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Linda Yang - Wo Niu Yu Huang Li Niao

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yf_bmp
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年2月23日 at 13:21:57

Artist: Linda Yang
Title: Wo Niu Yu Huang Li Niao
Tags: 615915887 Midasmens Snail Oriole Bird yang peiyi 歌唱祖国
BPM: 154
Filesize: 3279kb
Play Time: 01:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. 615's Hard (4.77 stars, 195 notes)
  2. Insane (4.98 stars, 259 notes)
  3. Midas' Easy (1.37 stars, 65 notes)
  4. Normal (3.88 stars, 120 notes)
Download: Linda Yang - Wo Niu Yu Huang Li Niao
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~ 蜗牛与黄鹂鸟 ~
Easy by Midasmens
Hard by 615915887
Normal & Insane by me
Background by OblivioN
The song's information

B-52 wrote:

Alright here comes some info.

Lyrics:
阿门阿前一棵葡萄树 To the front of the door there's a grape tree,
阿嫩阿嫩绿地刚发芽 tender and green, it's just germinating.
蜗牛背着那重重的壳呀 The snail carries the heavy shell,
一步一步地往上爬 step by step, it's climbing up.
阿树阿上两只黄鹂鸟 Up on the tree there's two orioles,
阿嘻阿嘻哈哈在笑它 giggling and laughing at him
葡萄成熟还早得很哪 "Grapes are way far from getting ripe!
现在上来干什么 why you're getting up here now?"
阿黄阿黄鹂儿不要笑 "Orioles guys don't you laugh,
等我爬上它就成熟了 when I get up there it will be ripe."

The song was first introduced in 1979... Something that your dad may be familiar with haha.
And this kinda genre was quite popular in at least 80s and 90s in China, don't know if it was already popular in 70s, but you're not likely to hear a lot of 'em in 21st century. Basically that's why people may feel something special to this song.
Last edited by yf_bmp , edited 20 times in total.
S o a p
359 posts
Joined March 2012
S o a p
歌手名字用Linda Yang，有英文名尽量用英文名，这妹子唱喜羊羊的我印象太深刻
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
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yf_bmp

S o a p wrote:

歌手名字用Linda Yang，有英文名尽量用英文名，这妹子唱喜羊羊的我印象太深刻
居然有英文名
Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
m4m

General

  1. 不用自定义combo color么？

Insane

  1. 00:14:370 (7) - nc
  2. 00:31:123 (4) - 再加一次折返？
  3. 后面居然全部复制粘贴？？？虽然这么做没什么问题，个人建议节奏不想动的话，至少把梗拆了，排列重新再洗一遍吧

615's Hard

  1. 00:05:214 (1,3) - stack
  2. 00:32:487 (4,5) - stack，不过hard里这种梗比较难
  3. 做的不错啊！有些跳有点大了，快赶上insane

Normal

  1. 00:08:136 (3,4) - blanket perfect
  2. 00:13:980 (2,3) - 这种overlap我也不知道在normal diff里会不会confuse noobs，还是要多问问别人0.0
  3. 00:29:954 (3,4,5) - 做个正三角吧
  4. 01:16:707 (3,4,5) - ^
  5. 后面也都复制粘贴了。。。太偷懒了啦><

Midas' Easy

  1. 00:17:487 (4,1) - i prefer remove this overlap
  2. 00:40:863 (1,2) - blanket
  3. 01:16:708 (2,1) - here as well
  4. other stuff r fine to me
点进做easy的mapper主页看见了俄语立马就用英文mod了，后来发现国旗是天朝。。。

good luck
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
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yf_bmp

Hollow Wings wrote:

点进做easy的mapper主页看见了俄语立马就用英文mod了，后来发现国旗是天朝。。。
得把脖子或屏幕旋转180度才看得懂/.\
Mod稍后查 i后面复制的部分其实改了一些..但不多 打算多改些
Midasmens
507 posts
Joined June 2011
Midasmens

Hollow Wings wrote:

  1. 00:17:487 (4,1) - i prefer remove this overlap 不要紧的吧
  2. 00:40:863 (1,2) - blanket 改了一点
  3. 01:16:708 (2,1) - here as well 不影响
  4. other stuff r fine to me
点进做easy的mapper主页看见了俄语立马就用英文mod了，后来发现国旗是天朝。。。молодец...

