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accepted the suggestion by jerry, + changed 105 to don so the pattern 102 to 105 becomes k kkd.
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Jerry wrote:

  • [Sayaka-]
  1. 01:12:748 (111) - Try changing this to a kat? It makes this part's flow smoother imo but the pitch goes down here so no
  2. 02:35:190 - I suggest moving this note to 02:35:287 - so that the consistency of the pattern can be maintain with what you did at 02:31:997 (172,173,174) - changed
Thanks for the mod! /late
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Leader wrote:

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so where's da video
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posting so I remember to check sb
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hi:3

[General]
  1. Remember to enable widescreen support


[ Octaikon]

Leader's part

  1. 00:10:748 (77) - I prefer add finish here , because the song's power is not as same as the first part, also if you apply this, please move 00:10:831 (78) - to 00:10:998 -
  2. 00:16:081 (113,114,115) - ^
  3. 07:33:909 (54) - add finish to emphasis this section
  4. 07:52:459 (38) - ^
  5. 07:23:355 - add finish to reflect 07:22:305 (11,12,13) -


xWillx's part

  1. 00:25:581 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - i suggest you try different pattern with 00:23:081 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - because the song's pitch is not as same as 00:25:581 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) -
  2. 03:17:303 (64,65) - reverse? more fit the music
  3. 03:26:936 (65,67) - this pattern is too hard to play, try remove them
  4. 03:35:744 (136,138) - ^


Sayaka-'s part

  1. 01:25:248 (215) - change k ? sounds better to me
  2. 01:23:581 (195) - change to k, on 01:24:081 (201,205,209,213) - ,these four kat have cymbal sound, but 01:23:415 (193,197) - don't ,so i think follow 01:22:748 (185,186,187,188,189) - would be better


Stefan's part

  1. 07:04:817 (272,274) - try to remove and add finish on 07:05:068 (275) - because 07:04:817 - and 07:04:983 - doesn't have obvious beat.
  2. 07:15:817 (364) - remove? to make the rhythm more clear


_Gezo_'s part

  1. 06:28:734 (194,196) - how about change to k? the beat's pitch is high


KinomiCandy's part

  1. 05:00:284 (40,41) - reverse? to emphasis the song
  2. 05:07:148 - add note? there is a obvious sound
  3. 05:10:029 (98) - add finish? to reflect 05:11:385 (1) -



That's all i can find
call me back after inverness check sb :)
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qoot8123 wrote:

Stefan's part

  1. 07:04:817 (272,274) - try to remove and add finish on 07:05:068 (275) - because 07:04:817 - and 07:04:983 - doesn't have obvious beat. Sounds fair enough.
  2. 07:15:817 (364) - remove? to make the rhythm more clear personally that stream ends really sudded without that note and emphasize the "OUH!" better. No remove here.
Leader-senpai fix this pls for me <3
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qoot8123 wrote:

Sayaka-'s part

  1. 01:25:248 (215) - change k ? sounds better to me it's okay imo with d
  2. 01:23:581 (195) - change to k, on 01:24:081 (201,205,209,213) - ,these four kat have cymbal sound, but 01:23:415 (193,197) - don't ,so i think follow 01:22:748 (185,186,187,188,189) - would be better k, changed

Stefan wrote:

Leader-senpai fix this pls for me <3
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Accepted for both notes; I don't see why not.

Stefan wrote:

Leader-senpai fix this pls for me <3
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Oh boy, here it is.

bbj0920 wrote:

How do you Octagon!? - KinomiCandy
05:00:538 (43) - d Changed, due to another change I did.

Jack danced like a butterfly. - KinomiCandy
06:34:650 - How about adding a note? (k) No change.
06:46:567 ~ 06:46:733 - kkkd (1/6 stream) would fit Alright.
06:49:233 (142) - d Alright.

MidSoul wrote:

06:53:567 (174,175,176,177) - kkdd No change.
・vocal tone.

qoot8123 wrote:

KinomiCandy's part

  1. 05:00:284 (40,41) - reverse? to emphasis the song Changed the stream a little bit as well.
  2. 05:07:148 - add note? there is a obvious sound Added.
  3. 05:10:029 (98) - add finish? to reflect 05:11:385 (1) - Changed.
Thanks for modding!

