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NaxelCL
From NaxelCL And FGSky's osu!mania Modding Queue


Hi You second XD
HITSOUNDS IS VERY NICE XD

General
Background Like it Background XD nice
Kia Time kia times can not be more than 15 seconds long
Preview pointnice point:3

HD
plz changed the names of all diffs for 5K HD 5K MX AND 5K NM
NotesVery nice diff of 1st mapXD and you need undermapping agreged more notes
- 00:01:356 eliminated this LN
00:01:677 this ln is terminated in 00:01:891
01:24:278 agreged ln this
01:29:849 agreged ln this in 3 column

mm in my opinion is very nice map of mapper 1st map congratulations gume for the late mod:c plz undermapping more notes is requerid
Bruce
Here is Mod~这次的Mod更加深入些哦
Column:1 2 3 4 5
[NM]
既然是NM的话~ OD7 or HP7
00:04:355 - 漏音哟 Add a Note at 2
00:14:855 (14855|1) - Change to Hold,end at 00:15:283 -
00:38:317 (38317|0,38531|3) - 下移一格 移完之后一个在白线 一格在红线
00:40:031 (40031|1,40246|3) - 下移一格
00:41:745 (41745|1,41960|2) - 继续下移一格 NM主要还是要抓最清晰地节奏比较好哟
00:42:174 (42174|0) - 上移一格 并在5 Add a Note
00:43:781 - Add a Hold at 3,end at 00:43:995 -
01:08:422 (68422|3) - Remove
01:09:279 (69279|1) - Remove
01:09:708 - Add a Hold at 5,end at 01:10:136 -
01:23:850 (83850|3) - Move to 5
01:23:850 (83850|2) - 这个Remove
01:24:278 - ~01:27:706 - 这里重音和轻音反了 把1个Note的地方改成2个,2个Note的改成1个
01:29:206 - Sugger you to try this---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1321667
01:32:956 - Add a Note at 3
01:33:492 - Add a Note at 4
01:33:706 - Add a Note at 5
01:36:063 - 嗯..建议你用这个---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1321676
01:38:206 - Add a Note at 3
01:45:062 - Add a Note at 4
01:45:062 (105062|1) - 这个Hold 应该在01:45:277 - 开始
01:45:919 - Add a Note at 5
01:46:134 (106134|3,106134|4,106562|1,106562|0) - 推荐你删掉
01:46:991 - Add a Note at 1
01:47:848 (107848|3,108276|4) - 删去
01:48:705 - Add a Note at 5
01:49:348 - Add a Note
01:49:562 (109562|2,109991|0) - 删去
01:50:419 - Add a Note at 1
01:51:276 (111276|3) - 删去
01:51:276 (111276|4) - Change to Hold,end at 01:51:919 -
01:51:919 (111919|3) - 删了
01:52:133 - Add 2 Notes at 1 and 3
01:52:776 - Add a Note at 3
01:52:990 (112990|3,112990|2,113419|0,113419|4) - 建议删去
01:53:847 (113847|2) - Move to 1 and Add a Note at 5
01:55:990 (115990|4) - Move to 01:55:562 -
01:56:633 - Add a Note at 4
01:56:847 - Add a Note at 5
02:27:916 (147916|0,148345|1) - 位置交换
最后一个Kiai 还是一样的 重音和轻音问题 你可以看看修改
抱歉我因为是EZ/NM打手..所以底难度Mod的最多啦 并不是做的不好 而是改进而已~

Other Diffculty will come soon
REDYUMiKA
Amazing 5kmap!
I will totally support your map, please call me anytime. :D
Topic Starter
hokin1995

NaxelCL wrote:

From NaxelCL And FGSky's osu!mania Modding Queue


Hi You second XD
HITSOUNDS IS VERY NICE XD

General
Background Like it Background XD nice
Kia Time kia times can not be more than 15 seconds long
Preview pointnice point:3

HD
plz changed the names of all diffs for 5K HD 5K MX AND 5K NM
NotesVery nice diff of 1st mapXD and you need undermapping agreged more notes
- 00:01:356 eliminated this LN
00:01:677 this ln is terminated in 00:01:891
01:24:278 agreged ln this
01:29:849 agreged ln this in 3 column

mm in my opinion is very nice map of mapper 1st map congratulations gume for the late mod:c plz undermapping more notes is requerid

Really? Thank you very much and thank for mod :D

I have some problem because my English is not good
so I don't know what does agreged mean? :o Sorry :(
and I can't search this word in the internet
Topic Starter
hokin1995

Simple_Star wrote:

Here is Mod~这次的Mod更加深入些哦
Column:1 2 3 4 5
[NM]
既然是NM的话~ OD7 or HP7
00:04:355 - 漏音哟 Add a Note at 2
00:14:855 (14855|1) - Change to Hold,end at 00:15:283 -
00:38:317 (38317|0,38531|3) - 下移一格 移完之后一个在白线 一格在红线
00:40:031 (40031|1,40246|3) - 下移一格
00:41:745 (41745|1,41960|2) - 继续下移一格 NM主要还是要抓最清晰地节奏比较好哟
00:42:174 (42174|0) - 上移一格 并在5 Add a Note
00:43:781 - Add a Hold at 3,end at 00:43:995 -
01:08:422 (68422|3) - Remove
01:09:279 (69279|1) - Remove
01:09:708 - Add a Hold at 5,end at 01:10:136 -
01:23:850 (83850|3) - Move to 5
01:23:850 (83850|2) - 这个Remove
01:24:278 - ~01:27:706 - 这里重音和轻音反了 把1个Note的地方改成2个,2个Note的改成1个
01:29:206 - Sugger you to try this---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1321667
01:32:956 - Add a Note at 3
01:33:492 - Add a Note at 4
01:33:706 - Add a Note at 5
01:36:063 - 嗯..建议你用这个---> http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1321676
01:38:206 - Add a Note at 3
01:45:062 - Add a Note at 4
01:45:062 (105062|1) - 这个Hold 应该在01:45:277 - 开始
01:45:919 - Add a Note at 5
01:46:134 (106134|3,106134|4,106562|1,106562|0) - 推荐你删掉
01:46:991 - Add a Note at 1
01:47:848 (107848|3,108276|4) - 删去
01:48:705 - Add a Note at 5
01:49:348 - Add a Note
01:49:562 (109562|2,109991|0) - 删去
01:50:419 - Add a Note at 1
01:51:276 (111276|3) - 删去
01:51:276 (111276|4) - Change to Hold,end at 01:51:919 -
01:51:919 (111919|3) - 删了
01:52:133 - Add 2 Notes at 1 and 3
01:52:776 - Add a Note at 3
01:52:990 (112990|3,112990|2,113419|0,113419|4) - 建议删去
01:53:847 (113847|2) - Move to 1 and Add a Note at 5
01:55:990 (115990|4) - Move to 01:55:562 -
01:56:633 - Add a Note at 4
01:56:847 - Add a Note at 5
02:27:916 (147916|0,148345|1) - 位置交换
最后一个Kiai 还是一样的 重音和轻音问题 你可以看看修改
抱歉我因为是EZ/NM打手..所以底难度Mod的最多啦 并不是做的不好 而是改进而已~

Other Diffculty will come soon
我明白的 :D
始終我對做圖還不太熟練
有問題是很正常的 :D
而已有你這種打手幫我MOD 我感到非常榮幸w
所以thank you for mod :D
Topic Starter
hokin1995

lil_yumika_lil wrote:

Amazing 5kmap!
I will totally support your map, please call me anytime. :D
Really? thank you for your support!! :D
If you have free time ,please try this map and give me some advice ,because I want to get some advice to make the beatmap perfectly.
REDYUMiKA

hokin1995 wrote:

I have some problem because my English is not good
so I don't know what does agreged mean? :o Sorry :(
and I can't search this word in the internet
It means "agregue (Spanish)"="add",
He recommended that add LN to 3rd column but I don't know how long it'll end.

