:20:081 (164) - I think you should put a k to follow the melody and for consistency. Every single of those notes were k before and you use k again for 01:21:415 (175) - . Consider d for 01:20:248 (165) - too.
02:31:513 (168) - I think a k fits better to the music here. ~~And kkkdddk rarely fits for anything.~~
02:32:771 (178) - Would sounds better as a d because of the song and the drum at 02:32:868 (179) -
02:33:352 (184) - Should be a k too keep a good pattern consistency with the previous and following streams. I'd suggest something like ddddkdkddk
02:33:545 (185,186,187) - k on 185 and 187 and remove 186 ? For pattern consistency again.
02:35:287 (201,202) - kd ?
02:35:578 (203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215) - ddkkddkdkkkkd ?
02:37:212 (222) - cf. my suggestion in General mod.

TKS's parts

01:38:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - kkddkkddkdkdkkddkk? Fits better to the music imo.
01:43:415 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54) - dkkkddk? I feel like that's the best pattern to follow dddkddk in a good, natural way. Sounds good too.
01:44:665 (62) - Remove for pattern consistency? There's no good reason to suddenly add a note here when there was none just before.
01:44:831 - Add a note here and 01:44:748 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - dkddkkd / dkkdkkd ?
01:48:248 (92) - k to fit the drums?
01:50:748 (116) - Should probably be K like 01:49:415 (104,105,107) - . But you might consider switching hitsounds for the whole part instead:
01:48:915 (99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - -> kdkkk D D k D [kkk]ddddk D
01:56:665 (161) - I think d sounds better.
01:58:165 (173) - d?
05:15:453 (29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42) - kddkddk dkkdkkd? Just some random pattern suggestion.
05:20:877 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - Kinda the same suggestion as before.
05:22:911 - Remove to make a 1 4 1 4 1 pattern?

Stefan's parts

07:00:067 (233) - You forgot a finisher.
07:01:401 (244,245,246) - Variation is good but I don't think D dd ddddk then K kk ddddk fits. You really should do D dd again.

DarkDunskin's parts

03:48:725 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - , 03:51:968 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - and 03:57:374 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82) - : dkdkdkdk sounds better than kdkdkdkd imo.
05:45:282 - until 05:55:673 - Remove finishers? They fit on the next part, but it feels like it's too much on this one.

Gezo's parts

04:42:838 (110) - Put k here and 04:43:523 (115,116) - dons here? For consistency.
06:09:067 (19,20,21,22) - Not sure if I should recommend to remove it, or ignore the fact it's the only pattern of the marathon with 1/6 in the midle of a stream. Can't tell if it's fine or not.

KinomiCandy's parts

Absolutely nothing to say, nice flow, simple style.

[Edit: More timing check]

02:06:092 - until 02:15:449 - , this part needs some serious timing check too (offset and bpm). Most of it feels off and some of it isn't even close to not being off.
02:06:092 - Not sure about the offset of this one. I think you should try bpm 137 and put the next timing point at 02:06:967 - and the do the same for next timing points.
02:11:627 (19,20,21) - (on the taiko) You can see it's off even before checking the timing. There should be an equal spacing in the timelin between those 3 notes. I think you should remove the timing point at 02:11:627 - and use bpm 140 for 02:11:331 - , then snap 02:11:616 (19,20) - on 1/3.

And it's finally over. Good luck with your submit problems. Go rank!

Last edited by Kurosanyan 2014-11-22T23:47:34+00:00, edited 7 times in total.

xWillx

66 posts

Joined February 2011

xWillx 2014-11-22T20:32:21+00:00

Kurosanyan wrote:
xWillx's parts
00:25:581 (39) - , 00:28:415 (62) - for good consistency and playability with the rest of this part, you really should consider putting kats here! Otherwise, it's kinda awkward to play.
Maybe move 00:28:498 (63) - to 00:28:331 - ? (k kdkkd -> kdk kkd) For even more pattern consistency and playability. Even a kdkdkkd would be easier to play than the current k ddkkd because of pattern consistency.
00:29:415 (71,72) - Again, it really breaks the map's consistency. 00:21:415 (6,17,27,38,48,60) - were all dons, why not this one? You should replace K d with D k. D k dkkk D k dkk is easier to play too... please?
00:30:081 (76,77) - ^
00:32:081 (88) - Finisher here to follow drums?
00:33:748 (101,102,103,104) - This would feel waaaay more natural to play with kkd d or kkk d, for consistency reasons. Putting a k at 00:32:748 (94) - would solve the consistency issue more or less too, but I think the first suggestion fits better to the music.
00:47:081 (203,204,205) - Not hard at all to play, but it just sounds bad imo. kkd or kdd would be better.
00:46:415 (199,207,208) - k to follow the drums?
00:52:248 (234,235,236,237) - This 1/6 really sounds like overmapping. 1/4 would be better here.
03:18:129 (68,69) - dk instead? Plays better imo. fixed
03:19:505 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - kdddk fits better with dk kd and dddk fits better with kd kk, so you should consider replacing your kdddk with dddk or you kd kk with dk kd. If you change it, do the same for the following patterns until 03:22:624 - . changed to kdddk dk kd
03:22:808 (32,33) - IF and only if you picked dk kd in the previous suggestion, replace this kd dd with dk dd. changed

