Hi everyone, I came here to review by request. (Column:1,2,3,4,5)>>不好意思回信晚了...
[General]No problems.[Patterns of NM]*
Unsuitable pattern as most easy diff --
00:05:427 (5427|3) - move to 3
00:05:641 (5641|4) - move to 4
00:06:069 (6069|1) - move to 3
00:06:284 (6284|0) - move to 2
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00:22:997 (22997|2,23425|2) - remove
00:22:783 - add a LN to 3, end at 00:22:997 -
00:22:997 - add a note to 4
00:23:211 - add a note to 2
00:23:425 - add a note to 5
00:23:640 - add a note to 3
00:23:854 (23854|1) - move to 1
00:24:282 (24282|3) - move to 5
00:24:711 (24711|0) - move to 4
00:28:139 (28139|3) - move to 1
00:28:996 (28996|0) - move to 2
00:29:425 (29425|1) - move to 1
00:33:925 (33925|2) - move to 2
00:34:353 - add a LN to 3, end at 00:34:567 -
00:34:567 (34567|1) - move to 1
00:34:996 (34996|0) - move to 2
00:35:853 (35853|2) - move to 4
00:38:853 (38853|2) - move to 5
00:39:281 (39281|1) - move to 3
00:40:138 (40138|3) - move to 3
00:40:567 (40567|0) - move to 5
00:40:567 (40567|0,40567|2) - move to 4 & 5
00:40:996 (40996|3) - move to 3
*The below pattern has a bit difficult problem, I suggest "II" --
I. 00:42:495 - add a note to 3
or,II. 00:42:067 (42067|1) - remove
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*If you like to follow the beat sounds perfectly, I suggest the below mod --
00:43:138 (43138|0) - extend this LN to 00:43:567 -
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*If you wanna emphasize 00:45:709 (45709|1,46567|0,47424|0,48281|0) - --
I. 00:45:281 (45281|3) - remove
or,II. 00:46:138 - / 00:46:995 - / 00:47:852 - add notes to each line as you like.
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00:47:424 (47424|0,47424|3) - Crtl+H
00:48:709 (48709|1) - move to 3
00:54:173 (54173|0) - move to 2
00:57:923 (57923|3) - move to 2
01:02:637 (62637|3) - move to 3
01:06:494 (66494|3) - move to 5
01:08:744 (68744|2) - remove, then add a LN to 3, end at 01:09:279 -
01:09:065 - add a note to 4
01:11:422 (71422|4,71422|1) - Crtl+H
01:13:565 (73565|3) - move to 3
01:14:850 (74850|0) - move to 2
01:16:136 (76136|4) - move to 3
01:16:993 (76993|0) - move to 2
01:17:850 (77850|1) - move to 4
01:22:350 (82350|4) - move to 4
01:23:207 (83207|0) - move to 2
01:23:850 (83850|4) - move to 3
01:24:278 (84278|2) - move to 5
01:29:635 (89635|4) - move to 3
01:33:278 (93278|0) - move to 2
01:38:206 (98206|2) - move to 2
01:38:420 (98420|1) - move to 3
01:38:849 (98849|4) - move to 2
01:50:848 - add a note to 3
01:52:776 (112776|2) - move to 4
01:59:418 (119418|1) - move to 1
02:00:490 (120490|3) - move to 5
02:12:060 (132060|3) - move to 3
02:12:382 (132382|4) - move to 1
02:15:917 (135917|4) - move to 2
02:16:132 (136132|2,136560|2) - remove
02:16:132 (136132|1) - move to 1
02:16:132 - add a LN to 3, end at 02:16:560 -
02:16:560 - add notes to 2 & 5
02:20:846 (140846|2) - move to 2
02:22:131 (142131|3) - move to 3
02:23:845 (143845|3) - move to 3
02:35:309 (155309|3) - move to 2
02:43:772 (163772|0) - move to 2
02:45:701 (165701|1) - move to 02:45:594 -
02:47:844 - add a note to 1
02:48:058 - to 02:52:772 - remap like
this.
[EX. Hitsounding of NM]
*Please replay both section, I suggest you to fix either hitsound --
I. 01:10:136 - to 01:19:993 -
II. 02:16:989 - to 02:26:845 -
[Comment]Overall patterns of NM don't have any critical issues which also include your way,
however, the patterns of some sections aren't perfect certainly.
Actually I have found many small issues as I pointed out.
It's not critical, but novice~middle players would desire more comfortable patterns.
and I recommend you to enrich the varieties of sound, then this map will be very cool
okay that's all for me, it seems like I have fallen in love to this map.., here is
I'll be back again to think about the others, 加油~
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