Maybe..,
01:29:849 - add LN to 3rd column end at 01:30:278 -
01:24:278 - remap this LN start from 01:23:850 - end at 01:24:707 -

Okay then, I will come back to advise your map.
Good Luck :)
richardfeder
不要好意再占一层楼因为我老是忘记mod 唔我觉得第一次能做的这么好已经很不错了,加油! :)

NM
00:10:569 (10569|3) - add

00:23:854 - 这里开始原则上来说是没有问题的,但是很单调:全程打次洞次. 可以考虑在取音上有所变化,比如:00:30:068 - 开始的几段萨克斯完全可以用面条写进去而不是继续1-2-1-2-1-...这样谱面会丰富很多. 第一个kiai段同样.

02:07:882 (127882|3) - add?

02:10:775 (130775|2) - 这个完全可以变成到02:11:203 - 的面条:写人声或者萨克斯都可以.

02:16:560 (136560|3) - add

02:37:987 (157987|0) - delete. 并不是一个重拍
唔总的来说很不错! 就是缺乏一些变化w

HD
00:10:355 (10355|2) - 我不是很确定这个需不需要

00:10:891 (10891|2) - add 旋律的话HD还是不要漏了好 xD

00:13:033 (13033|0) - ^

00:14:105 (14105|3) - ^

00:14:426 (14426|4) - 重拍. 除了旋律一个长条之外还要再加一个note来表示重音

00:15:283 (15283|2) - 停在00:15:497 -

00:15:712 (15712|3) - add

00:16:354 (16354|1) - 唔这个是什么;w;

00:17:426 (17426|2,17640|4,17854|3,17854|1) - 感觉还是有一点奇怪QAQ

00:18:390 (18390|2) - add

00:43:353 (43353|0) - 延长到00:43:781 - 然后00:43:781 (43781|1) - 加一个note

00:47:424 (47424|0) - add

01:08:636 (68636|2) - delete?

01:09:922 (69922|2) - 去掉然后把01:09:708 (69708|0) - 长度double...感觉分成两个面条完全没有必要啊,一个直接写萨克斯可能会好一些;w;

01:27:706 (87706|1) - add

01:31:135 - http://puu.sh/6QXNO.jpg 条子末尾加了一个clap的note,然后重新整理了一下供参考>~<

01:33:920 (93920|1) - 我觉得去掉好一些

01:40:348 (100348|1,100456|2,100563|1) - 这有点绝了w 音不是很清楚而且HD的话这个梗还是去掉吧

01:58:776 (118776|2,119204|2,119633|2) - 我觉得可以去掉 01:59:311 (119311|2) - 和01:59:418 (119418|0) - 加

02:05:204 (125204|2) - add 这里萨克斯也有一个短促的音可以用note表示

02:11:632 (131632|0,131846|2) - 其实应该是一根...02:11:846 (131846|2) - 应该用note写一个重音而不是拉一个面条w

02:13:346 (133346|2) - add

02:15:275 (135275|0) - add

02:16:560 (136560|2,136774|4) - 我推荐这样放供参考>< 底下的那个条子和点也动了一下 http://puu.sh/6QYsd.jpg

02:37:987 (157987|3,157987|1) - 我建议只写一个note放到中间(因为这个比后面那个beat轻一些)

02:40:344 (160344|2,160451|3) - ctrl+j

02:43:237 (163237|3) - add

02:43:987 (163987|2) - add

MX
;w;原谅我脱稿(其实我mx mod不是很好
Good luck! :)
Topic Starter
hokin1995

lil_yumika_lil wrote:

hokin1995 wrote:

I have some problem because my English is not good
so I don't know what does agreged mean? :o Sorry :(
and I can't search this word in the internet
It means "agregue (Spanish)"="add",
He recommended that add LN to 3rd column but I don't know how long it'll end.

Maybe..,
01:29:849 - add LN to 3rd column end at 01:30:278 -
01:24:278 - remap this LN start from 01:23:850 - end at 01:24:707 -

Okay then, I will come back to advise your map.
Good Luck :)

OH 8-)
Thank for help ;)
haha, I will waiting your advise ;)
Topic Starter
hokin1995

richardfeder wrote:

不要好意再占一层楼因为我老是忘记mod 唔我觉得第一次能做的这么好已经很不错了,加油! :)

NM
00:10:569 (10569|3) - add

00:23:854 - 这里开始原则上来说是没有问题的,但是很单调:全程打次洞次. 可以考虑在取音上有所变化,比如:00:30:068 - 开始的几段萨克斯完全可以用面条写进去而不是继续1-2-1-2-1-...这样谱面会丰富很多. 第一个kiai段同样.

02:07:882 (127882|3) - add?

02:10:775 (130775|2) - 这个完全可以变成到02:11:203 - 的面条:写人声或者萨克斯都可以.

02:16:560 (136560|3) - add

02:37:987 (157987|0) - delete. 并不是一个重拍
唔总的来说很不错! 就是缺乏一些变化w

HD
00:10:355 (10355|2) - 我不是很确定这个需不需要

00:10:891 (10891|2) - add 旋律的话HD还是不要漏了好 xD

00:13:033 (13033|0) - ^

00:14:105 (14105|3) - ^

00:14:426 (14426|4) - 重拍. 除了旋律一个长条之外还要再加一个note来表示重音

00:15:283 (15283|2) - 停在00:15:497 -

00:15:712 (15712|3) - add

00:16:354 (16354|1) - 唔这个是什么;w;

00:17:426 (17426|2,17640|4,17854|3,17854|1) - 感觉还是有一点奇怪QAQ

00:18:390 (18390|2) - add

00:43:353 (43353|0) - 延长到00:43:781 - 然后00:43:781 (43781|1) - 加一个note

00:47:424 (47424|0) - add

01:08:636 (68636|2) - delete?

01:09:922 (69922|2) - 去掉然后把01:09:708 (69708|0) - 长度double...感觉分成两个面条完全没有必要啊,一个直接写萨克斯可能会好一些;w;

01:27:706 (87706|1) - add

01:31:135 - http://puu.sh/6QXNO.jpg 条子末尾加了一个clap的note,然后重新整理了一下供参考>~<

01:33:920 (93920|1) - 我觉得去掉好一些

01:40:348 (100348|1,100456|2,100563|1) - 这有点绝了w 音不是很清楚而且HD的话这个梗还是去掉吧

01:58:776 (118776|2,119204|2,119633|2) - 我觉得可以去掉 01:59:311 (119311|2) - 和01:59:418 (119418|0) - 加

02:05:204 (125204|2) - add 这里萨克斯也有一个短促的音可以用note表示

02:11:632 (131632|0,131846|2) - 其实应该是一根...02:11:846 (131846|2) - 应该用note写一个重音而不是拉一个面条w

02:13:346 (133346|2) - add

02:15:275 (135275|0) - add

02:16:560 (136560|2,136774|4) - 我推荐这样放供参考>< 底下的那个条子和点也动了一下 http://puu.sh/6QYsd.jpg

02:37:987 (157987|3,157987|1) - 我建议只写一个note放到中间(因为这个比后面那个beat轻一些)