good luck
( ﾟ∀ﾟ)Спасибо!

http://puu.sh/6xda6.zip
axschiming
63 posts
Joined December 2009
axschiming
[Easy]
00:00:344 (1) - 做个滑条延长到00:01:708....
00:03:461 (2) - 做个滑条延长到00:04:824....
00:15:928 (3) - 没包好
00:23:721 (2) - 没包好
00:31:513 (1) - 包2

[Normal]
00:00:344 (1) - 做个滑条延长到00:01:708 0.0
00:03:461 (2) - 做个滑条延长到00:04:824
00:36:188 (4) - 注意下DS啊……我感觉前后都有很多DS不齐啊/.\，这真的rankable嘛...
00:38:331 (2) - 放中间
01:13:590 (4) - 没包齐
01:25:084 (2) - 中间...
排列很好看，但是为什么后半段有种即视感？

[Hard]
00:00:149 (1) - 太大声，建议消一点
00:06:578 (1) - 我觉得把折返换成原地的散点都好..
00:25:279 (1) - 不好看= =
00:32:682 (5) - 没叠好...

[Insane]
00:31:123 (4) - 我感觉能向前延伸到红线，中间改变下音效就好了
01:17:876 (4) - ^
00:43:591 (4,5) - 能做个滑条
00:43:591 (4) - 漏音效了哦
01:08:526 (4) - 建议去掉whistle
01:12:032 (1) - 音效美丽
01:29:175 (1) - 后面两个也能加音效
01:30:344 (4) - 音效美丽
01:38:526 (1) - 柑橘中间换clap
别偷懒啊喂！

[Other]
柑橘音量还是有点大。。。
其他摸不出啥了;w;
祝早日rank :)
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
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axschiming wrote:

[Normal]
00:00:344 (1) - 做个滑条延长到00:01:708 X
00:03:461 (2) - 做个滑条延长到00:04:824 X
00:36:188 (4) - 注意下DS啊……我感觉前后都有很多DS不齐啊/.\，这真的rankable嘛... 嗯...以前GD用过这种梗 为了美观 只要不影响读图就好啦
00:38:331 (2) - 放中间 X
01:13:590 (4) - 没包齐 这边都改过
01:25:084 (2) - 中间... X
排列很好看，但是为什么后半段有种即视感？ 懒了 现在改了些

[Insane]
00:31:123 (4) - 我感觉能向前延伸到红线，中间改变下音效就好了 X,故意空的拍
01:17:876 (4) - ^ ^
00:43:591 (4,5) - 能做个滑条 X
00:43:591 (4) - 漏音效了哦 X,加了后会更影响原曲,但是我把这里音量降了突出原曲的乐器
01:08:526 (4) - 建议去掉whistle √
01:12:032 (1) - 音效美丽 On purpose, 这一节原曲的乐器已经比较突出了而加上drum反会影响原曲
01:29:175 (1) - 后面两个也能加音效 ^
01:30:344 (4) - 音效美丽 ^
01:38:526 (1) - 柑橘中间换clap X
别偷懒啊喂！改了一些地方..

这首的话我个人认为不需要太多音效装饰 因为这首重在vocal

[Other]
柑橘音量还是有点大。。。还好
其他摸不出啥了;w; /w\
祝早日rank :) √ 那必须的 谢谢

Hollow Wings wrote:

m4m

General

  1. 不用自定义combo color么？ 已经弄了啊

Insane

  1. 00:14:370 (7) - nc √
  2. 00:31:123 (4) - 再加一次折返？ √
  3. 后面居然全部复制粘贴？？？虽然这么做没什么问题，个人建议节奏不想动的话，至少把梗拆了，排列重新再洗一遍吧 改了些
  1. 00:08:136 (3,4) - blanket perfect √
  2. 00:13:980 (2,3) - 这种overlap我也不知道在normal diff里会不会confuse noobs，还是要多问问别人0.0 0.0
  3. 00:29:954 (3,4,5) - 做个正三角吧 √
  4. 01:16:707 (3,4,5) - ^ √
  5. 后面也都复制粘贴了。。。太偷懒了啦>< 改啦><
good luck
谢谢mod~ 稍后上传
Midasmens
507 posts
Joined June 2011
Midasmens

axschiming wrote:

