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Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2014-03-07T10:11:04+00:00

Sorry for troublesome offset adjustment ._.

Good luck!

Fycho

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Fycho 2014-03-07T10:11:58+00:00

go~go~

Rizia

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Topic Starter

Rizia 2014-03-07T10:13:02+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
Sorry for troublesome offset adjustment ._.

Good luck!

thanks a lot >____<

happy623

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happy623 2014-03-07T13:00:03+00:00

柚子加油 \o/ (然後摸我還沒改..

yf_bmp

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yf_bmp 2014-03-07T15:24:53+00:00

零翼必在24小时内出现

Awaken

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Awaken 2014-03-08T00:55:46+00:00

哇我GD全泡啦

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2014-03-08T04:11:34+00:00

Let's see

General
Only the Normal diff hasn't got the widescreen support, plz activate it to be consistent

Insane
00:13:666 (2) - whistle to match with the piano?
00:35:523 (3,4) - drum clap at 3's end and drum finish on 4's head would apply a satisfying sound effect
00:37:452 (4,5) - quite similar, drum clap on 4's head and drum finish at 5's end?
00:39:166 (5,6) - drum clap at 5's end and drum finish on 6?
00:41:094 (5,6) - drum clap instead on 5 and drum finish on 6's head
00:44:309 (3,5) - drum clap at 3's end and drum finish on 5
00:46:237 (4,5) - drum clap on 4 and drum finish on 5
00:54:380 (1,2,3) - remove the clap on 3 and add a clap to 2, I think that would fit the music better
00:55:023 (5,6,7) - ^
00:54:809 (4) - add a drum clap here
01:04:023 (6) - should have a NC here to keep consistency
01:16:344 (5,6) - move the clap from 6 to 5 would match with the music better
01:18:487 (5,6) - ^
01:19:773 (4) - similar case like the above, better add a clap on this
01:23:201 (5) - ^
01:25:772 (2) - ^
01:29:350 (1) - the finish is a bit loud to me, maybe use whistle instead? or use a lower volume

Awaken's Hard
00:13:880 (5,6) - CTRL+G = better flow
00:35:952 (2,3) - see if you like the drum hitsounds that I mentioned above for Insane
00:37:237 (2) - ^ and all the similar points for this part
00:41:309 (3) - finish at end instead? there's apparently cymbal sound at the background
00:54:380 (2,4) - add clap on their reversing points?
01:01:237 (2) - whistle sounds good with the guitar, referring to 01:08:094 -
01:01:773 (4,5) - move the clap from 5 to 4 seems better with the music
01:08:630 (4,5) - ^
01:18:487 (3,4) - ^
01:38:112 (1) - whistle at end like Insane? sounds just nice

Normal
00:17:737 (1) - finish like Insane?
00:35:737 (3) - similar drum sound suggestions like I've mentioned in Insane and for all this part
01:09:594 (1) - unnecessary NC, better remove it to keep consistency
01:28:880 - useless green line
01:29:350 (1) - same as Insane

call me back after your update

happy623

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Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-03-08T04:24:07+00:00

Flask

Flask wrote:
我遭到柚子的召喚(ﾉﾟдﾟ)ﾉ沒什麼好講的就讓我nazi幾下

[General]
Tags裡的Little busters! Ex和Source重複了, 建議去掉. 另外可以加個game eroge之類的
[623's Easy]
00:26:074 (3) - 這個感覺不必要跟到vocal, 縮短1/2然後往後直接跟1/1節奏就好好
00:29:503 (2) - ^ ^
你可以rank了

thanks o/

ZZH

ZZHBOY wrote:
好[notice][Easy]00:45:146 (1) - 可以blanket 唔. . 不太清楚blanket哪裡
01:04:003 (3) - 简单难度里那个红点滑条建议红点处弧度小一点其實這裡我覺得還好, 因為BPM不太高, 弧度大點沒問題
KIAI部分可以把soft whistle换成重一点的音效嘛. . 個人比較喜歡這種
01:24:146 (1) - 这个就可以用Normal finish让这里音效带感一些好的
美丽

摸感謝

623*615

615915887 wrote:
From my modding queue

[General]
~~LB居然有妹子，为什么不早告诉我~~

[Easy]
00:10:003 (3,1) - 隔这么近。。移上一點了
00:16:432 (4) - 没包好fixed
00:19:003 (2) - 能不能把body的whistle去掉啊不了, 配合音樂那個拖拉的感覺(?