02:40:344 (160344|2,160451|3) - ctrl+j

02:43:237 (163237|3) - add

02:43:987 (163987|2) - add

MX
;w;原谅我脱稿(其实我mx mod不是很好
Good luck! :)
謝謝你 :D
基本上全都Fixed了
至於在NM裡那些單調的NOTES 我遲一點再整理一下
Thank for mod :) ;)
[Emiria]
ok 我拖了太久 现在发现改的不错啊。。。图挺好的
12345
NM
00:18:283 - 加一个好了
00:42:710 - 00:44:210 - - 取个人声看看
00:43:567 (43567|3) - 这个drum 上面没取 这里就删了好了
00:45:709 (45709|1,46138|3,46138|4,46567|1,46995|3,46995|4,47424|0,47852|4,47852|1,48281|0) - 重音应该反了 我觉的
01:01:565 (61565|2) - 结束在上面红线
01:02:208 (62208|0) - 结束在上面白线
01:04:780 (64780|0) - 结束在上面白线 然后在那个白线加一个note
01:08:851 (68851|2) - move to 01:08:744 -
01:22:564 (82564|2) - 这个删了
01:23:207 (83207|2,83207|3) - 变成一个条子
01:33:278 (93278|3) - 挪到01:33:492 - 1轨道
01:29:206 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1328679
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1328681
01:35:313 (95313|1) - 挪到红线
01:37:991 - 加一个在5
01:38:420 (98420|1) - 这里变成12轨道的双note
01:38:849 - 加一个note
01:39:491 (99491|4,99706|3,99920|2,100134|1,100348|0,100563|2) - 这段抓的有点奇怪。建议换掉。。就取人声吧
01:45:277 (105277|1) - 在白线停
02:15:275 (135275|0,135275|1) - 去掉一个
02:15:275 (135275|1,135275|0,172772|4,172772|0) - 停这02:53:200 -
HD
00:38:424 - 00:42:495 - 这儿的音写出来 就是叮的那个音
00:56:637 - +1 note
00:56:744 - ^
00:56:852 - +一个短条
00:57:066 - ^
01:02:208 - +一个条子
01:03:065 - 01:03:065 - 这部分+上鼓点
01:07:243 - +1note
01:08:744 - ^
01:10:136 - ^
02:05:204 - 加个note在3
02:08:418 - 加个条子 上面红线结束
02:38:628 - 加个note 在3
02:38:951 - 加一个note
02:42:058 - ^
02:42:273 - ^
02:42:380 - ^
02:46:451 - ^
02:46:772 - 加个短条在5
02:47:311 - 加一个note 稍微调整下pattern 让他变的顺手一些
02:52:772 (172772|4,172772|2,172772|0) - 和NM一样
MX我就不mod了。。打起来挺好的。。 (Pia!(o ‵-′)ノ”(ノ﹏<。) 其实是我比较懒
Topic Starter
hokin1995

victorica_db wrote:

ok 我拖了太久 现在发现改的不错啊。。。图挺好的
12345
NM
00:18:283 - 加一个好了
00:42:710 - 00:44:210 - - 取个人声看看
00:43:567 (43567|3) - 这个drum 上面没取 这里就删了好了
00:45:709 (45709|1,46138|3,46138|4,46567|1,46995|3,46995|4,47424|0,47852|4,47852|1,48281|0) - 重音应该反了 我觉的
01:01:565 (61565|2) - 结束在上面红线
01:02:208 (62208|0) - 结束在上面白线
01:04:780 (64780|0) - 结束在上面白线 然后在那个白线加一个note
01:08:851 (68851|2) - move to 01:08:744 -
01:22:564 (82564|2) - 这个删了
01:23:207 (83207|2,83207|3) - 变成一个条子
01:33:278 (93278|3) - 挪到01:33:492 - 1轨道
01:29:206 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1328679
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1328681
01:35:313 (95313|1) - 挪到红线
01:37:991 - 加一个在5
01:38:420 (98420|1) - 这里变成12轨道的双note
01:38:849 - 加一个note
01:39:491 (99491|4,99706|3,99920|2,100134|1,100348|0,100563|2) - 这段抓的有点奇怪。建议换掉。。就取人声吧
01:45:277 (105277|1) - 在白线停
02:15:275 (135275|0,135275|1) - 去掉一个
02:15:275 (135275|1,135275|0,172772|4,172772|0) - 停这02:53:200 -
HD
00:38:424 - 00:42:495 - 这儿的音写出来 就是叮的那个音
00:56:637 - +1 note
00:56:744 - ^
00:56:852 - +一个短条
00:57:066 - ^
01:02:208 - +一个条子
01:03:065 - 01:03:065 - 这部分+上鼓点
01:07:243 - +1note
01:08:744 - ^
01:10:136 - ^
02:05:204 - 加个note在3
02:08:418 - 加个条子 上面红线结束
02:38:628 - 加个note 在3
02:38:951 - 加一个note
02:42:058 - ^
02:42:273 - ^
02:42:380 - ^
02:46:451 - ^
02:46:772 - 加个短条在5
02:47:311 - 加一个note 稍微调整下pattern 让他变的顺手一些
02:52:772 (172772|4,172772|2,172772|0) - 和NM一样
MX我就不mod了。。打起来挺好的。。 (Pia!(o ‵-′)ノ”(ノ﹏<。) 其实是我比较懒
Thank you db大哥 :D
Thank for mod ;)
太懶是不對的w :D
REDYUMiKA
Hi everyone, I came here to review by request. (Column:1,2,3,4,5)
>>不好意思回信晚了... :P

[General]
No problems.

[Patterns of NM]
*Unsuitable pattern as most easy diff --
00:05:427 (5427|3) - move to 3
00:05:641 (5641|4) - move to 4
00:06:069 (6069|1) - move to 3
00:06:284 (6284|0) - move to 2
--

00:22:997 (22997|2,23425|2) - remove
00:22:783 - add a LN to 3, end at 00:22:997 -
00:22:997 - add a note to 4
00:23:211 - add a note to 2
00:23:425 - add a note to 5
00:23:640 - add a note to 3
00:23:854 (23854|1) - move to 1
00:24:282 (24282|3) - move to 5
00:24:711 (24711|0) - move to 4
00:28:139 (28139|3) - move to 1
00:28:996 (28996|0) - move to 2
00:29:425 (29425|1) - move to 1
00:33:925 (33925|2) - move to 2
00:34:353 - add a LN to 3, end at 00:34:567 -
00:34:567 (34567|1) - move to 1
00:34:996 (34996|0) - move to 2
00:35:853 (35853|2) - move to 4
00:38:853 (38853|2) - move to 5
00:39:281 (39281|1) - move to 3
00:40:138 (40138|3) - move to 3
00:40:567 (40567|0) - move to 5
00:40:567 (40567|0,40567|2) - move to 4 & 5
00:40:996 (40996|3) - move to 3

*The below pattern has a bit difficult problem, I suggest "II" --
I. 00:42:495 - add a note to 3
or,
II. 00:42:067 (42067|1) - remove
--

*If you like to follow the beat sounds perfectly, I suggest the below mod --
00:43:138 (43138|0) - extend this LN to 00:43:567 -
--

*If you wanna emphasize 00:45:709 (45709|1,46567|0,47424|0,48281|0) - --
I. 00:45:281 (45281|3) - remove
or,
II. 00:46:138 - / 00:46:995 - / 00:47:852 - add notes to each line as you like.
--

00:47:424 (47424|0,47424|3) - Crtl+H
00:48:709 (48709|1) - move to 3
00:54:173 (54173|0) - move to 2
00:57:923 (57923|3) - move to 2
01:02:637 (62637|3) - move to 3
01:06:494 (66494|3) - move to 5
01:08:744 (68744|2) - remove, then add a LN to 3, end at 01:09:279 -
01:09:065 - add a note to 4
01:11:422 (71422|4,71422|1) - Crtl+H
01:13:565 (73565|3) - move to 3
01:14:850 (74850|0) - move to 2
01:16:136 (76136|4) - move to 3
01:16:993 (76993|0) - move to 2
01:17:850 (77850|1) - move to 4
01:22:350 (82350|4) - move to 4
01:23:207 (83207|0) - move to 2
01:23:850 (83850|4) - move to 3
01:24:278 (84278|2) - move to 5
01:29:635 (89635|4) - move to 3
01:33:278 (93278|0) - move to 2
01:38:206 (98206|2) - move to 2
01:38:420 (98420|1) - move to 3
01:38:849 (98849|4) - move to 2
01:50:848 - add a note to 3
01:52:776 (112776|2) - move to 4
01:59:418 (119418|1) - move to 1
02:00:490 (120490|3) - move to 5
02:12:060 (132060|3) - move to 3
02:12:382 (132382|4) - move to 1
02:15:917 (135917|4) - move to 2
02:16:132 (136132|2,136560|2) - remove
02:16:132 (136132|1) - move to 1
02:16:132 - add a LN to 3, end at 02:16:560 -
02:16:560 - add notes to 2 & 5
02:20:846 (140846|2) - move to 2
02:22:131 (142131|3) - move to 3
02:23:845 (143845|3) - move to 3
02:35:309 (155309|3) - move to 2
02:43:772 (163772|0) - move to 2
02:45:701 (165701|1) - move to 02:45:594 -
02:47:844 - add a note to 1
02:48:058 - to 02:52:772 - remap like this.