Re-mapped the first part. Sounds and plays better now. TY Kurosanyan

Captain Jack

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Kurokotei

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Kurokotei 2014-11-23T12:44:39+00:00

Kurosanyan wrote:
~~dialgadu~~Sayaka-'s parts
While I don't mind the 2 note pattern at 01:15:581 (130,131) - , I feel like, even if you're following vocals, it's a bit sad to break the flow at 00:54:415 - , 00:59:748 - and 01:02:915 - . It's fine this way too, but consider replacing with 2 ddk and a kkd. I really want to keep the dd here
01:20:081 (164) - I think you should put a k to follow the melody and for consistency. Every single of those notes were k before and you use k again for 01:21:415 (175) - . Consider d for 01:20:248 (165) - too. changed as you said
02:31:513 (168) - I think a k fits better to the music here. ~~And kkkdddk rarely fits for anything.~~ changed
02:32:771 (178) - Would sounds better as a d because of the song and the drum at 02:32:868 (179) - changed
02:33:352 (184) - Should be a k too keep a good pattern consistency with the previous and following streams. I'd suggest something like ddddkdkddk changed to ddddkdkddk
02:33:545 (185,186,187) - k on 185 and 187 and remove 186 ? For pattern consistency again. changed
02:35:287 (201,202) - kd ? changed
02:35:578 (203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215) - ddkkddkdkkkkd ? changed
02:37:212 (222) - cf. my suggestion in General mod. I'm not responsible for the timing *runs*

Thanks for the mod!
Also redone timing between 02:06:092 - and 02:15:449 - , now it's okay (I suppose)

Timing

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289691,338.983050847458,4,1,0,80,1,0
345282,335.195530726257,4,1,0,80,1,0
366734,333.333333333333,4,1,0,80,1,0
439605,600,4,1,0,80,1,0
444405,594.059405940594,4,1,0,80,1,0
453909,582.52427184466,4,1,0,80,1,0
463229,576.923076923077,4,1,0,80,1,0

Time to Octagon

256,192,53415,5,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,53998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54665,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,54915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55915,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,55998,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,56915,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57831,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,57915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58165,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58748,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,58998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,59998,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60915,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60998,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,61915,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,62831,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,63748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64081,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,64748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,65415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,66748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,67415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,68748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,69915,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,70915,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,71915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,72915,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,73915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,74915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75331,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,75998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,76998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77165,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,77915,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78248,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,78915,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79081,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79748,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,79915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80581,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,80998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,81915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82498,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82915,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,82998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83581,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84415,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84498,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84581,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84665,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84748,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84831,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84915,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,84998,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85081,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85165,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85415,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85581,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85748,1,12,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85915,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86081,1,4,0:0:0:0:

Kirby part

256,192,126092,5,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,126520,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,126949,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,127385,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,127603,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,127821,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,128112,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,128403,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,128694,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,129130,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,129349,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,129567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,129858,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,130149,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,130439,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,130730,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,131021,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,131312,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,131603,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,131894,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,132185,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,132399,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,132613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,132827,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,133041,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,133256,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,133470,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,133684,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,133899,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,133995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,134189,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,134286,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,134479,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,134576,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,134769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,134866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,135060,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,135157,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,135253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,135350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,135447,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,135640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,135737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,135834,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136221,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136414,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,136995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,137188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,137285,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,137382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,137576,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,137769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,138059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,138156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,138253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,138350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,138447,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,138543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,138640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,138834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,138930,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,139124,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,139221,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,139414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,139511,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,139705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,139801,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,139898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,139995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,140092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,140188,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,140382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,140479,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,140672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,140769,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,140963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,141059,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,141253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,141350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,141447,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,141543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,141640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,141737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,141930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,142027,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,142221,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,142317,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,142511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,142608,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,142705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,142801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,142898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,142995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,143092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,143188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,143285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,143479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,143576,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,143769,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,143866,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144059,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144156,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144253,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144447,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144543,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144640,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144737,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,144834,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145027,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145124,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145317,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145608,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145705,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145898,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,145995,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,146092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,146188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,146285,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,146382,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,146576,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,146672,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,146866,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,146963,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,147156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,147253,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,147447,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,147543,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,147640,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,147737,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,147834,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,147930,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,148124,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,148221,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,148414,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,148511,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,148705,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,148801,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,148898,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,148995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,149092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,149188,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,149285,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,149382,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,149479,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,149672,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Yuzeyun