好图，祝早日rank

thanks!!!

thanks

柚子要up順便也給我的up一下吧

Edited once

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Rizia

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Topic Starter

Rizia 2014-03-08T05:35:28+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
Let's see

General
Only the Normal diff hasn't got the widescreen support, plz activate it to be consistent

Insane
00:13:666 (2) - whistle to match with the piano?
00:35:523 (3,4) - drum clap at 3's end and drum finish on 4's head would apply a satisfying sound effect
00:37:452 (4,5) - quite similar, drum clap on 4's head and drum finish at 5's end?
00:39:166 (5,6) - drum clap at 5's end and drum finish on 6?
00:41:094 (5,6) - drum clap instead on 5 and drum finish on 6's head
00:44:309 (3,5) - drum clap at 3's end and drum finish on 5
00:46:237 (4,5) - drum clap on 4 and drum finish on 5
00:54:380 (1,2,3) - remove the clap on 3 and add a clap to 2, I think that would fit the music better
00:55:023 (5,6,7) - ^
00:54:809 (4) - add a drum clap here
01:04:023 (6) - should have a NC here to keep consistency
01:16:344 (5,6) - move the clap from 6 to 5 would match with the music better
01:18:487 (5,6) - ^ I think loud after change
01:19:773 (4) - similar case like the above, better add a clap on this
01:23:201 (5) - ^
01:25:772 (2) - ^
01:29:350 (1) - the finish is a bit loud to me, maybe use whistle instead? or use a lower volume

Awaken's Hard
00:13:880 (5,6) - CTRL+G = better flow
00:35:952 (2,3) - see if you like the drum hitsounds that I mentioned above for Insane
00:37:237 (2) - ^ and all the similar points for this part
00:41:309 (3) - finish at end instead? there's apparently cymbal sound at the background
00:54:380 (2,4) - add clap on their reversing points?
01:01:237 (2) - whistle sounds good with the guitar, referring to 01:08:094 -
01:01:773 (4,5) - move the clap from 5 to 4 seems better with the music
01:08:630 (4,5) - ^
01:18:487 (3,4) - ^
01:38:112 (1) - whistle at end like Insane? sounds just nice

Normal
00:17:737 (1) - finish like Insane?
00:35:737 (3) - similar drum sound suggestions like I've mentioned in Insane and for all this part
01:09:594 (1) - unnecessary NC, better remove it to keep consistency
01:28:880 - useless green line
01:29:350 (1) - same as Insane

call me back after your update

thanks> <

edit: updated all diff

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2014-03-08T06:37:56+00:00

recheecked and fixed some hitsounds
congratz on the 1st ranked

the last finish sounds a bit loud to me=.= 殴打智障波

happy623

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Joined April 2010

happy623 2014-03-08T06:38:14+00:00

會員!!!!!!!!!!!

Fycho

Global Moderator

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Fycho 2014-03-08T06:38:27+00:00

Congrats on the first ranked map!

ヽ(；▽；)ノ

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Maboyu

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Joined November 2011

Maboyu 2014-03-08T06:39:16+00:00

恭喜RANK >W<

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Rizia

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Topic Starter

Rizia 2014-03-08T06:39:26+00:00

Zero__wind wrote:
recheecked and fixed some hitsounds
congratz on the 1st ranked
the last finish sounds a bit loud to me=.= 殴打智障波

thanks a lot >____<

cratz for my 1st >v<

Asagi

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Asagi 2014-03-08T06:40:58+00:00

Gratz for the 1st Ranked ヽ(；▽；)ノ

Atrue

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Atrue 2014-03-08T06:43:26+00:00

wee～ Gratz！

Koiyuki

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Koiyuki 2014-03-08T06:59:22+00:00

gratz! and the supporter!