[EX. Hitsounding of NM]
*Please replay both section, I suggest you to fix either hitsound --
I. 01:10:136 - to 01:19:993 -
II. 02:16:989 - to 02:26:845 -

[Comment]
Overall patterns of NM don't have any critical issues which also include your way,
however, the patterns of some sections aren't perfect certainly.
Actually I have found many small issues as I pointed out.
It's not critical, but novice~middle players would desire more comfortable patterns.
and I recommend you to enrich the varieties of sound, then this map will be very cool :)
okay that's all for me, it seems like I have fallen in love to this map.., here is
I'll be back again to think about the others, 加油~
Topic Starter
hokin1995

lil_yumika_lil wrote:

Hi everyone, I came here to review by request. (Column:1,2,3,4,5)
>>不好意思回信晚了... :P

[General]
No problems.

[Patterns of NM]
*Unsuitable pattern as most easy diff --
00:05:427 (5427|3) - move to 3
00:05:641 (5641|4) - move to 4
00:06:069 (6069|1) - move to 3
00:06:284 (6284|0) - move to 2
--

00:22:997 (22997|2,23425|2) - remove
00:22:783 - add a LN to 3, end at 00:22:997 -
00:22:997 - add a note to 4
00:23:211 - add a note to 2
00:23:425 - add a note to 5
00:23:640 - add a note to 3
00:23:854 (23854|1) - move to 1
00:24:282 (24282|3) - move to 5
00:24:711 (24711|0) - move to 4
00:28:139 (28139|3) - move to 1
00:28:996 (28996|0) - move to 2
00:29:425 (29425|1) - move to 1
00:33:925 (33925|2) - move to 2
00:34:353 - add a LN to 3, end at 00:34:567 -
00:34:567 (34567|1) - move to 1
00:34:996 (34996|0) - move to 2
00:35:853 (35853|2) - move to 4
00:38:853 (38853|2) - move to 5
00:39:281 (39281|1) - move to 3
00:40:138 (40138|3) - move to 3
00:40:567 (40567|0) - move to 5
00:40:567 (40567|0,40567|2) - move to 4 & 5
00:40:996 (40996|3) - move to 3

*The below pattern has a bit difficult problem, I suggest "II" --
I. 00:42:495 - add a note to 3
or,
II. 00:42:067 (42067|1) - remove
--

*If you like to follow the beat sounds perfectly, I suggest the below mod --
00:43:138 (43138|0) - extend this LN to 00:43:567 -
--

*If you wanna emphasize 00:45:709 (45709|1,46567|0,47424|0,48281|0) - --
I. 00:45:281 (45281|3) - remove
or,
II. 00:46:138 - / 00:46:995 - / 00:47:852 - add notes to each line as you like.
--

00:47:424 (47424|0,47424|3) - Crtl+H
00:48:709 (48709|1) - move to 3
00:54:173 (54173|0) - move to 2
00:57:923 (57923|3) - move to 2
01:02:637 (62637|3) - move to 3
01:06:494 (66494|3) - move to 5
01:08:744 (68744|2) - remove, then add a LN to 3, end at 01:09:279 -
01:09:065 - add a note to 4
01:11:422 (71422|4,71422|1) - Crtl+H
01:13:565 (73565|3) - move to 3
01:14:850 (74850|0) - move to 2
01:16:136 (76136|4) - move to 3
01:16:993 (76993|0) - move to 2
01:17:850 (77850|1) - move to 4
01:22:350 (82350|4) - move to 4
01:23:207 (83207|0) - move to 2
01:23:850 (83850|4) - move to 3
01:24:278 (84278|2) - move to 5
01:29:635 (89635|4) - move to 3
01:33:278 (93278|0) - move to 2
01:38:206 (98206|2) - move to 2
01:38:420 (98420|1) - move to 3
01:38:849 (98849|4) - move to 2
01:50:848 - add a note to 3
01:52:776 (112776|2) - move to 4
01:59:418 (119418|1) - move to 1
02:00:490 (120490|3) - move to 5
02:12:060 (132060|3) - move to 3
02:12:382 (132382|4) - move to 1
02:15:917 (135917|4) - move to 2
02:16:132 (136132|2,136560|2) - remove
02:16:132 (136132|1) - move to 1
02:16:132 - add a LN to 3, end at 02:16:560 -
02:16:560 - add notes to 2 & 5
02:20:846 (140846|2) - move to 2
02:22:131 (142131|3) - move to 3
02:23:845 (143845|3) - move to 3
02:35:309 (155309|3) - move to 2
02:43:772 (163772|0) - move to 2
02:45:701 (165701|1) - move to 02:45:594 -
02:47:844 - add a note to 1
02:48:058 - to 02:52:772 - remap like this.

[EX. Hitsounding of NM]
*Please replay both section, I suggest you to fix either hitsound --
I. 01:10:136 - to 01:19:993 -
II. 02:16:989 - to 02:26:845 -

[Comment]
Overall patterns of NM don't have any critical issues which also include your way,
however, the patterns of some sections aren't perfect certainly.
Actually I have found many small issues as I pointed out.
It's not critical, but novice~middle players would desire more comfortable patterns.
and I recommend you to enrich the varieties of sound, then this map will be very cool :)
okay that's all for me, it seems like I have fallen in love to this map.., here is
I'll be back again to think about the others, 加油~
All fixed thank for mod ;) ;)
不過有些地方依然不太明白
EX. Hitsounding of NM 裡 我應該把hitsounds 全換掉 還是把不協調的hitsounds改一改?
其實我也想豐富這張譜的hitsounds
但是一直找不到我想要的hitsounds
而且我也不太知名哪裡可以找到我想要的hitsounds :(

原來你會中文 :D 那就比較好辦事w
REDYUMiKA

hokin1995 wrote:

不過有些地方依然不太明白
EX. Hitsounding of NM 裡 我應該把hitsounds 全換掉 還是把不協調的hitsounds改一改?
其實我也想豐富這張譜的hitsounds
但是一直找不到我想要的hitsounds
而且我也不太知名哪裡可以找到我想要的hitsounds :(

原來你會中文 :D 那就比較好辦事w
我寻找hitsounds如果我有时间 :)
Topic Starter
hokin1995

lil_yumika_lil wrote:

hokin1995 wrote:

不過有些地方依然不太明白
EX. Hitsounding of NM 裡 我應該把hitsounds 全換掉 還是把不協調的hitsounds改一改?
其實我也想豐富這張譜的hitsounds
但是一直找不到我想要的hitsounds
而且我也不太知名哪裡可以找到我想要的hitsounds :(

原來你會中文 :D 那就比較好辦事w
我寻找hitsounds如果我有时间 :)
yumika
Thank you so much :D
WhiteAries
hi from modding queue :3
sorry for late ;w;