[Easy]
00:00:344 (1) - 做个滑条延长到00:01:708.... 不好....
00:03:461 (2) - 做个滑条延长到00:04:824.... 不喜欢....
00:15:928 (3) - 没包好 可以
00:23:721 (2) - 没包好 改了
00:31:513 (1) - 包2 行
谢了 ;)

http://puu.sh/6xlAK.zip
Foreverends
992 posts
Joined July 2011
Foreverends
鳴哇~~~神曲~~~~~~

Midas' Easy
00:17:487 (4,1) - 不做個blanket麼?
00:29:954 (2,1) - ^

Normal
00:13:980 (2,3) - 不確定normal放此梗會否坑到新手;w;

615's Hard
00:01:123 (3) - 試試將這個ctrl+<後放到大約x:108 y:340附近,好像比較容易看到
00:05:214 (1,2,3,4) -
試試這樣放?
00:10:863 (5) - 有點太遠了,試試用ds1.5放一下吧
大約是這樣
後面的梗好像太難了點><

Insane
怎用ar8也這麼快;w;
00:04:240 (6,8) - 這兩個也NC一下吧(因三角梗的關系)
00:13:591 (3,4,5) - ctrl+h之後叠在00:12:422 (3) - 上面試試
00:31:123 (4) - 頭放whistle
00:45:539 (1,2,3) - 略嫌太坑了;w;也比較難讀啊;w;
建議

01:17:876 (4) - 頭放whistle
01:32:292 (1,2,3) - 同00:45:539 (1,2,3) -

呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵已經捉不到了
渣mod抱歉><
加油;D
Snowy Heart
127 posts
Joined August 2012
Snowy Heart
http://puu.sh/6xpYz.osu
http://puu.sh/6xpXM.osu
唔..我的两个太鼓图~
做的不好见谅啊哈~
Irie Miyuki
388 posts
Joined October 2010
Irie Miyuki
渣mod和nazi来了 不要降好感度啊

[General]
tag里加上yang pei yi
歌唱祖国也写到tag里 Source里是不能写专辑名字的
SPOILER
《蜗牛与黄鹂鸟》是一首创作于二十世纪70年代末80年代初的台湾校园民谣。原唱银霞，本名章家兴。1977年3月，正式发行首张专辑「秋诗篇篇」，及同名电影
所有难度去掉widescreen support的勾

[Insane]
00:04:824 (9,1) - 因为auto stack的原因打起来的时候感觉和前面形状对不上了 建议往右下拉一点
00:05:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里几个clap声音略大 建议加绿线调一下音量 或者换成whistle 听起来也ok
00:28:006 (8,1) - 没包好 后面你复制的同
00:31:123 (4) - 1/6滑条? ^
01:36:188 (2,3) - 这个flow感觉怪怪的

[615]
00:45:539 (1) - 往上拖一点可以刚好和00:44:954 (4) - 留下的痕迹overlap 然后包起来也比原来好看些
01:05:798 (1,2,3,4,5) - 还是auto stack的原因梗都被毁了orz
01:19:824 (1,4) - 打的时候可以看到这个circle被slider压着边了 不太美观 后面滑条压滑条还说得过去
01:30:734 (1,2,3,4,5) - 还是autostack
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
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Topic Starter
yf_bmp

Foreverends wrote:

鳴哇~~~神曲~~~~~~ ><

Normal
00:13:980 (2,3) - 不確定normal放此梗會否坑到新手;w; 先保留,毕竟normal

Insane
怎用ar8也這麼快;w;
00:04:240 (6,8) - 這兩個也NC一下吧(因三角梗的關系) X
00:13:591 (3,4,5) - ctrl+h之後叠在00:12:422 (3) - 上面試試 X, 会影响排版
00:31:123 (4) - 頭放whistle X, 这里倒不是很必要..
00:45:539 (1,2,3) - 略嫌太坑了;w;也比較難讀啊;w; X, 咦 根据歌词我特别想这么摆...
01:17:876 (4) - 頭放whistle X, 这里倒不是很必要..
01:32:292 (1,2,3) - 同00:45:539 (1,2,3) - 同上上

呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵呵已經捉不到了
渣mod抱歉>< 抱歉啊没有采取建议..你的mod我已经反复想过了啊 谢谢mod
加油;D 嗯><

Irie Miyuki wrote:

渣mod和nazi来了 不要降好感度啊

[General]
tag里加上yang pei yi √
歌唱祖国也写到tag里 Source里是不能写专辑名字的 那怎么写

所有难度去掉widescreen support的勾 √

[Insane]
00:04:824 (9,1) - 因为auto stack的原因打起来的时候感觉和前面形状对不上了 建议往右下拉一点 调了 stack
00:05:214 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这里几个clap声音略大 建议加绿线调一下音量 或者换成whistle 听起来也ok √
00:28:006 (8,1) - 没包好 后面你复制的同 包的尾
00:31:123 (4) - 1/6滑条? ^ X
01:36:188 (2,3) - 这个flow感觉怪怪的 断尾利器
谢谢mod!
另外太鼓难度下次更新前会添加
Syameimaru-Aya
173 posts
Joined August 2013
Syameimaru-Aya
qq mod req
my mod
Insane
00:05:214 (1) - 第一次听的时候被这突如其来的拍掌声吓得鼠标落地了。建议降低一下音量，后面两个也跟着渐进
00:13:883 (4) - 我建议还是把这个删了，莫名的感觉不太对劲，和后面的连着听
00:39:305 (1,2) - 建议向下一格（？ 我还是挺喜欢物件任意一个点之间保持的距离一直
相应的00:40:863 (1,2) - 也下一格
00:42:032 (4) - 这个也下一格
后同
01:36:967 (3,2) - 左移一格呗
01:38:526 (1) - 为什么不包好

Hard
不知为何看着这hard我就想起一个童年噩梦，非常恐怖的梦……
01:18:266 (1,2,3,4) - 不好看

实在找不出什么非常抱歉

Normal
00:00:344 (1) - 同一个mapper的图好像要完全相同的 Draining Time？建议把前面的两声补上

实在摸不出啥非常抱歉

Eazy
00:19:045 (1) - 建议还是别和上一个物件的有相叠
00:20:604 (2) - 放的不好看
01:25:279 (2) - 别和上一个物件叠一起
00:06:578 (1) - 别叠
我觉得类似的还是不提了（

我也摸不出啥了
渣mod，我觉得还是非常对不起。
其实建议还是别偷懒，把后面那些都mapping一下 :)
good luck
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura
你妹啊手抖了寫的回mod都沒了哭哭哦

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osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: WNYHLN.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 18948
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Wo Niu Yu Huang Li Niao
TitleUnicode:蜗牛与黄鹂鸟
Artist:Linda Yang
ArtistUnicode:杨沛宜
Creator:yf_bmp
Version:615's Hard
Source:歌唱祖国
Tags:615915887 Midasmens Snail Oriole Bird yang pei yi
BeatmapID:357864
BeatmapSetID:143734

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.4
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95648
32 posts
Joined May 2009
95648
615's hard

00:23:136 (4) - 可以加clap

00:29:175 (3) - 可以試試這樣>http://holland.pk/1za5

00:30:734 (3) - 可以加clap

00:32:487 (4) - 可以加clap

00:35:993 (6) - 可以加clap

00:40:863 (1,2) - 可以試試這樣>http://holland.pk/1za3

01:19:435 (5) - 可以試試這樣> http://holland.pk/1za6

01:35:409 (1) - 可以加clap

normal

01:21:383 - 好像和 00:31:513 的combo 一樣 orz , 可以考慮把1和2 的位置交換或或把4 的方向改變 :roll:

GOOD LUCK! :)
Megurine Luka
2,579 posts
Joined November 2010
Megurine Luka
From popner's modding team.

[General]
  1. tag里的人名改成Yang Peiyi。按照标准汉语拼音的人名写法，三字名的后两个字要拼起来写。
  2. 其他好像没啥，除了letterbox可以关/关不关都都无所谓以外。

[Easy]
  1. 00:09:695 (3) - NC
  2. 00:14:370 (2) - 为啥不和1做一样的形状？
  3. 00:33:850 (3) - 和前一个slider呈一条直线
  4. 00:34:630 (1) - slider对半折会比较好，red tick向右边调整一下
  5. 妈的，复制党你好，复制党再见。

[Normal]
  1. 00:13:980 (2,3) - Normal不推荐这种重叠梗，对新人来说压力有点大。
  2. 01:37:162 (1) - 为啥和其他不一样，之前不是用的fin么怎么这里是whistle了

[Hard]
  1. 00:13:591 (3,4,5,1) - 做个菱形呗
  2. 00:25:279 (1) - chou .w.
    SPOILER
    类似这样好点
  3. 01:36:967 (1) - 描点太多了不好看，不如这样：
    SPOILER

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:292 (1,2,3) - 摆个形状吧，重叠太单调了，和后面slider的衔接也不好
  2. 00:30:344 (2) - ctrl+g试试，感觉好点

美丽
Midasmens
507 posts
Joined June 2011
Midasmens

Megurine Luka wrote:

From popner's modding team.