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256,192,414567,1,0,0:0:0:0:
posted

qoot8123 wrote:

hi:3

xWillx's part

  1. 00:25:581 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - i suggest you try different pattern with 00:23:081 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27) - because the song's pitch is not as same as 00:25:581 (40,41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49) - changed this to k k d kd kd d
  2. 03:17:303 (64,65) - reverse? more fit the music fixed
  3. 03:26:936 (65,67) - this pattern is too hard to play, try remove them changed to D D D only
  4. 03:35:744 (136,138) - ^ ^same

bbj0920 wrote:

Captain Jack - xWillx
00:22:915 (18,19,20,21) - ddkd or kdkd seems fit changed to kdk as shown in qoot's mod
00:42:831 (175) - d changed
00:44:165 (185) - ^ changed
00:51:415 (226,227,228,229,230,231,232,233,234) - Another 1/6 stream... *sigh Sorry but I would like keep this.

- xWillx
03:08:588 (17,19) - k no change
03:26:753 (64,66,68) - Just d would be enough. This pattern bothers playing A LOT. fixed this on qoot's mod
03:28:679 (76,90) - k d works also and plays better than a k
03:31:799 (102) - Move to 03:31:890 - and also k please. fixed
03:32:533 (108,118,128) - k d works also and plays better than a k
03:35:560 (135,137,1) - dfixed on qoot's mod
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288,96,205285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,205377,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,96,205560,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,96,205652,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,205744,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,205836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,96,205927,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,128,206111,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,64,206202,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,96,206386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,206478,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,64,206753,1,4,0:0:0:0:
256,96,207029,1,4,0:0:0:0:
192,128,207303,1,4,0:0:0:0:
96,192,207854,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,160,207945,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,208037,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,208129,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,128,208312,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,208404,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,160,208588,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,160,208679,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,208771,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,128,208863,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,192,208955,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,209138,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,209230,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,192,209413,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,209505,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,209597,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,209689,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,160,209780,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,160,209964,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,192,210056,1,0,0:0:0:0:
32,192,210239,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,210331,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,210423,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,160,210514,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,210606,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,128,210789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,160,210881,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,192,211065,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,192,211156,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,160,211248,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,160,211340,1,0,0:0:0:0:
160,192,211431,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,128,211706,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,128,211890,1,8,0:0:0:0:
160,160,211981,1,0,0:0:0:0:
128,128,212074,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,212166,1,8,0:0:0:0:
128,128,212257,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,212441,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,212533,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,212624,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,160,212716,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,128,212808,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,212991,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,213083,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,213175,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,213267,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,128,213358,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,213542,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,213634,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,213725,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,128,213817,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,128,213909,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,214092,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,214184,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,214276,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,214367,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,128,214459,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,214643,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,214734,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,214826,1,8,0:0:0:0:
64,128,214918,1,8,0:0:0:0:
192,128,215009,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,128,215193,1,0,0:0:0:0:
64,128,215285,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,215560,1,4,0:0:0:0:
128,160,215835,1,4,0:0:0:0:
64,160,216111,5,4,0:0:0:0:


Thank you very much for the mods! :D
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Congratz me for taking 88th post of this thread :3 I deserve it because look at my stars!?
IT'S FINALLY HAPPENING ANYWAY!

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Updated, just waiting for a proper update after some BSS errors.
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Huit.
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there's no "no video" button
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XlovesMiku is also known as MatrixMarioX
I recall KJNegaman is actually KJ Negaman (in 2 words)


leaderplsimappedmvs
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okay i cri to the Blue Dragon part but holy shit i did it ;w;



moar Stars plz~
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This is a ton of fun to play! Have some stars :)
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afuhgsingjthds xDDD
Awesome beatmap!! x3
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Modding this on a whim after spending 2 days modding another Octagon Marathon. osu! needs more octagons!
[General]
  1. qoot8123 wrote:

    Remember to enable widescreen support
    You might have forgotten that.
  2. Unused Image Files: "angles\collab parts\15wond-leader-nobg.png" and "angles\titles\15wond-nobg.png" (this was also mentioned before)
  3. Add an epilepsy warning for the video on the beatmap description?
  4. 02:37:153 - Remove this timing point.
  5. 02:37:212 - Check the timing here, it sounds off. I think the offset is +16~18ms.
  6. 03:36:653 - Same as above. +16~18ms too.
  7. 04:49:691 - Not sure about this one, it sounds a bit off, but I might be wrong.
  8. 07:24:405 - This one probably needs +20~25ms.
  9. 07:33:909 - This one probably needs +20~25ms too.
  10. 07:43:229 - ^ and since this whole part is off, 07:19:605 - might be off the same way.
  11. I'm most likely not the best at timing check, so please try finding someone to recheck it even more accurately.
  12. 02:37:212 (1) - Since the timing change makes it a bit awkward to hit accurately, put a spin and end it at 02:42:716 - ? This isn't really an issue in standard mode but I really think you should do it on the taiko map.
  13. 06:33:400 - You might want to use this kiai on the Taiko collab too.