[NM]
00:01:356 (1356|4) - i think this song start at 00:01:570 there's no sound remove until 570
00:07:998 (7998|2,8212|1) - i think this should be normal note. not LN
00:08:855 (8855|3,8855|4) - move left
00:52:995 (52995|2) - move to 0 column
00:57:601 (57601|3) - move to 4 column

[HD]
01:05:529 (65529|3) - change to normal note. not LN

[MX]
00:01:356 (1356|4,1356|0) - i think this song start at 00:01:570 there's no sound remove until 570
00:42:710 (42710|1) - convert to normal note
Topic Starter
hokin1995

WhiteAries wrote:

hi from modding queue :3
sorry for late ;w;


[NM]
00:01:356 (1356|4) - i think this song start at 00:01:570 there's no sound remove until 570
00:07:998 (7998|2,8212|1) - i think this should be normal note. not LN
00:08:855 (8855|3,8855|4) - move left
00:52:995 (52995|2) - move to 0 column
00:57:601 (57601|3) - move to 4 column

[HD]
01:05:529 (65529|3) - change to normal note. not LN

[MX]
00:01:356 (1356|4,1356|0) - i think this song start at 00:01:570 there's no sound remove until 570
00:42:710 (42710|1) - convert to normal note
All fixed
Thank for mod :D
Neta
HI~ from my Modding Queue
All modding is my suggestion

[General]
  1. offset is 01:570 recheck plz

[NM]
  1. 00:22:783 (22783|2,22997|3) - remove 4 column
  2. 00:30:068 (30068|4) to 00:34:353 (34353|2) - there's too many LN
  3. 01:39:063 (99063|2,99491|4,99706|0,99920|3,100134|1,100348|4,100563|0) - ^
    OK NICE MAP

[HD]
  1. There's too many LN without space try to fix it

    There's not many problems actually but just try what i said and i love your Note Spacing

[MX]
  1. There's too many LN without space try to fix it
  2. 00:03:284 (3284|0,3284|1,3391|2,3498|0,3605|4,3605|2,3712|0) - too complicated for beat
  3. 02:13:775 (133775|1,133775|2) to 02:14:846 (134846|2,134846|3) - better tap this
  4. 00:09:498 (9498|4,9605|3,9712|1,9712|0,9819|4,9926|2,9926|0) - ^

GOOD LUCK :)
Topic Starter
hokin1995

Neta wrote:

HI~ from my Modding Queue
All modding is my suggestion

[General]
  1. offset is 01:570 recheck plz

[NM]
  1. 00:22:783 (22783|2,22997|3) - remove 4 column
  2. 00:30:068 (30068|4) to 00:34:353 (34353|2) - there's too many LN
  3. 01:39:063 (99063|2,99491|4,99706|0,99920|3,100134|1,100348|4,100563|0) - ^
    OK NICE MAP

[HD]
  1. There's too many LN without space try to fix it

    There's not many problems actually but just try what i said and i love your Note Spacing

[MX]
  1. There's too many LN without space try to fix it
  2. 00:03:284 (3284|0,3284|1,3391|2,3498|0,3605|4,3605|2,3712|0) - too complicated for beat
  3. 02:13:775 (133775|1,133775|2) to 02:14:846 (134846|2,134846|3) - better tap this
  4. 00:09:498 (9498|4,9605|3,9712|1,9712|0,9819|4,9926|2,9926|0) - ^

GOOD LUCK :)
All fixed
Thank for mod ;) ;)
Hanyuu
Nice map :)
Topic Starter
hokin1995

Hanyuu wrote:

Nice map :)
Thank you :D ;)
REDYUMiKA
Hello guys, I came back to continue modding from the last time. (Column:1,2,3,4)

[Patterns of HD]
00:02:427 (2427|4,2855|3,3284|3,3284|4,4141|4) - remap like this.
00:04:784 (4784|0) - extend this LN to 00:07:355 -
00:07:355 (7355|4) - move to 4
00:07:569 (7569|0) - move to 2
00:07:569 (7569|2) - move to 5
00:07:998 (7998|3) - move to 3
00:08:426 (8426|1,8426|4) - Ctrl+H
00:15:283 (15283|1) - extend this LN to 00:15:711 - like 00:15:712 (15712|0) -
*However I feel this song is too difficult to get timings correctly, but almost no problems unless it is not diff for novice.)
00:18:711 (18711|1) - move to 3
00:19:140 (19140|4) - move to 4
00:21:711 (21711|2) - move to 4
00:32:853 (32853|4) - move to 4
00:33:068 (33068|3) - move to 3
00:33:282 (33282|1) - move to 5
00:33:496 (33496|2) - move to 4
00:33:924 (33924|4) - move to 4
00:34:139 (34139|3) - move to 5
00:34:567 (34567|0,34567|3,34782|4) - Ctrl+H
00:40:567 - add a note to 2
00:42:924 - add a note to 3
00:41:638 - add a note to 4
00:41:745 (41745|3) - move to 3
00:43:352 (43352|2) - shorten this LN end at 00:43:567 -
00:43:781 (43781|0) - move to 2
00:43:888 - add a note to 3
00:58:351 (58351|3) - remove
00:58:137 - add a LN to 4, end at 00:58:565 -
00:58:780 (58780|3) - move to 3
00:58:994 (58994|2) - move to 4
01:00:494 - add a LN to 1, end at 01:01:030 -
01:05:529 (65529|3,65636|4) - move each note to left column
01:24:492 - add a note to 2
01:24:921 (84921|1) - move to 3
01:42:491 (102491|2) - extend this LN to 01:42:919 -
02:27:273 (147273|2) - extend this LN to 02:27:702 -

[Patterns of MX]
00:04:784 (4784|1) - extend this LN to 00:07:355 -
01:01:458 (61458|2) - remove
01:01:458 - add a note to 4
01:01:565 - add a LN to 3, end at 01:01:994 -
Nice diff. :oops:

[Comment]
Okay. There are no critical issues in your map,
However, you mustn't forget that both diffs was included too tricky LNs,
but I think it should be approved generously to some extent unless it is not diff for novice as I mentioned above.
Of course, I recommend you recheck all LN patterns whether it's most suitable for each NM, HD, MX.
I wanna give priority to this map for full-support.
If you hope, all hitsounding (as the PFH+) may be added by me. :oops:
That's all for me, Good Luck ;)
Topic Starter
hokin1995

lil_yumika_lil wrote:

Hello guys, I came back to continue modding from the last time. (Column:1,2,3,4)

[Patterns of HD]
00:02:427 (2427|4,2855|3,3284|3,3284|4,4141|4) - remap like this.
00:04:784 (4784|0) - extend this LN to 00:07:355 -
00:07:355 (7355|4) - move to 4
00:07:569 (7569|0) - move to 2
00:07:569 (7569|2) - move to 5
00:07:998 (7998|3) - move to 3
00:08:426 (8426|1,8426|4) - Ctrl+H
00:15:283 (15283|1) - extend this LN to 00:15:711 - like 00:15:712 (15712|0) -
*However I feel this song is too difficult to get timings correctly, but almost no problems unless it is not diff for novice.)
00:18:711 (18711|1) - move to 3
00:19:140 (19140|4) - move to 4
00:21:711 (21711|2) - move to 4
00:32:853 (32853|4) - move to 4
00:33:068 (33068|3) - move to 3
00:33:282 (33282|1) - move to 5
00:33:496 (33496|2) - move to 4
00:33:924 (33924|4) - move to 4
00:34:139 (34139|3) - move to 5
00:34:567 (34567|0,34567|3,34782|4) - Ctrl+H
00:40:567 - add a note to 2
00:42:924 - add a note to 3
00:41:638 - add a note to 4
00:41:745 (41745|3) - move to 3
00:43:352 (43352|2) - shorten this LN end at 00:43:567 -
00:43:781 (43781|0) - move to 2
00:43:888 - add a note to 3
00:58:351 (58351|3) - remove
00:58:137 - add a LN to 4, end at 00:58:565 -
00:58:780 (58780|3) - move to 3
00:58:994 (58994|2) - move to 4
01:00:494 - add a LN to 1, end at 01:01:030 -
01:05:529 (65529|3,65636|4) - move each note to left column
01:24:492 - add a note to 2
01:24:921 (84921|1) - move to 3
01:42:491 (102491|2) - extend this LN to 01:42:919 -
02:27:273 (147273|2) - extend this LN to 02:27:702 -