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Yuzeyun 2014-11-23T13:13:25+00:00

Kurosanyan wrote:
Gezo's parts
04:42:838 (110) - Put k here and 04:43:523 (115,116) - dons here? For consistency. yes
06:09:067 (19,20,21,22) - Not sure if I should recommend to remove it, or ignore the fact it's the only pattern of the marathon with 1/6 in the midle of a stream. Can't tell if it's fine or not. due to the nature of the stream I think it's perfectly acceptable and playable this way. I used 1/6 because the song's cues are implying 1/8, and you know that such streams are a no-no.

do i really need to put the whole codes ? uwu

Kurosanyan

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Joined November 2009

Kurosanyan 2014-11-23T13:50:30+00:00

_Gezo_ wrote:
I used 1/6 because the song's cues are implying 1/8, and you know that such streams are a no-no.

1/8 is fine with SV x2

And Sayalga, you scared me with your red, I thought you were rejecting my whole mod.

Kurokotei

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Kurokotei 2014-11-23T13:52:44+00:00

Kurosanyan wrote:
_Gezo_ wrote:
I used 1/6 because the song's cues are implying 1/8, and you know that such streams are a no-no.
1/8 is fine with SV x2

And Sayalga, you scared me with your red, I thought you were rejecting my whole mod.

pls I always answer to mods with red

Kurosanyan

2,642 posts

Joined November 2009

Kurosanyan 2014-11-27T15:18:29+00:00

By the way, I totally forgot but you should use a .jpg background to make your folder lighter. That's 1,2Mo removed from it.

Leader

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Leader 2014-11-27T20:53:33+00:00

IT UPLOADED (tried the video) !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

will fix soon everything, updated sayaka/will's parts for now

69653863

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Joined January 2012

69653863 2014-11-28T01:37:49+00:00

Unsupported widescreen is intentional.

inverness wrote:
Regarding no widescreen support for SB: It's gonna get cropped for players with 4:3 resolution, and got covered by the ranking panels on 16:9.

bobywea

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bobywea 2014-12-18T17:40:08+00:00

Great map! Nice job

Leader

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Leader 2014-12-21T00:53:02+00:00

Thank you for your mod, Kurosanyan, bunch of stuff has been fixed and timing been improved.

Waiting for qoot now~

qoot8123

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Joined March 2011

qoot8123 2014-12-21T03:05:26+00:00

hi o/ recheck

[General]

02:37:126 - the bar line on taiko diff should be removed, or we might see the problem on this image, so add the red line on 02:37:126 - and set '' omit the first bar line''
there are some unsnapped circle on marathon : 03:53:094 (1) - , 03:53:454 (3) - , 03:53:634 (4) -

that's all . call me back :3

Leader

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Leader 2014-12-21T22:48:49+00:00

qoot8123 wrote:
hi o/ recheck

[General]
02:37:126 - the bar line on taiko diff should be removed, or we might see the problem on this image, so add the red line on 02:37:126 - and set '' omit the first bar line''
there are some unsnapped circle on marathon : 03:53:094 (1) - , 03:53:454 (3) - , 03:53:634 (4) - That's intentionally 1/12, listen carefully and you'll see why
that's all . call me back :3

Thanks again!

qoot8123

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qoot8123 2014-12-22T04:59:14+00:00

there is no other problem after rechecking

Bubbled ! #1

: p/3432438/

Kaguya Hourain

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Kaguya Hourain 2014-12-22T15:25:45+00:00

I MIGHT have some things slightly off.

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Leader

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Leader 2014-12-23T17:18:17+00:00

Self popped, timing has been slightly improved now

qoot8123

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qoot8123 2014-12-26T11:13:18+00:00

rebubbled because of timing change

Aka

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Aka 2014-12-27T05:00:23+00:00

~~selfreminderrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr~~

leader

・00:17:413 (1,2,3) - it strangely felt like a stream when i played it. mind adding at least 0.1 to the spacing? '^'

cheesiest

・02:36:633 (8) - this one is out of beats. i mean, the sounds for which the slider would fit actually starts from downbeat there 02:36:730 - . and there are still those 1/1 sounds on the place where you started the slider. i do hear those vocal bweebwebweee but sitll i'd recommend something like that:

SPOILER

02:36:150 (5) -

・03:48:559 (1) - 03:57:208 (1) - are those rankable, irre? D:

chewin

i see

these were the only things which got my attention, else seems fine from my side

cheesiest

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cheesiest 2014-12-30T09:10:52+00:00

did stuff

CHEWIN
04:22:594 (1) - move 1 to the right and 1 down, and then with
04:24:215 (1) - move it 1 to the left and 1 down

04:34 cheesiest: inveress
04:34 cheesiest: inverness
04:34 cheesiest: did you hear
04:34 cheesiest: you fCKED up
04:35 cheesiest: or maybe someone fucked up and it made u fucked up but
04:35 cheesiest: there is an image file in that octagon thing
04:35 cheesiest: that has incorrect info
04:35 cheesiest: 7BROS file
04:36 cheesiest: should be super mario bros. 2
04:36 cheesiest: not super smash bros. 2

don't kd me

Leader

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Leader 2014-12-31T09:28:30+00:00

Fixed and updated

(also I remember having any kind of opposition against these sliders, they are fine as long as they are readable at the first sight, and they are)

Aka

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Aka 2014-12-31T18:35:35+00:00

#2

Leader

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Leader 2015-01-01T11:57:57+00:00

Thank you aaa

Akiyama Mizuki

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Akiyama Mizuki 2015-01-02T06:36:44+00:00

No video by OctagonCollaboration this year ;_;

Lust

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Lust 2015-01-03T14:39:23+00:00

log

09:06 Lust: lets get this rolling, LDR-chan
09:06 Leader: WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
09:06 Leader: hi
09:09 Lust: all this storyboard stuff is good to go right
09:10 Lust: im not too experienced in that end so im trusting you to make sure its all good
09:10 Leader: 03:36:668 - is there super mario bros 2 here
09:11 Leader: in the "source"
09:11 Lust: yeaaaah
09:11 Leader: then fine
09:13 Lust: 00:17:413 (1,2,3,4) - i think the flow would be really nice here if you invert this around, have 1 be where 4 is, have 2 be where 3 is, have 3 where 1 is and have 4 where 2 is
09:13 Lust: 00:17:079 (4) - since the direction of the flow comes in at this angle
09:13 Lust: the direction changes make it a bit awkward imo
09:14 Leader: can i just ctrl+g 2 and 3
09:14 Leader: idk I liked that 4->5 jump ;_;
09:15 Lust: ah whatever sure
09:15 Lust: actually wait
09:15 Lust: ctrl + G 2 and 1
09:15 Lust: i think that might be better
09:15 Leader: hmm naaah
09:16 Lust: if you say so, im fine with the other one
09:17 Lust: haha RLC's part is so funny
09:18 Leader: senpai ♥
09:18 Lust: i think you should turn on epilepsy warning, the video has a lot of bright flashing lights in some parts
09:18 Leader: ok
09:20 Lust: 03:48:559 (1) - this slider is okay right?
09:21 Leader: no one ever complained and it's been called fine ages ago
09:22 Lust: welp
09:22 Lust: https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/2615668
09:22 Lust: and have a look at the slider in the picture
09:22 Lust: lol
09:23 Leader: hmm there are shiro and garven around
09:24 Lust: lemme ask Garv
09:24 Leader: did in modhelp
09:24 Lust: ok nice
09:24 Lust: i left #modhelp a long time ago so hehe
09:24 Leader: wo
09:26 Leader: ok they're not
09:31 Lust: 04:32:546 (3,4,5,6) - same flow thing here, maybe have 3 where 4 is, 4 where 5 is, and so forth
09:31 Lust: plays a lot better imo
09:32 Leader: yess
09:32 Lust: 04:37:346 (3) - this 3/4 slider troubles me because of that sound on the red tick but meh i guess its fine
09:33 Lust: id recommend a 1/2 slider in its place, but its up to you
09:34 Leader: done
09:36 Lust: 8 awesome angles :')
09:37 Leader: 8 awesome mappers
09:37 Leader: :^)

What we fixed:

Made some patterns flow better
Changed a 3/4 slider to a 1/2 to better reflect the music

Irreversible

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Irreversible 2015-01-03T15:35:09+00:00

whole map

http://puu.sh/e15EN/c8d2090200.txt

03:51:803 - I also deleted this circle, it didn't really fit imo. (obv. my part)

Leader

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Leader 2015-01-03T15:47:57+00:00

Updated

Lust

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Lust 2015-01-03T15:53:21+00:00

Forgot to mention we added epilepsy warning since the video included a lot of flashing lights in various parts. Also irre corrected some questionable sliders.

Let there be light.

puncia

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puncia 2015-01-03T15:57:08+00:00

woo

Nyukai

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Nyukai 2015-01-03T15:59:22+00:00

Yay!

Kurokotei

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