[Octaikon]
  1. Remove the video from the .osu? Only a suggestion, I don't think it's an issue.
  2. Please use HP Drain 4! The drain system of Taiko makes it really hard to clear maps with lots of objects. 5 would be too hard already, 6 and above means death for almost anyone. Basically, only top player who can almost FC the map will be able to enjoy it.
  3. OD5 would be nice too. It's not as important as the HP Drain, but OD6 is high for taiko mode and the multiple bpm and slow bpm make it even harder.
  4. 02:43:817 - until 04:26:382 - PLEASE use SV x1,5 (or maybe x1,75 or x2 but I would not recommend this). 1/6 mapping with x1,6 makes it really awkward to read since it's an unusual SV. x1,5 is the closest to what it looks like with 1/4 mapping and x1; x1,75 looks like SV 1.6; x2 looks like 1/3 mapping.
  5. Consider adjusting the hitsounds volume to the music. I know some mappers prefer a constant volume but it's way too loud for most of the map. A constant volume of 60~70% would be fine too I guess, if you really want to keep it this way.


Leader's parts
  1. 00:20:081 (1,3,5) - If 00:14:748 (104,106,108) - has finishers, why no finishers here?
  2. 04:10:166 (134,135,136) - I think dkd would fit better to the music here.
  3. 04:16:653 (165,166,167,168,169,170) - While I have no issue playing the pattern, it's definitely overmapping, it's 1/3 here. There's some parts where 1/6 might fight though, like 04:14:490 (155,156,157,158,159) - , 04:19:085 (179,180) - , 04:20:166 (183,184) - , 04:21:247 (187,188) - and 04:22:328 (192,193,194) -
  4. I understand that you're waiting for the drums to put dons, so feel free to ignore this, but putting dons at 07:19:605 (1) - , 07:20:505 (4) - , 07:21:405 (8) - , 07:22:005 (10) - and 07:22:905 (14) - would sound really nice.
  5. 07:23:355 - You really should add a k here to be consistent with your previous patterns and the music. I don't think leaving a break before the drum fits.
  6. 07:24:405 (20) - This note definitely calls for a finisher, even if the song is calm.
  7. 07:43:229 (1) - ^
  8. 07:24:405 - until the end of the map: Since the melody and vocals isn't constant and the drums are really strong here, your structure sounds a bit awkward. I think it would be better to follow the drums with a base structure like this(? means there's no strong drums here so you can put whatever feels better to you, this is 1/1): "d k ? k d k ? k d k ? k d k k k" then "d k ? k d k ? k d k ? k d k ? k" then "d k d k d k d k d k d k d k k k"
  9. Leaving 1/1 breaks when there's no drums, no melody and no vocals (it happens from 07:24:405 - until 07:43:229 -


xWillx's parts
  1. 00:25:581 (39) - , 00:28:415 (62) - for good consistency and playability with the rest of this part, you really should consider putting kats here! Otherwise, it's kinda awkward to play.
  2. Maybe move 00:28:498 (63) - to 00:28:331 - ? (k kdkkd -> kdk kkd) For even more pattern consistency and playability. Even a kdkdkkd would be easier to play than the current k ddkkd because of pattern consistency.
  3. 00:29:415 (71,72) - Again, it really breaks the map's consistency. 00:21:415 (6,17,27,38,48,60) - were all dons, why not this one? You should replace K d with D k. D k dkkk D k dkk is easier to play too... please?
  4. 00:30:081 (76,77) - ^
  5. 00:32:081 (88) - Finisher here to follow drums?
  6. 00:33:748 (101,102,103,104) - This would feel waaaay more natural to play with kkd d or kkk d, for consistency reasons. Putting a k at 00:32:748 (94) - would solve the consistency issue more or less too, but I think the first suggestion fits better to the music.
  7. 00:47:081 (203,204,205) - Not hard at all to play, but it just sounds bad imo. kkd or kdd would be better.
  8. 00:46:415 (199,207,208) - k to follow the drums?
  9. 00:52:248 (234,235,236,237) - This 1/6 really sounds like overmapping. 1/4 would be better here.
  10. 03:18:129 (68,69) - dk instead? Plays better imo.
  11. 03:19:505 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - kdddk fits better with dk kd and dddk fits better with kd kk, so you should consider replacing your kdddk with dddk or you kd kk with dk kd. If you change it, do the same for the following patterns until 03:22:624 - .
  12. 03:22:808 (32,33) - IF and only if you picked dk kd in the previous suggestion, replace this kd dd with dk dd.