[Patterns of MX]
00:04:784 (4784|1) - extend this LN to 00:07:355 -
01:01:458 (61458|2) - remove
01:01:458 - add a note to 4
01:01:565 - add a LN to 3, end at 01:01:994 -
Nice diff. :oops:

[Comment]
Okay. There are no critical issues in your map,
However, you mustn't forget that both diffs was included too tricky LNs,
but I think it should be approved generously to some extent unless it is not diff for novice as I mentioned above.
Of course, I recommend you recheck all LN patterns whether it's most suitable for each NM, HD, MX.
I wanna give priority to this map for full-support.
If you hope, all hitsounding (as the PFH+) may be added by me. :oops:
That's all for me, Good Luck ;)
Thank for mod :)
Thank for support :D
If you hope, all hitsounding (as the PFH+) may be added by me. :oops:
Really? It is a good news for me. ;) haha
It is because I think some hitsounds are difficult to find .
If you help me , I think this beatmap will become more perfect. 8-)
I hope you can help me add the hitsounds :D <(_ _)>
Hestia-
[5K NM]
01:46:241 and 01:46:669 - add wubwub LNs
01:53:097 and 01:53:526 - ^
01:55:133 (115133|0,115133|3) - Remove
01:54:811 and 01:55:240 - add wubwub LNs

[5K HD]
01:42:919 (102919|0) - add wub LN
01:46:241 and 01:46:669 - add wubwub LNs
01:53:097 and 01:53:526 - ^
01:54:811 and 01:55:240 - ^

[5K MX]
01:46:241 and 01:46:669 - wubwub
01:53:097 - ^
01:54:811 and 01:55:240 - ^

Edit: ;w; should be fixed-ish, sorry this is my first mod
Topic Starter
hokin1995

RebelSlayer wrote:

[5K EZ]
01:46:241 (106241|3,106241|1,106669|4,106669|2) - add wubwub LNs
01:53:097 (113097|2,113097|0,113526|3,113526|1) - ^
01:55:133 (115133|0,115133|3) - Remove
01:54:811 (114811|3,114811|1,115240|2,115240|0) - add wubwub LNs

[5K NM]
01:42:919 (102919|0) - add wub LN
01:46:241 (106241|2,106669|0) - add wubwub LNs
01:53:097 (113097|4,113526|4) - ^
01:54:811 (114811|0,115240|0) - ^

[5K HD]
01:46:241 (106241|3,106669|3) - wubwub
01:53:097 (113097|3) - ^
01:54:811 (114811|4,115240|4) - ^
Your beatmap version is too old lol
It is because I change the diff name long time ago.
So please update your beatmap :D
Anyway thank you for your mod. ;)
arcwinolivirus
From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue!
Map requested: An hour ago.
My mod doesnt do anything with hitsounds, Just patterns and note consistency.

5K - 1/2/3/4/5


[5K NM]
I like the way you made this :)
SPOILER
00:07:998 (7998|0,8212|2) - suggesting to remove these and add LN note to 3 starting from 00:07:998 to 00:08:426. The 2 notes here are quite inconsistent atm for NM especially this note 00:08:212 (8212|2).
00:15:283 to 00:18:283 - The notes inside should be similar to 00:08:426 (8426|4,8855|0,8855|1,9284|1,9712|3,9712|2,10141|0,10569|2,10569|1,10997|2,11426|0,11426|4). But instead the 2-noted parts are swapped. So making it similar but in different pattern, here's my suggestion: osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371848 which is comfortable to play.
00:30:068 (30068|4,30282|3,30496|2,30925|0,31139|1,31353|2) - I suggest to make these LNs to be single notes instead just like these 00:31:782 (31782|0,31996|4,32210|1). Or Vice versa, make the notes I mentions to be LNs.
00:34:353 (34353|1) - Why is this is LN? I hope its not for vocal though. change to single note.
00:34:567 - add note to 5 as strong start and same with these notes 00:35:424 (35424|4,35424|2,36281|1,36281|0)
00:37:567 - add note to 2 for strong sound and start.
01:08:744 (68744|2) - why LN? instead remove and change it to single note then add note to 2 at 01:09:065
01:50:847 - add note to 1 since similar strong sound to 01:50:419 (110419|4,110419|0)
02:09:917 - add note to 5. strong sound
02:11:632 - add note to 1. ^
02:13:346 - add note to 2. ^
02:27:273 - add note to 2 for impact sound
02:27:916 - add note to 4 ^
02:28:773 - add note to 5 ^
02:29:630 - add note to 1 ^


[5K HD]
SPOILER
00:01:570 (1570|4,1891|3,1998|1,2427|4,2641|2,3284|4,3605|3,3712|0,4141|3,4355|2) - for some reason this is weird to play. Suggesting to rearrange or renote. What is this 00:02:641 (2641|2) LN for? the synth is not that long in this part. These mini LNs 00:02:427 (2427|4,4141|3) are they for the ding ding ding sound? suggesting to make them short/single notes.
01:01:030 (61030|2) - move to 4 then add note to 3 at 01:01:137 for the same sound.
02:11:632 - add note to 5
02:35:630 - ^

[5K MX]
SPOILER
00:07:783 - add note to 3
00:18:711 - add note to 2 similar sounds like these notes 00:19:140 (19140|2,19140|1,19140|4,19568|1,19568|2,19568|3)
00:20:854 - add note to 1 ^
00:27:710 (27710|2) - what is this LN for? inconsistent. remove.
00:41:745 (41745|0) - make it short/single note.
00:41:745 (41745|0,49780|2,49995|2) - remove so it'll be balance for 00:50:423 (50423|0,50423|2,50423|1,50638|1,50638|3,50638|2,50852|4,50852|2,50852|3)
01:05:422 (65422|0,65529|1,65637|2,65744|1,65851|0) - I find this weird. rearrange or remove some and just follow the trumphet-like sound.
01:10:136 - add note to 2. cymbals.
02:17:096 (137096|0,137203|1,137310|2,137417|1,137524|0,137631|1,137739|2) - rearrange, Suggestion: try to make it alternating hand.
02:52:772 (172772|2) - remove. too much LNs for finish.

[Overall]
Great song and cool difficulties. Summer feels closer haha. go go for rank /o/ Goodluck~! :)
Topic Starter
hokin1995

arcwinolivirus wrote:

From Arcwinolivirus' Speed Modding Queue!
Map requested: An hour ago.
My mod doesnt do anything with hitsounds, Just patterns and note consistency.