Unsfamiliar

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Joined May 2013

Unsfamiliar 2014-03-08T08:00:27+00:00

Congrats!

EmingK

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Joined October 2012

EmingK 2014-03-08T08:20:56+00:00

恭喜

Nepu

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Nepu 2014-03-08T08:21:59+00:00

/me late

恭喜柚子rank~

Selisi

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Selisi 2014-03-08T08:50:41+00:00

Nice~ congrats~ Kawaiwkyik, happy623 and Awaken~

Chewin

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Chewin 2014-03-09T01:26:50+00:00

Timing is off. Totally, in some parts.
I complained about it on: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/154334 as well, where the same timing has been used.
(But with different offsets because of different .mp3 file but still wrong).
This is what I wrote there:

SPOILER

3rd red line is off, really. Too late. It must be 89449. Fix it and don't forget toresnap all elements and green lines to the right timing
The notes on 01:10:990 (1) and 01:11:600 (1) are actually very offtime. You should add a red line at 70958. Don't forget to resnap the slider's tail manually on the next red line.

Here you should add a red line on: 01:10:852. About the redline on 89350 I have (-3)ms, it should be 89347.
Talking about it with other BATs.

EDIT: Confirmed. Scores will be wiped.

Momochikun

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Joined October 2012

Momochikun 2014-03-09T02:04:38+00:00

Well, i'm the one who linked Chewin this map anyway.
Sorry i didn't do it offensively, i just want clarify the timing since i've recognized it on my own map.
It's better to fix it since it's still on qualified state, I Hope you won't get depressed ><
Good Luck on your First Rank ! /o/

Chewin

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Chewin 2014-03-09T02:08:45+00:00

Yea no worry about it. Mapset will be ranked as soon as possible after we fixed the timing correctly!

YoshinoSakura

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Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 2014-03-09T02:11:11+00:00

~~柚子不愧是我的好战友~~
别遇到不能清分的问题啊！！

BeatofIke

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BeatofIke 2014-03-09T02:43:06+00:00

Checking Timing (WIP): Try this for now!

1st Timing Section: BPM: 140.035, Offset: 594
2nd Timing Section: BPM: 140.035, Offset: 72147
3rd Timing Section: BPM:134.350, Offset: 88428
4th Timing Section: BPM:134.350, Offset: 89321
5th Timing Section: BPM: 129.000, Offset: 96019
6th Timing Section: BPM: 115.000, Offset: 96484
7th Timing Section: BPM:100.000, Offset: 101192

happy623

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happy623 2014-03-09T05:24:55+00:00

gogogo baka柚

IamKwaN

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IamKwaN 2014-03-09T07:51:20+00:00

615915887 wrote:
~~柚子不愧是我的好战友~~

/me slaps 615

Rizia

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Topic Starter

Rizia 2014-03-09T09:23:09+00:00

Chewin wrote:
Timing is off. Totally, in some parts.
I complained about it on: http://osu.ppy.sh/s/154334 as well, where the same timing has been used.
(But with different offsets because of different .mp3 file but still wrong).
This is what I wrote there:

SPOILER
3rd red line is off, really. Too late. It must be 89449. Fix it and don't forget toresnap all elements and green lines to the right timing
The notes on 01:10:990 (1) and 01:11:600 (1) are actually very offtime. You should add a red line at 70958. Don't forget to resnap the slider's tail manually on the next red line.

Here you should add a red line on: 01:10:852. About the redline on 89350 I have (-3)ms, it should be 89347.
Talking about it with other BATs.

EDIT: Confirmed. Scores will be wiped.

Finally, I used beatofike's timing on my map

sorry for wrong timing

BeatofIke wrote:
Checking Timing (WIP): Try this for now!