[Easy]
  1. 00:09:695 (3) - NC 好的
  2. 00:14:370 (2) - 为啥不和1做一样的形状？我也不知道为啥
  3. 00:33:850 (3) - 和前一个slider呈一条直线 不差
  4. 00:34:630 (1) - slider对半折会比较好，red tick向右边调整一下 没影响吧
  5. 妈的，复制党你好，复制党再见。哪里复制了？节奏么233 _(:3」∠)_
谢谢Luka姐~ >.<

@yf_bmp 帮我加一下NC~ 谢！
yf_bmp
Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper
1,630 posts
Joined December 2011
Topic Starter
yf_bmp

Syameimaru-Aya wrote:

qq mod req
my mod
Insane
00:05:214 (1) - 第一次听的时候被这突如其来的拍掌声吓得鼠标落地了。建议降低一下音量，后面两个也跟着渐进 √
00:13:883 (4) - 我建议还是把这个删了，莫名的感觉不太对劲，和后面的连着听 X
00:39:305 (1,2) - 建议向下一格（？ 我还是挺喜欢物件任意一个点之间保持的距离一直 √
相应的00:40:863 (1,2) - 也下一格√
00:42:032 (4) - 这个也下一格√
后同
01:36:967 (3,2) - 左移一格呗 X
01:38:526 (1) - 为什么不包好√ 疏忽

Normal
00:00:344 (1) - 同一个mapper的图好像要完全相同的 Draining Time？建议把前面的两声补上
渣mod，我觉得还是非常对不起。 大丈夫
其实建议还是别偷懒，把后面那些都mapping一下 :) 你说的堆 但我zz
good luck

95648 wrote:

normal

01:21:383 - 好像和 00:31:513 的combo 一樣 orz , 可以考慮把1和2 的位置交換或或把4 的方向改變 :roll: 懒

GOOD LUCK! :)

谢谢你惹 加油

Megurine Luka wrote:

From popner's modding team.

[General]
  1. tag里的人名改成Yang Peiyi。按照标准汉语拼音的人名写法，三字名的后两个字要拼起来写。 √
  2. 其他好像没啥，除了letterbox可以关/关不关都都无所谓以外。 x.x

[Normal]
  1. 00:13:980 (2,3) - Normal不推荐这种重叠梗，对新人来说压力有点大。 √
  2. 01:37:162 (1) - 为啥和其他不一样，之前不是用的fin么怎么这里是whistle了 √

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:292 (1,2,3) - 摆个形状吧，重叠太单调了，和后面slider的衔接也不好 √
  2. 00:30:344 (2) - ctrl+g试试，感觉好点 X, 因为歌词是"往上爬"

美丽 怎么不是论文啊
谢谢mod 该找BAT了
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura
回的mod又美麗
osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: WNYHLN.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 18948
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4

[Metadata]
Title:Wo Niu Yu Huang Li Niao
TitleUnicode:蜗牛与黄鹂鸟
Artist:Linda Yang
ArtistUnicode:杨沛宜
Creator:yf_bmp
Version:615's Hard
Source:歌唱祖国
Tags:615915887 Midasmens Snail Oriole Bird yang peiyi
BeatmapID:357864
BeatmapSetID:143734

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
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//Break Periods
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//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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UnitedWeSin
889 posts
Joined July 2012
UnitedWeSin
Hello.