5K - 1/2/3/4/5


[5K NM]
I like the way you made this :)
SPOILER
00:07:998 (7998|0,8212|2) - suggesting to remove these and add LN note to 3 starting from 00:07:998 to 00:08:426. The 2 notes here are quite inconsistent atm for NM especially this note 00:08:212 (8212|2).
00:15:283 to 00:18:283 - The notes inside should be similar to 00:08:426 (8426|4,8855|0,8855|1,9284|1,9712|3,9712|2,10141|0,10569|2,10569|1,10997|2,11426|0,11426|4). But instead the 2-noted parts are swapped. So making it similar but in different pattern, here's my suggestion: osu.ppy.sh/ss/1371848 which is comfortable to play.
00:30:068 (30068|4,30282|3,30496|2,30925|0,31139|1,31353|2) - I suggest to make these LNs to be single notes instead just like these 00:31:782 (31782|0,31996|4,32210|1). Or Vice versa, make the notes I mentions to be LNs.
00:34:353 (34353|1) - Why is this is LN? I hope its not for vocal though. change to single note.
00:34:567 - add note to 5 as strong start and same with these notes 00:35:424 (35424|4,35424|2,36281|1,36281|0)
00:37:567 - add note to 2 for strong sound and start.
01:08:744 (68744|2) - why LN? instead remove and change it to single note then add note to 2 at 01:09:065
01:50:847 - add note to 1 since similar strong sound to 01:50:419 (110419|4,110419|0)
02:09:917 - add note to 5. strong sound
02:11:632 - add note to 1. ^
02:13:346 - add note to 2. ^
02:27:273 - add note to 2 for impact sound
02:27:916 - add note to 4 ^
02:28:773 - add note to 5 ^
02:29:630 - add note to 1 ^


[5K HD]
SPOILER
00:01:570 (1570|4,1891|3,1998|1,2427|4,2641|2,3284|4,3605|3,3712|0,4141|3,4355|2) - for some reason this is weird to play. Suggesting to rearrange or renote. What is this 00:02:641 (2641|2) LN for? the synth is not that long in this part. These mini LNs 00:02:427 (2427|4,4141|3) are they for the ding ding ding sound? suggesting to make them short/single notes.
01:01:030 (61030|2) - move to 4 then add note to 3 at 01:01:137 for the same sound.
02:11:632 - add note to 5
02:35:630 - ^

[5K MX]
SPOILER
00:07:783 - add note to 3
00:18:711 - add note to 2 similar sounds like these notes 00:19:140 (19140|2,19140|1,19140|4,19568|1,19568|2,19568|3)
00:20:854 - add note to 1 ^
00:27:710 (27710|2) - what is this LN for? inconsistent. remove.
00:41:745 (41745|0) - make it short/single note.
00:41:745 (41745|0,49780|2,49995|2) - remove so it'll be balance for 00:50:423 (50423|0,50423|2,50423|1,50638|1,50638|3,50638|2,50852|4,50852|2,50852|3)
01:05:422 (65422|0,65529|1,65637|2,65744|1,65851|0) - I find this weird. rearrange or remove some and just follow the trumphet-like sound.
01:10:136 - add note to 2. cymbals.
02:17:096 (137096|0,137203|1,137310|2,137417|1,137524|0,137631|1,137739|2) - rearrange, Suggestion: try to make it alternating hand.
02:52:772 (172772|2) - remove. too much LNs for finish.

[Overall]
Great song and cool difficulties. Summer feels closer haha. go go for rank /o/ Goodluck~! :)
All fixed
Thank you for mod ;)
If you find any problem in this beatmap , please tell me and I will fix it. :P
8-) 8-)
Taiwan-NAK
MX
00:21:711 (21711|1,21711|4,21925|3,21925|0) - 這兩段配合 00:21:282 - 的電音比較好
00:23:425 - http://puu.sh/7g3HM.png
00:36:603 (36603|4) - 這顆可以刪
00:41:210 - Add
00:41:638 - ^
00:41:745 - ^
01:06:279 - ^
01:33:599 - ^
01:40:348 - http://puu.sh/7g4jg.jpg

大致上問題和後面差不多 用50%去聽 漏的音都補上 排列也調整一下就好 :D

Good Luck HK Poet
Topic Starter
hokin1995

Taiwan-NAK wrote:

MX
00:21:711 (21711|1,21711|4,21925|3,21925|0) - 這兩段配合 00:21:282 - 的電音比較好
00:23:425 - http://puu.sh/7g3HM.png
00:36:603 (36603|4) - 這顆可以刪
00:41:210 - Add
00:41:638 - ^
00:41:745 - ^
01:06:279 - ^
01:33:599 - ^
01:40:348 - http://puu.sh/7g4jg.jpg

大致上問題和後面差不多 用50%去聽 漏的音都補上 排列也調整一下就好 :D

Good Luck HK Poet
All fixed
Thank for mod
聽到的都補上了
不過可能還有漏音 所以我明天再檢查一下
而排列是令我非常蛋痛的一部分 :( :(
Bruce
Hello,忙里偷闲来接下去Mod.Column:1 2 3 4 5
[HD]
00:01:570 - 和其他两个Diff都不一样 为什么这里没有呢?Add a Note at 3
00:18:390 - 抓音要抓完整 Add a Note at 2
00:19:997 (19997|1) - 个人感觉Move to 1打起来更舒服
00:22:568 - 这两个中挑一个去掉Clap.突然变响有点奇怪
00:38:317 - 漏音 Add a Note at 3
00:38:638 - ^ Add a Note at 2
01:07:458 - ^ Add a Note at 1
01:31:778 (91778|2) - 这个打起来不是很舒服 移到左手
01:45:062 (105062|3) - 不是这里开始的.移到 01:45:276 -
01:45:276 - 以及这里也要加一个Note
02:04:775 (124775|0) - 恩..感觉应该是在 02:04:989 - 结束的
02:06:168 (126168|2) - 并没有听到什么长音 变成Note即可
02:30:702 (150702|3) - 移到5
02:39:487 - ~ 02:40:987 - 还是和前面一样抓鼓点就可以了···这个节奏放在MX用吧

[MX]
00:20:211 (20211|1) - 移到1或者5 打起来更舒服一点
00:23:425 - 重音 Add a Note at 5
00:37:031 - 和前面抓的音一致吧 所以这里还有音的 Add a Note at 1
00:50:423 - 唔..这里的话 可能这样子更好些 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1397275
01:32:313 (92313|2) - 删去吧 这里抓这个很奇怪
02:23:845 (143845|2) - 移到5 3的话略卡手
02:39:165 (159165|2) - 这个也是 这里抓这个很奇怪 建议删去
02:42:594 (162594|3) - ^ 删去

Good Luck
Topic Starter
hokin1995

Simple_Star wrote:

Hello,忙里偷闲来接下去Mod.Column:1 2 3 4 5
[HD]
00:01:570 - 和其他两个Diff都不一样 为什么这里没有呢?Add a Note at 3
00:18:390 - 抓音要抓完整 Add a Note at 2
00:19:997 (19997|1) - 个人感觉Move to 1打起来更舒服
00:22:568 - 这两个中挑一个去掉Clap.突然变响有点奇怪
00:38:317 - 漏音 Add a Note at 3
00:38:638 - ^ Add a Note at 2
01:07:458 - ^ Add a Note at 1
01:31:778 (91778|2) - 这个打起来不是很舒服 移到左手
01:45:062 (105062|3) - 不是这里开始的.移到 01:45:276 -
01:45:276 - 以及这里也要加一个Note
02:04:775 (124775|0) - 恩..感觉应该是在 02:04:989 - 结束的
02:06:168 (126168|2) - 并没有听到什么长音 变成Note即可
02:30:702 (150702|3) - 移到5
02:39:487 - ~ 02:40:987 - 还是和前面一样抓鼓点就可以了···这个节奏放在MX用吧

[MX]
00:20:211 (20211|1) - 移到1或者5 打起来更舒服一点
00:23:425 - 重音 Add a Note at 5
00:37:031 - 和前面抓的音一致吧 所以这里还有音的 Add a Note at 1
00:50:423 - 唔..这里的话 可能这样子更好些 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1397275
01:32:313 (92313|2) - 删去吧 这里抓这个很奇怪
02:23:845 (143845|2) - 移到5 3的话略卡手
02:39:165 (159165|2) - 这个也是 这里抓这个很奇怪 建议删去
02:42:594 (162594|3) - ^ 删去

Good Luck
All fixed
謝謝你小星大大 :D
imariL
From my queue, Sorry for late
Column 0 1 2 3 4