1st Timing Section: BPM: 140.035, Offset: 594
2nd Timing Section: BPM: 140.035, Offset: 72147
3rd Timing Section: BPM:134.350, Offset: 88428
4th Timing Section: BPM:134.350, Offset: 89321
5th Timing Section: BPM: 129.000, Offset: 96019
6th Timing Section: BPM: 115.000, Offset: 96484
7th Timing Section: BPM:100.000, Offset: 101192

thanks for timing, and it's correct

Zero__wind

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Zero__wind 2014-03-09T09:26:35+00:00

lol really sorry for the inconvenience
I felt a little bit off at some parts when modding it, but after some tests I think it's even less than 5ms so I let it go
totally overlooked 01:10:880 (1) - indeed
~~cymbal crashes are mean~~
Good luck with your rerank!

Awaken

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Awaken 2014-03-09T09:33:29+00:00

rerank也是凌风偶像

Chewin

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Chewin 2014-03-09T19:06:05+00:00

General

2nd red line (the one that starts kiai time) is still off. It must be 72161. Don't forget to resnap elements and green lines after applied this change. 88428 red line is off as well, it should be 88444 and next one at 89340.
Why don't you add the video? You can get it from http://osu.ppy.sh/s/154334

Easy

01:16:431 (2,3) - We have wrong spacing here. Move the 01:17:288 (3) at x:400 y:140

Normal

First part looks so empty without hitsounds. I mean you should add normal sampleset on 00:07:877 , 00:08:734 and so on to make the sound much better to hear. Well, I'm suggesting to apply the same hitsounds happy623 made for his Easy xD
01:29:321 (1) - This slider should finish 1/2 later to fill the piano melody. On that red tick I can't hear any sound there.

Hard

00:17:732 (1) - Wrong snap here. Extend this slider by 1/4 till the white tick
00:21:160 (1) - Snap it correctly on the red tick
00:31:443 (1) - Extend by 1/4
01:29:321 (1) - Whistles on slider's head and tail, 01:32:893 (1) whistle on reverse arrow (to fill melody sounds)
01:36:484 (4) - New combo

That's it. Thank you BeatofIke for checking the bpm issues :3 But I would apply those timing changes I suggested as well about red lines, they are more accurated to me. Nice mapset anyways, you can call me back when you have fixed them :3

happy623

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happy623 2014-03-09T19:39:46+00:00

Chewin wrote:
General

2nd red line (the one that starts kiai time) is still off. It must be 72161. Don't forget to resnap elements and green lines after applied this change. 88428 red line is off as well, it should be 88444 and next one at 89340.
Why don't you add the video? You can get it from http://osu.ppy.sh/s/154334
Easy

01:16:431 (2,3) - We have wrong spacing here. Move the 01:17:288 (3) at x:400 y:140 I'd like to move 01:16:431 (2) - close to 01:17:288 (3) - xD/ thanks!

That's it. Thank you BeatofIke for checking the bpm issues :3 But I would apply those timing changes I suggested as well about red lines, they are more accurated to me. Nice mapset anyways, you can call me back when you have fixed them :3

thanks Chewin <3!!

@柚子 : General 個d我未改架;-;/

edited: code

osu file format v12

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PreviewTime: 55130
Countdown: 0
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TitleUnicode:目覚めた朝にはきみが隣に (TV Size)
Artist:Suzuyu
ArtistUnicode:鈴湯
Creator:Kawaiwkyik
Version:623's Easy
Source:Little Busters! EX
Tags:happy623 Awaken ending
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Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2014-03-10T08:26:35+00:00

I personally oppose the new timing and going to reasoning as to the old timing really off?

I take a hear closer on somewhere like 01:12:147 (1,2,3) - on this new timing and this is really off.
It does lie on vocal quite correctly but the way hitsound usage mainly hits on the heavy beat as in a normal hit, it is pretty much off by -20 to -30 in this whole section. no, probably the whole mapset.