dialgaduSayaka-'s parts
  1. While I don't mind the 2 note pattern at 01:15:581 (130,131) - , I feel like, even if you're following vocals, it's a bit sad to break the flow at 00:54:415 - , 00:59:748 - and 01:02:915 - . It's fine this way too, but consider replacing with 2 ddk and a kkd.
  2. 01:20:081 (164) - I think you should put a k to follow the melody and for consistency. Every single of those notes were k before and you use k again for 01:21:415 (175) - . Consider d for 01:20:248 (165) - too.
  3. 02:31:513 (168) - I think a k fits better to the music here. And kkkdddk rarely fits for anything.
  4. 02:32:771 (178) - Would sounds better as a d because of the song and the drum at 02:32:868 (179) -
  5. 02:33:352 (184) - Should be a k too keep a good pattern consistency with the previous and following streams. I'd suggest something like ddddkdkddk
  6. 02:33:545 (185,186,187) - k on 185 and 187 and remove 186 ? For pattern consistency again.
  7. 02:35:287 (201,202) - kd ?
  8. 02:35:578 (203,204,205,206,207,208,209,210,211,212,213,214,215) - ddkkddkdkkkkd ?
  9. 02:37:212 (222) - cf. my suggestion in General mod.


TKS's parts
  1. 01:38:081 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18) - kkddkkddkdkdkkddkk? Fits better to the music imo.
  2. 01:43:415 (48,49,50,51,52,53,54) - dkkkddk? I feel like that's the best pattern to follow dddkddk in a good, natural way. Sounds good too.
  3. 01:44:665 (62) - Remove for pattern consistency? There's no good reason to suddenly add a note here when there was none just before.
  4. 01:44:831 - Add a note here and 01:44:748 (62,63,64,65,66,67,68) - dkddkkd / dkkdkkd ?
  5. 01:48:248 (92) - k to fit the drums?
  6. 01:50:748 (116) - Should probably be K like 01:49:415 (104,105,107) - . But you might consider switching hitsounds for the whole part instead:
    01:48:915 (99,100,101,102,103,104,105,106,107,108,109,110,111,112,113,114,115,116) - -> kdkkk D D k D [kkk]ddddk D
  7. 01:56:665 (161) - I think d sounds better.
  8. 01:58:165 (173) - d?
  9. 05:15:453 (29,30,31,32,33,34,35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42) - kddkddk dkkdkkd? Just some random pattern suggestion.
  10. 05:20:877 (77,78,79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87,88,89,90) - Kinda the same suggestion as before.
  11. 05:22:911 - Remove to make a 1 4 1 4 1 pattern?


Stefan's parts
  1. 07:00:067 (233) - You forgot a finisher.
  2. 07:01:401 (244,245,246) - Variation is good but I don't think D dd ddddk then K kk ddddk fits. You really should do D dd again.


DarkDunskin's parts
  1. 03:48:725 (21,22,23,24,25,26,27,28) - , 03:51:968 (43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50) - and 03:57:374 (75,76,77,78,79,80,81,82) - : dkdkdkdk sounds better than kdkdkdkd imo.
  2. 05:45:282 - until 05:55:673 - Remove finishers? They fit on the next part, but it feels like it's too much on this one.


Gezo's parts
  1. 04:42:838 (110) - Put k here and 04:43:523 (115,116) - dons here? For consistency.
  2. 06:09:067 (19,20,21,22) - Not sure if I should recommend to remove it, or ignore the fact it's the only pattern of the marathon with 1/6 in the midle of a stream. Can't tell if it's fine or not. :(


KinomiCandy's parts
  1. Absolutely nothing to say, nice flow, simple style.


[Edit: More timing check]
  1. 02:06:092 - until 02:15:449 - , this part needs some serious timing check too (offset and bpm). Most of it feels off and some of it isn't even close to not being off.
  2. 02:06:092 - Not sure about the offset of this one. I think you should try bpm 137 and put the next timing point at 02:06:967 - and the do the same for next timing points.
  3. 02:11:627 (19,20,21) - (on the taiko) You can see it's off even before checking the timing. There should be an equal spacing in the timelin between those 3 notes. I think you should remove the timing point at 02:11:627 - and use bpm 140 for 02:11:331 - , then snap 02:11:616 (19,20) - on 1/3.


And it's finally over. Good luck with your submit problems. Go rank!
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