[NM]

00:21:283 (21283|0,21497|2,21711|4) - I suggest Ctrl+H or like this because of pitch relevancy http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1415433
00:22:783 (22783|2) - LN should be start at 00:22:997 I highly recommend like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1415436
00:34:996 (34996|1) - move to 0
02:12:274 - How about like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1415454
02:36:273 - add note at 3

[HD]

00:54:280 - add note at 3
02:07:132 - add note
02:38:951 (158951|4) - this note should be at 02:38:844 imo, but it's your choice
02:46:022 (166022|4) - delete

I skipped MX diff, because of many difference with my mapping style, Example: 00:38:317 (38317|2,38531|0,38853|2,40246|3) - Actually I really don't know what these LNs meaning for, If you tried to express vocal(or guitar but beat doesn't make any sense either) it was wrong beat

Good Luck! :D
Topic Starter
hokin1995

Chocoliti wrote:

From my queue, Sorry for late
Column 0 1 2 3 4

[NM]

00:21:283 (21283|0,21497|2,21711|4) - I suggest Ctrl+H or like this because of pitch relevancy http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1415433
00:22:783 (22783|2) - LN should be start at 00:22:997 I highly recommend like this. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1415436
00:34:996 (34996|1) - move to 0
02:12:274 - How about like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1415454
02:36:273 - add note at 3

[HD]

00:54:280 - add note at 3
02:07:132 - add note
02:38:951 (158951|4) - this note should be at 02:38:844 imo, but it's your choice
02:46:022 (166022|4) - delete

I skipped MX diff, because of many difference with my mapping style, Example: 00:38:317 (38317|2,38531|0,38853|2,40246|3) - Actually I really don't know what these LNs meaning for, If you tried to express vocal(or guitar but beat doesn't make any sense either) it was wrong beat

Good Luck! :D
All fixed
Thank for mod :D
17VA
nm and hd is ok

[MX]

00:43:567 - strong beat. you should add 1 note here

00:45:388 (45388|4) - what is this LN? vocal starts here 00:45:495 -

01:05:851 - hmm.. following vocal's pitch. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1429906

01:53:419 - ~ 01:54:490 - why this part is empty?

02:05:418 - how about this? avoid same column is repeating. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1429918
Topic Starter
hokin1995

17VA wrote:

nm and hd is ok

[MX]

00:43:567 - strong beat. you should add 1 note here

00:45:388 (45388|4) - what is this LN? vocal starts here 00:45:495 -

01:05:851 - hmm.. following vocal's pitch. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1429906

01:53:419 - ~ 01:54:490 - why this part is empty?

02:05:418 - how about this? avoid same column is repeating. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1429918
All fixed
Thank for mod ;)
Akihiro
Hi, from modding queue :)

Since there have been a lots of mods already, I'll probably point stuff out but it's gonna be mostly suggestions.

[MX]

00:09:070 (9070|2) - not sure why this one is a double
00:09:284 (9284|1) - and why this one is simple, you have bass + lead instrument here
00:12:069 (12069|2) - double ?
00:12:069 (12069|2) - you can have an extra note for the lead instrument
00:21:068 (21068|4) - not sure if this one should a LN
00:34:353 (34353|0) - assuming you're not following the vocals in this one, i'd shorten it a bit
00:40:996 (40996|3) - why you stop following guitar after this LN :? makes things feel messy
00:40:996 (40996|3,43138|4,43352|2) - and I don't understand those 2 LNs xD
00:51:709 (51709|2) - and this one too
01:10:886 (70886|2) - not sure about this note, i don't hear anything here
01:12:172 (72172|2) - ^
01:12:386 (72386|4) - ^
01:13:886 (73886|1) - ^
01:45:491 (105491|0) - those 1/4 note feel a bit simple for the wubwub thing here's my suggestion for the rhythm : (pattern is up to you)
before : http://puu.sh/7AYPk.png
after : http://puu.sh/7AYQI.jpg
timing snap in the picture is 1/12 (so 1/4 and 1/6 notes fall on snap lines)
01:48:919 and 01:48:973 : potential notes
01:51:704 and 01:51:812 : ^
02:29:523 (149523|0) - not sure about this note

And that's about it :)

[HD]

HP -1 ?

00:09:605 - need a note here I guess
00:23:854 (23854|4) through 00:29:853 (29853|1) - this section feels really lazy (no offense :) ) I mean there's the piano that could be used for various rhythms.

nothing else though, looks good :)

[NM]

00:40:138 (40138|2,40567|3,40567|4) - huh, sounds weird cause apparently hitsounds are gone before the end of the measure
02:45:594 (165594|1,165915|3) - should make those doubles for consistent structure

looks ok too :)
Taiwan-NAK
MX
太人性

00:05:212 - http://puu.sh/7BofR.png

01:11:422 - http://puu.sh/7BoIf.jpg

01:12:064 - http://puu.sh/7BoNL.png

01:22:778 - Add 1/2 LN

01:46:669 - http://puu.sh/7BoTi.png

01:48:812 - http://puu.sh/7BoVM.jpg

01:49:562 (109562|2) - Move To 4

好像有點水

別給我kud

:)
Topic Starter
hokin1995

Akihiro wrote:

Hi, from modding queue :)

Since there have been a lots of mods already, I'll probably point stuff out but it's gonna be mostly suggestions.

[MX]

00:09:070 (9070|2) - not sure why this one is a double
00:09:284 (9284|1) - and why this one is simple, you have bass + lead instrument here
00:12:069 (12069|2) - double ?
00:12:069 (12069|2) - you can have an extra note for the lead instrument
00:21:068 (21068|4) - not sure if this one should a LN
00:34:353 (34353|0) - assuming you're not following the vocals in this one, i'd shorten it a bit
00:40:996 (40996|3) - why you stop following guitar after this LN :? makes things feel messy
00:40:996 (40996|3,43138|4,43352|2) - and I don't understand those 2 LNs xD
00:51:709 (51709|2) - and this one too
01:10:886 (70886|2) - not sure about this note, i don't hear anything here
01:12:172 (72172|2) - ^
01:12:386 (72386|4) - ^
01:13:886 (73886|1) - ^
01:45:491 (105491|0) - those 1/4 note feel a bit simple for the wubwub thing here's my suggestion for the rhythm : (pattern is up to you)
before : http://puu.sh/7AYPk.png
after : http://puu.sh/7AYQI.jpg
timing snap in the picture is 1/12 (so 1/4 and 1/6 notes fall on snap lines)
01:48:919 and 01:48:973 : potential notes
01:51:704 and 01:51:812 : ^
02:29:523 (149523|0) - not sure about this note

And that's about it :)

[HD]

HP -1 ?

00:09:605 - need a note here I guess
00:23:854 (23854|4) through 00:29:853 (29853|1) - this section feels really lazy (no offense :) ) I mean there's the piano that could be used for various rhythms.

nothing else though, looks good :)

[NM]

00:40:138 (40138|2,40567|3,40567|4) - huh, sounds weird cause apparently hitsounds are gone before the end of the measure
02:45:594 (165594|1,165915|3) - should make those doubles for consistent structure

looks ok too :)
All fixed
Thank you for mod. :D
Topic Starter
hokin1995

Taiwan-NAK wrote:

MX
太人性

00:05:212 - http://puu.sh/7BofR.png

01:11:422 - http://puu.sh/7BoIf.jpg

01:12:064 - http://puu.sh/7BoNL.png

01:22:778 - Add 1/2 LN

01:46:669 - http://puu.sh/7BoTi.png

01:48:812 - http://puu.sh/7BoVM.jpg

01:49:562 (109562|2) - Move To 4

好像有點水

別給我kud

:)
謝謝 :D
既然你不要kudos 我就不給了 ;)
有時人性也是一件好事呢w
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