I re-downloaded the mp3 to make sure and it still is. It might just be me though but I would like to question as to follow the timing base on vocal which is really softer than the heavy beat like a normal hit suitable?

Following heavy beat makes more sense because they come along more consistently constant while vocal following can fluctuate more than usual as human voice can never be more constant than electrical instrument.

Chewin

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Chewin 2014-03-10T10:24:22+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
I take a hear closer on somewhere like 01:12:147 (1,2,3) - on this new timing and this is really off.
It does lie on vocal quite correctly but the way hitsound usage mainly hits on the heavy beat as in a normal hit, it is pretty much off by -20 to -30 in this whole section. no, probably the whole mapset.

Hi. I'd appreciate if you read my post as well.

Frostmourne

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Frostmourne 2014-03-10T10:33:02+00:00

Chewin wrote:
Frostmourne wrote:
I take a hear closer on somewhere like 01:12:147 (1,2,3) - on this new timing and this is really off.
It does lie on vocal quite correctly but the way hitsound usage mainly hits on the heavy beat as in a normal hit, it is pretty much off by -20 to -30 in this whole section. no, probably the whole mapset.
Hi. I'd appreciate if you read my post as well.

Thank you for clarifying that one! I am opposing the way Ike's timing is used for this one as it currently is. (The mapper didn't update so I took it from the current one)

However, I still feel the first offset needs a bit tweaking as the 2nd and the rest after it are applied. It could be around +5 or +10
I focused on around 00:31:014 (9) - though

Chewin

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Chewin 2014-03-10T10:39:51+00:00

Frostmourne wrote:
Thank you for clarifying the correct one! I am opposing the way Ike's timing is used for this one as it currently is. (The mapper didn't update so I took it from the current one)

Perfect! It sounds much better indeed. Thank you for your check Frost :3 I'd say to set +10 on the first one.
Let's wait for mapper's reply then. Summarizing:

SPOILER

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Rizia

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Topic Starter

Rizia 2014-03-10T11:04:24+00:00

Chewin wrote:
General

2nd red line (the one that starts kiai time) is still off. It must be 72161. Don't forget to resnap elements and green lines after applied this change. 88428 red line is off as well, it should be 88444 and next one at 89340.
Why don't you add the video? You can get it from http://osu.ppy.sh/s/154334
Easy

01:16:431 (2,3) - We have wrong spacing here. Move the 01:17:288 (3) at x:400 y:140
Normal

First part looks so empty without hitsounds. I mean you should add normal sampleset on 00:07:877 , 00:08:734 and so on to make the sound much better to hear. Well, I'm suggesting to apply the same hitsounds happy623 made for his Easy xD
01:29:321 (1) - This slider should finish 1/2 later to fill the piano melody. On that red tick I can't hear any sound there.
Hard

00:17:732 (1) - Wrong snap here. Extend this slider by 1/4 till the white tick
00:21:160 (1) - Snap it correctly on the red tick
00:31:443 (1) - Extend by 1/4
01:29:321 (1) - Whistles on slider's head and tail, 01:32:893 (1) whistle on reverse arrow (to fill melody sounds)
01:36:484 (4) - New combo
That's it. Thank you BeatofIke for checking the bpm issues :3 But I would apply those timing changes I suggested as well about red lines, they are more accurated to me. Nice mapset anyways, you can call me back when you have fixed them :3

hello, here i am fixed all the unsnap, timing, nc, hitsound
also i'm updated my map
thanks for check timing ;___;

Chewin

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Chewin 2014-03-10T11:58:40+00:00

Well. We have resnapped all green lines in the Easy diff (because with offset changes circles were set earlier than green lines so they didn't have effect on them). I guess I can give your bubble back. Good luck!

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RCDesigner 2014-03-10T12:44:15+00:00

Checked the insane diff and it's really good. Firsty I thought that it will be very easy but this jumps<3 Hope your map gets rank!

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