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:097 - Try to add a note here. It would play nicer with the song because there would be a 1 beat gap from 00:01:708 (8). Also it will be consistent with 00:05:214 (1).
  2. 00:06:091 (5) - The music is 1/6 here. Can you try to use a 1/6 slider instead?
  3. 00:20:604 (1,2) - Because this is the first time you use this rhythm with silenced slider ends, I think you should use less spacing so the player won't be surprised on first play. Consider the 2 at (380,256).
    Example
  4. 00:31:123 (4) - Again music is 1/6.
  5. 01:04:240 - How about add 3 notes here to end the break earlier? I think these notes are important in the song and will feel nice after the break.
    Example
  6. 01:07:746 (2) - Same as 00:20:604 (1,2) for consistency.
  7. 01:17:876 (4) - Music is 1/6.
  8. 01:30:733 (1) - Unsnapped slider.
  9. 01:36:967 (3,1) - Imo switch NC's is nicer so show music change on 01:36:967 (3).
[615's Hard]
  1. 00:02:097 - How about add a note stacked on the 00:02:292 (1) to follow the music?
    Example
  2. 01:04:240 - If yf_bmp decides to add in Insane, maybe you can add 3 notes here too. You can copy the 00:17:487 (1,2,3) pattern.
  3. 01:31:902 (5) - Ctrl+G? The jump to 01:32:292 (1) is quite large. This would make it more obvious.
[Normal]
  1. 00:17:487 (1) - Soft whistle is nicer maybe?
  2. 00:18:266 (3) - Add soft whistle?
  3. 01:04:240 - Same as Insane, consider to add something here.
  4. 01:15:928 (2) - Missed whistle on head?
[Midas' Easy]
  1. 01:16:708 (2,1) - Imo it is better to read if you move these left and blanket with 1:
    Example
  2. 01:26:058 (3) - Whistle on head?
Nice map. :)
Let me know when you finish checking these.
Midasmens
507 posts
Joined June 2011
Midasmens

UnitedWeSin wrote:

[Midas' Easy]
  1. 01:16:708 (2,1) - Imo it is better to read if you move these left and blanket with 1:
    Example
    k
  2. 01:26:058 (3) - Whistle on head? k
Thanks~ :)
YoshinoSakura
472 posts
Joined January 2011
YoshinoSakura

UnitedWeSin wrote:

[615's Hard]
00:02:097 - How about add a note stacked on the 00:02:292 (1) to follow the music? ok why didn't me found that

01:04:240 - If yf_bmp decides to add in Insane, maybe you can add 3 notes here too. You can copy the 00:17:487 (1,2,3) pattern.sorry i really don't like anti-jump in that distance
01:31:902 (5) - Ctrl+G? The jump to 01:32:292 (1) is quite large. This would make it more obvious. ok
你們做的是圖，愛撫老爺做的是藝術，而我做的是tv
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Title:Wo Niu Yu Huang Li Niao
TitleUnicode:蜗牛与黄鹂鸟
Artist:Linda Yang
ArtistUnicode:杨沛宜
Creator:yf_bmp
Version:615's Hard
Source:歌唱祖国
Tags:615915887 Midasmens Snail Oriole Bird yang peiyi
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BG by OblivioN

妹子自己给你画了BG 快谢恩！ :oops:
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yf_bmp
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UnitedWeSin wrote:

Hello.

[Insane]
  1. 00:02:097 - Try to add a note here. It would play nicer with the song because there would be a 1 beat gap from 00:01:708 (8). Also it will be consistent with 00:05:214 (1).
  2. 00:06:091 (5) - The music is 1/6 here. Can you try to use a 1/6 slider instead?
  3. 00:20:604 (1,2) - Because this is the first time you use this rhythm with silenced slider ends, I think you should use less spacing so the player won't be surprised on first play. Consider the 2 at (380,256).
    Example
  4. 00:31:123 (4) - Again music is 1/6.
  5. 01:04:240 - How about add 3 notes here to end the break earlier? I think these notes are important in the song and will feel nice after the break.
    Example
  6. 01:07:746 (2) - Same as 00:20:604 (1,2) for consistency.
  7. 01:17:876 (4) - Music is 1/6.
  8. 01:30:733 (1) - Unsnapped slider.
  9. 01:36:967 (3,1) - Imo switch NC's is nicer so show music change on 01:36:967 (3).
[Normal]
  1. 00:17:487 (1) - Soft whistle is nicer maybe?
  2. 00:18:266 (3) - Add soft whistle?
  3. 01:04:240 - Same as Insane, consider to add something here.
  4. 01:15:928 (2) - Missed whistle on head?
Nice map. :)
Let me know when you finish checking these.
All fixed!
S o a p
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S o a p
卧槽卧槽不要KD啊
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